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All Comments - Draft ISPMs for Member consultation, 2009 DRAFT: Annex to ISPM No. 28 (PHYTOSANITARY TREATMENTS FOR REGULATED PESTS) No. 1. Section 2. Para nber 3. sentence/ row/ indent, etc. 4. Type of comment (Substantive,E ditorial, Translation) 5. Proposed rewording 6. Explanation 7. Country 1. GENERAL COMMENTS Footnotes Editorial (for clarity and transparency) Preferably delete footnote. Or if retained, modify: The scope of IPPC treatments does not include issues related to pesticide registration or other domestic requirements for approval of treatments. Treatments also do not provide information on specific effects on human health or food safety, which should be addressed using domestic procedures prior to the approval of a treatment by an importing NPPO. In addition, effects on product quality are considered by the Technical Panel on Phytosanitary Treatments (TPPT) Australia does not offer any objection to the adoption of the cold treatments. This comment is offered in good faith that may be considered as editorial in finalising the document for publication. Australia does not see the need for the inclusion of the footnote in these cold treatments as the use of 2-3 degrees (as opposed to 1 degree) over a longer treatment period has been adopted primarily to ensure a reduction in the adverse quality impacts of cold treatments at very low temperatures. If the footnote is to be AUSTRALIA AUSTRALIA 1

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All Comments - Draft ISPMs for Member consultation, 2009

DRAFT: Annex to ISPM No. 28 (PHYTOSANITARY TREATMENTS FOR REGULATED PESTS)

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1. GENERAL COMMENTS

Footnotes Editorial (for clarity and transparency)

Preferably delete footnote.Or if retained, modify: The scope of IPPC treatments does not include issues related to pesticide registration or other domestic requirements for approval of treatments. Treatments also do not provide information on specific effects on human health or food safety, which should be addressed using domestic procedures prior to the approval of a treatment by an importing NPPO. In addition, effects on product quality are considered by the Technical Panel on Phytosanitary Treatments (TPPT) and any evidence of adverse effects on quality (when the treatment is applied in accordance with the schedule) are noted in the TPPT report prior to their recommendation to CPM for before their international adoption. There is no obligation for a contracting party to approve, register or adopt the treatments for use in its territory.

Australia does not offer any objection to the adoption of the cold treatments. This comment is offered in good faith that may be considered as editorial in finalising the document for publication.

Australia does not see the need for the inclusion of the footnote in these cold treatments as the use of 2-3 degrees (as opposed to 1 degree) over a longer treatment period has been adopted primarily to ensure a reduction in the adverse quality impacts of cold treatments at very low temperatures. If the footnote is to be retained, the TPPT is the group of experts charged by the IPPC to analysis and recommend treatments and as such they should be requested to note in their report (where treatments are recommended to the SC and CPM for adoption) if there are any known adverse quality effects (based on published information) from applying the treatment in accordance with the recommended treatment schedule.

AUSTRALIA

AUSTRALIA

2. GENERAL COMMENTS

Translation The term “cold treatment” should be accompanied by the term “refrigeration” in the Russian version.

EPPO request that consideration be given to including a definition of cold treatment in the

‘Cold treatment’ is confusing when directly translated into Russian and so accompanied with the term ‘refrigeration’, clarifies what is meant with cold treatment.

BELARUS,EPPO

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glossary.

3. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive EPPO requests that consideration be given to the development of a generic standard on cold treatment as a phytosanitary measure (analogous to the irradiation standard 18).

For harmonized use and understanding of what is needed to implement these treatments.

BELARUS,EPPO, ISRAEL

4. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive EC requests that consideration be given to the development of a generic standard on cold treatment as a phytosanitary measure (analogous to the irradiation standard 18).

For harmonized use and understanding of what is needed to implement these treatments.

European Community and its 27 members (EC)

5. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive It is recommended that the summary report document and the supporting unpublished technical documentation that accompanied these treatments standards in country consultation be easily accessible in the future.

This document helps with the correct understanding of these standards.

There are anonymous non-published reports referenced in the annexes e.g. at 82 (treatment schedule for Citrus paradisi).

BELARUS,EPPO, ISRAEL

6. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive It is recommended that the summary report document and the supporting unpublished technical documentation that accompanied these treatments standards in country consultation be easily accessible in the future, on the IPP and linked from the minutes of the TPPT.

This document helps with the correct understanding of these standards.

There are anonymous non-published reports referenced in the annexes e.g. at 82 (treatment schedule for Citrus paradisi).

EC

7. GENERAL COMMENTS

Editorial The TPPT should be requested to consider how annexes should be grouped and how indexes should be developed to facilitate their future access.

For logical access to annexes. BELARUS,EPPO, ISRAEL

8. GENERAL COMMENTS

Editorial The SC/Secretariat should be requested to consider how annexes should be grouped and how indexes should be developed to facilitate their future access.

For logical access to annexes. EC

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9. GENERAL COMMENTS

Editorial To add the word fruit throughout the text where appropriate.

For example: Cold treatment of Citrus limon fruit for Ceratitis capitata

Cold treatment is conducted for fruits not the plant itself. It is not correct to use the Latin name without specifying it.

BELARUS,EC, EPPO, ISRAEL

10. GENERAL COMMENTS

All schedules Substantive Schedule 1 °C or 2   °C for 16 continuous days (16 days x 24 hours)

For clarity and accurate translation of procedures. Include 24 hours and not just ‘day’.

BELARUS, EPPO, ISRAEL

11. GENERAL COMMENTS

All schedules Substantive Schedule 1: 2 °C for 16 continuous days (16 days x 24 hours)

For clarity and accurate translation of procedures. Include 24 hours and not just ‘day’.

EC

12. GENERAL COMMENTS

All instances in all treatment schedules

Substantive For each treatment schedule, insert the word “consecutive” after duration e.g. 18 consecutive days.

Clarity GRENADA, TRINIDAD& TOBAGO

13. GENERAL COMMENTS

All schedules Substantive The commodity temperature should be monitored, documented and not exceed the stated level

For transparency of information BELARUS, EPPO, ISRAEL

14. GENERAL COMMENTS

All schedules Substantive The commodity temperature should be monitored, documented and not exceed the stated level

A minor addition, although we recognise the schedule is not a procedure. Such procedures are requested earlier

EC

15. GENERAL COMMENTS

All instances in all treatment schedules

Substantive The commodity temperature should be monitored, should not exceed the stated level, and should be maintained throughout the duration of the treatment.

Clarity GRENADA, TRINIDAD& TOBAGO

16. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive 1. Delete or re-consider cold treatment group 2, group 3, group 4, group 5 and group 8

China thinks it seems not sufficient to develop international standards based on only one reference document. More research may be needed to prove the efficacy before it becomes a global

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recognized treatment. Detailed comments please see the related parts in the following paragraph.

Considering Schedule 3 in Group 1, Group 6 and Group 7 have been verified by Japan and China; therefore, China agreed to adopt them.

17. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive The cold treatment schedules in this draft are apparently based primarily on one research article, De Lima et al, 2007, and an unpublished Argentine reference. When APHIS reviewed cold treatments for Medfly in 2001, numerous references on cold treatment were reviewed. These IPPC draft treatment schedules are not based on the weight of the evidence of many other research studies on cold treatment and as such, we suggest they should not be adopted by the IPPC as proposed.

USA

18. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive Suggest add one part on how to do correction when the temperature is beyond /out of the range of cold treatment.

Variation of the temperature in the treatment may happen, therefore supplementary measure is needed to adjust the treatment to reach the required treatment efficacy.

CHINA

19. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive Considering that product quality has to be evaluated according to item (3.3) of ISPM No. 28 and besides what is stated in the footnote to all treatments, it seems that the effects on product quality have not been assessed for these treatments. References quoted in the text of treatments and mentioned in the TPPT reports, do not contain evidences on effects on product quality.

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

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20. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive Particularly treatment No. 8, could seriously affect product quality, based on industry evidences, under conditions similar to those recommended in schedules contained in this treatment. See pictures inserted after comments.

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

21. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive Pre-cooling of the commodity to treatment temperature is may be required.

This sentence included in item “Other relevant information” in all cold treatments, has to be adjusted to text proposed by the TPPT in its December 2007 meeting, because pre-cooling is not required in all circumstances. If the words “to treatment temperature “are not erased, then this sentence overlaps with sentence “The commodity must reach the treatment temperature before treatment

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

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commences”, contained in item “Treatment schedule”.

22. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive E . Willink, G. Gastaminza, M. C. Gramajo, A. Salvatore, M. E.Villagrán, B. Carrizo, A. Macián, R. Avila y P. Favre , 2007. Estudios básicos para el desarrollo de tratamientos cuarentenarios con frío para Ceratitis capitata y Anastepha fraterculus en cítricos de Argentina. Moscas de los frutos y su relevancia cuarentenaria en la citricultura delNoroeste Argentino: once años de investigaciones 1996-2007. E. Willink, G.Gastaminza, L. Augier y B. Stein editores. Las Talitas, Tucumán Argentina.Versión digital www.eeaoc.org.ar . ISBN: 978- 987-21283-4-0.

