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Introduction: Writing Article?

Mengapa Perlu Menulis Artikel Ilmiah??

Karya ilmiah (bahasa Inggris : scientific paper ) adalah laporan tertulis danditerbitkan yang memaparkan hasil penelitian atau pengkajian yang telah dilakukanoleh seseorang atau sebuah tim dengan memenuhi kaidah dan etika keilmuan yangdikukuhkan dan ditaati oleh masyarakat keilmuan.

Definisi:

“It is a generative activity requiring motivation, and it is an intellectual

Mengungkapkan pemikiran atau hasil penelitiannya

Berkontribusi dalam menyebarkan ilmu pengetahuan yang didapat

Membuktikan potensi dan wawasan ilmiah

Memperluas cakrawala ilmu pengetahuan

Sebagai bahan acuan atau pijakan untuk penelitian selanjutnya

Memperoleh kepuasan intelektual

“It’s easier to embalm the dead than to write an article about it” (Paul Silvia)

Manfaat dan Tujuan:

act v ty requ r ng cogn t ve processes an memory

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SCOPUS: Indonesia vs Thailand

http://wibirama.staff.ugm.ac.id/2013/01/24/sunu-wibirama-peringkat-perguruan-tinggi-indonesia-di-scopus/ 3


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SCOPUS: Indonesia vs Malaysia



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SCOPUS: Indonesia vs Singapore



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Meskipun menulis Jurnal Internasional berat, janganpernah takut untuk memulai..

Hasil penelitian yang biasa terkadang bisa menjadiberkualitas..

Lebih baik memilih Jurnal Internasional daripada Jurnal Nasional bereputasi

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Langkah-langkah dalam Menulis Sebuah Artikel

1. Make Time Table to Write2. Start with an Outline3. Decide the Journal to submit

4. Continue With Drafts . .

4. B. Writing Results Section4. C. Writing Introduction4. D. Discussion of the Results4. E. Check Reference4. F. Abstract4. G. Title

5. Revision Strategies

6. Submission Strategies Kallestinova, 2011 7


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Membuat Jadwal untuk menulis Artikel

Tepati Jadwal tersebut dengan konsisten

1 Make Time Table to Write

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Apa Topik artikel saya?

Mengapa Topik tersebut penting?

2 Start with an Outline

Bagaimana Saya dapat memformulasikan Hipotesa saya?

Apa hasil-hasil penelitian saya (results)?

Apa temuan utama dari hasil penelitian saya?

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Mengapa penelitian ini penting?

Apa saja yang perlu diketahui dari Topik penelitian tersebut?

Apa hipotesis dari penelitian ini?

Apa tujuan dari penelitian ini?


Introduction

Kebutuhan Energi meningkat disamping menipisnya energi fosil,;Singkong murah, melimpah, jumlah produksi didunia

Penelitian-penelitan berkenaan proses membentuk bioethanol dariSingkong; pengaruh suhu, pengaruh pengadukan

Lietaratur berkenaan dengan pengaruh suhu pengadukan

Mengetahui efek suhu dan pengadukan terhadap produksibioethanol; belum pernah dilakukan; penting untuk masyarakat dandunia Industri

Effect of Temperature and Agitation on Bioethanol Production from Cassava

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Material apa yang digunakan?

Apa saja prosedur yang harus dilakukan?

Siapa subjek dari penelitian ini?

Apa desain dari penelitian ini?


Materials and Methods

Singkong, Microorganism yang digunakan (beli dimana)

Metode dan prosedur dalam melakukan proses produksi bioethanol

Analisis Bioethanol??

Alat-alat yang digunakan

Effect of Temperature and Agitation on Bioethanol Production from Cassava

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Apa hasil yang paling signifikan dalam penelitian ini?

Apa hasil pendukung dalam penelitian ini?


