Determining my Future One Rock Concert at a Time

The fans must determine whether or not I put on a good show

I faced many uncontrolled challenges

However, I realized that I needed to take control by preparing and working hard

My manager helped motivate me and that kept me moving forward

When the concert finally started, the instruments began to fail

The ELD Benchmark was like going on a rock tour

Mrs. Isela Valencia

Moises Martinez

Jun 6 2011

Reason for Country choice

Finland has interesting types of folk music

Learn more about Finland culture

Is one of my favorites countries

Completing the Checkpoints

I can’t understand some checkpoint

s

The time pass

to fast

The project take more time that I

think

Preparing for the Essay

How to use the outline to prepare the introduction

How to write a good thesis statement

How to use the data cards to write the paragraphs

The stage caught on fire

Synopsis of Paper

Finland

Extensive History

Architecture

rich music

Appealing art

culture

foods

Key ideas demonstrates

Music of Finland

Art in Finland

Finland’s historical overview

Importance of Country

Finland has great opera and folk music

Finland has a wonderful forest

They have a interesting culture

The show is almost over and overcome all obstacles till the end and

the fan ask for more

Benchmark Process Understanding

How do the data cards

Now I now how do the outline

Now the essay is easier

Personal Growth

I feel that my personality is becoming better

Now I’m more responsible

I feel more prepared for the next level

FutureI’m going to pass my ELD

classes

Next year I want to take a guitar class

I’m going to get my high school diploma

Will Mr. Flippen and Mrs. Torres give me a distinguish?

I faced many uncontrolled challenges ,

however, I realized that I needed to take control by preparing and working hard

Now that I have completed the show and it was a success

I am ready for the next show