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Template for comments - Draft ISPMs for country consultation, 2009 DRAFT: DESIGN AND OPERATION OF POST-ENTRY QUARANTINE STATIONS FOR PLANTS See instructions on how to use this template at the end of the document. Following these will greatly facilitate the compilation of comments and the work of the Standards Committee. 1. Section 2. Par a nbe r 3. sentence / row/ indent, etc. 4. Type of comment (Substantive,Editorial,T ranslation) 5. Proposed rewording 6. Explanation 7. Country 1. GENERAL COMMENTS Annex 1 General None The annex to this standard provides valuable information to contracting parties, particularly developing contracting parties, in relation to the requirements for different PEQ levels and should be retained. Australia 2. GENERAL COMMENTS whole document Substantive Change “Quarantine Pest(s)” to “Regulated Pest(s)” throughout the document. The Standards Committee and steward are encouraged to consider and discuss the proposal to change "quarantine pest" to "regulated pest" throughout the ISPM in order to recognise that some countries may wish to ensure that regulated non quarantine pests are also managed in post- Australia

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Template for comments - Draft ISPMs for country consultation, 2009

DRAFT: DESIGN AND OPERATION OFPOST-ENTRY QUARANTINE STATIONS FOR PLANTS

See instructions on how to use this template at the end of the document. Following these will greatly facilitate the compilation of comments and the work of the Standards Committee.

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GENERAL COMMENTS

Annex 1 General None The annex to this standard provides valuable information to contracting parties, particularly developing contracting parties, in relation to the requirements for different PEQ levels and should be retained.

Australia

2.

GENERAL COMMENTS

whole document

Substantive Change “Quarantine Pest(s)” to “Regulated Pest(s)” throughout the document.

The Standards Committee and steward are encouraged to consider and discuss the proposal to change "quarantine pest" to "regulated pest" throughout the ISPM in order to recognise that some countries may wish to ensure that regulated non quarantine pests are also managed in post-entry quarantine noting that in order to be a regulated non quarantine pest it must be "... regulated within the territory of the importing contracting party...". Increasing the coverage of the standard to include regulated non quarantine pests may result in an increasing number of consignments entering quarantine and an increasing the associated costs of maintaining a post-entry quarantine facility. Could the report of the Standards Committee include a summary of the discussions/considerations surrounding this point please?

Australia

3. GENERAL COMMENTS

Change the Annex to an Appendix

The text provides very useful guidance and options for specifications for PEQ stations but

Belarus EC EPPO

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should not be regarded as prescriptive.

Israel

4.

GENERAL COMMENTS

There is no reference to recommended periods for holding plants in PEQ. It is suggested that some guidance is developed in the future in the form of an additional appendix on suggested holding periods for different plant types.

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

5.

GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive Canada would like the term “containment” to be considered when specifying requirements for Post Entry Quarantine (PEQ) stations as it will better reflect the current use of the term worldwide, for example through the development of containment standards for facilities handling plant pests in several countries. The current definition for “containment” in ISPM No. 5 Glossary of phytosanitary terms is “the application of phytosanitary measures in and around an infested area to prevent spread of a pest” which does not take into account holding consignments of plants in a PEQ station. In the world of Biosafety, there is a difference between confinement and containment where confinement is generally referring to confining (or restricting movement) animals in a pasture when they are not shedding any infectious particles. With respect to PEQ stations, we are looking at containing plant pests within the PEQ station (preventing their accidental release or escape). Canada would like the Technical Panel for the Glossary to review the definition of the term “containment” to consider this aspect.

CANADA

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6. GENERAL COMMENTS

The Annex of this draft can’t be considered an annex but an appendix, because it does not fulfil the agreed description of an Annex.

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

7.

GENERAL COMMENTS

Remove/change "Type of station" in PEQ station specifications table of the annex to actual physical components of each facility type.

Type of station "screen house or glasshouse" is very restrictive as tunnels, concrete buildings etc. can also be used. What is important are the physical requirements for each facility, e.g. impermeable roof, insect proof or impermeable sides etc. see specific comments in the annex.

Israel

8.

GENERAL COMMENTS

Infected to be replaced by infested through out the document

Where ever there is quarantine consignment of plants add regulated articles

To be consistent with other ISPMs IASPC-GABON

9.

GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive 1.Replace stations with facilities

2. Replace infected with infested/ infestation3. All the text in the standard with the phrase “quarantine consignments of plants’ to read “quarantine consignments of plants and regulated articles’

1. The word station is commonly used in transport eg. Railway station

2. To be consistence with definition in ISPM No. 5

3. Rephrasing and clarity

Kenya

10. COMENTARIOS GENERALES

Como sabemos, el proyecto viene de un proceso de revisión anterior, por lo que este nuevo proyecto está mas claro y maneja de manera muy general lo que debe de tener una

MEXICO

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“estación” para llevar a cabo la cuarentena posentrada.

Sine embargo, según el Glosario de Términos Fitosanitarios (2009) el término más vigente para “estaciones de cuarentena posentrada” corresponde a “estación cuarentenaria”. Mismo que se define como aquella “Estación oficial para mantener plantas o productos vegetales en cuarentena [FAO, 1990; revisado FAO, 1995; anteriormente estación de cuarentena post-entrada]”.

En ese sentido, México considera necesario adecuar todo el texto de la norma para referirnos al término más vigente que es “estación cuarentenaria” y lo mismo debe de aplicar en todo el texto para las siglas CPE.

También, se considera apropiado adecuar el texto de la norma para referirnos mejor a las “plagas reglamentadas” en lugar de plagas cuarentenarias, tomando en cuenta la definición dada en la NIMF No. 5 para plaga reglamentada la cual incluye tanto a las plagas cuarentenarias como las plagas no cuarentenarias reglamentadas.

Tengo duda de hasta que nivel de especificidad quieren la norma, ya que en algunos aspectos son muy generales.....por ejemplo: en perfil de los requisitos, numeral 12, indican que La estación de CPE también debería asegurar que los envíos de

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plantas se mantengan de tal forma que faciliten una mejor observación o inspección, pruebas.....CONSIDERO QUE DEBEN INDICAR CUÁL ES ESA FORMA, queda muy abierta la propuesta.

en el numeral 13...deben describir cuál es el lugar más apropiado para ubicar áreas de cuarentena, aunque en el numeral 28 se menciona debe ser indicado en el numeral 13. Asimismo en el numeral 15 no se indica cuál es el periodo para concluir la cuarentena y liberar las plantas...por ejemplo, puede ser el tiempo en que una plaga conocida de esas plantas termine su ciclo biológico...creo que puede ser entendible, aunque normalmente lo que hay que hacer con estas normas es precisamente hacerla entendible ya que algunas son muy complejas.

El numeral 23 se me hace muy impractico...quiere decir que de último momento puedes adecuar infraestructura o bien diseñar una nueva para estos casos...cuánto tiempo no se lleva este tipo de trabajo y la construcción? creo que deben ser más prácticos.

También deben incluir un sistema de comunicación interna, de tal manera que durante la jornada de trabajo la gente no tenga que salir del interior de la cuarentena.

En el numeral 61, deben incluir un sistema de presión de aire negativo.

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Adicionalmente, la NRMF No. 22 de la NAPPO Directrices para la construcción y operación de una instalación de contención para insectos y ácaros que se utilizan como agentes de control biológico, debe ser incluida en la sección de referencias y si quieren incluir mas detalle a lo que se requiere para infraestructura u operación aquí pueden referirla....incluso tiene de detalles sobre el tipo de tuberia y como debe ser tratada el agua de desecho...esta parte no la veo en la norma y creo que deben incluirla en los numerales del 57 al 65.

Debes también proponer planes de contingencia en caso de algún escape y de alarma en caso de que alguna puerta de acceso quede abierta.

Considero que con esto la norma queda completa y queda ajustada; en lo general se cubren los requisitos para insectos y ácaros como agentes de control biológico, pero no para microorganismos entomopatógenos.

La NRMF NAPPO esta enfocada a microorganismos y ahí req. condic. + especiales no dice nada de agua de desecho y es imp. Tomarlo en cuenta que el H2O pasen x un área que las limpie y luego salga limpio y sin ninguna fuga de lo que hay dentro.

11.GENERAL COMMENTS

Infecsted to be replaced by infested and or infected throughout the document.

NIGERIA

12. GENERAL 1. This Draft ISPM should 1. Since PQE is one of the measures ORISA

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COMMENTS constitute an Annex of ISPM n° 20

2. Substitute “requisito cuarentenario” by “requisito fitosanitario de importación”

that can be established under the phytosanitary import regulatory system, the possibility that this draft ISPM should form part of ISPM N° 20 should be considered, thus avoiding several separate standards on the same topic.

2. “Requisito fitosanitario de importación” is the term defined in NIMF N° 5. “Requisito cuarentenario” as such does not appear in that standard. In English “phytosanitary import requirements” instead of “quarantine requirements”

EL SALVADORPANAMA

13.

GENERAL COMMENTS

Such facility will be very costly for developing country when taking into account the cost of infrastructure, training, manpower, materials and equipments and operational cost. It will involve a lot to enforce the capacity building to meet this requirement and application can be very difficultEven we don’t have the facility at least we do understand the responsibilities of this draft and we do have a strategical approach to do something to prevent the introduction and spread of quarantine pest e.g. PRA etc.

Seychelles

14.

GENERAL COMMENTS

Editorial Infected to be replaced by infested through out the document

Where ever there is quarantine consignment of plants add regulated articles

To be consistent with other ISPMs Swaziland

15. GENERAL Addition of a schematic diagram. This would be very helpful in Trinidad and

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COMMENTS showing thelayout of a facility of this type

Tobago

16.

TITRE [1] Dernière partie du titre

De fond CONCEPTION ET FONCTIONNEMENT DES STATIONS DE QUARANTAINE POST-ENTRÉE POUR LES VÉGÉTAUX ET PRODUITS VEGETAUX

Les produits végétaux peuvent être des sources d’introduction d’organismes nuisibles

BURUNDI

17.

TITLE [1] Title Substantive DESIGN AND OPERATION OFPOST-ENTRY QUARANTINE STATIONS FOR CONSIGNMENTS OF PLANTS

It is important to specify in the title that the standard is outlining requirements specifically for consignments of plants as this is the scope of this standard.

CANADA

18.

TITLE [1] De fond CONCEPTION ET FONCTIONNEMENT DES STATIONS DE QUARANTAINE POST-ENTRÉE POUR LES VÉGÉTAUX ET PRODUITS VÉGÉTAUX

Les produits végétaux peuvent être des sources d’introduction d’organismes nuisibles

R.D. CONGO, TOGO

19.

TITRE [1]

Ligne 2 De fond

CONCEPTION ET FONCTIONNEMENT DES STATIONS DE QUARANTAINE POST-ENTRÉE POUR LES VÉGÉTAUX ET PRODUITS VEGETAUX

Consistance : les produits végétaux peuvent également être des sources d’introduction d’organismes nuisibles, donc il faut les y ajouter

Côte d’Ivoire

20.

TITLE [1] Sentence 1 Substantive GUIDELINES FOR THE DESIGN AND OPERATION OFPOST-ENTRY QUARANTINE FACILITIES FOR PLANTS

For clarity and provide guidelines to the reader.

Kenya

21. TÍTULO [1] Oración 1 Sustancial DISEÑO Y OPERACIÓN DEESTACIONES DE CUARENTENARIAS

Para ser constante con la definición de estación cuarentenaria incluida en la NIMF No. 5 y retomar lo

MEXICO

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POSENTRADA PARA MANTENER PLANTAS EN CUARENTENA POSENTRADA

referente a la cuarentena posentrada

22.

TITLE [1] Line 1 sub DESIGN SPECIFICATION AND OPERATION OF POST – ENTRY QUARANTINE STATION FOR PLANTS.

The document did not give a specific design but rather specify what is expected in a PEQ station

NIGERIA

23.

TITLE [1] Title Substantive 3. DISEÑO Y OPERACIÓN DEESTACIONES DE CUARENTENA POSENTRADA PARA PLANTAS

DESIGN AND OPERATION OFPOST-ENTRY QUARANTINE STATIONS FOR PLANTS

1. More specific. ORISAEL SALVADORPANAMA

24.

TITLE [1] Paragraph 1 Substantive DESIGN AND OPERATION OFPOST-ENTRY QUARANTINE STATIONS FOR PLANTS AND PLANT PRODUCTS

Pest can also introduced by plant products e.g. seeds (reference is made to ISPM No. 5 “phytosanitary terms” of plants & plant products.

Seychelles

25.

TITLE [1] End of title substantive Design and operation of Post-Entry Quarantine Stations for Plants for Planting

All plants in post-entry are intended for planting. Global change where it applies.

USA

26. Contents [2]

27.

ÍNDICE [2] Sangría 8 Sustancial 2.5 Diagnóstico y eliminación de infestaciones de plagas cuarentenarias reglamentadas o vectores

México considera mejor referirnos a las “plagas reglamentadas”, considerando la definición fitosanitaria que aparece en la NIMF No. 5 que incluye tanto plagas cuarentenarias como plagas no cuarentenarias reglamentadas

México

28. Introduction [3]

29. SCOPE [4]

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CHAMP D'APPLICATION

[5] 1. 2ème ligne

2. 2ème ligne à la fin

De fond La présente norme donne des directives sur la conception et le fonctionnement des stations de quarantaine post-entrée (QPE) dans lesquelles sont placés les envois de végétaux et produits végétaux pouvant être infestés/infectés par des organismes nuisibles de quarantaine.

1. Consistatance

2. Les organismes nuisibles peuvent être aussi des pathogènes

BURUNDI

31.

SCOPE [5] Sentence 1 Substantive This standard describes general guidelines for the design and operation of post-entry quarantine (PEQ) stations for holding in quarantine consignments of plants that may be imported consignments of plants in confinement in order to determine whether or not they are infested with quarantine pests.

New wording to clarify that those consignments of plants are being imported into the country and need to be confined to determine the presence of quarantine pests.Note that the term “confinement” is being used in the text as the term “containment” cannot be used in this context according to its current definition in ISPM No. 5 Glossary of phytosanitary terms but please refer to the General Comments section above for Canada’s comments on this matter.

CANADA

32.

SCOPE [5] Sentence 1 Editorial This standard describes general guidelines for the design and operation of post-entry quarantine (PEQ) stations forholding in quarantine, consignmentsof plants that may be infested withquarantine pests.

Improves readability Trinidad and Tobago

33. CHAMP D'APPLICATION

[5] De fond La présente norme donne des directives sur la conception et le fonctionnement des stations de quarantaine post-entrée (QPE) dans lesquelles sont placés les envois de végétaux et produits végétaux pouvant être infestés

Consistance R.D. CONGO, TOGO

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par des organismes nuisibles de quarantaine.

34. CHAMP D'APPLICATION

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Ligne 2 De fond

La présente norme donne des directives sur la conception et le fonctionnement des stations de quarantaine post-entrée (QPE) dans lesquelles sont placés les envois de végétaux et produits végétaux pouvant être infestés/ infecter par des organismes nuisibles de quarantaine.

Consistance : - les produits végétaux peuvent également être des sources d’introduction d’organismes nuisibles, donc il faut les y ajouter; - les organismes nuisibles peuvent être aussi des pathogènes, donc peuvent infecter

Côte d’Ivoire

35.

SCOPE [5] End of row 2

Substantive ....... may be infested with quarantine regulated pests.

This will include regulated non quarantine pest that can be found on plants for planting into the scope of this standard.

Malaysia

36.

ÁMBITO [5] Oración 1 Sustancial Esta norma describe las directrices generales para el diseño y la operación de estaciones de cuarentena posentrada (CPE) cuarentenarias (EC) con el fin de mantener en cuarentena posentrada los envíos de plantas que podrán estar infestadas con plagas cuarentenarias reglamentadas.

Para ser constante con la definición de estación cuarentenaria incluida en la NIMF No. 5 y retomar lo de cuarentena posentrada

Conociendo el alcance de la norma y como éste contempla sólo a las “plagas cuarentenarias”, la cuestión aquí es ¿qué pasa con las plagas no cuarentenarias reglamentadas??. México considera mejor referirnos a las “plagas reglamentadas”, considerando la definición fitosanitaria que aparece en la NIMF No. 5 que incluye tanto plagas cuarentenarias como plagas no cuarentenarias reglamentadas

MEXICO

37. ÁMBITO [5] Oración 1 sustancial Esta norma describe las directrices generales para el

Manejo: Es mas precisa la definición.

Perú

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diseño y la operación manejo de estaciones de cuarentena posentrada (CPE) con el fin de mantener en cuarentena los envíos de plantas para plantar que podrán podrían estar infestadas con plagas cuarentenarias.

“Plantas para plantar” Para ser concordante con el Glosario y las NIMF 21“Podrían” es una posibilidad

38.

SCOPE [5] Second line or sentence

Substantive stations for holding in quarantine consignments of plants and plant products that may be infested/infected with quarantine pests

Taking into consideration of pathogen that can cause plant diseases. To be consistent with the text of the draft

Seychelles

39.

SCOPE [5] 1st paragraph

Add a new sentence at the end of the paragraph

substantive

substantive

This standard describes general guidelines for the design and operation of post-entry quarantine (PEQ) stations for holding in quarantine consignments of plants for planting that may be infested with quarantine pests.

This standard does not apply to plant products or plants intended for other than propagation.

For consistency with this and other standards.Global change where it applies.

For further clarification of the scope.

USA

USA

40.

SCOPE [6] Sentence 1 Editorial The guidelines described may also be relevant …

… (e.g. quarantine pests, beneficial organisms, biological control agents) but for which other specific requirements may also be needed.

Improved clarity Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

41.

SCOPE [6] Sentence 1 Substantive ....in quarantine (e.g. quarantine pests, beneficial organisms, biological control agents, parts of plants for research) but other specific requiremenst may also be needed.

The further examples are added to support PEQ use for research

South Africa

42. CHAMP [6] De fond L La présente norme donne des Les organismes nuisibles peuvent R.D.

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D'APPLICATION directives sur la conception et le fonctionnement des stations de quarantaine post-entrée (QPE) dans lesquelles sont placés les envois de végétaux pouvant être infestés /infecter par des organismes nuisibles de quarantaine.

être aussi des pathogènes CONGO, ,TOGO

43. ÁMBITO [6] párrafo Sustancial Las directrices descritas en esta norma podrán ser pertinentes para mantener otros organismos en cuarentena (por ejemplo, plagas cuarentenarias, organismos benéficos, agentes de control biológico) pero también podrán necesitarse otros requisitos específicos.

No guarda relación con el titulo de la norma

Perú

44.REFERENCES [7] Editorial Add ISPM 3 IASPC-

GABON

45.

REFERENCES [7] Add to the reference ISPM No. 3. Guidelines for the export, shipment, import and release of biological control agents and other beneficial organisms

Text related to this ISPM are quoted in the standard

Kenya

46.REFERENCES [7] Editorial Include ISPM 3 in the

referencesReferences were made to biocontrol so, there is need to include ISPM 3

NIGERIA

47. REFERENCES [7] Editorial Add ISPM 3 Swaziland

48. DEFINITIONS [8]

49.

DEFINITIONS [9] 1st Sentence Editorial Definitions of phytosanitary terms used in this the present standard can be found in ISPM No. 5 (Glossary of phytosanitary terms).

Better English Australia

50. OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[10] Sentence 1 Editorial Pest risk analysis (PRA) is required to determine the quarantine requirements for a

To cover other regulated products IASPC-GABON

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specified consignment of plants and regulated articles

51.

OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[10] Sentence 1 Substantive Pest risk analysis (PRA) is required to determine the quarantine requirements for a specified consignment of plants and regulated articles.

To cover other regulated products Swaziland

52.

OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[11] Sentence 1 1. Substantive

2. Substantive

Pest risk analysis (PRA) is required should be carried out to determine the quarantine requirements for a specified consignment of plants commodities.

1. To avoid the present tense and ambiguity of ‘...is required..’ .

2. A PRA should not be carried out for a consignment but for the commodity as such

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

53.

RÉSUMÉ DE RÉFÉRENCE

[11] De fond L L'analyse du risque phytosanitaire (ARP) sert à déterminer les conditions de confinement requises pour un envoi spécifique de végétaux. Pour certains envois, l'organisation nationale de protection des végétaux et produits végétaux (ONPV) peut décider que la quarantaine post-entrée est nécessaire à la gestion des risques phytosanitaires mis en évidence lors de l'ARP.

consistance R.D. CONGO, TOGO

54.

OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[11] 1st sentence

Technical

Pest risk analysis (PRA) is required to determine the quarantine requirements phytosanitary measures for a specified consignment of plants.

To match the definition of PRA

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

55.

OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[11] Sentence 1 substative Pest risk analysis (PRA) is required to determine the quarantine requirements for a specified consignment of plants and other regulated articles.

Other regulated article such as soil, bio-control agents etc. requiring phytosanitary measures may be handled at the PEQ

NIGERIA

56. OUTLINE OF [11] Sentence 1 Substantive 4. Se requiere el análisis de 1. Use of the appropriate terms as ORISA

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REQUIREMENTS riesgo de plagas (ARP) para determinar establecer los requisitos cuarentenarios fitosanitarios de importación de un envío específico de plantas.

Pest risk analysis (PRA) is required to determine the quarantine phytosanitary import requirements for a specified consignment of plants.

defined in ISPM N° 5 EL SALVADORPANAMA

57.

OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[11] 1st sentence Substantive Pest risk analysis (PRA) is requiredto determine the quarantinephytosanitary import requirementsfor a specified consignment ofplants.

Use of appropriate defined term Trinidad and Tobago

58.

PERFIL DE LOS REQUISITOS

[11] Sustancial Se requiere el análisis de riesgo de plagas (ARP) para determinar los requisitos cuarentenarios fitosanitarios de un envío específico de plantas. Para algunos envíos de plantas, la Organización Nacional de Protección Fitosanitaria (ONPF) podrá decidir que se requiere la cuarentena posentrada con el fin de manejar los riesgos de plagas identificados por el ARP.

Se refiere a los requisitos fitosanitarios y no a requisitos cuarentenarios

Ecuador

59. OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[11] Substantive Pest risk analysis (PRA) is required to determine the quarantine requirements for a specified consignment of plants and plant products. For certain consignments of plants and plant products, the National Plant Protection Organization (NPPO) may decide that post-entry quarantine is required to manage

Consistency Seychelles

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pest risks identified by PRA.

60.

RÉSUMÉ DE RÉFÉRENCE

[11] . 2ème ligne De fond L'analyse du risque phytosanitaire (ARP) sert à déterminer les conditions de confinement requises pour un envoi spécifique de végétaux. Pour certains envois, l'organisation nationale de protection des végétaux et produits végétaux (ONPV) peut décider que la quarantaine post-entrée est nécessaire à la gestion des risques phytosanitaires mis en évidence lors de l'ARP.

consistance BURUNDI

61.

OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[11] After Sentence 2

Substantive New sentence after Sentence 2:Confinement of a consignment of plants in a PEQ station may be an appropriate phytosanitary measure in cases where a quarantine pest is difficult to detect, where it takes time for sign or symptom expression, or where testing or treatment is required.

A new sentence is being added to clarify when confinement of a consignment of plants could be desirable. See comments for Para. 5 above regarding the term “confinement”.

CANADA

62.

RÉSUMÉ DE RÉFÉRENCE

[11]

Ligne 2

De fond L'analyse du risque phytosanitaire (ARP) sert à déterminer les conditions de confinement requises pour un envoi spécifique de végétaux et produits végétaux. Pour certains envois, l'organisation nationale de protection des végétaux (ONPV) peut décider que la quarantaine post-entrée est nécessaire à la gestion des risques phytosanitaires mis en évidence lors de l'ARP.

