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The Catholic Journalist June 2010

Newspaper Award Winners

N1a Best Front PageBroadsheet First Place Catholic Voice, Omaha, Neb. There is a nice display of dominant artwork and headlines on each page and creative typography. The flow of headlines to promo items is subtle and there is a continuity that is easily recognized.Second Place The Catholic Free Press, Worcester, Mass. A good combination of images and typography lead your eye around each page. Headline treatments are complimentary to the package.Third Place Catholic New York, New York, N.Y. Layout and images are attractive.

N1b Best Front Page TabloidFirst Place The Catholic Register, Toronto, Ontario, “History of Lent; Aid Groups Want More Too; Conversations with Calvin” by Paul McLellan Very strong single them fronts that take advantage of interesting art and good typography. The fronts are active and interesting thus very inviting to the reader. I would clip the rules used to segregate the pluggers at the bottom – don’t run them into the main art.Second Place The Tablet, Brooklyn, N.Y., Best Front Page by The Tablet Staff Clean and easy to navigate. The unique use of white space sets the articles off on the page and actually draw the eye. With this strong grid the additional white space is a plus. However, make the art more interesting by using the rule of thirds with visuals.Third Place The Leaven, Kansas City, Kan., “The Sky’s the Limit; A League of Their Own; A FaithCarried Forward” by Kara Hansen and Joe Bollig Another very strong single theme presentation. This paper could have taken the category if there were some lateral separation between the pluggers at the bottom

– running them together is visually confusing. The September 18 front is perhaps the best of the entire category.

N2a Best News Writing Local/Regional 1-17,000 Diocesan PaperFirst Place Arkansas Catholic, Little Rock, Ark., “The State of Catholic Schools” by Malea Hargett The most complete package I saw. It is a good center-piece with a lot of information in the story and in accom-panying graphics. This struck me as the kind of topic I would want my newspaper to tackle. Second Place The Catholic Post, Peoria, Ill., “Family is received into church at 8-year-old’s funeral” by Jennifer Willems This was a tough story to read, but also very touching. Well-written. Uplifting. Third Place Catholic Sentinel, Portland, Ore., “Couple invents rosary application for iPhone” by Ed Langlois One of the most interesting stories I read for this con-test. As a non-Catholic, I enjoyed learning about how the faith is adjusting to our modern times.

N2bBest News WritingLocal/Regional17,001-40,000 Diocesan PaperFirst Place Western Catholic Reporter, Edmonton, Alberta, “Test Tube Children: Conceived without a Voice” by Lasha Morningstar This story examines the controversial issues of IVF and the technological advancements in reproduction that conflict with the moral values of many people, whether they are Catholic or not. The comments and knowledge of the bioethicist added some great points by discussing what the test-tube generation (who are now adults) think of their situation and how it all ties back into having two parents, etc. The tone of the article makes the reader real-ly think about the issues without sounding like a lecture.Second Place The Catholic Herald, Madison, Wis., “Madison Surgery Center Controversy” by Kat Wagner and Mary Uhler Solid coverage of an issue, that issue being whether the Madison Surgery Center Board should allow abortions to be performed. The articles covered the various groups who opposed abortion, reporting well on doctors who spoke out on the issue and pro-life groups who braved the cold to protest on several occasions. Good writing on a controver-sial topic.Third Place The B.C. Catholic, Vancouver, British Columbia, “Olym-pic Sized Task: Human Trafficking Under the Lights” by Laureen McMahon A good series of articles detailing the human trafficking industry and what was being done to make people aware of it in Vancouver leading up to the Olympics. Good writ-ing, good facts, good suggestions and solutions on how to end trafficking.

N2cBest News WritingLocal/Regional40,001+ Diocesan PapersFirst Place The Dialog, Wilmington, Del., ˝Faith, Hope and the Economy : Struggling Workers Look for Silver Linings in Tough Times˝ by Gary Morton This article tackles one of the biggest stories of our

times – the failing economy. Reporter Gary Morton puts a human face on this topic by spotlighting several unem-ployed workers who may have lost their life savings but hold firmly onto their faith. Second Place The Criterion, Indianapolis, Ind., ˝A Question of Life and Death : Catholics Confront Dealth Penalty Issue as Anoth-er Death-Row Executive Nears˝ by John Shaughnessy A compelling and well-done package of stories show-ing how death penalty cases have had a profound impact on the lives of three Indiana Catholics. The profile of the mother who forgave her daughter’s killer was particularly moving. Third Place FaithLife, Erie, Penn., “Building a New Parish Family” by Jason Koshinskie A fascinating report that provides readers a detailed look at the planning -- and the pain – of parish mergers and reconfigurations. While his focus never shifts from the Diocese of Erie, writer Jason Koshinskie does a masterful job of explaining this national and oftentimes challenging trend.

