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REGMATH-G-1(A1) 1 5/01/2013 Regents Exam in English Language Arts (Common Core) Materials for the May 2013 NTI NOTE: Unless otherwise stated, all materials are draft. Finalized versions of these materials will be available on EngageNY or the NYSED Web site in Fall 2013. Please direct any questions or suggestions to the Office of State Assessment at [email protected]. REGELA-X-1 5/01/2013

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  • REGMATH-G-1(A1) 1 5/01/2013

    Regents Exam in

    English Language Arts

    (Common Core)

    Materials for the

    May 2013 NTI

    NOTE: Unless otherwise stated, all materials are draft. Finalized versions of these materials will be available on EngageNY or the NYSED Web site in Fall 2013. Please direct any questions or suggestions to the Office of State Assessment at [email protected].

    REGELA-X-1 5/01/2013

  • REGELA-X-2 5/8/2013

    Regents Exam in English Language Arts

    (Common Core)

    Materials for the May 2013 NTI

    Table of Contents

    Order Document Name Document ID

    1 Test Blueprint Document (Wrapper) REGELA-A-1w

    2 Test Blueprint Document REGELA-A-1

    3 Test Purpose Document REGELA-A-2

    4 ELA Part II and III Rubrics (Wrapper) REGELA-B-2w

    5 ELA Part II Rubric - Argumentative REGELA-B-2

    6 ELA Part II Rubric - Expository REGELA-B-3

    7 ELA Part III Rubric REGELA-B-4

    8 Guidelines for Text Selection (Wrapper) REGELA-D-1w

    9 Guidelines for Text Selection REGELA-D-1

    10 Text Review Form (Wrapper) REGELA-D-2w

    11 Text Review Form REGELA-D-2

    12 Text Complexity Form (Wrapper) REGELA-D-3w

    13 Text Complexity Form REGELA-D-3

    14 Item Writing Form - MCQs (Wrapper) REGELA-E-1w

    15 Item Writing Form - MCQs REGELA-E-1

    16 Item Review Checklist - MCQs (Wrapper) REGELA-E-2w

    17 Item Review Checklist - MCQs REGELA-E-2

    18 ELA Sample Items Spring 2013 for NTI REGELA-H-2

  • REGELA-A-1w 4/30/2013

    Regents Examination in English Language Arts (Common Core)

    Test Blueprint The Regents Examination in English Language Arts (Common Core) consists of three parts, which include 24 multiple-choice items and two writing prompts. All items will measure the Common Core English Language Arts standards as defined in the NYS P-12 Common Core Learning Standards. One of the major curricular shifts demanded by the Common Core for English Language Arts is a focus on writing from sources using evidence. The Common Core’s attention to evidence-based writing is underscored by the demand from New York State college and university faculty members that students enter college with these important skills. The CCLS requires that informational text, in particular literary nonfiction, take on a more dominant role in high school English Language Arts classes than they have before and the blueprint of the exam reflects this requirement. For example, according to the blueprint, Part 1 of the exam must include an informational text. Part 2 will generally consist of up to five informational texts. Part 3 will include either an informational text or a literature text. Taken as a whole, the test blueprint for the Regents Examination in English Language Arts (Common Core) aligns to the expectations of an 11th grade student approaching college and career readiness. The Test Blueprint is currently in draft and will be finalized at a later date.

  • REGELA-A-1 1 4/30/2013

    THE STATE EDUCATION DEPARTMENT / THE UNIVERSITY OF THE STATE OF NEW YORK / ALBANY, NY12234

    Test Blueprint: Regents Examination in English Language Arts (Common Core)

    The Regents Examination in English Language Arts (Common Core) consists of three parts, which include 24 multiple-choice items and two writing prompts. All items will measure the Common Core English Language Arts standards as defined in the NYS P-12 Common Core Learning Standards. One of the major curricular shifts demanded by the Common Core for English Language Arts is a focus on writing from sources using evidence. The Common Core’s attention to evidence-based writing is underscored by the demand from New York State college and university faculty members that students enter college with these important skills. The CCLS requires that informational text, in particular literary nonfiction, take on a more dominant role in high school English Language Arts classes than they have before and the blueprint of the exam reflects this requirement. For example, according to the blueprint, Part 1 of the exam must include an informational text. Part 2 will generally consist of up to five informational texts. Part 3 will include either an informational text or a literature text. Taken as a whole, the test blueprint for the Regents Examination in English Language Arts (Common Core) aligns to the expectations of an 11th grade student approaching college and career readiness.

