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Who said “In order to succeed, your desire for success should be greater than your fear of failure”?
A. Winston ChurchillB. Bruce LeeC. Bill CosbyD. Michael JordanE. Albert Einstein
October 15, 2014
TURN IN YOUR SUMMARY OF CHAPTER 3
HABIT QUIZ
DISCUSS CHAPTER 3Write one thing you found
interesting in the chapter and then one question you have about
the chapter.
ESSAY #2 PROMPT AND RUBRIC
Paraphrasing
Paraphrasing is summarizing but with a smaller text (a paragraph or two rather than a chapter or a book)
Read the text a few times Look away and put it in your own words Include a proper citation—
end of the sentence (Duhigg 161).
If you use the author’s name to introduce the paraphrase, do not include his name in the citation—
end of the sentence (161).
Paraphrasing DuhiggYellow Paper
Find the place where Duhigg discusses each point Do not be fooled by an example—find
the place he is explaining the point Paraphrase the passage with a proper
citation You can work in groups, but you cannot
have more than four people in a group! When you finish, bring the paper to me
or Margeaux.
Responding to DuhiggBlue Paper
Write about your habit in each space
You must do this alone!!!!! When you finish, bring the paper to
me or Margeaux.
Statements (Topic Sentences)Green Paper
Look at the blue paper Find the point of each paragraph You should be making a statement (your
opinion) Do not repeat what Duhigg wrote Each one should be ONE complete
sentence When you finish, bring the paper to me or
Margeaux.
S-E-E PARAGRAPHS
S for Statement
Begin with a topic sentence that gives the reader a sense of what the single main idea of the paragraph will be. This sentence should be one of the “supporting reasons” for your thesis statement. It should have opinion!
E for Evidence
This is the part of your paragraph where you support your topic sentence by including a specific point taken from the “proof text” (the essay, article, book, everyday life, etc. you are writing about or analyzing). The evidence is a paraphrase or quotation.
E for Explanation
You want to explain your topic sentence and its connection to the evidence. You want to include your analysis here. Why did you include the quotation or paraphrase? What do you want to say about it? You should include specific examples to illustrate your points (these examples should come from you, not the source), but be sure to show how your examples connect to your statement (topic sentence). This section should comprise the majority of the paragraph.
Paraphrase Example
Statement:I used to believe that if a particular subject was difficult for me that I was just not gifted with intelligence in that area; now that I am moving toward a growth mindset, I understand that my knowledge in anything is dependent on the amount of effort I put into learning.
Paraphrase Example
Evidence:According to Carol Dweck, students with a fixed mindset believe that people are naturally smart in certain subjects whereas those with a growth mindset understand that they are capable of understanding anything with the right amount of effort.
Paraphrase ExampleExplanation:I tell people that I am bad at math, but I am working on changing that attitude to a more realistic self-view. I earned average grades in my high school math classes, but the concepts did not come easily to me. In my college algebra class, I watched as other students breezed through tests and quizzes and I felt like I was struggling to pass. Instead of realizing that I needed to put more work into the class, I put the responsibility on others. I decided the teacher was boring. I imagined that the other students just understood the material right away. I began to miss class and skip assignments. Of course, my actions resulted in a failing grade. At the time, I was quick to shift the blame to other people and circumstances, but the truth was that I was making excuses rather than trying because I did not want to try and fail. Doing so would affirm my biggest fear: I was dumb. I have come to realize that I truly earned the F, not because of my lack of natural math skills, but because of my own lack of effort.
I used to believe that if a particular subject was difficult for me that I was just not gifted with intelligence in that area; now that I am moving toward a growth mindset, I understand that my knowledge in anything is dependent on the amount of effort I put into learning. According to Carol Dweck, students with a fixed mindset believe that people are naturally smart in certain subjects whereas those with a growth mindset understand that they are capable of understanding anything with the right amount of effort. I tell people that I am bad at math, but I am working on changing that attitude to a more realistic self-view. I earned average grades in my high school math classes, but the concepts did not come easily to me. In my college algebra class, I watched as other students breezed through tests and quizzes and I felt like I was struggling to pass. Instead of realizing that I needed to put more work into the class, I put the responsibility on others. I decided the teacher was boring. I imagined that the other students just understood the material right away. I began to miss class and skip assignments. Of course, my actions resulted in a failing grade. At the time, I was quick to shift the blame to other people and circumstances, but the truth was that I was making excuses rather than trying because I did not want to try and fail. Doing so would affirm my biggest fear: I was dumb. I have come to realize that I truly earned the F, not because of my lack of natural math skills, but because of my own lack of effort.
Most Important/Interesting/Exciting Thing You Learned Today
A. Discussing chapter 3B. Paraphrasing DuhiggC. Responding to DuhiggD. Making statementsE. SEE paragraphs
What would you like to learn more about in the future?
A. Chapter 1B. Chapter 2C. Chapter 3D. SEE paragraphsE. Paraphrasing
Homework
Finish the three papers (yellow, blue, and green) completely
Put one of your SEE paragraphs together (must be typed) S—statement—sentence from the green paper E—evidence—paraphrase from the yellow
paper with a proper citation E—explanation—paragraph about your habit
from the blue paper Read They Say/I Say “Yes/No/Okay, But” pages
55-67 Participate in the weekly discussion (post due
Thursday and replies due Sunday)