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Page 1: How paragraphs are formed How to develop stronger paragraphs How to completely and clearly express your ideas What you can expect to learn from this presentation:

• How paragraphs are formed

• How to develop stronger paragraphs

• How to completely and clearly express your ideas

What you can expect to learn from this presentation:

Page 2: How paragraphs are formed How to develop stronger paragraphs How to completely and clearly express your ideas What you can expect to learn from this presentation:

• A paragraph is at least five sentences.

• A paragraph is at least a half page.

Common Myths about Paragraphs

WRONG!!!

Page 3: How paragraphs are formed How to develop stronger paragraphs How to completely and clearly express your ideas What you can expect to learn from this presentation:

• A group of sentences or a single sentence that forms a unit

• The unit must contain a consistency of ideas.

• A sentence or sentences unified around one controlling idea

Then, what is a paragraph?

Page 4: How paragraphs are formed How to develop stronger paragraphs How to completely and clearly express your ideas What you can expect to learn from this presentation:

• It’s the main point or expression that you are trying to convey to your reader.

• It’s like a seed that grows into a full-blown paper.

• All information in your paragraphs should have a relationship to the controlling idea.

• This information takes the form of sentences that create support for the controlling idea.

The Controlling Idea:

Page 5: How paragraphs are formed How to develop stronger paragraphs How to completely and clearly express your ideas What you can expect to learn from this presentation:

Where do the ideas for paragraphs come from?

Brainstorming • What issues surround your topic?

• What are the ultimate goals for what you want to express?

• Write down relevant issues in words, phrases, or sentences.

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Every paragraph in a paper should be:

Unified• The sentences should all refer to

the main idea, or thesis, of the paper.

Coherent• The sentences should be

arranged in a logical manner and follow a definite plan for development.

Well-Developed• Every idea in the paragraph should be explained and

supported through evidence and details.

Page 7: How paragraphs are formed How to develop stronger paragraphs How to completely and clearly express your ideas What you can expect to learn from this presentation:

5-Step Process to Paragraph Development

1. Controlling Idea• Paragraph development begins with the

formulation of the controlling idea. Often this will appear in the form of a topic sentence. A topic sentence announces and controls the content of a paragraph.

• Topic sentences can occur at four major points in paragraph: the beginning, the middle, the end, or at the beginning and end of the paragraph.

Here’s how you might begin a paragraph on handling homework:

Idea – “Learning how to turn in homework assignments on time is one of the invaluable skills that college students can take with them into the working world.”

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5-Step Process to Paragraph Development

2. Explanation of Controlling Idea• Paragraph development continues with an

explanation for how the reader should interpret the information presented in the idea statement (controlling idea) or topic sentence of the paragraph.

Here’s how you might explain the controlling idea:

Explanation – “Though the workforce may not assign homework to its workers in the traditional sense, many of the objectives and jobs that need to be completed require that employees work with deadlines. The deadlines that students encounter in the classroom may be different in content when compared to the deadlines of the workforce, but the importance of meeting those deadlines is the same. In fact, failure to meet deadlines in both the classroom and the workforce can mean instant termination.”

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5-Step Process to Paragraph Development

3. Example• Paragraph development progresses with the

expression of some type of support or evidence for the idea and the explanation that came before it.

Here are two examples that might follow the explanation of the idea:

Example A – “For example, in the classroom, students form a contract with the teacher and the university when they enroll in a class. That contract requires that students complete the assignments and objectives set forth by the course’s instructor in a specified time to receive a grade and credit for the course.”ANDExample B – “Accordingly, just as a student risks termination in the classroom if he/she fails to meet the deadline for a homework assignment, so, too, does that student risk termination in the workforce.”

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5-Step Process to Paragraph Development

4. Explanation of Example• The next movement in paragraph development is an

explanation of each example and its relevance to the topic sentence and reasoning given at the beginning of the paragraph. All examples should be explained and the relationship between the example and the idea should always be expressed.

