i

THE EFFECTIVENESS OF USING CLUSTERING

TECHNIQUE TOWARDS STUDENTS’ DESCRIPTIVE

WRITING

(A Quasi-Experimental Study of the Second Grade Students at

MTs. Nurul Hidayah for Academic Year 2013-2014)

By

Sari Nur’aini

NIM. 109014000174

DEPARTMENT OF ENGLISH EDUCATION

FACULTY OF TARBIYAH AND TEACHERS TRAINING

SYARIF HIDAYATULLAH STATE ISLAMIC UNIVERSITY

JAKARTA

2014

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THE EFFECTIVENESS OF USING CLUSTERING

TECHNIQUE TOWARDS STUDENTS’ DESCRIPTIVE

WRITING

(A Quasi-Experimental Study of the Second Grade Students at MTs. Nurul

Hidayah for Academic Year 2013-2014)

A Skripsi

Presented to the Faculty of Tarbiyah and Teacher’s Training in a Partial

Fulfillment of the Requirements for the Degree of Strata I (Bachelor of Art) in

English Language Education

By:

Sari Nur’aini

109014000174

Approved by the Advisors:

Advisor I Advisor II

Drs. Nasrun Mahmud, M. Pd Maya Defianty, M. Pd NIP. 150 041 070 NIP. 19801213 200901 2 005

DEPARTMENT OF ENGLISH EDUCATION

FACULTY OF TARBIYAH AND TEACHERS TRAINING

SYARIF HIDAYATULLAH STATE ISLAMIC UNIVERSITY

JAKARTA

2014

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ENDORSEMENT SHEET

The Examination Committee of the Faculty of Tarbiyah and Teachers’

Training certifies that the “skripsi” entitled “THE EFFECTIVENESS OF

USING CLUSTERING TECHNIQUE TOWARDS STUDENTS’

DESCRIPTIVE WRITING” (A Quasi-Experimental Research of the Second

Grade Students at MTs. Nurul Hidayah Jeruk Purut) written by Sari Nur’aini,

student’s registration number 109014000174 was examined by the Committee on

January, 27th

2014. The “skripsi” has been accepted and declared to have fulfilled

one of the requirements for the degree of S.Pd (Bachelor of Arts) in English

Language Education at the English Department.

Jakarta, January 27th

2014

EXAMINATION COMMITTEE

CHAIRMAN : Drs. Syauki, M.Pd ( )

NIP. 1964122 199103 1 002

SECRETARY : Zaharil Anasy, M.Hum ( )

NIP. 19761007 200710 1 002

EXAMINER I : Dr. Fahriany, M.Pd ( )

NIP. 19700611 199101 2 001

EXAMINER II : Zaharil Anasy, M.Hum ( )

NIP. 19761007 200710 1 002

Acknowledged By

Dean of Tarbiyah and Teachers’ Training

Dra. Nurlena Rifa’i, M.A., Ph.D

NIP. 19591020 198603 2 001

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DEPARTEMEN AGAMA

UNIVERSITAS ISLAM NEGERI (UIN)

SYARIF HIDAYATULLAH JAKARTA

FAKULTAS ILMU TARBIYAH DAN KEGURUAN

Jl. Ir. H. Juanda No.95 Telp: (62-21) 7443328, 7401925

Ciputat 15142 Jakarta Email: Uinjkt@Cabi.net.id

SURAT PERNYATAAN KARYA SENDIRI

Yang bertanda tangan dibawah ini:

Nama : Sari Nur’aini

Program Studi : Pendidikan Bahasa Inggris

Alamat : Jalan Jaha RT 012/01 No. 47 Cilandak Timur Jakarta Selatan

MENYATAKAN DENGAN SESUNGGUHNYA

Bahwa skripsi yang berjudul THE EFFECTIVENESS OF USING CLUSTERING

TECHNIQUE TOWARDS STUDENTS’ DESCRIPTIVE WRITING adalah benar

hasil karya saya sendiri di bawah bimbingan dosen:

Pembimbing I : Nasrun Mahmud, M.Pd

NIP : 150 041 070

Pembimbing II : Maya Defiyanti, M.Pd

NIP : 19801213 200901 2 005

Demikian surat pernyataan ini saya buat dengan sesungguhnya dan saya siap

menerima segala konsekuensi apabila terbukti bahwa skripsi ini bukan hasil karya

sendiri.

Jakarta, 22 Desember 2013

Sari Nur’aini

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ABSTRACT

Sari Nur’aini (NIM: 109014000174). The Effectiveness of Using Clustering

Technique towards Students’ Descriptive Writing; A Quasi-Experimental

Study of the Second Grade Students at MTs. Nurul Hidayah Jeruk Purut. A

“Skripsi” of Department of English Education at Faculty of Tarbiyah and

Teachers’ Training of State Islamic University Syarif Hidayatullah Jakarta, 2013.

Keywords: Clustering Technique, Descriptive Writing

The objective of this study was to see the effectiveness of using clustering

technique towards students’ descriptive writing. The samples of this study were

the second grade students of MTs. Nurul Hidayah Jeruk Purut. They were IIA

class as the experimental class and IIB as the controlled class. Each class

consisted of 16 students.

The method used in this study was a quantitative method. In addition, the design

of this study was a quasi-experimental study by using pre-test and post-test

control group design. The instrument of this study was a written test, to score the

students’ descriptive writing on pre-test and post-test the writer used rubric of

scoring namely an analytical scoring.

The result of this study that there was a positive effect of the result of students’

descriptive writing after using the clustering technique. It can be seen from the

calculation of tobserved and ttable. The tobserved is higher than ttable, the result of tobserved

is 2.78, since the ttable in the degree of significance 5% is 2.04. It shows that the

comparison of ttable and tobserved is 2.04 < 2.78. To sum up, t-test is higher than ttable

so clustering technique is effective to students’ descriptive writing.

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ABSTRAK

Sari Nur’aini (NIM: 109014000174). The Effectiveness of Using Clustering

Technique towards Students’ Descriptive Writing; Sebuah studi Kuasi-

Eksperimen pada siswa/I kelas II di MTs. Nurul Hidayah Jeruk Purut. Skripsi

Jurusan Pendidikan Bahasa Inggris Fakultas Ilmu Tarbiyah dan Keguruan

Universitas Islam Negeri Syarif Hidayatullah Jakarta, 2013.

Kata kunci: Teknik Clustering, Karangan Deskriptif

Tujuan dari penelitian ini adalah untuk melihat suatu keefektivitasan dari

penggunaan teknik clustering terhadap karangan deskriptif siswa. Sampel dari

penelitian ini adalah siswa/I kelas II di MTs. Nurul Hidayah Jeruk Purut. Siswa/I

kelas IIA sebagai kelas eksperimen sedangkan siswa/I kelas IIB sebagai kelas

control, dimana masing-masing kelas teridiri dari 16 siswa/I.

Metode yang digunakan dalam penelitian ini adalah metode kuantitatif. Selain itu,

desain penelitian ini adalah kuasi-esperimen dengan menggunakan desain pre-

test dan post-test control group. Instrument penelitian ini adalah dengan

menggunakan tes tertulis. Untuk menilai hasil karangan deskriptif siswa, pada

pre-test dan post-test penulis menggunakan penilaian rubric yaitu analytical

scoring.

Hasil dari penelitian ini menunjukkan bahwa ada efek positif dari hasil karangan

deskriptif siswa setelah menggunakan teknik clustering.hal itu dapat terlihat dari

perhitungan antara thitung dan ttabel. Hasil dari thitung menghasilkan nilai yang lebih

besar dibandingkan ttabel, hasil perhitungan thitung tersebut adalah 2.78, sedangkan

hasil ttabel pada tingkat signifikansi 5% adalah 2.04. Perbandingan hasil

perhitungan tersebut adalah 2.04 < 2.78. Kesimpulannya, thitung nilainya lebih

besar di bandingkan ttabel, sehingga teknik clustering efektif digunakan dalam

menulis karangan deskriptif.

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ACKNOWLEDGMENT

BISMILLAAHIRRAHMAANIRRAHIIM

First and foremost, I would like to express my gratitude to Allah. Lord of the

worlds who has given the writer blessings, healthy, and inspiration to finish her

skripsi entitled The Effectiveness of Using Clustering Technique towards

Students’ Descriptive Writing (A Quasi-Experimental Study of the Second

Grade Students at MTs. Murul Hidayah Jeruk Purut). The writer also wants to

express peace and blessing be upon to beloved Prophet Muhammad, the last

Prophet and He had brought us from the darkness into the brightness.

This skripsi cannot be completed without the help and prayers from others

including my beloved parents, who always gave me supports, prayers, guidance,

spirit and many more to finish this skripsi. Additionally, thanks to my brothers

and sisters who had motivated me to finish the skripsi as soon as possible.

Besides, The respectable advisors of the writer, Drs. Nasrun Mahmud M. Pd, and

Maya Defianty, M. Pd, who always give an advice, a support, and guidance so

that the writer could finish this skripsi. Many people had helped the writer during

writing this skripsi and it would be impossible to mention all of them. Therefore,

in this opportunity the writer would like to dedicate many thanks to the following

people who had given the contributions in the whole process of finishing this

skripsi, they are:

1. The Head of Department of English Education Drs. Syauqi, M. Pd that

helped the writer during finishing this skripsi and the Secretary of

Department of English Education Zaharil Anasy, M. Hum., who also gave

many contributions to make easier in finishing this skripsi.

2. All lecturers of Department of English Education that cannot be mentioned

one by one; who have been giving the useful and meaningful knowledge

during her study in this University to the writer so that she could compose

this skripsi in this stage.

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3. The Dean of Faculty Tarbiyah and Teachers’ Training, Nurlena Rifa’i,

MA, Ph.D, who also gave the contributions to the writer.

4. I also give thanks to the Principle of MTs. Nurul Hidayah Jeruk Purut,

Sukirman, S. Pd. I which had permitted the writer to conduct the research

there. Besides, the Vice Principle Muhammad Muslikh, M. Si., for giving

me an advice and support during the research and finally the English

teacher, Yani Lathifah, S. Pd., who always encouraged me to keep on fire

in teaching the students and composing this skripsi.

5. The beloved students at MTs. Nurul Hidayah Jeruk Purut especially for

second grade students of A and B class who had cooperated and

contributed for the teaching and learning process during the writer taught

there.

6. The special thanks to my friends of E Class that cannot be mentioned one

by one, who always give the writer meaningful advices, motivations,

supports, prayers and many more.

The writer realizes that there are still many mistakes in composing and the

content of this skripsi, therefore, the writer needs an advice from the readers in

order to make the writing of this skripsi is better than before.

Jakarta, 13th

of December 2013

The writer,

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TABLE OF CONTENT

COVER PAGE ..................................................................................................... i

APPROVAL SHEET .......................................................................................... ii

ENDORSEMENT SHEET ................................................................................ iii

SURAT PERNYATAAN KARYA SENDIRI .................................................. iv

ABSTRACT .......................................................................................................... v

ABSTRAK ........................................................................................................... vi

ACKNOWLEDGMENT .................................................................................... vii

TABLE OF CONTENT ..................................................................................... ix

LIST OF TABLES ............................................................................................ xii

LIST OF APPENDICES .................................................................................. xiii

CHAPTER I. INTRODUCTION

A. Background of the study ......................................................... 1

B. Identification of the problems ................................................. 5

C. Limitation of the problem ........................................................ 5

D. Formulation of the problem ...................................................... 5

E. Objective of the study .............................................................. 5

F. Significances of the study ......................................................... 5

CHAPTER II. LITERATURE REVIEW

A. Writing

1. The definition of writing ..................................................... 7

2. The purpose of writing ........................................................ 9

a. To inform ..................................................................... 9

b. To explain ..................................................................... 9

c. To persuade .................................................................. 9

d. To amuse ...................................................................... 9

3. The Writing Process ......................................................... 10

a. Prewriting ................................................................... 10

b. Drafting ...................................................................... 11

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c. Rewriting or revising .................................................. 11

d. Editing ........................................................................ 11

B. Descriptive Text

1. The Definition of Descriptive Text ................................... 12

2. The Schematic Structure of A Descriptive Text ............... 13

3. Types of Descriptive Text .................................................. 14

a. Description of place ................................................... 14

b. Description of object .................................................. 15

c. Description of person ................................................. 15

C. Clustering Technique

1. The Definition of Clustering Technique ........................... 16

2. The Advantages of Clustering Technique ......................... 17

3. The Application of Clustering Technique ......................... 18

D. Previous Studies ..................................................................... 19

E. Conceptual Framework ......................................................... 22

F. Research Hypotheses ............................................................. 23

CHAPTER III. RESEARCH METHODOLOGY

A. Place and Time of the Research ............................................. 24

B. Method and Research Design ................................................. 24

C. Population and Sample ............................................................ 24

D. Validity of the Instrument ...................................................... 25

E. Reliability of the Instrument .................................................. 26

F. Instrument of the Study .......................................................... 26

G. Technique of Collecting the Data ........................................... 26

H. Technique of Analyzing the Data .......................................... 28

I. Statistic Hypotheses ................................................................ 32

CHAPTER IV. RESEARCH FINDINGS AND INTERPRETATION

A. Data Description ..................................................................... 33

B. Data Analysis ......................................................................... 35

C. Data Interpretation ................................................................. 40

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CHAPTER V. CONCLUSION AND SUGGESTIONS

A. Conclusion ............................................................................. 42

B. Suggestions ............................................................................ 42

BIBLIOGRAPHY .............................................................................................. 44

APPENDICES .................................................................................................... 46

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LIST OF TABLES

Table 3.1 The analytic scoring ............................................................................. 29

Table 4.1 The student’ scores of experimental class ............................................ 33

Table 4.2 The students’ score of controlled class ................................................ 34

Table 4.3 The calculation result of both experimental and controlled classes ..... 36

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LIST OF APPENDICES

Appendix 1 Kisi-kisi pembelajaran ...................................................................... 46

Appendix 2 RPP meeting I (experimental class) ................................................. 47

Appendix 3 RPP meeting I (controlled class) ...................................................... 55

Appendix 4 RPP meeting II (experimental class) ............................................... 62

Appendix 5 RPP meeting II (controlled class) ..................................................... 71

Appendix 6 RPP meeting III (experimental class) ............................................... 77

Appendix 7 RPP meeting III (controlled class) ................................................... 85

Appendix 8 The scoring of students’ descriptive writing .................................... 90

Appendix 9 Student’s score .................................................................................. 94

Appendix 10 T table ............................................................................................. 96

Appendix 11 Surat Izin Penelitian ....................................................................... 97

Appendix 12 Surat Bukti Melakukan Penelitian di Sekolah ................................ 98

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CHAPTER I

INTRODUCTION

A. Background of the Study

Learning English is not regardless to master the skills within; those are

speaking, writing, reading, and listening. Students should have the competency to

master those skills, because English skills are learned as an integrated skill.

