planning for draft 5 4
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Planning for draft 5
By Debbie Marques, Maria Younes and Milka Erko
Shotlist Scenes Shot
descriptionLocation Characters Art dept./props Costume
1 Closeup of road name
Exterior / / /
2 Closeup shot of puddle
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3 Establishing shot of house
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4 Closeup shot of time
Interior ‘’ Mobile phone ‘’
5 Closeup of writting on paper
Interior Debbie as sophie
Paper, pen Pyjamas , blanket
6 Mid shot of girl studying
Interior, living room
‘’ Papers,folders, books,pens
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7 Closeup of what girl is studying
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8 Mid shot of girl checking phone
‘’ ‘’ Mobile phone ‘’
9 Closeup shot of text from friend
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Location Characters Art dept./props Costume
10 Mid shot of girl’s facial expression
Interior, living room
Debie as sophie
Mobile phone Pyjamas , blanket
11 Point of view shot of girl replying to text
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12 Mid shot of girl’s facial expression
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13 Closeup of replying to text
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14 Mid shot of putting phone back on table
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15 Closeup shot of time
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16 Long shot of girl studying on sofa
‘’ ‘’ Books, papers,folders ‘’
17 Mid shot of girl studying
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18 Closeup of writting
‘’ ‘’ Paper, pen ‘’
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Location Characters Art dept./props Costume
19 Mid shot of girl checking phone again
Interior, living room
Debbie as sophie
Mobile phone Pyjamas, blanket
20 Closeup of NHS text
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21 High angle of girl ‘s facial expression
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22 Closeup shot of girl’s shocked face
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23 Mid shot of girl getting up to check post
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24 Mid shot of girl running
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25 Long shot of girl running to door
Interior, corridor ‘’ ‘’ ‘’
26 Closeup shot of letters on floor
‘’ ‘’ Letters , envelopes ‘’
27 Mid shot of girl finding letter
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Location Characters Art dept./props Costume
28 Closeup of envelope
Interior corridor Debbie as sophie
Envelope Pyjamas, blanket
29 Closeup of girl opening letter
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30 Closeup of girl’s facial expression
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31 Closeup of letter ‘’ ‘’ NHS letter ‘’
32 Extreme closeup shot of girl’s eyes reading
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33 Extreme closeup shot of ‘HIV Positive’ words
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34 Mid shot of girl dropping letter
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35 Closeup shot of letter falling
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36 Mid shot of girl falling on floor
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Location Characters Art dept./props Costume
37 Two shot of girl and friend
Interior, living room , sofa
Debbie as Sophie and Milka as Lola
/ Sophie: jeans, black vest, pink and grey jumperLola : black leggings, black jacket
38 Mid shot of friend
‘’ Milka as Lola / Black leggings, lack jacket
39 Mid shot of girl ‘’ Debbie as sophie
/ Jeans, black vest, pink and grey jumper
40 Two shot of girl and friend
‘’ Debbie as sophie and milka as lola
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41 Long shot of girl kneeling on floor
Interior, corridor Debbie as sophie
/ Pyjamas, blanket
42 Closeup shot of girl thinking
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43 Two shot of couple talking
Interior Restaurant
Debbie as sophie and jean as danny
/ Sophie: orange jeans, black topDanny: checkered shirt, grey jumper, jeans
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Location Characters Art dept./props Costume
44 Low angle of couple talking
Interior, restaurant
Debbie as sophie and jean as danny
/ Sophie: oange jeans, black topDanny: checkeredshirt, grey jumper , jeans
45 Mid shot of couple, boy trying to seduce girl
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46 Point of view shot of leaving restaurant
Exterior ‘’ / ‘’
47 Long shot of couple from behind
Exterior ‘’ / ‘’
48 Point of view shot of boy giving girl a smile
Exterior ‘’ / ‘’
49 Long shot of couple from behind
exterior ‘’ / ‘’
50 Mid shot of girl back to reality
Interior, corridor Debbie as sophie
/ Pyjamas, blanket
Scenes Shot description
Location Characters Art dept./props Costume
51 Mid shot of couple arriving home, girl drunk
Interior, corridor Debbie as sophie, jean as danny
/ Sophie: orange jeans, black leather jacketDanny: jeans, blue jacket
52 Mid shot of boy putting girl on bed
Interior, bedroom ‘’ / ‘’
53 High angle of girl drunk in bed
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54 Point of view shot of boy taking off his jacket
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55 Point of view shot of boy coming towards girl
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56 Closeup of girl thinking (reality)
Interior, corridor Debbie as sophie
/ Pyjamas, blanket
57 Extreme closeup shot of boy’s hand undoing girl’s jacket
Interior, bedroom Debbie as sophie and jean as danny
/ Sophie: orange, jeans, black top, leather jacket Danny: checkered shit and jeans
Scenes Shot description
Location Characters Art dept./props Costume
58 High angle of boy on top of girl kissing
Interior, bedroom
Debbie as sophie, jean as danny
/ Sophie: orange jeans, black top, leather jacketDanny: checkered shit, jeans
59 Closeup shot of boy’s hand going up girl’s leg
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60 Closeup shot of girl drunk laying on bed
‘’ Debbie as sophie
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61 Closeup shot of girl devastated
Interior, corridor ‘’ / Pyjamas, blanket
62 High angle of girl lying on floor crying
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63 Zoom out of girl lying beside NHS letter
‘’ ‘’ NHS letter ‘’