N2d Best News Writing Associate/Individual Freelance MemberFirst Place The Texas Catholic, Dallas, Texas, “Honduras Mission Trip” by Sebastian Saldivar This is a well-written, detailed look at what goes into a mission trip and the good it does.

N3aNews WritingNational EventFirst Place The Catholic Spirit, St. Paul, Minn., “U.S. Bishops want Healthcare for All – Including Unborn” by Maria Wiering Article does an excellent job of laying out the facts of the different versions health care bills and explaining what they would cover. It also goes into details how abortion funding would operate under each bill. Explains the USCCB’s stance on universal healthcare. Very informative.

Award N1a, Best Front Page- Broadsheet, Catholic Voice, Omaha, Neb.

Award N2a, Best News Writing, Local/Regional, 1-17,000 Diocesan Paper, First Place, Arkansas Catholic, Little Rock, Ark.

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Second Place The Catholic Sentinel, Portland, Ore. “Fall of a State’s Economy” by Ed Langlois Good collection of articles that examines different aspects of the economic slowdown and how is it affecting seniors, the unemployed, charities. Showed how a national event affected the local people.Third Place The Catholic Spirit, St. Paul, Minn. “Modern day slavery a reality in Minnesota, across globe” by Julie Carroll Tells the heartbreaking story of a local human trafficking victim and how she escaped, then goes on to discuss the problem on a national level.

N3c Best News WritingInternational EventFirst Place The Catholic Northwest Progress, Seattle, Wash., “Local Jewish-Catholic Relations Remain Strong” by Kevin Birnbaum If there was any doubt of the sincerity of Catholics in Western Washington to preserve their interfaith dialogue with local Jews in the wake of the Pope’s lifting of the excommunication of a Holocaust denier, these well-crafted stories erased it. As a whole, the package respects history, confronts prejudice, seeks understanding, and fosters a common foundation of faith. This is journalism at its best. Second Place The Visitor, St. Cloud, Minn., “Somali Newcomers Find Joys, Challenges Living in St. Cloud” by Sue Schulzetenberg A richly woven story of immigrant struggle that seeks out the common humanity and spirituality between the people of St. Cloud and Somali immigrants, and more important, between Catholics and Muslims. The writer took the time to learn the Somali culture and then showed it to us through the universal eyes of a mother. Third Place Catholic San Francisco, San Francisco, Calif., “Crossing Against Danger, a Teen Earns her Dignity” by Rick DelVecchio Incisive foreign reporting. A stark story told compellingly

through the eyes of a 16-year-old girl, struggling to survive in the desperation of pre-earthquake Haiti.

N4a Best Investigative News WritingFirst Place The Tablet, Brooklyn, N.Y., “The Economy and the Diocese” by Jay Akasie In a category with a notable absence of true investigative entries, this deeply reported and well crafted three-part series stood out as a fine example of special coverage. More explanatory than investigative, the series merits recognition for its scope and skill in examining a complex set of facts of importance to Tablet readers.

N4bBest Investigative News WritingAssociate/Individual Freelance MemberFirst Place Catholic San Francisco, San Francisco, Calif., “Haiti Journal” by Rick DelVecchio This series of articles, written after the earthquake, reported on the dire state of Haiti, but also touched on problems that are not as well known. A well-written and very informative series.

N4cBest Analysis/Background/Round-Up News WritingThe Gerard E. Sherry AwardFirst Place National Catholic Reporter, Kansas City, Mo., “Emerging Church Series” by Tom Roberts This writer provides a beyond-the-obvious examination of the future that is facing the Catholic Church in America. He steps back and looks at its broad implications for the church and goes in close to look at the impact of the changing church on parishioners and dioceses. He tells the stories in a variety of formats – news, features, Q & A, narrative. That effort makes it easy for the reader to find personal connection points in the story. Most importantly, its looks at the solutions, not just the problems. Second Place The Catholic Sun, Phoenix, Ariz., “Reporting on Immigration” by J.D. Long-Garcia This reporter helps readers understand the real impact of the national debate over immigration policies and shows where local Catholics are serving a need that results from those policies. It explains a hidden impact and reveals what’s being done to serve a need that has developed in that area. Third Place The Evangelist, Albany, N.Y., “Diocese Announces Final Decisions: Called to be Church” by Staff The writers go in close to examine the diocese’s decision, one being faced in many areas of the country. They look at the impact on the diocese, how the decisions were made and the effect on parishioners. It examines the emotional toll and answers readers’ questions quickly about how the process will unfold. The stories are well-told in and easy-to-read format and presented in a tight package.