E . Willink, G. Gastaminza, M. C. Gramajo, A. Salvatore, M. E.Villagrán, B. Carrizo, A. Macián, R. Avila, P. Favre, S. Toledo, M.F. García Degano, M.G. Socias y A. Oviedo. 2007. Tratamientos con frío para el controlde Ceratitis capitata y Anastrepha fraterculus para la exportación de cítricos. En: Moscas de los frutos y su relevancia cuarentenaria en lacitricultura del Noroeste Argentino: once años de investigaciones 1996-2007.

E. Willink, G. Gastaminza, L. Augier y B. Stein editores. Las Talitas,Tucumán Argentina. Versión digital www.eeaoc.org.ar. ISBN:978-987-21283-4-0.

Anonymous and not accessible references must not be used as evidences for internationally approved standards.

All anonymous references to Anon….have to be substituted by currently available quotations, as it has been included in para12 and 14. Correct references are shown in the left side.

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

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23. GENERAL COMMENTS

Applicable to Para 40, 54 and 68

Substantive Case of para 40:

Schedule 1: 2 °C for 16 daysEfficacy and confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007): For cultivar ‘Navel’ the efficacy is ED99.9973 at the 95% confidence level.For cultivar ‘Valencia’ the efficacy is ED99.9960 at the 95% confidence level. Schedule 2: 3 °C for 16 daysEfficacy and confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007): For cultivar ‘Navel’ the efficacy is ED99.9988 at the 95% confidence level.For cultivar ‘Valencia’ the efficacy is ED99.9976 at the 95% confidence level.

The commodity must reach the treatment

Para 40, 54 and 68 contain schedules based on the same number of days, cultivars and references, without significant differences in efficacy. It isn’t understandable why the less exigent schedule in terms of temperature has not been the only one selected.

Also the existence of different temperatures creates an inconsistency with the end of the last sentence in these para ( “The commodity temperature…. and should not exceed the stated level.”)

For instance, in the case of para 40, which is the stated level, 2 or 3 °C ? Is

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

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temperature before treatment commences. The commodity temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

it acceptable to exceed 2 °C?

In cases in which a species is a fruit flies host, it is considered as not necessary to develop an efficiency trial for its different varieties or cultivars. This is shown with the examples that are included in the previously mentioned paragraphs, in which there is no statistically significant difference in levels of efficacy of treatments on cultivars.

24. GENERAL COMMENTS

Applicable to Para 5, 33, 61 and 75

Substantive This treatment applies to the cold treatment of the species Citrus sinensis (orange) to result in the mortality of larvae of Ceratitis capitata (Mediterranean fruit fly) at the stated efficacy.

Para 5 is used as an example of this comment.The terms “the species” has to be added to clarify the scope for treatments on orange, lemon and grapefruit.

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

25. GENERAL COMMENTS

Applicable to Para 12 and 40

Substantive Case of para 12:

Schedule 1: 2 °C for 18 daysEfficacy and confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007): For cultivar ‘Navel’ the efficacy is ED99.9982 at the 95% confidence level.For cultivar ‘Valencia’ the efficacy is ED99.9979 at the 95% confidence level.

Schedule 2: 3 °C for 20 daysEfficacy and confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007): For cultivar ‘Navel’ the efficacy is ED99.9980 at the 95% confidence level.For cultivar ‘Valencia’ the efficacy is ED99.9979 at the 95% confidence level.

Schedule 3: 2 °C for 21 days

Para 12 and 40 contain mentions to varieties in the treatment schedule section.As the scope of treatments 1 and 3 comprises Citrus sinensis, as species, it is not appropriate to mention specifically varieties because it causes confusion on the issue of the scope of the treatment.

On the other hand, information related to tested varieties is included in the section on “Other relevant information” in all other treatments (2, 4, 5, 6 and 7) and could also cause confusion on the scope of the treatments.

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For cultivars ‘Washington Navel’, ‘Salustiana’, ‘Valencia’ and ‘Lue Gim Gong’ the efficacy is ED99.9917 at the 95% confidence level (Anon., 2007).

The commodity must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

26. GENERAL COMMENTS

Applicable to Para 11, 39, 53, 67, 81 and 95

Substantive Case of para 11:

Fruits of Citrus sinensis (orange)

Regulated article is the fruit.Similar considerations must be performed in other treatments.

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

27. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive EC requests that consideration be given to including a definition of cold treatment in the glossary.

To avoid possible confusion and to fully clarify what is meant with cold treatment.

EC

28. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive EC requests that until a generic standard as referred to above is available, an explanatory document on cold treatments is prepared by TPPT and approved by the SC as soon as possible.

To provide a temporary general guidance on how cold treatments should be conducted effectively.

EC

29. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive EC requests that the standard setting procedure for cold treatments for Ceratitis capitata, numbers 01, 02, 06 and 07, is suspended until other schedules can be added, following an evaluation by TPPT of new submissions (to be provided by e.g. EC) and of a wider range of similar treatments as suggested in the following general comments.

The current proposal seems to be too restrictive in terms of the schedules included therein. In our view, the number of schedules should be expanded to include others that achieve sufficient efficacy with shorter treatment periods, which are successfully used in international trade. Examples include cold treatment of Citrus sinensis fruit at 2 oC for 16 or 17 days. A possible broader choice of schedules would allow for more flexible applicability of the cold treatments as well as enhancing their practical use.

EC

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30. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive EC requests that a new call for cold treatments for Ceratitis capitata is made and new submissions requested.

EC apologizes for not having submitted suitable cold treatments under the respective call in 2007. It is noted, however, that only a few of the cold treatments for fruit currently commercially in use have been submitted. Now CPs are aware of the procedures, more treatments will be submitted (from EC).

EC

31. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive EC requests that the SC and Secretariat reflect on more suitable ways of ensuring a wide range of similar treatments are evaluated by the TPPT.

We suggest that specialists in these fruit treatments should organise into a ‘research group’ to evaluate treatments available and then submit to TPPT. This is similar to the IFQRG work on methyl bromide, and the way diagnostic protocols are being authored and reviewed prior to and on behalf of the TPDP.

EC

32. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive Adding to the annex the detailed procedures of application of all cold treatments ( from 1-8)

For more clarification EGYPT, LEBANON, TUNISIA

33. GENERAL COMMENTS

Editorial Stating more relevant references if available For more clarification EGYPT, LEBANON, TUNISIA

34. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive Common name of the commodities and pests should be added to all titles

For more clarification EGYPT, LEBANON, TUNISIA

35. GENERAL COMMENTS

All instances in all treatment schedules

Substantive “Variety cultivar information included in treatment schedules should be moved to the “other relevant information” section.

For consistency GRENADA, TRINIDAD& TOBAGO

36. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive There are different treatment schedules (period) for the same article and the same target pest at the same treatment temperature among submitted countries.(ex. De lima (Australia) submits the treatment schedule at 2 degree for 18 days to orange (C. sinensis) infested with med-fly, meanwhile Anon (Argentine) submits the treatment

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schedule at 2 degree 21 days. Furthermore, according to the result of disinfestation experiment conducted in Argentine, one living larva was detected at the 19th day of the cold treatment.It might be of possibility that these differences indicate tolerance (susceptibility) to cold treatment differs by origins. Therefore, the name of country (area), where each experiment was conducted, should be provided in the section of treatment schedule ([12], [26], [40] ,[54], [68], [82], [96], [110])and following sentence should be added to the section of other relevant information([13], [27], [41] ,[55], [69], [83], [97], [111]).“If the variation of the effect of cold treatment among different countries (areas) has been scientifically proved, the NPPO may not adopt the treatment as phytosanitary treatment.”

37. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive The following sentence should be added as foot note:“Each country can decide to adopt the treatment schedule in accordance with its appropriate level of protection based on a scientific justification.”

When a country decides to adopt a cold treatment schedule, the decision depends on appropriate level of protection of that country which is based on a scientific jusitification.Therefore, the following sentence should be added as foot note:“Each country can decide to adopt the treatment schedule in accordance with its appropriate level of protection based on a scientific justification.”

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38. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive There is need to clarify whether the schedules given in this document do take of eggs.

KENYA

39. GENERAL COMMENTS

Editorial In the footnote, scientific names of organisms are not in italics as is the rule

KENYA

40. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive The purpose of these annexes is not clear.ISPM 28 text says ‘1. Purpose and Use. The purpose of harmonizing phytosanitary treatments is to support efficient phytosanitary measures in a wide range of circumstances and to enhance the mutual recognition of treatment efficacy by NPPOs, which may also 12acilitate trade.’The proposed treatment schedule is not harmonized in some case because same fruit fly species for same host (variety) has different treatment schedules (see attached). This means trading partners may not recognize same treatment for same commodities for same pest. If both of them are effective and scientifically supported, then ISPM may select the less stringent method. Or the conditions for the experiment are different the condition should be specified.