Hence, students need practice to develop their English skills. One of the skills

which need practice continuously, for instance, is writing skill. According to

Phelps-Gunn and Phelps-Terasaki, writing skill needs other proficiencies;

listening comprehension, speaking, and reading.1 In other words, writing is an

active skill because it combines the three other skills and students have to effort in

combining them. Additionally, as stated in the Curriculum of Educational Unit or

Kurikulum Tingkat Satuan Pendidikan (KTSP), students of secondary schools are

expected to develop their English in all language skills, namely listening,

speaking, reading and writing. It is said in the curriculum of English that the

teaching of English should focus on the development of four language skills. It

becomes clear that English cannot be separated from each skill, thus, the writing

skill is learned as the integrated skill, it becomes the very important thing and

students have to fully master those skills.

Moreover, the objective of teaching writing of secondary school also stated

in the Curriculum of Educational Unit or Kurikulum Tingkat Satuan Pendidikan

(KTSP) of English subject, “Mengungkapkan makna dalam bentuk teks tulis

fungsional pendek sederhana dengan menggunakan ragam bahasa tulis secara

akurat, lancar dan berterima untuk berinteraksi dengan lingkungan sekitar

(expressing meaning of short functional text using written language accurately,

fluently, and acceptable to interact in daily life context)”. To reach the objective

of teaching writing of students’ secondary school, teachers also should focus on

the development of writing skill.

1Trisha Phelps-Gunn and Diana Phelps-Terasaki, Written Language Instruction, Theory

and Remediation, (London: Aspen Systems Corporation, 1982), p. 4.

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Writing is important to be taught because it has some benefits; writing

encourages students to explore their ability in English in which they have learned

with their teachers. “First, writing reinforces the grammatical structures, idioms,

and vocabulary. Second, when the students write they also have a chance to

explore the language, to beyond with what they have just learned. Third, when

they write, they necessarily become very involved with the new language, the

effort to express ideas and the constant use of eye, hand and brain is a unique way

to reinforce learning.”2 Put simply, through writing students can apply their

knowledge that they have learned and experienced and discover their ideas to

deliver something of what they want to say into their written form.

Nevertheless, most of students do not show the eagerness to write because

writing is considered to be difficult; students have to be aware of the structure of

the written itself. Students fear of making mistakes in spelling, punctuation, or

grammar.3 They are also lack of vocabulary so that their abilities in writing are

limited by producing the right sentences and vocabularies. Students have to pay

attention to the aspects in writing, such as the accuracy, coherent, clarity so that

there is no ambiguity of meaning; grammatical pattern, a careful choice of

vocabularies, sentence structure, and punctuation. Hence, students need practice

every day to avoid of making mistakes in writing.

In addition, students also face the difficulty to generate and organize their

ideas; they are confused how to start their writing. Reid assumed that writing is

often considered as the time-consuming activity because writers have to develop

and explain the ideas as detail as possible.4 Finally, students are frequently

confused and get frustrated about the topic that actually they are going to write on

a piece of paper because they do not know how to get start it. Whereas, in writing

students have to construct the clarity ideas into a paragraph or essay coherently.

2Ann Raimes, Techniques in Teaching Writing, (Oxford: Oxford University Press, 1983),

p. 3. 3Audrey L. Reynolds, Exploring Written English, A Guide for Basic Writers, (Boston:

Little, Brown & Company, 1983), p. 3. 4Joy M. Reid, The Process of Composition, Second Edition., (New Jersey: Prentice-Hall,

Inc., 1988), p. 17.

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Students have the opportunity to organize their ideas to make their written is

vividly presented.

In the Curriculum of Educational Unit or Kurikulum Tingkat Satuan

Pendidikan (KTSP), students are able to express meaning in simple transactional

and interpersonal written texts, for instance, narrative, descriptive, recount, report,

and procedure, in daily life context. In the case of this research, the writer focused

her study on the teaching descriptive writing of second grade students in

secondary school. They have to be fluent in writing descriptive text because based

on the syllabus of English subject; students are able to express the meaning of

short functional text in descriptive and recount to interact in daily life context.

The writer found that there is a problem with students’ descriptive writing.

They are confused to where they should start describing something from.

Moreover, teacher does not use any technique to help students constructing a

descriptive paragraph. As usual, teacher explains about the definition of a

descriptive, the linguistic features and generic structure then the teacher asks

students to compose a descriptive paragraph, finally, they could take the longer

time to start writing because they do not know how to say it even the ideas have

existed in their minds. In writing a descriptive text, students have to describe a

person, place, and thing.

To help students in composing a descriptive writing, there is a technique that

can be introduced by teachers to students in prewriting stage, a technique called

clustering. Langan defined that “Clustering, also known as diagramming or

mapping, is another strategy that can be used to generate material for a paper. This

method is helpful for people who like to do their thinking in a visual way. In

clustering, students can use lines, boxes, arrows to make the relations among the

ideas from the students’ mind based on the topic”.5 Clustering is a technique in

the early stage to help students finding their various ideas. To make clearly,

students can use a clustering technique by making a circle with a big idea in it,

5John Langan, College Writing Skills with Readings, Fifth Edition, (New York: McGraw-

Hill Company, 2001), p. 29.

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then connect it by the line as the other ideas and also circle it as the ideas flow in

students’ mind, they can do it continuously as many as possible.

Clustering technique is used in the prewriting stage of the writing process;

because in prewriting stage students develop their ideas first before they apply the

whole paragraph in written. “Pre-” means before; pre-writing means the work

done by the writer before the paragraph is actually written.6 Pre writing is the first

stage in the writing process to find out the various ideas to write therefore;

clustering technique is used to avoid students to leave a blank page of paper

because of their limitation to develop the ideas in writing. Clustering technique

can be used for any kinds of writing; it means that in composing any kinds of text,

clustering is useful including for a descriptive text. In descriptive text, a

description shows the writer’s way how to hear and see towards the readers so that

a vivid image can be created. Moreover, descriptive text adds the readers’ interest

and the importance of writing.7 Descriptive text needs an explanation of the writer

as clear as possible to make the reader feels what the writer pictures in describing

a person, place, and thing.

To sum up, in this study the writer is interested in using clustering technique

to help teachers using another technique in teaching writing. Moreover, clustering

technique also helps students to find and generate their ideas that come into their

mind to be implemented in descriptive writing for students in the Second Grade at

MTs. Nurul Hidayah. Through this study, clustering technique is expected to

facilitate and make a writing activity is easier for students, besides, enable

students to keep and add their motivation in writing.

6Joy M. Reid, The Process of Composition, Second Edition, (New Jersey: Prentice-Hall,

Inc., 1988), p. 30. 7Barbara Fine Clouse, 265 Troubleshooting Strategies for Writing Nonfiction, (New

York: McGraw-Hill Companies, Inc., 2005), p. 43.

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B. Identification of the Problems

Based on the background of the problems in this research, the writer

identifies some problems as follow:

1. Students are lack of motivations in writing because it is considered to be

difficult.

2. Students have to think harder to produce the English written well because

of their limitation of vocabulary and sentence structure.

3. Students face the difficulties to organize and generate their ideas in writing

a descriptive text.

C. Limitation of the Problem

Based on the identification of the problems that have been mentioned, the

limitation of the problem is only focus on the discussion about the use of

clustering technique to students’ descriptive writing.

D. Formulation of the Problem

The writer has determined the formulation of the problem in a research

question “Is clustering technique effective towards students’ descriptive writing?”

E. Objective of the Study

Through this study, the objective of the study is to see whether or not the use

of clustering technique is effective towards students’ descriptive writing.

F. Significances of the Study

1. The teacher

For teachers, this study is expected give the ease to the teachers to

teach a writing skill especially in descriptive text. Through the use of

clustering technique, hopefully teachers can apply it into their teaching

technique in writing effectively.

2. The student

The result of the study is expected to build students’ habit in

writing skill and to make them more thinking creatively to deliver and

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generate their ideas in writing skill. Therefore, students can be

encouraged to develop their skills in writing.

3. The writer

For the writer, she gets the experience for teaching writing

descriptive text by using clustering technique.

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CHAPTER II

LITERATURE REVIEW

A. Writing

1. The Definition of Writing

Writing is a skill which stimulates students’ mind to think actively because

they have to be a hard thinker to connect between fact and ideas. Rise B. Axelrod

and Charles R. Chooper stated, writing makes writers becoming an active learner

because they have to record, clarify, and organize their thoughts and experiences.1

Writers have to connect between information and ideas into a written form and

effort to understand about and communicate them to the readers. Writing is done

simultaneously so it leads students to think critically because in their mind they

have already been thinking about what they want to say and how to say it into the

written form.2

Therefore, writing will indirectly enables students to do more than one

action in one activity. Students have determined what is in their mind which leads

them to write something and they should not merely know the ideas that come

into their mind but also the ways to deliver them into the words.

Writers are trying to discover something new to write or a new way how to

express their ideas when they strive to write down or what they will write down

on a paper. Since the writers are striving to find the right words and sentences, it

makes them to build a relationship between writing correctly and thinking hard to

write a readable text entirely. “Writing is a tool for discovery. Writing generates

new ideas by helping us to make a connection and see relationships.3” The writers

can build up a relation to the readers through writing by delivering a message into

a written form which comes from ideas during the writing process, so the writers

1Rise B. Axelrod and Charles R. Chooper, The ST. Martine’s Guide to Writing, (Boston:

Houghton Mifflin Company, 1986), p. 2. 2Alice Oshima and Ann Hogue, Introduction to Academic Writing, third edition, (New

York: Pearson Education, Inc., 2007), p. 15. 3Maxine Hairstone, Contemporary Composition, (Boston: Houghton Mifflin Company,

1986), p. 2.

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try to engage to the readers. To produce a well written, students have to generate

ideas to make the written itself has the very coherent, fluent, and clear

construction and a message can be delivered to the readers.

Writing skill is considered as the complex skill because students have to

master not only the component of grammatical and structure of the sentence but

also the structures of the paragraph itself, furthermore, students’ effort are

required to generate their ideas that come along into the words.4 It is one of the

reasons that makes students are sometimes reluctantly writing any kind of text.

Finally, students think that a writing activity as the frightening assignment and

they are afraid of their teachers who command them to write something neither as

the assignment in the class nor as homework. Indeed, students have to strive

composing a readable text and free of grammatical mistakes in order to make their

writing is understandable.5

Actually, it is a double task for students of English as a Foreign Language

because they do not merely compose a free of grammatical mistakes written but

also they have to write a text into English which is fully comprehended by the

readers. To make the written is free of grammatical mistakes; writers should have

the competency of vocabulary, idioms, sentence structure, word choice, and so

forth and it has to be practiced everyday because it is not the once-a week activity.

As the result, writing has a positive effect on the teaching and on the attitude of

both teachers and students.6

Thus, writing requires the combination of student’s abilities, not only the

written structure in a word, sentence till paragraph but also they have to think

harder to deliver what is in their mind to construct the overall written. It is not

easy to construct a readable text; students need practice to write continuously.

4J. B. Heaton, Writing English Language Tests, (New York: Longman Inc., 1988), p. 135.

5Audrey L. Reynolds, Exploring Written English, A Guide for Basic Writers, (Boston:

Little, Brown and Company, 1983), p. 3. 6Emi Emilia, Teaching Writing: Developing Critical Learners, (Bandung: Rizqi Press,

2010), p. 164.

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2. The Purposes of Writing

The purposes of writing refer to the writer’s reasons for writing. When the

writers write, they should think about the purposes of the writing itself because

their writing is not only read by the writers themselves but also other readers to

know what actually for the writing is composed. To make the written keep on the

track and clear to whom it is written, writing should have some purposes7:

a. To inform

Writing purposes to inform the readers about events or anything that occurs

and exists in surrounding people and to give the evidence about its fact. Hence,

the information which is given should be accurate, clear, concise, and objective.

The writers can give the information through any kinds of form, for instance,

letter, report, books, recipe, etc.

b. To explain

Every kind of writing must contain the information but writing is not only

gives the information to the readers but also how to deliver or explain it well in

order to make the information in that written itself is clear and can be understood

by readers. Therefore, the writers who write about the complex topic have to

ensure that the readers can figure it out.

c. To persuade

Writing can be a persuasive, means that writing persuades the readers to

engage with their thoughts or actions. Through writing, the writers can accuse or

defend and affect the reader’s minds.

d. To amuse

In addition, writing is not only to inform about something but also through

writing, writers may give an entertainment to refresh reader’s mind by using a

humor so the written is appealing the readers to read.

It can be concluded that the purposes of writing is to inform the readers about

something that contains the factual information, to explain the information itself

7Robert K. Miller, Motives for Writing, (New York: The McGraw-Hill Companies, 1992),

pp. 569—570.

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to make the information is understandable, writing also to persuade readers to

affect the reader’s minds and finally to amuse the readers by using a humor.

After students determine the purposes of their writing, they may get started

the writing activity. To start it, students will get through the process of writing to

help students composing the whole written.

3. The Writing Process

Mostly, the writers are worry about using the wrong words or sentences in

writing but actually the writers can reread the paragraph before the readers read it.

The more the writers express the ideas, the more they can easily have freedom to

do the experiment and explore the words or sentences because in writing the

words and sentences are not the first thing that have to be worry about. The ability

to construct a good writing with the right words and sentences can be improved by

the writing process. To make a good writing need the process of writing which

indicates that writing does not occur automatically.8 In composing any kinds of

writing, the writers must follow every stage of the writing process to produce the

ideas clearly and effectively, the writing processes are as follow:

a. Pre-writing

“Pre-writing is any activity in the classroom that encourages students to write.