Consistance : les produits végétaux peuvent également être des sources d’introduction d’organismes nuisibles

Côte d’Ivoire

63. PERFIL DE LOS REQUISITOS

[11] Oración 1 y 2

Sustancial Se requiere el análisis de riesgo de plagas (ARP) para determinar los requisitos fitosanitarios cuarentenarios de

El ARP determina requisitos fitosanitarios.

Perú

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un envío específico de plantas. Para algunos envíos de plantas, la Organización Nacional de Protección Fitosanitaria (ONPF) del país importador podrá decidir que se requiere la cuarentena posentrada con el fin de manejar los riesgos de plagas identificados por el ARP.

Precisa la oración.

64.

OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[11] 2nd row substantive …plants for planting. For certain consignments of plants for planting, the National Plant Protection Organization (NPPO) may decide…

Global change USA

65.

OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[12] Sentence 1 1. Editorial2. Substantive

For a PEQ station to function successfully, the its design and management of the station should ensure that any quarantine pests that may be associated with consignments of plants are suitably confined and do not enter and/or establish in the area.

1. Repetition, improved English

2. There is only a possibility that a consignment may be infested.

Belarus EPPOIsrael

66.

OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[12] Sentence 1 Substantive For a PEQ station to function successfully, the design and management of the station should ensure that any quarantine pests associated with consignments of plants are suitably confined and do not enter are not released and/or establish in the area.

Replace “do not enter” by “are not released” as it is more appropriate for plant pests to be released in an area.

CANADA

67.

OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[12] 1st sentence Technical

For a PEQ station to function successfully, the design and management of the station should ensure that any quarantine pests associated with consignments of plants are suitably confined and do not enter and/or ,establish in the area.

The objective of the PEQ is that pests do not enter According to definitions of entry and establishment in the Glossary.

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

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68.

OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[12] Sentence 1 1. Editorial2. Substantive3. Editorial

For a PEQ station to function successfully, the its design and management of the station should ensure that any quarantine pests that may be associated with consignments of plants are suitably confined and do not enter and/or establish in the area.

1. Repetition, improved English

2. There is only a possibility that a consignment may be infested.

3. Use of the word 'enter' seems inappropriate as quarantine pests may enter a PEQ, which is in an area.

EC

69.

OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[12] Sentence 1 and 2

substantive For a PEQ facility to function successfully, the design and management of the facility should ensure that any quarantine pests associated with consignments of plants are suitably identified and confined and do not enter and/or establish in the area. The PEQ station should also ensure that consignments of plants and regulated articles are held in a manner that best facilitates the observation or further inspection, testing and/or treatment of the plants and consequent possible release

Kenya

70. PERFIL DE LOS REQUISITOS

[12] Oración 1 Sustancial/Editorial Para el funcionamiento exitoso de una estación de CPE cuarentenaria, el su diseño y manejo de la estación debería de asegurar que cualquier plaga cuarentenaria reglamentada asociada con los envíos de plantas esté adecuadamente confinada y no entre al área y/o se establezca en ella. La estación de CPE cuarentenaria también debería asegurar que los envíos de plantas se mantengan de tal forma que faciliten una mejor observación o inspección, pruebas y/o tratamiento adicional

Redacción más clara

México considera mejor referirnos a las “plagas reglamentadas” considerando la definición fitosanitaria que aparece en la NIMF No. 5

MEXICO

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de plantas.

71. OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[12] Row 2 Substantive ....... quarantine regulated pests associated .......

To be consistent with the scope of this standard

Malaysia

72.

OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[12] Sentence 2 Substantive .....best facilitates the observation and/or research or further inspection, testing and/or treatment of the plants.

Research is added to align the uses of PEQ with the glossary definition of quarantine

South Africa

73.

OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[12] 2nd row

3rd row

New paragraph

Substantive

Substantive

substantive

…quarantine pests associated with consignments of plants for planting are suitably confined and do not enter and/or…

…establish in the area. The PEQ station should also ensure that consignments of plants for planting are held in a manner…

PEQ stations may consist of a field site, screen house, glasshouse and/or laboratory, among others. The type of PEQ station to be used should be determined by the type of imported plants and the quarantine pests that may be associated with them.

Global change

Global change

In several sections of this document it can be inferred that a PEQ station is a physical structure and that is not always the case. In the United States, we have a mix of field and physical structures for PEQ, depending upon the individual circumstances of each importation. While the table and definition are clear, other statements throughout the document would be clarified with this additional statement.

USA

USA

USA

74.

PERFIL DE LOS REQUISITOS

[13] Las estaciones de CPE deberían estar ubicadas en un lugar apropiado y cumplir con los requisitos físicos y operativos basándose tanto en la biología de las plantas como la biología de las plagas cuarentenarias que podrán estar potencialmente asociadas con las plantas. También deberían considerarse los efectos de dichas plagas.

Ecuador

75. OUTLINE OF [13] Editorial PEQ stations should be Improve readability Grenada

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REQUIREMENTS appropriately located and comply with physical and operacional requirements based on the biology of both plants and quarantine pests that may potentially be associated with the plants.

76.

PERFIL DE LOS REQUISITOS

[13] Oración 1 Sustancial/Editorial Las estaciones de CPE cuarentenarias deberían estar ubicadas en un lugar apropiado y cumplir con los requisitos físicos y operativos basándose tanto en la biología de las plantas como en la biología de las plagas cuarentenarias reglamentadas que podrán estar potencialmente asociadas con las plantas.

Redacción más clara

México considera mejor referirnos a las “plagas reglamentadas” considerando la definición fitosanitaria que aparece en la NIMF No. 5

MEXICO

77.

OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[13] Sentence 1 Editorial 5. Las estaciones de CPE deberían estar ubicadas en un lugar apropiado y cumplir con los requisitos físicos y operativos basándose tanto en la biología de las plantas como la biología de las plagas cuarentenarias que podrán estar potencialmente asociadas con las plantas.

PEQ stations should be appropriately located and comply with physical and operational requirements based on both the biology of the plants and the biology of the quarantine pests that may potentially be associated with the plants.

1. Unnecessary ORISAEL SALVADORPANAMA

78. OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[13] Row 2 Substantive ....... quarantine regulated pests that .......

To be consistent with the scope of this standard

Malaysia

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79.

OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[13] Paragraph Editorial PEQ stations should be appropriatelylocated and comply with physicaland operational requirements basedon the biology of both the biology ofthe plants and the biology of thequarantine pests that may potentiallybe associated with the plants.

The impacts of such pests shouldalso be considered.

Improve readability

Grammar

Trinidad and Tobago

80.

OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[14] Sentence 1 Substantive 6. Los requisitos operativos para cumplir con las condiciones de CPE cuarentenarias especificadas incluyen las políticas y procedimientos apropiados relacionados con los requisitos del personal, los procedimientos técnicos y operativos y la documentación.

Operational requirements to meet specified PEQ quarantine conditions include appropriate policies and procedures relating to staff requirements, technical and operational procedures, and documentation.

1. Use specific term to avoid confusion.

ORISAEL SALVADORPANAMA

81.

OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[14] Sentence 2 Editorial The NPPO or NPPO-approved body shouldaudit the should ensure that the PEQ station is audited on a regular basis.

Simpler wording, it is the NPPO’s responsibility to ensure the PEQ station is audited, either by the NPPO or by an approved body.

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

82. OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[14] Sentence 2 and 3

Editorial PEQ stations should have systems in place to detect and identify quarantine pests and to treat, remove or destroy infested plant material. The NPPO or NPPO-approved –

Add new wording in sentence 2 for better grammatical flow. Replace the word “approved” by “authorized” in sentence 3 to be consistent with wording used in the IPPC and other standards such as ISPM No. 20

CANADA

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authorized body should audit the PEQ station on a regular basis.

Guidelines for a phytosanitary import regulatory system.

83.

OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[14] 2nd sentence Technical PEQ stations should have systems to detect and identify quarantine pests and treat, remove or destroy infested plant material and other risky materials.

There are other materials to be treated, removed or destroyed, as substrates, etc

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

84.

PERFIL DE LOS REQUISITOS

[14] Editorial Los requisitos operativos para cumplir con las condiciones cuarentenarias especificadas incluyen las políticas y procedimientos apropiados relacionados con los requisitos del personal, los procedimientos técnicos y operativos y la documentación. Las estaciones de CPE deberían contar con sistemas para detectar e identificar plagas cuarentenarias y tratar, eliminar o destruir material vegetal infestado. La ONPF o el organismo aprobado por la ONPF debería auditar la estación de CPE regularmente.

Aclara la redacción Ecuador

85.

OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[14] Sentence 3 Substantial The NPPO or NPPO-approved body should ensure that PEQ is audited the PEQ station on a regular basis.

For clarity Kenya

86. OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[14] Row 3 Substantive ....... quarantine regulated pests and treat, .......

To be consistent with the scope of this standard

Malaysia

87. PERFIL DE LOS REQUISITOS

[14] Los requisitos operativos para cumplir con las condiciones cuarentenarias especificadas incluyen las políticas y procedimientos apropiados relacionados con los requisitos del personal, los procedimientos

MEXICO

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técnicos y operativos y la documentación. Las estaciones de CPE cuarentenarias deberían contar con sistemas para detectar e identificar plagas cuarentenarias reglamentadas y tratar, eliminar o destruir material vegetal infestado. La ONPF o el organismo aprobado por la ONPF debería auditar la estación de CPE regularmente

88.

RÉSUMÉ DE RÉFÉRENCE

[15] 1. 1ère ligne

2. 2ème ligne

De fond Un envoi de végétaux et produits végétaux peut être libéré à l'issue de la quarantaine post-entrée s'il est déclaré exempt d'organismes de quarantaine et qu'il satisfait à toutes les mesures réglementaires phytosanitaire du pays importateur.

Consistance

Clarité

BURUNDI

BURUNDI

89.

OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[15] Sentence 1 Substantive The plants may be released from quarantine at the conclusion of the PEQ period if they are found to be free of quarantine pests and meet all other regulatory requirements of the importing country.

No need to mention any other regulatory requirements in the outline of requirements

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

90.

PERFIL DE LOS REQUISITOS

[15] Oración 1 Sustancial/Editorial Las plantas podrán liberarse de la cuarentena al concluir el período de CPE cuarentena, si se encuentran libres de plagas cuarentenarias reglamentadas y cumplen todos los otros requisitos reglamentarios del país importador

Redacción más clara

Para estar de acuerdo con la definición de plaga reglamentada incluida en la NIMF no. 5 la cual incluye tanto plagas cuarentenarias como plagas no cuarentenarias reglamentadas

MEXICO

91. OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[15] Sentence1 Substantive The plants may be released fromquarantine at the conclusion of thePEQ period if they are found to

Use of a defined term Trinidad and Tobago

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befree of quarantine pests and meet allother regulatory phytosanitaryimport requirements of the importingcountry.

92.

RÉSUMÉ DE RÉFÉRENCE

[15] De fond Un envoi de végétaux et produits végétaux peut être libéré à l'issue de la quarantaine post-entrée s'il est déclaré exempt d'organismes de quarantaine et qu'il satisfait à toutes les réglementations phytosanitaire du pays importateur.

Consistance R.D. CONGO, TOGO

93.

OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS [15]

Entire paraEditorial

Technical

The plants may be released from quarantine at the finalization conclusion of the PEQ period if they are found to be free of quarantine pests and meet all other regulatory requirements of the importing country.

To improve language

Other requirements are not related to the PEQ station

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

94.

RÉSUMÉ DE RÉFÉRENCE

[15]Ligne 1

Ligne 2

De fond Un envoi de végétaux et produits végétaux peut être libéré à l'issue de la quarantaine post-entrée s'il est déclaré exempt d'organismes de quarantaine et qu'il satisfait à toutes les réglementations phytosanitaire du pays importateur

Consistance : les produits végétaux peuvent également être des sources d’introduction d’organismes nuisibles Ajouter l’adjectif phytosanitaire pour plus de clarté

Côte d’Ivoire

95. OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[15] Sentence 1Para 2

substantive The plants or regulated article may be released from quarantine at the conclusion of the PEQ period if they are found to be free of quarantine pests and meet all other regulatory requirements of the importing country.The NPPO should set appropriate and reasonable time

Clarity Kenya

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frame for which the material should be kept in the PEQ and also the quantity that should be considered for entry into PEQ facility.

96. OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[15] Row 2 Substantive ....... quarantine regulated pests and meet, .......

To be consistent with the scope of this standard

Malaysia

97.

OUTLINE OF REQUIREMENTS

[15] Substantive The plants and plant products may be released from quarantine at the conclusion of the PEQ period if they are found to be free of quarantine pests and meet all other regulatory phytosanitary requirements of the importing country.

Consistency and clarity Seychelles

98. BACKGROUND [16]

99.

CONTEXTE [17] Ligne 1 De fond Les envois de végétaux et produits végétaux importés peuvent introduire des organismes de quarantaine. Les organisations nationales de protection des végétaux (ONPV) devraient alors appliquer des mesures fondées sur la politique de gestion des risques prescrite dans la NIMP n° 1: Principes de quarantaine végétale liés au commerce international.

Consistance BURUNDI

100.

CONTEXTE [17] De fond Les envois de végétaux et produits végétaux importés peuvent introduire des organismes de quarantaine. Les organisations nationales de protection des végétaux (ONPV) devraient alors appliquer des mesures fondées sur la politique de gestion des risques prescrite dans la NIMP n° 1: Principes de quarantaine végétale liés au commerce international.

Consistance R.D. CONGO, TOGO

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101.

CONTEXTE [17] Ligne 1 De fond Les envois de végétaux et produits végétaux importés peuvent introduire des organismes de quarantaine. Les organisations nationales de protection des végétaux (ONPV) devraient alors appliquer des mesures fondées sur la politique de gestion des risques prescrite dans la NIMP n° 1: Principes de quarantaine végétale liés au commerce international.

Consistance : les végétaux peuvent également être des sources d’introduction d’organismes nuisibles

Côte d’Ivoire

102. BACKGROUND [17] Row 1 Substantive ....... introduce quarantine regulated pests.

To be consistent with the scope of this standard

Malaysia

103.

ANTECEDENTES [17] Oración 1

Oración 3

Sustancial/Editorial

Editorial

Los envíos de plantas importados tienen el potencial de introducir plagas c cuarentenarias reglamentadas.

Para muchos productos que se comercian internacionalmente, las ONPF de los países importadores identifican las medidas de manejo mitigación del riesgo que mitigan el riesgo de plagas sin la necesidad de aplicar la cuarentena después de la entrada

Para estar de acuerdo con la definición de plaga reglamentada incluida en la NIMF no. 5 la cual incluye tanto las plagas cuarentenarias como las plagas no cuarentenarias reglamentadas objeto de regulación.

Redacción más clara

MEXICO

104.

BACKGROUND [17] First line Substantive Imported consignments of plants and plant products have the potential to introduce quarantine pests. When considering

Consistency Seychelles

105.

BACKGROUND [17] 1st row substantive Imported consignments of plants for planting have the potential to introduce quarantine pests. When considering …

Global change USA

106. BACKGROUND [17] Sentence 2 line 6

Editorial In order to assess the pest risks and identify appropriate measures for particular pathways, pest risk analyses (PRAs) are

Grenada

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carried out.107. BACKGROUND [17] sentence 3 Editorial pest risk analysis (PRA) already given earlier in document Australia

108.

BACKGROUND [17] Sentence 3 1 and 2. Substantive In order to assess the pest risks and identify appropriate measures for particular pathways, pest risk analysis (PRA) is should be carried out according to ISPMs 2 and 11.

1. Change from the present tense (see also paragraph 11). 2. Procedure for PRA added.

Belarus EPPOIsrael

109.

BACKGROUND [17] Sentence 3 Substantive In order to assess the pest risks and identify appropriate measures for particular pathways, pest risk analysis (PRA) is should be carried out.

Change from the present tense (see also paragraph 11).

EC

110.

BACKGROUND [17] Sentence 3 Editorial In order to assess the pest risks andidentify appropriate measures forparticular pathways, pest risk analysis analyses (PRAs) is arecarried out.

Grammar Trinidad and Tobago

111. BACKGROUND [17] Sentence 4 Technical For many commodities that are traded internationally, importing NPPOs identify risk management measures that mitigate pest risk without the need to detain a consignment in apply quarantine after entry.

To bring the text into line with the definition of “detention”

Australia

112. BACKGROUND [17] Sentence 4 Editorial 7. Para muchos productos que se comercian internacionalmente, las ONPF de los países importadores identifican las medidas de manejo del riesgo que mitigan el riesgo de plaga sin la necesidad de aplicar la cuarentena después de la entrada

For many commodities that are traded internationally, importing NPPOs identify risk management measures that mitigate pest risk without the need to apply

1. Redundant in Spanish. ORISAEL SALVADORPANAMA

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quarantine after entry.

113.

BACKGROUND [17] sentence 5 Technical For some commodities, NPPOs may decide that a consignment must undergo a period of detention in quarantine period is as part of the import requirements or is necessary for certain that a consignments must undergo a period of detention in quarantine to allow for the identification of any quarantine/regulated pests , after entry into the country because of uncertainty about the presence of quarantine/regulated pests in that the consignment.

To clarify the intent of the sentence. Australia

114.

BACKGROUND [17] Sentence 5 Substantive However , Ffor some commodities contracting parties NPPOs may decide that a quarantine period is part of the import requirements. Alternatively, or an NPPO may decide that a quarantine period is necessary for certain consignments a specific consignment after ...

Changed to reflect the fact that contracting parties make decisions on import requirements and an NPPO may make a decision about an individual consignment.

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

115. BACKGROUND [17] Entire para

Editorial

Imported consignments of plants have the potential to introduce quarantine pests. When considering phytosanitary measures for such consignments, National Plant Protection Organizations (NPPOs) should apply measures based on the principle of managed risk (ISPM No. 1: Phytosanitary principles for the protection of plants and the application of phytosanitary measures in international trade).

Unnecessary

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

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Editorial

Editorial

Editorial

Technical

In order to assess the pest risks and identify appropriate phytosanitary measures for particular pathways, pest risk analysis (PRA) is carried out. For many commodities consignments of plants that are traded internationally, importing NPPOs identify risk management measures that mitigate pest risk without the need to apply quarantine after entry. For some consignments of plants commodities, NPPOs may decide that a quarantine period is part of the phytosanitary import requirements or is necessary for certain consignments after entry into the country because of the impossibility to verify uncertainty about the presence of quarantine pests in that consignment at entry. This allows for testing for the presence of pests, time for the expression of signs or symptoms, and appropriate treatment if necessary.

Defined term

“Consignment of plants” is used to match with the scope

Defined term

Uncertainty is not the right term to be used here, it is confusing with “uncertainties” included in the PRA and could be used to over regulate consignments of plants imposing with no clear technical justification.

116. ANTECEDENTES [17] Editorial L Los envíos de plantas importados tienen el potencial de introducir plagas cuarentenarias. Al considerar las medidas fitosanitarias para tales envíos, las Organizaciones Nacionales de Protección Fitosanitaria (ONPFs) deberían aplicar las medidas basadas en el principio de manejo del riesgo (NIMF n.º 1: Principios fitosanitarios para la protección de las plantas y la aplicación de medidas fitosanitarias en el comercio

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internacional). Se realiza el análisis de riesgo de plagas (ARP) con el fin de evaluar los riesgos de plagas e identificar las medidas apropiadas para vías particulares. Para muchos productos que se comercian internacionalmente, las ONPF de los países importadores identifican las medidas de manejo del riesgo que mitigan el riesgo de plaga sin la necesidad de aplicar la cuarentena después de la entrada. Para algunos productos, las ONPFs podrán decidir que un período de cuarentena es parte de los requisitos de importación o es necesario para algunos envíos después de la entrada al país debido a la incertidumbre acerca de la presencia de plagas en ese envío. Esto permite realizar pruebas para detectar la presencia de plagas, tiempo para la expresión de signos o síntomas y la aplicación del tratamiento apropiado, de ser necesario.

117. ANTECEDENTES [17] Oración 2

Oración 3

Sustancial Para muchaos plantas para plantar productos que se comercian internacionalmente, las ONPF de los países importadores identifican las medidas de manejo del riesgo que mitigan el riesgo de plaga sin la necesidad de aplicar la cuarentena después de la entrada. Para algunaos plantas para plantar productos, las ONPFs podrán decidir que un período de cuarentena es parte de los

Para ser concordante con el titulo; son las plantas para plantar las que van a cuarentena posentrada y no los productos.

Perú

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requisitos de importación o es necesario para algunos envíos después de la entrada al país debido a la incertidumbre acerca de la presencia de plagas en ese envío.

118.

BACKGROUND [18] 1st sentence Technical The purpose of a PEQ station is to contain both the plants and any quarantine pest potentially associated with them so that neither can escape move from the station before the required inspection, testing, treatment and verification activities have been completed, and the consignment is released or destroyed, as appropriate.

Editorial insert “a”; use of “escape” implies some self motivation whereas some pests will/may just blow away.

Australia

119.

BACKGROUND [18] Sentence 1 1and 2 Editorial3 Substantive4. Editorial5. Substantive

The purpose of the PEQ station is to contain confine both the plants and any quarantine pest potentially associated with them so that they neither can not escape or be removed from the station. before When the required inspection, testing, treatment and verification activities have been completed, and the consignment is can be released, or destroyed or kept as reference material, as appropriate.

1. Word missing2. Consistency with definition of ‘quarantine’3. Difficult to envisage the plants escaping from the station4. Simplification of the sentence 5. Addition of another option

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

120. BACKGROUND [18] Row 1 Substantive ....... quarantine regulated pests potentially .......

To be consistent with the scope of this standard

Malaysia

121. ANTECEDENTES [18] Oración 1 Sustancial/Editorial La finalidad de la estación CPE de cuarentenaria es contener tanto las plantas como cualquier plaga cuarentenaria reglamentada potencialmente asociada con ellas, de tal forma que ninguna de ellas pueda escapar de la estación antes de que se hayan

Redacción más clara

México considera mejor referirnos a las “plagas reglamentadas” considerando la definición fitosanitaria que aparece en la NIMF No. 5

MEXICO

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completado las actividades de inspección, prueba, tratamiento y verificación necesarios, y el envío se libere o destruya, según sea apropiado.

122.

BACKGROUND [18] Sentence 1 Substantive 8. La finalidad de la estación de CPE es contener el confinamiento, tanto de las plantas como de cualquier plaga cuarentenaria potencialmente asociada con ellas, de tal forma que ninguna de ellas pueda escapar de la estación antes de que se hayan completado las actividades de inspección, prueba, tratamiento y verificación necesarios, y el envío se libere o destruya, según sea apropiado.

The purpose of PEQ station is to contain confine both the plants and any quarantine pest potentially associated with them so that neither can escape from the station before the required inspection, testing, treatment and verification activities have been completed, and the consignment is released or destroyed, as appropriate.

1. More accurate term in accordance with definition of quarantine. “Contener” is used for another purpose as defined in ISMP No. 5

ORISAEL SALVADORPANAMA

123. BACKGROUND [18] Sentence 1 Substantive The purpose of PEQ station is to containconfine both the plants and anyquarantine pest potentially associated with them so that neither can escape from the station before the required inspection, testing, treatment and verification activities have been completed, and the

Use of appropriate term Trinidad and Tobago

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consignment is released or destroyed, as appropriate.