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  • REGELA-A-2 1 4/30/2013

    THE STATE EDUCATION DEPARTMENT / THE UNIVERSITY OF THE STATE OF NEW YORK / ALBANY, NY12234

    About the Regents Examination in English Language Arts (Common Core)

    Designed to Measure the Common Core Learning Standards for English Language Arts

    The Regents Examination in English Language Arts (Common Core) is designed to measure students’ achievement of the Grade 11-12 band Common Core Learning Standards (CCLS) for English Language Arts (ELA). The CCLS for English Language Arts make up a broad set of literacy expectations for students. The CCLS English Language Arts Standards define literacy as integrated comprehension, analysis, and communication of information gleaned from reading, regardless of the text type. The Regents Exam in ELA (Common Core) measures the Grade 11-12 band Reading, Writing, and Language standards, but due to the cumulative nature of the standards, items may also measure standards in earlier grade bands. In addition, not all standards are measured by every form of the exam. Because it is not possible to measure all ELA standards during the three-hour Regents Exam, Speaking and Listening standards will not be assessed on the Regents Exam in ELA (Common Core). While Speaking and Listening Standards will not be assessed on the exam, they remain two important components of college and career readiness, therefore, it is imperative that teachers continue to instruct and assess the Speaking and Listening Standards in the classroom.

    About the Complexity of the Texts Featured on the Exam

    Experienced English teachers evaluate the appropriateness of texts for use on each part of the Regents Exam in ELA (Common Core) using both quantitative and qualitative analyses in accordance with the Common Core Standards for English Language Arts & Literacy in History/Social Studies, Science, and Technical Subjects: Appendix A requirements.

  • REGELA-A-2 2 4/30/2013

    About the Types of Texts Featured on the Exam

    In order to meet the demands as articulated by the CCLS, the Regents Exam in ELA (Common Core) requires students to read, analyze and write about a balance of literary and informational texts.

    Emphasis on Writing from Sources

    The CCLS emphasizes the importance of close reading and text-based writing. The Regents Exam in ELA (Common Core) requires that students demonstrate their college and career readiness in writing through two text-based writing tasks. Part 2 of the exam requires students to write a prompt-based argument or expository essay using evidence from their close reading of 3 to 5 primarily informational texts to support their claim or topic. Part 3 requires students to write a two to three paragraph response to a literary or informational text in which they analyze an effect intended by the author and the element or technique the author uses to achieve that effect.

    The Exam Will Assess the Key Skills and Content that Students Need to be On Track for College and a Career

    NYSED worked extensively with educators from SUNY, CUNY, and independent colleges in New York State to ensure the Regents Exam in ELA (Common Core) measures the knowledge and skills needed for students to succeed in their first year of credit-bearing college courses. For example, Part 2 of the Regents Exam represents a common task in New York State entry-level college courses.

    Students Who Score Proficient on the Exam Will Be Ready for Entry-Level Credit-Bearing ELA Courses in College

    The Regents Exam in ELA (Common Core) was developed by New York State high school educators with the assistance of members of the New York State higher education community. Although not all students who are proficient on the Regents Exam in ELA (Common Core) will ultimately succeed in credit-bearing college courses, a score of proficient on the exam will nonetheless serve as a helpful indicator that a student has a high likelihood of possessing the skills necessary to access the content and skills being taught in applicable college courses.

  • REGELA-B-2w 4/30/2013

    New Rubrics for the Regents Examination in English Language Arts (Common Core)

    Part II and Part III of the new Regents Examination in English Language Arts (Common Core) will be scored using new holistic rubrics. For some test administrations Part II will require an argumentative essay, whereas at other test administrations Part II will require an expository essay; therefore, there are two rubrics for Part II. Part III will always be scored using the same rubric. All rubrics reflect the new demands called for by the CCLS high school standards through the end of grade 11. The rubrics are currently drafts and will be finalized after feedback from the field is incorporated and the rubrics have been proofed during the Fall 2013 range-finding activities.

