Instructional Focus

Lesson Plan

Writing Strategies 1.6a

Grade 5

Instructional Focus

Lesson Plan

Writing Strategies 1.6a

Grade 5

Digital EnglishDigital English

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Edit and revise manuscripts to improve the meaning and focus of writing by adding, deleting, consolidating, clarifying, and rearranging words and sentences.

Writing StrategiesWriting Strategies Standard 1.6a

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Yesterday we went to the zoo. The guide showed us the bones for different animals. They were like the human skeleton we’ve seen in our library, but different sizes and shapes. The bones in the cat’s tail were very long. The guide also showed us a snake skeleton with many rib bones and vertebrae. We got to touch the enormous whale jawbone. It was really interesting!

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belonging to

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 these skeletons were

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There are manywhich make it

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Its tail is much longer than a cat’s!

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It was very rough feeling.

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We got to touch the enormous whale jawbone

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It was really interesting!

 

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Yesterday my class and I went to the zoo. The guide showed us the bones belonging to different animals. They were like the human skeleton we’ve seen in our library, but these skeletons were different sizes and shapes. There are many bones in the cat’s tail, which make it very long. The guide also showed us a snake skeleton with many rib bones and vertebrae. Its tail is much longer than a cat’s! We got to touch the enormous whale jawbone. It was very rough feeling. It was extremely interesting!

Yesterday my class and I went to the zoo. The guide showed us the bones belonging to different animals. They were like the human skeleton we’ve seen in our library, but these skeletons were different sizes and shapes. There are many bones in the cat’s tail, which make it very long. The guide also showed us a snake skeleton with many rib bones and vertebrae. Its tail is much longer than a cat’s! We got to touch the enormous whale jawbone. It was very rough feeling. It was extremely interesting!

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