124.

REQUIREMENTS [19] Whole Section 2

Editorial Insert new section

2. Determining the need for PEQ

Follow with current para 21 and 23

Apart from the numbering (ie general requirements is #2 and Specific requirements is also #2, there seems to be a disconnect between the general and specific sections.This section identifies the need the PRA to determine pest risk, the level of containment required and the PEQ requirements. With adding this as a separate section it makes clear that PRA is the basis for action. Paragraphs 21 and 23 should be moved to before the current requirements section.Headings would then be:1) Background2) Determining the need for PEQ3) Requirements3.1) General requirements3.2) Specific Requirements for a PEQ station2.1) PEQ Stations3.2.1) Location3.2.2) Physical Requirementsetc

DPAustralia

125. REQUIREMENTS [19] Relocated para 21

Substantive PRA is required to determine the quarantine requirements for a specified consignment of plants as described in ISPM No. 2 (Framework for pest risk analysis) and ISPM No. 11 (Pest risk analysis for quarantine pests including analysis of environmental risks and living modified organisms). The PRA determines the pest risk associated with the plants and identifies measures, which may include PEQ, to manage the risk. The physical and operational

Move to first para under a new heading in a new section 2 “Determining the need for PEQ”

Australia

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characteristics of a PEQ station determine the level of confinement provided by the station.

126.

REQUIREMENTS [19] Relocated para 23

Substantive Once the quarantine requirements have been determined by the NPPO in the importing country, the NPPO then needs to determine whether these requirements can be provided by any of the following:

- an existing PEQ station- a modification of structural or operating conditions of an existing station- quarantine in a different area- a new station designed and constructed to meet the requirements.

Move to second para under a new heading in a new section 2 “Determining the need for PEQ” as second para in this section.

Australia

127.

REQUIREMENTS [19] Whole section

Substantive 2. Determining the need for PEQ This section identifies the need the PRA to determine pest risk, the level of containment required and the PEQ requirements. Paragraphs 21 and 23 should be moved to before the current requirements section so the headings would be:1) Background2) Determining the need for PEQ3) Requirements3.1) General requirements3.2) Specific Requirements for a PEQ station2.1) PEQ Stations3.2.1) Location3.2.2) Physical Requirementsetc

New Zealand

128.

2. General Requirements for PEQ

[20] Title Substantive 2. 3.1 General Requirements for PEQ

Re-number to separate from actions determining the need for PEQ (ie PRA) and the next section on specific requirementsFollow with current para 22

Australia

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2. General Requirements for PEQ

[20] Title Editorial 2. 1. Mistake in numbering Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

130.

2. Conditions générales de la quarantaine post-entrée

[20] Rédactionel 2. 1. Conditions générales de la quarantaine post-entrée

Consistance BURUNDI

131.2. General Requirements for PEQ

[20] No Editorial Change 2 to 1 China

132.

2. Conditions générales de la quarantaine post-entrée

[20] 1 Conditions générales de la quarantaine post-entrée

Consistance R.D. CONGO, TOGO

133.

2. General Requirements for PEQ

[20] Title Technical/Editorial 2. 1. General Requirements for PEQ stations for plants

Renumber adequately.To make the title more precise and to be consistent with the title and scope of this text.

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

134. 2. General Requirements for PEQ

[20] Title Substantive 3.1 General requirements for PEQ

As above New Zealand

135.

2. Conditions générales de la quarantaine post-entrée

[20] Ligne 1 Rédactionnel 2. 1 Conditions générales de la quarantaine post-entrée

Consistance : le numéro doit commencer par 1

Côte d’Ivoire

136.2. General Requirements for PEQ

[20] Editorial 1. General Requirements Korea

137.

2. General Requirements for PEQ

[20] Subtitle Substantive 9. 2. Requisitos generales para las estaciones de CPE

2. General Requirements for PEQ Stations

1. Consistent with the use in the title and the rest of the text. Requirements are established for the stations, not for PEQ, which is a broader concept than what is addressed in this standard.

ORISAEL SALVADORPANAMA

138. 2. General Requirements for

[20] Editorial 2. 1. General Requirements for PEQ

To be in order Seychelles

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139.2. General Requirements for PEQ

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Correct numbering South Africa

140.2. General Requirements for PEQ

[20] Heading Substantive General Requirements for PEQStations

Clarity Trinidad and Tobago

141.

2. General Requirements for PEQ

[21] Sentence 1 1: Substantive

2: Substantive

3: Editorial

Pest risk analysis (PRA) is required should be carried out to determine the quarantine requirements for specified consignment of plants commodities (e.g. species, type, origin, intended use etc.), according to as described in ISPM No. 2….

1: To avoid the present tense and ambiguity of ‘...is required..’ .

2: A PRA should not be carried out for a consignment but for the commodity as such. Furthermore, it may be useful here to indicate some variables (species, type, origin, intended use) of the plant commodity that it is worthwhile to consider in the PRA

3: ‘as described in’ may erroneously indicate that ISPMs 2 & 11 give guidelines for quarantine requirements, whereas ‘according to’ is more neutral

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

142.

2. General Requirements for PEQ

[21] First line Substantive PRA is required to determine the quarantine requirements for a specified consignment of plants as described in ISPM No. 2 (Framework for pest risk analysis) ( Guidelines for pest risk analysis) )

To be consistent with the title of the ISPM’s developed and adopted

Seychelles

143.

2. General Requirements for PEQ

[21] 1st row substantive PRA is required to determine the quarantine requirements for a specified consignment of plants for planting as described…

Global change USA

144. 2. General Requirements for PEQ

[21] Sentence 2 Substantive The physical and operational characteristics of a PEQ station determine the level of confinement provided by the station and their ability to

Useful additional information. Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

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confine adequately various quarantine organisms.

145.

2. Conditions générales de la quarantaine post-entrée

[21] Ligne 2 De fond L'ARP sert à déterminer les conditions de quarantaine applicables à un envoi de produits végétaux, ainsi qu'indiqué dans la NIMP n°2 (Directives pour l'analyse du risque phytosanitaire (Cadre de L’analyse du risque phytosanitaire ) et la NIMP n° 11 (Analyse du risque phytosanitaire pour les organismes de quarantaine, incluant l'analyse des risques pour l'environnement et des organismes vivants modifiés).

Consistance avec le titre de la norme citée

BURUNDI

146.

2. Conditions générales de la quarantaine post-entrée

[21] De fond L'ARP sert à déterminer les conditions de quarantaine applicables à un envoi de produits végétaux, ainsi qu'indiqué dans la NIMP n°2 (Cadre de L’analyse du risque phytosanitaire) et la NIMP n° 11 (Analyse du risque phytosanitaire pour les organismes de quarantaine, incluant l'analyse des risques pour l'environnement et des organismes vivants modifiés).

Consistance avec le titre de la norme citée

R.D. CONGO, TOGO

147.2. General Requirements for PEQ

[21] New sentence 3

Substantive Move to first para under a new heading in a new section 2 “Determining the need for PEQ”.

Relates to the need for PEQ Australia

148.

2. General Requirements for PEQ

[21] New sentence 3

Substantive ...include PEQ, to manage the risk. Consideration should also be given to the potential presence of unexpected pests. The physical...

Pest Risk Analyses depend on published records of detections of pests associated with a particular species. Some pests may affect a species but have not been recorded in the literature or may occur as hitchikers.

Australia

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2. General Requirements for PEQ

[21] Entire para Technical/Editorial

Technical/Editorial

Technical/Editorial

PRA is required to determine the quarantine requirements phytosanitary measures for a specified consignment of plants as described in ISPM No. 2 (Framework for pest risk analysis) and ISPM No. 11 (Pest risk analysis for quarantine pests including analysis of environmental risks and living modified organisms). The PRA determines the pest risk associated with the plants and identifies phytosanitary measures, which may include PEQ, to manage the risk. The physical and operational characteristics of a PEQ station determine the level of confinement containment provided by the station.

To match the definition of PRA

Defined term

Defined term and normally used to characterize levels.

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

150. 2. Requisitos generales para la CPE

[21] Sustancial Se necesita un ARP para determinar los requisitos cuarentenarios fitosanitarios de un envío específico de plantas tal como se describe en la NIMF n.º 2 (Marco para el análisis de riesgo de plagas) y la NIMF n.º 11 (Análisis de riesgo de plagas para plagas cuarentenarias, incluido el análisis de riesgos ambientales y organismos vivos modificados). El ARP determina el riesgo de plaga asociado con las plantas e identifica las medidas, las cuales podrán incluir la CPE, con el fin de manejar el riesgo. Las características físicas y operativas de una estación de CPE determinan el nivel de confinamiento que proporciona

Se refiere a los requisitos fitosanitarios y no a requisitos cuarentenarios

Ecuador

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la estación.

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[21]Lignes 2, 3 et 4

De fond L'ARP sert à déterminer les conditions de quarantaine applicables à un envoi de produits végétaux, ainsi qu'indiqué dans la NIMP n°2 (Directives pour l'analyse du risque phytosanitaire Cadre de L’analyse du risque phytosanitaire ) et la NIMP n° 11 (Analyse du risque phytosanitaire pour les organismes de quarantaine, incluant l'analyse des risques pour l'environnement et des organismes vivants modifiés).

Consistance avec le titre de la norme citée

Côte d’Ivoire

152. 2. General Requirements for PEQ

[21] Substantive Move to under new 2. As above New Zealand

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2. General Requirements for PEQ

[22] First sentence

Substantive The specifications of PEQ stations for consignments of plants should reflect the biology of the plants, and the biology of the quarantine pests that may potentially be associated with the plants, and particularly their mode of dispersal and spread.

The standard is providing guidance on PEQ stations designed and operated in a way that prevents organisms moving in or out of the facility. This includes not only the ability of the target host or regulated pest to move itself but also a range of potential vectors including as relevant to the type of containment people, ants, flies, birds etc.

Australia

154.

2. Conditions générales de la quarantaine post-entrée

[22]

Ligne 1De fond

Les spécifications des stations de quarantaine post-entrée pour le confinement de végétaux et produits végétaux devraient tenir compte de la biologie des végétaux et de celle des organismes nuisibles qui peuvent leur être associés.

Consistance Côte d’Ivoire

155. 2. General Requirements for

[22] Sentence 1 Editorial 10. Las especificaciones de las estaciones de CPE para los

1. More appropriate term, clarifies wording.

ORISAEL

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envíos de plantas deberían reflejar considerar tanto la biología de las plantas como la biología de las plagas cuarentenarias que podrán estar potencialmente asociadas con las plantas.

The specifications of PEQ stations for consignments of plants should consider reflect both the biology of the plants and the biology of the quarantine pests that may potentially be associated with the plants

11. La cuarentena exitosa de los envíos de plantas requiere medidas para evitar el escape de cualquier plaga cuarentenaria asociada, y cuando corresponda, para evitar que los organismos que se encuentran en el área fuera de la estación de CPE entren a la estación y transfieran al exterior plagas cuarentenarias o sean sirvan como vectores de ellas.

Successful quarantine of consignments of plants requires measures to prevent any associated quarantine pests from escaping, and where appropriate, to prevent organisms in the area outside the PEQ station from entering the station and transferring or vectoring quarantine pests out of the PEQ

2. Improves wording; more specific for a better understanding.

SALVADORPANAMA

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station.

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[22] Sentence 1 Substantive The specifications of PEQ stationsfor consignments of plants shouldreflect take into consideration thebiology of both the biology of theplants and the biology of thequarantine pests that may potentiallybe associated with the plants.

The word reflect is inappropriate in thiscontext

Trinidad and Tobago

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[22] Sentence 2 Editorial The potential impacts of such pests should also be taken into account.

This is part of the PRA as mentioned in para 21

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

158.

2. General Requirements for PEQ

[22] Sentence 2 Substantive Delete this statement ‘The potential impacts of such pests should also be taken into account’.

To avoid redundancy and PRA will have determined potential risk

Kenya

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2. General Requirements for PEQ

[22] Sentence 2 Editorial The potential impacts of such pestsshould also be taken into account.

Grammar Trinidad and Tobago

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[22] 3rd sentence Technical Successful detention of a consignment of plants in quarantine of consignments of plants requires measures to prevent any associated quarantine pests from moving from the consignment into the area escaping, and where appropriate, to prevent organisms in the area outside the PEQ station from entering the station and transferring or vectoring quarantine pests.

To bring the text into line with the definition of “detention” and the use of “escape” implies some self motivation whereas some pests will/may just blow away noting that any pests need to move into the “area”.

Australia

161. 2. General Requirements for

[22] 3rd sentence Successful quarantine of consignments of plants requires

COSAVECHILE

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PEQ Technical/Editorial measures to prevent prevention of any associated quarantine pests from escaping, and where appropriate, to prevent prevention of organisms in the area outside the PEQ station from entering the station and transferring or vectoring quarantine pests.

To avoid confusion with phytosanitary measures.

BRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

162.

2. Conditions générales de la quarantaine post-entrée

[22] Ligne 4 De fond Les spécifications des stations de quarantaine post-entrée pour le confinement de végétaux et produits végétaux devraient tenir compte de la biologie des végétaux et de celle des organismes nuisibles qui peuvent leur être associés.

Consistance BURUNDI

163.

2. Conditions générales de la quarantaine post-entrée

[22] De fond Les spécifications des stations de quarantaine post-entrée pour le confinement de végétaux et produits végétaux devraient tenir compte de la biologie des végétaux et de celle des organismes nuisibles qui peuvent leur être associés.

Consistance R.D. CONGO, TOGO

164. 2. Requisitos generales para la CPE

[22] Editorial Las especificaciones de las estaciones de CPE para los envíos de plantas deberían reflejar tanto considerar la biología de las plantas como la biología de las plagas cuarentenarias que podrán estar potencialmente asociadas con las plantas. También deberían tomarse en cuenta los efectos potenciales de tales plagas. La cuarentena exitosa de los envíos de plantas requiere medidas para evitar el escape de cualquier plaga cuarentenaria asociada, y cuando corresponda, para evitar

Aclara la redacción Ecuador

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que los organismos que se encuentran en el área fuera de la estación de CPE entren a la estación y transfieran plagas cuarentenarias o sean vectores de ellas.

165.

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[22] Row 2

Row 4

Substantive

Substantive

....... quarantine regulated pests that may .......

....... quarantine regulated pests from .......

To be consistent with the scope of this standard

Malaysia

166. 2. Requisitos generales para la CPE

[22] Oración 1 y Oración 3

Sustancial/Editorial Las especificaciones de las estaciones de CPE cuarentenarias para los envíos de plantas deberían reflejar tanto la biología de las plantas como la biología de las plagas cuarentenarias reglamentadas que podrán estar potencialmente asociadas con las plantas. También deberían tomarse en cuenta los efectos potenciales de tales plagas. La cuarentena exitosa de los envíos de plantas requiere medidas para evitar el escape de cualquier plaga cuarentenaria reglamentada asociada, y cuando corresponda, para evitar que los organismos que se encuentran en el área fuera del área de la estación de CPE cuarentena entren a la estación y transfieran plagas cuarentenarias reglamentadas o sean vectores de ellas.

Redacción más clara

Se considera mejor referirnos a las “plagas reglamentadas” considerando la definición fitosanitaria que aparece en la NIMF No. 5

Se explica similar que la justificación antes mencionada

Ibidem

MEXICO

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Para estar de acuerdo con la definición de plaga reglamentada incluida en la NIMF no. 5 la cual incluye tanto las plagas cuarentenarias como las plagas no cuarentenarias reglamentadas objeto de regulación.

167.

2. General Requirements for PEQ

[22] Substantive The specifications of PEQ stations for consignments of plants and plant products should reflect both the biology of the plants and the biology of the quarantine pests that may potentially be associated with the plants and plant products. The potential impacts of such pests should also be taken into account. Successful quarantine of consignments of plants and plant products requires measures to prevent any associated quarantine pests from escaping, and where appropriate, to prevent organisms in the area outside the PEQ station from entering the station and transferring or vectoring quarantine pests.

Consistency Seychelles

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[22] 1st row

3rd row

Substantive

substantive

The specifications of PEQ stations for consignments of plants for planting should reflect both the biology of the plants…

…impacts of such pests should also be taken into account. Successful quarantine of consignments of plants for planting…

Global change

Global change

USA

USA

169. 2. General [23] whole para Substantive Move to under a new heading Relates to the need for PEQ Australia

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Requirements for PEQ

in a new section 2 “Determining the need for PEQ” as second para in this section.

170.

2. General Requirements for PEQ

[23] Sentence 1 Editorial … the NPPO then needs to determine whether these requirements …

‘Then’ is superfluous Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

171.

2. General Requirements for PEQ

[23] Sentence 1 Editorial Once the quarantine requirements have been determined by the NPPO in the importing country, the NPPO then needs to should determine whether these requirements can be provided by any of the following:

Replace the words “needs to” by “should” for consistency and “should is more appropriate in this context.

CANADA

172.

2. Requisitos generales para la CPE

[23] Oración 1 Editorial Una vez que la ONPF en el país importador haya determinado los requisitos cuarentenarios, la ONPF entonces necesita determinar si estos requisitos pueden proporcionarlos cualquiera de los siguientes:

- una estación de CPE cuarentenaria existente

- una modificación de las condiciones estructurales u operativas de una estación existente

- una cuarentena en un área distinta

- una estación nueva diseñada y construida para cumplir con los requisitos.

Redacción más clara MEXICO

173. 2. General Requirements for PEQ

[23] Sentence 1 Translation y Substantive 12. Una vez que la ONPF en el país importador haya determinado los requisitos

1. More appropriate terms, improves wording for easier understanding.

ORISAEL SALVADOR

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fitosanitarios cuarentenarios, deberá la ONPF entonces necesita determinar si estos requisitos pueden proporcionarlos ser cumplidos con cualquiera de l o as siguientes opciones:

Once the quarantine phytosanitary requirements have been determined by the NPPO in the importing country, the NPPO then needs to determine whether these requirements can be provided met by any of the following:

2. In this context, requirements are to be met and not provided.

PANAMA

174.

2. Requisitos generales para la CPE

[23] Oración 1 sustancial Una vez que la ONPF en el país importador haya determinado los requisitos fitosanitarios cuarentenarios, la ONPF entonces necesita determinar si estos requisitos pueden proporcionarlos cualquiera de los siguientes:

El ARP determina requisitos fitosanitarios y no cuarentenarios.

Perú

175.

2. General Requirements for PEQ

[23] Sentence1 Substantive Once the quarantine requirementshave been determined by the NPPOin the importing country, the NPPOthen needs to determine whetherthese requirements can be providedmet by any of the following:

Use of a more appropriate term Trinidad and Tobago

176. 2. General Requirements for PEQ

[23] 1st sentence and 4th bullet

Technical Once the PEQ measure quarantine requirements hasve been determined by the NPPO in of the importing country, the NPPO then needs to determine whether this measure these requirements can be provided by

“Quarantine requirements” is a non defined term and is confusing

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Editorialany of the following:…

- a new station designed and constructed to meet the requirements.

To be consistent with previous bullets

177.

2. General Requirements for PEQ

[23] 1st indent Editorial - an existing PEQ station without modification

Clarifies the difference with the second indent

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

178.

2. General Requirements for PEQ

[23] 3rd indent Substantive - quarantine in a different area or country

Not all NPPOs have appropriate facilities and could contract a PEQ station in another country, provided that requirements are fulfilled.

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

179.

2. General Requirements for PEQ

[23] New sentence, end of [23]

Substantive The NPPO may also decide that existing PEQ stations are inadequate and therefore the importation of the plants should not be permitted.

Possibility for a NPPO to specify that such imports are not possible.

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

180. 2. General Requirements for PEQ

[23] Substantive Move to under new 2 As above New Zealand

181.2. General Requirements for PEQ

[23] Add indent substantive - isolated field site Isolated fields are often used as post entry quarantine sites

USA

182.2. Specific Requirements

[24] Title Technical 2. 3.2 Specific Requirements for a PEQ station

The whole section addresses the specific requirements in relation to a PEQ station, its location etc.

Australia

183.

2. Specific Requirements

[24] Title Editorial 2. Specific Requirements for PEQ stations for plants

To clarify COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

184.

2. Specific Requirements

[24] To add specific requirement for:- screen house;- glass house

This standard should differentiate the specific requirement for PEQ Station and screen house / glasshouse

Malaysia

185. 2. Specific Requirements

[24] As per 19 Substantive 3.2 Specific requirements for a PEQ station

New Zealand

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186.

2.1 PEQ stations [25] Title Delete PEQ stations By changing the title these 2 paras (#26 and #27) become the introduction for this section on specifics.

Australia

187. 2.1 Estaciones de CPE [25] Titulo Sustancial Tipos de Estaciones de CPE Precisar el titulo Perú

188.

2.1 PEQ stations [26] Sentence 1 Editorial PEQ stations may consist of for example a field site, screen house, glasshouse, and/or laboratory, amongst others.

Simpler English Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

189.

2.1 PEQ stations [26] 1st sentence Editorial PEQ stations may consisto f a field site(s), screen house (s), glasshouse (s) and/or laboratory(ies), amongst others.

Grammar Grenada

190.

2.1 PEQ stations [26] Sentence 1 Translation 13. Las estaciones de CPE podrán constar consistir de un sitio de campo, invernadero de malla, de vidrio y/o laboratorio, entre otras cosas.

PEQ stations may consist of a field site, screen house, glasshouse and/or laboratory, amongst others.

1. More appropriate term. ORISAEL SALVADORPANAMA

191.

2.1 PEQ stations [26] 1st sentence Editorial PEQ stations may consist of a fieldsite(s), screen house(s),glasshouse(s) and/or laboratory(ies),amongst others.

Grammar Trinidad and Tobago

192.

2.1 PEQ stations [26] 2nd sentence Technical The type facilities of a PEQ station to be used should be determined by the type of imported plants and the quarantine pests that may be associated with them.

A quarantine stations can be integrated by many types of facilities as the ones in the first sentence of this para.

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

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193.

2.1 Estaciones de CPE [26] Editorial Las estaciones de CPE podrán constar de ubicarse en un sitio de campo, invernadero de malla, de vidrio y/o laboratorio, entre otras cosas. El tipo de estación de CPE que se utilice debería determinarse mediante el tipo de plantas importadas y las plagas cuarentenarias que podrán estar asociadas con éstas.

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194.

2.1 PEQ stations [26] Second sentence

Substantive The type of PEQ station to be used should be determined by the type of imported plants and plant products and the quarantine pests that may be associated with them

Consistency Seychelles

195.

2.1 PEQ stations [26] Row 1

Row 1

Row 2

Substantive

Substantive

Substantive

The word ‘field site’.

To include two (2) new words:...... glasshouse, laboratory, insectory and/or incinerator amongst others.

....... quarantine regulated pests that may ....

An open area may not be appropriate to be considered as a field site in a PEQ station. Further clarification is needed for this term.

These are two important components for a PEQ Station

To be consistent with the scope of this standard

Malaysia

Malaysia

Malaysia

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196.

2.1 Estaciones de CPE [26] Oración 1 y Oración 2

Sustancial/Editorial Las estaciones de CPE cuarentenarias podrán constar de un sitio de campo, invernadero de malla, de vidrio y/o laboratorio, entre otras cosas. El tipo de estación de CPE cuarentenaria que se utilice debería determinarse mediante el tipo de plantas importadas y , las plagas cuarentenarias reglamentadas que podrán estar asociadas con éstas así como su nivel de riesgo

Redacción más clara

Acorde con la definición de plaga reglamentada incluida en la NIMF no. 5 la cual incluye tanto las plagas cuarentenarias como las plagas no cuarentenarias reglamentadas objeto de regulación.