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    Guidelines for Text Selection

    Texts submitted for use on the Regents Exam in ELA (Common Core) must be worth reading and exemplify the CCLS writing standards. They must be sufficiently complex and merit the close reading and level of analysis required at the 11th-CCR Band level. All texts selected must be aligned to the requirements of the particular exam part and must adhere to the following general specifications. Educators may consider using the Guidelines for Text Selection in their own classrooms to ensure the texts their students are using meet the demands of the Common Core and are thus similar to those texts that students will encounter on the Regents Examination and in college and their careers. The Guidelines for Text Selection are currently in draft and will be finalized at a later date.

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    REGELA-D-1 1 4/26/2013

    Regents Examination in English Language Arts (Common Core)

    Guidelines for Text Selection Texts submitted for use on the Regents Exam in ELA (CC) must be worth reading and exemplify the CCLS writing standards. They must be sufficiently complex and merit the close reading and level of analysis required at the 11th-CCR Band level. All texts selected must be aligned to the requirements of the particular exam part and must adhere to the following general specifications. General Specifications for Text Selection

    1. Text Type

    a. CCLS aligned literature texts include stories (the subgenres of adventure stories, historical fiction, mysteries, myths, science fiction, realistic fiction, allegories, parodies, satire, and graphic novels); drama (one-act and multi-act plays); and poetry (the subgenres of narrative poems, lyrical poems, free verse poems, sonnets, odes, ballads, and epics).

    b. CCLS aligned informational texts consist of literary nonfiction (the subgenres of exposition, argument, and functional text in the form of personal essays, speeches, opinion pieces, essays about art or literature, biographies, memoirs, journalism, and historical, scientific, technical, or economic accounts written for a broad audience).

    2. Text Authorship and Source

    a. Literature text authors should represent the best of American and world literature and a balance of historical periods, ethnicities, perspectives, and genders.

    b. Informational text authors should be experts in their respective fields. c. Text authors should not be currently holding or running for any prominent political

    office. d. Texts should be selected from a variety of authors. e. Texts should be selected from a variety of sources including books, newspapers,

    magazines and websites. f. Texts must be authentic and published in reputable print or web sources.

    i. Reputable print sources include major newspapers, refereed academic publications, major presses, government publications, etc.

    ii. Reputable web sources include the Library of Congress, Smithsonian, New York Public Library, Project Gutenberg, universities, newspapers, etc.

    g. Primary sources are preferred. h. Texts that are great classic and contemporary works of literature and topics that may

    be covered in academic subject areas may be selected.

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    3. Text Content

    a. Text content must be appropriate for 11th grade students. b. Text content, writing style, or language adheres to the AERA Standards for Educational

    and Psychological Testing, 7.4; it does not contain “language” symbols, words, phrases, and content that are generally regarded as offensive by members of racial, ethnic, gender or other groups, except when judged to be necessary for adequate representation of the domain.

    c. Text content should not require extensive outside knowledge for comprehension. d. Text content must be engaging such that even students who do not find the particular

    topic, information, situation, or plot of interest could persist in close reading. e. Informational texts must be accurate and not outdated, unless historical. f. Texts must be information rich and complex enough to support the specified number

    of multiple-choice questions required by Part 1 of the exam or the writing required by Part 2 or Part 3.

    4. Text Quality

    a. Texts should be worth reading because of their artistry, style, point of view, content, historical significance, authorship, or place in the canon of American or world literature.

    b. Texts must present sufficient content and complexity to merit close reading. Levels of meaning or quality of writing should enable a focused examination of content, structure, or style.

    c. Texts must present sufficient evidence and detail to support analysis of information, perspective, nuances, implications, or plot development, setting, characterization, etc.

    d. Texts must provide sufficient background information for students to understand unfamiliar contexts and/or information.

    5. Text Craftsmanship

    a. Texts should exemplify mature, disciplined writing that could be used to instruct students in the development of their writing skills.

    b. Texts should display fine craftsmanship including features such as an effective organizational structure, clear and precise writing, sufficiently elaborated ideas, detailed descriptions or characterizations, coherent paragraphs, transitions, literary devices, sentence variety, effective word choice, correct language usage, and appropriate grammar.