Results

Discussion and Conclusions

Apa temuan utama bandingkan dengan literatur yang ada

Apa imlpikasi dari signifikan hasil yang didapat? Tambahkan literatur-

literatur

NB: Jabarkan hasil, diskusikan hasil dengan literatur yang ada, jelaskanmengapa terjadi kontradiksi hasil

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Scope

Quality

3 Decide the Journal to submit

Jurnal-jurnal yang terindeks di Scopus: scimagojr.com

Guideline

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Menulis jabaran dari outline yang sudah ada

Tuliskan apa saja ide-ide yang ada dikepala

Jangan fikirkan grammar dan sentence

Memperbaiki grammar dan kalimat setelah ide-ide sudah

4 Continue With Drafts

uang an semua an ra su a eng ap

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4 A Writing Materials and Methods

Your most important goal in this section is to be as explicitas possible by providing enough detail and references

The purpose of this section is to allow other researchers to

evaluate and repeat your work

Example:1a. Bacteria were pelleted by centrifugation.1b. To isolate T cells, lymph nodes were collected.

2a. Bacteria were pelleted by centrifugation at 3000g for 15 min at 25°C.

2b. To isolate T cells, mediastinal and mesenteric lymph nodes fromBalb/c mice were collected at day 7 after immunization withovabumin. 15


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If your method has previously been published and is well-known, then you should provide only the literaturereference (Ex. 3a).

3a. Stem cells were isolated, according to Johnson [23].

If your method is unpublished, then you need to make sure

you provide all essential details (Ex. 3b).

3b. Stem cells were isolated using biotinylated carbon nanotubescoated with anti-CD34 antibodies.

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Cantumkan pada instrumen/alat yang digunakan: model,kota, negara; ex: autoclave sterilizer (Astell AMB230N,Sidcup, Kent, UK).

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Memberikan kemudahan didalam membaca, yaitu tidakmengubah sentence dari pasif ke aktif dst..

4. Behavioral computer-based experiments of Study 1 were programmed by using E-Prime. We took ratings of enjoyment,mood, and arousal as the patients listened to preferred pleasant music and unpreferred music by using Visual Analogue Scales (SIMethods). The preferred and unpreferred status of the music wasoperationalized along a continuum of pleasantness [4].

5a. We programmed behavioral computer-based experiments of Study 1 by using E-Prime. We took ratings of enjoyment, mood,and arousal by using Visual Analogue Scales (SI Methods) as the patients listened to preferred pleasantmusic and unpreferredmusic.We operationalized the preferred and unpreferred status of themusic along a continuum of pleasantness.

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Memberikan kemudahan didalam membaca, yaitu tidakmengubah sentence dari pasif ke aktif dst..

5b. Behavioral computer-based experiments of Study 1 were programmed by using E-Prime. Ratings of enjoyment, mood, and

arousal were taken asthe patientslistened to preferred pleasant

NB:Penggunaan Kalimat Pasif lebih diutamakan dibandingkan kalimataktif Grammar yang digunakan harus dalam bentuk Past Tense bukanPresent Tense

Methods). The preferred and unpreferred status of the music wasoperationalized along a continuum of pleasantness.

Rule: Be meticulous and accurate in describing the Materials and

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4 B Writing Results Section

Dibagi kedalam beberapa subdivis/subseksi/sekmen yangmasing2nya mempresentasikan tujuan dari penelitian.

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Data dipresentasikan dalam text maupun visual (tabel,gambar, algoritma, skema, rumus)Gambar harus sesuai Guideline

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Data dipresentasikan dalam text maupun visual (tabel,gambar, algoritma, skema, rumus)Gambar harus sesuai Guideline

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Data yang dipresentasikan jelas dan tidak membingungkanFormat Tabel harus sesuai GuidelineJangan ada referensi di Table Caption (Judul Tabel)

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Teks mengomentari hasil data yang signifikanTidak mengulangi data visual, tapi menghighlight poinyang paling penting

Awali Gambar dan Tabel pada teks dengan penjelasan

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Jika temuan hasil penelitian bertolak belakang dengan ide, jelaskan kontradiksi tersebut

Tidak memasukkan intrepertasi data (bagian dari sesiDiscussion)

Teks tidak menyajikan informasi yang tidak relevan dan tidak

penting (Ex. 6). ,

experimental system and then describe the outcome of infection.Teks tidak menyajikan kata-kata yang terlalu meluas dan

berlebihan seperti: “clearly,” “essential,” “quite,” “basically,”

“rather,” “fairly,” “really,” and “virtually”; “much lower”, “littlebit”, “a bit bigger”7a. Table 3 clearly shows that …7b. It is obvious from figure 4 that …

Selain penggunaan kata yang terlalu banyak juga menurunkan kredibilitas hasil.Meskipun menarik perhatian pembaca tapi menurunkan objektifitas. 25


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Hindari kata-kata yang membuat ambigu dan tidak berarti sertamubazir seperti: “be,” “have,” “do,” “make,” “cause,”, “provide,”dan “get” serta “there is/are.

8a. We tested the hypothesis that there is a disruption of membrane asymmetry.8b. In this paper we provide an argument that stem cellsrepopulate injured organs.

Kalimat-kalimat diatas panjang lebar tapi tidak “to thepoint”

9a. We tested the hypothesis that the membrane asymmetry isdisrupted.9b. In this paper we argue that stem cells repopulate injured organs.

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4 C Writing Introduction

Sebelum memulai Introduction, kembali baca sesi Materials andMethods serta Results kemudian ubahlah Outline sebelumnyaagar sesuai dengan fokus penelitiannya.

Introduction tidak terlalu panjang, kebanyakan jurnal sekitar250-600 kata.

Menyajikan pentingnya bidang penelitian ini, menariknya-

penelitian.

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Mereview penelitian sebelumnya pada bidang penelitian ini,baik terkait dengan proses maupun berbagai efek yangmempengaruhi produksi.

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Menyebutkan secara jelas tujuan penelitian ini.Mendiskripsikan keuntungan artikel ini.

Rule: Interest your reader in the Introduction sectionby signalling all its elements and stating the novelty of

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4 D Discussion of the Results

Bagian yang paling menakutkan sebagaimana seperti memulaiuntuk menulis.

Kualitas artikel tergantung dari sesi Discussion.Panjang pendeknya artikel tergantung dari isi Discussion.Pada pendahuluan, kita menyajikan dari general menuju

spesifik; pada Discussion, menyajikan dari ringkasan hasil.

Intinya menginterpretasikan hasil utama dari penelitian ini.Membuat sebuah komprehensif argumen dan argumen

pendukung dari berbagai literatur.

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Kebanyakan paper diawali dengan kata-kata:“Our findings demonstrate . . .,” or “In this study, we haveshown that . . .,” or “Our results suggest . . .”

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Kebanyakan Jurnal memberikan pilihan untuk menggabungkanResults and Discussion

Hasil pada Gambar

Rule: Present the principles, relationships, and generalizations in a concise and convincing tone.

s us mem awa era ur a n un u men e as an

Menjelaskan kontradiksi pada hasil penelitian disini

Diperkuat dengan hasil pada Gambar lain

Diperkuat dengan literatur lain

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4 E Check Reference

Update References pada 5 tahun terakhir (70%).References harus dari Jurnal-jurnal Internasional bukan Jurnal

NasionalKeseragaman Format References pada setiap artikelFormat References harus sesuai Guideline

Disarankan menggunakan software referensi seperti endnote

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4 F Writing Abstract

Pintu pertama layak tidaknya artikel ini diPublikasikanBagian menyendiri terpisah dari isi Artikel, jadi hindari

istilah/singkatan ambigu yang dijelaskan di isi artikelRingkasan dari isi ArtikelMencakup: Introduction, Objective, Methodology (optional

tergantung jumlah kata yang disyaratkan), Significant Results dan.

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4 F Abstract

Mencakup: Introduction, Objective, Methodology (optionaltergantung jumlah kata yang disyaratkan), Significant Results danbenefit.

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4 F Abstract

Mencakup: Terkadang tanpa Introduction, langsung objectiveObjective tidak selalu: “ The aim of this research is to..” or “This

research aims to..” or “The objective of this research is..”

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4 G Title

Buat dengan simple dan spesifik untuk mendiskripsikan kontenJangan terlalu teknis dan tidak dapat dimengertiJangan membuat seperti Kalimat:Ex.: Bioethanol was produced from date syrups using S. cerevisiaeBuat seringkas mungkin (15-30 words)

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5 Revision Strategies

Baca ulang setelah beberapa hari untuk merevisi kesalahangrammar dan kalimat

Paul Silvia said: “ Your first drafts should sound like they were hastily translated from Icelandic by a non-nativespeaker ”.

