Thesis Statements with Listed Points

Thesis Statements

All good thesis statements present a topic that is arguable.

One type of thesis statement is a thesis that lists points.

A thesis statement that lists points previews the ideas supported in the upcoming body paragraphs.

Determining a Stance

When drafting the thesis statement, determine the overall stance you want to take on the topic and then the supporting arguments for such an argument.

Argument explored: Should school uniforms be required?

Stance: School uniforms should be required.

Supporting the Stance

School uniforms should be required because…

?• Sub-topic #1

?• Sub-topic #2

?• Sub-topic #3

Breaking It Down into 3 Sub-Topics

1• School uniforms improve

student-teacher relations.

2• School uniforms encourage

solidarity.

3• School uniforms enhance

school safety.

Parallel Structure

Next, using parallel structure, combine the three sub-topics into one sentence.

Parallel structure lists items and uses words and phrases that end similarly. For instance, if a list of words uses the –ing form of a word, all words in the list use the –ing form.

Examples of Parallel Structure

Non-Parallel Structure: Activities where students write, are multiplying, and label ensure more effective mastery of a topic.

Parallel Structure: Activities using writing, multiplying, and labeling ensure more effective mastery of a topic.

Non-Parallel Structure: Negative public feedback should never be issued because it is offensive, unnecessary, and makes everyone depressed.

Parallel Structure: Negative public feedback should never be issued because it is offensive, unnecessary, and depressing.

Thesis Statement with Listed Points

Non-Parallel Structure: School uniforms should improve school relations, solidarity, and can lead to more safety in schools.

Parallel Structure: School uniforms should be required to improve school relations, solidarity, and safety.

Finally, in your body paragraphs, you will write at least one paragraph on each of the sub-topics mentioned in the three-part thesis statement so that your thesis statement is well-supported.

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