MEXICO

197.

2.1 Estaciones de CPE [26] Item 1 Editorial Las estaciones de CPE podrán estar constituidas constar por de un sitio de campo, invernadero de malla, de vidrio y/o laboratorio, entre otras cosas. El tipo de estación de CPE que se utilice debería determinarse mediante el tipo de plantas importadas y las plagas cuarentenarias que podrán estar asociadas con éstas.

Aclara el texto Perú

198. 2.1 PEQ stations [27] Sentence 1 Substantive NPPOs should consider all appropriate issues when determining the requirements for the PEQ station (e.g. the location, physical and operational requirements of the PEQ station, waste processing facilities, as well as availability of adequate systems for detection, diagnosis and treatment of quarantine pests) and auditing of the station. NPPOs should ensure that the appropriate level of confinement

Reformulated so that appropriate mitigation of risk is obtained, giving freedom to PEQ operators to choose the most appropriate way of doing this.Addition of ‘waste processing’, ‘detection’ and ‘inspection’ to be more complete.

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

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is maintained by inspections and audits.

199.

2.1 PEQ stations [27] Sentence 1 Substantive NPPOs should consider the location, physical and operational requirements of the PEQ station as well as systems for diagnosis and treatment of quarantine pests and authorizing/auditing of the station.

Add the word “authorizing” to the sentence as it would be important for the NPPO to put a system in place for the authorization of PEQ station to be consistent the requirements outlined in Section 2.4 (Para. 34) of the standard.

CANADA

200.

2.1 PEQ stations [27] Sentence 2 Substantive Annex Appendix 1 provides guidance on specifications for PEQ stations based on the biology of different types of quarantine pests.

See general comments Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

201.

2.1 Estaciones de CPE [27] Editorial Las ONPFs deberían considerar la ubicación, los requisitos físicos y operativos de la estación de CPE así como los sistemas para el diagnóstico y tratamiento de plagas cuarentenarias y la auditoría de la estación. El Anexo 1 proporciona las especificaciones para las estaciones de CPE basándose en la biología de tipos diferentes de plagas cuarentenarias.

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202. 2.1 PEQ stations [27] Row 2 and Row 3

Substantive quarantine regulated pests To be consistent with the scope of this standard

Malaysia

203. 2.1 Estaciones de CPE [27] Oración 1 y Oración 2

MEXICO Las ONPFs deberían considerar la ubicación, los requisitos físicos y operativos de la estación de CPE cuarentenaria así como los sistemas para el diagnóstico y tratamiento de plagas cuarentenarias reglamentadas y la auditoría de la estación. El Anexo 1 proporciona las especificaciones para las

Redacción más clara

Acorde con la definición de plaga reglamentada incluida en la NIMF no. 5 la cual incluye tanto las plagas cuarentenarias como las plagas no

MEXICO

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estaciones de CPE cuarentenarias basándose en la biología de tipos diferentes tipos de plagas cuarentenarias reglamentadas.

cuarentenarias reglamentadas objeto de regulación.

Mejor redacción

204. 2.2 Location [28] Title Substantive 2.2 3.2.1 Location To bring headings into line with restructured text

Australia

205.

2.2 Location [28] Indent 7 Substantive - equipment (e.g. specialized biological safety cabinets, backup generators, autoclaves)

Add the word “biological” as “biological safety cabinets” is the appropriate technical term. This change should be made throughout the standard to reflect the appropriate technical terminology.

CANADA

206.

2.2 Ubicación [28] Oración 1 y Oración 2

Sustancias/Editorial Al determinar la ubicación de las estaciones de CPE cuarentenarias deberían considerarse los riesgos del escape accidental de plagas cuarentenarias. Las estaciones de CPE cuarentenarias deberían proporcionar el aislamiento y la estabilidad adecuados (por ejemplo, con poca exposición a eventos climáticos severos, no en áreas propensas a terremotos), y alguna separación de las especies de plantas relacionadas (por ejemplo, lejos de la producción agrícola u hortícola, bosques o áreas con gran biodiversidad) y separación adecuada de las plantas susceptibles.

Redacción más clara MEXICO

207. 2.2 Location [28] As per 19 Substantive 3.2.1 Location New Zealand

208.

2.2 Location [29] 1st sentence

Editorial/technical In determining the location of a the PEQ stations the risks of movement accidental escape of quarantine pests into an area should be addressed.

Editorial “a” the use of “escape” implies some self motivation whereas some pests will/may just blow in.

Australia

209. 2.2 Location [29] Sentence 1 Substantive In determining the location of the PEQ stations the risks of accidental escape of quarantine

Further guidance; the main aspects are limitation of risk of escape, early detection of escape and appropriate

Belarus EC EPPO

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pests should be addressed as well as the possibility of early detection of the escape and of effective management measures in case of escape.

measures for effective eradication. Israel

210. 2.2 Location [29] Row 1 Substantive ....... quarantine regulated pests should be .......

To be consistent with the scope of this standard

Malaysia

211.

2.2 Location [29] Sentence1 Substantive In determining the location of thePEQ stations the risks of accidentalescape of quarantine pests should beaddressed. PEQ stations shouldprovide adequate isolation andstability (e.g. with minimal exposureto severe climatic and geologicalevents. , not in earthquake-proneareas),

and some separation from relatedplant species (e.g. location away from agricultural or horticulturalproduction, forests or areas of highbiodiversity) and suitable separationfrom susceptible plants hosts.

Better choice of words since the way itswritten many earthquake prone areas would not be able to comply.

Use of more appropriate term

Trinidad and Tobago

212.

2.2 Location [29] sentence 2 Editorial A PEQ stations should provide adequate isolation and stability (e.g. with minimal exposure to severe climatic events, not in earthquake-prone areas, etc), and some separation from related and susceptible plant species (e.g. location away from agricultural or horticultural production, forests or areas of high biodiversity) and suitable separation from susceptible plants.

Editorial changes Australia

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213.

2.2 Location [29] Sentence 2 1: Substantive

2. Substantive

PEQ stations should provide adequate isolation and stability (e.g. with minimal exposure to severe climatic events, not in earthquakes prone areas), and suitable separation from susceptible plants and some separation from related plant species (e.g. location away from agricultural or horticultural production, forests or areas of high biodiversity) should be considered and suitable separation from susceptible plants.

1: current statement (‘not in earthquake-prone areas’ is far too strict and would mean that very many countries would be recommended not to set up PEQ stations.

2: simplification – the most important separation mentioned first and insertion of ‘should be considered’ allows more flexibility.

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

214. 2.2 Location [29] Sentence 2 Substantive 14. Las estaciones de CPE deberían proporcionar el aislamiento y la estabilidad adecuados (por ejemplo, con poca exposición a eventos climáticos o geológicos severos, no en áreas propensas a terremotos), y alguna separación de las especies de plantas relacionadas (por ejemplo, lejos de la producción agrícola u hortícola, bosques o áreas con gran alta biodiversidad) y separación adecuada de las plantas susceptibles.

PEQ stations should provide adequate isolation and stability (e.g. with minimal exposure to severe climatic or geological events, not in earthquake-prone areas), and some separation from related plant species (e.g. location away from agricultural or horticultural production, forests or areas of high biodiversity) and suitable

1. More comprehensible. More pertinent factor to be consider.

ORISAEL SALVADORPANAMA

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separation from susceptible plants.

215.

2.2 Location [29] 1st and 2nd sentences

Editorial

Technical

In determining the location of the PEQ stations To minimize the risks of accidental escape of quarantine pests should be addressed. PEQ stations should provide adequate isolation and stability (e.g. with minimal exposure to severe climatic events, not in earthquake-prone areas), and some separation from related plant species (e.g. location away from agricultural or horticultural production, forests or areas of high biodiversity) and suitable separation from susceptible plants.

To clarify

There is available anti-seismic technology

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

216.

2.2 Ubicación [29] Editorial Al determinar la ubicación de las estaciones de CPE deberían considerarse los riesgos del escape accidental de plagas cuarentenarias. Las estaciones de CPE deberían proporcionar el aislamiento y la estabilidad adecuados (por ejemplo, con poca exposición a eventos climáticos severos, no en áreas propensas a terremotos), y alguna separación de las especies de plantas relacionadas (por ejemplo, lejos de la producción agrícola u hortícola, bosques o áreas con gran biodiversidad) y separación adecuada de las plantas susceptibles.

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217. 2.2 Location [29] Substantive In determining the location of the Better choice of words since the way Grenada

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Substantive

PEQ stations the risks of accidental escape of quarantine pests should be addressed. PEQ stations should provide adequate isolation and stability (e.g. with minimal exposure to severe (e.g. with minimal exposure to severe climatic and geological events;

and some separation form related plant species (e.g. location Hawai from agricultural or horticultural production, forests or areas of high biodiversity) and suitable separation from hosts.

its griten many earthquake prone areas would not be able to comply.

Use of more appropriate term

218. 2.3 Physical requirements

[30] Title Substantive 2.3 3.2.2 Physical requirements To bring headings into line with restructured text.

Australia

219. 2.3 Physical requirements

[30] As per 19 Substantive 3.2.2 Physical requirements New Zealand

220.

2.3 Physical requirements

[31] 1st sentence Editorial The physical design of a the PEQ station should take into consideration the growth requirements of the plants, the biology of any potentially associated quarantine pests potentially associated with the consignment, the work flow in the station and specific emergency requirements (e.g. in the event of loss of electricity).

Increased clarity Australia

221.

2.3 Physical requirements

[31] 1st sentence

Technical

The physical design of the PEQ station should take into consideration the growth requirements of the plants, the biology of any potentially associated quarantine pests, the work flow in the station and specific emergency requirements (e.g. in the event of loss of electricity or water supply, etc).

Best example of requirement

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222.

2.3 Requisitos físicos [31] Editorial El diseño físico de la estación de CPE debería tomar en cuenta los requisitos de crecimiento de las plantas, la biología de cualquier plaga cuarentenaria potencialmente asociada, el flujo del trabajo en la estación y los requisitos de emergencia específicos (por ejemplo, en el caso de pérdida de electricidad). Las instalaciones de la oficina y de la infraestructura de servicio de apoyo deberían estar disponibles cuando se necesiten y tener la separación adecuada de las estaciones de CPE.

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223.

2.3 Physical requirements

[31] 1st row substantive The physical design of the PEQ station or area should take into consideration the growth requirements of the plant…

To include field sites outside the PEQ station.

USA

224. 2.3 Physical requirements

[31] Row 2 Substantive ....... quarantine regulated pests, the work .......

To be consistent with the scope of this standard

MEXICO

225. 2.3 Requisitos físicos [31] Oración 1 y Oración 2

Sustancias/Editorial El diseño físico de la estación de CPE cuarentenaria debería tomar en cuenta los requisitos de crecimiento de las plantas específicos de la plantas, la biología de cualquier plaga cuarentenaria reglamentada potencialmente asociada, el flujo del trabajo en la estación y los requisitos de emergencia específicos (por ejemplo, en el caso de pérdida de electricidad). Las instalaciones de la oficina y de la infraestructura de servicio de apoyo deberían estar disponibles cuando se necesiten y tener la separación adecuada de

Redacción más clara

México considera mejor referirnos a las “plagas reglamentadas” considerando la definición fitosanitaria que aparece en la NIMF No. 5 y que incluye tanto las plagas cuarentenarias como las plagas no cuarentenarias reglamentadas

MEXICO

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las estaciones de CPE cuarentenarias.

226. 2.3 Physical requirements

[32] First line Editorial Physical requirements to consider be considered include:

Clarity China

227.

2.3 Physical requirements

[32] Before 1st Add “Specifications/guidelines to meet physical requirements of PEQ stations should be developed by the NPPO”

For uniformity amongst PEQ stations

China

228.

2.3 Physical requirements

[32] Newdash point

Substantive - security measures Security measures such as perimeter fencing and building access are important in preventing unauthorised access to the material undergoing PEQ.

Australia

229.

2.3 Physical requirements

[32] 1st indent Substantive - delimitation physical boundary of the station

Clearer wording Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

230.

2.3 Physical requirements

[32] New 2nd indent 1

Substantive - differentiation of internal access zones with different levels of confinement

Another example to consider; zones within PEQ stations with different levels of access can be useful.

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

231.

2.3 Physical requirements

[32] 2nd indent Substantive - external structural materials (for walls, floors, roof and windows)

To include internal materials Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

232.

2.3 Physical requirements

[32] New 4th indent

Substantive - Need for compartments for internal separation of consignments.

Another example to consider; use of compartments can reduce the risks of transmission of pests from one consignment to another.

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

233.

2.3 Physical requirements

[32] 4th indent Editorial - access to the station (to avoid traffic in areas where plants are being grown)

More precise Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

234.

2.3 Physical requirements

[32] Bullet 4 Substantive Access to the station (to avoid areas where plants in quarantine are being grown)

To clarify that the reference is specific to plants in a quarantine facility

South Africa

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2.3 Physical requirements

[32] 7th and 8th indents

Editorial - equipment (e.g. specialized safety cabinets, backup generators, autoclaves)- access to water supply and electricity supplies, including backup generators

Clearer wording and concepts Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

236.

2.3 Physical requirements

[32] Last Indent Editorial - signage use of signs Clarity – use of plain English Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

237.

2.3 Physical requirements

[32] 1st and 7th bullets

Technical

Technical

Ph Physical requirements to consider include:

- delimitation of the station

- external structural materials (for walls, floors, roof and windows)…

- equipment (e.g. specialized safety cabinets, backup generators, autoclaves)

Both external and internal should be considered

May be not applicable to plant pests

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

238.

2.3 Physical requirements

[32] Add further points

substantive - moat around the building (where necessary)

- foot bath at entrance- disinfection room for

workers

For completeness Korea

239. 2.3 Physical requirements

[32] New indent Substantive - Moat around the building- Foot bath at the entrance

Essential for screen house and glasshouse

Malaysia

240. 2.3 Requisitos físicos [32] Sangría 10, 11 y 12 nuevas

Sustancial Los requisitos físicos por considerar incluyen:

- delimitación de la estación

- materiales estructurales exteriores (para las paredes, pisos, techo, puertas, mallas y ventanas)

- tamaño dimensiones de la estación (para

Son puntos importantes que deben ser tomados en cuenta

MEXICO

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asegurar la operación eficaz de la estación de CPE cuarentenaria y los procedimientos asociados)

- acceso a la estación (para evitar áreas en donde crecen las plantas)

- diseño de las aberturas (para puertas, ventanas, conductos de salida del aire, drenajes y otros conductos)

- sistemas de tratamiento (para aire, agua, desechos sólidos y líquidos)

- equipo (por ejemplo, gabinetes de seguridad especializados, generadores auxiliares, autoclaves)

- acceso a suministro de agua

- señalización. Sistemas de control de

temperatura, humedad y ventilación

Sistemas de control de plagas

Sistemas de desinfección y desinfectación par prevenir el ingreso de plagas

241.

2.3 Physical requirements

[32] Add further points

substantive - moat around the building (where necessary)

- foot bath at entrance- disinfection room for

workers

For completeness Philippines

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242. 2.3 Physical requirements

[32] Add second indent

substantive - isolation of field sites Applicable to PEQ field sites USA

243. 2.4 Operational requirements

[33] Title Substantive 2.4 3.2.3 Operational requirements

To bring headings into line with restructured text.

Australia

244. 2.4 Operational requirements

[33] As per 19 Substantive 3.2.3 Operational requirements New Zealand

245.

2.4 Operational requirements

[34] 1st sentence Technical PEQ stations should either be operated, by or be authorized by, the NPPO of the importing country.

To highlight which NPPO is responsible

Australia

246.

2.4 Operational requirements

[34] Sentence 1 Editorial PEQ stations should either be operated by or be authorized by the NPPO.

Simpler, deletion of superfluous words.

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

247.

2.4 Requisitos operativos

[34] Oración 1 Editorial Las estaciones de CPE cuarentenarias deberían operarse ya sea por la ONPF o estar autorizadas por éstas.

Redacción más clara México

248.

2.4 Operational requirements

[34] Sentence 1 Editorial & Technical P EQ PEQ stations should either be operated by or authorized and monitored by the NPPO. NPPO should ensure adequate resources to guarantee the sustenance of a PQE station

for clarity and to bring to sharp focus the responsibilities of NPPOs towards their PEQ station.

NIGERIA

249.

2.4 Operational requirements

[34] Sentence 1 Editorial 15. Las estaciones de CPE deberían ser operadas operarse ya sea por la ONPF o estar autorizadas por éstas.

PEQ stations should either be operated by or be authorized by the NPPO.

1. Better wording. ORISAEL SALVADORPANAMA

250. 2.4 Operational requirements

[34] Entire para Editorial PEQ stations should either be operated by or be authorized and audited by the NPPO.

To clarify.Authorized PEQ stations must be audited.

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

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2.4 Operational requirements

[34b]Old para 36

Repositioned para and last sentence

Editorial

Editorial

Specific procedures are required in the operation of the station to manage the identified risks associated with the consignments of plants in the PEQ station. A procedural manual, approved by the NPPO, should show how the station meets its objectives the quarantine requirements.

This para has been repositioned to talk first about the manual and later on its content

Quarantine requirements is not a defined term.

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

252.

2.4 Operational requirements

[34] Sentence 1

Para 2

substative PEQ facility should either be operated or authorized and monitored by the NPPO

Add sentence. NPPO should guarantee adequate resources to ensure sustainability of PEQ facilities

Clarity

Its an obligation of NPPO but missing in the text

Kenya

253.

2.4 Operational requirements

[34] Sentence 1

Sentence 2

Substantive

substantive

PEQ stations should either be operated or authorized and monitored by the NPPONPPOs should ensure adequate resource to gurantee sustainability of PEQ station

To include the monitoring of the PEQ by the NPPO

to ensure the sustainability of the PEQ

IASPC-GABON

254.

2.4 Operational requirements

[34] Sentence 1 Substantive PEQ stations should both be operated and monitored by the NPPO or other authorized organisation by the NPPO.

To explain the particular situation and for clarity.

Seychelles

255.

2.4 Requisitos operativos

[34] Editorial Las estaciones de CPE deberían operarse ya sea por la ONPF o estar autorizadas por éstas.

Aclara la redacción Ecuador

256. 2.4 Operational requirements

[34] Sentence 1 Substantive PEQ stations should either be operated by or authorized be and monitored by the NPPO

To include the monitoring of the PEQ by the NPPO

Swaziland

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Sentence 2substantive NPPOs should ensure adequate

resource to gurantee sustainability of PEQ station

to ensure the sustainability of the PEQ Swaziland

257.

2.4 Operational requirements

[35] sentence 1 Substantive relating to management review, regular auditing, training of personnel…

Auditing is considered more rigorous than just management review and should be against requirements of the NPPO.

Australia

258.

2.4 Requisitos operativos

[35] Oración 1 Editorial Los requisitos operativos para cumplir las condiciones cuarentenarias especificadas incluyen las políticas y los procedimientos apropiados relacionados con la revisión del manejo, la capacitación del personal, la operación general de la estación de CPE cuarentenaria, el mantenimiento de registros y la rastreabilidad de las plantas, la planificación de contingencia, la salud y seguridad y documentación

Redacción más clara México

259. 2.4 Operational requirements

[35] Sentence 1 Substantive 16. Los requisitos operativos para cumplir las condiciones de CPE cuarentenarias especificadas incluyen las políticas y los procedimientos apropiados relacionados con la revisión del manejo, la capacitación del personal, la operación general de la estación de CPE, el mantenimiento de registros y la rastreabilidad de las plantas, la planificación de contingencia, la salud y seguridad y documentación.

Operational requirements to meet PEQ specified quarantine

1. More accurate term, consistent with use in the title and the rest of the text.

ORISAEL SALVADORPANAMA

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conditions involve appropriate policies and procedures relating to management review, training of personnel, general operation of the PEQ station, record keeping and traceability of plants, contingency planning, health and safety, and documentation.

260.

2.4 Operational requirements

[35] Entire para Editorial

Editorial

Operational requirements to meet specified quarantine conditions involve appropriate policies and procedures relating to management review, training of personnel, general operation of the PEQ station, record keeping and traceability of plants, contingency planning, human health and safety, and documentation.

Unnecessary

To clarify

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

261.

2.4 Operational requirements

[36] 1st sentence Technical Specific procedures will be are required in the operation of the station to manage the identified risks associated with the consignments of plants in the PEQ station.

To strengthen this key requirement Australia

262.

2.4 Requisitos operativos

[36] Oración 1 Editorial Se requieren procedimientos específicos en la operación de la estación con el fin de manejar los riesgos identificados que están asociados con los envíos de plantas en la estación de CPE cuarentenaria. Un manual de procedimientos aprobado por la ONPF debería demostrar la forma en que la estación cumple con los requisitos cuarentenarios

Redacción más clara México

263. 2.4 Operational requirements

[36] Para repositioned as 34b

Editorial Specific procedures are required in the operation of the station to manage the identified risks associated with the consignments

This para has been repositioned to talk first about the manual and later on its content

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAY

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of plants in the PEQ station. A procedural manual, approved by the NPPO, should show how the station meets the quarantine requirements.

URUGUAYARGENTINA

264.

2.4 Operational requirements

[36] sentence 2 Technical A procedural manual, …, should show detail procedures on how the station meets the quarantine requirements.

A procedural manual should detail the procedures for operating the PEQ station, not just show them

Australia

265.

2.4 Operational requirements

[36] Sentence 2 Editorial A procedural manual, where appropriate approved by the NPPO, should show ...quarantine requirements.

If the NPPO itself operates the PEQ station approval by the NPPO is not applicable.

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

266.

2.4 Operational requirements

[36] Sentence 2 Substantive 17. Un manual de procedimientos aprobado por la ONPF debería demostrar la forma en que la estación cumple con los requisitos para la CPE cuarentenarios.

A procedural manual, approved by the NPPO, should show how the station meets the quarantine PEQ requirements.

1. More accurate term. ORISAEL SALVADORPANAMA

267.

2.4 Operational requirements

[36] 2nd row substantive …the consignments of plants for planting in the PEQ station. A procedural manual, approved by the NPPO, should show…

Global change USA

268. 2.4.1 Staff requirements

[37] Title Substantive 2.4.1 3.2.3.1 Staff requirements To bring headings into line with restructured text

Australia

269. 2.4.1 Staff requirements

[37] Substantive Staff and other related requirements

Adequately cover the indents in the section

Grenada

270. 2.4.1 Staff requirements

[37] As per 19 Substantive 3.2.3.1 Staff requirements New Zealand

271. 2.4.1 Staff requirements

[37] Heading Substantive Staff and other relatedrequirements

Adequately cover the indents in this section

Trinidad and Tobago

272. 2.4.1 Staff requirements

[38] Sentence 1 Editorial Staff requirements may include as appropriate:

‘may’ is already flexible enough Belarus EC

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273.2.4.1 Staff requirements

[38] Sentence 1 Substantive Staff Requirements may include asappropriate:

Removes the optional nature of theobligation that follows

Trinidad and Tobago

274.

2.4.1 Staff requirements

[38] dash point 1 Technical - a suitably qualified supervisor manager who has overall responsibility for maintaining the PEQ station and for all PEQ activities

Highlighting the requirement for suitable qualifications and supervisor instead of manager for translation

Australia

275.

2.4.1 Requisitos de personal

[38] Item 1 Sustancial Un gerente personal calificado que tenga la responsabilidad global del mantenimiento de la conducción y operatividad de la CPE

No es pertinente señalar por anticipado un cargo, debe ser una denominación más global. Conducción y operatividad son términos mas precisos.