N4dBest Analysis/Background/Round-Up News WritingThe Gerard E. Sherry Award Associate/Individual Freelance MemberFirst Place Our Sunday Visitor, Huntington, Ind. “A Covert Flight: Operation Pedro Pan” “The Children of Pedro Pan” by Maria Luis Scaperlanda

Fascinating series about the 14,000 unaccompanied minors who were brought to the United States from Cuba during the Cuban missile crisis in the 1960’s. The story followed up with some of the people, who are now mostly in their 50’s and 60’s, and have become American citizens, have families, etc. Great writing on a subject that I am sure most people know nothing about.Second Place The Observer, Rockford, Ill., “When Making Family isn’t easy” by Lynne Conner Very interesting article on NaProTechnology, a natural, Church accepted and less expensive alternative to IVF. The author interviewed a doctor and a couple who conceived using the method. Very informative and interesting.

N5aBest EditorialLocal Issue1-17,000 Diocesan PaperFirst Place Southern Cross, Savannah, Ga., “A Denial of Justice?” by Father Douglas K. Clark The anecdotal lead sets the tone and foreshadows the essence of the commentary. The story flows clearly, providing thorough context for even a casual reader’s understanding. The supporting conclusion is sure to inspire readers to re-examine their own belief in forgiveness and redemption.Second Place Catholic Anchor, Anchorage, Alaska, “Dying in Broad Daylight” by Patricia Coll Freeman Sensitively told, without being sentimental, this commentary grabs a reader’s attention and tells her why she should care. In a writing style that is concise and accessible, the author keeps his focus as his expert storytelling leads readers through the piece. Close finish with the first place entry.Third Place Arkansas Catholic, Little Rock, Ark., “DREAM Can still be Kept Alive” by Malea Hargett With its strong and emphatic call to action in the lead, this entry is a true “editorial” comment. Through its

Award N4c, Best Analysis/Background/Round-Up News Writing, The Gerard E. Sherry Award, First Place, National Catholic Reporter, Kansas City, Mo.

Award N3c, Best News Writing, International Event, First Place, The Catholic Northwest Progress, Seattle, Wash.



outstanding explication of the situation and explanation of the legislative process, the commentary clearly states the critical need to pass this important bill. How could readers not support it?Honorable Mention Catholic Anchor, Anchorage, Alaska, “Minors Need ‘Choices’” by Joel Davidson

N5bBest EditorialLocal Issue17,001-40,000 Diocesan PaperFirst Place Catholic Herald, Madison, Wis., “Church is Committed to Helping the Poor” by Mary C. Uhler Conversational style delivers a clear explication. The author achieves resonance and relevance to readers’ personal economic stresses. Commentary provided good context. For greater effectiveness, the call to action should have been closer to the top of the commentary. Second Place The B.C. Catholic, Vancouver, British Columbia, “Today’s Scripture, Tomorrow’s Hatred” by Paul Schratz

N5cBest EditorialLocal Issue40,001+ Diocesan PaperFirst Place The A.D. Times, Allentown, Pa., “The Towns that Will Be” by Msgr. Thomas Orsulak Monsignor Orsulak possesses a felicity for writing that invites the reader to become closer to his subject. Second Place The Catholic Spirit, St. Paul, Minn., “Our Catholic Schools Need, Deserve Our Support” by Joe Towalski Joe Towalski’s articles show a keen insight and excellent research to back up his opinions. His consistency as a top-notch writer is, perhaps, his greatest asset.Third Place The Evangelist, Albany, N.Y., “A Parish Dies, the Church Lives” by Christopher D. Ringwald

Christopher Ringwald’s plaintive writing style is simple, yet eloquent. He writes what he feels and does so with charm and grace.

N6a Best EditorialNational or International Issue1-17,000 Diocesan PaperFirst Place The Catholic Anchor, Anchorage, Alaska, “Human Dignity is Connected at Every Point” by Joel Davidson Authoritative without being preachy, written with strong, direct language. The author does a more than credible job of stitching together what some would find an esoteric argument (the pro-life continuum) and makes it very tangible, and a cogent argument on a visceral as well as intellectual level. The great test is whether a piece of commentary can move someone whose views are the polar opposite to the published viewpoint. This meets that test.Second Place The Southern Cross, Savannah, Ga., “Cooperation in Good is Necessary” by Father Douglas K. Clark The author takes what must be a very difficult premise for devout Catholics (cooperation with someone whose views are anathema to many Catholics, in this case President Obama) and makes the case in a compelling way using common sense and logic over unfettered ideology. Convincingly done.Third Place The Southern Cross, Savannah, Ga,, “ A Much Needed Stiffening of the Spine” by Father Douglas K. Clark Very convincing, with some stellar use of the debaters lexicon and style, such as “it must be pointed out that toleration emerged as a pragmatic expedient rather than as a moral principle.” Manages to maintain an authoritative tone while still surrendering to the odd folksy turn of phrase. This is not usually possible unless the writer has very considerable skill.

N6bBest EditorialNational or International Issue17,001-40,000 Diocesan PaperFirst Place Tennessee Register, Nashville, Tenn., “Like Christ, We Must Reject Violence and Be Healers” by Andy Telli By making thoughtful distinctions between what it presents as a moral cause and immoral action, this editorial puts the slaying of an abortion doctor in an ethical context and makes a powerful case for what it means to call ourselves Christian. Second Place Western Catholic Reporter, Edmonton, Alberta, Canada, “Double Standard for Excommunications Leaves Activist on the Outside” by Glen Argan This sharply focused commentary by Glen Argan puts the case of Father Roy Bourgeois in an important historical and moral light. The theme of “what we do to the least of our brothers and sisters” is carried through to the end. The robust writing makes excellent use of thoroughly presented background information on Bourgeois.Third Place Catholic Herald, Madison, Wis., “Draw an Ethical Line in Regulating Research” by Mary C. Uhler By blending personal experience, presidential action and the views of a religious organization leader, this commentary by Mary C. Uhler pulls together important threads to make the writer’s case against President Obama’s executive order regarding federal funding of embryonic stem-cell research. The point is not all shrill, but unequivocal just the same.

N6cBest EditorialNational or International Issue40,001+ Diocesan PaperFirst Place The Evangelist, Albany, N.Y., “Dangerous Examples” by Christopher D. Ringwald Excellent take on the national assisted-suicide debate, with a strong connection (albeit not a straight line) to a string of teen suicides in the local community of Schenectady. A very well written piece with lovely phrases sprinkled throughout and a forcefully stated assertion that drives the writer’s argument and conclusion in support of the sanctity of life. Second Place The Catholic Sun, Phoenix, Ariz., “Seeking Conversion” by Robert DeFrancesco Concise, courageous editorial recaps President Obama’s policy positions on abortion, stem cell research and conscience protection for health care workers in urging Notre Dame Officials to have a change of heart concerning their invitation to Obama to give that year’s commencement address. Bold conclusion goes to the heart of the issue. Third Place The Long Island Catholic, Roosevelt, N.Y., “Let Congress Hear a Powerful Catholic Voice for Life” by Rick Hinshaw Unequivocal call to action by parishioners to make their voices heard on two key moral issues of health care reform. The writer helpfully reminds readers where local politicians and the state’s U.S. senators stand on abortion, effectively calls on “we Catholics on Long Island” to speak with one voice, and (in bold type, no less) provides a Web site reference for people to get involved.Honorable Mention The Catholic Spirit, St. Paul, Minn., “Life without Parole Helps Build Anti-Death Penalty Support” by Joe TowalskiHonorable Mention The Long Island Catholic, Roosevelt, N.Y., “Birth of Octuplets Poses Serious Ethical Questions” by Rick Hinshaw

Award N5c, Best Editorial, Local Issue, 40,000+ Diocesan Paper, First Place, The A. D. Times, Allentown, Pa. Award N6c, Best Editorial, National or International Is-

sue, 40,000+ Diocesan Paper, First Place, The Evangelist, Albany, N.Y.



Honorable Mention The Tidings, Los Angeles, Calif., “Notre Dame and Obama: Action, Reaction and Principles of Life” by Mike Nelson

N6dBest EditorialNational or International IssueNational NewspaperFirst Place National Catholic Reporter, Kansas City, Mo., “Pastor’s Effort Merits Support” by National Catholic Reporter Editors This clear, well-argued and artfully written editorial includes a strong call to action to readers in support of its subject’s efforts. The context is strong, and the point is thoroughly made and wrapped up with a strong conclusion in support of “a pastor from Seattle.”Second Place The Catholic Register, Toronto, Ontario, Canada, “End Indifference” by Jim O’Leary Taking on a subject as vast as world hunger within the confines of a newspaper editorial is no easy task, but this piece does an excellent job of framing the issue within the remarks of Pope Benedict XVI at a three-day world food summit. The reader is left with the pain of the current reality, but also hope for the future. Third Place National Catholic Reporter, Kansas City, Mo., “The Right to Health Care” by National Catholic Reporter Editors This is a thoughtful and comprehensive discussion of views of the contentious issue within the Catholic faith, and it foreshadows many of the key issues that remained prominent up until the final days of the lengthy debate on this issue in Washington, D.C. The editorial also issues a clear call for the Church to show leadership at a critical time.

Award N7Best Editorial Page or Section First Place The Catholic Spirit, St. Paul, Minn., “This Catholic Life” by the Catholic Spirit Staff Engaging, well-rounded pages. Strong local voices offer

reasoned insights on relevant subjects, from health care reform and nurturing families to church affairs and personal faith. Pages shine with clean graphics, crisp writing and ample reader interaction. Well done.Second Place National Catholic Reporter, Kansas City, Mo., “Opinion & Arts Section” by Pat Marrin; Jeannette Cooperman; Thomas J. Reese; Michael Lerner; Nicholas Cafardi; Jamie Manson Plenty to read and ponder with a wide range of topics written and presented well. Striking graphics enhance an impressive array of views and commentary. The writing offers a clear Catholic perspective but with appeal to people of all faiths.Third Place Tennessee Register, Nashville, Tenn., Editorial Section, by the Tennessee Register staff An irresistible collection of thoughtful pieces on challenging topics that matter. The writing is lively, reasoned and creative.

N8aBest Feature Writing1-17,000 Diocesan PaperFirst Place Catholic Anchor, Anchorage, Alaska, “The Disappeared Ones: Families Grieve Children Lost in Miscarriage” by Patricia Coll Freeman Good writing changes the way people think, and this story does just that. The winner handles a tough subject in a way that engenders sympathy but not pity. She interviewed enough people who’d lost babies before they were born to be able to explain how hurtful and inappropriate the term ‘miscarriage’ can be. This is powerful and sensitive writing.Second Place Catholic Northwest Progress, Seattle, Wash., “Three Powerful Words: ‘I Forgive You’” by Terry McGuire The writer presents a gripping story that engages and surprises. The story’s subjects came to the concept of forgiveness slowly, and the reporter captured their frank opinions about what happened to them. It’s a good reporter who can get a deacon’s wife to admit, “I was madder than hell.” This story is worth reading and re-reading.Third Place The Catholic Miscellany, Charleston, S.C., “Faith, Laughter Key for Catholic Families with Many Children” by Amy Wise Taylor This story shows what it is like to be in the heart of a big, rambunctious household. It demonstrates, through lots of thoughtful interviews, what keeps the heart beating: God and a sense of humor. The story also dispels the notion that religious families are staid; they fight, tease, and have fun just like any other family.

N8bBest Feature Writing17,001-40,000 Diocesan PaperFirst Place Tennessee Register, Nashville, Tenn., “Kairos Prison Ministry Offers Hope to Inmates” by Andy Telli Telli begins with Joe Collins, whose story snares me, and weaves in inmate quotes and stories throughout, revealing their humanity—and the reason why this ministry is so important. Excellent sidebar on Deacon Franks. Smooth transitions and crisp, unhurried pace.Second Place Tennessee Register, Nashville, Tenn., “’Inherent Value of Every Human Life’ is Foundation of Hospital Ethics” by Theresa Laurence Laurence takes us into the hospital with the first words. She puts a human face on some of the most difficult decisions anyone can face and weaves in Church teaching smoothly. She keeps herself out of the story. Third Place The Michigan Catholic, Detroit, Mich., “Choosing Church

over Baseball” by Marylynn G. Hewitt, SFO Michael Ochab must choose between attending Good Friday services or making his twenty-first straight opening day pilgrimage to Tiger Stadium. There’s no preaching here, just crisp, clear writing, heart, and a marvelous example of Christian devotion.