It stimulates thought for getting started. In fact, it moves students away from

having to face a blank page toward generating tentative ideas and gathering

information for writing”.9 Prewriting means the process for finding and generating

the ideas that the writers think and see profoundly about the topic.10

Prewriting is a process in which the students start to gather their ideas before

they compose a paragraph. Students can use some techniques of prewriting; one of

the techniques is clustering technique. Clustering means collecting or gathering

ideas from writers’ mind as many and detail as possible. This technique is used to

8Audrey L. Reynolds, Exploring Written English: A Guide for Basic Writers, (Boston:

Little, Brown and Company, 1983), p. 21. 9Jack C. Richards and Willy A. Renandya, Methodology in Language Teaching: An

Anthology of Current Practice, (Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, 2002), p. 316. 10

William H. Roberts, The Writer’s Companion: A Short Handbook, (Boston: Little,

Brown Company, 1985), p. 1.

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avoid the students spending their time any longer in front of a blank paper because

of they are confused what actually they want to write. Moreover, clustering is to

help students relating the ideas with another.

Thus, prewriting is a first stage in writing activity to generate the ideas before

students step forward to the next stage of writing process and construct a piece of

writing.

b. Drafting

“While drafting, transform the ideas into sentences in a semi organized

manner. Here the purpose of drafting is to let the ideas develop, expand and form

connections. Drafting is primarily a stage of discovery and exploration.”11

When

writers write the first draft, they are ready to give the details and additional

thoughts that did not exist since in the prewriting stage.12

After writers generating

and organizing their ideas, they start to write all of the ideas down which have

been done in the first stage. Similarly, students write a framework of ideas they

have generated in order to make their written is constructed coherently.

c. Rewriting or Revising

After the writers write down all of their ideas into a paper, they need to

recheck their writing, in other words, the writers have to evaluate the draft. This

stage helps the writers to make sure whether or not the content or organization of

writing is focus.13

d. Editing

After revising the content of the writing, in this final stage requires the writers

to evaluate the sentences that have been written. The writers have to check the

sentence or paragraph is already grammatically right or not.14

If the writers find

that there are some mistakes grammatically so that they have to refine it.

11

Betty Mattix Dietsch, Reasoning and Writing Well, (New York: McGraw Hill

Companies, Inc, 2006), p. 11. 12

John Langan, College Writing Skills with Readings, (New York: McGraw Hill

Companies, Inc., 2001), p. 32. 13

Regina L. Smalley and Mary K. Ruetten, Refining Composition skills: Rhetoric and

Grammar, Fourth Edition, (Boston: Heinle & Heinle Publishers, 1995), p.12 14

Ibid, p. 13.

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Most of students after finishing their writing into several paragraphs, they do

not recheck of what have written. They have to repair some mistakes or errors,

from the grammatical structure and accuracy.

B. Descriptive Text

1. Definition of Descriptive Text

As many students and writers know that, a descriptive writing is a text that

provides a description about persons, places, and/or things. Students describe the

person, place and thing by using the words; hence, they have to describe them as

vivid as possible in order to appeal the reader’s senses. To make the readers are

interested to read a descriptive text, it has to contain the details information which

may lead readers’ five senses; seeing, hearing, smelling, tasting, and touching.

Related to the definition of descriptive text, according to John Langan, descriptive

text is a text which describes someone or something by using words. To convince

the readers, in a descriptive text the picture put as real as possible, students have

to give a description just like as the real object and it is possible to make the

readers can capture the object by five senses, namely sight, hearing, tasting,

smelling, and touching.15

Descriptive text is not only just to tell something, but also to show something,

to see profoundly what is going on.16

Therefore, descriptive text needs the vivid

description about person, place, and object. The more writers describe a person,

place, and thing; the clearer a descriptive text is described due to the writers try to

zoom in their topic by using specific and details information. These details

information will bring the readers to open their five senses (smelling, seeing,

hearing, touching, and tasting) and those five senses become a part of the writers’

experience.

Yet, as stated by Nancy McHugh that descriptive writing is merely limited to

the concrete object, “Descriptive deals with the concrete. In this domain a student

15

John Langan, College Writing Skills with Readings, (New York: Mc-Graw Hill

Company. 2001), p. 175. 16

Dennis E. McGuinnes and Lauren Spencer, Writing to Describe, (New York: The Rosen

Publishing Group, Inc., 2012), p. 5.

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tries to present a picture in words, one so vivid that the reader or listener can

recapture many of the same perceptions and feelings that the writer has had.17

” In

contrast, a descriptive writing allows student to write any kind of topic either in

which about a concrete object or an abstract object because it can be better that

students can be stimulated their abilities to capture an image or picture of object

as real as possible into the words and makes it appeals the readers’ five senses.

Similarly with Shinoda which claimed, “Description is a written English text in

which the writer describes an object. In this text, the object can be a concrete or

abstract object; it can be about any topic.18

”

Thus, from the definitions which are explained, the writer concludes that

descriptive text is a text about description of people, places and/ or things which

want to be delivered into the words by student and it is possible to appeal the

readers’ senses; seeing, hearing, smelling, touching, and tasting. Descriptive

writing is not merely to show something or someone to the readers but also

through descriptive, students can build the readers’ mind to imagine an object in

their mind and make the abstract object which is described more concrete.

2. The Schematic Structure of A Descriptive Text

Descriptive text has the schematic structure in order to make easier in

composing it, the structures are as follow19

:

a. Title

Any kind of text contains a title at the top of paragraph, including a descriptive

text. Title gives a little description about the paragraph content to the readers.

b. Identification

Introduction that introduces/ classifies something or someone, introduces the

topic. This stage can also give some general identifying information, e.g. a general

category and show what aspects of the thing will be described.

17

Nancy McHugh, “Domains of Writing”, in Carol Booth Olson(ed), Practical Ideas for

Teaching Writing as a Process, (California: Sacramento, 1987), p. 82. 18

Sanggam Siahaan Kisno Shinoda, Generic Text Structure, First Edition., (Yogyakarta:

GrahaIlmu, 2008), p. 89. 19

Emi Emilia, Teaching Writing, Developing Critical Learners, (Bandung: Rizqi Press,

2010), p. 172.

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c. Description

Give a detail description about person, place, and thing. By giving detail

information about description of person, place, and thing, the reader is persuaded

to adventurous with their imagination.20

Criteria of Descriptive Writing:

a. Focus on specific participants

b. Use of attributive and identifying processes

c. Frequent use of epithets and classifiers in nominal groups

d. Use of simple present tense.

3. Types of Descriptive Text

In descriptive writing, students can describe anything which exist around

them, depend on their purpose; whether they want to describe about place, person,

or object, the following categories are:

a. Description of place

To describe about place, students should describe the scene vividly so that the

readers can imagine every single part of the place being described and not merely

give the details but also smell the smells and hear the sound that involved in it.21

To make clearer, the example is as follow:

Sydney Opera House

The Sydney Opera House is a large performing art place. It becomes an

Australian icon. It was established in 1973. It is located in Sydney, New South

Wales, Australia.

The Sydney Opera House covers 1.8 hectares of land. It is 183 m long and

about 120 wide. The building can load 25,000 people.

The Opera House is a place for large theatrical productions. It is the home

of Opera Australia, the Sydney Theatre Company and the Sydney Symphonyan.

There are five theatres in Sydney Opera House. There are also five

rehearsal studios, two main halls, four restaurants,

20

Sanggam Siahaan Kisno Shinoda, loc. cit. 21

Regina L. Smalley and Mary K. Ruetten, Refining Composition skills: Rhetoric and

Grammar, Fourth Edition, (Boston: Heinle & Heinle Publishers, 1995), p. 62.

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six bars, and many souvenir shops. The design of the Opera House is very unique.

The roof looks like giant shells.

Besides for theatrical productions, the Opera House is also used for other

functions. It is used for weddings, parties, and conferences.22

b. Description of object

In describing the object, students can describe as a whole and include its

purpose or significance. By describing the object as real as possible, readers are

interested in imagine the object in front of them.

Example of descriptive text in describing an object:

Maciwoda Robot

Maciwoda robot is the latest innovation of Japan technology. It is a kind of

robot, which can replace the works of house servant in daily lives. It is 5.5 feet

height and weight 100 pound. It is not very heavy so that every user can take it

anywhere. This model is designed to be mobile. Whenever, wherever we need it,

it always ready to do everything for us. The most advantageous thing we can

reach is that we don’t need to think of how much we will pay forbecause it

doesn’t need salary. This innovation is equipped with a sound sensor name

“Braino”, which is located within its head. This apparatus is very small and is

designed to be the most essential thing because it functions as the brain of the

robot. Whenever we utter an order, this apparatus will respond our order and do

what we want. “Hando” is the part which is like human’s hands. It is designed as a

unique model, resembles to our hands. It is 100 cm length and standardized to

resemble to humans. This part is equipped with “iron fingers” to hold something

and the most prominent is its wrist can be changed into the various types as broom

to sweep and mop to mop the floor. It is also equipped with air freshener. When

we think of it, we refer to the foot, which is called “Foota” as the part to prompt

up its body. It is a flexible part and it is designed to be 200 cm length. The

materials to form “Foota” are iron and aluminum. “Foota” is flexible for outreach

places. It can be lengthened to reach ceiling and shortened to reach the places

under. It is also equipped with wheels and is able to step up or step down ladder.

c. Description of person

In describing people usually uses statistical information, for instance, height,

weight and age. Furthermore, the writers can describe people from the person’s

style of clothing, way of walking, color and style of hair, facial appearance, body

22

Joko Priyana, et al., Scaffolding: English for Junior High School Students, (Jakarta:

Pusat Perbukuan, Departemen Pendidikan Nasional, 2008), p. 49.

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shape, expression, and also the way of talking.23

The writers can describe about

everyone, it can be started by describing the parents, brothers, sisters, teachers,

friends, etc.

Here is the example of descriptive text in describing people:

The Muse Live Concert

It is the Muse concert, live from Senayan.Thousands of young people are

now gathering to see the concert. They are ready to listen to the music. Now, their

eyes are on the empty stage. A very big and bright lamp on the stage is on. It’s

beautiful.

One by one the group members are walking to the stage. Matt Bellamy is

wearing a black T-shirt and black jeans. He has an oval face. Christ is behind him.

He is wearing a red polo shirt and blue jeans. And Dominic is walking side by

side with Christ. They are waving their hands and smiling. Everybody is shouting

and calling their names. This is amazing.24

C. Clustering Technique

1. Definition of Clustering Technique

Before the writer implements the clustering technique into a descriptive

writing, it is better that she provides definitions about clustering technique. If the

writer sees from the stem of clustering, it can be “cluster” which is similar to

collect or generate or it can be expand. The term of clustering is a technique used

in the process of writing when students do a prewriting to get the ideas. It means

that clustering is done before starting to write an overall written. Students can

easily start their writing by generating the ideas first using clustering technique.

Most of students know about anything of what they want to say, but they are

impeded by how to say or serve the ideas that come into their mind. Therefore, the

writer believes that clustering technique is a simple technique but it is a powerful

strategy to generate ideas from the very broad ideas into specific ideas.25

Clustering technique is as a nonlinear brainstorming process that generates ideas,

23

Regina L. Smalley and Mary K. Ruetten, Refining Composition skills: Rhetoric and

Grammar, Fourth Edition, (Boston: Heinle & Heinle Publishers, 1995), p. 76. 24

Mukarto, et al., English on Sky 2: for Junior High School Students Year VIII, (Jakarta:

Erlangga, 2007), p. 19. 25

Jack C. Richards and Willy A. Renandya, Methodology in Language Teaching, (New

York: Cambridge University Press, 2002), p. 316.

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images, feeling around the relation of ideas until the pattern is visible. Clustering

technique can activate the complex symbolic activity on the right brain called

writing. The right brain has capabilities in overall analysis; image-making, and

synthetic, otherwise, the left brain has capabilities in logical, linear, and syntactic,

it can be said that clustering technique is a powerful mental tool.26

Clustering

takes a role to contribute the right and left brain, so, it makes students to think

critically and help them to write a piece of writing effectively.

“Clustering lets the writers see at a glance how ideas relate to one another.27

”

By implementing a clustering technique, students can be stimulated to flow the

ideas in their mind. Ideas definitely comes in as a big topic, it is hard for students

to expand the big topic into sub ideas. Through clustering technique, a big topic

can be narrowed into subtopics, and then, the subtopics are related to other ideas

and so forth.

Clustering technique is suitable to be implemented in descriptive writing,

because descriptive writing practice students to showing what is happening to

readers rather than just telling. Similarly, clustering technique also becomes a

strategy in prewriting that leads to showing not telling. By showing a description

to readers, they can imagine easily about an object which is describing, then,

contribute to use the five senses; seeing, hearing, touching, smelling, and tasting.

2. The Advantages of Clustering Technique

Clustering technique is useful for any kinds of writing because it has the

advantageous in it. In applying clustering technique in descriptive writing, there

are several advantages of clustering technique28:

a. Clustering is suited to people who think spatially and find it easier to draw

rather than write.

26

Gabriele Luser Rico, “Prewriting”, in Carol Booth Olson (ed), Practical Ideas for

Teaching Writing as a Process, (California: Sacramento, 1987), p. 17. 27

Barbara Fine Clouse, A Troubleshooting Guide for Writers, 4th

Edition, (New York:

Mc-Graw Hill Companies, Inc., 2005), p. 24. 28

Mark Connelly, The Sundance Writer: A Rhetoric, Reader, Research Guide and

Handbook, (Boston: Cengage Learning, 2007), pp.51—52.

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b. Clustering is good method to explore topics for comparison and classification

papers.

c. Clustering can save time. Clustering allows students to create several lists or

groupings, ranking ideas in importance and immediately showing links

between related ideas.

d. Clustering can help place ideas in context. Students can group ideas in

columns to contrast advantages or create a spectrum, showing the range of

ideas.

Thus, clustering technique is suitable for creative people, who can easily

explore their ideas. Clustering technique can be used to write a paper that requires

the details, besides, clustering technique avoid the writing task becomes the time-

consuming task, and help students to generate the ideas and used it contextually.

3. The Application of Clustering Technique in Descriptive

Writing

In applying the clustering technique, the students have to follow the

procedures of using clustering technique to students’ descriptive writing; in order

to make the use of clustering is done effectively, the students can follow these

several steps29

:

1. Introduce a topic about a person, place, and thing to students.

2. Write down the topic on the white board and then circle it.

3. Let students give the oral responses about the topic by generating the ideas

from the topic cluster to make a connection between ideas; they may use a

line, circle or box to relate each other.

4. Let students generate and expand their ideas as many as possible until they

stop to explore their ideas.