KOREA

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41. GENERAL COMMENTS

Los comentarios sobre los tratamientos en frío para moscas de la fruta son los siguientes:

Los proyectos de tratamientos en frío para cultivares de cítricos para mitigar riesgos de Ceratitis capitata y Bactrocera spp. únicamente presentan información específica sobre las temperaturas y tiempos de exposición de los tratamientos por cultivar y no señalan los supuestos por el cual algunos tratamientos a la misma temperatura modifican los tiempos de exposición; y tratamientos a igual tipo de exposición pero a diferente

MEXICO

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temperatura como se indica en el puntos 2. Sería importante que se explicara el sustento de esas variaciones.

Por ejemplo: En el caso de los tratamientos en frío de Citrus sinensis para C. capitata, el protocolo 1 señala 18 días de tratamiento de frío a 2°C y el protocolo 3 menciona 21 días también a 2 °C (VER LINEA 12 del proyecto).

Asimismo, para el caso de Bactrocera tryoni, el tratamiento de frío para Citrus limon, el protocolo 1 es de 14 días de tratamiento en frío a 2°C y el protocolo 3 es también a 14 días pero a 3°C (VER LINEA 68 DEL PROYECTO)

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42. GENERAL COMMENTS

Oración 4 Sustancial El alcance de los tratamientos en el marco de la Convención Internacional de Protección Fitosanitaria (CIPF) no abarca cuestiones relacionadas con el registro de plaguicidas u otros requisitos nacionales para la aprobación de tratamientos. Los tratamientos tampoco proporcionan información sobre efectos específicos en la salud humana o la inocuidad alimentaria, que deberían abordarse mediante procedimientos nacionales antes de la aprobación de un tratamiento. Además, se consideran los efectos sobre la calidad de los productos antes de su aprobación internacional. Las Partes Contratantes no tienen obligación de aprobar, registrar o adoptar los tratamientos con vistas a su utilización en su territorio.

Al final de cada tratamiento hay un pié de página que dice:

“Las Partes Contratantes no tienen obligación de aprobar, registrar o adoptar los tratamientos con vistas a su utilización en su territorio”.

Al respecto se considera que se puede eliminar este párrafo por que las partes contratantes de la CIPF adquieren obligaciones y responsabilidades que debemos de cumplir y donde a nivel de CPM aprobamos las NIMF cuyos temas pueden considerar incluso de tratamientos cuarentenarios.

Lo anterior para ser consistente con la

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CIPF ARTICULO 1.

El Artículo 1 del Texto de la CIPF especifica que: “Con el propósito de actuar eficaz y conjuntamente para prevenir la diseminación e introducción de plagas de plantas y productos vegetales y de promover medidas apropiadas para combatirlas, las partes contratantes se comprometen a adoptar las medidas legislativas, técnicas y administrativas que se especifican en esta Convención, y en otros acuerdossuplementarios en cumplimiento del Artículo XVI.

En ese sentido, lo señalado en los pies de página es contrario a lo que señala la

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IPPC ya que los países si debemos de adoptar las medidas incluidas en las NIMF.

43. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive Research must be conducted for other varieties and pests occurring in Africa

Fruit flies are the major trade concerns in most of the African countries e.g Bactrocera invadens and these countries cannot exports any of hosts of this pest, with negative effect on their economy

MOZAMBIQUE

44. GENERAL COMMENTS

Substantive It will be very difficult to implement this Annex of ISPM No.28 without having the capacity to evaluate the standard and it will also involved a lot to enforce the capacity building to meet the requirement.In order t o implement this standard we need to have technical knowledge and participation of the processes.Furthermore it is very technical and we think that more time is needed to evaluate this standard.We were not informed about the result of this study on these commodities.For highly technical standard a few countries in the region should have been involve in the process and furthermore the study could have also done or taken into consideration serious fruit fly species affecting trade in the region.

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45. TITLE [1] Editorial Anexo de la publicación NIMF n.º 28 (TRATAMIENTOS FITOSANITARIOS PARA

PLAGAS REGLAMENTADAS)

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46. TITLE [2]47. Endorsement [3] Titre Rédactionnel Adoption La compréhension du texte BURUNDI,

CÔTE D’IVOIRE, R.D. CONGOTOGO

48. Scope of the treatment

[4]

49. Scope of the treatment

[5] Sentence 1 Substantive …to result in mortality of larvae… Does that mean the eggs cannot be killed by low temperaturas????

IASPC-GABON, MOZAMBIQUE, ZAMBIA

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50. Scope of the treatment

[5] Sentence 1 Fond …la mortalité des larves de …. Rien n’a été dit sur l’efficacité de ce traitement sur les oeufs

BURUNDI

51. Scope of the treatment

[5] Sentence 1 Substantive …to result in mortality of larvae… Does that mean the eggs cannot be killed by these temperatures?

KENYA

52. Scope of the treatment

[5] Sentence 1 Substantive ………..to result in mortality of larvea Does that means that the eggs cannot be killed by cold treatment

NIGERIA

53. Scope of the treatment

[5] Editorial El presente tratamiento es aplicable al tratamiento de frío de Citrus sinensis (naranja) para inducir la mortalidad de las larvas de Ceratitis capitata (mosca mediterránea de la fruta) con la eficacia determinada1.

1 (El alcance de los tratamientos en el marco de la Convención Internacional de Protección

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Fitosanitaria (CIPF) no abarca cuestiones relacionadas con el registro de plaguicidas u otros requisitos nacionales para la aprobación de tratamientos. Los tratamientos tampoco proporcionan información sobre efectos específicos en la salud humana o la inocuidad alimentaria, que deberían abordarse mediante procedimientos nacionales antes de la aprobación de un tratamiento. Además, se consideran los efectos sobre la calidad de los productos antes de su aprobación internacional. Las Partes Contratantes no tienen obligación de aprobar, registrar o adoptar los tratamientos con vistas a su utilización en su territorio.)

54. Scope of the treatment

[5] Substantive This treatment applies to the cold treatment of Citrus sinensis (orange) to result in the mortality of eggs and larvae of Ceratitis capitata

Eggs as well as larvae of Mediterranean fruit fly can be killed by this treatment.

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(Mediterranean fruit fly) at the stated efficacy.

55. Scope of the treatment

[5] Sentence 1 Substantive ...(Mediterranean fruit fly) at the stated efficacy1 based on a larval (or pupal emergence) endpoint.

Propose to add wording because some research is evaluated by the mortality of larvae when fruit are cut and other researchers use emergent pupae as an endpoint. The latter is a less conservative treatment because it takes into account the high natural mortality that occurs during the pupal stage. The endpoint should be mentioned as it affects the cold period required.

SOUTH AFRICA

56. Treatment description

[6]

57. Name of treatment [7] 1er colonne Fond Nature du traitement La clarité BURUNDI

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58. Active ingredient [8]59. Treatment type [9]

60. Target pest [10] Sentence 1 Editorial Ceratitis capitata … C. capitata No need to write full name in each writing

NEPAL

61. Target regulated articles

[11] Right Column Substantive Citrus sinensis (Lue Gin Gong, Navel, Salustiana, Valencia and Washington Navel orange )

Regarding C. sinensis (orange), cultivars or varieties should be described as shown in the references.Because it is indicated that each cultivar responded differently to cold treatment (summary report of cold treatments; para2.3.3)

JAPAN

62. Treatment schedule [12] Fond Le moment de traitement n’a pas été donné: incomplet (cfr note de page)

BURUNDI

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63. Treatment schedule [12] Substantive Delete Schedule1 and schedule2. Keep Schedule3 For host variety of Valencia, data of ED99.9979 at 2℃, 18 days provided by Australia are quite different from those of ED99.9917 at 2℃, 21days provided by Argentina. In general, the second one should have higher ED than the first one because the second one being treated 3 days longer than the first one. Also, it seems not sufficient to develop international standards only based on one reference from one country.

Considering Schedule 3 has been verified by Japan and China, therefore, China agreed to adopt it.

CHINA

64. Treatment schedule [12] Editorial/ Technical Schedule 1: 2 °C for 18 daysEfficacy and confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007): For cultivar ‘Navel’ the efficacy is ED99.9982 at the 95% confidence level.For cultivar ‘Valencia’ the efficacy is ED99.9979 at the 95% confidence level.

Schedule2: 2   °C for 21 days For cultivars ‘Washington Navel’, ‘Salustiana’, ‘Valencia’ and ‘Lue Gim Gong’ the efficacy is ED99.9917 at the 95% confidence level (Willink et al, Anon ., 2007).

Schedule 3 2: 3 °C for 20 daysEfficacy and confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007): For cultivar ‘Navel’ the efficacy is ED99.9980 at the 95% confidence level.For cultivar ‘Valencia’ the efficacy is ED99.9979 at the 95% confidence level.