Perú

276.

2.4.1 Staff requirements

[38] dash point 2 Editorial - specific staff identified with key responsibilities for concerning the maintenance of the PEQ stations and activities described and attributed to staff members

Editorial Australia

277.

2.4.1 Staff requirements

[38] New dash point 2

Substantive - appropriately qualified scientific support staff or ready access to them.

To provide appropriate plant pathology and entomology services to the facility, either on site or near by.

Australia

278.

2.4.1 Staff requirements

[38] Indent 2 Substantive

Editorial

Requirements may include:

- key staff with responsibilities for the maintenance of the PEQ stations and associated activities

Removes the optional nature of the obligation that follow

For clarity

Grenada

279. 2.4.1 Staff requirements

[38] Indent 2 Editorial - key staff with responsibilities forconcerning the maintenanceof the PEQ stations andassociated activitiesdescribed and attributed to

For clarity Trinidad and Tobago

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staff members

280.

2.4.1 Staff requirements

[38] 3rd, 4th and 5th dash point

Substantive - a means to control and register entry of authorized staff

- all access to the station restricted to authorized persons

- a procedure to ensure that all staff are adequately qualified, including training where appropriate.

These dash points are not related to “staff requirements” but more to Technical and operating procedures and should be included at the end of the dash points in the next section.

Australia

281.

2.4.1 Staff requirements

[38] 3rd indent Substantive - a means to control and register entry of authorized staff

For staff, access control is necessary but a register should be optional (see proposed change to 4th indent).

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

282.

2.4.1 Staff requirements

[38] 4th indent Substantive - all access to the station restricted to authorized persons (including a register for entry when necessary)

Non staff may enter (for maintenance for instance, of for visits or inspections…), but this should be clearly recorded in details.

Belarus EPPOIsrael

283. 2.4.1 Staff requirements

[38] Indent 4 Substantive Delete indent 4 ‘Authorized persons’ not belong to ‘staff’.

China

284.

2.4.1 Staff requirements

[38] 4th indent Substantive - all access to the station restricted to authorized persons (including a register for entry of staff when necessary)

Moved from previous indent EC

285.

2.4.1 Conditions relatives au personnel

[38] Tiret 1 aTiret 1 b

Tiret 5

De fond Un responsable directeur qualifié

chargé de la gestion l'entretien des locaux de quarantaine

et de la conduite de l'ensemble des la station

activités de quarantaine post-entrée;

une procédure garantissant un niveau de qualification suffisant des membres du personnel, au besoin ayant suivi moyennant une formation.

Compréhension du texte BURUNDI

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2.4.1 Staff requirements

[38] 1st, 2nd, 4th and 5th bullets

Technical

Technical

St Staff requirements may include as appropriate:

- a qualified staff for management, technical issues and support activities manager who has overall responsibility for maintaining PEQ and for all PEQ activities

- a manager who has overall responsibility for maintaining PEQ station and for all PEQ stations activities

- key responsibilities concerning the maintenance of the PEQ stations and activities described and attributed to staff members

- a means to control and register entry of authorized staff

- all access to the station restricted to authorized persons

- a procedure to ensure that all staff are adequately qualified, including training where appropriate.

The whole staff should be qualified

These requirements are not staff related, but operational Consider inclusion in para 40.

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

287.

2.4.1 Conditions relatives au personnel

[38] De fond Un responsable qualifié chargé de la gestion la station de quarantaine post-entrée;

une procédure garantissant un niveau de qualification suffisant des membres du personnel, au besoin ayant suivi une formation.

Compréhension du texte R.D. CONGO, TOGO

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2.4.1 Requisitos de personal

[38] Editorial Los requisitos de personal podrán incluir, según sea apropiado:

- un gerente calificado que tenga la responsabilidad global del mantenimiento de la CPE y de todas las actividades de la CPE

- responsabilidades principales concernientes al sobre el mantenimiento de las estaciones y actividades de CPE descritas y atribuidas a los miembros del personal

- un medio para controlar y registrar la entrada del personal autorizado

- todo acceso a la estación limitado a personas no autorizadas

- un procedimiento para asegurar que todo el personal esté calificado en forma adecuada, incluyendo la capacitación, cuando sea apropiado.

Aclara la redacción Ecuador

289. 2.4.1 Conditions relatives au personnel

[38]

Ligne 2 (tiret 1)

Ligne 8 (tiret 5)

De fond

Un responsable directeur qualifié

chargé de la gestion l'entretien des locaux de quarantaine et de la conduite de l'ensemble des de la station

activités de quarantaine post-entrée;

Une procédure garantissant un niveau de qualification suffisant

Compréhension du texte

Compréhension du texte

Côte d’Ivoire

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des membres du personnel, au besoin ayant suivi une moyennant formation.

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2.4.1 Requisitos de personal

[38] Sangría 1 y Sangría 2

Editorial Los requisitos de personal podrán incluir, según sea apropiado:

- un gerente calificado que tenga la responsabilidad global del mantenimiento de la CPE estación cuarentenaria y de todas las actividades propias de la CPE misma.

- responsabilidades principales concernientes al mantenimiento de las estaciones y actividades de cuarentena CPE descritas y atribuidas a los miembros del personal

- un medio para controlar y registrar la entrada del personal autorizado

- todo acceso a la estación limitado a personas autorizadas

- un procedimiento para asegurar que todo el personal esté calificado en forma adecuada, incluyendo la capacitación, cuando sea apropiado.

Redacción más clara México

291. 2.4.1 Staff requirements

[38] Indent 2 Translation 18. - responsabilidades clave principales concernientes al mantenimiento de las estaciones y actividades de CPE descritas y atribuidas a

1. More fitting term. ORISAEL SALVADORPANAMA

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los miembros del personal

- key responsibilities concerning the maintenance of the PEQ stations and activities described and attributed to staff members

19. - un procedimiento para asegurar que se cuente con todo el personal esté calificado en forma adecuada, incluyendo la capacitación, cuando sea apropiado.

- a procedure to ensure that all staff are adequately qualified, including training where appropriate.

2. Improves wording in Spanish, for easier understanding.

292.2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[39] Title Substantive 2.4.2 3.2.3.2 Technical and operational procedures

To bring headings into line with restructured text

Australia

293. 2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[39] As per 19 Substantive 3.2.3.2 Technical requirements and operational procedures

To be consistent with the heading of the sub-section

New Zealand

294.

2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] Sentence 1 Editorial Technical and operational requirements may include as appropriate:

‘may’ is already flexible enough Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

295.

2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] dash point 1 Substantive - a limit on provision for the number of plants held at any one time in the a PEQ station so as not to exceed the capacity of the station in a way that could impede inspection or compromise quarantine

To highlight that PEQ stations should only hold the amount of plants that they are able to in order to ensure phytosanitary outcomes are delivered..

Australia

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2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] dash point 2 technical - undertakingprovision of disinfestations of the station before introduction of material for screening or in the event of pest occurrence

Should undertake the disinfestation not just have a provision for it

Australia

297.

2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] 2nd indent Editorial provision for of disinfestations of the station before introduction of plants material for screening or in the event of pest occurrence

Typo and more precise Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

298.

2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] dash point 3 technical - ensuring adequate spatial separation of different consignments or lots within the station as appropriate

Should ensure this happens and “as appropriate” is in the intro line.

Australia

299.2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] dash point 4 technical - …(….treatment and testing to release or destruction of the infested consignment)

To give the full potential scope of activities

Australia

300.

2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] 4th indent Editorial a procedure to enable full traceability of the consignments through the PEQ station (the traceability system should use a unique identifier throughout from the process of plant arrival, through handling, treatment and testing to until release)

Simplification Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

301.

2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] 4th indent Substantive a procedure system to enable fulltraceability of the consignments through the PEQ station (the traceabilitysystem should use a unique identifier throughout the process of plant arrival,handling, treatment and testing to release)

Consistency with tracebility system refered to in the same sentence

Trinidad and Tobago

302.2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] dash point 5 technical - use of specific containment equipment (e.g. biological cabinets), if needed

May not be needed, should be indicated by the PRA

Australia

303.

2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] 5th indent Editorial Change ‘containment’ to ‘confinement’

Consistency with definition of ‘quarantine’

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

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2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] dash point 6 technical - appropriate handling and sanitation procedures to prevent the spread of organisms on hands, cutting tools, footwear and clothing, as well as procedures for disinfections of surfaces in the PEQ station

To be clear Australia

305.

2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] New 7th indent

Substantive - For pollen transmitted pests, removal of flower buds before flowering

Another option to consider Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

306.

2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] dash point 7 technical - provision for monitoring for pest occurrence in station for example using traps etc. using traps etc.

Many ways of doing this so use ‘for examples’ or delete.

Australia

307.

2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] 7th indent Substantive - provision for monitoring for pest occurrence in the PEQ station and its vicinity using traps etc.

Measures to check the occurrence of pests outside the confined facilities is also important to monitor potential escapes.

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

308.2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] 7th indent editorial - provision for monitoring for pest occurrence in station using traps, etc.

USA

309.

2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] 8th indent Editorial appropriate inspection and/or testing to detect quarantine pests that may be associated with the plants

Unnecessary text Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

310.

2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] dash point 9 technical - a procedure that describes description of how plants are to be sampled and transported to diagnostic laboratories for the testing of quarantine pests

This is in a section that includes “operational procedures”

Australia

311.

2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] New 10th indent

Substantive Restricting staff access to plants that may be at risk outside the PEQ station.

Another operational procedure to be considered.

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

312. 2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] dash point 10

technical - criteria for what constitutes a breach of quarantine confinement, and a reporting

Quarantine, by definition, is confinement.

Australia

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system to ensure that any breaches are reported without any delays to the NPPO or authorized body

313.

2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] 10th indent Substantive - criteria for what constitutes a breach of quarantine confinement, and a reporting system to ensure that any breaches and adopted measures are reported without any delays to the NPPO or authorized body.

It is important that any measures taken by the PEQ station after a breach are also reported.The NPPO is responsible for the requirements, so most appropriate to only refer to the NPPO here. It can put in place whatever arrangements are appropriate.

Belarus EPPOIsrael

314.

2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] 10th indent 1. Editorial2. Substantive3. Substantive

- criteria for what constitutes a breach of quarantine confinement, and a reporting system to ensure that any breaches and adopted measures are reported without any delays to the NPPO or authorized body.

1. Better English2. It is important that any measures taken by the PEQ station after a breach are also reported.3. The NPPO is responsible for the requirements, so most appropriate to only refer to the NPPO here. It can put in place whatever arrangements are appropriate.

EC

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[40] Bullet 10 Substantive Criteria for what constitutes a breach of quarantine confinement, and a reporting system to ensure that any breaches are reported without any delays to the NPPO or authorised body NPPO approved body

To align with the text used in para 14, sentence 3 (outline of requirements)

South Africa

316.

2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] dash point 15

Substantive - a procedure to control risks related to visitors (e. g. records of visitors)

delete as this seems contrary to the dash points in previous section (ie restricting access to only authorised staff) and will be addressed in the new dash points below.

Australia

317.2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] dash point 17

Technical - procedures for disposal of waste decontamination of waste

Disposal procedures may include a processes for decontamination based on risk

Australia

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[40] dash point 19 new

Editorial - a means to control and register the entry of authorized staff and visitors (e.g. escorting visitors, visitor access restrictions, record of visitors)

Highlighting procedures for access to PEQ station and areas within it

Australia

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[40] dash point 20 new

Substantive - a procedure to ensure that all staff are adequately qualified, including training where appropriate. This may include a process for assuring ongoing competency of the personnel operating in and those responsible for operation of the PEQ station.

From previous section with suggested modification to include provision for ongoing competency training and assessment for personnel.

Australia

320.

2.4.2 Procédures techniques et opérationnelles

[40] Tiret 1

Tiret 2

Tiret 7

De fond …la quantité de végétaux et produits végétaux

des mesures de désinfestation/désinfection de

la station avant l'introduction de matériel destiné au triage ou en

cas de présence d'organismes

nuisibles

des mesures appropriées pour détecter les organismes nuisibles dans la station.., notamment à l'aide de pièges, etc.

Consistance BURUNDI

321. 2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] 1. Indent 52. Indent 113. Indent 124. After Indent 18

1. Substantive2. Substantive3. Editorial4. Substantive

- use of specific containment confinement equipment (e.g. biological safety cabinets)

…- criteria for what

constitutes a breach of quarantine confinement, and a reporting system to ensure that any

1. Replace the word “containment” by “confinement” as it is more appropriate and for consistency throughout the standard but refer to comments under Para. 5 and the General Comments section. Add the word “safety” as per explanation provided under Para. 28 and for better use of technical/scientific terms.

CANADA

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breaches are reported without any delays to the NPPO or authorized body

- provision for assessment and control (e.g. maintenance and calibration) of critical equipment (e.g. autoclaves and biological safety cabinets)

- effective contingency plans for disruptions to or failures of quarantine (e.g. through fires, accidental release of plants or pests from the station, electrical outages or other emergencies)

New indent after Indent 18:- use of

dedicated/disposable personal protective equipment

2. Add the word “biological” as per explanation above.

3. Delete the word “through” as it is superfluous and for better grammatical flow.

4. Add a new indent. Para. 39 provides an extensive list of operational requirements that should be included in a procedural manual – the new indent is also important and is listed as a specification in Annex 1 for most types of quarantine pests.

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[40] Add an indent

Substantive -a procedure for dealing with non-compliances including...infested with quarantine pests and the preservation of specimans if required -a procedure to control the risks related to visitors (eg.regulting their entry)

Pest occurrence need to be dealt with.

China

323. 2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] 2nd, 4th, 5th, 6th, 11th , 16th

, 17th and 18th bullets

Te Technical and operational requirements may include as appropriate:

- provision for the number of plants in a PEQ station not to

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

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Technical

Technical

Editorial

Technical

Technical

Technical

Technical

Technical

exceed the capacity of the station in a way that could impede inspection or compromise quarantine

- provision of disinfestations of the station before introduction of plants material for screening or in the event of pest occurrence…

- a procedure to enable full traceability of the consignments through the PEQ station (the traceability system should use a unique identifier throughout the process of plant consignment arrival, handling, treatment and testing to release)

- use of specific containment equipment (e.g. biological cabinets, cages)

- appropriate handling and sanitation procedures to prevent the spread of pests organisms on hands, cutting tools, footwear and clothing, as well as procedures for disinfestations disinfections of surfaces…

- provision for assessment and control (e.g. maintenance and calibration) of critical

To adjust to the scope.Screening is not the main objective to use a PEQ station and always the facility has to be disinfected before the introduction of new material

To clarify that not necessarily plants are individually identified.

To clarify

Issue related to pest and not to organisms

There is no infection of tools, etc

There is no definition of critical equipment. Most part of equipments have to be assessed, controlled and maintained.

It is risky to dispose of infested consignments not inactivated.

Packaging and substrate must also be decontaminaed

There is no definition for “quarantine document”. Item 2.4.3 describes documents , but not “quarantine documents”

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equipment (e.g. autoclaves and safety cabinets, environmental register and control equipment)…

- provision for disposal and inactivation of infested consignments,

- procedures for decontamination of waste including packaging and substrate

- procedures that describe how quarantine documents are reviewed, amended and controlled.

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[40] De fond des mesures de désinfestation/désinfection de

la station avant l'introduction de matériel destiné au triage ou en

cas de présence d'organismes

nuisibles

des mesures appropriées pour détecter les organismes nuisibles dans la station.

Consistance R.D. CONGO, TOGO

325. 2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] Indent 4 Substantive

Substantive

a procedure to enable full traceability of the consignments through the PEQ station (the traceability system should use a unique identifier throughout the process of plant arrival, handling, treatment and testing to release or destruction)

provision for monitoring for pest occurrence in station using traps

In some cases the plants may have to be destroyed

IASPC-GABON

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Indent 13

Substantive

and other devices etc.

a schedule for internal and external audits to check that the station meets the PEQ requirements (e.g. structural integrity and hygiene requirements)

To cover other device in addition to traps

To allow external auditing of the PEQ by other bodies

326.

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[40] Tiret 2

Tiret 7

De fond -des mesures de désinfestation/désinfection de la station avant l'introduction de matériel destiné au triage ou en cas de présence d'organismes nuisibles-des mesures appropriées pour détecter les organismes nuisibles dans la station., notamment à l'aide de pièges, etc.

Consistance

Qualifier les mesures; Il n’y a pas qui les pièges qui peuvent permettre la détection des organismes nuisiles

Côte d’Ivoire

327. 2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] 1st sentence

2nd indent

3rd indent

4th indent

6th indent

Editorial

Editorial

Editorial

Substantive

Editorial

Technical and operacional requirements should be documented and may incluye

-provision for disinfestations of the station befote introduction of material for screening or in the event of pest occurrence

- adequate spatial separation of different consignments or lots within the station

- a system to enable full traceability of the consignments through the PEQ station (the traceability system should use a unique identifier throughout the process of plant arrival,

All procedures should be documented

Grammar

Consistency with traceability system refered to in the same sentence

Grenada

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9th indent

10th indent

14th indent

16th indent

18th indent

Editorial

Editorial

Editorial

Substantive

Substantive

Substantive

handling, treatment and testing to release)

- appropriate handling and sanitation procedures to prevent the spread of organisms on hands, cutting tools, footwear and clothing, as well as procedures for disinfections of surfaces

- provision for monitoring pest occurence in station using traps etc.

- a documented procedure that describes how plants are sampled and transported to diagnostic laboratorios for the testing of quarantine pests

- criteria for determining what constitutes a breach of quarantine confinement, and a reporting system to ensure that any breaches are reported without any delays to the NPPO or authorised body

- a procedure for dealing with non-compliances including the appropriate treatment or destruction and disposal of plant material

Included in indent 14

Quarantine documents is an ambiguous and broad term and may lend itself to misinterpretation.

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infested with quarantine pests

- Procedures that describe how documents pertaining to the PEQ station and operations are reviewed, atended and controlled.

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[40] Bullet 4

Bullet 7

Bullet 9

Bullet 12

Bullet 18

Editorial

Substantive

Substantive

-a procedure to enable full traceability of the consignments through the PEQ facity (the traceability system should use a unique identifier throughout the process of plant arrival, handling, treatment and testing to possible release or destruction)

-provision for monitoring for pest occurrence in station using traps and other devices

a procedure that describes how plants are handled, sampled and transported to diagnostic laboratories for the testing of quarantine pests

A schedule for internal and external audits to check that the facility meets the PEQ requirements (e.g. structural integrity and hygiene requirements)

Add bullet. Procedure for possible collaboration with other agencies

To make provision for external audit

This activity is important for developing NPPOs but not captured in the document

Kenya

329. 2.4.2 Technical and [40] Amendment substantive - a procedure for dealing Specimens may need to be kept for Korea

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operational procedures

of existing dashpoints 14 and 15

with non-compliances including……infested with quarantine pests and the preservation of specimens if required

- a procedure to control the risks related to visitors (eg regulating their entry)

further identification work or for litigation.

The example was not felt to be useful.

330.

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[40] Indent 8

Indent 9

Substantive

Substantive

....... quarantine regulated pests, that may .......

....... testing of quarantine regulated pests.

To be consistent with the scope of this standard

Malaysia

331. 2.4.2 Procedimientos técnicos y operativos

[40] Sangría 1, Sangría 4, Sangría 8Sangría 12, 13 14

Editorial

Sustancial

Los requisitos técnicos y operativos podrán incluir, según sea apropiado:

- previsión del número de plantas en la estación de CPE cuarentenaria que no exceda la capacidad de la estación de tal forma que pueda impedir la inspección o comprometer la cuarentena

- previsión de desinfestación de la estación antes de introducir material para preselección o en el caso de la presencia de una plaga

- separación espacial adecuada de diferentes envíos o lotes dentro de la estación, cuando sea apropiado

- un procedimiento que permita la rastreabilidad completa de los envíos

Redacción más clara México

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en toda la estación de CPE cuarentenaria (el sistema de rastreabilidad debería tener un identificador exclusivo durante todo el proceso de llegada de la planta, su manipulación, tratamiento y pruebas para su liberación)

- uso de equipo de contención específico (por ejemplo, gabinetes biológicos)

- procedimientos apropiados de manipulación y saneamiento para evitar la dispersión de organismos en las manos, herramientas de cortar, calzados y ropa, así como procedimientos para desinfectar las superficies

- disponer del monitoreo para la presencia de plagas en la estación utilizando trampas, etc.

- inspección y/o prueba adecuada para detectar plagas cuarentenarias reglamentadas que podrán estar asociadas con las plantas

- un procedimiento que describa la forma en que se toman muestras a las plantas y que se transportan a los laboratorios de

Acordes con la definición de plaga reglamentada incluida en la NIMF no. 5 que incluye tanto las plagas cuarentenarias como las plagas no cuarentenarias reglamentadas objeto de regulación.

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diagnóstico para realizar pruebas para las plagas cuarentenarias

- criterios para lo que constituye una trasgresión del confinamiento cuarentenario, y un sistema de notificación para asegurar que cualquier trasgresión se dé a conocer sin retraso alguno a la ONPF u organismo autorizado

- disponer de la evaluación y el control (por ejemplo, mantenimiento y calibración) del equipo crítico (por ejemplo, autoclaves y gabinetes de seguridad)

- planes de contingencia eficaces para los trastornos imprevistos de la cuarentena o fallas en ésta (por ejemplo, por incendios, liberación accidental de plantas o plagas de la estación, apagones eléctricos u otros tipos de emergencias)

- un calendario de auditorías internas para verificar que la estación cumple con los requisitos de la CPE estación cuarentenaria (por ejemplo, requisitos de la integridad estructural e higiene)

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- un procedimiento para abordar los casos de incumplimiento incluido el tratamiento inapropiado o la destrucción del material vegetal infestado con plagas cuarentenarias

- un procedimiento para controlar riesgos relacionados con los visitantes (por ejemplo, registros de visitantes)

- disponer de procedimientos para la eliminación de envíos infestados

- procedimientos para la descontaminación de desechos

- procedimientos que describan la forma en que se revisan, enmiendan y controlan los documentos cuarentenarios.

332. 2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] Bullet 4, row 3 and 4

Indent 7

Indent 13

Substantive

substantive

substantive

……(the traceability system should use a unique identifier throughout the process of plant arrival, handling, treatment and testing to release or destroy)

provision for monitoring of pest occurrence in station using traps and other devices.

a schedule for internal and external audits to check that the station meets

In some cases the plants may have to be destroyed.

Plant and other devices can also be use for pest monitoring

Internal audit alone may not be enough to give adequate assessment of a PEQ

NIGERIA

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substantive

the PEQ requirements (e.g. structural integrity and hygiene requirements)

collaboration and cooperation between agencies and other stations

333. 2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] Indent 1

Indent 2

Indent 6

Translation

Translation

Editorial

20. - previsión del disposiciones para que el número de plantas en la estación de CPE que no exceda la capacidad de la estación de tal forma que pueda impedir la inspección o comprometer la cuarentena

- provision for the number of plants in a PEQ station not to exceed the capacity of the station in a way that could impede inspection or compromise quarantine

21. - previsión de disposiciones para la desinfestación de la estación antes de introducir material para preselección o en el caso de la presencia de una plaga

- provision for of disinfestations of the station before introduction of material for screening or in the event of pest occurrence

22. -procedimientos sanitarios y apropiados de manipulación apropiados y saneamiento para evitar la dispersión de organismos en por medio de

1. More fitting terms.

2. More appropriate terms, to prevent confusion.

3. Better wording in Spanish, for easier understanding.

4. Better wording in Spanish, for easier understanding.

ORISAEL SALVADORPANAMA

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Indent 10

Indent 11

Indent 12

Translation

Editorial

Translation

Translation

las manos, herramientas de cortar, calzados y ropa, así como procedimientos para desinfectar las superficies

- appropriate handling and sanitation procedures to prevent the spread of organisms on hands, cutting tools, footwear and clothing, as well as procedures for disinfections of surfaces

23. -disponer disposiciones para un sistema del monitoreo para la presencia detección de plagas en la estación utilizando trampas, etc.