Explanation for Example A -

“When a student fails to complete those assignments by the deadline, the student breaks her contract with the university and the teacher to complete the assignments and objectives of the course. This often leaves the teacher with no recourse than to fail the student and leaves the university with no other recourse than to terminate the student’s credit for the course.”

Explanation for Example B - “A former student’s contract with his/her employer functions in much the same way as the contract that student had with his/her instructor and with the university in a particular course.”

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5-Step Process to Paragraph Development

5. Completion of Paragraph’s Idea or Transition into Next Paragraph• The final movement involves tying up the loose

ends of the paragraph – and reminding the reader of the relevance of the information in this paragraph to the main or controlling idea of the paper.

• You can also simply transition your reader to the next development in the next paragraph.

Here’s an example of a sentence that completes our example paragraph:

“Developing good habits of turning in assignments in class now, as current students, will aid your performance and position as future participants in the working world.”

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The Complete Paragraph:Learning how to turn in homework assignments on time is one of the invaluable skills that college students can take with them into the working world. Though the workforce may not assign homework to its workers in the traditional sense, many of the objectives and jobs that need to be completed require that employees work with deadlines. The deadlines that students encounter in the classroom may be different in content when compared to the deadlines of the workforce, but the importance of meeting those deadlines is the same. In fact, failure to meet deadlines in both the classroom and the workforce can mean instant termination. For example, in the classroom, students form a contract with the teacher and the university when they enroll in a class. That contract requires that students complete the assignments and objectives set forth by the course’s instructor in a specified time to receive a grade and credit for the course. Accordingly, just as a student risks termination in the classroom if he/she fails to meet the deadline for a homework assignment, so, too, does that student risk termination in the workforce. When a student fails to complete those assignments by the deadline, the student breaks her contract with the university and the teacher to complete the assignments and objectives of the course. This often leaves the teacher with no recourse than to fail the student and leaves the university with no other recourse than to terminate the student’s credit for the course. Developing good habits of turning in assignments in class now, as current students, will aid your performance and position as future participants in the working world.

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• Transitions can be single words, phrases, sentences, and even whole paragraphs. They help to establish relationships between ideas in a paragraph.

• Without transitions, your paragraph will not be unified, coherent, or well-developed.

The Importance of Transitions

Take a look at our paragraph again to see some transitions highlighted in red.

Page 14: How paragraphs are formed How to develop stronger paragraphs How to completely and clearly express your ideas What you can expect to learn from this presentation:

Learning how to turn in homework assignments on time is one of the invaluable skills that college students can take with them into the working world. Though the workforce may not assign homework to its workers in the traditional sense, many of the objectives and jobs that need to be completed require that employees work with deadlines. The deadlines that students encounter in the classroom may be different in content when compared to the deadlines of the workforce, but the importance of meeting those deadlines is the same. In fact, failure to meet deadlines in both the classroom and the workforce can mean instant termination. For example, in the classroom, students form a contract with the teacher and the university when they enroll in a class. That contract requires that students complete the assignments and objectives set forth by the course’s instructor in a specified time to receive a grade and credit for the course. Accordingly, just as a student risks termination in the classroom if he/she fails to meet the deadline for a homework assignment, so, too, does that student risk termination in the workforce. When a student fails to complete those assignments by the deadline, the student breaks her contract with the university and the teacher to complete the assignments and objectives of the course. This often leaves the teacher with no recourse than to fail the student and leaves the university with no other recourse than to terminate the student’s credit for the course. Developing good habits of turning in assignments in class now, as current students, will aid your performance and position as future participants in the working world.

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Review:A. Paragraph development is a process in which you link various

ideas.

B . These linked ideas create one single idea that runs through the entire paper.

1. One central idea.

2. A discussion of how the idea works.

3. An explanation shown in an example.

4. An explanation of the example.

5. A restatement of the final idea while preparing the reader for what’s coming up next.

Paragraphs Should Include: