shooting script

Robert Staines "Sea Kelp and Ciggarettes"

Shot No. Location

Shot

Type Angle Movement Length Lyric Description of Action Actors Equipment

1 School Hall CUHigh

anglePan

3

secondsN./A

Robert S. Playing opening piano

keysRobert S. HD Camcorder and tripod

2 School Hall LS straight Pan 2seconds"Sea kelp and

ciggarettes"

Pan to Robert S. Playing piano

and singingRobert S. HD Camcorder and tripod

3 School Hall MS straight Pan and zoom2

seconds

"Track marks in her

arm"

Robert S. Playing piano and

singingRobert S. HD Camcorder and tripod

4 Bedroom LSHigh

anglestatic

3

seconds"red stripes" Brigita laying on bed Brigita K. HD Camcorder

6 Bedroom CU straight static3

seconds"lost her head"

Brigta turns to the camera and

blinks slowlyBrigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod

7 Bedroom MS straight static5

seconds"Candy braclet" Brigita getting up out of bed Brigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod


seconds

"Walks around with

glass"

Brigita's feet touching magazine

ad on floor.Brigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod


seconds"says it over"

Brigita walks away from

magazines, camera focuses in on

magazine ad

Brigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod

10 School Hall MS straight static4

seconds

"man who dying to

meet her"Robert playing piano Robert S. HD Camcorder and tripod


secondsPinao playing Article about anorexia or bulimia Robert S. HD Camcorder and tripod


seconds

"Likes to wear when

heads in a mess"Brigita grabbing her make-up Brigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod


seconds"makes her feel"

Brigitas face as she wipes off old

running mascaraBrigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod

14 School Hall ECU straight static4

seconds"Loooveeee"

Roberts fingers as he continues

playing pianoRobert S. HD Camcorder and tripod


seconds"everyone wants"

Robert playing the piano

surrounded by stage lightsRobert S. HD Camcorder and tripod

16 School Hall LS straight static3

seconds

"no-one wants as a

wife"



17 Bedroom ECU straight static4

seconds"call cat" Brigita putting on lipstick Brigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod

18 Bedroom OSS straight Zoom out3

seconds"camp fire"

Brigita looking in the mirror at her

bodyBrigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod


seconds"bad soul"

Brigita's face becomes sad and

she looks emotionalBrigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod

20 Bedroom MS straight static3

seconds"portion of chips"

Brigita grabbing baggy jacket from

chairBrigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod

21 Bedroom LS straight static5

seconds"don't make her bed"

Brigita putting on jacket and

walking away from the chair where

laptop is.


22 Bedroom MS straight3

seconds"kill all demons"

Match on action as Brigita walks

away from the chair the shot

jumps to being closer to the

laptop.


Draft 1 - Date

23 Bedroom ECU straight static4

seconds

"scare out all

monsters"

Laptop screen on a social

networking site where the girls

been left messages on a photo

saying things like "ur so ugly" and

"fat cow"


24 School Hall CU straight static3

seconds

"Walks around with

glass"

Close up of an article in a

magazine ad near the piano of

statistics

Robert S. HD Camcorder and tripod


seconds"says it over" Robert playing piano and singing Robert S. HD Camcorder and tripod


seconds"man who""

Roberts feet at the levers on the

bottom of pianoRobert S. HD Camcorder and tripod


seconds"dying to meet her" Robert's face singing Robert S. HD Camcorder and tripod

28 School Hall BEV straight static2

secondsPiano

Robert falling back to piano to play

keys with more energy.Robert S. HD Camcorder and tripod

29 Bedroom CU straight Pan2

seconds"likes to wear" Brigita grabbing Sea Kelp bottle Brigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod

30 Bedroom MS straight tilt3

seconds

"when her heads in a

mess"

tilt from face to Brigita pouring

tablets in her handBrigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod

31 Bedroom MS straight tilt4

seconds"makes her feel"

Tilt from pills to face of Brigita

contemplating to take the pillsBrigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod

32 Bedroom LS straightzoom and

track

3

seconds"chance in lifee"

Zoom into Brigita taking pills and

then tracking her as she walks out

of the room.


33 School Hall MS straight zoom out3

seconds"Lovee" Robert playing piano Robert S. HD Camcorder and tripod

34 kitchen ms straight static2

secondsPiano Brigita pushing plate of food away Brigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod


secondsPiano Robert playing piano Robert S. HD Camcorder and tripod

36 kitchen CU straight static2



secondsPiano Robert playing piano Robert S. HD Camcorder and tripod

38 kitchen ECU straight static2


39 brick lane LS straighttracking of

Brigita

6

secondsPiano

Brigita walking down the street

past shops with models in them,

she holds her stomache.


40 brick lane OSS straighttracking of

Brigita

6

seconds

"Walks around with

glass"

Brigita rubbing her hands over the

stomache. She walks straight into

camera.


41 School Hall MS

straight/

high

angle.

180 degree

rotation

3

seconds

"Likes to wear when

heads in a mess"

Zoom out of darkness to Robert

on piano, titlt over his back to a

high angle

Robert S. HD Camcorder and tripod


seconds

"makes her feel like

shes got a change in"



43 School Hall MS straight\ static3

seconds"love" Robert singing Robert S. HD Camcorder and tripod


seconds"love" Roberts face singing Robert S. HD Camcorder and tripod


secondsPiano

Robert continuing to play piano


46 brick lane CU straight static3

seconds"walks around"

Brigita's phone receiving a text

from RobertBrigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod

47 brick lane MS straight static2

seconds"glass slipper" Brigita glancing at her phone Brigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod

48 brick lane CU straight static4

seconds"says it over"

Brigita opens text message that

asks if she wants to meet up, he

drops the word "beautiful" in the

message.