- provision for monitoring for pest occurrence in station using traps etc.

24. -criterios para lo que constituye una trasgresión del confinamiento cuarentenario, y un sistema de notificación para asegurar que cualquier trasgresión se dé a conocer sin retraso alguno a la ONPF u organismo autorizado

- criteria for what constitutes a breach of quarantine confinement, and a reporting system to ensure that any breaches are reported without any delays to the NPPO or authorized body

5. Unnecessary.

6. Better wording, consistent with Indent 7.

7. More fitting terms, makes text clearer.

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Indent 14

Indent 15

Indent 16

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Translation

Substantive

25. - disponer de disposiciones para la evaluación y el control (por ejemplo, mantenimiento y calibración) del equipo crítico (por ejemplo, autoclaves y gabinetes de seguridad)

- provision for assessment and control (e.g. maintenance and calibration) of critical equipment (e.g. autoclaves and safety cabinets)

26. -planes de contingencia eficaces en caso de interrupciones o fallas en para los trastornos de la cuarentena o fallas en ésta (por ejemplo, por incendios, liberación accidental de plantas o plagas de la estación, apagones eléctricos u otros tipos de emergencias)

- effective contingency plans for disruptions to or failures of quarantine (e.g. through fires, accidental release of plants or pests from the station, electrical outages or other emergencies)

27. - un calendario programa de auditorías internas para verificar que la estación cumple con los requisitos de la CPE (por ejemplo,

8. More fitting term.

9. More accurate term.

10. Improves comprehension, avoids confusion.

11. More fitting term.

12. More specific, for easier understanding and to differentiate from indent 14

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Indent 18

Substantive

Substantive

requisitos de la integridad estructural e higiene)

- a schedule for internal audits to check that the station meets the PEQ requirements (e.g. structural integrity and hygiene requirements)

28. - un procedimiento para abordar tratar los casos de incumplimiento incluido el tratamiento apropiado o la destrucción del material vegetal infestado con plagas cuarentenarias

- a procedure for dealing with non-compliances including the appropriate treatment or destruction of plant material infested with quarantine pests

29. - un procedimiento (por ejemplo, registros de visitantes), para controlar riesgos relacionados con los visitantes (por ejemplo, registros de visitantes)

- a procedure (e. g. records of visitors) to control risks related to visitors (e. g. records of visitors)

30. -disponer de procedimientos disposiciones para la eliminación de envíos infestados con otras plagas que se determinen como cuarentenarias no

13. More specific. Another important factor to consider.

14. More specific term, to prevent misinterpretation.

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especificadas en los requisitos fitosanitarios de importación.

- provision for disposal of infested consignments infested with other quarantine pests not specified in the requirements.

31. -procedimientos para la descontaminación de todo tipo de desechos y de las instalaciones

- procedures for decontamination of all kind of waste and of facilities

32. -procedimientos que describan la forma en que se revisan, enmiendan y controlan los documentos cuarentenarios relativos a la estación de CPE.

- procedures that describe how quarantine documents relevant to the operations of the PEQ station are reviewed, amended and controlled.

334.

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[40] Amendment of existing dashpoints 14 and 15

substantive - a procedure for dealing with non-compliances including……infested with quarantine pests and the preservation of specimens if required

- a procedure to control the risks related to visitors (eg regulating their entry)

Specimens may need to be kept for further identification work or for litigation.

The example was not felt to be useful.

Philippines

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[40] Substantive - appropriate handling and sanitation procedures to prevent the spread of organisms on hands, cutting tools, footwear and clothing, as well as procedures for disinfections/disinfestations of surfaces

- provision for monitoring for pest occurrence in station using or appropriate methode etc.

- criteria for what constitutes a breach of quarantine confinement, and a reporting system to ensure that any breaches are reported without any delays to the NPPO or NPPO authorized body approved body

- a procedure for dealing with non-compliances including the appropriate treatment or destruction of plants material and plant products infested/fected with quarantine pests

- provision for proper disposal of infested consignments

For consistency and clarity

To avoid restriction and give more option

For consistency and clarity

To emphasis on good practices and for consistency

Seychelles

336. 2.4.2 Technical and operational events

[40] Indent 4 Substantive a procedure to enable full traceability of the consignments through the PEQ station (the traceability system should use a unique identifier throughout the process of plant arrival, handling, treatment and testing to release or destruction)

In some cases the plants may have to be destroyed

Swaziland

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Indent 13

Substantive

Substantive

provision for monitoring for pest occurrence in station using traps and other devices etc.

a schedule for internal and external audits to check that the station meets the PEQ requirements (e.g. structural integrity and hygiene requirements)

To cover other device in addition to traps

To allow external auditing of the PEQ by other bodies

Swaziland

Swaziland

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[40] Sentence1

2nd indent

3rd indent

Editorial Technical and operationalrequirements should be documentedand may include as appropriate:

- provision of for disinfestations ofthe station before introduction ofmaterial for screening or in the eventof pest occurrence

- adequate spatial separation ofdifferent consignments or lots within the station as appropriate

All procedures should be documented

Grammar

Clarity

Trinidad and Tobago

338. 2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] 6th indent

7th indent

Editorial - appropriate handling andsanitation procedures toprevent the spread oforganisms on hands, cuttingtools, footwear and clothing,as well as procedures fordisinfections of surfaces

- provision for monitoring for pestoccurrence in station usingtraps etc.

Grammar

Grammar

Trinidad and Tobago

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9th indent

10th indent

- a documented procedure thatdescribes how plants aresampled and transported todiagnostic laboratories forthe testing of quarantinepests

- criteria for determining whatconstitutes a breach ofquarantine confinement, anda reporting system to ensurethat any breaches arereported without any delaysto the NPPO or authorizedbody

Clarity

Clarity

339.

2.4.2 Technical and operational procedures

[40] 14th indent

16th indent

18th indent

Substantive - a procedure for dealing withnon-compliances including the appropriate treatment or destruction and disposal of plant material infested withquarantine pests

- provision for disposal of infestedConsignments

-procedures that describe howquarantine documents pertaining tothe PEQ station and operations arereviewed, amended and controlled.

Technical adjustment

Inclduded in indent 14

Quarantine documents is an ambiguous and broad term and may lend itself tomisinterpretation.

Trinidad and Tobago

340. 2.4.3 Documentation [41] Title Substantive 2.4.3 3.2.3.3 Documentation To bring headings into line with restructured text

Australia

341. 2.4.3 Documentation [41] 3.2.3.3 Documentation New Zealand

342.

2.4.3 Documentation [42] Sentence 1, 1st indent

Substantive A list of PEQ staff and other persons authorized to enter the station (or specific parts thereof).

More specific guidance Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

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343. 2.4.3 Documentation [42] new dash point

Substantive - procedures manual A procedures manual is an essential document for a PEQ station

Australia

344.2.4.3 Documentation [42] Bullet 1 Substantive Add bullet. A record of all plants

or regulated articles in the PEQ facility and their source of origin

The record of origin not captured in the document

Kenya

345. 2.4.3 Documentation [42] New dash point

Substantive - a register of treatments performed on imported plants.

To provide an auditable trail of disinfestation section and treatment.

Australia

346.

2.4.3 Documentation [42] Indent 2 Translation 33. -un plano de ubicación del sitio de la estación de CPE que muestre su ubicación en el sitio y todas las entradas y puntos de acceso a la estación

- a site plan of the PEQ station showing the location of the PEQ station on the site and all station entrances and access points

1. Accurate term, more specific. ORISAEL SALVADORPANAMA

347.

2.4.3 Documentación [42] Item 2 Editorial un plan plan del sitio de la estación de CPE que muestre su ubicación en el sitio y todas las entradas y puntos de acceso a la estación

Un plan es un modelo sistemático de una actuación pública o privada, que se elabora anticipadamente para dirigirla y encauzarla.Mientras que un plano es la representación esquemática, en dos dimensiones y a determinada escala, de un terreno, una población, una máquina, una construcción, etc.

Perú

348.

2.4.3 Documentation [42] 3rd indent Substantive - a register recording system for of visitors.

Clarification of requirements Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

349. 2.4.3 Documentation [42] Indent 4 Editorial - a record of all PEQ activities conducted in the station (e.g. staff activities, treatments and disposal of consignments of plants

Add the words “of plants” for consistency throughout the standard.

CANADA

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in quarantine)

350.

2.4.3 Documentation [42] Indent 8

Indent 5

Substantive

editorial

A register of the source of materials

A record of all consignments of plants in the station

This is a new indent IASPC-GABON

351.2.4.3 Documentation [42] 5th dashpoint Substantive - a register of all accessions of

plants brought into or released from PEQ

Clear account of current practice New Zealand

352.2.4.3 Documentation [42] Indent 5 Substantive a register of all consignments of

plants and plant products in the station including the source.

Consistency and clarity Seychelles

353. 2.4.3 Documentación [42] Editorial Podrán requerirse los siguientes documentos:

- una lista del personal autorizado para entrar a la estación

- un plano del sitio de la estación de CPE que muestre su ubicación en el sitio y todas las entradas y puntos de acceso a la estación

- un registro de visitantes- un registro de todas las

actividades de CPE realizadas en la estación (por ejemplo, actividades del personal, tratamientos y eliminación de envíos en cuarentena)

- un registro de todos los envíos de plantas en la estación

- registros de capacitación y conocimientos del personal

Aclara la redacción Ecuador

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- registros de inspecciones y pruebas.

354.

2.4.3 Documentation [42] New indent

4th indent

Delete indent 7

Substantive

Substantive

Substantive

-Technical procedures and operacional manuals

- a record of all PEQ activities conducted in the station (e.g. staff activities, inspection, testing, treatments and disposal of consignments in quarantine)

-

Necessary addition

Condensed in indent 4 to avoid repetition

Grenada

355. 2.4.3 Documentación [42] Oración 1 Sustancial/Editorial Podrán requerirse los siguientes documentos:

- una lista del personal autorizado para entrar a la estación

- un plano del sitio de la estación de CPE cuarentenaria que muestre su ubicación en el sitio y todas las entradas y puntos de acceso a la estación

- un registro de visitantes- un registro de todas las

actividades de CPE cuarentena realizadas en la estación (por ejemplo, actividades del personal, tratamientos y eliminación de envíos en cuarentena)

- un registro de todos los envíos de plantas en la estación

- registros de capacitación

Redacción más clara México

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y conocimientos del personal

- registros de inspecciones y pruebas.

356.

2.4.3 Documentation [42] Indent 7

New Indent

Substantive

Substantive

a register record of all consignments of plants in the station

records of the source of material brought to the station

For traceability and data purposes

NIGERIA

357.

2.4.3 Documentation [42] New 8th indent

Substantive - records of equipment (inventory control)

In para 32, bullet 7 under physical requirements equipment is included and an inventory of that equipment is therefore necessary

South Africa

358.

2.4.3 Documentation [42] Indent 5

Indent 8

Editorial

Substantive

A register record of all consignments of plants in the station

A register of the source of materials

Records are more detailed that a simple register

This is a new indent

Swaziland

Swaziland

359.

2.4.3 Documentation [42] New Indent

4th Indent

7th Indent

Substantive - Technical procedures and operationalManuals

- a record of all PEQ activitiesconducted in the station (e.g. staff activities, inspection, testing, treatments and disposal of consignments inquarantine)

- records of inspections andtesting.

Necessary addition

Condensed in indent 4 to avoid repetition

Trinidad and Tobago

360. 2.5 Diagnosis and removal of infestations of

[43] Title Substantive 2.5 3.2.3 Diagnosis and removal of infestations of quarantine pests or vectors

To bring headings into line with restructured text

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quarantine pests or vectors

361.

2.5 Diagnosis and removal of infestations of quarantine pests or vectors

[43] Title Editorial Diagnosis and removal of infestations of quarantine pests or vectors

Simplified text Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

362.

2.5 Diagnosis and removal of infestations of quarantine pests or vectors

[43] Substantive Diagnosis and removal of infestations of quarantine regulated pests or vectors

To be consistent with the scope of this standard

Malaysia

363.

2.5 Diagnóstico y eliminación de infestaciones de plagas cuarentenarias o vectores

[43] Oración 1 Sustancial 2.5 Diagnóstico y eliminación de infestaciones de plagas cuarentenarias o vectores

Acordes con la definición de plaga reglamentada incluida en la NIMF no. 5 que contiene tanto las plagas cuarentenarias como las plagas no cuarentenarias reglamentadas objeto de regulación.

México

364.

2.5 Diagnosis and removal of infestations of quarantine pests or vectors

[44] Sentence 1 Substantive PEQ stations should have systems in place to regularly survey the PEQ station and its surroundings for quarantine pests using appropriate procedures and to detect and identify quarantine pests or potential vectors of quarantine pests.

Add new text to clearly indicate that it is important to frequently monitor the PEQ station and its surroundings to be able to quickly detect any quarantine pests within the PEQ station or any potential escape of pests from the PEQ station.

CANADA

365.

2.5 Diagnosis and removal of infestations of quarantine pests or vectors

[44] 2nd sentence Substantive It is essential that the PEQ station has access to diagnostic expertise either from the be held by staff within the station or other means associated with the PEQ station.

Some countries may not have the expertise but do have systems in place to ensure that they have access to it.

Australia

366.

2.5 Diagnosis and removal of infestations of quarantine pests or vectors

[44] Sentence 2 Substantive It is essential that diagnostic expertise be held by staff within or associated with the PEQ station. In any case the final diagnostic decision rests with the NPPO

Repetition of information already in the previous sentence. Reminder that the decision rests with the NPPO.

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

367. 2.5 Diagnosis and [44] Sentence 2 Editorial 34. Es importante que el 1. Unnecessary ORISA

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removal of infestations of quarantine pests or vectors

personal dentro de la estación de CPE o asociado con ésta, posea los conocimientos de diagnóstico.

It is essential that diagnostic expertise be held by staff within or associated with the PEQ station.

EL SALVADORPANAMA

368.

2.5 Diagnosis and removal of infestations of quarantine pests or vectors

[44] Add sentence at end

Substantive Reconfirmation of quarantine pest identifications should be undertaked as necessary.

Reconfirmation is a necessary process on some cases.

China

369.

2.5 Diagnóstico y eliminación de infestaciones de plagas cuarentenarias o vectores

[44] Editorial Las estaciones de CPE deberían contar con sistemas para detectar e identificar plagas cuarentenarias o posibles vectores de plagas cuarentenarias. Es importante que el personal dentro de la estación de CPE o asociado con ésta, posea los conocimientos de diagnóstico.

Aclara la redacción Ecuador

370.

2.5 Diagnosis and removal of infestations of quarantine pests or vectors

[44] Row 1 and Row 2

Substantive quarantine regulated pests To be consistent with the scope of this standard

Malaysia

371. 2.5 Diagnóstico y eliminación de infestaciones de plagas cuarentenarias o vectores

[44] Oración 1 y Oración 2

Sustancial/Editorial Las estaciones de CPE cuarentenarias deberían contar con sistemas para detectar e identificar plagas cuarentenarias reglamentadas o posibles vectores de plagas cuarentenarias éstas. Es importante que el personal dentro de la estación de CPE cuarentenaria o asociado con ésta, posea los

Redacción más clara

Acordes con la definición de plaga reglamentada incluida en la NIMF no. 5 que contiene tanto las plagas cuarentenarias como las plagas no cuarentenarias reglamentadas objeto de regulación.

México

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conocimientos de diagnóstico

372.

2.5 Diagnóstico y eliminación de infestaciones de plagas cuarentenarias o vectores

[45] Editorial Las estaciones de CPE deberían tener acceso a los conocimientos e instalaciones o equipo para tratar, eliminar o destruir lo más rápido posible, cualquier material vegetal infestado que se haya detectado en la estación de CPE.

Aclara la redacción Ecuador

373.

2.5 Diagnosis and removal of infestations of quarantine pests or vectors

[44] Add sentence at end

Substantive Reconfirmation of quarantine pest identifications should be undertaken as necessary

Reconfirmation is a necessary part of the process in some cases

Philippines

374.

2.5 Diagnóstico y eliminación de infestaciones de plagas cuarentenarias o vectores

[45] Oración 1 Sustancial/Editorial Las estaciones de CPE cuarentenarias deberían tener acceso a los conocimientos e instalaciones o equipo para tratar, eliminar o destruir lo más rápido posible, cualquier material vegetal infestado que se haya detectado en la estación de CPE misma

Redacción más clara México

375. 2.6 Audit of PEQ stations

[46] Title Substantive 2.6 3.2.4 Audit of PEQ stations To bring headings into line with restructured text

Australia

376. 2.6 Audit of PEQ stations

[46] As per 19 Substantive 3.2.4 Audit of PRQ stations New Zealand

377.

2.6 Audit of PEQ stations

[47] Sentence 1 Substantive The NPPO or an NPPO-approved body should ensure that the audit PEQ station is audited on a regular basis to ensure that the station meets the physical and operational requirements and the requirements concerning the location.

The NPPO can decide how to audit the PEQ station.

Changes in the surroundings of the PEQ-station might lead to changes in the location requirements.

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

378. 2.6 Audit of PEQ stations

[47] Sentence 1 Substantive The NPPO or an NPPO-approved - authorized body should audit the PEQ station on a regular basis to ensure that the station

Same explanation as for Para. 14 (sentence 3).

CANADA

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meets the physical and operational requirements.

379.

2.6 Auditoría de las estaciones de CPE

[47] Editorial La ONPF o un organismo aprobado por la ONPF debería auditar la estación de CPE regularmente para asegurar que la estación cumplea con los requisitos físicos y operativos.

Aclara la redacción Ecuador

380.

2.6 Auditoría de las estaciones de CPE

[47] Oración 1 Sustancial/Editorial La ONPF o un organismo aprobado por la ONPF debería auditar la estación de CPE cuarentenaria regularmente para asegurar que la estación misma cumple con los requisitos físicos y operativos.

Redacción más clara México

381. 3. Conclusion of PEQ

[48] Title Substantive 3. 4. Conclusion of PEQ To bring headings into line with restructured text

Australia

382.3. Conclusion of PEQ

[48] Title Substantive New Title:3. Conclusion of Termination of PEQ

Replace the word “conclusion” by “termination” as “termination” is more appropriate than conclusion”.

CANADA

383.

3. Conclusion of PEQ

[48] Title Editorial 3. Finalization Conclusion of the PEQ process

To clarify COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

384. 3. Conclusion of PEQ [48] Substantive Completion of PEQ process clarity New Zealand

385.

3. Conclusion of PEQ

[48] Subtitle Editorial 35. 3. Conclusión Finalización de la CPE

3. Conclusion of PEQ

1. More fitting term in Spanish, to prevent confusion.

ORISAEL SALVADORPANAMA

386.

3. Conclusion of PEQ

[49] Sentence 1 Editorial If pPlants found to be free of quarantine pests, and which meet the other regulatory requirements of the importing country they can may be released from quarantine.

Simplification Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

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387.

3. Conclusion of PEQ

[49] Sentence 1 Substantive If Consignments of plants should only be released from PEQ if they have been shown to meet the phytosanitary import requirements of the country, are found to be free of quarantine pests, and meet the any other regulatory requirements of the importing country, they can be released from quarantine.

New text is added as it is important to specify the requirements under which consignments of plants should be released from PEQ and to be consistent with Section 2 (Para. 23) of the standard.

CANADA

388.

3. Conclusion of PEQ

[49] Sentence 1 Substantive If plants are found to be free of quarantine pests, and meet the other regulatory requirements of the importing country, they can be released from quarantine within a reasonable time frame determined by the NPPO

Time frame of materials in PEQ facility not factored in the document

Kenya

389.

3. Conclusion de la quarantaine post-entrée

[49] Ligne 1 De fond Lorsqu'un envoi confiné est déclaré exempt d'organismes de quarantaine et satisfait à la réglementation phytosanitaire du pays importateur, l'envoi peut être libéré.

consistance BURUNDI

390.

3. Conclusión de la CPE

[49] Oración 1 Sustancial Si las plantas se encuentran libres de plagas cuarentenarias reglamentadas y cumplen con los otros requisitos reglamentarios del país importador, éstas se pueden liberar de la cuarentena

Acordes con la definición de plaga reglamentada incluida en la NIMF no. 5 que contiene tanto las plagas cuarentenarias como las plagas no cuarentenarias reglamentadas objeto de regulación.

México

391. 3. Conclusion of PEQ

[49] Row 1 Substantive ....... quarantine regulated pests, and meet .......

To be consistent with the scope of this standard

Malaysia

392.

3. Conclusion de la quarantaine post-entrée

[49] De fond Lorsqu'un envoi confiné est déclaré exempt d'organismes de quarantaine et satisfait à la réglementation phytosanitaire du pays importateur, l'envoi peut être libéré.

consistance R.D. CONGO, TOGO

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393.

3. Conclusion of PEQ

[49] Entire para Technical If plants are found to be free of quarantine pests, and meet the other regulatory requirements of the importing country, they can be released from quarantine.

Other requirements are not related to the PEQ station

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

394.

3. Conclusión de la CPE

[49] Editorial Si las plantas se encuentran libres de plagas cuarentenarias y cumplen con los otros requisitos reglamentarios del país importador, éstas se pueden deben liberarse de la cuarentena.

Aclara la redacción Ecuador

395.

3. Conclusion de la quarantaine post-entrée

[49]Ligne 1 De fond

Lorsqu'un envoi confiné est déclaré exempt d'organismes de quarantaine et satisfait à la réglementation phytosanitaire du pays importateur, l'envoi peut être libéré.

Consistance : qualifier la règlementation ; ils’agit d’une règlementation phytosanitaire

Côte d’Ivoire

396.

3. Conclusion of PEQ

[49] Substantive If plants are found to be free of quarantine pests, and meet the other regulatory phytosanitary requirements of the importing country, they can be released from quarantine

Consistency Seychelles

397.

3. Conclusion of PEQ

[50] 1st sentence Substantive If consignments of plants are found to be have regulated/quarantine pests associated with them infested with quarantine pests they should either be treated to remove the pest infection or be destroyed.

Using “infestation” excludes contaminating pests.

Australia

398.

3. Conclusion of PEQ

[50] Sentence 1 Editorial If plants are found to be infested with quarantine pests they should either be treated to remove infection the infestation or be destroyed.

Replace the word “infection” with “infestation” as “infestation” is defined in ISPM No. 5 Glossary of phytosanitary terms and more appropriate. Infestation includes infection. Add the word “the” for better grammatical flow.

CANADA

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399.

3. Conclusion of PEQ

[50] Sentence 1 Editorial I If plants are found to be infested with quarantine pests they should either be treated to remove infestation or be destroyed.

For consistancy IASPC-GABON

400.

3. Conclusion of PEQ

[50] 1st sentence Substantive If plants are found to be infested with quarantine pests they should either be treated to remove infestation or be destroyed

Use of the most appropriate defined term

Grenada

401.

