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MOOD CHOICE ANALYSIS ON BANE’S FINAL ALBUM
ENTITLED “DON’T WAIT UP”
THESIS
Submitted in Partial Fulfillment
of the Requirements for the Degree of
Sarjana Pendidikan
ALFONSUS MARIO ELJIANANTYO
NIM: 112012097
FACULTY OF LANGUAGE AND ARTS
UNIVERSITAS KRISTEN SATYA WACANA
SALATIGA
2016
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MOOD CHOICE ANALYSIS ON BANE’S FINAL ALBUM
ENTITLED “DON’T WAIT UP”
THESIS
Submitted in Partial Fulfillment
of the Requirements for the Degree of
Sarjana Pendidikan
ALFONSUS MARIO ELJIANANTYO
NIM: 112012097
FACULTY OF LANGUAGE AND ARTS
UNIVERSITAS KRISTEN SATYA WACANA
SALATIGA
2016
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TABLE OF CONTENT
Cover Page ..................................................................................................................................................... i
Inside Cover Page ......................................................................................................................................... ii
Approval Page ............................................................................................................................................... v
Copyright Statement ................................................................................................................................... vii
Publication Agreement Declaration ........................................................................................................... viiii
Table of Content ....................................................................................................................................... viiiii
Thesis Body .................................................................................................................................................. 1
Abstract ............................................................................................................................................ 1
Keywords ......................................................................................................................................... 1
Introduction ...................................................................................................................................... 1
Literature Review ............................................................................................................................ 4
Systemic Functional Linguistics: The Three Metafunctions .................................................... 4
Interpersonal Meaning .............................................................................................................. 5
Mood ........................................................................................................................................ 7
Review of Previous Study ........................................................................................................ 9
The Study ....................................................................................................................................... 11
Context of the study ............................................................................................................... 11
Instrument of the Data Collection .......................................................................................... 11
Data Collection Procedure ...................................................................................................... 12
Data Analysis ......................................................................................................................... 12
Findings and Discussion ................................................................................................................ 12
Purpose of the Album ............................................................................................................. 14
Mood Choices and Speech Functions..................................................................................... 15
Congruent vs. Non-congruent Mood ...................................................................................... 19
Purpose of the Album vs. Mood Choice ................................................................................ 23
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Conclusion ..................................................................................................................................... 24
Acknowledgement ......................................................................................................................... 26
References ...................................................................................................................................... 27
Appendices..................................................................................................................................... 28
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LIST OF TABLES
Table 1: Speech Role by Halliday……………………………………………………..….6
Table 2: Mood in declarative clause by Thompson…………………………………….....8
Table 3: Data Collection…………………………………………………………………11
Table 4: Total of Mood choice analysis findings………………...………………………13
Table 5: Total of Speech Functions findings…………………………………………….13
Table 6: Non-congruent mood………………………………………………………..19-20
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MOOD CHOICE ANALYSIS ON BANE’S FINAL ALBUM
ENTITLED “DON’T WAIT UP”
Alfonsus Mario Eljianantyo
ABSTRACT
Since songs can be media to express song writers‟ messages, some researchers have
conducted research to find out the message inside the particular songs. This study uses
songs from Bane a Hardcore Punk band from the United States of America. The album
consists of ten songs, and it is used by the band to say goodbye to their listeners before
the band breaks up. This research aims to find out what is the main mood choice used by
the band and how it corresponds with the purpose of this final album. The mood choices
in this study are analyzed by seeing the order of the Subject and Finite of the clauses.
After analyzing the order of Subject and Finite then the moods are classified into
declarative, interrogative or imperative. The mood choices are naturally associated with
its speech functions. In this study also find mood which is not associated with the
function in common, it is called non-congruent mood. This study also identified the non-
congruent mood on the songs there are declarative-command, declarative-offer,
declarative-question, imperative-statement, imperative-offer and interrogative-statement.
To sum up this study, the mood that is mostly used is declarative. The declarative mood
which has function as statement do not match with the purpose of the album. This
album‟s purpose is to say goodbye which is in line with interrogative clause with offer as
function. Although the offer function appeared only 15 times in this album but still the
function play an important role in this album.
Keywords: Interpersonal metafunction, mood choice, speech function, Bane, Don’t Wait
Up
Introduction
In communication, human beings use spoken or written form to communicate one
to another. While in a spoken form the communication can be delivered directly from
speaker to audience, in the written form the speaker uses the media to convey the
message, like we can find in the newspaper, letter etc. Griffee (1992) mentions that there
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are many ways for people to apply the language to express and deliver information,
thought, feeling and desire in daily life. One of the media that is used by people to
express and communicate to each other is by using songs. Machlis (1955) as cited in
Marhamah (2014) states that “music is language of emotion”. By that statement, it can be
seen that a song is not just a product of musical instruments but it may also carry
meaning that is used to communicate to each other. As stated in the previous statement
we can conclude that music or songs carry a meaning inside. Systemic Functional
Linguistics (SFL) introduced by Halliday (1985) offers the tools to dig out the meaning
that are being conveyed in the song by one of metafunctions of SFL called Interpersonal
Metafunction. In the Interpersonal Metafucntion, language is seen as a form of interaction
of human being to other human beings. The order of mood within the clause of the song
can identify the meaning of the clause.
The research on songs using SFL has been conducted several times. Setyono &
Wahyuni (2012), who once did a research on a Javanese traditional song, entitled „Ilir-
Ilir‟, also found that there was a connection between music and life aspects. Moreover,
there is also a study conducted by Dewi (2015) who examined a song of an American
band namely P.O.D, to find how the singer used the song to show the singer's ideology.
Therefore, since a song is also used as a medium to express and communicate feeling,
thought, and even judgment, there will always be purposes carried by the songs. Another
study was also conducted by Marhamah (2014) about the interpersonal meaning of
Muse‟s three songs in the album entitled „Black Holes and Revelations‟. Marhamah
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(2014) analyzed the construction of the mood choice used in the songs to find out the
purpose or the song writer‟s intentions on the album
Taiwo (2007) as cited in Kondowe (2014) states that the recent interest in modern
linguistics has changed from the traditional linguistics that focused on structure and
moved into analyzing authentic texts. In addition, Kondowe (2014) mentions that
traditional aspects of linguistics such as syntax, morphology, and phonology could not be
the only clue as guidance to understand the exact meanings of the text. By these experts'
statements, it can be seen that understanding the language used in songs also needs deep
analysis by using tool from each component of linguistics. Those previous studies also
help me in conducting this research on songs‟ lyrics, specifically within the framework of
Systemic Functional Linguistics and analyzing an authentic text which is song‟s lyrics.
In this study, I looked at the mood choice carried in the songs by seeing the order
of the Subject and the Finite (mood choice) inside the clauses used within the songs‟
lyrics. This research used the album of Bane, an American Hardcore Punk band from
Worcester, MA entitled „Don‟t Wait up‟ as the object. The purpose of the album is
unique. Bane tries to say goodbye to their fans as the band will be ended soon. Moreover,
Bedard (2013) the front man of Bane stated "It is the culmination of many years playing
music together. It is an attempt to say goodbye to something that is very hard to let go of.
We hope that this record does that bravely.” It becomes an interesting album since it is
rare that a band prepares an album as their „legacy‟ to their listeners or fans before they
break up. Correspondingly, this research has a research question “What is the main mood
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choice use by the band to deliver the purpose of the album and how it corresponds with
the purpose of this final album?”. Since in the previous studies by Marhamah (2014) and
Dewi (2015) they did not look up to those aspects and in the previous studies only look
up to one up to three songs. This study tried something new to analyze the whole songs in
the album and see how the main pattern of the mood and speech functions corresponds to
the purpose of the album.
Literature Review
In this following section, the paper will explain about Systemic Functional
Linguistic along with brief explanation on its metafunctions. Then, this section also
discuss about the Interpersonal Meaning, Mood and also review of the previous studies
on song lyrics and SFL.
Systemic Functional Linguistics: The Three Metafunctions
Systemic Functional Linguistics is a theory introduced by Halliday (1985).
According to Halliday & Maatthiesen (2004) there are three categories in Systemic
Functional Linguistics used by the human to use language in the context:
1. Ideational Metafunction
Ideational Metafunction sees the language usage in order to organize, understand
and express our standpoint toward the world and also our own consciousness. Ideational
Metafunction has two sub-functions: the experiential and the logical functions. The
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experiential function focuses on the cause and effect of the ideas itself while the logical
function focuses on the relation among the ideas.
2. Interpersonal Metafunction
Language is a tool in human society to interact with other individuals or groups. It
is also a tool to express humans' certain feeling, attitude, and judgment.
3. Textual Metafunction
Language makes the discourse to connect with what is written or spoken to other
discourses. The language is involved in managing the discourse itself.
Those metafunctions can be used as tool to see how humans communicate each other in
different forms. Besides, if we want to know how humans express their feeling attitude
and judgment when they interact to other individuals we can use Interpersonal
Metafunction as the tool.
Interpersonal Meaning
In communication, when the use of language counts as the form of participation
of human being communicates with other human beings and the meaning of certain
clauses becomes the representation of „exchange‟, so this process is called interpersonal
meaning. According to Halliday & Matthiessen (2004) the clauses are organized as an
interactive circumstance which is involving the speaker or the writer with the audience.
The speaker or writer plays a certain speech role when they interact to the audience. The
two basic speech roles in interpersonal meaning according to Halliday are: giving and
demanding for information or goods and services. In the act of speaking, the interaction
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between the speaker and listener should cause action and reaction like giving and
receiving. For example, if the speaker demands something the audience will be the giver.
Then, when the speaker becomes the giver the audience will act as the receiver of the
action. Halliday & Matthiessen (2004) added that in this exchange, when the speaker acts
as the giver, the audience is intended to receive. Meanwhile, when the speaker acts as the
receiver, the audience is intended to give. In determining this reaction or the response, we
need to see the commodity that is being exchanged which are information or good and
service. Both the exchange of speech role and the commodity are shown in Table 1.
Table 1. Speech Role by Halliday & Matthiessen (2004, p.136)
Role in Exchange Commodity Exchange
Information Good & Services
Giving Statement Offer
Demanding Question
Command
Table 1 shows how speech role and the commodity exchange one to another. Referring
to Table 1, offer, statement, command and question are considered speech functions.
When the role of the speaker is to give information to the audience, the speech function
in this stage will be a statement. The example of a statement is “The tea is hot.” When the
speaker’s role is giving good or service, the speech function is intended as an offer. The
example of an offer is “Would you like a cup of tea?” Then, when the speaker’s role is
demanding information, the speech function will be a question. The example of question
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will be like “What are you drinking?” The last, when the speaker’s role is demanding
good and service, the speech function occur in this stage is command. The example of a
command is “Drink your tea!”
Mood
In Systemic Functional Linguistics, mood is one constituent that is being
exchanged in the certain clause that has Subject and Finite as the two elements which
build the mood. According to Thompson (2004) Subject is a term from traditional
grammar but in functional term being reinterpret and play role as nominal group and
Finite is a first functional component of verbal group. Halliday (2004) also explains that
Subject is the basic component of clause while the Finite operates the verbal group in the
clause also distinct the tense or modality. Considering that Finite consists of two types:
tense and modality, Halliday & Matthiessen (2004) determines the primary tenses into
past, present or future of the moment when the speaking occurs. It is like relativity of
time with present time. If it comes to the term called modality, the term refers to
probable or improbable (proposition) and desirable or undesirable (proposal). Halliday &
Matthiessen (2004) added the modality might be negotiable in proposition or proposal
because it is seen by the degree of probability or obligation. To sum up, the Subject and
Finite are two components that are combined to build the mood and the gist of the
exchange in the interpersonal meaning. As stated by Ye (2010) in order to make the
communication on going, mood here plays role as the carrier of Interpersonal
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Metafunction in the clause. Below is one of the examples of how the Subject and Finite
build the mood, this example taken from how mood build a declarative clause:
Table 2. Mood in declarative clause by Thompson (2004, p.57)
Assessment Will be by coursework
Subject Finite
Mood
As we can see in the table, the Subject of the clause is „assessment‟ which play role as
nominal group and the Finite of the clause is modal verb „will‟ which play as the verbal
group of the clause. Those two components (Subject and Finite) build the mood of the
clause into declarative clause because the order of declarative clause is Subject followed
by Finite as we can see in the Table 2.
According to Thompson (2004) and consider Table 1, Thompson (2004) stated
the basic functions are sometimes expressed with certain grammar structure. For
example, statements expresses by using declarative clauses; questions expresses by using
interrogative clauses and commands expresses by using imperative clauses. Those
grammatical features convey certain structures by considering the interpersonal function.
The combination of Subject and Finite (mood) is the clue to decide the speech of role.
Declarative clause which is formed with a Subject followed by Finite has function as a
statement. Interrogative clause functions as a question formed by Finite preceded the
Subject. Then, the imperative clause functions as command formed by Subject and Finite
or only the Finite to emphasize the command itself. In addition, Thompson (2004) added
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that because command as one of speech function that is absolute, so there is no time
relevance being specified in command, since there is no form of the imperative of modal
verbs. The offer function can be constructed in a similar way like the questions function
constructed. The functions formed by Finite followed the Subject, so the offer function
sometimes is considered modalised interrogative. Although mood choices have its speech
functions as counterpart, Thompson (2004, p. 246) stated that “the fact, mood choices
and speech roles do not always coincide.” When the phenomenon of the mood choice co-
occur with the speech functions which are not the counterpart of the mood this
phenomenon is called non-congruent mood. For example interrogative which naturally
functions as question or offer but might be function as statement in non-congruent mood.
Review of Previous Study
Previous studies have been analyzed songs‟ lyrics as the object study. For
example, Setyono & Wahyuni (2012) has conducted their research in the framework of
Critical Discourse Analysis to find out the relation between cultural and religion aspects
with the power of culture and religion itself in the Javanese song, entitled „Ilir-Ilir'.
Hapsari (2008) also has conducted a research on lyrics of three songs from Justin
Timberlake entitled “Cry Me A River” and “My Love” also “Bitch” by Meredith Brooks
using all the metafunctions in Systemic Functional Linguistics. The study tried to find out
how the texts could be related to the issue of intimate relationship. Then a study by
Zahoor & Janjua (2016) did a research on tributive song about Malala Yousafzai entitled
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“I am Malala” using transitvity analyisis. This study tried to look how the character of
Malala Yousafzai constructed inside that tributive song.
Anther previous study related to this paper is a study on Interpersonal
Metafunction by Adetomokun (2012) which examined a narrative writing about identity
of Yoruba students in three different universities. The narrative writing of the students
were examined to see the order of the Subject and Finite (mood) to find out the students‟
attitude in maintaining and reconstructing their identity as diaspora in the new place.
Other study on interpersonal metafunction has been conducted by Kondowe (2014), the
study examined Bingu Wa Mutharika‟s speech. In this study the subject and finite‟s order
(mood) was examined. The result of the analysis on mood choice is the use of declarative
clauses is to give information as much as possible whereas the use of interrogative on the
speech is used to make the speech more serious and information-oriented and caused the
used of the interrogative clauses avoided in the speech.
The previous studies related to my study reviewed above focused on how to see
the mood choices are configured within the text since all the studies find out mood order
played a role in the texts that are examined. From those previous studies some studies
done the mood choice analysis by other type of text instead of lyrics. Some studies
conducted lyrics analysis using critical discourse analysis and mood choice but none of
them done the analysis on every song in the album.
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THE STUDY
Context of the study
In this study, the interpersonal meaning of Bane's final album entitled
„Don‟t Wait Up‟ was analyzed. This is the last or final Bane‟s album released by Equal
Vision Records on May 13th
, 2014. This study selects ten songs in the album to be
analyzed in order to examine the interpersonal meaning as a tool to express human‟s
feeling attitude and judgment within the album. These ten songs of this album carry the
same theme, so all of the songs of the album need to be analyzed in a way to see the
Interpersonal Meaning inside the album. Therefore, this study is going to examine on the
main pattern of the mood choice that is used within the album.
Instrument of the Data Collection
The independent clause of the songs will be put into the table and will be
identified the mood (Subject and Finite). In this table, the result of mood analysis on each
independent or main clause of the lyrics will be shown.
Table 3. Data collection
Mood Clause
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Data Collection Procedure
Each song in the album is analyzed based on each clause to find out the mood
carried by the lyrics. The Subject and Finite are analyzed in the very beginning to know
the mood carried in the song. After the mood is analyzed the clause will be defined based
on the speech function. This method is used to see whether the clauses of the lyrics are
considered to be declarative, interrogative, or imperative. The first one, if the clause is
declarative, the order of the clause will be Subject followed by the Finite. Then, if the
Finite is followed by a Subject it will be an interrogative clause. Then, for the imperative
clause, the clause preceded by verbs which are not regarded as a Finite or as a Subject.
After analyzing the mood, the frequencies of the mood‟s occurrence in the songs are
being calculated to find the song writer‟s message or purpose in this album.
Data Analysis
The songs within the album were analyzed by the mood choice or the Subject and
Finite order in the songs. The mood formula (Subject + Finite) will define the clauses in
the songs, whether it is declarative, interrogative or imperative. Then, after analyzing the
mood of the songs, the speech function would be analyzed by seeing the mood choice and
speech role involved in songs. The results of the analysis indicate the relation between
the purpose of the album with the pattern of mood choices used in the album.
Findings and Discussion
In this chapter, the paper will present the mood choice analysis on Bane‟s final
album. Table 4 and 5 will show the result of the analysis.
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Table 4. Total of Mood choice analysis findings
Mood choices
Declarative Interrogative Imperative
Frequency Percentag
e
frequency
percentage
frequency
percentage
161 77.8% 26 12.6% 20 9.6%
Table 5. Total of Speech Functions findings
Speech Function
Statement Question Offer Command
frequency percentage frequency percentage frequency percentage frequency percentage
159 76.8% 16 7.7% 15 7.3% 17 8.2%
As the data presented on the table there are ten songs to be analyzed in this study. The
percentage is count by the frequencies divided by the total and then the result times with
100. The total result of the mood choice analysis is declarative used in 161 clauses or
77.8%, interrogative used in 26 clauses or 12.6% and the last is imperative used in 20
clauses or 9.6%. The result of the analysis shows that the most dominant mood is
declarative. Then, according to Table 5 the most used speech function is statement which
occur 159 times or 76.8% followed by Question with 16 occurrence or 7.7%. Then, the
third one is Command with occurrence 17 times or 8.2% and the last is Offer with
occurrence 15 times or 7.3%. The most dominant mood in this album is declarative mood
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and the most dominant speech function is statement. As the declarative mood is
commonly used to give information as it is stated by Thompson (2004), this finding do
not matches with the album purpose which is used to say goodbye by the band. Goodbye
in SFL has function as an offer in and commonly express by interrogative clause.
Although the occurrences of the interrogative clause and offer are not much as the
declarative clause and statement, but in certain point the interrogative clauses and offer
function play a big role.
In the next section, this paper will discuss further the conclusion above. The first
part of this paper will discuss the purpose of the album. Then, in the following discussion
the mood analysis of the lyrics would be discussed. The non-congruent findings will also
be discussed. After that, the paper will discuss and also conclude the correspondence of
the mood choice and purpose of the album, did they in line one on another or not.
Purpose of the Album
The purpose of this album can be seen in the issues of the band will break up
soon. They put out one last album as their „legacy‟ to their fans or listeners entitled
„Don‟t Wait Up‟. The songs in this album represent how the band is about to say goodbye
to their listeners or fans. Bedard (2014) the front man of Bane said: "Jesus, this is the
literal last handful of songs we‟re ever gonna write together”. The album entitled „Don‟t
Wait Up‟ is Bane‟s final album that could be associated with how somebody is trying to
say goodbye to something he/she really loves. As Bedard (2013) stated "I would say that
this is a record we made while aware that they would be the last songs the band would
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ever write. It is the culmination of many years playing music together. It is an attempt to
say goodbye to something that is very hard to let go of. We hope that this record does that
bravely.” To sum up, this final album was made by Bane to say goodbye to listeners that
they really love. Because this album is trying to say goodbye to their fans so it has
function as an offer in SFL.
Mood Choices and Speech Functions
By considering the data in Table 4, there are various types of mood that are
distinguished inside the lyrics of the songs. In view of Thompson‟s (2004) theory, the
mood is associated with certain grammar structure. In the interpersonal function, the
grammatical structure carries particular structure that is a combination between Subject
and Finite. Hence the songs' lyrics are analyzed by seeing the formulae of the Subject and
Finite constructed on the main clause of the songs. For example, when Subject is
followed by Finite the clause is a declarative clause, and then when the Finite precedes
the Subject, it commonly expresses an interrogative clause and the last is the imperative
clause which is formed only by verbs without Subject and Finite.
As it is found in the analysis of the songs, there are four speech functions carried
by the songs. Those are statement, question, offer, and command. By those speech
functions and considering the data in Table 4, the most carried speech function in lyrics
of the song is a statement and the other speech functions are rarely used (see Table 5). In
the Halliday & Matthiessen‟s theory (2004) the speech function is a relation between
speech role and commodity exchange (see Table 1) and the relation might indicate
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statement, question, offer, and command. These speech functions are also related to the
mood, declarative functions as a statement, interrogative functions as question and offer
and imperative functions as a command.
The mood and speech function analysis is applied in the analysis of Bane‟s final
album titled „Don‟t Wait Up‟. The analysis of the main clauses of the lyrics was
conducted in order to find the mood choice carried by the lyrics. The data shows (see
table 4) that the most dominant mood appears in this album is declarative. Here is the
example of declarative clause which is taken randomly from the songs on the album
which will be discussed further below:
“I failed to protect my only brother”
The example above was taken from the song entitled „Wrong Planet'. The clause shows
that the Subject is followed by the Finite. The Subject of the example is "I" while the
Finite is "failed." It matches with the formula of a declarative clause which the Subject is
followed by the Finite. From the context of the song, this clause is used by the singer to
give information that the singer failed to protect his only brother. By the information
provided in this clause by the singer it can be concluded that this clause has a statement
as its speech function. Then, another example of declarative clause is as follows:
“I won't carry you in my heart”
The clause was taken from the song entitled „Final Backward Glance‟. By considering the
clause it can be seen that the Subject is „I‟ and the Finite is a modal verb „won‟t‟ (will
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not). The formula of the Subject followed by Finite in this clause showed that it is
considered a declarative clause. By this clause, the singer is giving information to the
audience as the intended receiver that the singer wants to tell information that he will not
carry somebody in his heart. From the context this clause, it can be identified as a
statement for the speech function.
In this following discussion, the paper will also discuss the interrogative and
imperative clause. Even though the types of the clauses are rarely used in the songs (see
Table 4), the clause below is the example of interrogative clause in the album:
“Did you love something with all of your might?”
The example above is taken from the songs entitled „Calling Hours'. The clause is
constructed by Finite followed by Subject. The Finite is „Did‟ because the word „Did‟
signal the moment of the speaking happened while the Subject is „you‟. This formula
constructed the interrogative clause that used by the singer to ask information to the
audience about their experience whether they ever love something all in or not. Hence it
can be concluded that this clause has the questions as its speech function. Another
example of interrogative clause is:
“Are our fathers forever still?”
The example is taken from the same song like the previous example; the song entitled
„Calling Hours‟. The construction of the mood is Finite followed by the Subject. The
Finite is „Are‟ and the Subject is „our father‟. In this clause the construction of the mood
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matches with the formula of interrogative clause, the Finite precedes the Subject so this
clause is considered as an interrogative clause. In this clause, the singer uses the clause to
ask an information to the audience whether it is possible that our fathers can stay alive
forever or not. In conclusion, this clause has a speech function as a question.
The last mood identified in the album is the imperative clause. Below is the
example of the imperative clause taken form the songs entitled „What Awaits Us Now‟:
“Leave your mark on everyone”
As the example above, it was constructed with the word "Leave" as the verb. This
formula matches with the formula of a declarative clause. From the context of the clause
the singer used the clause as a demand to the audience to do something. Hence this clause
is considered as a command as its speech function. The next example was taken from
song entitled „Park St.‟
“Don't give up”
The clause constructed with the verbs “Don‟t” (do not). This formula matches as well
with the imperative clause formula which was used by the singer to demand the audience
to do something. So this clause is considered as a command as well as the previous
example.
As Thompson (2004) stated that the mood is linked to some speech functions, so
it is needed to see deeper on the clause meaning to see the exact functions carried by the
clauses. Accordingly, to find out the meaning of the main clause is important in order to
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see the speech functions carried by the clause. It is important to see the speech functions
that may shift within the clause. For example, interrogative may function as a statement
or a statement expressed with an imperative clause. Hence, the analysis should be done
by looking deeper on the clause to see that there is any shifted speech functions within
the clauses or not.
Congruent vs. Non-congruent Mood
Halliday (1985), Taverniers (2003) and Thompson (2004), believe that the mood
is supposed to co-occur with its natural speech. The declarative clause co-occurs with
statement, then interrogative clause co-occurs with question and the imperative clause co-
occurs with command. Those pairs called congruent mood because it stands as its literal
meaning. In contrast to Halliday & Matthiessen (2004) the functions of the speech role
are not limited as in the Table 1. However, the mood and the speech function do not
always co-occur what is supposed to be. This phenomenon is called non-congruent mood.
For example, a command is commonly expressed by using imperative clause but it also
possible to use the declarative clause to express command.
In this paper the non-congruent mood was identified in six types of the non-
congruent clause. In total there are 27 times occurrences of the non-congruent clauses in
this album. The details are shown in the table below:
Table 6. Non-congruent mood
Non-congruent mood Frequency
20
Declarative-Command 3
Declarative-Offer 9
Declarative-Question 2
Imperative-Statement 5
Imperative-Offer 1
Interrogative-Statement 7
Total 27
The first type that occurs in this album is declarative-command. The example of the
clause is taken form song title „Calling Hours‟:
“You should see these scars that are on my hands”
The construction of the mood formed by the Subject „You' followed by the Finite
„should‟. This matches with the formula of a declarative clause which is formed by
Subject followed by the Finite. However, if we look deeper to the context in this clause,
the singer used it for giving a command to the audience. The speaker demands an action
to the audience, this is also supported by the possible reaction whether the audience will
undertake or refuse the command to do the action to see something on the speaker‟s
hands. By this example, we can see that the clause shifted, in this case is declarative as a
command.
The next type of the non-congruent clause is declarative-offer. This is the most
used non-congruent mood with occurrences 9 times. This might be used by the band to
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support their purpose of the album in certain point of this album by switch the declarative
into offer function. Since, the purpose of this album is to say goodbye which function as
offer. The example bellow is taken from the song titled „All the Way Through‟:
“And you can keep your eyes peeled for the signs”
In this clause, the construction is the Subject “you” followed by the Finite “can.” This
construction matches with the formula of declarative clause which is also constructed
with Subject followed by Finite. But if we look deeper to the context the singer used this
clause to tell the audience to choose whether they can still keep their eyes peeled for the
signs or not. This interpretation is supported with the reaction that the audiences are
allowed to accept or reject it. They may choose whether to keep their eyes peeled or not
as an offer by the speaker. Hence the mood in this clause was shifted and functions as
declarative-offer.
The next type of the non-congruent clause is declarative-question. The example is
taken from song titled „Park St.‟
“Maybe I was wrong”
This clause constructed by the formula “I” as the Subject and “was” as the Finite. This
formula matches with the formula of a declarative clause. But in the interpretation, the
singer used this clause to demand information. The singer was asking for the answer from
the audience whether what he did is wrong or not. So in this clause the mood is shifted to
declarative-question.
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The next mood type that is going to discuss is imperative-statement. The example
below is taken from the song titled „Hard to Find‟:
“Face to face with a thousand places”
This clause constructed only by the verbs without any Subject or Finite. This is clause
construction matches with the construction of imperative clause which can be constructed
only by the verb. But if we interpret the clause, this clause used by the singer to give
certain information to the audience. The singer wants to tell that the singer has face to
face with many places. So this clause is considered as a statement as the information
carried within the clause. The mood is shifted to an imperative-statement.
The next type is imperative-offer; the example is taken from song entitled „Final
Backward Glance‟:
“Goodbye”
This clause is formed only by verb which is match with the formation of imperative
clause. But the singer intended to give an offer whether the listener or fans would like to
keep the singer there or let the singer leave. So it is match with the offer function. Even
though this shifted clause only occurs once (see Table 6) but this occurrence is really
crucial. This example is taken from the very last line of the last song in the album (see
Appendix 4). This shifted clause used by the singer to emphasize the function of the
album which is offer in the last line of the last song. This shifted clause might be used by
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the band to make the audience realize the purpose of this album, so they put this line in
the very last as the „closing message‟.
The last type of the non-congruent clause that will be discussed is interrogative-
statement. The example is taken from the song titled „Lost at Sea‟:
“Did I really believe that this would always be?”
This clause formed by the Finite “Did” precede the Subject “I”. Although the formula
matches with the formula of an interrogative clause, this clause is not used by the singer
to ask a question. In this clause, the singer said that he is in doubt of believing that the
band is reaching the end instead of expecting the answer from the audience. Since the
clause meaning is to give information then this clause is shifted to interrogative-
statement.
Purpose of the Album vs. Mood Choice
As the previous discussion, this album is used by the singer or the band to say
goodbye to their listener throughout their songs. The front man of Bane, Bedard (2013)
mentioned “It is an attempt to say goodbye to something that is very hard to let go of. We
hope that this record does that bravely” so this record is used to say goodbye. The songs
in this album are mostly about what is going on with the band when they are dealing with
issues to break up and to say goodbye to their listeners. Obviously, this album is used by
the singer to give an offer to the audience about whether they would keep their band still
here or let them leave. They try to use the songs to say goodbye before they break up.
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The findings do not contrast with the purpose of the album since the most used clause is
declarative clause and the most used function is statement. But there is still the used of
interrogative and offer function (see Table 4 & 5). The offer function here still play
crucial role to deliver the purpose of the album. For example, the singer used shifted
clause imperative-offer in the last line of the last song (see Appendix 4). It is used by the
band to say what they intended to say which is say goodbye and has function as offer in
SFL. Then, the most used non-congruent mood is declarative-offer (see Table 6). This is
used by the band to support the purpose of the album using declarative clause but has
function as an offer. This supporting details show that although the main mood order and
function are not interrogative-offer, but still the interrogative-offer play important role to
deliver the purpose of the album.
Conclusion
The purpose of doing this research is to find out what is the main pattern of the
mood choice within the final album of Bane entitled „Don't Wait Up' and how it
corresponds to the purpose of the album. This research sees the formula of the Subject
and Finite within the clause in order to know the mood choices carried by the lyrics. The
analysis of the Subject and Finite is needed because it is a signal to decide the clause,
whether it belongs to a declarative, interrogative or imperative clause. But at the same
time, in the album it is also found that the mood choices are not always associated with
its common functions. In the analysis there are declaratives functioning as commands,
declarative as offers, imperative as statements, and interrogative as statements. On this
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case when the mood is not linked with its function in the common this phenomenon
called a non-congruent mood.
After all since the purpose of this album was to express goodbye to their listener
before they band breaks up, the mood used in this album shows that it mostly used
declarative mood. The declarative mood was used 161 times, interrogative clauses 26
times and imperative clause used 20 times in the album. The most used function is
declarative, occurred 159 times, followed by command 17 times, questions 16 times and
the last is offer 15 times. Although the main mood is declarative and the most used
function is statement but interrogative mood and offer function still pay a role in this
album even though it rarely used. The offer functions appear in the very last line of the
last song to emphasize the function of this album which is in line with the offer function
in SFL.
Moreover, this research has a significance to help teacher and learners in the
learning processes in interpreting the song so and use this research as the tool. This study
also tries to help the people to know and understand some patterns that might be used by
people to communicate. The implication for English teaching, this study might be applied
in critical reading especially to deal with a creative writing text also for those who are
highly motivated in learning English trough song. Liu (2010) also adds SFL study help
students to understand both linguistics and non-linguistics aspects and help the teacher to
explain the writer‟s attitude of the text and discuss the meaning inside the text with the
students.
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There was still a limitation of this study. This study still cannot find the reason why
the singer uses the non-congruent mood. Thus, for further research, any researcher may
conduct a study on why the speaker uses non-congruent mood to deliver the
communication. The study could also be done in this album or different band's album.
ACKNOWLEDGEMENT
My gratitude is given to the almighty, Jesus Christ for giving me such a
wonderful life and his nonstop grace, also to the Marry mother of God for being the
nonstop prayer for me. I also want to say thank you to my Supervisor Dr. Joseph Ernest
Mambu for being very considerate in guiding in finishing this thesis in very short time. I
also would like to say thanks to my examiner, Dian Toar Y.G. Sumakul, M.A. for giving
me feedback and input related to SFL field. Then, I want to say thank to my ex-
supervisor Neny Isharyanti, M. A. who letting me experienced many things while under
her supervision. I also want to say thank you to my big family: Soen Giok Swie and Sirat
Pujokarsono family, also to my super caring aunts: Soen Sioe Tjoe, Soen Hong Tjoe,
Soen Moan Tjoe and Soen Tjiek Tjoe. Then, to my dad, brother and my mom (rest in
peace). Also I want to say thanks to my friends in Salatiga Hardcore Crew, Headbangers
Team, my band (Aprian, Gandung, Hakiki, and Andri), Toropconz Records (Krishna and
Meidi) and Kucingan Mas Ajik Team (Mas Ajik, Denny etc.) thanks for always walk side
by side with me. I also want to say thank you to my friends in Twelvers especially Ulfa,
Sese, Sandra, Jojo, Virna, Amel, Ryan, Rendy, Yayas, Anno, Mas Stef, Firdany, Iwan,
Venda, Cici, Cik Grace, Jo-Ratih, Ika, Grace, and Yanti. Then, I would like to say thank
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you to my team mates in Artset team: Lion King and Aladdin, EDLT team 2014-2015,
TP students of Salatiga Lab 2016, I love you all!. Special credit goes to my big bro
Edwin Bagus Joharta, S.Pd for being literally my third reader who helped me proofread
and give feedback on my thesis draft, “thanks man!”. At last, I would like to thank
Hardcore Punk for changing my life.
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APPENDICES
Appendix 1. Mood choice analysis on each song
Song Title
Mood choices
Declarative Interrogative Imperative
Frequency percentage
frequency percentage
Frequency percentage
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Non-Negotiable 13 68.4% 3 15.8% 3 15.8%
All the Way Through 14 82.5% 3 17.5% 0 0%
Calling Hours 35 71.4% 8 16.3% 6 12.3%
Park St. 19 90.5% 0 0% 2 9.5%
What Awaits Us Now 8 80% 0 0% 2 20%
Hard to Find 17 63% 7 26%
3 11%
Lost At Sea 10 67% 5 33% 0 0%
Post Hoc 9 100% 0 0% 0 0%
Wrong Planet 18 100% 0 0% 0 0%
Final Backward Glanc
e
18 82% 0 0% 4 18%
TOTAL 161 77.8% 26 12.6% 20 9.6%
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Appendix 2. Speech function of each song
Song Title
Speech Function
Statement Question Offer Command
frequency
percentage
frequency
percentage
frequency
percentage
Frequency
percentage
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Non-
Negotiable
16 84.2% 0 0% 1 5.3% 2 10.5%
All the
Way
Trough
12 70.6% 2 11.7% 3 17.7% 0 0%
Calling
Hours
30 61.2% 7 14.3% 5 10.2% 7 14.3%
Park St. 17 80.9% 1 4.8% 1 4.8% 2 9.5%
What
Awaits Us
Now
7 70% 0 0% 0 0% 3 30%
Hard to
Find
21 77.8% 3 11.1% 1 3.7% 2 7.4%
Lost At
Sea
11 73.3% 3 20% 1 6.7% 0 0%
Post Hoc 9 100% 0 0% 0 0% 0 0%
Wrong
Planet
18 100% 0 0% 0 0% 0 0%
Final
Backward
18 81.9% 0 0% 3 13.6% 1 4.5%
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Glance
TOTAL 159 76.8%
16 7.7% 15 7.3% 17 8.2%
Appendix 3. Non-congruent mood
Non-congruent mood Frequency
Declarative-Command 3
Declarative-Offer 9
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Declarative-Question 2
Imperative-Statement 5
Imperative-Offer 1
Interrogative-Statement 7
Total 27
Appendix 4. Lyrics analysis
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Italic = subject
Underlined = finite
Ø = elliptical Subject
[ ] = embedded clause
1. Non-Negotiable
IMP Stopped keeping score
DEC Like you keep score
DEC It finally does not mean shit to me anymore
DEC I crumple it up
DEC Ø Throw it away
DEC It's just a way to keep track [of how well my hands are played]
INT [statement] What I want [I've always found a way to have]
IMP [statement] Got past "no" a long fucking time ago
DEC [The only thing that] I can't buy more of is time
INT How could I believe [that the hour glass would ever get this thin?]
DEC I never listened
DEC [command] I should have listened
DEC But I will fill what is left of my days with the the things that I love the most
INT [statement] What I hate gets pushed to the side of my plate
DEC When I ride [you know that those trumpets play]
DEC I've never known a bliss like this
DEC I'll burn this whole place down
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IMP [statement] Roll right out of this fucking town
DEC Before I become the things [that I despise]
2. All The Way Through
DEC They will try to take this from you
DEC [offer] Nothing that I can say will get you to listen nor should it
DEC It's what makes youth so blissful
DEC I did not wanna hear it either
INT But maybe just a warning?
DEC [offer] And you can keep your eyes peeled for the signs
DEC You will know them [because it'll be an adult]
DEC Ø Talking about your youth while speaking in absolutes
DEC They'll tell you that you're gonna level off too
DEC That nothing stays all dreamy and breathless and bursting at the seems
INT [statement] Does growing old mean growing strong enough to kill you
sentimental side?
DEC And Ø set free all those little butterflies from the cage [that housed your beating
heart?]
DEC [offer] I'd rather die than see them go
DEC Ø Can't wipe these pretty songs from my eyes
INT What broke and made you look up at the stars in the sky and see only the stars and
the sky?
DEC Poison words prey on love-sick minds
DEC Sometimes I feel [that they don't even know they're telling lies]
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3. Calling Hours
DEC [offer] I've tried to hold what I can
DEC [command] You should see these scars that are on my hands
DEC Letting go is never easy to do
DEC Everyday's a new door [that we all must go through]
DEC I've learned so much
DEC You're never gone, my friend.
DEC I know we'll meet the same shining end.
IMP Forget the who, the what, the when, the where, the why
INT Did you love something with all of your might?
DEC Sometimes it's death that sets us free
DEC [To ask for more] well it feels obscene
DEC But what we had [we will always have]
DEC I'm not afraid [because I know that it was pure and stands forevermore]
IMP Forget the who, the what, the when, the where, the why
DEC Deep down inside I know I tried
INT Did you love something with all of your might?
DEC What's done is done [the night takes everyone]
DEC As the shadows fall over town
DEC And the sun sinks in the sea
DEC All the wonder of what will wait
INT Is a whirlwind in me
INT Is the grass under the moon still growing and green?
DEC When the sky begins to fall
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INT Will love stand by me?
INT Are our fathers forever still?
INT Will our mothers only weep?
INT Does the dream of yesterday come true from a prayer on our knees?
DEC [question] You told me to "give everything" and now you're tired
IMP Then let's get loud and go out with open fire
IMP Or make it intimate, hold you close with piano wire
DEC I'll get so ugly that [you'll see the best of you that I've admired]
DEC As you lose your breath
DEC but the shadow still remains
DEC I fucking hate that it hurts
DEC but the shadow will remain
DEC [offer] I'll shake these walls with your name
DEC but the shadow will remain
DEC Ø Give you the loudest fucking echo
DEC but the shadow will remain
IMP Don't grieve for your own end before you have finished it
DEC I'm only heading to the ground
DEC [offer] I'd rather feel rage than apathy
DEC You know [that it breaks me slowly]
DEC There's endless promise in this [this being infinite]
DEC So Ø take the twisted love for it with understanding
DEC I'm not ready
DEC This will only leave me losing more
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DEC When I follow it down To a place [where no one knows what we have done]
IMP Bleed out to feel
4. Park St.
DEC My brain, it was all blocked up
DEC Ø Feeling out of sorts
DEC The words they would not come
DEC I met a guy on the train who had a few kind words
DEC The nicest dude showed me his "ante up" tattoo
DEC It's kind of wild the people who we will find
DEC Some that you don't even know
DEC [offer] With just the tiniest boost will help see you through
DEC This world will jump up to surprise you
DEC Ø Reminds me not to lose hope [on humanity yet]
DEC Ø Reminds me that I am as lucky [as lucky can get]
DEC So I told him that [I was having the hardest time]
DEC Ø Felt like everything I wrote
DEC Ø Was something I wrote before
DEC He told me
IMP Don't give up
IMP Keep the pen to the page and the word's they'll come
DEC So that is what I'm gonna do
DEC [question] Maybe I was wrong and [I will never be alone]
DEC All because we wrote these punk rock songs
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DEC And god-damn that's pretty crazy [so fucking amazing]
5. What Awaits Us Now
DEC There is a whole universe spinning [in perfect harmony around us]
DEC We survived the race to the egg [every breath the holy grail]
DEC Beautiful secrets hiding everywhere [So god-damned much to do, and feel and
say]
DEC [The colors brighter ,the music louder, the stakes higher, the kisses longer] Things
that need leaving
IMP Rules there for the breaking
DEC [command] Battles that should be raging
IMP Leave your mark on everyone
DEC Age is death
DEC love is worth it and hard work [it pays off]
DEC And time is running out
6. Hard To Find
DEC Because this is what you'll back on
DEC It will cut right through the laughs and all the fun
DEC When you were kicked back waiting for the days to end
IMP Just hanging out with your friends
DEC But sometimes things aren't so easy
DEC Sometimes you have got to choose between what is simple
INT [statement] And what you know is right to prove that, "you can count on me"
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INT Was what you meant
DEC When you spoke up to write the chapter [on who you are in your heart]
DEC When we were so in love with pretty words like loyalty, and unity
DEC This is you legacy
INT Where will you be?
DEC It is really hardly ever that we are tested
IMP Never mind asked to shine
INT But is there any time more important than [when we're called upon to be there for
a friend?]
DEC Friends - they say [it's what makes the best defense]
DEC What this really comes down to
INT [statement] Is a war within yourself
IMP [statement] Face to face with a thousand places [that you would rather be]
INT [statement] And what you chose is gonna bind you to this time
DEC Friends - they say [it's what makes the best defense]
DEC And we are all gonna get fucked up sometimes
DEC No one makes it through this shit unharmed
DEC The key is finding the ones worth fighting for
DEC And Ø standing for
DEC And Ø bleeding for
INT Where you there or did you run?
7. Lost At Sea
DEC I look at me and I can't see me without this
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DEC It scares the fuck out of me
INT Where will I be?
DEC I can't even guess
DEC The ropes nearly cut clean
INT Who will reach out for me?
DEC I'm lost at sea
INT What happens when you take away the thing [that I have done the best and loved
the most for all these years?]
DEC I knew the rules [some things you can‟t outrun]
DEC And if it lived then it must die [deaf, dumb, and so naïve]
DEC No one left to hear me scream
DEC My decisions were so easy
DEC The view it was so pretty
INT How can it be? [oh, foolish me]
INT [statement] Did I really believe that this would always be?
8. Post Hoc
DEC Though much Ø has been broken enough still survives
DEC And through all the hardship there is a light that still shines
DEC Gone are the days when bullets bounced from our chest
DEC We have become who we are and fuck all the rest
DEC Our scars they tell the stories
DEC Our eyes still look ahead
DEC Ø Still so much that is burning
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DEC Defiant hearts not yet dead [because nothing, no nothing]
DEC Ø Is as important as this: To seek. To rise. To fight [and to do anything but quit]
9. Wrong Planet
DEC So a wandering ronin I became [with a dripping blade and honor over everything]
DEC [Uncomfortable in my own skin] Ø Bound to sleepless nights and endless roads
DEC Demon's in my very head
DEC If you look, you can see me
DEC Ø Grasping for a world that makes some sense
DEC Where through the dark there waits the light
[Betrayal, more than a dirty word for me]
DEC Painful everywhere I see
DEC Trust, Ø became a diamond to me, Beautiful
DEC Forever Ø out of reach
DEC In came the sounds that would see me through [clenched fists, stage-dives]
DEC Salvation found in gate-fold sleeves
DEC At last a place where I could breathe
DEC And Ø being no good with change I threw away the key
DEC You'll have to drag me out of here
DEC I failed to protect my only brother
DEC When he needed me the most
DEC So I've tried to stand by those who I could
DEC And we were screaming all as one
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10. Final Backward Glance
IMP [statement] Right here right now
DEC It's never felt more real than this
IMP [statement] Right here right now [the depths of my heart]
DEC I've been abandoned my whole life [sad songs, early deaths]
DEC Bones piled to my knees
DEC It's always been the minor-chords for me
DEC So if it's the last scene
IMP Make it a bloody scene
DEC Because when I die
DEC I want it to be because someone hates me [with every fiber of their being]
DEC I won't carry you in my heart
DEC You are my heart my everywhere and everything
DEC The walls I'll climb and the wars I'll fight
DEC Ø Loved you in the deepest way became the man who I am today
DEC You made me feel just like a hammer [in a world lined with nails]
DEC I'm not walking away from here
DEC With a bunch of things I still need to declare
DEC A wasted life is worse than death
DEC [offer] It's up to you to figure out the rest
DEC This is my final backward glance
DEC [offer] I've never been much good at saying goodbye
IMP [offer] Goodbye
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