Treatment/Character Bio

Name of writer

Joseph Lane-ATVX 115

Working Title

Three Irish Lads and Some Dead Fella

Genre

Black Comedy/Crime/psychological

Location

Apartment-Condition neglected run down and rugged.

Time of day

Early Morning-Mid Day. 10PM-4:30Pm

Plot/Premise

Set in West Limerick Ireland the plot orientates around three Criminal Flatmates in financial difficulty (Maccarig McGowan) a self-obsessive repulsive brute and controlling dominator. (Mackey Louis) a convicted murderer and terrifying psychopath and narcotics drug nut (Johnny Speed) committee a robbery at a local coffee shop to pay the rent. The conflict is foreseen when Mackey finds a letter in the post regarding Maccarrig receiving inheritance from his recently deceased wealthy father. Mackey decides to construct a plot to set up and kill the 2 lads for his own selfish gain like a fox manipulating the two boys Johnny and Maccarig against each other. The plot thickens when Macarrig arrives home to find a dead psychologist in the room accompanied by the deranged Mackey.. This slowly gets intensified and personal between the two and unfolds into a massive plot of deception and betrayal.

Obstacles

Obstacles that arise in the plot start to escalate when a police officer Garda Shamus Flynn comes investigating as to the whereabouts of the missing doctor. The two lads Mackey and Macarrig humourlessly bluff the Garda into thinking everything is ok. The now furious Maccarig is trying his best to keep the body away from sight and becomes ultra –suspicious and extra paranoid about Mackey’s most recent behaviour suspecious that Macky kept from him the letter of inheritance. That evening Johnny arrives at the house

with two distant uninvited guests along with Maccy’s sister Patrice Louis for a game of kings (Drinking game)

Evolution of story

The main plot of betrayal is revealed when Mackey talks to his sister debate the plot of betral. Plagued with disbelieve Maccarig overhears the conversation and implosively gives Mackey the step ahead making him believe he is in control of his obvious intentions to steal his fortune. Johnny however being gullible and enjoying the night of drinking passes out unawre of the situation

Closure of Story

To conclude the story the uninvited guest leaves except for Patrice who is in the bathroom having a shower and Shannon her gay lover. MaCarrig anxiously waits for everyone to sleep so that he can give Mackey a piece of his mind and eventually interrogates Mackey showing him the letter and shooting him in the leg. This leads to an unnatural conversation of a Dark nature when Mackey is forced to make Maccarrig the only and last cup of tea he will ever make. Feeling exploited and vengeful Mackey slips foxgloves pollen into MaCarigs last cup of tea!... MaCcarig dies slowly from the poison. Then Johnny comes barging into the kitchen room shocked and confused. Mackey pretends to be a helpless victim of MaCarrigs brutal nature showing Johnny the dead body telling Johnny the story truthfully with a white lie not mentioning about the inheritance and then shoots Johnny in the head.

Twist of story

Mackey’s Sister Patrice smiles and walks into the room hugging him in awe. Mackey planning to run off with his sister with his new founded wealth then decides to kill his sister. Patrice manages to escape Macky’s grip knocking him to the ground and later accidently shoots Macy from a jump scare. Sargent Shamus Flynn is baning on the door and patrice makes the massacare look like a stand off. She uses her feminine helplessness to convince the sargent she was a victom of this terrible incidend.

End of Stroy

The final scene we see Patrice with her now revelved lesbian partner calling Albert bagshaw a currpt solicitor to fraud the money as her own with a share of the cut leaving patrice the main phantom of betryel.