N8cBest Feature Writing 40,001+ Diocesan PapersFirst Place Western New York Catholic, Buffalo, N.Y., “Rwandan Couple has Faith in Innocence” by Mark Ciemcioch This writer has created a passionate perspective about a very real tragedy and a couple’s personal ordeal and survival. The writing is exceptional and full of details, facts and anecdotes. I particularly liked the following detailed passage: “The couple married in late 1993, a few months before the conflict began in earnest. But the couple stayed together when it was easier and safer to separate. “For us, it was about love,” Benoit said. “The writer provides revelations about Rwanda politics and a snap shot of the country’s turbulent history. Good job.Second Place The Tablet, Brooklyn, N.Y., “Pet Therapy Dog” by Father Frank Mann “Pet therapy” is becoming more common as a complement to medicines, counseling, etc. for lonely seniors and others. This engaging timely story blends the integrity of respected research about the benefits of the therapy with witty and practical insights of how therapy works. It’s more than a story about a dog (Raisin). The writing is organized, and the story is very useful. Well written and very touching.Third Place The Long Island Catholic, Roosevelt, N.Y., “Ash Wednesday” by Mary Iapalucci The writer has written a thorough piece about why we (i.e. Catholics) still receive ashes. I liked how she mixed scripture, interviews and some levity with her explanation about what it all means to get a smudge on our foreheads. The sidebars were informative – not preachy. Good job.Honorable Mention The Texas Catholic, Dallas, Texas, “Addictions Ministry Available for Those in Need” by Cathy Harasta

Award N8b, Best Feature Writing, 17,001-40,000 Diocesan Paper, First Place, Tennessee Register, Nashville, Tenn. Award N8a, Best Feature Writing, 1-17,000 Diocesan Paper,

First Place, Catholic Anchor, Anchorage, Alaska



N8d Best Feature WritingNational NewspaperFirst Place Catholic Health World, St. Louis, Mo., “Delivering Bad News Well Requires Courage, Patience and Empathy” by Diane Toroian Keaggy A finely written, touching and instructive story. Often reporters will let quotes run on unnecessarily, sapping the readers’ interest. This writer knows how to effectively use quotes to add emotion and insight. The story is expertly sourced, providing a strong variety of viewpoints. This piece should be required reading for all health care providers.Second Place Catholic Health World, St. Louis, Mo., “Dementia Patients Lead Full Lives at Hunger Mercy Living Center” by Judith VandeWater A wonderfully told story about caring for Alzheimer’s patients. The writer expertly infuses telling detail into the story and chooses quotations that provide character insight and give readers a vivid picture of the facility and its caring staff. Third Place The Catholic Register, Toronto, Ontario, Canada, “’Bio-Cremation’ Cuts Carbon Footprint, Backers Say” by Michael Swan A mesmerizing story about an issue not often talked about, how to dispose of bodies in an environmentally aware way, but one that doesn’t conflict with Catholic principles. The story has a hard-hitting lead that jolts readers into wanting to know more. It instructs as well as informs. It would have been strengthened by hearing from those with reservations beyond the “yuck” factor.Honorable Mention The Catholic Register, Toronto, Ontario, Canada, “Deacon Does ‘the Right Thing’ to Save Nun’s Life” by Jim O’LearyHonorable Mention Catholic Health World, St. Louis, Mo., “Sisters of St. Joseph Care for their Frail Members” by Diane Toroian Keaggy

N8eBest Feature WritingAssociate/Individual Freelance MemberFirst Place Our Sunday Visitor, Huntington, Ind., “A Covert Flight: Operation Pedro Pan, A History” by Maria de Lourdes Ruiz Scaperlanda An intriguing story about the Catholic Welfare Bureau’s secret plan to bring unaccompanied minors out of Cuba to the United States after the U.S. broke off diplomatic relations with the Castro regime. The story’s strength is in its interviews with Pedro Pan children, now adults thriving in America, including an auxiliary bishop in Miami. It also offers ways in which the Pedro Pan alumni can get in contact with one another, which is a critical service for those affected by this exodus. It would have been strengthened by stronger editing, including clarification as to how this operation was kept secret from – or allowed by – the Cuban government and mention of what happened to Father Walsh (most likely deceased, but tell readers when, and more about him), who was in charge of the operation.

N9aBest Personality Profile1-17,000 Diocesan PaperFirst Place Catholic Sentinel, Portland, Ore., “Spreading Warmth Along the McKenzie River” by Ed Langlois A personality profile uses words to describe something that’s very tough to describe—the interviewee’s personhood—character, characteristics, traits, personality. It’s describing what makes that person a unique individual. The profile can use examples from the person’s life, comments from people who know the interviewee to illustrate the personality. But, at its core, it focuses on “the anima” what animates, what brings this person to life, not the events themselves. Of 31 entries, Ed Langlois’ feature, “Spreading Warmth Along the McKenzie River” in The Sentinel on Sister John Maureen, an 87 year-old sister who ministers to the homeless, poor and mentally-retarded in Oregon’s backwoods, best satisfies these criteria. Langlois’ descriptions of Sister John Maureen and those she helps—“grey-haired elfin nun” and “residents come limping, waddling, or skittering”—give the reader vivid, eyewitness physical descriptions of the sister and those she helps. What further differentiates his writing from the other entries are the anecdotes and descriptions used to illustrate Sister John Maureen’s character. One example: “Sister John Maureen is tougher than many people half her age. Not long ago, when a large group of sisters came to her house, she bunked in the tool shed.” To say that she is tough isn’t as effective or dramatic as giving an example of it. Sister John Maureen’s story is remarkable. Langlois’ reporting makes it more so because Langlois is masterful at describing her personality and its impact.