Schedule 3: 2 °C for 21 days

To use temperature as the criteria to order the schedules.See also General comments

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For cultivars ‘Washington Navel’, ‘Salustiana’, ‘Valencia’ and ‘Lue Gim Gong’ the efficacy is ED99.9917 at the 95% confidence level (Anon., 2007).

The commodity must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

65. Treatment schedule [12] Editorial Protocolo 1: 18 días de tratamiento de frío a 2 ºCEficacia y nivel de confianza (De Lima et al., 2007): Para el cultivar “Navel” la eficacia es de ED99,9982

con un nivel de confianza del 95 %.Para el cultivar “Valencia” la eficacia es de ED99,9979 con un nivel de confianza del 95 %.Protocolo 2: 20 días de tratamiento de frío a 3 ºCEficacia y nivel de confianza (De Lima et al., 2007): Para el cultivar “Navel” la eficacia es de ED99,9980

con un nivel de confianza del 95 %.Para el cultivar “Valencia” la eficacia es de ED99,9979 con un nivel de confianza del 95 %.

Protocolo 3: 21 días de tratamiento de frío a 2 ºCPara los cultivares “Navel de Washington”, “Salustiana”, “Valencia” y “Lue Gim Gong” la eficacia es de ED99,9917 con un nivel de confianza del 95 % (Anon., 2007).

El producto debe alcanzar la temperatura de tratamiento antes del inicio del mismo. La temperatura del producto debería controlarse y no debería superar el nivel especificado.

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66. Treatment schedule [12] Last paragraph Substantive The commodity fruit pulp must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity fruit pulp temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

Replacing the word for more specification

EGYPT, LEBANON, TUNISIA

67. Treatment schedule [12] Substantive Schedule 1: 2 °C or below for 18 daysSchedule 2: 3 °C or below for 20 daysSchedule 3: 2 °C or below for 21 days

It must be treated at or below a target temperature.

JAPAN

68. Treatment schedule [12] Editorial Move to para 13. More appropriate location. JAPAN

69. Treatment schedule [12] Para 1, sentence 3

Substantive Provide for the meaning of abbreviation ED Its common that when abbreviations are mentioned for the first time, their meaning is also provided

KENYA

70. Treatment schedule [12] Para 4, sentence 2

Substantive The commodity temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level during treatment.

For clarity and should be added to all other treatment schedules in this document

KENYA

71. Treatment schedule [12] Schedule 3 Substantive For cultivars ‘Washington Navel’, ‘Salustiana’, ‘Valencia’ and ‘Lue Gim Gong’ the efficacy …..

Two different treatment periods are provided for the same insect in the same cultivar of fruit (Navels and Valencias). It would make more sense to base the recommended treatment on the shortest period and refer to both references rather than to provide two separate treatment options. Delete Washington navel and Valencia as these are included under the shorter period.

SOUTH AFRICA

72. Treatment schedule [12] Schedule 3 Substantive Schedule 3: 2 C for 21 daysFor cultivars ‘Washington Navel’, ‘Salustiana’, ‘Valencia’ and ‘Lue Gim Gong’ the efficacy is ED 99.9917 at the 95% confidence level (Anon.,2007).

This schedule seems to present a conflicting situation. Why would one use this longer schedule (21 days) when you have an acceptable shorter option (18 days) available for the same pest and commodity at the same temperature?

USA

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73. Treatment schedule [12] Last paragraph Substantive The commodity must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

This information does not belong to the Treatment Schedule section and should be moved to Other Relevant Information section.Global change.

USA

74. Other relevant information

[13] Technical Pre-cooling of the commodity to treatment temperature is required.

See General comments COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

75. Other relevant information

[13] Substantive add new intent;-The core temperature of each fruits should be measured- The treatment temperature of the commodity should be recorded during the stated period

Pre-cooling, monitoring of temperature and maximum level of temperature are described in every cold treatment schedule as basic information of cold treatment.The information should be added to the section as basic information.

JAPAN

76. Other relevant information

[13] Substantive Pre-cooling ………. More information on pre-cooling procedure such as temperature, holding time, media used for pre-cooling, etc. should be included.

MALAYSIA

77. Other relevant information

[13] Whole sentence

Substantive Pre-cooling of the commodity to treatment temperature is required.

Redundant meaning with para 12 that stated “The commodity must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences.”

This comment goes to all 8 cold treatments.

PHILIPPINES

78. Other relevant information

[13] Add new paragraphs

Substantive The commodity must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity temperature should be monitored and

Moved from the Treatment schedule section

USA

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should not exceed the stated level.

79. Other relevant information

[13] Add new paragraphs

Substantive Pest prevalence under growing conditions may affect the treatment results and should be taken into account when determining which treatment to use. When used as a stand alone treatment rather than part of a systems approach, the treatment(s) listed here may be either excessive or inadequate depending on the pest prevalence.

Pest prevalence should be taken in consideration before treatment.

USA

80. References [14] Whole Para Editorial To be placed outside the table consistence IASPC-GABON, KENYA, SWAZILAND, ZAMBIA

81. References [14] Sentence all Editorial References are to be removed from the table The reference are not treatments and should be removed for clarity

NIGERIA

82. References [14] Editorial References Reference can be place outside the table SEYCHELLES

83. References [14] Substantive E . Willink, G. Gastaminza, M. C. Gramajo, A. Salvatore, M. E.Villagrán, B. Carrizo, A. Macián, R. Avila y P. Favre , 2007. Estudios básicos para el desarrollo de tratamientos cuarentenarios con frío para Ceratitis capitata y Anastepha fraterculus en cítricos de Argentina. Moscas de los frutos y su relevancia cuarentenaria en la citricultura delNoroeste Argentino: once años de investigaciones 1996-2007. E. Willink, G. Gastaminza, L. Augier y B. Stein editores. Las Talitas, Tucumán Argentina.Versión digital www.eeaoc.org.ar . ISBN: 978- 987-21283-4-0.

E . Willink, G. Gastaminza, M. C. Gramajo, A. Salvatore, M. E.

Currently published COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

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Villagrán, B. Carrizo, A. Macián, R. Avila, P. Favre, S. Toledo, M.F. GarcíaDegano, M.G. Socias y A. Oviedo. 2007. Tratamientos con frío para el controlde Ceratitis capitata y Anastrepha fraterculus para la exportación decítricos. En: Moscas de los frutos y su relevancia cuarentenaria en lacitricultura del Noroeste Argentino: once años de investigaciones 1996-2007.E. Willink, G. Gastaminza, L. Augier y B. Stein editores. Las Talitas,Tucumán Argentina. Versión digital www.eeaoc.org.ar. ISBN:978-987-21283-4-0.

Anon., 2007 Annex: Quarantine cold treatment of oranges for medfly (Ceratitis capitata Wied.).

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Document number 2007-TPPT-109a. Submission from Argentina in response to the 2007 IPPC call for treatments.

84. References [14] Editorial Anon. 2007. Anexo: Quarantine cold treatment of oranges for medfly (Ceratitis capitata Wied). Número de documento 2007-TPPT-109a. Propuesta de Argentina en respuesta a la solicitud de tratamientos de la CIPF de 2007.

De Lima, C.P.F., Jessup, A.J., Cruickshank, L., Walsh, C.J. y Mansfield, E.R. 2007. Cold disinfestation of citrus (Citrus spp.) for Mediterranean fruit fly (Ceratitis capitata) and Queensland fruit fly (Bactrocera tryoni) (Diptera: Tephritidae). New Zealand Journal of Crop and Horticultural Science, 35: 39–50.

Cambiar tipo de letra en el nombre científico

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85. TITLE [15] Paragraph 14 editorial To be placed outside the table consistence MOZAMBIQUE

86. TITLE [16] Substantive Delete or re-consider this treatment This group can be included into group 7 which has been verified by some countries.

CHINA

87. TITLE [16] Applicable to the entire treatment 2

Technical Cold treatment of Citrus reticulata × Citrus sinensis for Ceratitis capitata

(200-)

The Citrus species and cultivars and pest in this treatment are the same as the ones included in treatment No. 7 and then, it has been eliminated as an individual treatment. Its schedule has been inserted in treatment No.7.

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

88. Endorsement [17] Whole sentence

Technical EndorsementThis phytosanitary treatment was adopted by the Commission on Phytosanitary Measures in ----.

The Citrus species and cultivars and pest in this treatment are the same as the ones included in treatment No. 7 and then, it has been eliminated as an individual treatment. Its schedule has been inserted in treatment No.7.

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

89. Scope of the treatment

[18] Whole sentence

Technical Scope of the treatment The Citrus species and cultivars and pest in this treatment are the same as the ones included in treatment No. 7 and then, it has been eliminated as an individual treatment. Its schedule has been inserted in treatment No.7.

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

90. Scope of the treatment

[19] Whole sentence

Technical This treatment applies to the cold treatment of Citrus reticulata × Citrus sinensis to result in the mortality of larvae of Ceratitis capitata (Mediterranean fruit fly) at the stated efficacy

The Citrus species and cultivars and pest in this treatment are the same as the ones included in treatment No. 7 and then, it has been eliminated as an individual treatment. Its schedule has been inserted in treatment No.7.