Revisi dapat dilakukan dengan: Macrostructure: revision of the organization, content, and flow

Microstructure: individual words, sentence structure,grammar, punctuation, and spelling

Menulis singkat padat dan jelas , jangan bertele-tele

Baca lagi dan revisi ulang setelah beberapa hari

Print artikelnya dan baca lagi setelah beberapa hari

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Cek kesalahan pada Abstrak???

Abstract. This research aim to synthesis the superporous adsorbent from chitosanusing glutaraldehyde as a cross linker, NaHCO 3 as a porogen, and polyvinyl alcohol (PVA) as a reinforcing agent. Generally, the reaction of adsorbent synthesis wascarried out through four steps: (1) the addition of PVA to the chitosan solution, (2)

the addition of porogen, (3) the crosslinking of chitosan, and (4) the releasing of oro en. The obtained adsorbents were characterized b Fourier Trans orm In raRed (FTIR) Spectroscopy, photograph of Digital Microscope (DM), and ScanningElectron Microscopy (SEM) to measure the porosity. The adsorbent was then beapplied to adsorb of HA for adsorption capacity determination. The results showed that the addition of PVA and porogen during adsorbent synthesis has produced adsorbent that possessed physical properties more compact and flexible and the

porosity was greater than that adsorbent synthesized without the addition of PVAand porogen. The adsorption test showed the adsorption capacity of KPG is 33.07 mg/g. However, if the amount of used adsorbent is larger (based on the chitosanmass 1 g), the capacity adsorption of KPG is 141.74 mg/g. From the initial concentration of HA contained in peat water was 45.64 mg/L, KPG can adsorb of HA as much as 95%.

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Cek kesalahan pada Abstrak???

Abstract. This research aim to synthesis the superporous adsorbent from chitosanusing glutaraldehyde as a cross linker, NaHCO 3 as a porogen, and polyvinyl alcohol (PVA) as a reinforcing agent. Generally, the reaction of adsorbent synthesis wascarried out through four steps: (1) the addition of PVA to the chitosan solution, (2)

the addition of porogen, (3) the crosslinking of chitosan, and (4) the releasing of oro en. The obtained adsorbents were characterized b Fourier Trans orm In raRed (FTIR) Spectroscopy, photograph of Digital Microscope (DM), and ScanningElectron Microscopy (SEM) to measure the porosity. The adsorbent was then beapplied to adsorb of HA for adsorption capacity determination. The results showed that the addition of PVA and porogen during adsorbent synthesis has produced adsorbent that possessed physical properties more compact and flexible and the

porosity was greater than that adsorbent synthesized without the addition of PVAand porogen . The adsorption test showed the adsorption capacity of KPG is 33.07 mg/g. However, if the amount of used adsorbent is larger (based on the chitosanmass 1 g), the capacity adsorption of KPG is 141.74 mg/g. From the initial concentration of HA contained in peat water was 45.64 mg/L , KPG can adsorb of HA as much as 95%.

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Cek kesalahan pada Abstrak??? (Sudah direvisi Author)

Abstract. This research aims to synthezise the superporous adsorbent fromchitosan using glutaraldehyde as a cross linker, NaHCO 3 as a porogen, and

polyvinyl alcohol (PVA) as a reinforcing agent. Generally, the reaction of adsorbent synthesis was carried out through four steps: (1) the addition of PVA to the

chitosan solution, (2) the addition of porogen, (3) the crosslinking of chitosan, and (4) the releasin o oro en. The obtained adsorbents were characterized bFourier Transform Infra Red (FTIR) Spectroscopy, photograph of Digital Microscope(DM), and Scanning Electron Microscopy (SEM) to measure the porosity. Theadsorbent was then be applied to adsorb of HA for adsorption capacity determination. The results showed that the addition of PVA and porogen duringadsorbent synthesis has produced adsorbent with more compact and flexible

physical properties and greater porosity. The adsorption test showed that theadsorption capacity of KPG is 33.07 mg/g. However, if the amount of used adsorbent is larger (based on the chitosan mass 1 g), the capacity adsorption of KPG is 141.74 mg/g. The initial concentration of HA contained in peat water was45.64 mg/L, KPG can adsorb of HA as much as 95%.