5. After exploring the ideas, ask students to use each idea into a sentence to

compose a descriptive paragraph.

29

Michael Carr, “Clustering with Nonreaders/Writers”, in Carol Booth Olson (ed),

Practical Ideas for Teaching Writing as a Process, (California: Sacramento, 1987), p. 21.

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It can be concluded that to use the clustering technique to students’

descriptive writing, is firstly introducing about the topic, whether it describes

about person, place, and object. Circle the topic which has been determined.

Try to engage students in clustering activity by giving their contribution in

oral responses. After getting the topic, let them to explore their ideas. Make a

sentence of each idea that has been deserved.

Figure 2.1

The Application of Clustering technique

Source: https://mytutor.sfasu.edu:8080/owl/preparation/2

Figure 2.1 The Example of Clustering Technique

D. Previous Studies

This research is reflected of the relevance studies which had been conducted

in educational field. Apparently, clustering technique is indeed effective to be a

prewriting strategy or technique in writing skill.

The first relevant study was conducted by Ronald T. Kellog entitled “The

Effectiveness of Prewriting Strategies as a Function of Task Demands” toward

207 college students. They wrote a short informative essay calling for analytical

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thinking. The students began drafting without any prewriting time (control), first

prepared a hierarchical written outline (outline), or first prepared a visual network

of ideas and their relations which is called clustering. There were three kinds of

task demands. First, the task demanded the generation and organization of ideas.

Second, demanded organization but provided the suggested topic and ideas.

Finally, the task demanded both topic and ideas and organizational of topic, ideas,

and organization. The content and style of the documents, fluency, and

characteristics of prewriting plans generated by outlining and clustering were

measured. The result showed that, the outlining had improved the content and

style, also fluency of drafting the text. The benefit of outlining was strongest for

the topic condition and nonexistent for the topic, ideas, and organization

condition. Clustering increased the number of ideas generated during prewriting,

but had no impact on document quality.

In this first previous study, the clustering technique was used to help

students doing their task demands in writing informative essay, the result of the

research showed that the clustering technique had increased students’ ideas. The

ideas could be easily generated and organized by students. Yet, clustering

technique did not influence the content of the essay. When students used an

outline, it had improved the content of the essay itself. It meant that the outline

had more positive effect than clustering. It is quite different from this skripsi, in

fact, when clustering technique was applied to students’ descriptive writing of

second grade students at MTs. Nurul Hidayah, there was a positive effect to the

content of students’ descriptive writing and it can be seen from the score results

when pre-test and post-test. Nevertheless, the similarity is clustering technique is

effective to generate the students’ ideas in writing.

The second previous study is entitled “Developing Students’ Ability in

Descriptive Writing through Clustering Technique” in the First Year of Islamic

Senior High School, MA Islamiyah Ciputat by Bayu Ertanto (2011). The writer

used a Class Action Research method, the data was derived from pre-test and

post-test which was conducted to 20 students. The result showed that all students

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had passed the criterion minimum of completeness (KKM) and the application of

clustering technique was effective in writing descriptive text.

Furthermore, the second previous study also used clustering technique as the

writing technique in writing a descriptive text; through clustering technique

students can pass the criterion minimum of completeness (KKM) and their writing

had improved by using clustering technique. The difference is only on the design

of the study which used an Action Research and took one class as the sample of

the study.

The “skripsi” entitled “Teaching Descriptive Writing through Clustering

Technique” of Tenth Grade Students of SMU Dwi Putra Ciputat by Taufik (2009)

used pre-experimental research. The students are about 20 students of all Tenth

Grade. His study was not only focused on the effectiveness of using clustering in

descriptive writing but also on teaching preparation of English teacher. The

findings of his research showed that the teaching preparation of the English

teacher was poor and the application of clustering technique in writing descriptive

text was effective. The students’ score in writing before using clustering technique

was about 43, it includes into “low standard”. After using clustering technique,

the students’ score in writing was 60, it includes into “enough standard”.

The last previous study used clustering technique to improve students’

writing and the result showed that clustering technique could bring students from

the low standard to enough standard in descriptive writing score. On the contrary,

this previous study also observed the preparation of the English teacher in

delivering the material of English. In fact, the teacher did not use any technique to

help students in writing descriptive text but when clustering technique was

applied, the students’ descriptive writing was significantly improved. It can be

concluded from the relevant studies that the students’ writing had improved and

the use of clustering technique in writing descriptive text was effective to generate

and organize the ideas.

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E. Conceptual Framework

Based on the curricula in secondary school, the government had stipulated

teaching of writing as the most important thing that should exist in the school.

Moreover, teachers also have the obligation to teach students in writing different

text types including descriptive text. To write a descriptive text, students have to

present a vivid description about person, place, and thing. By presenting such

vivid description using words the writers try to capture something into a written

form so the readers can understand what actually the writers describe about.

Most of students have to think harder to write a descriptive text due to their

limitation of ideas and confusing to begin describe it. To help students describing

something in a descriptive text as vivid as possible, the writer suggested clustering

technique as a technique to write a descriptive text. Some experts claimed that

clustering technique is a power mental tool to generate ideas, images, and feelings

around a stimulus word that teachable and utilizable to students so they can

explore their ideas and it makes them to begin writing. Clustering technique uses

circles, boxes, lines or arrows, to relate between the ideas, therefore, such

technique also makes students to think creatively.

By applying clustering technique in descriptive writing teachers may

stimulate the student’s ideas in the form of key words or phrases that can be used

to write a descriptive text. Students write down a topic in a word or phrase on the

paper and then they circle it, after that they find some related words or phrases as

ideas as many as possible and use lines or arrows to connect among them. They

could easily do it till they stop to find out the related ideas. Finally, they may start

to use the various words into a sentence and then compose the whole paragraph as

a descriptive text. In addition clustering technique contributes to activate the both

left and right brain so that it is possible to make students think critically and write

a descriptive text effectively.

Based on the explanation above, the writer believed that clustering technique

can be the one of effective techniques in teaching and learning process of writing

skill especially to a descriptive writing. By applying clustering technique, teachers

can help students to generate their various ideas and they will be easier to

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compose a descriptive text. Thus, clustering technique is expected can produce the

clarity ideas and organization of descriptive writing, and may give positive effect

to teaching and learning descriptive writing.

F. Research Hypotheses

The writer determined the hypothesis as follows:

The Alternative Hypotheses (Ha) : the use of clustering technique is

effective to students’ descriptive

writing.

The Null Hypotheses (Ho) : the use of clustering technique is

not effective to students’ descriptive

writing.

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CHAPTER III

RESEARCH METHODOLOGY

A. Place and Time of the Research

This study was conducted at MTs. Nurul Hidayah Jeruk Purut. This school

is located on JL. Jeruk Purut, Cilandak Timur. The conducting of this research

was about one month from October till November 2013.

B. Method and Research Design

The method of this research is quasi-experimental research by using pre-test

and post-test control group design. In quasi experimental research, the writer did

not give a random assignment as in the true experimental research because

randomly assigning will disrupt the classroom learning.1 The writer did not use

the true-experimental research because there are only two classes; therefore, the

writer could determine which class would the experimental class and controlled

class be without gave the assignments to students randomly.

There was a different treatment between experimental and controlled class.

In experimental class, students would have been treated by certain treatment, –by

applying clustering technique to students‘ descriptive writing– whereas in

controlled class students taught without using clustering technique.

C. Population and Sample

a. Population

Population is a region which consists of subject or object; it has a

certain characteristic and quantity and determined by the researcher to be

analyzed in order to make the conclusion.2 The population of this

research was all of the second grade students at MTs. Nurul Hidayah in

the academic year 2013/2014.

1John W. Creswell, Educational Research: Planning, Conducting and Evaluating

Quantitative and Qualitative Research, (Boston: Pearson Education, Inc.,), p. 309. 2Sugiyono, Metode Penelitian Pendidikan, Pendekatan Kuantitatif, Kualitatif, dan R&D,

(Bandung: Alfabeta, 2010), p. 117.

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b. Sample

Sample is a selected group of subjects for a study where the

individuals represent the larger group.3 The strategy of sampling was

Non-probability Sampling; it means that this kind of sampling does not

equally give the opportunity for every population to be selected as the

sample.4 The technique of the sample was total sampling; where all

populations become the main sample. The sample of this research was;

the A class with 16 students as the experimental class and B class with

16 students as controlled class.

D. Validity of the Instrument

An instrument which is going to be tested to students should have measured

what should be measured it is well-known as validity. Heaton defined ―validity is

the extent to which it measures what it is supposed to measure‖5. The instrument

of this research is based on the content of the English syllabus, “Mengungkapkan

makna dan langkah retorika dalam esei pendek sederhana dengan menggunakan

ragam bahasa tulis secara akurat, lancar dan berterima untuk berinteraksi

dengan lingkungan sekitar dalam teks berbentuk descriptive dan recount”. The

students should attain those objectives in learning descriptive writing, therefore, to

construct the test or instrument and the objective can be reached, it should be

guided on its content and it is known as content validity.

Content validity is a kind of validity that depends on the analysis of the

language which is being tested and the course objective.6 Before conducting the

test, the writer did the consultation to the advisor about the instrument in order to

make it is compatible and appropriate with the syllabus. The instrument of this

research has to be appropriate with the objective of learning descriptive text itself,

the indicator of learning descriptive text and instruction given to students so that

there is the appropriateness with the content of the syllabus and the writing

3L. R. Gay, Educational Research: Competencies for Analysis and Application, Third

Edition, (Columbus, Ohio: Merrill Publishing Company, 1987), p. 101. 4Loc. cit,.

5J. B. Heaton, Writing English Language Tests, (New York: Longman Inc., 1988), p. 159

6Ibid, p. 160.

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material which is tested to students and the objective of teaching and learning can

be achieved.

E. Reliability of the Instrument

The test also must reliable; it means that the test must be consistent in its

measurement.7 To make the test is reliable; the writer used rubric scoring as

Hughes suggested namely analytic scoring to score the students‘ pre-test and post-

test. The analytic scoring scores every aspect of content and composition of

writing which is, sometimes, cannot be scored by other scoring. The scales of

analytic scoring are derived from John Anderson. Actually, this analytic scoring is

based on oral scoring found by Harris but it also can be a scoring of writing skill.

There are some advantages of analytic scoring, the scores are compiled to

consider aspect of performance which it might otherwise ignore, besides, the very

fact that the scores have to give a number of scorer will tend to make the scoring

more reliable.8

F. Instrument of the Study

The instrument of this study was a test, exactly a written test. Test is some

questions or other tools which are used to measure the students‘ performance, the

intelligence, ability, or talents possessed by the individual or group.9 The writer,

then, administered a written test to measure the students‘ performance in writing a

descriptive text by using clustering technique.

G. Technique of Collecting the Data

In collecting the data, the writer used a written test as the primary

instrument. There are two types of tests; pretest and posttest. Pretest is a measure

that the researcher assesses for the participants in an experiment before receive a

7Ibid, p. 162.

8Arthur Hughes, Testing for Language Teachers, Second Edition, (Cambridge:

Cambridge University Press, 2003), p. 94. 9Suharsimi Arikunto, Prosedur Penelitian: Suatu Pendekatan Praktik, (Jakarta: PT

RINEKA CIPTA, 2010), p. 193.

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treatment. Posttest is a measure that the researcher assesses for the participants

after receive a treatment.10

The pre-test and post-test included in these processes:

1. The preliminary study conducted on October 1st 2013. The writer asked

the information from the English teacher to know the circumstances of

learning English and teaching descriptive writing.

2. After getting the permission from the English teacher, the writer

administered pre-test in both experimental and controlled class on October

2nd

2013.

3. The writer set the kisi-kisi of the instrument and Rencana Pelaksanaan

Pembelajaran to be applied in the classroom during the research.

4. On October 9th

2013, the writer conducted the certain treatment in the

experimental class to write a descriptive text by using clustering

technique; whereas in the controlled class did not use clustering technique

to write a descriptive writing. The topic given is about animal, the students

have to describe about animal.

5. Then, the teaching was continued on November 7th

2013. The writer asked

students to write a descriptive text about place

6. The final treatment was on November 12th

2013; in this meeting the

students wrote a descriptive writing about person.

7. After permitting by the English teacher to administer post-test, the writer

conducted it on November 14th

2013 in the experimental class.

8. The writer administered post-test in the controlled class on November 19th

2013.

9. After getting the whole data, the writer calculated the result of students‘

score in pre-test and post test by using some formulations.

10

John W. Creswell, Educational Research: Planning, Conducting and Evaluating

Quantitative and Qualitative Research, (Boston: Pearson Education, Inc., 2012), p. 297.

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H. Technique of Analyzing the Data

In analyzing the data, the formulas used are11

:

1) Determining the Mean of Variable I (Variable X), uses a formula as

follow:

Mx or M1 =

2) Determining the Mean of Variable II (Variable Y), uses a formula as

follow:

My or M2 =

3) Determining the Standard Deviation of Variable X uses a formula as

follow:

SDx or SD1 = √

4) Determining the Standard Deviation of Variable Y uses a formula as

follow:

SDy or SD2 = √

5) Determining the Standard Error Mean of Variable X uses a formula as

follow:

or =

√

6) Determining the Standard Error Mean of Variable Y uses a formula as

follow:

or =

√

7) Determining the difference of Standard Error between Mean of

Variable X and Mean of Variable Y, uses a formula as follow:

11

Anas Sudijono, Pengantar Statistik Pendidikan, (Jakarta: PT RajaGrafindo Persada,

2010), pp. 315—316

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– = √ 2

+ 2

8) Determining to :

to =

9) Determining t-table in significance level of 5% and with degree of

freedom (df):

df = (N1 N2) 2

Note:

Variable X = descriptive writing by using clustering technique

Variable Y = descriptive writing without using clustering technique

M1 = Mean of variable X

M2 = Mean of variable Y

SD1 = Standard Deviation of variable X

SD2 = Standard Deviation of variable Y

SE = Standard Error of Mean of variable X

SE = Standard Error of Mean of variable Y

df = degree of freedom

To score the students‘ performance in writing descriptive text, the scoring

uses analytic score devised according to Hughes is as follows12

:

Table 3.1

Analytic Scoring according to Hughes:

Criteria of

writing

Rating

Score Indicators

Grammar 6

5

4

Few noticeable errors of grammar or word order.

Some errors of grammar or word order which do not,

however, interfere with comprehension.