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

91. Scope of the treatment

[19] Sentence 1 Substantive This treatment applies to the cold treatment of Citrus reticulata x Citrus sinensis (tangor) to result in the mortality of larvae of Ceratitis capitata (Mediterranean fruit fly) at the stated efficacy.

Consistency GRENADA, TRINIDAD& TOBAGO

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92. Scope of the treatment

[19] Substantive This treatment applies to the cold treatment of Citrus reticulata × Citrus sinensis to result in the mortality of eggs and larvae of Ceratitis capitata (Mediterranean fruit fly) at the stated efficacy.

As above comment [5]. JAPAN

93. Scope of the treatment

[19] Sentence 1 Substantive ...(Mediterranean fruit fly) at the stated efficacy1 based on a larval (or pupal emergence) endpoint.

Additional woridng is proposed to state whether larval survival or pupal emergence was used as an end point because it affects efficacy.

SOUTH AFRICA

94. Treatment description

[20] Whole sentence

Technical Treatment description The Citrus species and cultivars and pest in this treatment are the same as the ones included in treatment No. 7 and then, it has been eliminated as an individual treatment. Its schedule has been inserted in treatment No.7.

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95. Name of treatment [21] Both column Technical Name of treatmentCold treatment of Citrus reticulata × Citrus sinensis for Ceratitis capitata

The Citrus species and cultivars and pest in this treatment are the same as the ones included in treatment No. 7 and then, it has been eliminated as an individual treatment. Its schedule has been inserted in treatment No.7.

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96. Active ingredient [22] Both column Technical Active ingredientN/A

The Citrus species and cultivars and pest in this treatment are the same as the ones included in treatment No. 7 and then, it has been eliminated as an individual treatment. Its schedule has been inserted in treatment No.7.

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97. Treatment type [23] Both column Technical Treatment typeCold treatment

The Citrus species and cultivars and pest in this treatment are the same as the ones included in treatment No. 7 and then, it has been eliminated as an individual treatment. Its schedule has

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been inserted in treatment No.7. ARGENTINA

98. Target pest [24] Both column Technical Target pestCeratitis capitata (Diptera: Tephritidae) (Mediterranean fruit fly)

The Citrus species and cultivars and pest in this treatment are the same as the ones included in treatment No. 7 and then, it has been eliminated as an individual treatment. Its schedule has been inserted in treatment No.7.

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99. Target regulated articles

[25] Both column Technical Target regulated articlesCitrus reticulata × Citrus sinensis (tangor)

The Citrus species and cultivars and pest in this treatment are the same as the ones included in treatment No. 7 and then, it has been eliminated as an individual treatment. Its schedule has been inserted in treatment No.7.

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100. Treatment schedule [26] Both column Technical Treatment scheduleSchedule 1: 2 °C for 18 daysEfficacy and confidence level: ED99.9972 at 95% confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007).

Schedule 2: 3 °C for 20 daysEfficacy and confidence level: ED99.9972 at 95% confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007).The commodity must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

The Citrus species and cultivars and pest in this treatment are the same as the ones included in treatment No. 7 and then, it has been eliminated as an individual treatment. Its schedule has been inserted in treatment No.7.

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101. Treatment schedule [26] Last paragraph Substantive The commodity fruit pulp must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity fruit pulp temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

Replacing the word for more specification

EGYPT, LEBANON, TUNISIA

102. Treatment schedule [26] Substantive Schedule 1: 2 °C or below for 18 daysSchedule 2: 3 °C or below for 20 days

It must be treated at or below a target temperature.

JAPAN

103. Treatment schedule [26] Sentence 3 Editorial Move to para 27. More appropriate location. JAPAN

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Sentence 4104. Treatment schedule [26] Last paragraph substantive The commodity must reach the treatment

temperature before treatment commences. The commodity temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

This information does not belong to the Treatment Schedule section and should be moved to Other Relevant Information section.

USA

105. Other relevant information

[27] Both column Technical Other relevant informationPre-cooling of the commodity to treatment temperature is required.

Schedules 1 and 2 were developed using cultivars ‘Ellendale’ and ‘Murcott’.

The Citrus species and cultivars and pest in this treatment are the same as the ones included in treatment No. 7 and then, it has been eliminated as an individual treatment. Its schedule has been inserted in treatment No.7.

COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

106. Other relevant information

[27] Substantive add new intent;-The core temperature of each fruits should be measured- The treatment temperature of the commodity should be recorded during the stated period

Pre-cooling, monitoring of temperature and maximum level of temperature are described in every cold treatment schedule as basic information of cold treatment.The information should be added to the section as basic information.

JAPAN

107. Other relevant information

[27] Substantive Pre-cooling ………. More information on pre-cooling procedure such as temperature, holding time, media used for pre-cooling, etc. should be included.

MALAYSIA

108. Other relevant information

[27] Add 2nd paragraph

substantive The commodity must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

Moved from the Treatment schedule section

USA

109. References [28] Both column Technical ReferencesDe Lima, C.P.F., Jessup, A.J., Cruickshank, L., Walsh, C.J. & Mansfield, E.R. 2007. Cold disinfestation of citrus (Citrus spp.) for Mediterranean fruit fly (Ceratitis capitata) and Queensland fruit fly (Bactrocera tryoni) (Diptera: Tephritidae). New Zealand Journal of Crop and

The Citrus species and cultivars and pest in this treatment are the same as the ones included in treatment No. 7 and then, it has been eliminated as an individual treatment. Its schedule has been inserted in treatment No.7.

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Horticultural Science, 35: 39–50.

110. TITLE [29] Editorial Anexo de la publicación NIMF n.º 28 (TRATAMIENTOS FITOSANITARIOS

PARA PLAGAS REGLAMENTADAS)

Mejora la redacción ECUADOR

111. TITLE [30] Substantive Delete or re-consider this treatment Logical mistake. See[40]As for variety of Navel, the value of ED at 2℃,16 days should be beyond the value of ED at 3℃, 16 days. In this standard, ED99.9973 is less than ED 99.9988 and there is a logical mistake.

Same for variety of Valencia, in standard ED99.9960 is less than ED 99.9976 and there exists a logical mistake.

CHINA

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112. Endorsement [31]

113. Scope of the treatment

[32]

114. Scope of the treatment

[33] Editorial El presente tratamiento es aplicable al tratamiento de frío de Citrus sinensis (naranja) para inducir la mortalidad de las larvas de Bactrocera tryoni (mosca de Queensland) con la eficacia determinada 1.

1 (El alcance de los tratamientos en el marco de la Convención Internacional de Protección Fitosanitaria (CIPF) no abarca cuestiones relacionadas con el registro de plaguicidas u otros requisitos nacionales para la aprobación de tratamientos. Los tratamientos tampoco proporcionan información sobre efectos específicos en la salud humana o la inocuidad

Mejora la redacción ECUADOR

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alimentaria, que deberían abordarse mediante procedimientos nacionales antes de la aprobación de un tratamiento. Además, se consideran los efectos sobre la calidad de los productos antes de su aprobación internacional. Las Partes Contratantes no tienen obligación de aprobar, registrar o adoptar los tratamientos con vistas a su utilización en su territorio.)

115. Scope of the treatment

[33] Substantive This treatment applies to the cold treatment of Citrus sinensis (orange) to result in the mortality of eggs and larvae of Bactrocera tryoni (Queensland fruit fly) at the stated efficacy.

As above comment [5]. JAPAN

116. Scope of the treatment

[33] Sentence 1 Substantive ...(Queensland fruit fly) at the stated efficacy1 based on a larval (or pupal emergence) endpoint.

Additional woridng is proposed to state whether larval survival or pupal emergence was used as an end point

SOUTH AFRICA

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because it affects efficacy.

117. Treatment description

[34]

118. Name of treatment [35]119. Active ingredient [36]

120. Treatment type [37]121. Target pest [38]

122. Target regulated articles

[39] Substantive Citrus sinensis (Navel and Valencia ) Regarding C. sinensis (orange), cultivars or varieties should be described as shown in the references.Because it is indicated that each cultivar responded differently to cold treatment (summary report of cold treatments; para2.3.3)

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123. Treatment schedule [40] Whole Para Editorial Schedule: 2 °C or 3   °C for 16 days(16 days x 24 hours)Efficacy and confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007): For cultivar ‘Navel’ the efficacy is ED99.9973 at 2   C and ED99.9988 at 3   C at the 95% confidence level.For cultivar ‘Valencia’ the efficacy is ED99.9960 at 2   C and ED 99.9976 at 3   C at the 95% confidence level.

It is rrecommended that this information is presented in a user friendly way – an example is provided. Tabulation of recommendations should also be considered (as in the PowerPoint presentation on cold treatments posted on the IPP for the workshops).

Where more than one treatment is available these should be grouped by fruit type or cultivar. The TPPT is requested to consider moving references as an end note.