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Menulis sebagian Pendahuluan

Surfaktan adalah salahsatu bahan baku yang penting pada berbagai bidangindustri, seperti: emulsifier, corrosion inhibition, foaming, detergent, dan hairconditioning, disisi lain kebutuhan surfaktan terus meningkat. Surfaktan secaraumum diproduksi dari kelapa; namun hal tersebut menjadikan persaingan pada

sektor makanan. Pemanfaatan lignin sebagai bahan baku pada produksi surfaktanmen adi sebuah metode alternatif. Beras adalah makanan okok ba i ma oritasmasyarakat di dunia, sehingga sekam padi jumlahnya melimpah dan murah karenasebagai limbah. Sekam padi mengandung 25% lignin. Surfaktan dapat dihasilkandari lignin menggunakan metode isolasi. Namun proses tersebut mahal danberlangsung lama. Sulfonasi langsung merupakan sebuah metode alternatif yangdapat mengatasi permasalahan ini.

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Menulis sebagian Pendahuluan (Menggunakan GoogleTranslate)

Surfactant is one of the important raw material in various industrial fields, such asemulsifiers, corrosion inhibition, foaming, detergent and conditioning hair, on theother hand increasing need for surfactants. Surfactants are generallymanufactured from coconuts; but it makes competition in the food sector.Utilization of lignin as a raw material in the production of surfactant be analternative method. Rice is the staple food for the majority of people in the world,so that the rice husk as abundant and inexpensive as waste. Rice husk containing25% lignin. Surfactants can be produced from lignin using isolation method. Butthe process is expensive and lasts longer. Direct sulfonation is an alternativemethod that can solve this problem.

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Menulis sebagian Pendahuluan (Menggunakan GoogleTranslate)

Surfactant is one of the important raw material in various industrial fields, such asemulsifiers, corrosion inhibition, foaming, detergent and conditioning hair, on theother hand increasing need for surfactants. Surfactants are generallymanufactured from coconuts; but it makes competition in the food sector.Utilization of lignin as a raw material in the production of surfactant be analternative method. Rice is the staple food for the majority of people in the world,so that the rice husk as abundant and inexpensive as waste . Rice husk containing25% lignin. Surfactants can be produced from lignin using isolation method. Butthe process is expensive and lasts longer . Direct sulfonation is an alternativemethod that can solve this problem.

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Menulis sebagian Pendahuluan (Setelah di Perbaiki)

Surfactant is one of the most important raw materials used in various industrial fields, such as emulsifiers, corrosion inhibitors, foaming agent, detergent and hair conditioning products, while the demand of surfactant is steadily increasing.Surfactant is generally produced from coconut oil; however, it leads to acompetitiveness to the food sector. The utilization of lignin as raw material in the

production of surfactant is an alternative method. Rice is a staple food for majority of human in the world; hence, rice husk is an abundant material and low-cost dueto a waste. It contains about 25% lignin. The surfactant could be produced fromlignin by using isolation method. However, the process is costly and relatively longreaction. Direct sulfonation is an alternative method to evade the drawbacks.

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6 Submission Strategies

Pilih Jurnal dengan Impact Factor yang tinggi untukmendapatkan feedback berupa komen-komen negatif ->Untuk memperbaiki manuskrip.

Yang pertama kali dilihat Editor adalah First Author danCorresponding Author .

ar re an penu s yang namanya su a ena scopus

atau WoS, jadikan dia Corresponding Author.

Jangan menulis single Author jika belum pernah publikasiInternasional atau hanya beberapa saja.

Cari bidang penelitian jurnal yang lebih umum dan tidakspesifik khusus bidang penelitian ini (lihat hasil review poin 1)

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Contribution

Reviewer/Referee to “Chemical Engineering Communications” (2014-present)

Reviewer/Referee to “International Journal of Hydrogen Energy” (2015-present)

Reviewer/Referee to “Korean Journal of Chemical Engineering” (2015-present)

Scientific Committee and Reviewer to The InternationalConference on Chemical Engineering (ICCE 2015)

Reviewer/Referee to “ARPN Journal of Engineering and Applied Sciences (JEAS) (2015-present)

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We can do what People did..even More

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