N9bBest Personality Profile 17,001-40,000 Diocesan PaperFirst Place The Compass, Green Bay, Wis., “A Life Interrupted, Yet Grateful to God” by Sam Lucero Touching story of an 81 year old woman who was paralyzed by a fall later in her adult life. As a reader I thought of the faith and strength this woman must have, the writing and story were excellent and emotional. Clear first place winner.Second Place The B.C. Catholic, Vancouver, British Columbia, “Never too late to graduate” by Laureen McMahon Excellent profile of a man named Bill Young who never graduated from high school (due to circumstances beyond

his control) but went on to be truly successful and lead a fulfilling life. He was very touched by the honorary degree his school gave him and made an impressive speech to the graduates. Interesting article, good story-telling.Third Place The Tennessee Register, Nashville, Tenn., “Father Ryan Senior, a ‘walking miracle’ Ready to Graduate” by Theresa Laurence Good writing in this profile of a teenager who was badly injured in a car accident and updated her web-based public journal while in the hospital and undergoing physical therapy. Her experiences inspired other people to pray for her and touched a lot of lives.

N9cBest Personality Profile40,001+ Diocesan PaperFirst Place The Georgia Bulletin, Atlanta, Ga., “Habitat Home Building Still Impels 25-Year Volunteer” by Gretchen Keiser Keiser’s story about Gene Stelten and how his passionate hobby that turned into his livelihood shows how richly Stelten has been rewarded in his life by working for the good of others. The man has a true passion for helping the poor and Keiser shows this in her writing.Second Place The Criterion, Indianapolis, Ind., “Faith, Football and a Fatherly Instinct: Father John Hollowell Knows Joy and Passion as a Priest, Teacher and Coach” by John Shaughnessy Father John Hollowell coaches football and teaches, the author is able to show that he reaches his pupils on many different levels and makes a huge difference in their lives and they are a huge part of his life. Well-written.Third Place Arlington Catholic Herald, Arlington, Va., “Building on a Foundation of Faith” by Katie Bahr Very interesting profile of Frank O’Reilly, a businessman in Virginia who belongs to an organization of Christian business owners. The author demonstrated how O’Reilly relates Biblical teachings to doing business in a secular world is a good lesson for anyone. Good profile.

Award N9b, Best Personality Profile, 17,001-40,000 Dioc-esan Paper, First Place, The Compass, Green Bay, Wis.

Award N9c, Best Personality Profile, 40,001+ Diocesan Paper, First Place, The Georgia Bulletin, Atlanta, Ga.



N9dBest Personality ProfileNational NewspaperFirst Place The Catholic Register, Toronto, Ontario, Canada, “This Brother Certainly doesn’t do the Least” by Carolyn Girard This story definitely answered the question “what does this person do that makes a difference?” A lot! Brother Canterucci has spent his life devoted to mission work in Tanzania. The author used an anecdote that Brother Canterucci told her to explain the difference between a Father and a Brother, he explained that his calling has allowed him to do a lot of mission work. He truly seems to inspire the mission work in others too. Second Place Catholic News Service, Washington, D.C., “Jesuit Finds New Vocation, but doesn’t Abandon Old One” by Chaz Muth Well-written bio of a Priest who works with U.S. Veterans in a writing workshop that assists them in getting through their PTSD and recording their experiences as a type of group therapy. Really interesting and well written. The author did a good job of explaining why Father Curry relates so well with the Veterans.

N9eBest Personality ProfileAssociate/Individual Freelance MemberFirst Place The Tidings, Los Angeles, Calif., “Don’t Make Me Out to be a Saint” by Sister Nancy Munro, CSJ The writer uses biographical detail and current examples to give readers a look at an 82-year-old pastor who has devoted himself to his parishioners. She engages readers through effective use of quotation, especially in his recollections of his childhood. The story is well organized and technically exact. It could have been made stronger by including others’ opinions of Father Colleoni, especially the people of the parish to who he is so devoted.