BELARUS, EPPO, ISRAEL

124. Treatment schedule [40] The whole paragraph

Editorial Schedule 1: 2 °C for 16 daysEfficacy and confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007): For cultivar ‘Navel’ the efficacy is ED99.9973 at the 95% confidence level.For cultivar ‘Valencia’ the efficacy is ED99.9960 at the 95% confidence level. Schedule 2: 3 °C for 16 daysEfficacy and confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007): For cultivar ‘Navel’ the efficacy is ED99.9988 at the 95% confidence level.For cultivar ‘Valencia’ the efficacy is ED99.9976 at the 95% confidence level.

Schedule: 16 continuous days(16 days x 24 hours)Efficacy and confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007): For cultivar ‘Navel’ the efficacy is ED99.9973 at 2°C and ED99.9988 at 3°C at the 95% confidence level.For cultivar ‘Valencia’ the efficacy is ED99.9960 at 2°C and ED99.9976 at 3°   C at the 95% confidence level.

It is recommended that this information is presented in a user friendly way – an example is provided.

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Tabulation of recommendations should also be considered (as in the PowerPoint presentation on cold treatments posted on the IPP for the workshops).

Where more than one treatment is available these should be grouped by fruit type or cultivar. The TPPT is requested to consider moving references as an end note.

125. Treatment schedule [40] Last paragraph Substantive The commodity fruit pulp must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity fruit pulp temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

Replacing the word for more specification

EGYPT, LEBANON, TUNISIA

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126. Treatment schedule [40] Substantive Schedule 1: 2 °C or below for 16 daysSchedule 2: 3 °C or below for 16 days

It must be treated at or below a target temperature.

JAPAN

127. Treatment schedule [40] Sentence 3 Sentence 4

Editorial Move to para 41. More appropriate location. JAPAN

128. Treatment schedule [40] Schedule 1 Substantive Schedule 1: 2 C for 16 daysEfficacy and confidence level (DeLima et al., 2007).For cultivar ‘Navel’ the efficacy is ED 99.9973 at the 95% confidence level.For cultivar ‘Valencia’ the efficacy is ED 99.9960 at the 95% confidence level.

This schedule is not practical. If schedule 2 allows treatment at higher temperature (3C) for the same number of days, then who would want to subject fruit to a cooler temperature (2C) at an additional cost?

USA

129. Treatment schedule [40] Last paragraph Substantive The commodity must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity temperature should be monitored and

This information does not belong to the Treatment Schedule section and should be moved to Other Relevant

USA

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should not exceed the stated level. Information section.Global change.

130. Other relevant information

[41] Technical Pre-cooling of the commodity to treatment temperature is required.

See General comments COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

131. Other relevant information

[41] Substantive add new intent;-The core temperature of each fruits should be measured- The treatment temperature of the commodity should be recorded during the stated period

Pre-cooling, monitoring of temperature and maximum level of temperature are described in every cold treatment schedule as basic information of cold treatment.The information should be added to the section as basic information.

JAPAN

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132. Other relevant information

[41] Substantive Pre-cooling ………. More information on pre-cooling procedure such as temperature, holding time, media used for pre-cooling, etc. should be included.

MALAYSIA

133. Other relevant information

[41] Add new paragraph

substantive The commodity must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

Moved from the Treatment schedule section

USA

134. References [42] Editorial De Lima, C.P.F., Jessup, A.J., Cruickshank, L., Walsh, C.J. y Mansfield, E.R. 2007. Cold disinfestation of citrus (Citrus spp.) for Mediterranean fruit fly (Ceratitis capitata) and Queensland fruit fly (Bactrocera tryoni) (Diptera Tephritidae). New Zealand Journal of Crop and Horticultural Science, 35: 39–50.

Cambiar tipo de letra en el nombre científico

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135. TITLE [43] Editorial Anexo de la publicación NIMF n.º 28 (TRATAMIENTOS FITOSANITARIOS

PARA PLAGAS REGLAMENTADAS)

Mejora redacción ECUADOR

136. TITLE [44] Substantive Delete or re-consider this treatment Logical mistake. See [54]The value of ED at 2℃, 16 days should be beyond the value of ED at 3℃, 16 days. In this standard, ED99.9968 is less than ED 99.9989 and there is a logical mistake. This implied that the reference is not sufficient to support the treatment.

CHINA

137. Endorsement [45]

138. Scope of the treatment

[46]

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139. Scope of the treatment

[47] Editorial El presente tratamiento es aplicable al tratamiento de frío de Citrus reticulata × Citrus sinensis1 para inducir la mortalidad de las larvas de Bactrocera tryoni (mosca de Queensland) con la eficacia determinada2.

1 (Las especies e híbridos de Citrus se han denominado según la nomenclatura que figura en Cottin, R. 2002. Citrus of the world: a citrus directory Francia, INRA-CIRAD.)

2 (El alcance de los tratamientos en el marco de la Convención Internacional de Protección Fitosanitaria (CIPF) no abarca cuestiones relacionadas con el registro de plaguicidas u otros requisitos nacionales para la aprobación de tratamientos. Los tratamientos tampoco proporcionan información sobre efectos

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específicos en la salud humana o la inocuidad alimentaria, que deberían abordarse mediante procedimientos nacionales antes de la aprobación de un tratamiento. Además, se consideran los efectos sobre la calidad de los productos antes de su aprobación internacional. Las Partes Contratantes no tienen obligación de aprobar, registrar o adoptar los tratamientos con vistas a su utilización en su territorio.)

140. Scope of the treatment

[47] Sentence 1 Substantive This treatment applies to the cold treatment of Citrus reticulata × Citrus sinensis (tangor) to result in the mortality of larvae of Bactrocera tryoni (Queensland fruit fly) at the stated efficacy.

Consistency GRENADA, TRINIDAD & TOBAGO

141. Scope of the treatment

[47] Substantive This treatment applies to the cold treatment of Citrus reticulata × Citrus sinensis to result in the

As above comment [5]. JAPAN

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mortality of eggs and larvae of Bactrocera tryoni (Queensland fruit fly) at the stated efficacy.

142. Scope of the treatment

[47] Sentence 1 Substantive ...(Queensland fruit fly) at the stated efficacy1 based on a larval (or pupal emergence) endpoint.

Additional woridng is proposed to state whether larval survival or pupal emergence was used as an end point because it affects efficacy.

SOUTH AFRICA

143. Treatment description

[48]

144. Name of treatment [49]

145. Active ingredient [50]146. Treatment type [51]

147. Target pest [52]

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148. Target regulated articles

[53]

149. Treatment schedule [54] Whole Para Editorial Schedule 1: 2 °C for 16 daysEfficacy and confidence level: ED99.9968 at the 95% confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007). Schedule 2: 3 °C for 16 daysEfficacy and confidence level: ED99.9989 at the 95% confidence level(De Lima et al., 2007).Schedule: 2 °C or 3   °C for 16 continuous days.(16 days x 24 hours)Efficacy and confidence level: ED99.9968 at 2   C and ED99.9989 at 3   C at the 95% confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007).

See paragraph [40] BELARUS, EPPO, ISRAEL

150. Treatment schedule [54] The whole paragraph

Editorial Schedule 1: 2 °C for 16 daysEfficacy and confidence level: ED99.9968 at the 95% confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007). Schedule 2: 3 °C for 16 daysEfficacy and confidence level: ED99.9989 at the 95% confidence level(De Lima et al., 2007).Schedule: 16 continuous days.(16 days x 24 hours)Efficacy and confidence level: ED99.9968 at 2°C and ED99.9989 at 3°C at the 95% confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007).

See paragraph 40 EC

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151. Treatment schedule [54] Last paragraph Substantive The commodity fruit pulp must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity fruit pulp temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

Replacing the word for more specification

EGYPT, LEBANON, TUNISIA

152. Treatment schedule [54] Substantive Schedule 1: 2 °C or below for 16 daysSchedule 2: 3 °C or below for 16 days

It must be treated at or below a target temperature.

JAPAN

153. Treatment schedule [54] Sentence 3 Sentence 4

Editorial Move to para 55. More appropriate location. JAPAN

154. Treatment schedule [54] Schedule 1 Substantive Schedule 1: 2 C for 16 daysEfficacy and confidence level: ED 99.9968 at the 95% confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007).

This schedule is not practical. If schedule 2 allows treatment at higher temperature (3C) for the same number of days, then who would want to subject fruit to a cooler temperature (2C) with the additional cost?

USA

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155. Treatment schedule [54] Last paragraph Substantive The commodity must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

This information does not belong to the Treatment Schedule section and should be moved to Other Relevant Information section.Global change.

USA

156. Other relevant information

[55] Technical Pre-cooling of the commodity to treatment temperature is required.

Schedules 1 and 2 were developed using cultivars ‘Ellendale’ and ‘Murcott’.

