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Page 1: Step 1 Instructions 看图作文的关键 1. 确定图画的内容要点 2. 直截了当,开门见山 3 .表达准确,语言基本无误 (1 )用有把握的句式 (2) 注意用词表达得当
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Step 1 Instructions

Page 3: Step 1 Instructions 看图作文的关键 1. 确定图画的内容要点 2. 直截了当,开门见山 3 .表达准确,语言基本无误 (1 )用有把握的句式 (2) 注意用词表达得当

看图作文的关键

1. 确定图画的内容要点 2. 直截了当,开门见山 3 .表达准确,语言基本无误 (1 )用有把握的句式 (2) 注意用词表达得当 (3) 适当使用过渡性连接词,如 and , then , however , besides ,thus 等,使层次分明,意思连贯。

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Using simple sentenses to describe the pictures

1. S + Vi2. S + Link V + P 3. S + Vt + O4. S + Vt +  IO+DO5. S+ Vt + O+ OC Using the Past Tense to tell a story.

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描述下列图中内容,图中男子为描述下列图中内容,图中男子为 Mr. LiMr. Li 。。 ① ②

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审 题1 、 Genre( 体裁 ) :2 、 Tense :

3 、 Person 人称

Narrative 记叙;

Third

4.Paragraphs : one paragraph

Past Tense

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who Mr Li and his wife

where At Mr Li’s home

what What did Mrs Li want to do?

What did she ask Mr Li to do?

What did he do then?

What happened later?

Try to find out the information about

when one day

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图画的内容要点 the key verbs

1. ask Mr Li to keep an eye on the meal 2. agree 3. watch TV 4. forget 5. smell something terrible 6. find the meal burnt black

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( 1 )

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1. His wife wanted to go shopping.2.She asked her husband to keep an eye on the meal being cook.3.Mr. Li agreed willingly.

One day, his wife wanted to go sh

opping and asked him to keep an eye on the meal in the kitchen ,

and Mr Li agreed willingly.

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( 2 )

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His wife left. Mr Li began to watch TV. A football match was on.

After his wife left , Mr Li began to watch a football match .

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The football match was very exciting. Mr. Li lost himself in the match . Mr Li forgot the meal completely.

The football match was so exciting

that Mr Li lost himself in the

match, forgetting the meal completely.

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( 3

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His wife came home. She smelt something terrible. She rushed into the kitchen.

As soon as she came home , his wife smelt something terrible

and rushed into the kitchen at once.

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( 4 )

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They found the meal burnt black. Mr Li realized his task at that moment .

When they found the meal burnt

black , Mr Li did realize his task at that moment.

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One day, his wife wanted to go shopping and asked him to keep an eye on the meal in the kitchen , and Mr Li agreed willingly.

The football match was so exciting that Mr Li lost himself in the match, forgetting the meal completely.

the title ? A football fan

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The football match was so exciting that Mr Li lost himself in the match, forgetting the meal completely. As soon as she came home ,his wife smelt something terribleand rushed into the kitchen at once. When they found the meal burnt black , Mr Li did realize his task at that moment.

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Tips :1.用并列连词2.用 非谓语 -ing; -ed ; to do 3.用复合句4. 用 固定句型

如何把简单句连接 ?

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模仿作文

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审 题1 、 Genre( 体裁 ) :

2 、 Tense :

3 、 Person 人称:

Narrative &

Argumentative

( 记叙兼议论 ) Past tense and

Present tense ;

Third ; First

4.Paragraphs : Two paragraphs

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on the evening of February 9th

who John his mother his aunt

where at home

what

What was John doing ?

What was his mother doing ?

What happened then ?

and later?

Try to find out the information about

when

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图画的内容要点 the key verbs ?

Mum’ birthday• watch TV • prepare dinner• wait for dinner impatiently• telephone ring• say happy birthday to his mother• be sorry for having forgotten it

对此事的感受与态度 ( 1 、 2 句)

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妈妈还没做好饭 !

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John was watching TV . His mother was preparing dinner.

On the evening of February 9th,

John was watching TV while his mother was preparing dinner in the kitchen.

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He was waiting for dinner impatiently.The telephone rang.

He was waiting for dinner

impatiently when the telephone rang.

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今天是你妈妈生日,祝她生日快乐 。

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The call was from his aunt.His aunt wanted to say HAPPY BIRTHDAY to his mother.

The call was from his aunt

who wanted to say HAPPY BIRTHDAY to his mother.

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今天是妈妈生日,我怎麽全忘记了!

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John forgot his mother’s birthday. He was very sorry .

He was very sorry

for having forgotten his mother’s birthday.

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Our parents bring us up. They give us lots of love and care. We should show our love and care for them in return.

To bring us up ,our parents giv

e us lots of love and care, and we should show our love and care for them in return.

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Homework :

Write the two writing again