49 brick lane ECU straight static2

seconds"to meet her" Brigita deletes the message Brigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod


secondsPiano

Robert playing the piano with his

head downwardsRobert S. HD Camcorder and tripod


seconds"in a visable" Roberts fingers on the keys Robert S. HD Camcorder and tripod

52 School Hall ECU straight Zoom2

seconds"wedding dress" Roberts eyes closing Robert S. HD Camcorder and tripod

53 School Hall LS straight Pan4

seconds

"Likes to wear when

heads in a mess"

Pan to the right away from Robert

into a transitionRobert S. HD Camcorder and tripod


seconds

"makes her feel like

shes got a change in"

Transition from Robert to Brigita in

study room.Brigita K. and extras HD Camcorder and tripod

55 study room MS straight Pan2

seconds"Lovee"

Laughter from group who have

thrown a paper ballBrigita K. and extras HD Camcorder and tripod

56 study room MS straight Pan2

seconds"Loveee"

Brigita is hit with paper ball on the

back of her head.Brigita K. and extras HD Camcorder and tripod

57 study room CU straight static2

seconds"Lovee" Brigita reaching for paper ball. Brigita K. and extras HD Camcorder and tripod

58 study room CU/MS straight tilt3

seconds

Brigita begins folding out the

paper ball,tilt to see her sad

expression

Brigita K. and extras HD Camcorder and tripod

59 study room OSS straight static3

seconds

Note has "Cow goes moo bitch!"

written inside.Brigita K. and extras HD Camcorder and tripod

60 study room CU straight static2

secondsGirls laughing together. Brigita K. and extras HD Camcorder and tripod

61 study room LS straight static4

seconds

Brigita gets out of seat and storms

out.Brigita K. and extras HD Camcorder and tripod

62 study room MS straight static3

secondsBrigita K. and extras HD Camcorder and tripod

63 study room MS straight static4

seconds

Pan of Brigita walking out of study

roomBrigita K. and extras HD Camcorder and tripod


secondsRobert playing his piano Robert S. HD Camcorder and tripod

65 School Hall LS straight180 degree

rotation

4

seconds

180 degree rotation around Robert

playing the pianoRobert S.

HD Camcorder and

Steadicam

66 School Hall MS straight low angle3

seconds

Robert playing piano, magazine

ads in foregroundRobert S. HD Camcorder and tripod


secondsAll the magazines on the floor Robert S. HD Camcorder and tripod


secondsRobert playing piano and singing Robert S. HD Camcorder and tripod

69 School Hall CU/MS straight static3

secondsRobert playing piano and singing Robert S. HD Camcorder and tripod


seconds

Roberts face as he plays

beginning to smileRobert S. HD Camcorder and tripod


seconds

Pan from Robert playing piano

and singing into a transition fade.Robert S. HD Camcorder and tripod

72 girls toilets MS straight static3

secondsBrigita opens door of the cubicle Brigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod

73 girls toilets BEV straight static3

seconds

Brigita sits down on toilet seat

cryingBrigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod


seconds

Brigita crying and wiping away

tearsBrigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod

75 girls toilets CU straight static2

secondsBottle of sea kelp in her hands. Brigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod


seconds

Brigita empties sea kelp pills into

her palmBrigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod


seconds

Begins looks down at the pills with

concentration on her faceBrigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod

78 girls toilets OSS straight static3

secondsphone buzzing on her lap Brigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod


secondsShe turns to her phone. Brigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod


seconds

Screen reveals it's a text from

RobertBrigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod

81 girls toilets MS straight pan3

seconds

She gives a slight smile and out of

frame presses a buttonBrigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod


seconds

Text saying "Meet me in the hall

beautiful x"Brigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod

83 girls toilets CU straight tilt4

seconds

Brigita slowly raises her head with

a smileBrigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod


secondsBrigita wipes away her tears Brigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod

85 girls toilets MS straight Pan4

seconds

Brigita walks out of toilet cubicle

towards mirrorBrigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod


seconds

Looking in the mirror she says to

herself "I'm beautiful"Brigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod


seconds

She looks towards the door and

gives herself a little chuckle of

happiness


88 School Hall MS straight360 degree

rotation

3

seconds

Robert playing piano and singing

with more energyRobert S. HD Camcorder and tripod

89 girls toilets MS straight tilt4

seconds

Brigita walks out of bathroom, tilt

down to see sea kelp tablets in the

bin.


90 School Hall MS straight360 degree

rotation

3

seconds



91school

hallwaysLS straight

tracking of

Brigita

3

seconds

Brigita running through the school

hallwaysBrigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod


secondsRobert playing piano Robert S. HD Camcorder and tripod

93school

hallwaysMS straight

tracking of

Brigita

3

seconds



94 School Hall CU/MS straight static2

seconds



95school

hallwaysMS straight

tracking of

Brigita

3

seconds




seconds




secondsBrigita opening door to hall Brigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod

98 School Hall CU/OSS straight static2

seconds




secondsRobert smiling at Brigita Robert S. and Brigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod


secondsBrigita smiling at Robert Robert S. and Brigita K. HD Camcorder and tripod

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