See also General comments. COSAVECHILEBRAZILPARAGUAYURUGUAYARGENTINA

157. Other relevant information

[55] Substantive add new intent;-The core temperature of each fruits should be measured- The treatment temperature of the commodity

Pre-cooling, monitoring of temperature and maximum level of temperature are described in every cold treatment schedule as basic information of cold

JAPAN

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should be recorded during the stated period treatment.The information should be added to the section as basic information.

158. Other relevant information

[55] Substantive Pre-cooling ………. More information on pre-cooling procedure such as temperature, holding time, media used for pre-cooling, etc. should be included.

MALAYSIA

159. Other relevant information

[55] Add 2nd paragraph

substantive The commodity must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

Moved from the Treatment schedule section

USA

160. References [56] Editorial De Lima, C.P.F., Jessup, A.J., Cruickshank, L., Walsh, C.J. y Mansfield, E.R. 2007. Cold disinfestation of citrus (Citrus spp.) for Mediterranean fruit fly (Ceratitis capitata) and

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ECUADOR

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Queensland fruit fly (Bactrocera tryoni) (Diptera Tephritidae). New Zealand Journal of Crop and Horticultural Science, 35: 39–50.

TITLE [57] Editorial Anexo de la publicación NIMF n.º 28 (TRATAMIENTOS FITOSANITARIOS PARA PLAGAS REGLAMENTADAS)

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TITLE [58] Substantive Delete or re-consider this treatment This is the same set of experiments as [30][44] and the ED data is also doubtful.

CHINA

Endorsement [59]

Scope of the treatment

[60]

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Sentence 1

Editorial

Substantive

El presente tratamiento es aplicable al tratamiento de frío de Citrus limon (limón) para inducir la mortalidad de las larvas de Bactrocera tryoni (mosca de Queensland) con la eficacia determinada1.

...(Queensland fruit fly) at the stated efficacy1 based on a larval (or pupal emergence) endpoint.

Mejora la redacción

Additional woridng is proposed to state whether larval survival or pupal emergence was used as an end point because it affects efficacy.

ECUADOR

SOUTH AFRICA

Treatment description

[62]

Name of [63]

1 El alcance de los tratamientos en el marco de la Convención Internacional de Protección Fitosanitaria (CIPF) no abarca cuestiones relacionadas con el registro de plaguicidas u otros requisitos nacionales para la aprobación de tratamientos. Los tratamientos tampoco proporcionan información sobre efectos específicos en la salud humana o la inocuidad alimentaria, que deberían abordarse mediante procedimientos nacionales antes de la aprobación de un tratamiento. Además, se consideran los efectos sobre la calidad de los productos antes de su aprobación internacional. Las Partes Contratantes no tienen obligación de aprobar, registrar o adoptar los tratamientos con vistas a su utilización en su territorio.

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treatmentActive ingredient [64]

Treatment type [65]

Target pest [66]

Target regulated articles

[67]

Treatment schedule

[68] The whole paragraph

The whole paragraph

Editorial

Editorial

Substantive

Schedule 2: 3 °C for 14 daysEfficacy and confidence level: ED99.9928 at the 95% confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007).Schedule: 2 °C or 3   °C for 14 continuous days.(14 days x 24 hours)Efficacy and confidence level: ED99.9935 at 2   C and ED 99.9928 at 3   C at the 95% confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007).

Schedule 1: 2 °C for 14 daysEfficacy and confidence level: ED99.9935 at the 95% confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007). Schedule 2: 3 °C for 14 daysEfficacy and confidence level: ED99.9928 at the 95% confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007).Schedule: 14 continuous days.(14 days x 24 hours)Efficacy and confidence level: ED99.9935 at 2°C and ED99.9928 at 3°C at the 95% confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007).

The commodity fruit pulp must reach the

See paragraph 40

See paragraph 40

Replacing the word for more

BELARUS

EC

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The whole paragraph

The whole paragraph

Sentence 3 Sentence 4

Editorial

Editorial

Substantive

Editorial

treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity fruit pulp temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level

Schedule 2: 3 °C for 14 daysEfficacy and confidence level: ED99.9928 at the 95% confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007).Schedule: 2 °C or 3   °C for 14 continuous days.(14 days x 24 hours)Efficacy and confidence level: ED99.9935 at 2   C and ED 99.9928 at 3   C at the 95% confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007).

Schedule 2: 3 °C for 14 daysEfficacy and confidence level: ED99.9928 at the 95% confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007).Schedule: 2 °C or 3   °C for 14 continuous days.(14 days x 24 hours)Efficacy and confidence level: ED99.9935 at 2   C and ED 99.9928 at 3   C at the 95% confidence level (De Lima et al., 2007).

Schedule 1: 2 °C or below for 14 daysSchedule 2: 3 °C or below for 14 days

Move to para 69.

specification

See paragraph 40

See paragraph 40

As above comment [12].More appropriate location.

EPPO

ISRAEL

JAPAN

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Last paragraph

Schedule 1

Last paragraph

Substantive

Substantive

Substantive

The commodity fruit pulp must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity fruit pulp temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

The commodity must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

Replacing the word for more specification

This schedule is not practical. If schedule 2 allows treatment at higher temperature (3C) for the same number of days, then who would want to subject fruit to a cooler temperature (2C) with the additional cost?

This information does not belong to the Treatment Schedule section and should be moved to Other Relevant Information

LEBANON – TUNISIA

USA

USA

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section.Global change.

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[69] Column 2, sentence 2

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Technical

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Substantive

The schedules 1 and 2 were was developed using cultivar ‘Lisbon’

Pre-cooling of the commodity to treatment temperature is required.Schedules 1 and 2 were developed using cultivar ‘Lisbon’

The schedules 1 and 2 were was developed using cultivar ‘Lisbon’.

The schedules 1 and 2 were was developed using cultivar ‘Lisbon’

The schedules 1 and 2 were was developed using cultivar ‘Lisbon’

As above comment [13].

Pre-cooling ……….

To be consistent with the previous changes.

See also General comments.

To be consistent with the previous changes.

To be consistent with the previous changes.

To be consistent with the previous changes.

As above comment [13].

More information on pre-cooling procedure such as temperature, holding time, media used for pre-cooling, etc. should be included

To be consistent with the previous changes.

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De Lima, C.P.F., Jessup, A.J., Cruickshank, L., Walsh, C.J. y Mansfield, E.R. 2007. Cold disinfestation of citrus (Citrus spp.) for Mediterranean fruit fly (Ceratitis capitata) and Queensland fruit fly (Bactrocera tryoni) (Diptera Tephritidae). New Zealand Journal of Crop and Horticultural Science, 35: 39–50.

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TITLE [71] Editorial Anexo de la publicación NIMF n.º 28 (TRATAMIENTOS FITOSANITARIOS PARA PLAGAS REGLAMENTADAS)

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El presente tratamiento es aplicable al tratamiento de frío de Citrus paradisi (toronja) para inducir la mortalidad de las larvas de Ceratitis capitata (mosca mediterránea de la fruta) con la eficacia determinada2.

This treatment applies to the cold treatment of Citrus paradisi (grapefruit) to result in the mortality of eggs and larvae of Ceratitis capitata (Mediterranean fruit fly) at the stated efficacy.

...(Mediterranean fruit fly) at the stated efficacy1 based on a larval (or pupal emergence) endpoint.

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As above comment [5].

Additional woridng is proposed to state whether larval survival or pupal emergence was used as an end point because it affects efficacy.

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2 El alcance de los tratamientos en el marco de la Convención Internacional de Protección Fitosanitaria (CIPF) no abarca cuestiones relacionadas con el registro de plaguicidas u otros requisitos nacionales para la aprobación de tratamientos. Los tratamientos tampoco proporcionan información sobre efectos específicos en la salud humana o la inocuidad alimentaria, que deberían abordarse mediante procedimientos nacionales antes de la aprobación de un tratamiento. Además, se consideran los efectos sobre la calidad de los productos antes de su aprobación internacional. Las Partes Contratantes no tienen obligación de aprobar, registrar o adoptar los tratamientos con vistas a su utilización en su territorio.

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Schedule 1: 2 °C for 19 daysThe efficacy is ED99.9917 at the 95% confidence level (Anon., 2007a).Schedule 2: 3 °C for 23 daysThe efficacy is ED99.9916 at the 95% confidence level (Anon., 2007b).The commodity must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

The commodity fruit pulp must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity fruit pulp temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

Schedule 1: 2 °C or below for 19 daysSchedule 2: 3 °C or below for 23 daysMove to para 83.

The commodity must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

See also General comments.

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As above comment [12].More appropriate location.

This information does not belong to the Treatment Schedule section and should be moved to Other Relevant Information section.Global change.

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Pre-cooling of the commodity to treatment temperature is required.Schedule 1 was developed using cultivars ‘Marsh Seedless’, ‘Star Ruby’, ‘Henninger’s Ruby’ and ‘Rouge la Toma’.Schedule 2 was developed using cultivar ‘Henninger’s Ruby’.

As above comment [13].

Pre-cooling ……….