Errors of grammar or word order fairly frequent;

occasional re-reading necessary for full

12

Arthur Hughes, Testing for Language Teachers, Second Edition, (Cambridge:

Cambridge University Press, 2003), pp. 101—102.

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3

2

1

comprehension.

Errors of grammar or word order frequent; efforts of

interpretation sometimes required on reader‘s part.

Errors of grammar or word order very frequent; reader

often has to rely on own interpretation.

Errors of grammar or word order so severe as to make

comprehension virtually impossible.

Vocabulary 6

5

4

3

2

1

Use of vocabulary and idiom rarely distinguishable

from that of educated native writer.

Occasionally uses inappropriate terms or relies on

circumlocutions; expression of ideas hardly impaired.

Uses wrong or inappropriate words fairly frequently;

expression of ideas may be limited because inadequate

vocabulary.

Limited vocabulary and frequent errors clearly hinder

expression of ideas.

Vocabulary so limited and so frequently misused that

reader must often rely on own interpretation.

Vocabulary limitations so extreme as to make

comprehension virtually impossible.

Mechanics 6

5

4

3

2

Few noticeable lapses in punctuation or spelling.

Occasional lapses in punctuation or spelling which

does not, however, interfere with comprehension.

Errors in punctuation or spelling fairly frequent;

occasional re-reading necessary for full

comprehension.

Frequent errors in spelling or punctuation; lead

sometimes to obscurity.

Errors in spelling or punctuation so frequent that

reader must often rely on own interpretation.

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1 Errors in spelling or punctuation so severe as to make

comprehension virtually impossible.

Fluency (style

and ease of

communication)

6

5

4

3

2

1

Choice of structures and vocabulary consistently

appropriate; like that of educated native writer.

Occasional lack of consistency in choice of structures

and vocabulary which does not, however, impair

overall ease of communication.

‗Patchy‘, with some structures and vocabulary items

noticeably inappropriate to general style.

Structures and vocabulary items sometimes not only

inappropriate but also misuses; little sense of ease of

communication.

Communication often impaired by completely

inappropriate or misused structures and vocabulary

items.

A ‗hotch-potch‘ of half-learned misused structures and

vocabulary items rendering communication almost

impossible.

Form

(organization)

6

5

4

3

2

1

Highly organized; clear progression of ideas well

linked; like educated native writer.

Material well organized; links could occasionally be

clearer but communication not impaired.

Some lack of organization; re-reading required for

clarification of ideas.

Little or no attempt at connectivity, though reader can

deduce some organization.

Individual may be clear, but very difficult to deduce

connection between them.

Lack of organization so severe that communication is

seriously impaired.

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Nilai = (Jumlah skor maksimal) x100

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I. Statistic Hypotheses

Ho : µ1 = µ2 : the alternative hypotheses (Ha) is rejected and the null

hypotheses is accepted.

Ha : µ1 ≠ µ2 : the alternative hypotheses (Ha) is accepted and the null

hypotheses is rejected.

Note:

1 : Mean of the experimental class

2 : Mean of the controlled class

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CHAPTER IV

RESEARCH FINDINGS AND INTERPRETATION

A. Data Description

In the data description, the writer described the data which had been

collected. Those data are the students’ pretest and posttest scores of writing a

descriptive text. The writer provided a table to present the pretest and posttest

scores of both experimental and controlled classes.

Table 4.1

Students’ score of experimental class

Students

(N1) Pre-test Post-test Gained Score

S1 50 63 +13

S2 47 60 +13

S3 47 57 +10

S4 40 43 +3

S5 43 53 +10

S6 47 43 −3

S7 40 47 +7

S8 53 73 +20

S9 37 50 +13

S10 37 50 +13

S11 47 43 −4

S12 60 80 +20

S13 47 47 0

S14 50 50 0

S15 50 77 +27

S16 60 57 −3

∑X 139

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Table 4.2

Students’ score of controlled class

Students

(N1) Pre-test Post-test Gained Score

S1 30 37 +7

S2 40 37 −3

S3 40 37 −3

S4 40 47 +7

S5 30 30 0

S6 57 50 −7

S7 30 37 +7

S8 30 30 0

S9 43 43 0

S10 40 47 +7

S11 40 43 +3

S12 43 47 +4

S13 37 43 +6

S14 27 27 0

S15 30 27 −3

S16 27 30 +3

∑Y 28

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B. Data Analysis

Based on the pre-test and post-test result scores of both experimental and

controlled classes, the writer analyzed the data by using some formulations to

know the “t” value by using the degree of significant level 5% and to know the

significant effectiveness of using clustering technique to students’ descriptive

writing.

First of all, the writer determined the mean of X or experimental class and

mean of Y or controlled class. To determine the mean of X by using this formula:

M1 = ∑

=

= 8.7

Meanwhile, the writer also determined the mean of Y or controlled class by

using the following formula:

M2 = ∑

=

= 1.75

To make clearer, the writer provided the table to show the result of mean of

experimental and controlled classes as following:

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Table 4.3

The calculation result of both experimental and controlled classes

No. X Y x (X-M1) y (Y-M2) x2 y

2

1. +13 +7 4.3 5.25 18.49 27.5625

2. +13 −3 4.3 -4.75 18.49 22.5625

3. +10 −3 1.3 -4.75 1.69 22.5625

4. +3 +7 -5.7 5.25 32.49 27.5625

5. +10 0 1.3 -1.75 1.69 3.0625

6. −3 −7 -11.7 -8.75 136.89 76.5625

7. +7 +7 -1.7 5.25 2.89 27.5625

8. +20 0 11.3 -1.75 127.69 3.0625

9. +13 0 4.3 -1.75 18.49 3.0625

10. +13 +7 4.3 5.25 18.49 27.5625

11. −4 +3 -12.7 1.25 161.29 1.5625

12. +20 +4 11.3 2.25 127.69 5.0625

13. 0 +6 -8.7 4.25 75.69 18.0625

14. 0 0 -8.7 -1.75 75.69 3.0625

15. +27 −3 18.3 -4.75 334.89 22.5625

16. −3 +3 -11.7 1.25 136.89 1.5625

∑X=139 ∑Y=28 ∑x = 0 ∑y = 0 ∑x2 =

1289.44 ∑y

2 = 293

After determining the mean of both experimental and controlled class (X

and Y), the writer determined the Standard Deviation of experimental class (X)

used a formula as follow:

SD1 = √∑

37

= √

√

= 8.98

Meanwhile, to determine the Standard Deviation of controlled class (Y) used

a formula as follow:

SD2 = √∑

=√

√

= 4.3

Then, the result of both standard deviation (X and Y) the writer calculated

the Standard Error Mean of experimental class (X) uses a formula as follow:

=

√

√

=

√

= 2.3

Meanwhile, to determine the Standard Error Mean of controlled class (Y)

used a formula as follow:

=

√

=

√

=

√

= 1.1

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After determining the standard deviation of both experimental and

controlled class, the writer calculated the difference of standard error between

mean of experimental class X and mean of controlled class Y, used a formula as

follow:

– = √ 2+

2

√ (2.3)2+ (1.1)

2

= √5.29 + 1.21

= √6.5

= 2.5

Then, the writer calculated tobserved:

to=

to=

to=

to= 2.78

Finally, the writer calculated the ttable in significance level of 5% and with

degree of freedom (df):

df = (N1 N2) 2

df = (16+16) – 2

= 30

Based on the degree of freedom (df), the writer gained the t-table:

Degree of significance 5% = 2.04

From the calculation towards the result of pre-test and post-test of both

experimental and controlled classes, the result shows that the obtained score of

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experimental class is higher than that of controlled class. Besides, the writer

obtained the comparison between to and tt for the degree of significance 5%:

Degree of significance 5%: to> tt = 2.78 > 2.04

The data which have been calculated by using t-test, based on the result pre-

test and post-test of both experimental and controlled classes is to prove the

research hypotheses as the tentative assumption below:

1. If to> tt : the alternative hypotheses (Ha) is accepted and the null

hypotheses (Ho) is rejected. It means that there is a significant difference

between the result of students’ descriptive writing by using clustering

technique and students’ descriptive writing without using clustering

technique for the second grade students of MTs. Nurul Hidayah Jeruk Purut.

2. If to< tt : the alternative hypotheses (Ha) is rejected and the null hypotheses

(Ho) is accepted. It means that there is no significant difference between

students’ descriptive writing by using clustering technique and students’

descriptive writing without using clustering technique for the second grade

students of MTs. Nurul Hidayah Jeruk Purut.

From the data calculation, the value of to is 2.78 and the degree of freedom

(df) is 30. In this research, the writer used the degree of significance 5% where the

value of degree of significance 5% is 2.04.

By comparing the value of to= 2.78 and t-table on the degree of significance

5% = 2.04 the writer made a conclusion of the hypotheses that to is higher than t-

table; 2.04 < 2.78. It meant that the alternative hypotheses (Ha) is accepted and

the null hypotheses is rejected (Ho). Therefore, the using of clustering technique

is effective to students’ descriptive writing.

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C. Data Interpretation

Based on the data description, it can be seen that the scores of experimental

class or the students who have been taught a descriptive writing by using the

clustering technique is higher than those who have been taught a descriptive

writing without using the clustering technique. It means that, the clustering

technique is effective to be applied in writing; in the case is descriptive writing.

The writer had applied a clustering technique as the technique to used to

write a descriptive text due to Heaton said that writing is considered as a complex

skill because students have to master not only the component of grammatical and

structure of the sentence but also the structures of the paragraph itself,

furthermore, students’ effort are required to generate their ideas that come along

into the words. Therefore, writing needs a technique to be applied in writing in

order to make easier the students to write especially to write a descriptive text.

Descriptive text needs the vivid description about thing, place, and people,

besides, descriptive text is not only just to tell something but also show something

so that the readers gain the description as detail as possible. To give a description

as vivid as possible, there is a technique which can be used to write a descriptive

writing called clustering technique. It is suitable to be applied in descriptive

writing because in Carol Booth Olson’s book, Gabriele Lusser Rico defined that

clustering technique is as a nonlinear brainstorming that generates students’ ideas,

images and feelings around the relation words or ideas until a pattern is visible. It

can also activate the complex symbol activity called writing on the right brain so

that a clustering technique is as a powerful mental tool. Finally, the writer

conducted this research to prove whether or not the clustering technique is really

effective to be applied in descriptive writing.

Based on the calculation by using some formulas to calculate students’

scores in pre-test and post-test, the writer believed that the clustering technique is

effective to students’ descriptive writing. The result of to is higher than t-table, the

value of to= 2.78 and t-table on the degree of significance 5% = 2.04 the writer

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made a conclusion of the hypotheses that to is higher than t-table; 2.78 > 2.04. The

alternative hypotheses (Ha) of this research had been proven that clustering

technique to students’ descriptive writing of the second grade students of MTs.

Nurul Hidayah Jeruk Purut is more effective than without using clustering

technique to students’ descriptive writing. Thus, the alternative hypotheses (Ha) is

accepted and the null hypotheses (Ho) is rejected.

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CHAPTER V

CONCLUSIONS AND SUGGESTIONS

A. CONCLUSION

In this chapter, the writer would like to give the conclusions about the

previous chapters. Based on the data which have been collected, the writer

concludes that the use of clustering technique gives the positive effect to

students’ descriptive writing. It can be seen from the result score of post test

in both classes (experimental class and controlled class), the experimental

class which used a clustering technique to descriptive writing was higher than

that of the controlled class which did not use a clustering technique. The

result of to is 2.78, whereas the ttable with the degree of significance 5% is

2,04. It shows that the alternative hypothesis (Ha) of this research is accepted

and the null hypothesis (Ho) is rejected. Therefore, the use of clustering

technique is effective to students’ descriptive writing.

B. SUGGESTIONS

The writer would like to give some suggestions which can be useful for

the teachers at MTs. Nurul Hidayah Jeruk Purut, the suggestions are as

follow:

1. The teachers have to pay attention to the students’ motivation of

writing so that they are interested in writing activity.

2. The teachers should have the creativity to use some methods and

techniques that can be used in the classroom to make students

easily learning English.

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3. The teachers can use clustering technique as the one of techniques

of writing skill that used in the classroom.

4. The teachers should create a student’s habit to write continuously

so that they are usual to practice writing skill.

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APPENDICES

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APPENDIX 1

KISI-KISI PEMBELAJARAN

Sekolah : MTs. Nurul Hidayah Jeruk Purut

Kelas : VIII ( Delapan )

Mata Pelajaran : BAHASA INGGRIS

Semester : 1 (Satu)

Standar Kompetensi : Menulis

6. Mengungkapkan makna dalam teks tulis fungsional dan esei pendek

sederhana berbentuk descriptive, dan recount untuk berinteraksi dengan

lingkungan sekitar

Kompetensi

Dasar Tujuan Pembelajaran Instruksi

6.1.Mengungkapkan

makna dan langkah

retorika dalam esei

pendek sederhana

dengan

menggunakan ragam

bahasa tulis secara

akurat, lancar dan

berterima untuk

berinteraksi dengan

lingkungan sekitar

dalam teks

berbentuk

descriptive dan

recount

1. Siswa mampu

menyusun kalimat

menjadi teks yang

bermakna dalam

bentuk descriptive

2. Siswa mampu menulis

teks essai dalam

bentuk

Descriptive tentang

hewan, orang, dan

tempat

1. Write an essay

about describing

something or a

certain place.

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APPENDIX 2

RPP I (Kelas Eksperimen)

RENCANA PELAKSANAAN PEMBELAJARAN

(RPP)

Nama sekolah : MTs. Nurul Hidayah

Mata pelajaran : Bahasa Inggris

Kelas/ semester : VIII/ I

Alokasi waktu : 2x40 menit (1 pertemuan)

I. Standar Kompetensi

Menulis

1. Mengungkapkan makna dalam teks tulis fungsional dan esei

pendek sangat sederhana berbentuk descriptive untuk

berinteraksi dengan lingkungan terdekat.

II. Kompetensi Dasar

1.1. Mengungkapkan makna dan langkah retorika dalam esei

pendek sangat sederhana dengan menggunakan ragam bahasa

tulis secara akurat, lancar dan berterima untuk berinteraksi

dengan lingkungan terdekat dalam teks berbentuk descriptive.

III. Tujuan Pembelajaran

Setelah mengikuti pembelajaran ini, peserta didik mampu:

1. Memahami struktur paragraf dan ciri kebahasaan yang ada

dalam descriptive text.