N10a Best Regular ColumnCulture, The Arts, and LeisureFirst Place The Tennessee Register, Nashville, Tenn., “Reel Life Journeys” by Christpher Fenoglio The author tactfully uses examples from movies, popular culture and sports to explain his own faith and life lessons. The stories are funny, charming and relatable. Second Place The Catholic Spirit, St. Paul, Minn., “Artfully” by Maria Wiering For a new-ish column, author Wiering seems to have found her niche. As an art historian, she skillfully combines her knowledge and faith into interesting columns that are refreshing to read. Third Place National Catholic Reporter, Kansas City, Mo., by Sister Rose Pacatte The author makes good points and has consistently good writing.

N10bBest Regular ColumnSpiritual LifeFirst Place The Observer, Rockford, Ill., “Person in the Pew” by Amanda Hudson Her writing opens the door to seeing opportunities for grace everyday and in everything we do. The columns are accessible and thought provoking. She writes about regular hobbits who became heroes, and the reader can see opportunities for heroism. She reminds readers that the “normal” way of looking at things is not reliable, and they can recall their own need for faith-based mindfulness. Every example of Amanda Hudson’s “Person in the Pew” began with a compelling lead, guided the reader through a series of examples and then left the reader with an opening to renew or review his or her own faith. Of all the columns submitted, Hudson’s “Person in the Pew” most effectively led the reader to renewal.

N10c Best Regular ColumnScriptureFirst Place Catholic Anchor, Anchorage, Alaska, “What Do They Mean by the Word ‘Love?’; Take Off Your Shoes and Feel the Resurrection; Why Do We Cling To One Another?” by Father LeRoy Clementich, CSC Father Clementich offers a unique voice among the entries in this very strong category. He doesn’t preach at readers so much as he guides them gently, his writing hand constantly patting their shoulders, to a point of view that is both reasoned and entertaining, intellectual and fun. His writing style is informal and simple, but how deep is the trough from which he feeds the reader. And he has an iPod with Anne Murray on it! Praise the Lord and keep on writing.Second Place Arlington Catholic Herald, Arlington, Va., “Gospel Commentary” by Father Paul Scalia The readers of the Herald are fortunate to have a columnist who writes with such verve and intelligence. Each of his entered pieces made me think, particularly The Scandal Column. His writing is highly readable and cogent. Third Place The Tablet, Brooklyn, N.Y., “Sunday’s Scriptures” by Father Thomas Catania Father Catania’s humorous and humble style made me immediately appreciative of his craft. He tells a good story and provides excellent application of churchy truths in a

non-churchy way. Nothing wrong with that because he still makes his points. Readers should be pleased to peruse his column each edition.

N10d Best Regular ColumnGeneral CommentaryFirst Place National Catholic Reporter, Kansas City, Mo., ““The Grace of Living on the Margins”; “Why I Still Call Myself a Catholic”; “Wisdom Hidden from the wise” by Jamie Man-son Jamie Manson pulls readers into her columns effort-lessly. Readers find themselves experiencing the emotions she feels and seeing the things she describes. Her writing flows so smoothly that readers don’t realize they are taking part in a deep conversation about weighty things. Each col-umn exposes a part of her, but she is able to make readers understand and want more. Second Place The Dialogue, Wilmington, Del., “Theology on Ice”; “Updike’s Writing Enlivened by a Christian Perspective”; “Forgiveness in an Imperfect World” by Joseph Ryan The writer has a clear, pointed message in each column, but there is no preaching here. He engages readers with wit and good conversation. Readers find themselves shak-ing their heads in agreement, never realizing they are being won over by a sophisticated argument. Third Place Clarion Herald, New Orleans, La., “A Love Story: Get-ting Life into Sharper Focus”; “Resurrection from a Dead-End Life Amazes Family”; “When Rome Sweet Home Means Staying Home” by Peter Finney Jr. The writer uses simple, but heartfelt tales to get across his messages. The writing is straightforward, but effec-tive. Emotion builds in the reader as the writer builds with details. Well-executed throughout.

N10eBest Regular ColumnFamily LifeFirst Place West Texas Angelus, San Angelo, Texas, “Call your Mom Everyday (and Other Nuggets of Fatherly Wisdom)”; “The Love Dare: Getting to Know your Spouse All Too Well”; “God Bless America Indeed: The Perfect Ending to Dad’s Full Life” by Jimmy Paterson The easy-going style draws readers into the columns, which share personal stories while incorporating a spiri-tual nugget. The column about the father’s death was detailed and moving, without being maudlin. The writer

Award N9e, Best Personality Profile, Associate/Individual Freelance Member, First Place, The Tidings, Los Angeles, Calif.

Award N10e, Best Regular Column, Family Life, First Place, West Texas Angelus, San Angelo, Texas

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