    6. Text Difficulty and Complexity

    a. Texts must be in the Grade 11th-CCR Band. Text evaluation will include a quantitative and qualitative review (see “Text Complexity: Quantitative and Qualitative Review.”)

  • REGELA-D-2w 4/30/2013

    Regents Examination in English Language Arts (Common Core) Text Review Form

    The Text Review Form is used by the New York State educators who create the Regents Exam as a tool to identify those texts that might be candidates for inclusion on the final forms of the Regents Examination in English Language Arts (Common Core). Educators may consider using the Text Review Form in their own classrooms to ensure the texts their students are using meet the demands of the Common Core and are thus similar to those texts that students will encounter on the Regents Examination and in college and their careers. The Text Review Form is currently in draft and will be finalized at a later date.

  • THE STATE EDUCATION DEPARTMENT / THE UNIVERSITY OF THE STATE OF NEW YORK / ALBANY, NY 12234

    Office of State Assessment

    REGELA-D-2 1 4/26/2013

    New York State Regents Examination in English Language Arts (Common Core)

    Text Review Form

    Title _______________________________________________ Genre_______ Test Part ______

    Author/Source__________________________________________________________________

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    Criteria for Text Selection

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    1. The text is aligned to CCLS literature or informational text guidelines.

    2. The text is worth reading and appropriate for use on the Regents Exam in ELA.

    3. The text content, writing style, or language adheres to the AERA Standards for

    Educational and Psychological Testing, 7.4—it does not contain “language,

    symbols, words, phrases, and content that are generally regarded as offensive by

    members of racial, ethnic, gender, or other groups, except when judged to be

    necessary for adequate representation of the domain.”

    4. The text content, writing style, and language are unlikely to provide an

    unacceptable advantage or disadvantage for any student group.

    5. The text is authentic and published in a reputable print or web source.

    6. The text demonstrates the CCLS 11th

    -CCR Band level rigor and complexity—

    based on the Quantitative and Qualitative Text Review. (see Text Complexity:

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    7. The text provides sufficient evidence for students to understand unfamiliar

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    8. The text is sufficiently accessible and interesting to engage students in close

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    9. The informational text content is accurate (exceptions may be made for historical

    texts).

  • REGELA-D-2 2 4/26/2013

    Additional comments regarding text appropriateness for the Regents Exam in

    ELA:

    Recommendation: Accept/Reject/Save/Other

    Suggested action—need content area specialist for review, need source verification,

    need another text on the same topic, need another text by the same author,

    recommend holding the text for another year, need another translation, etc.

  • REGELA-D-3w 4/30/2013

    Regents Examination in English Language Arts (Common Core)

    Text Complexity Form The appropriateness of texts for use on the Regents Exam in ELA (Common Core) is evaluated through the use of both quantitative and qualitative analysis in accordance with the Common Core Standards for English Language Arts & Literacy in History/Social Studies, Science, and Technical Subjects Appendix A requirements.

    The Quantitative Analysis of each text is conducted using the Lexile Framework and at least two other measures such as ATOS, DRP, Flesch-Kincaid, etc. These measures are based on computer analysis of text characteristics, such as word length or frequency, sentence length, and text coherence. While these measures provide an indication of text complexity, they are inappropriate for poetry and may underestimate or overstate the complexity of some texts. Texts that score outside of the 11th-CCR Band must be justified for use on the exam by the Qualitative Analysis. The Qualitative Analysis of all texts is conducted by experienced English teachers who evaluate the appropriateness of the text for the exam based on its content, knowledge demands, richness and complexity, structure and organization, and language use and vocabulary. Educators may consider using the Text Complexity Form in their own classrooms to ensure the texts their students are using meet the text complexity demands of the Common Core and are thus similar to those texts that students will encounter on the Regents Examination and in college and their careers. The Text Complexity Form is currently in draft and will be finalized at a later date.

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  • REGELA-E-1w 4/30/2013

    Regents Examination in English Language Arts (Common Core)

    Part 1: Multiple Choice Item-Writing Form The Multiple Choice Item-Writing Form is used by the New York State educators who create the Regents Exam as a tool to systematically craft multiple choice items that meet the demands of the Common Core, especially the use of textual evidence to support the correct response for each multiple-choice item. Educators may consider using the Multiple Choice Item-Writing Form in their own classrooms to craft formative multiple choice examinations that rigorously address the Reading standards of the Common Core for English Language Arts. The Multiple Choice Item-Writing Form is currently in draft and will be finalized at a later date.