2. Menemukan ide dengan menggunakan Teknik Clustering

3. Menyusun ide untuk menyusun paragraf descriptive.

4. Menghasilkan teks essai yang berbentuk descriptive sesuai

dengan topik yang telah ditentukan yaitu tentang hewan.

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IV. Materi Pembelajaran

DESCRIPTIVE TEXT

A descriptive text is a text that describes the characteristics

of a specific things, for example a specific person, place and thing.

A descriptive text has the generic structure:

1. Identification/ introduction

Identifying the phenomenon to be described. It introduces

about name, location, etc.

2. Description

It tells about the characteristic features of the subject, e.g.

physical appearance, habitual behavior, and significant

attributes.

The language feature of descriptive text:

1. Using adjective

2. Using simple present tense

3. Using particular nouns

V. Media Pembelajaran

Laptop

In focus

VI. Metode Pembelajaran

Three-phase Techniques

Tanya jawab

VII. Langkah-langkah kegiatan pembelajaran

Kegiatan Awal (5-10 menit)

1. Presensi (mencatat siswa yang tidak hadir dan

alasan/penyebabnya)

2. Apersepsi dan motivasi: membuka proses berfikir dan

menyampaikan pendahuluan materi yang akan disajikan

dan memotivasi siswa.

3. Memberitahukan pembelajaran hari ini.

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Kegiatan Inti

Elaborasi (60-70 menit)

1. Guru memberikan contoh teks descriptive kepada siswa untuk

dipelajari.

2. Guru bertanya kepada siswa teks apa yang ditampilkan.

3. Guru memberi tahu teks apa yang ditampilkan

4. Siswa mendengarkan dan memperhatikan penjelasan dari guru

tentang descriptive text tentang definisi, dan pola paragraf

descriptive text.

5. Guru bersama siswa menganalisa pola paragraf dan struktur

kebahasaan paragraf descriptive.

6. Guru memperkenalkan teknik clustering dan menjelaskannya.

7. Guru memberikan desain clustering dari teks descriptive.

8. Setelah para siswa memahami cara membuat paragraf

deskriptif, siswa diminta untuk membuat paragraph deskriptif

secara individu dengan topik hewan, kemudian mencari ide

melalui teknik clustering.

9. Siswa menyusun paragraf descriptif

Konfirmasi (5 menit)

1. Bertanya kepada siswa tentang paragraph deskriptif

2. Memberikan umpan balik positif dan penguatan dalam bentuk

lisan (amazing, well done, good job), tulisan, isyarat (giving

applause), maupun hadiah terhadap keberhasilan peserta didik.

Kegiatan Akhir

Penutup (5 menit)

1. Memberi kesempatan kepada peserta didik untuk bertanya.

2. Mengulas secara singkat apa yang telah dipelajari hari ini.

3. Feedback untuk mengetahui daya serap siswa.

4. Memberi tugas/pekerjaan rumah

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Sumber belajar

1. Buku LKS Kartika Prima kelas VIII.

2. Buku teks Bahasa Inggris Scaffolding kelas VIII.

VIII. Penilaian

Indikator Teknik Bentuk Instrumen

1. Memahami struktur paragraf

dan ciri kebahasaan yang

ada dalam descriptive text.

2. Menemukan ide dengan

menggunakan Teknik

Clustering

3. Menyusun ide untuk

menyusun paragraf

descriptive.

4. Menghasilkan teks essai

yang berbentuk descriptive

sesuai dengan topic yang

telah ditentukan yaitu

tentang hewan.

Tes Lisan

Tes tertulis

Tanya Jawab

Essay

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Contoh instrument

Name :

Class :

Find your brilliant ideas based on the topic and write down into a paragraph!

Topic : Animal

Cat

Title:

Introduction:

Description(s):

Format kriteria penilaian

Produk

Criteria of

writing

Rating

Score Indicators

Grammar 6

5

Few noticeable errors of grammar or word order.

Some errors of grammar or word order which do not,

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4

3

2

1

however, interfere with comprehension.

Errors of grammar or word order fairly frequent;

occasional re-reading necessary for full

comprehension.

Errors of grammar or word order frequent; efforts of

interpretation sometimes required on reader’s part.

Errors of grammar or word order very frequent; reader

often has to rely on own interpretation.

Errors of grammar or word order so severe as to make

comprehension virtually impossible.

Vocabulary 6

5

4

3

2

1

Use of vocabulary and idiom rarely distinguishable

from that of educated native writer.

Occasionally uses inappropriate terms or relies on

circumlocutions; expression of ideas hardly impaired.

Uses wrong or inappropriate words fairly frequently;

expression of ideas may be limited because inadequate

vocabulary.

Limited vocabulary and frequent errors clearly hinder

expression of ideas.

Vocabulary so limited and so frequently misused that

reader must often rely on own interpretation.

Vocabulary limitations so extreme as to make

comprehension virtually impossible.

Mechanics 6

5

4

3

Few noticeable lapses in punctuation or spelling.

Occasional lapses in punctuation or spelling which

does not, however, interfere with comprehension.

Errors in punctuation or spelling fairly frequent;

occasional re-reading necessary for full

comprehension.

Frequent errors in spelling or punctuation; lead

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2

1

sometimes to obscurity.

Errors in spelling or punctuation so frequent that

reader must often rely on own interpretation.

Errors in spelling or punctuation so severe as to make

comprehension virtually impossible.

Fluency (style

and ease of

communication)

6

5

4

3

2

1

Choice of structures and vocabulary consistently

appropriate; like that of educated native writer.

Occasional lack of consistency in choice of structures

and vocabulary which does not, however, impair

overall ease of communication.

‘Patchy’, with some structures and vocabulary items

noticeably inappropriate to general style.

Structures and vocabulary items sometimes not only

inappropriate but also misuses; little sense of ease of

communication.

Communication often impaired by completely

inappropriate or misused structures and vocabulary

items.

A ‘hotch-potch’ of half-learned misused structures and

vocabulary items rendering communication almost

impossible.

Form

(organization)

6

5

4

3

2

Highly organized; clear progression of ideas well

linked; like educated native writer.

Material well organized; links could occasionally be

clearer but communication not impaired.

Some lack of organization; re-reading required for

clarification of ideas.

Little or no attempt at connectivity, though reader can

deduce some organization.

Individual may be clear, but very difficult to deduce

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1

connection between them.

Lack of organization so severe that communication is

seriously impaired.

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30

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APPENDIX 3

RPP I (Kelas Kontrol)

RENCANA PELAKSANAAN PEMBELAJARAN

(RPP)

Nama sekolah : MTs. Nurul Hidayah

Mata pelajaran : Bahasa Inggris

Kelas/ semester : VIII/ I

Alokasi waktu : 2x40 menit (1 pertemuan)

I. Standar Kompetensi

Menulis

1. Mengungkapkan makna dan langkah retorika dalam esei

pendek sederhana dengan menggunakan ragam bahasa tulis

secara akurat, lancar dan berterima untuk berinteraksi dengan

lingkungan sekitar.

II. Kompetensi Dasar

1.1. Mengungkapkan makna dan langkah retorika dalam esei

pendek sederhana dengan menggunakan ragam bahasa tulis

secara akurat, lancar dan berterima untuk berinteraksi dengan

lingkungan sekitar dalam teks berbentuk descriptive dan

recount.

III. Tujuan Pembelajaran

Setelah mengikuti pembelajaran ini, peserta didik mampu:

1. Memahami struktur paragraf dan ciri kebahasaan yang ada

dalam descriptive text.

2. Menghasilkan teks essai yang berbentuk descriptive sesuai

dengan topik yang telah ditentukan yaitu tentang hewan.

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IV. Materi Pembelajaran

DESCRIPTIVE TEXT

A descriptive text is a text that describes the characteristics

of a specific things, for example a specific person, place and thing.

A descriptive text has the generic structure:

1. Identification/ introduction

Identifying the phenomenon to be described. It introduces

about name, location, etc.

2. Description

It tells about the characteristic features of the subject, e.g.

physical appearance, habitual behavior, and significant

attributes.

V. Media Pembelajaran

Hand out

VI. Metode Pembelajaran

Three-phase Techniques

Tanya jawab

VII. Langkah-langkah kegiatan pembelajaran

Kegiatan Awal (5-10 menit)

1. Presensi (mencatat siswa yang tidak hadir dan

alasan/penyebabnya)

2. Apersepsi dan motivasi: membuka proses berfikir dan

menyampaikan pendahuluan materi yang akan disajikan

dan memotivasi siswa.

3. Memberitahukan pembelajaran hari ini.

KegiatanInti

Elaborasi (60-70 menit)

1. Guru memberikan contoh teks descriptive kepada siswa untuk

dipelajari.

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2. Guru bertanya kepada siswa teks apa yang ditampilkan.

3. Guru memberi tahu teks apa yang ditampilkan

4. Siswa mendengarkan dan memperhatikan penjelasan dari guru

tentang descriptive text tentang definisi, dan pola paragraf

descriptive text.

5. Guru bersama siswa menganalisa pola paragraf dan struktur

kebahasaan paragraf descriptive.

6. Setelah para siswa memahami cara membuat paragraf

deskriptif, siswa diminta untuk membuat paragraph deskriptif

secara individu dengan topik hewan.

7. Siswa menyusun paragraf descriptif

8. Membuat draft teks deskriptif secara mandiri

9. Menampilkan hasil tulisan teks deskriptif di dalam kelas.

Konfirmasi (5 menit)

1. Bertanya kepada siswa tentang menulis paragraph deskriptif

2. Memberikan umpan balik positif dan penguatan dalam bentuk

lisan (amazing, well done, good job), tulisan, isyarat (giving

applause), maupun hadiah terhadap keberhasilan peserta didik.

Kegiatan Akhir

Penutup (5 menit)

1. Memberi kesempatan kepada peserta didik untuk bertanya.

2. Mengulas secara singkat apa yang telah dipelajari hari ini.

3. Feedback untuk mengetahui daya serap siswa.

4. Memberi tugas/pekerjaan rumah

Sumber belajar

VIII. Penilaian

Indikator Teknik BentukInstrumen

1. Memahami struktur

paragraf dan ciri

kebahasaan yang

Lisan

Tanya Jawab

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ada dalam

descriptive text.

2. Menulis teks esei

dalam bentuk

deskriptif

Tes Tertulis

Essay

Contoh instrument

Name :

Class :

Find your brilliant ideas based on the topic and write down into a paragraph!

Topic : Animal

Cat

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Format criteria penilaian

Produk

Criteria of

writing

Rating

Score Indicators

Grammar 6

5

4

3

2

1

Few noticeable errors of grammar or word order.

Some errors of grammar or word order which do

not, however, interfere with comprehension.

Errors of grammar or word order fairly frequent;

occasional re-reading necessary for full

comprehension.

Errors of grammar or word order frequent; efforts

of interpretation sometimes required on reader’s

part.

Errors of grammar or word order very frequent;

reader often has to rely on own interpretation.

Errors of grammar or word order so severe as to

make comprehension virtually impossible.

Vocabulary 6

5

4

3

2

1

Use of vocabulary and idiom rarely distinguishable

from that of educated native writer.

Occasionally uses inappropriate terms or relies on

circumlocutions; expression of ideas hardly

impaired.

Uses wrong or inappropriate words fairly

frequently; expression of ideas may be limited

because inadequate vocabulary.

Limited vocabulary and frequent errors clearly

hinder expression of ideas.

Vocabulary so limited and so frequently misused

that reader must often rely on own interpretation.

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Vocabulary limitations so extreme as to make

comprehension virtually impossible.

Mechanics 6

5

4

3

2

1

Few noticeable lapses in punctuation or spelling.

Occasional lapses in punctuation or spelling which

does not, however, interfere with comprehension.

Errors in punctuation or spelling fairly frequent;

occasional re-reading necessary for full

comprehension.

Frequent errors in spelling or punctuation; lead

sometimes to obscurity.

Errors in spelling or punctuation so frequent that

reader must often rely on own interpretation.

Errors in spelling or punctuation so severe as to

make comprehension virtually impossible.

Fluency (style

and ease of

communication)

6

5

4

3

2

1

Choice of structures and vocabulary consistently

appropriate; like that of educated native writer.

Occasional lack of consistency in choice of

structures and vocabulary which does not, however,

impair overall ease of communication.

‘Patchy’, with some structures and vocabulary

items noticeably inappropriate to general style.

Structures and vocabulary items sometimes not

only inappropriate but also misuses; little sense of

ease of communication.

Communication often impaired by completely

inappropriate or misused structures and vocabulary

items.

A ‘hotch-potch’ of half-learned misused structures

and vocabulary items rendering communication

almost impossible.

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Form

(organization)

6

5

4

3

2

1

Highly organized; clear progression of ideas well

linked; like educated native writer.

Material well organized; links could occasionally

be clearer but communication not impaired.

Some lack of organization; re-reading required for

clarification of ideas.

Little or no attempt at connectivity, though reader

can deduce some organization.

Individual may be clear, but very difficult to

deduce connection between them.

Lack of organization so severe that communication

is seriously impaired.

Nilai = (Jumlah skor maksimal)x100

30

Jakarta, 9 Oktober 2013

Guru praktikan

Sari Nur’aini

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APPENDIX 4

RPP II (Kelas Eksperimen)

RENCANA PELAKSANAAN PEMBELAJARAN

(RPP)

Nama sekolah : MTs. Nurul Hidayah

Mata pelajaran : BahasaInggris

Kelas/ semester : VIII/ I

Alokasi waktu : 2x40 menit (1 pertemuan)

I. Standar Kompetensi

Menulis

2. Mengungkapkan makna dalam teks tulis fungsional dan esei

pendek sangat sederhana berbentuk descriptive untuk

berinteraksi dengan lingkungan terdekat.

II. Kompetensi Dasar

2.1. Mengungkapkan makna dan langkah retorika dalam esei

pendek sangat sederhana dengan menggunakan ragam bahasa

tulis secara akurat, lancar dan berterima untuk berinteraksi

dengan lingkungan terdekat dalam teks berbentuk descriptive.

III. Tujuan Pembelajaran

Setelah mengikuti pembelajaran ini, peserta didik mampu:

1. Memahami struktur paragraf dan ciri kebahasaan yang ada

dalam descriptive text.