The commodity fruit pulp must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity fruit pulp temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

The commodity must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

See also general comments

As above comment [13].

More information on pre-cooling procedure such as temperature, holding time, media used for pre-cooling, etc. should be included

Replacing the word for more specification

Moved from the Treatment schedule section

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References [84] Technical/editorial

Anon. 2007a. Annex: Quarantine cold treatment of grapefruits for medfly (Ceratitis capitata Wied.). Document

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number 2007-TPPT-110a. Submission by Argentina in response to the 2007 IPPC call for treatments.Anon. 2007b. Annex: Quarantine cold treatment for grapefruits for medfly (Ceratitis capitata Wied.). Document number 2007-TPPT-111a. Submission by Argentina in response to the 2007 IPPC call for treatments.Anon. 2007a. Anexo: Quarantine cold treatment of grapefruits for medfly (Ceratitis capitata Wied). Número de documento 2007-TPPT-110a. Propuesta de Argentina en respuesta a la solicitud de tratamientos de la CIPF de 2007.

Anon. 2007b. Anexo: Quarantine cold treatment of grapefruits for medfly (Ceratitis capitata Wied). Número de documento 2007-TPPT-111a. Propuesta de Argentina en respuesta a la solicitud de tratamientos de la CIPF de 2007.

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El presente tratamiento es aplicable al tratamiento en frío de cultivares e híbridos de Citrus reticulata3 para inducir la mortalidad de las larvas de Ceratitis capitata (mosca mediterránea de la fruta) con la eficacia determinada4.

This treatment applies to the cold treatment of Citrus reticulata cultivars and hybrids1 to result in the mortality of eggs and larvae of Ceratitis capitata (Mediterranean fruit fly) at the stated efficacy.

...(Mediterranean fruit fly) at the stated efficacy1 based on a larval (or pupal emergence) endpoint.

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As above comment [5].

Additional woridng is proposed to state whether larval survival or pupal emergence was used as an end point because it affects efficacy.

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Treatment description

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3 Las especies e híbridos de Citrus se han denominado según la nomenclatura que figura en Cottin, R. 2002. Citrus of the world: a citrus directory. Francia, INRA-CIRAD.4 El alcance de los tratamientos en el marco de la Convención Internacional de Protección Fitosanitaria (CIPF) no abarca cuestiones relacionadas con el registro de plaguicidas u otros requisitos nacionales para la aprobación de tratamientos. Los tratamientos tampoco proporcionan información sobre efectos específicos en la salud humana o la inocuidad alimentaria, que deberían abordarse mediante procedimientos nacionales antes de la aprobación de un tratamiento. Además, se consideran los efectos sobre la calidad de los productos antes de su aprobación internacional. Las Partes Contratantes no tienen obligación de aprobar, registrar o adoptar los tratamientos con vistas a su utilización en su territorio.

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Schedule 1: 2   °C for 18 days Efficacy and confidence level: ED99.9972 at 95% confidence level (De Lima et al ., 2007).

Schedule 2: 3   °C for 20 days Efficacy and confidence level: ED99.9972 at 95% confidence level (De Lima et al ., 2007).

Schedules 1 and 2 were developed using cultivars ‘Ellendale’ and ‘Murcott’.Schedule 3: 2 °C for 23 daysEfficacy and confidence level: ED99.9918 at 95% confidence level (Anon., 2007).The commodity must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

Schedule: 2 °C or below for 23 days

See comment in para 16

See also General commentsAs above comment [12].

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The commodity fruit pulp must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity fruit pulp temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

The commodity must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

More appropriate location.

Replacing the word for more specification

This information does not belong to the Treatment Schedule section and should be moved to Other Relevant Information section.Global change.

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Other relevant information

[97] Technical

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Pre-cooling of the commodity to treatment temperature is required.This schedule was developed using the following cultivars and hybrids: Clementinas Group (Citrus reticulata), ‘Ellendale’ (Citrus reticulata × C. sinensis), ‘Nova’ (C. reticulata × tangelo cultivar ‘Orlando’ (C. reticulata × Citrus paradisi)) and ‘Murcott’ (Citrus reticulata × Citrus sinensis).

As above comment [13].

Pre-cooling ……….

See also General comments

As above comment [13].

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cooling, etc. should be included.

Moved from the Treatment schedule section

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Anon. 2007. Annex: Quarantine cold treatment of tangerines and hybrids for medfly (Ceratitis capitata Wied.). Document number 2007-TPPT-112a. Submission by Argentina in response to the 2007 IPPC call for treatments.De Lima, C.P.F., Jessup, A.J., Cruickshank, L., Walsh, C.J. & Mansfield, E.R. 2007. Cold disinfestation of citrus (Citrus spp.) for Mediterranean fruit fly (Ceratitis capitata) and Queensland fruit fly (Bactrocera tryoni) (Diptera: Tephritidae). New Zealand Journal of Crop and Horticultural

Anon. 2007. Anexo: Quarantine cold treatment of tangerines and hybrids for medfly (Ceratitis capitata Wied). Número de documento 2007-TPPT-112a. Propuesta de Argentina en respuesta a la

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solicitud de tratamientos de la CIPF de 2007.

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Comment applicable to para 99-112.

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Delete or re-consider this treatment

Cold treatment of Citrus limon for Ceratitis capitataStatus of Citrus limon as Ceratitis capitata host is not clearly established and must be clarified through scientific information and advice from the TPFF.In the TPPT Tokyo meeting, it was pointed out that in certain circumstances lemons can be a host using artificial infestation or if the fruit is damaged (by thorns, fungus, wind, rain etc.).

This is the same set of experiments as [30] in group3 and [44] in group 4, and the ED data is doubtful.

For SC consideration

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Although the TPPT considered that there were sufficient circumstances under which infestation of lemons by Ceratitis capitata can occur naturally, there is not conclusive scientific evidence of this. Considering that definition of host status is a TPFF issue, this issue has to be analyzed by the TPFF before taking any decision on international adoption of this treatment.

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El presente tratamiento es aplicable al tratamiento en frío de Citrus limon para inducir la mortalidad de las larvas de Ceratitis capitata (mosca mediterránea de la fruta) con la eficacia determinada5.

This treatment applies to the cold treatment of Citrus limon (lemon) to result in the mortality of larvae of Ceratitis capitata (Mediterranean fruit fly) at the stated efficacy

This treatment applies to the cold treatment of Citrus limon to result in the

Mejora la redacción

For consistency

As above comment [5].

ECUADOR

GRENADA

JAPAN

5 El alcance de los tratamientos en el marco de la Convención Internacional de Protección Fitosanitaria (CIPF) no abarca cuestiones relacionadas con el registro de plaguicidas u otros requisitos nacionales para la aprobación de tratamientos. Los tratamientos tampoco proporcionan información sobre efectos específicos en la salud humana o la inocuidad alimentaria, que deberían abordarse mediante procedimientos nacionales antes de la aprobación de un tratamiento. Además, se consideran los efectos sobre la calidad de los productos antes de su aprobación internacional. Las Partes Contratantes no tienen obligación de aprobar, registrar o adoptar los tratamientos con vistas a su utilización en su territorio.

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mortality of eggs and larvae of Ceratitis capitata (Mediterranean fruit fly) at the stated efficacy.

...(Mediterranean fruit fly) at the stated efficacy1 based on a larval (or pupal emergence) endpoint.

This treatment applies to the coldtreatment of Citrus limon toresult in the mortality of larvae ofCeratitis capitata (Mediterraneanfruit fly) at the stated efficacy

Additional woridng is proposed to state whether larval survival or pupal emergence was used as an end point because it affects efficacy.

Consistency

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Citrus limon (lemon)

Citrus limon

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commences. The commodity fruit pulp temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

Schedule 1: 2 °C or blow for 16 daysSchedule 2: 3 °C or blow for 18 daysMove to para 97.

The commodity fruit pulp must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity fruit pulp temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

The commodity must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

As above comment [12].More appropriate location.

Replacing the word for more specification

This information does not belong to the Treatment Schedule section and should be moved to Other Relevant Information section.Global change.

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LEBANON – TUNISIA

USA

Other relevant information

[111] Substantive Citrus latifolia and Citrus aurantifolia were not validated with this treatment and hence are not part of “other relevant information”. There is no point of mentioning varieties to which the treatment was not applied.

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Citrus aurantiifolia

This treatment was only validated, andtherefore is only recognised, as atreatment for Ceratitis capitata infestingCitrus limon and not applicable to Citruslatifolia and Citrus aurantiifolia.

The commodity must reach the treatment temperature before treatment commences. The commodity temperature should be monitored and should not exceed the stated level.

As above comment [13].

More information on pre-cooling procedure such as temperature, holding time, media used for pre-cooling, etc. should be included.

To correct spelling of Citrus aurantifolia

Citrus latifolia and Citrus aurantifolia werenot validated with this treatment and henceare not part of “other relevant information”.There is no point of mentioning varieties towhich the treatment was not applied.

Moved from the Treatment schedule section

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