  • THE STATE EDUCATION DEPARTMENT / THE UNIVERSITY OF THE STATE OF NEW YORK / ALBANY, NY 12234

    REGELA-E-1 1 4/26/2013

    Regents Examination in English Language Arts (Common Core)

    Part 1: Multiple-Choice Item Writing Form

    Item Writer ________________________________________ Date______________________ Text Title __________________________________________ Author_____________________

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  • REGELA-E-1 2 4/26/2013

    Text evidence for options (cite paragraph, line, or phrase) 1_______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 2_______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 3_______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 4_______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________

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  • REGELA-E-2w 4/30/2013

    Regents Examination in English Language Arts (Common Core)

    Item Review Checklist The Item Review Checklist is used by the New York State educators who create the Regents Exam as a quality control tool to ensure each question on each exam is properly aligned to the Common Core and is of sufficient psychometric rigor. Educators may consider using the Item Review Checklist in their own classrooms to ensure their own items meet the same standards that Regents Exam items must meet. The Item Review Checklist is currently in draft and will be finalized at a later date.

  • THE STATE EDUCATION DEPARTMENT / THE UNIVERSITY OF THE STATE OF NEW YORK /

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    REGELA-E-2 1 4/26/2013

    New York State Regents Examination in English Language Arts (Common Core)

    Multiple-Choice Item Review Checklist

    Text _________________________________________________ Item __________________________ Standard _______________________ Reviewer _____________________________________________ Date __________________________

    Criteria Agree/ Disagree

    1. The item is free of content that might offend, typecast, or lead to offensive or stereotypic inferences regarding individuals or groups of different genders, ethnicities, locations, religions, socioeconomic status, political views, family situations, ability, physical, or mental conditions, etc.

    2. The item would not be construed as offensive to any constituency, even if taken out of context.

    3. The item asks a question worth asking; it is not trivial, tricky, unrelated to a close reading of the text, or unnecessary to an understanding or analysis of the text.

    4. The item is correctly aligned to the CCLS Standard identified.

    5. The item is well crafted and succinct; language and word choice are appropriate, clear, direct, graceful, etc.

    6. Item word choice is purposeful, and every word in the item stem and options facilitates meaning and is necessary.

    7. Item word use is clear; pronouns have referents, words with double-meanings are avoided, etc.

    8. Item vocabulary is on grade level, unless item assesses vocabulary.

    9. The item only uses acronyms or foreign words whose meaning is clear in the text.

    10. The item is written in the active voice.

    11. The item is written in present tense, unless another tense is appropriate.

    12. Item identification of persons, locations, etc., is identical to the text and consistent throughout the entire item set.

    13. Item references to lines in the text are correct.

    14. The item stem is straightforward and unambiguous.

    15. The item stem presents a single, central problem.

    16. The item stem does not provide the analysis that students need to perform to answer the question.

    17. The item stem presents sufficient information and qualifications to enable the student to answer the question.

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    18. The item stem does not include words, phrases, number, tense, or grammar that cue particular options.

    19. The item has one and only one correct text-based answer.

    20. The correct answer requires understanding and analysis of the text.

    21. Incorrect item options are text-based and plausible.

    22. Item options are written such that the answer is not obvious because of word choice, length, etc.

    23. Item options are consistent with the stem and written using parallel structures: forms, styles, tenses, etc.

    24. Item options are mutually exclusive, but not opposites.

    25. Item options are ordered by their appearance in the text, their numerical order, or other logical criteria (note that some exceptions require that options be randomized).

    26. The item does not use absolute statements: never, always, impossible, etc.

    27. The item follows Universal Design principles; exceptions may be justified for standards-based reasons.

    28. The item is unique in the item set; it does not repeat similar concepts or wording of other items.

    29. The item set, taken collectively, requires that the student understand the whole of the text—that is, the central ideas and themes as they are developed in the text.

    30. The item’s correct answer is not indicated, cued, or prompted by other items in the item set.

    31. Negative prompts are used no more than once in the item set.

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  • REGELA-H-2 1 5/8/2013

    Regents Exam in

    English