press releases 1. press releases/news releases (1) short, 1–2 pages sent to media – wire...
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Press releases
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Press releases/news releases (1) Short, 1–2 pages Sent to media – wire services, daily
newspapers, magazines, radio or TV stations Uses:
Report on recent activity Announce future event Announce something new in org that may interest
people and influence them
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Press releases/news releases (2) Provide basic facts –who, what, when, where, why,
and how Brief, accurate
Editors and reporters don’t want to dig for information Should read like newspaper story
Most important info in paragraph 1 Supporting details later
Editors cut bottom of story to make it fit space available, so important info at end may disappear
Don’t start with Director’s name Most editors will change this Changes increase risk of errors
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Inverted pyramid
The lead: the most important information: 5 Ws and H
Other important information
Further details
Headline
The body
Or hereEditor may
cut here
Inverted pyramid
Necessary information
The lead: the most important information: 5 Ws and H
Other important information
Further details
Headline
Identity paragraph
Contact details
Photographs
Supporting data
The body
Possible additions
Wineglass
Necessary information
The lead: the most important information: 5 Ws and H
Other important information
Further details
Headline
Identity paragraph
Contact details
Photographs
Supporting data
The body
Possible additions
New insight (“kicker”, “sting in the tail”)
Focus on an individual
Diamond
(or other strong close)
Broaden to describe larger issue he/she illustrates
Conclude by returning to individual
The headline
Title of story Attracts editors’ and readers’ attention Makes it easy to determine content Styles:
Informational More money for mango research
Teasing Mangoes make the world go round
Cute More money for mangoes from minister
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The lead
First 1-2 sentences of story Sums up the story Short, but not too short Tells you what story covers, what reader will
find in it News stories: informational leads
5 Ws & H: who, what, where, when, why, how? Feature stories: teasing leads
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The lead
Old style Today, the Minister of Agriculture, at a national conference
on agricultural policy issues, announced that the country’s annual budget for horticultural research would be increased this year by 30 percent over that for last year.
News up front There will be 30 percent more money for horticultural
research next year, said Maurice Minnis, Minister of Agriculture, at a national conference on agricultural policy issues this morning. The money will be used to develop new fruit and vegetable production technologies.
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The lead
There will be 30 percent more money for
horticultural research next year, said
Maurice Minnis, Minister of Agriculture,
at a national conference on agricultural
policy issues this morning. The money will
be used to develop new fruit and vegetable
production technologies.
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When
Who
Where
What
Why/how
Jargon
Avoid scientific, technical or development jargon Aim language at educated 14-year-old Rewrite jargon in plain language, then get it
approved by specialist Technical terms
Gender Millennium Goals Well known to development professionals, but not
to media editor or audience
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Quotes
Don’t use quotes to provide information “We have opened a loan window of Rs 124 crore,
aimed at small farmers. Interest rates are 3 percent and repayment can be in instalments.”
Do use quotes to provide insights and opinion “We expect farmers to be queuing up for these
new loans. They can borrow small amounts at low interest and repay in instalments.”
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Quotes
Say who said it, and say who they are “Beekeeping is a fantastic hobby”, says Udo
Gensowski, chairman of the Bechen Beekeeping Association. “Bees are fascinating creatures, they are an important part of nature, and they make great honey.”
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Getting quotes
Listen for catchy sound bites Note down (or record) immediately what the
person says Check with them if it is OK to use the quote
Don’t make quotes up! Except perhaps for staff of your institute:
If you make up a quote, check it with the person you are quoting
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Identity paragraph
Standard identity paragraph Describes your organization and what it does Include in every press release
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Contact information
Website Names of people who can provide more
information Often the public relations officer + 1 technical
specialist Email addresses, phone numbers Must be available in the evening
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Softcopies
Ask media contacts How they want to get releases: email, hardcopy,
fax… What is best email address
Put on website Photos
Provide at high enough resolution for print use (3 megapixels)
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Emailing press releases
Subject line: catchy title PRESS RELEASE: “Bees making honey for
Prime Minister” Put Press release or Story idea in the Subject
line or at the top of the body Put the brief in the body of the email text, not
as an attachment Create a template with your organization’s
logo, identity paragraph and contact details
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Hardcopies, faxes
Double-space hard-copies Page 1
Print on your org’s letterhead Include org name, mailing address, tel. no., area code,
name of contact person “For immediate release” or “For use after 3 July 2007”
If more than 1 page - more - at bottom of page 1 Put org name or subject of release at the top of page 2 - end - at bottom of page 2
If attach photos, provide captions
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More information
The Guardian: How to write an effective press release http://www.theguardian.com/small-business-network/2014/jul/14/how-to-write-pr
ess-release Huffington Post: 8 tips for writing a great press release
http://www.huffingtonpost.com/zach-cutler/press-release-tips_b_2120630.html?ir=India&adsSiteOverride=in
Entrepreneur: How to write a press release that gets noticed http://www.entrepreneur.com/article/226011
Inc.: How to write a press release http://www.inc.com/guides/2010/09/how-to-write-a-press-release.ht ml
The Marketing Donut: A complete guide to writing an effective press release http://
www.marketingdonut.co.uk/marketing/pr/writing-a-press-release/a-complete-guide-to-writing-an-effective-press-release
Hubspot Blogs: How to write a press release blog.hubspot.com/marketing/press-release-template-ht
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