PEER FEEDBACK Double Page Spread

FEEDBACK After completing my double page spread, our class peer marked and gave feedback on each others work.

I received some valuable bits of information on how to improve my double page spread and I took them on board and changed some areas to improve it.

What went well…

Even better if…

DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD, BEFORE…

DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD, AFTER…

I changed the size of the quote on the left hand page of my double page spread, because it was too big and didn’t look right above the image and masthead.

It took away attention from the main image and I didn’t want that to be the case.

I also changed some of the writing, making it make more grammatical sense. E.g. ‘The 21 year old shabby chic solo artist’ changed to; ‘The Shabby Chic 21 year old..’.

I changed the slang abbreviated word, ‘collab’ to ‘collaboration’ in the introductory paragraph to the article, so it was more understandable.