3. Conclusion of PEQ

[50] Sentence 1row1

sub If plants are found to be infested with quarantine pests they should either be treated to remove infectation infestation or be destroyed

For consistency NIGERIA

402.

3. Conclusion of PEQ

[50] Sentence 1 Substantive 36. Si las plantas se encuentran infestadas de plagas cuarentenarias deberían aplicárseles tratamiento para eliminar la infección infestación o bien destruirlasse.

If plants are found to be infested with quarantine pests they should either be treated to remove infection or be destroyed

1. More accurate term, infestation includes infection – NIMF n°5

2. Consistent wording.

ORISAEL SALVADORPANAMA

403.

3. Conclusion of PEQ

[50] Sentence 1 editorial If plants are found to be infested with quarantine pests they should either be treated to remove infection infestation or be destroyed

For consistency Swaziland

404.

3. Conclusion of PEQ

[50] Sentence 1 Substantive If plants are found to be infestedwith quarantine pests they shouldeither be treated to remove infectioninfestation or be destroyed.

Use of the most appropriate defined term

Trinidad and Tobago

405.

3. Conclusion of PEQ

[50] 1st row substantive If plants are found to be free of quarantine pests they should either be treated to remove infection infestation or be destroyed.

The term infestation by definition includes infection.

USA

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406.

3. Conclusion of PEQ

[50] new sentence 2

sustantive Destruction should be in manner that removes any possibility of movement of the pest from the PEQ station eg chemical destruction, incineration, autoclaving. In special circumstances infested or potentially infested plants may be shipped to anothre area for release or to another PEQ station for further inspection, testing or treatment. In such cases any phytosanitary risks associated with the movement of material should be fully addressed.

Additional guidance on destruction.

Clear boundaries around management of risks if material is moved from the PEQ station for further action.

Australia

407.

3. Conclusion of PEQ

[50] Sentence 2 Editorial If pPlants are found to be infested with quarantine pests they should either be treated to remove infection infestation or be

Simplification and correct word. Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

408. 3. Conclusion of PEQ

[50] 2nd sentence Substantive Delete ... to another area for release or

Under normal circumstances infested material should not be released.

China

409.

3. Conclusion of PEQ

[50] Sentence 2 Substantive In special circumstances infested or potentially infested plants may be: shipped to another area for release or - securely shipped to another PEQ station for further inspection, testing or treatment,- returned or shipped under restricted/safe conditions to another country with the agreement of the relevant NPPO- kept as reference material for technical or scientific work under quarantine- shipped to another area for release

Provides more options and includes the responsibility of the NPPO. Shipment should be only allowed under condition that there is no risk of escape of the quarantine pest.

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

410. 3. Conclusion of PEQ

[50] 2nd sentence Substantive Delete …to another area for release or

Under normal circumstances infested material should not be released.

Korea

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411.

3. Conclusión de la CPE

[50] Oración 2 Sustancial Si las plantas se encuentran infestadas de plagas cuarentenarias reglamentadas deberían aplicárseles tratamiento para eliminar la infección o bien destruirse. En circunstancias especiales, las plantas infestadas o potencialmente infestadas podrán enviarse a otra área para la liberación o a otra estación de CPE para realizar inspección, prueba o tratamiento adicionales.

Se propone eliminar la oración No. 2, considerando por ejemplo que en el caso de material propagativo que resultó afectado por virus de interés cuarentenario, sería casi imposible limpiar este tipo de materiales, los cuales irían a destrucción. Habría que identificar quizá otro tipo de materiales donde si sea posible su reacondicionamiento en caso de que resulten positivos a la presencia de bacterias cuarentenarias (por ejemplo).

También se corre riego de diseminación de plagas por trasladar de un lugar a otro, materiales que resultaron positivos a la presencia de plagas cuarentenarias que, nuevamente en el caso de materiales positivos a virus pueden intervenir vectores transmisores de la plagas.

Finalmente, si como menciona el párrafo 34 las estaciones cuarentenarias son operadas ya sea por la ONPF o estar autorizadas por éstas, sería factible mejor destruir materiales que resultaron afectados por la presencia de plagas cuarentenarias a tener que enviarse a otra área para su liberación o aplicación de tratamientos adicionales en caso de obtener positivos.

México

412. 3. Conclusion of PEQ

[50] 2nd sentence Substantive Delete …to another area for release or

Under normal circumstances infested material should not be released.

Philippines

413. 3. Conclusion de la quarantaine post-entrée

[50] Ligne 1&2 Rédactionnel S'il est avéré qu'un envoi confiné est infesté/infecte par des organismes de quarantaine, il

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devrait être traité pour éliminer l'infestation/infection ou être détruit. Dans des circonstances particulières, les produits végétaux infestés ou potentiellement infestés peuvent être expédiés vers une autre région en vue de leur libération ou vers une autre station de quarantaine post-entrée pour y subir d'autres inspections, analyses ou traitements.

414.3. Conclusion of PEQ

[50] Last sentence

Substantive Add:The conclusion of the PEQ should be reported to NPPO.

The conclusion of PEQ should report to NPPO so that the further action can be taken.

China

415.

3. Conclusion de la quarantaine post-entrée

[50] Rédactionnel S'I S’il est avéré qu'un envoi confiné est infesté/infecte par des organismes de quarantaine, il devrait être traité pour éliminer l'infestation/infection ou être détruit. Dans des circonstances particulières, les produits végétaux infestés ou potentiellement infestés peuvent être expédiés vers une autre région en vue de leur libération ou vers une autre station de quarantaine post-entrée pour y subir d'autres inspections, analyses ou traitements.

consistance R.D. CONGO, TOGO

416. 3. Conclusion of PEQ

[50] Entire para

Editorial

Technical

If plants are found to be infested with quarantine pests they should either be treated to remove infestation infection or be destroyed. In special circumstances infested or potentially infested plants may be shipped to another area for release or to another PEQ station

Defined term.

Sentence introduced into next para.

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for further inspection, testing or treatment.

417.

3. Conclusion of PEQ

[50b]

New para Technical In special circumstances infested or potentially infested plants may be shipped to another area for release or to another PEQ station for further inspection, testing or treatment.

Why to go to another area and not to another PEQ station if plants are infested??The reason to put this sentence in another paragraph is to clearly differentiate special circumstances.

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418.

3. Conclusión de la CPE

[50] Editorial Si las plantas se encuentran infestadas de plagas cuarentenarias deberían aplicárseles tratamiento para eliminar la infección o bien destruirse. En circunstancias especiales, las plantas infestadas o potencialmente infestadas podrán deben enviarse a otra área para la liberación o a otra estación de CPE para realizar inspección, prueba o tratamiento adicionales.

Aclara la redacción Ecuador

419.

3. Conclusion de la quarantaine post-entrée

[50] Ligne 1

Ligne 2

De fond S'il est avéré qu'un envoi confiné est infesté/infecte par des organismes de quarantaine, il devrait être traité pour éliminer l'infestation/infection ou être détruit. Dans des circonstances particulières, les produits végétaux infestés ou potentiellement infestés peuvent être expédiés vers une autre région en vue de leur libération ou vers une autre station de quarantaine post-entrée pour y subir d'autres inspections, analyses ou traitements.

Consistance Côte d’Ivoire

420. 3. Conclusion of PEQ

[50] Row 1 Substantive ....... quarantine regulated pests they should.......

To be consistent with the scope of this standard

Malaysia

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Row 2 Substantive In special circumstances infested or potentially infested plants may be shipped to another area for release or to another PEQ station for further inspection, testing or treatment

Infested or potentially infested plants should not be release under normal circumstances; it should be destroyed or treated. Further clarification on the word “special circumstances” is needed.

Malaysia

421.

3. Conclusion of PEQ

[50] Substantive If plants and plant products are found to be infested/infected with quarantine pests they should either be treated to remove infection/infestation or be destroyed. In special circumstances infested/infected or potentially infected/infested plants and plant products may be shipped to another area for release or to another PEQ station for further inspection, testing or treatment.

Consistency Seychelles

422.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[51] Title Substantive SPECIFICATIONS REQUIREMENTS FOR PEQ STATIONS

The headings in the text all refer to requirements not specifications

Australia

423.

Annex 1. SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[51] Title Technical APPENDIX 1 Annex 1. SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ

STATIONS

An annex is an official part of a standard (prescriptive) and adds technical information to the standard Appendices are not official parts of standards (for information only, not prescriptive).As it is stated in para 52, “One or more of the following requirements may be considered by NPPOs when…”, then there is no prescriptive intention in this document and it should be an Appendix.

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

424.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[51] Substantive Requirements for PEQ stations The headings in the text refer to requiremens

New Zealand

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425.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[52] Sentence 1 Editorial One or more of the following specifications requirements may be considered by NPPOs when determining the requirements for consignments of plants.

More accurate Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

426.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[52] 1st sentence Editorial One or more of the following requirements specifications for PEQ stations may be considered by NPPOs when determining the requirements for consignments of plants.

The title refers to specifications. COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

427.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[52] 1st sentence Substantive One or more of the following requirements may be considered by NPPOs when determining the (PEQ) requirements for consignments of plants.

To differentiate between phytosanitary requirements and Post entry quarantine requirements which may cause confusion

Grenada

428.

ESPECIFICACIONES PARA LAS ESTACIONES DE CPE

[52] Oración 1 Sustancial Al determinar los requisitos para los envíos de plantas, las ONPFs podrán considerar uno o más de los siguientes requisitos. Las especificaciones se basan en la biología de las plagas cuarentenarias reglamentadas potencialmente asociadas con las plantas

México

429.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[52] Sentence 1 Substantive 37. Al determinar establecer los requisitos de CPE para los envíos de plantas, las ONPFs podrán considerar uno o más de los siguientes requisitos.

One or more of the following requirements may be considered by NPPOs when determining the PEQ requirements for consignments of plants.

1. More fitting terms, to differentiate between phytosanitary requirements and PEQ requirements, to avoid confusion.

ORISAEL SALVADORPANAMA

430. SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[52] Sentence 1 Substantive One or more of the followingrequirements may be considered by

To differentiate between phytosanitaryrequirements and Post entry

Trinidad and Tobago

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NPPOs when determining the (PEQ)requirements for consignments ofplants.

quarantinerequirements which may cause confusión.

431.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[52] 2nd sentence Editorial The requirements specifications are based on the biology of quarantine pests potentially associated with the plants.

To ensure consistency of this sentence with the previous sentence and the text in the body of the standard.

Australia

432.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[52] 2nd Sentence Substantive The requirements are based on ….

Following on from above. New Zealand

433.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[52] 2nd row substantive …requirements for consignments of plants for planting. The specifications are based on the biology of quarantine pests…

Global change USA

434.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[52] Add third sentence

Substantive Other requirements may be necessary to address the risks from specific pests

The specifications in the Appendix are not exhaustive.

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

435.

SPÉCIFICATIONS RELATIVES AUX STATIONS DE QUARANTAINE POST

[52] Lignes 2&3 De fond L'un ou plusieurs des aspects suivants peuvent être pris en considération par les ONPV lors de l'établissement des critères auxquels doivent répondre les envois de végétaux et produits végétaux. Les spécifications sont fondées sur la biologie des organismes de quarantaine potentiellement associés à ces végétaux et produits vegetaux.

Consistance BURUNDI

436. SPÉCIFICATIONS RELATIVES AUX STATIONS DE QUARANTAINE POST

[52] De fond L'un ou plusieurs des aspects suivants peuvent être pris en considération par les ONPV lors de l'établissement des critères auxquels doivent répondre les envois de végétaux et produits végétaux. Les spécifications sont fondées sur la biologie des organismes de quarantaine

Consistance R.D. CONGO, TOGO

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potentiellement associés à ces végétaux et produits végétaux.

437.

SPÉCIFICATIONS RELATIVES AUX STATIONS DE QUARANTAINE POST

[52]

Ligne 2

Ligne 3

De fond L'un ou plusieurs des aspects suivants peuvent être pris en considération par les ONPV lors de l'établissement des critères auxquels doivent répondre les envois de végétaux et produits végétaux. Les spécifications sont fondées sur la biologie des organismes de quarantaine potentiellement associés à ces végétaux et produits végétaux.

Consistance Côte d’Ivoire

438.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[52] Row 2 Substantive ....... quarantine regulated pests potentially .......

To be consistent with the scope of this standard

Malaysia

439.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[52] Substantive One or more of the following requirements may be considered by NPPOs when determining the requirements for consignments of plants and plant products. The specifications are based on the biology of quarantine pests potentially associated with the plants and plant products.

Consistency Seychelles

440.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[53] Title Editorial General specifications for PEQ stations

Erased because most part of concepts contained under this item are previously considered in the text.Items not previously considered are 2, 5, 7, 10 and 13 and could be positioned in para 35, 40, 32, 32, 32 respectively.

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

441.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[53] General specifications requirements for PEQ stations

The headings in the text all refer to requirements not specifications

Australia

442.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[53] General comment on the table

substantive Suggest adding a table or restructure an existing table to provide simplified options for developing countries.

USA

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443.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[54] dot point 1 Editorial …from other areas in the PEQ station, including…

Clarity Australia

444.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[54] dot point 2 Editorial Adequate security to ensure plants cannot be accessed or are not removed from the PEQ station...

Clearer wording Australia

445.

ESPECIFICACIONES PARA LAS ESTACIONES DE CPE

[54] Item 2 Editorial Seguridad adecuada para asegurar que las plantas no se saquen sean retiradas de la estación de CPE sin la autorización apropiada

Claridad del texto Perú

446.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[54] 3rd indent Editorial Appropriate signage use of signs Clarity of English Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

447.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[54] Bullet 4 Substantive Restricted access to the site of the PEQ station

For clarification and consistent use of PEQ and to avoid confusion with field site (refer to paragraph 26), as field site is only one type of PEQ station.

South Africa

448.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[54] New 6th indent

Substantive Growth of plants on raised benches

This situation is missing and particularly appropriate for soil-borne pests

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

449.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[54] dot point 6 Editorial otherwise Correct word Australia

450. SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[54] 7th bullet Substantive Provision of suitable growing conditions for the imported plants, e.g. temperature, light and humidity

Sterilisation or decontamination of PEQ stations before the introduction of consignments and alter

A new important addition

Grenada

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conclusión of PEQ

451.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[54] dot point 10 Technical (eg. Rodents, white flies, ants) Ants can be problematic in PEQ and should be controlled

Australia

452.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[54] 10th bullet editorial …whiteflies… Korea

453.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[54] 1. 12th bullet

2. last bullet

Substantive and editorial 1. A means and system for Ssterilization, or decontamination or destruction of waste (including infested plants) and equipment (e.g. cutting implements) before removal from the station2. delete

Merge the two together to form one concept

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

454.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[54] Bullet 13 Editorial For glass houses glasshouses and screen houses screenhouses: accessible surfaces constructed of smooth and impervious material for cleaning and effective decontamination

Correct spelling South Africa

455.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[54] New 14th indent

Substantive Appropriate irrigation system to prevent transmission of pests.

This technical consideration is missing

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

456.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[54] dot point 14 Editorial A means and system system and means for destruction of waste

More logical ordering Australia

457.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[54] New final indent

Substantive Where protective clothing is used, it should be distinguishable from similar clothing used outside the PEQ station.

Additional guidance Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

458. SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ

[54] Additional New dot

Substantive Decontamination of personnel upon exit of

General requirement with more specific actions picked up next

Australia

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STATIONS point areas containing risk material

section

459.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[54] Additional New dot point

Substantive For glass houses and screen houses: frames to be constructed from a rigid, impervious material resistant to the elements. Ceilings and walls to be constructed of material resistant to deterioration caused by the elements and attach by invertebrates such as insects and arthropods.

To ensure construction is appropriate to locale and frame can withstand extreme weather conditions and structural security is sufficient to withstand insect swarms

Australia

460.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[54] Sentence 7 Editorial • Provision of good growing conditions for the imported plants, e.g. temperature, light, and humidity and their proper regulation

Regulation of temperature, humidity and Light is necessary to maintain required environment.

Nepal

461.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[54] Sentence 10 Editorial • Control of local pests (e.g. rodents, white flies whiteflies) and exclusion from the PEQ station by sealing all the points of penetration, including electrical and plumbing conduits (except for open ground facilities)

White flies gives different meaning from whiteflies

Nepal

462.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[54] Sentence 10 substantive A means and system for destruction of waste including infested/infected plants

Infected plants is missing Nepal

463. SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[54] Entire para • Physical separation of plants from other areas, including offices used by personnel

• Adequate security to ensure plants are not removed from the PEQ station without appropriate authorization

Erased because most part of concepts contained under this item are previously considered in the text.Items not previously considered are 2, 5, 7, 10 and 13 and could be positioned in para 35, 40, 32, 32, 32 respectively.

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• Appropriate signage• Restricted access to the site • Growth of plants in pest-free

growing medium (e.g. sterilized potting mix or soil-less growing medium)

• Labelling or otherwise suitable identification of consignments

• Provision of good growing conditions for the imported plants, e.g. temperature, light and humidity

• Provision of conditions conducive for the development of signs and symptoms of pests to be expressed

• Regular pest and pest vector monitoring at specified intervals by use of appropriate methods (e.g. sticky insect traps)

• Control of local pests (e.g. rodents, white flies) and exclusion from the PEQ station by sealing all the points of penetration, including electrical and plumbing conduits (except for open ground facilities)

• Regular maintenance and calibration of equipment used in the PEQ station (e.g. autoclaves and biological safety cabinets)

• Sterilization or decontamination of waste and equipment (e.g. cutting

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implements) before removal from the station

• For glass houses and screen houses: accessible surfaces constructed of smooth and impervious material for cleaning and effective decontamination

A means and system for destruction of waste including infested plants

464.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[54] Last indent editorial Protective clothing (e.g. a laboratory coat and dedicated footwear or shoe covers) to be worn by all staff and visitors

Protective clothing cuts across all types of PEQs

IASPC-GABON

465. ESPECIFICACIONES PARA LAS ESTACIONES DE CPE

[54] Editorial • Separación física de las plantas de otras áreas, incluyendo las oficinas utilizadas por el personal

• Seguridad adecuada para asegurar que las plantas no se saquen de la estación de CPE sin la autorización apropiada respectiva

• Señalización apropiada• Acceso limitado al sitio • Crecimiento Desarrollo de

plantas en medio de crecimiento libre de plagas (por ejemplo, mezcla para plantar esterilizada o medio de crecimiento sin suelo)

• Etiquetado u otro tipo de identificación adecuada de los envíos

• Previsión de buenas condiciones de crecimiento para las plantas importadas, por ejemplo, temperatura,

Aclara la redacción Ecuador

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iluminación y humedad• Previsión de condiciones

propicias para el desarrollo de signos y síntomas de plagas que se manifiesten

• Monitoreo regular de plagas y vectores de plagas a intervalos especificados mediante el uso de métodos apropiados (por ejemplo, trampa pegajosa para insectos)

• Control de plagas locales (por ejemplo, roedores, mosca blanca) y exclusión de la estación de CPE sellando todos los puntos de penetración, incluidos los conductos eléctricos y de tubería (excepto para las instalaciones de terreno abierto)

• Mantenimiento y calibración regular del equipo utilizado en la estación de CPE (por ejemplo, autoclaves y gabinete de seguridad biológica)

• Esterilización o descontaminación de desecho y equipo (por ejemplo, instrumentos para cortar) antes de sacarlos de la estación

• Para los invernaderos de vidrio y malla: superficies accesibles construidas de material suave e impermeable para su limpieza y descontaminación

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eficazUn medio y sistema para la destrucción de desechos incluidas las plantas infestadas

466.

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[54] New indent sub Protective clothing (e.g. a laboratory coat and dedicated footwear or shoe covers) to be worn by all staff and visitors

Transfered from para 60 NIGERIA

467. SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[54] Indent 2

Indent 5

Indent 7

Editorial

Editorial

Editorial y Substantive

38. • Medidas adecuadas de Seguridad adecuada para asegurar que las plantas no se saquen de la estación de CPE sin la autorización apropiada

• Adequate security to ensure plants are not removed from the PEQ station without appropriate authorization

39. • Crecimiento Cultivo de plantas en medio de crecimiento libre de plagas (por ejemplo, mezcla para plantar esterilizada o medio de crecimiento sin suelo)

• Growth of plants in pest-free growing medium (e.g. sterilized potting mix or soil-less growing medium)

40. • Previsión Disponer de buenas condiciones de crecimiento para las plantas en CPE importadas, por ejemplo,

1. More fitting term in Spanish.

2. More fitting term.

3. More appropriate term.

4. Accurate term in line with the subject of the standard.

ORISAEL SALVADORPANAMA

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Indent 8

Indent 10

Indent 12

Editorial

Translation

Translation

temperatura, iluminación y humedad

• Provision of good growing conditions for the imported quarantined plants, e.g. temperature, light and humidity

41. • Previsión Disponer de condiciones propicias para el desarrollo de signos y síntomas de plagas que se manifiesten

• Provision of conditions conducive for the development of signs and symptoms of pests to be expressed

42. • Control de plagas locales (por ejemplo, roedores, mosca blanca) y exclusión de la estación de CPE sellando todos los puntos de penetración, incluidos los conductos eléctricos y de tubería (excepto para las áreas instalaciones de terreno a campo abierto).

• Control of local pests (e.g. rodents, white flies) and exclusion from the PEQ station by sealing all the

5. More appropriate term.

6. More fitting term in Spanish.

7. Broader.

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New Indent 13 Substantive

points of penetration, including electrical and plumbing conduits (except for open ground facilities)

43. • Esterilización o descontaminación de desechos, y equipo (por ejemplo, instrumentos para cortar) antes de sacarlos de la estación

• Sterilization or decontamination of waste and equipment (e.g. cutting implements) before removal from the station

44. • Esterilización o descontaminación de las instalaciones antes y después del proceso de CPE.

• Sterilization or decontamination of PEQ station before the introduction of consignments and after conclusion of PEQ.

8. New important and specific aspect to consider.

468.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[54] Last indent editorial Protective clothing (e.g. a laboratory coat and dedicated footwear or shoe covers) to be worn by all staff and visitors

Protective clothing cuts across all types of PEQs

Swaziland

469. SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[54] 7th bullet Substantive • Provision of good suitable growing conditions for the imported plants, e.g. temperature,

Better Wording Trinidad and Tobago

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New bulletlight and humidity

• Sterilization or decontaminationof PEQ stations before theintroduction of consignmentsand after conclusion of PEQ

A new important addition

470.

ESPECIFICACIONES PARA LAS ESTACIONES DE CPE

[55] Oración 1 Sustancial Característica biológica (de las plagas cuarentenarias reglamentadas)

Para estar acordes con la definición de plaga reglamentada mencionada en la NIMF No. 5 la cual incluye tanto plagas cuarentenarias como plagas no cuarentenarias reglamentadas

México

471.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[56] PEQ station specifications requirements

The headings in the text all refer to requirements not specifications

Australia

472.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[57] Sentence 1 Substantive Pests that are exclusively graft-transmitted e.g. some viruses or phytoplasmas where the vector is not present

There are very few organisms that are exclusively graft transmitted, most have a vector

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

473.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[57] 2nd row editorial (.g. some viruses, phytoplasma) consistency Korea

474.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[58] Bullet 1 Substantive Type of station: field site, screen house, or glasshouse or laboratory

Add the word “laboratory” to be consistent with Section 2.1 (Para. 26) of this standard as a laboratory could be used as a PEQ station by an NPPO in this instance.