2. Menemukan ide dengan menggunakan Teknik Clustering

3. Menyusun ide untuk menyusun paragraf descriptive.

4. Menghasilkan teks essai yang berbentuk descriptive sesuai

dengan topik yaitu tentang tempat hiburan.

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Restau

rants

Haunted

house

IV. Materi Pembelajaran

DESCRIPTIVE TEXT

A descriptive text is a text that describes the characteristics

of a specific things, for example a specific person, place and

thing.A descriptive text has the generic structure:

1. Identification/ introduction

Identifying the phenomenon to be described. It introduces

about name, location, etc.

2. Description

It tells about the characteristic features of the subject, e.g.

physical appearance, habitual behavior, and significant

attributes.

The language feature of descriptive text:

1. Using adjective

2. Using simple present tense

3. Using particular nouns

Contoh penggunaan Teknik Clustering:

Children Parents/adult

Visitors

Dunia Fantasi toilet

Games Facilitation mosque

Sawhorse

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Dunia Fantasi

Everyone is happy visits the amusement park namely Dunia Fantasi

especially children. The amusement park is a very amusing place because there

are many things that make people feel happy.

Most of people feel happy visit Dunia Fantasi. There are various visitors

who visit Dunia Fantasi, for instance, children. Every child must be happy visit

Dunia Fantasi accompanied by adults or their parents. Dunia Fantasi provides

various games. Children loves sawhorse because this game is not dangerous for

them so that they can be safe. Moreover, there is a haunted house. Some adults

are courageous to try this one. In the haunted house there are various kinds of

ghosts that are ready to scare the visitors.

Dunia Fantasi also provides some facilitation such as restaurants if they

are tired and hungry. The most important thing is toilet; everyone needs toilet

wherever they are especially in the amusement park. Finally there is a mosque for

Muslims who want to pray there.

V. Media Pembelajaran

Laptop

In focus

VI. Metode Pembelajaran

Diskusi kelompok

Tanya jawab

VII. Langkah-langkah kegiatan pembelajaran

Kegiatan Awal (5-10 menit)

1. Presensi (mencatat siswa yang tidak hadir dan

alasan/penyebabnya)

2. Apersepsi dan motivasi: membuka proses berfikir dan

menyampaikan pendahuluan materi yang akan disajikan

dan memotivasi siswa.

3. Memberitahukan pembelajaran hari ini.

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Kegiatan Inti

Elaborasi (60-70 menit)

1. Guru bertanya kepada siswa mengenai pemahaman materi

minggu lalu yaitu pengertian paragraf deskriptif

2. Guru bertanya kepada siswa mengenai pemahaman siswa

menggunakan teknik clustering dan pengertiannya.

3. Guru menjelaskan kembali struktur paragraf deskriptif dan cara

menuliskan penggambaran tentang suatu tempat misalnya

taman hiburan.

4. Guru menjelaskan kembali tentang cara menggunakan teknik

clustering dalam menggambarkan suatu tempat.

5. Setelahparasiswamemahami cara membuat paragraf deskriptif,

siswa diminta untuk menulis kembali paragraph deskriptif

tentang suatu tempat secara berkelompok kemudian mencari

ide melalui teknik clustering.

6. Siswa menyusun paragraf descriptif.

Konfirmasi (5 menit)

1. Bertanya kepada siswa tentang paragraph deskriptif

2. Memberikan umpan balik positif dan penguatan dalam bentuk

lisan (amazing, well done, good job), tulisan, isyarat (giving

applause), maupun hadiah terhadap keberhasilan peserta didik.

Kegiatan Akhir

Penutup (5 menit)

1. Memberi kesempatan kepada peserta didik untuk bertanya.

2. Mengulas secara singkat apa yang telah dipelajari hari ini.

3. Feedback untuk mengetahui daya serap siswa.

Sumber belajar

1. Buku teks Bahasa Inggris Scaffolding kelas VIII.

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VIII. Penilaian

Indikator Teknik BentukInstrumen

1. Memahami struktur paragraf

dan ciri kebahasaan yang

ada dalam descriptive text.

2. Menemukan ide dengan

menggunakan Teknik

Clustering

3. Menyusun ide untuk

menyusun paragraf

descriptive.

4. Menghasilkan teks essai

yang berbentuk descriptive

sesuai dengan topik yaitu

suatu tempat.

Tes tertulis

Isian

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Contoh instrument

Name :

Class :

Find your brilliant ideas based on the topic and write down into a paragraph!

Topic : The Amusement Park

Zoo

Title:

Introduction:

Description(s):

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Format kriteria penilaian

Produk

Criteria of

writing

Rating

Score Indicators

Grammar 6

5

4

3

2

1

Few noticeable errors of grammar or word order.

Some errors of grammar or word order which do not,

however, interfere with comprehension.

Errors of grammar or word order fairly frequent;

occasional re-reading necessary for full

comprehension.

Errors of grammar or word order frequent; efforts of

interpretation sometimes required on reader’s part.

Errors of grammar or word order very frequent; reader

often has to rely on own interpretation.

Errors of grammar or word order so severe as to make

comprehension virtually impossible.

Vocabulary 6

5

4

3

2

1

Use of vocabulary and idiom rarely distinguishable

from that of educated native writer.

Occasionally uses inappropriate terms or relies on

circumlocutions; expression of ideas hardly impaired.

Uses wrong or inappropriate words fairly frequently;

expression of ideas may be limited because inadequate

vocabulary.

Limited vocabulary and frequent errors clearly hinder

expression of ideas.

Vocabulary so limited and so frequently misused that

reader must often rely on own interpretation.

Vocabulary limitations so extreme as to make

comprehension virtually impossible.

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Mechanics 6

5

4

3

2

1

Few noticeable lapses in punctuation or spelling.

Occasional lapses in punctuation or spelling which

does not, however, interfere with comprehension.

Errors in punctuation or spelling fairly frequent;

occasional re-reading necessary for full

comprehension.

Frequent errors in spelling or punctuation; lead

sometimes to obscurity.

Errors in spelling or punctuation so frequent that

reader must often rely on own interpretation.

Errors in spelling or punctuation so severe as to make

comprehension virtually impossible.

Fluency (style

and ease of

communication)

6

5

4

3

2

1

Choice of structures and vocabulary consistently

appropriate; like that of educated native writer.

Occasional lack of consistency in choice of structures

and vocabulary which does not, however, impair

overall ease of communication.

‘Patchy’, with some structures and vocabulary items

noticeably inappropriate to general style.

Structures and vocabulary items sometimes not only

inappropriate but also misuses; little sense of ease of

communication.

Communication often impaired by completely

inappropriate or misused structures and vocabulary

items.

A ‘hotch-potch’ of half-learned misused structures and

vocabulary items rendering communication almost

impossible.

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Form

(organization)

6

5

4

3

2

1

Highly organized; clear progression of ideas well

linked; like educated native writer.

Material well organized; links could occasionally be

clearer but communication not impaired.

Some lack of organization; re-reading required for

clarification of ideas.

Little or no attempt at connectivity, though reader can

deduce some organization.

Individual may be clear, but very difficult to deduce

connection between them.

Lack of organization so severe that communication is

seriously impaired.

Nilai = (Jumlahskormaksimal)x100

30

Jakarta, 7 November 2013

Guru praktikan

Sari Nur’aini

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APPENDIX 5

RPP II (Kelas Kontrol)

RENCANA PELAKSANAAN PEMBELAJARAN

(RPP)

Nama sekolah : MTs. Nurul Hidayah

Mata pelajaran : BahasaInggris

Kelas/ semester : VIII/ I

Alokasi waktu : 2x40 menit (1 pertemuan)

I. Standar Kompetensi

Menulis

2. Mengungkapkan makna dan langkah retorika dalam esei

pendek sederhana dengan menggunakan ragam bahasa tulis

secara akurat, lancar dan berterima untuk berinteraksi dengan

lingkungan sekitar.

II. Kompetensi Dasar

2.1. Mengungkapkan makna dan langkah retorika dalam esei

pendek sederhana dengan menggunakan ragam bahasa tulis

secara akurat, lancer dan berterima untuk berinteraksi dengan

lingkungan sekitar dalam teks berbentuk descriptive dan

recount.

III. Tujuan Pembelajaran

Setelah mengikuti pembelajaran ini, peserta didik mampu:

1. Memahami struktur paragraf dan ciri kebahasaan yang ada

dalam descriptive text.

2. Melengkapi teks rumpang berbentuk deskriptif dengan topik

mengenai suatu tempat dengan berdiskusi secara berpasangan.

3. Memahami isi dari paragraf deskriptif

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IV. Materi Pembelajaran

DESCRIPTIVE TEXT

Sydney Opera House

The Sydney Opera House is a large

performing art place. It becomes an Australian

icon. It was established in 1973. It is located Introduction

in Sydney, New South Wales, Australia.

The Sydney Opera House covers 1.8 Description

hectares of land. It is 183 m long and about of physical

120 m wide. The building can load 25,000 people. features

The Opera House is a place for large Description

theatrical productions. It is the home of Opera of purpose

Australia, the Sydney Theatre Company and

the Sydney Symphonyan.

There are five theatres in Sydney

Opera House. There are also five rehearsal Description

studios, two main halls, four restaurants, of features

six bars, and many souvenir shops. The

design of the Opera House is very unique.

The roof looks like giant shells.

Besides for theatrical productions, Description

the Opera House is also used for other of use

functions. It is used for weddings, parties,

and conferences.

A descriptive text is a text that describes the characteristics of a

specific things, for example a specific person, place and thing. A

descriptive text has the generic structure:

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1. Identification/ introduction

An introduction to the subject of the description.

2. Description

It tells about the characteristic features of the subject, e.g. physical

appearance, qualities, habitual behavior, and significant attributes.

The common grammatical patterns of a description include:

1. Use of particular nouns, e.g. an Australian icon

2. Use of detailed noun groups to provide information about the subject, e.g.

It is 183 long and about 120 m wide

3. Use of a variety of types of adjectives, e.g. describing, numbering,

classifying

4. Use of relating verbs to provide information about the subject, e.g. The

Sydney Opera House covers 1.8 hectares of land

5. Use of action verbs to describe the subject’s behavior, e.g. The design of

the Opera House is very unique

6. Use of similes, metaphors and other types of figurative language,

particularly in literary descriptions, e.g. The roof looks like giant shells

V. Media Pembelajaran

Hand out

VI. Metode Pembelajaran

Three-phase Techniques

Diskusi secara berpasangan

Tanya jawab

VII. Langkah-langkah kegiatan pembelajaran

Kegiatan Awal (5-10 menit)

1. Presensi (mencatat siswa yang tidak hadir dan

alasan/penyebabnya)

2. Apersepsi dan motivasi: membuka proses berfikir dan

menyampaikan pendahuluan materi yang akan disajikan dan

memotivasi siswa.

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3. Memberitahukan pembelajaran hari ini.

Kegiatan Inti

Elaborasi (60-70 menit)

1. Guru bertanya kepada siswa mengenai pemahaman materi

minggu lalu yaitu pengertian paragraf deskriptif.

2. Guru menjelaskan kembali struktur paragraf deskriptif dan cara

menuliskan penggambaran tentang suatu tempat misalnya

taman hiburan.

3. Setelah para siswa memahami cara membuat paragraf

deskriptif dan cirri-ciri kebahasaannya, siswa diminta untuk

melengkapi teks rumpang berbentuk deskriptif dengan topik

mengenai suatu tempat dengan berdiskusi secara berpasangan.

Konfirmasi (5 menit)

1. Bertanya kepada siswa tentang menulis paragraph deskriptif

2. Memberikan umpan balik positif dan penguatan dalam bentuk

lisan (amazing, well done, good job), tulisan, isyarat (giving

applause), maupun hadiah terhadap keberhasilan peserta didik.

Kegiatan Akhir

Penutup (5 menit)

1. Memberi kesempatan kepada peserta didik untuk bertanya.

2. Mengulas secara singkat apa yang telah dipelajari hari ini.

3. Feedback untuk mengetahui daya serap siswa.

Sumber belajar

VIII. Penilaian

Indikator Teknik BentukInstrumen

1. Memahami

struktur paragraf

dan ciri

kebahasaan yang

ada dalam

Completion test

Complete the

paragraph using the

suitable words.

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descriptive text.

2. Melengkapi teks

rumpang berbentuk

deskriptif dengan

topik mengenai

suatu tempat.

Contoh instrument

Fill in the blanks with the suitable words in the box!

Borobudur Temple

Borodudur is a Buddhist 1) …….. in Central Java. It is one of the most interesting

tourist 2) …….. in Indonesia. It was built in the ninth 3) ……… Borobudur has 2,672 relefs

and 504 Buddha 4) ………. The reliefs illustrate the 5) ………. of pilgrims to three levels in

Buddhist cosmology. Those three levels are Kamadhatu, Rupadhatu, and Arupadhatu.

Borodudur is still used for pilgrimage. Once a year Buddhist in Indonesia 6) ……. Vesak

there.

Monument Journey Attractions

Century Celebrate Statues

Names:

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Format criteria penilaian

Nilai = (Jumlah skor maksimal) x100

60

Jakarta, 7 November 2013

Guru praktikan

Sari Nur’aini

77

APPENDIX 6

RPP III (Kelas Eksperimen)

RENCANA PELAKSANAAN PEMBELAJARAN

(RPP)

Nama sekolah : MTs. Nurul Hidayah

Mata pelajaran : Bahasa Inggris

Kelas/ semester : VIII/ I

Alokasi waktu : 2x40 menit (1 pertemuan)

I. Standar Kompetensi

Menulis

3. Mengungkapkan makna dalam teks tulis fungsional dan esei

pendek sangat sederhana berbentuk descriptive untuk

berinteraksi dengan lingkungan terdekat.

II. Kompetensi Dasar

3.1. Mengungkapkan makna dan langkah retorika dalam esei

pendek sangat sederhana dengan menggunakan ragam bahasa tulis

secara akurat, lancar dan berterima untuk berinteraksi dengan

lingkungan terdekat dalam teks berbentuk descriptive.

III. Tujuan Pembelajaran

Setelah mengikuti pembelajaran ini, peserta didik mampu:

1. Memahami struktur paragraf dan ciri kebahasaan yang ada

dalam descriptive text.

2. Menemukan ide dengan menggunakan Teknik Clustering

3. Menyusun ide untuk menyusun paragraf descriptive.

4. Menghasilkan teks essai yang berbentuk descriptive sesuai

dengan topik yaitu tentang idola.