CANADA

475.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[58] Indent 2 Translation and Substantive 45. • área de la estación de CPE delineada delimitada claramente

• PEQ area clearly delineated delimited

1. Accurate terms. ORISAEL SALVADORPANAMA

476. SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[58] 4th dot point Substantive Host material restricted to PEQ site only, and no grafting performed unless part of testing procedures

Some countries may allow “bulking up” of material in PEQ and as long as procedures are in place to trace the progeny (and it is not released from

Australia

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PEQ) there should be no restriction on this practise if the NPPO has the systems in place.

477.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[58] Bullet 4 Substantive Host material restricted to the PEQ site station only, and no garfting performed unless part of testing procedures

Refer to paragraph 26 as field site is only one type of PEQ station and the use of “site” instead of “station” may be confusing.

South Africa

478.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[58] Last indent Question to the steward: how does this relate to PEQ station specification?

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

479.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[58] 1st , 2nd and 4th indents

Technical Type Facilities of the station: field site, screen house or glasshouse.

PEQ station area clearly delineated

Appropriate separation from potential hosts

Host material restricted to PEQ station site only, and no grafting performed unless part of testing procedures

A quarantine station can be integrated by many types of facilities.

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

480.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[59] Sentence 1 Substantive Pests spread by soil or water only, or in vectors that themselves are spread by soil or water only e.g. cyst nematodes, nepoviruses

Add the word “nepoviruses” to give an example of pest transmitted by a vector present in soil.

CANADA

481. ESPECIFICACIONES PARA LAS ESTACIONES DE CPE

[59] Editorial Plagas dispersadas por el suelo o el en agua solamente, o en vectores que se dispersan ellos mismos mediante el suelo o agua solamente, por ejemplo,

Aclara la redacción Ecuador

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nematodos enquistadores

482.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[59] 3rd row editorial (e.g. cyst nematodes) consistency Korea

483.

ESPECIFICACIONES PARA LAS ESTACIONES DE CPE

[59] Sangría 4 Sustancial • Tipo de estación: invernadero de malla o vidrio construido con vidrio regular o plástico doble

• Entrada por doble puertas separadas por un vestíbulo o antesala

• Ventanas y puertas que se cierren con llave cuando no se utilizan

• Tratamiento apropiado del agua (que entra y sale de la estación) para eliminar las plagas cuarentenarias reglamentadas

• Evitar que las aguas residuales lleguen a la fuente del agua que se utiliza para irrigar las plantas hospedantes

• Ropa protectora (por ejemplo, bata de laboratorio y calzado exclusivo o cubiertas para calzados) para uso de todo el personal y visitantes

Para estar acordes con la definición de plaga reglamentada mencionada en la NIMF No. 5 la cual incluye tanto plagas cuarentenarias como plagas no cuarentenarias reglamentadas

México

484.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

Dot point 6 Technical . protective clothing (eg a dedicated laboratory coat and dedicated footwear

need a lab coat that is only used in the PEQ so that their is no contamination of any other area

Australia

485.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[60] 1st indent Substantive • Type of station: screen house, tunnel or glasshouse constructed of regular glass or twin-skin plastic

Wording provides increased flexibility; screen houses are not normally constructed of glass or regular twin skinned plastic, but could be used

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

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486.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[60] 1st indent Technical • Type Facilities of the station: screen house or glasshouse constructed of regular glass or twin-skin plastic

A quarantine station can be integrated by many types of facilities.

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

487.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[60] Indent 2 Editorial 46. • Entrada por sistema de doble puertas separadas por un vestíbulo o antesala

• Entry through two doors separated by a vestibule or anteroom

1. Accurate term in Spanish. ORISAEL SALVADORPANAMA

488.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[60] New dot point

Substantive A sink with hands-free operation in the anteroom.

In line with controlling escape of pests spread by soil or water.

Australia

489.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[60] New 4th indent

Technical • Appropriate separation of plants from soil

Additional guidance Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

490.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[60] Bullet 4 Substantive Appropriate traetment of water (entering and leaving PEQ station) to eliminate quarantine pests

Clarification and consistent use of the word “PEQ station”

South Africa

491.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[60] New 6th indent

Technical • Impermeable flooring Additional guidance Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

492.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[60] Bullet 6 Substantive Protective clothing (e.g laboratory coat and dedicated footwear or shoe covers, disposable gloves) to be worn by all staff and visitors.

Proposed additional and important example of protective clothing

South Africa

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SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[60] 1. Bullet 12. Bullet 23. Bullet 34. Bullet 45. After bullet 46. Bullet 67. After bullet 6

1. Substantive2. Substantive3. Substantive4. Substantive5. Substantive6. Substantive7. Substantive

Type of station: field site, screen house, or glasshouse constructed of regular glass or twin-skin plastic or laboratory

Entry through two doors separated by a vestibule or anteroom

Windows and doors locked shut when not in use. Windows that can be opened fitted with screens

Appropriate treatment of waste and water (entering and leaving station) to eliminate quarantine pests

New bullet: Appropriate treatment of soil

to eliminate soil-borne vectors

Protective clothing (e.g. a laboratory coat and dedicated footwear or shoe covers) to be worn by all staff and visitors and removed on exit

New bullet: Soil traps installed in drains

1. Add the word “field site” as with nepoviruses, the inoculation is often done in field containment after nematode testing and soil fumigation have been performed. Add the word “laboratory” – see explanation in Para. 58 above.

2. Delete the entire bullet as this should not be a requirement for soil/water borne pests.

3. Add new sentence to clarify that windows should be fitted with screens to prevent the entry/escape of pests.

4. Add the word “waste and” as it is important to treat any waste leaving the station to prevent the spread of pests in the area and beyond.

5. New bullet added to specify the requirement for soil treatment in order to eliminate soil borne vectors.

6. New text added to specify that protective clothing should be removed when exiting the PEQ station to avoid pest escape/contamination.

7. New bullet added to specify the requirement for the installation of soil traps in drains to collect contaminated soil and avoid further contamination.

CANADA

494. SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[60] Bullet 3

Bullet 6

Editorial

Substantive

-Windows and doors shut, locked when not in useMoved to 54

Flow of events

This bullet is a general specification and should be removed from subsequent specifications to avoid

Kenya

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redundancy

495.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[60] Indent 3, Row 4

I

Editorial • Windows and doors locked shut and shut locked when not in use

A door is shut before being locked NIGERIA

496.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[61] The 2nd lines

Substantive Pests or pest vectors that are airborne or mobile and are equal to or larger greater than 0.2 mm in size e.g. aphids or, mealybugs in size

It is not necessary to regulate the size specifically, because reason for 0.2mm is not clear and there may be aphids and mealybugs less than 0.2 mm.

Japan

497.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[61] 3rd row editorial (e.g. aphids, mealybugs) consistency Korea

498.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[61] Last words Substantive Pests or pest vectors that are airborne or mobile and all life stages are greater than 0.2 mm in size eg. Aphids, mealybugs

Delete aphids and mealybugs as some stages of these organisms can be smaller than 0.2mm in cross section. The crawlers of these organisms can also be highly active and wriggle through such mesh.

Note also that the measurement needs to be of the smallest dimension of the organism as something that is greater than 0.2mm in length can be less than that in cross section and hence readily escape from through the mesh

Australia

499.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[62] 1st dot point Substantive • Type of station: screenhouse or glasshouse ...

A screenhouse would need to have a mesh skin of less than 0.2mm or pests/pest vectors of more than this size would not be contained

Australia

500.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[62] 1st indent Editorial • Type of station: may include screen house, tunnel or glasshouse constructed of regular glass or twin-skin plastic

Wording provides more flexibility, the type of station may also include buildings and growth rooms

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

501. SPECIFICATIONS [62] 1st indent Technical • Type Facilities of the A quarantine station can be COSAVE

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FOR PEQ STATIONS

station: screen house or glasshouse constructed of regular glass or twin-skin plastic

integrated by many types of facilities.

CHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

502.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[62] 5th dot point technical • less than 0.2 mm mesh over vents to prevent pest or vector entry or escape

to ensure that this sized pest is contained

Australia

503.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[62] dot point 9 technical . protective clothing (eg a dedicated laboratory coat and dedicated footwear…. .

Need a lab coat that is only used in the PEQ so that there is no contamination of any other area

Australia

504.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[62] New dot point

Substantive A sink with hands-free operation in the anteroom.

In line with controlling escape of pests spread by airborne means.

Australia

505.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[62] Last indent editorial Covered under para 54 IASPC-GABON

506. SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[62] 1. Bullet 12. Bullet 43. Bullet 74. Bullet 85. Bullet 9

1. Substantive2. Substantive3. Substantive4. Substantive5. Substantive

• Type of station: field site, screen house, or glasshouse constructed of regular glass or twin-skin plastic or laboratory

…• Anteroom with insecticidal

spray ...• A heating, ventilation and

air-conditioning system capable of preventing the movement into or out of the station of small (but greater than 0.2 mm) aerially dispersed organisms or organism life stages Inward directional airflow to be provided within the heating,

1. Add the word “field site” as the inoculation of viruses (e.g. grapevine leaf roll vectored by mealybugs) is often done in field confinement after insect monitoring and appropriate treatment have been performed. Add the word “laboratory” – see explanation in Para. 58 above.

2. Delete Bullet 4 as we don’t see the purpose of this insecticidal spray. All decontamination should be done in the PEQ station before entering the anteroom.

3. Delete wording provided in bullet 7 and replace by new wording for more clarity in technical requirements.

CANADA

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ventilation and air conditioning system

• Installation of Pest scouting program which includes the use of sticky traps, light traps or other insect monitoring devices such as sticky traps or light traps

• Protective clothing (e.g. a laboratory coat and dedicated footwear or shoe covers) to be worn by all staff and visitors and removed on exit

4. Deletion of some text and rewording to specify that a pest scouting program should be in place in the PEQ station.

5. Add new text – same explanation as for Para. 60 (bullet 6).

507.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[62] Fifth Dot Substantive 0.2 mm mesh (70 mesh) over vents to prevent ........

For ease of understanding.A conversion table from approximate millimetres to Mesh Size should also be included

Malaysia

508.

ESPECIFICACIONES PARA LAS ESTACIONES DE CPE

[62] Sangría 6 Sustancial • Material hospedante alternativo para la plaga cuarentenaria reglamentada que no se encuentra dentro de la distancia esperada de dispersión de la plaga o vector, de la estación de CPE (en cualquier dirección)

México considera mejor referirnos a las “plagas reglamentadas” considerando la definición fitosanitaria que aparece en la NIMF No. 5 y que incluye tanto plagas cuarentenarias como plagas no cuarententerias reglamentadas.

México

509. SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[62] Indent 2

Indent 3

Translation

Editorial

47. • Puertas autocerrables de cierre automático y bien ajustadas, con los sellos y escobillas apropiados

• Self-closing and tight-fitting

doors, with appropriate seals and sweeps

48. • Entrada a través de sistema de dos doble puertas separadas por un

1. Accurate term in Spanish

2. Accurate term in Spanish

ORISAEL SALVADORPANAMA

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Indent 6

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vestíbulo o antesala

• Entry through two doors separated by a vestibule or anteroom

49. • Antesala con fumigación aspersión de insecticida

• Anteroom with insecticidal spray

50. • Malla de 0.2 mm en la el sistema de ventilación para evitar la entrada o escape de plagas o vectores

• 0.2 mm mesh over vents to prevent pest or vector entry or escape

51. • Ausencia de Material hospedante alternativo para la plaga cuarentenaria que no se encuentra dentro de la distancia esperada de dispersión de la plaga o vector, de la estación de CPE (en cualquier dirección)

• Alternative host material for the quarantine pest not within the expected pest or vector dispersal distance

3. Accurate term in Spanish

4. More fitting term.

5. Better, clearer wording.

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from the PEQ station (in any direction)

510.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[62] New 10th indent

Substantive - Back up electricty supply system for air flow systems and to maintain other critical equipment

Add wording as new indent.In cases of emergency it is important to have a back-up system that would support the required heating, ventilation and air conditioning systems

South Africa

511.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[62] Last indent editorial Protective clothing (e.g. a laboratory coat and dedicated footwear or shoe covers) to be worn by all staff and visitors

Covered under para 54 Swaziland

512.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[63] Sentence 1 Editorial Pests or pest vectors that are airborne or mobile and less than 0.2 mm in size e.g. some mite or thrips species

Plural added to the word “pest” to be consistent throughout the Annex.

CANADA

513.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[63] Sentence 1 Editorial Pests or pest vectors that are air-borne or mobile and less than 0.2 mm in size e.g. some mites or thrips species

Use of the plural in this instance will be more appropriate

South Africa

514.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[63] 2nd editorial

editorial (e.g. some mite, thrips species) consistency Korea

515.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[63] The 2nd lines

Substantive Pest or pest vectors that are airborne or mobile and are equal to or smaller less than 0.2 mm in size e.g. some mite or trips species in size

As above comment [61] Japan

516.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[63] dot point 7 technical . protective clothing (eg a dedicated laboratory coat and dedicated footwear …. .

Need a lab coat that is only used in the PEQ so that there is no contamination of any other area

Australia

517.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[63] Indent 7 editorial Covered under para 54 IASPC-GABON

518. SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[63] Indent 7 editorial Protective clothing (e.g. a laboratory coat and dedicated footwear or shoe covers) to be

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worn by all staff and visitors

519.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[64] 5th indent Substantive Add ...(HEPA) filtration “or its equivalent” (to remove...)

There are other facilites equivalents to HEPA filitration.

China

520.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[64] 5th indent substantive …filtration or its equivalent ( to remove…

There are other facilities available Korea

521.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[64] 5th indent Substantive High-efficiency particulate air (HEPA) filtration or its equivalent (to remove particles greater than 0.3 microns with 99.97% efficiency)

There are other equivalent facilities such as HEPA filtration.

Japan

522.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[64] Dot point one

Substantive • Type of station: screen house or glasshouse constructed of regular glass, impact-resistant polycarbonate; or twin-skin plastic (each with a sufficient strength such as a minimum thickness of 200 microns). A single layer of high-density polyethylene plastic designed specifically to be resilient with the strength to withstand the climatic conditions, such as hail and gale force winds, and normal nursery activities.

Delete screen houses -These types of materials consistently fail to achieve this level of containment, there needs to be a more substantive building to get to this level.

Australia

523.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[64] 1st indent Editorial • Type of station: may include a screen house or glasshouse facility constructed of regular glass or twin-skin plastic or a building

Wording provides more flexibility, the type of station may also include buildings (and growth rooms)

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

524. SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[64] 1. Bullet 12. Bullet 53. Bullet 64. Bullet 75. Bullet 9

1. Substantive2. Substantive3. Substantive4. Substantive5. Substantive

• Type of station: screen house or glasshouse constructed of regular glass or twin-skin plastic or laboratory

1. Delete the words “screen house or” because for airborne pests, a screen house would not be adequate. Add the word “laboratory” – see explanation in Para. 58 above.

CANADA

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6. Substantive …• High-efficiency particulate

air (HEPA) filtration (to remove particles greater than 0.3 microns with 99.97% efficiency) (HEPA filters to trap 99.97% of particles of 0.3 microns in diameter and 99.99% of particles of greater or smaller size)

• Negative air pressure Inward directional airflow

• Protective clothing (e.g. a laboratory coat and dedicated footwear or shoe covers) to be worn by all staff and visitors and removed on exit

…• A shower (may be required

for staff members on leaving the station)

Two new bullets:• A backup electricity supply

system for air systems to maintain negative air pressure gradients and for other critical equipment

• Interlocking of the supply air and exhaust air systems to ensure inward flow at all times

2. Delete statement in brackets and replace by new one as it is more appropriate and the statement deleted in not factual.

3. Delete text and replace by new text which is more appropriate as per similar comment for Para. 62 (bullet 7) above.

4. Add new text - same explanation as for Para. 60 (bullet 6).

5. Delete entire bullet as a shower is not required for these pests.

6. Two new bullets added to specify additional technical specifications for these specific pests or pest vectors. Anytime there is a requirement for inward directional airflow, supply and exhaust air systems must be interlocked.

525.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[64] 1st indent Technical Type Facilities of the station: screen house or glasshouse constructed of regular glass or twin-skin plastic

A quarantine station can be integrated by many types of facilities.

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

526. SPECIFICATIONS [64] Indent 2 Editorial 52. • Puertas autocerrables de 1. More fitting term in Spanish. ORISA

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FOR PEQ STATIONS

Indent 3

Indent 4

Editorial

Editorial

cierre automático y bien ajustadas, con los sellos y escobillas apropiados

• Self-closing and tight-fitting doors, with appropriate seals and sweeps

53. • Entrada a través de sistema de doble dos puertas separadas por un vestíbulo o antesala

• Entry through two doors separated by a vestibule or anteroom

54. • Un lavamanos con dispositivo de manos libres para la antesala

• A sink with hands-free operation in the anteroom

2. Accurate term in Spanish.

3. Accurate term in Spanish

EL SALVADORPANAMA

527.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[64] Bullet 8 Substantive Sterilization or decontamination of waste and equipemnt (e.g. cutting implements) before removal from the PEQ station

For clarity and consistent use of the term “PEQ station”

South Africa

528.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[64] New 11th indent

Substantive - installation of insect monitoring devices such as sticky traps or light traps

Add wording as new indent.Insect monitoring should be done for pests and pest vectors as well (refer to paragraph 62, bullet 8)

South Africa

529. SPECIFICATIONS [64] New 12th Substantive - Back up electricty supply Add wording as new indent. South Africa

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indent system for air systems to maintain negative air pressure gradients and for other critical equipment

In cases of emergency it is important to have a back-up system that would support the required heating, ventilation and air conditioning systems

530.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[65] 2nd row editorial (e.g. rust fungi, airborne bacteria) consistency Korea

531.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[65] dot point 7 technical . protective clothing (eg a dedicated laboratory coat, and dedicated footwear and hairnets…. .

Need a lab coat that is only used in the PEQ so that their is no contamination of any other areaHair can also carry contaminants and should be covered

Australia

532.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[65] Indent 7 Editorial Covered under para 54 IASPC-GABON

533.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[65] Indent 7 Editorial Protective clothing (e.g. a laboratory coat and dedicated footwear or shoe covers) to be worn by all staff and visitors

Covered under para 54 Swaziland

534.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[66] 1st indent Technical • Type of station may: include a screen house or glasshouse constructed of breakage-resistant glass or twin-walled polycarbonate or a building

Wording provides flexibility but is more specific on type of construction for the level of confinement required

BelarusEPPOIsrael

535.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[66] 1st indent Technical • Type Facilities of the of station: screen house or glasshouse constructed of breakage-resistant glass or twin-walled polycarbonate

A quarantine station can be integrated by many types of facilities.

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

536.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[66] 1st indent Substantive • Type of station may: include a screen house or glasshouse constructed of breakage-resistant glass or twin-walled polycarbonate or a building

Wording provides flexibility but is more specific on type of construction for the level of confinement required

EC

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537.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[66] 5th indent Substantive Add ...(HEPA) filtration “or its equivalent” (to remove...)

There are other facilites equivalents to HEPA filitration.

China

538.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[66] 5th indent substantive As above As above Korea

539.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[66] 5th indent Substantive High-efficiency particulate air (HEPA) filtration or its equivalent (to remove particles greater than 0.3 microns with 99.97% efficiency)

As above comment [64] Japan

540.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[66] Bullet 7 Substantive Protective clothing (e.g laboratory coat and dedicated footwear or shoe covers, disposable gloves) to be worn by all staff and visitors

Proposed additional and important example of protective clothing

South Africa

541.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[66] Bullet 8 Substantive Sterilization or decontamination of waste and equipemnt (e.g. cutting implements) before removal from the PEQ station

For clarity and and consistent use of teh term “PEQ station”

South Africa

542.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[66] 9th indent ‘Where stations have supply air systems, interlocking of the supply air and exhaust air systems to ensure inward flow at all times’

Question to steward: We are not sure what this is – could an example be provided?

BelarusEPPOIsrael

543.

SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[66] Consider all indents

Note to steward: in section 66, we suggest grouping the indents relating to air pressure together.

Belarus EC EPPOIsrael

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[66] 1. Bullet 12. Bullet 43. Bullet 54. Bullet 65. Bullet 76. Bullet 87. Bullet 98. Bullet 10

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• Type of station: screen house or glasshouse constructed of breakage-resistant glass or twin-walled polycarbonate or laboratory

...• Interlocked vestibule doors

so that only one door at a time can be opened

• HEPA filtration (to remove particles greater than 0.3 microns with 99.97% efficiency) (HEPA filters to trap 99.97% of particles of 0.3 microns in diameter and 99.99% of particles of greater or smaller size)

• Negative air pressure Inward directional airflow

• Protective clothing (e.g. a laboratory coat and dedicated footwear or shoe covers) to be worn by all staff and visitors and removed on exit

• Sterilization or decontamination of solid and liquid waste and equipment (e.g. cutting implements) before removal from the station

• Where stations have supply air systems, i Interlocking of the supply air and exhaust air systems to ensure inward flow at all times

• All waste air, including from fume hoods that discharge to the outside atmosphere,

1. Delete the words “screen house or” because for highly mobile or easily dispersed pests, a screen house would not be adequate. Add the word “laboratory” – see explanation in Para. 58 above.

2. Change made for better grammatical flow.

3. Delete statement in brackets and replace by new text – same explanation as for Para. 64 (bullet 5). 4. Delete text and replace by new text which is more appropriate as per similar comment for Para. 62 (bullet 7) above.

5. Add new text - same explanation as for Para. 60 (bullet 6).

6. Add new text to specify that all waste must be treated because of the biological characteristics of these specific pests. For higher risk pests, it may be necessary to connect all drains (including sinks and showers) to an effluent treatment system or all liquid waste must be collected and treated.

7. Delete text – same explanation as for Para. 64 (last new bullet) above.

8. Delete the text referring to fume hoods because technically, fume hoods are used for work with chemicals and will never to be HEPA filtered. Primary confinement devices (i.e. biological safety cabinets) must be used when

CANADA

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filtered through HEPA filters working with pests that can be aerosolized.

545. SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[66] Indent 3

Indent 4

Indent 9

Indent 10

Editorial

Editorial

Editorial

Editorial

55. • Entrada a través de sistema de doble dos puertas separadas con un vestíbulo o antesala

• Entry through two doors separated by a vestibule or anteroom

56. • Puertas del vestíbulo con dispositivo de enclavamiento interconexión de tal forma que solo se pueda abrir una puerta a la vez

• Interlocked vestibule doors so that only one door at a time can be open

57. • Cuando las estaciones cuentan con sistemas de suministro de aire, enclavamiento interconexión de los sistemas de suministro y escape de aire para asegurar en todo momento el flujo hacia el interior

• Where stations have supply air systems, interlocking of the supply air and exhaust air systems to ensure inward

1. Accurate term.

2. Accurate term.

3. Accurate term.

4. More fitting term.

ORISAEL SALVADORPANAMA

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Indent 14 Editorial

flow at all times

58. • Todo aire de desecho desechado, incluyendo el de la campana de extracción de gases hacia la atmósfera exterior, filtrado a través de filtros HEPA

• All waste air, including from fume hoods that discharge to the outside atmosphere, filtered through HEPA filters

59. • Un sistema de suministro alternativo de electricidad de apoyo para los sistemas de aire para mantener los gradientes de la presión de aire negativo y otro equipo importante

• A backup electricity supply system for air systems to maintain negative air pressure gradients and for other critical equipment

5. More fitting term.

546.SPECIFICATIONS FOR PEQ STATIONS

[66] New 15th indent

Substantive - sink with hands free operation in the anteroom

In cases where a shower is not compulsory, there should at least be a sink available.

South Africa