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IV. Materi Pembelajaran

DESCRIPTIVE TEXT

A descriptive text is a text that describes the characteristics

of a specific things, for example a specific person, place and thing.

A descriptive text has the generic structure:

1. Identification/ introduction

Identifying the phenomenon to be described. It introduces

about name, location, etc.

2. Description

It tells about the characteristic features of the subject, e.g.

physical appearance, habitual behavior, and significant

attributes.

The language feature of descriptive text:

1. Using adjective

2. Using simple present tense

3. Using particular nouns

Contoh penggunaan Teknik Clustering:

Agnes Monica

hair

Appea

rance

body

tall slim

Personality

Beautiful

confident generous

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My Diva is Agnes Monica

Agnes Monica is a famous pop singer. Most people in Indonesia know her.

She certainly looks like an angel. She is tall, slim and beautiful. Her hair is

black. She always wears fashionable clothes.

Her personality is as good as her voice. She is confident. She is also

generous. She gives a lot of money to charity. Her hobby is unique. She keeps a

dog as a pet. She does not like cooking

V. Media Pembelajaran

Laptop

In focus

VI. Metode Pembelajaran

Three-phase techniques

Tanya jawab

VII. Langkah-langkah kegiatan pembelajaran

Kegiatan Awal (5-10 menit)

1. Presensi (mencatat siswa yang tidak hadir dan

alasan/penyebabnya)

2. Apersepsi dan motivasi: membuka proses berfikir dan

menyampaikan pendahuluan materi yang akan disajikan

dan memotivasi siswa.

3. Memberitahukan pembelajaran hari ini.

Kegiatan Inti

Elaborasi (60-70 menit)

1. Guru bertanya kepada siswa mengenai pemahaman materi

minggu lalu yaitu pengertian paragraf deskriptif

2. Guru bertanya kembali kepada siswa mengenai pemahaman

siswa menggunakan teknik clustering dan pengertiannya.

3. Guru menjelaskan kembali struktur paragraf deskriptif dan cara

menuliskan penggambaran tentang seseorang.

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4. Guru menjelaskan kembali tentang cara menggunakan teknik

clustering dalam menggambarkan suatu tempat.

5. Setelah para siswa memahami cara membuat paragraf

deskriptif, siswa diminta untuk menulis kembali paragraf

deskriptif tentang seseorang secara individu kemudian mencari

ide melalui teknik clustering.

6. Siswa menyusun paragraf descriptif.

Konfirmasi (5 menit)

1. Bertanya kepada siswa tentang paragraph deskriptif

2. Memberikan umpan balik positif dan penguatan dalam bentuk

lisan (amazing, well done, good job), tulisan, isyarat (giving

applause), maupun hadiah terhadap keberhasilan peserta didik.

Kegiatan Akhir

Penutup (5 menit)

1. Memberi kesempatan kepada peserta didik untuk bertanya.

2. Mengulas secara singkat apa yang telah dipelajari hari ini.

3. Feedback untuk mengetahui daya serap siswa.

4. Memberi tugas/pekerjaan rumah

Sumber belajar

1. Buku teks Bahasa Inggris Scaffolding kelas VIII.

VIII. Penilaian

Indikator Teknik Bentuk Instrumen

1. Memahami struktur paragraf dan ciri

kebahasaan yang ada dalam

descriptive text.

2. Menemukan ide dengan

menggunakan Teknik Clustering

3. Menyusun ide untuk menyusun

paragraf descriptive.

4. Menghasilkan teks essai yang

Tes tertulis

Isian

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berbentuk descriptive sesuai dengan

topik yaitu idola.

Contoh instrument

Name :

Class :

Find your brilliant ideas based on the topic and write down into a paragraph!

Topic : Idol

Agnes M

Title:

Introduction:

Description(s):

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Format kriteria penilaian

Produk

Criteria of

writing

Rating

Score Indicators

Grammar 6

5

4

3

2

1

Few noticeable errors of grammar or word order.

Some errors of grammar or word order which do not,

however, interfere with comprehension.

Errors of grammar or word order fairly frequent;

occasional re-reading necessary for full

comprehension.

Errors of grammar or word order frequent; efforts of

interpretation sometimes required on reader’s part.

Errors of grammar or word order very frequent; reader

often has to rely on own interpretation.

Errors of grammar or word order so severe as to make

comprehension virtually impossible.

Vocabulary 6

5

4

3

2

1

Use of vocabulary and idiom rarely distinguishable

from that of educated native writer.

Occasionally uses inappropriate terms or relies on

circumlocutions; expression of ideas hardly impaired.

Uses wrong or inappropriate words fairly frequently;

expression of ideas may be limited because inadequate

vocabulary.

Limited vocabulary and frequent errors clearly hinder

expression of ideas.

Vocabulary so limited and so frequently misused that

reader must often rely on own interpretation.

Vocabulary limitations so extreme as to make

comprehension virtually impossible.

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Mechanics 6

5

4

3

2

1

Few noticeable lapses in punctuation or spelling.

Occasional lapses in punctuation or spelling which

does not, however, interfere with comprehension.

Errors in punctuation or spelling fairly frequent;

occasional re-reading necessary for full

comprehension.

Frequent errors in spelling or punctuation; lead

sometimes to obscurity.

Errors in spelling or punctuation so frequent that

reader must often rely on own interpretation.

Errors in spelling or punctuation so severe as to make

comprehension virtually impossible.

Fluency (style

and ease of

communication)

6

5

4

3

2

1

Choice of structures and vocabulary consistently

appropriate; like that of educated native writer.

Occasional lack of consistency in choice of structures

and vocabulary which does not, however, impair

overall ease of communication.

‘Patchy’, with some structures and vocabulary items

noticeably inappropriate to general style.

Structures and vocabulary items sometimes not only

inappropriate but also misuses; little sense of ease of

communication.

Communication often impaired by completely

inappropriate or misused structures and vocabulary

items.

A ‘hotch-potch’ of half-learned misused structures and

vocabulary items rendering communication almost

impossible.

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Form

(organization)

6

5

4

3

2

1

Highly organized; clear progression of ideas well

linked; like educated native writer.

Material well organized; links could occasionally be

clearer but communication not impaired.

Some lack of organization; re-reading required for

clarification of ideas.

Little or no attempt at connectivity, though reader can

deduce some organization.

Individual may be clear, but very difficult to deduce

connection between them.

Lack of organization so severe that communication is

seriously impaired.

Nilai = (Jumlah skor maksimal) x100

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APPENDIX 7

RPP III (Kelas kontrol)

RENCANA PELAKSANAAN PEMBELAJARAN

(RPP)

Nama sekolah : MTs. Nurul Hidayah

Mata pelajaran : Bahasa Inggris

Kelas/ semester : VIII/ I

Alokasi waktu : 2x40 menit (1 pertemuan)

I. Standar Kompetensi

Menulis

3. Mengungkapkan makna dan langkah retorika dalam esei

pendek sederhana dengan menggunakan ragam bahasa tulis

secara akurat, lancar dan berterima untuk berinteraksi dengan

lingkungan sekitar.

II. Kompetensi Dasar

3.1. Mengungkapkan makna dan langkah retorika dalam esei

pendek sederhana dengan menggunakan ragam bahasa tulis secara

akurat, lancar dan berterima untuk berinteraksi dengan lingkungan

sekitar dalam teks berbentuk descriptive dan recount.

III. Tujuan Pembelajaran

Setelah mengikuti pembelajaran ini, peserta didik mampu:

1. Menyusun kalimat menjadi teks yang bermakna dalam bentuk

deskriptif secara individu tentang seseorang.

2. Memahami struktur paragraf yang ada dalam descriptive text.

3. Memahami isi dari paragraf deskriptif

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IV. Materi Pembelajaran

DESCRIPTIVE TEXT

A descriptive text is a text that describes the characteristics

of a specific things, for example a specific person, place and thing.

A descriptive text has the generic structure:

1. Identification/ introduction

Identifying the phenomenon to be described. It introduces

about name, location, etc.

2. Description

It tells about the characteristic features of the subject, e.g.

physical appearance, habitual behavior, and significant

attributes.

How to describe people:

Height: tall, short

Body: slim, thin, fat, muscular

Age: young, old, teenager

Hair: long short, bald, straight, curly, wavy, black, red

Face: round, oval, square, wrinkles, pale, bearded, shaved

Eyes: big, round, blue, brown, green, hazel, bright, slanting

Who is your idol?

Describe your idol, please

Example:

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Tobey Maguire is an American Actor. His full name is

Tobias Vincent Maguire. He is known for his role as Peter

Parker/Spider-Man in the Spider-Man film series. He stands about

172 cm. Besides, he has a muscular body that can really figure a

superhero. He has big round eyes and black straight hair. His

physical appearance really supports his role as a superhero.

Moreover, he is very friendly that makes him loveable.

V. Media Pembelajaran

Hand out

VI. Metode Pembelajaran

Three-phase Techniques

Tanya jawab

VII. Langkah-langkah kegiatan pembelajaran

Kegiatan Awal (5-10 menit)

1. Presensi (mencatat siswa yang tidak hadir dan

alasan/penyebabnya)

2. Apersepsi dan motivasi: membuka proses berfikir dan

menyampaikan pendahuluan materi yang akan disajikan

dan memotivasi siswa.

3. Memberitahukan pembelajaran hari ini.

Kegiatan Inti

Elaborasi (60-70 menit)

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1. Guru bertanya kepada siswa mengenai pemahaman materi

minggu lalu yaitu pengertian paragraf deskriptif.

2. Guru menjelaskan kembali struktur paragraf deskriptif dan cara

menuliskan penggambaran tentang seseorang.

3. Setelah para siswa memahami cara membuat paragraf

deskriptif, siswa diminta untuk menyusun kalimat acak menjadi

paragraph deskriptif yang padu.

4. Siswa menyusun paragraf deskriptif.

Konfirmasi (5 menit)

1. Bertanya kepada siswa tentang menulis paragraph deskriptif

2. Memberikan umpan balik positif dan penguatan dalam bentuk

lisan (amazing, well done, good job), tulisan, isyarat (giving

applause), maupun hadiah terhadap keberhasilan peserta didik.

Kegiatan Akhir

Penutup (5 menit)

1. Memberi kesempatan kepada peserta didik untuk bertanya.

2. Mengulas secara singkat apa yang telah dipelajari hari ini.

3. Feedback untuk mengetahui daya serap siswa.

4. Memberi tugas/pekerjaan rumah

Sumber belajar

VIII. Penilaian

Indikator Teknik Bentuk Instrumen

1. Menyusun kalimat menjadi

teks yang bermakna dalam

bentuk deskriptif secara

individu tentang seseorang.

2. Memahami struktur

paragraf yang ada dalam

descriptive text.

3. Memahami isi deskriptif

Jumbled sentence

Rearrange the following

sentences correctly.

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Contoh instrument

Name :

Class :

Rearrange the following sentences correctly to make a good descriptive paragraph!

1. She is tall, slim and beautiful

2. Her personality is as good as her voice

3. Agnes Monica is a famous pop singer

4. Her hobby is unique

5. She gives a lot of money to charity

6. She is confident. She is also generous

7. She does not like cooking

8. Most people in Indonesia know her

9. She always wears fashionable clothes

10. She keeps a dog as a pet

11. She certainly looks like an angel.

12. Her hair is black

My Diva

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APPENDIX 8

The Scoring of Descriptive Writing in Experimental Class (pre-test)

Score = Maximum score x 100

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No Grammar Vocabulary Mechanics Fluency Form

Score 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6

1 √ √ √ √ √ 50

2 √ √ √ √ √ 47

3 √ √ √ √ √ 47

4 √ √ √ √ √ 40

5 √ √ √ √ √ 43

6 √ √ √ √ √ 47

7 √ √ √ √ √ 40

8 √ √ √ √ √ 53

9 √ √ √ √ √ 37

10 √ √ √ √ √ 37

11 √ √ √ √ √ 47

12 √ √ √ √ √ 60

13 √ √ √ √ √ 47

14 √ √ √ √ √ 50

15 √ √ √ √ √ 50

16 √ √ √ √ √ 60

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The Scoring of Descriptive Writing in Experimental Class (post-test)

Score = Maximum score x 100

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No Grammar Vocabulary Mechanics Fluency Form

Score 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6

1 √ √ √ √ √ 63

2 √ √ √ √ √ 60

3 √ √ √ √ √ 57

4 √ √ √ √ √ 43

5 √ √ √ √ √ 53

6 √ √ √ √ √ 43

7 √ √ √ √ √ 47

8 √ √ √ √ √ 73

9 √ √ √ √ √ 50

10 √ √ √ √ √ 50

11 √ √ √ √ √ 43

12 √ √ √ √ √ 80

13 √ √ √ √ √ 50

14 √ √ √ √ √ 50

15 √ √ √ √ √ 77

16 √ √ √ √ √ 57

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The Scoring of Descriptive Writing in Controlled Class (pre-test)

Score = Maximum score x 100

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No Grammar Vocabulary Mechanics Fluency Form

Score 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6 1 2 3 4 5 6

1 √ √ √ √ √ 30

2 √ √ √ √ √ 40

3 √ √ √ √ √ 40

4 √ √ √ √ √ 40

5 √ √ √ √ √ 30

6 √ √ √ √ √ 57

7 √ √ √ √ √ 30

8 √ √ √ √ √ 30

9 √ √ √ √ √ 43

10 √ √ √ √ √ 40

11 √ √ √ √ √ 40

12 √ √ √ √ √ 43

13 √ √ √ √ √ 37

14 √ √ √ √ √ 27

15 √ √ √ √ √ 30

16 √ √ √ √ √ 27

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APPENDIX 9

Students’ score of experimental class

Students

(N1) Pre-test Post-test

S1 50 63

S2 47 60

S3 47 57

S4 40 43

S5 43 53

S6 47 43

S7 40 47

S8 53 73

S9 37 50

S10 37 50

S11 47 43

S12 60 80

S13 47 47

S14 50 50

S15 50 77

S16 60 57

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Students’ score of controlled class

Students

(N1) Pre-test Post-test

S1 30 37

S2 40 37

S3 40 37

S4 40 47

S5 30 30

S6 57 50

S7 30 37

S8 30 30

S9 43 43

S10 40 47

S11 40 43

S12 43 47

S13 37 43

S14 27 27

S15 30 27

S16 27 30

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