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How do you make sure your persuasive opinion essay is easy to read ?

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In this lesson you will learn how to organize ideas and evidence in a persuasive essay by using paragraph form.

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A paragraph is several sentences grouped together to discuss one topic. Lets Review Paragraphs are about one thing and their topic sentences should also be about one main thing. Remember: Indent every new paragraph! Remember: Indent every new paragraph!

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Lets Review Writing Process Generate Ideas Generate Ideas Write Drafts Write Drafts Revise & Edit Revise & Edit 1 2 3

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Lets Review A Common Mistake Too much information in your topic sentences Rescuing a shelter pet is great because some animals have been abandoned, and shelters cant keep them all. Rescuing a shelter pet is great because some animals have been abandoned, and shelters cant keep them all. There is too much information in this sentence! Try Rescuing a pet from the pound has many advantages.

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Lets Review Core Lesson 1 2 Use your list to draft supporting paragraphs. (Paragraph=Topic Sentence + Details) 3 Restate your thesis in a final paragraph. Review your supporting reasons.

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Lets Review Core Lesson Thousands of dogs and cats do not have a home, so adopting a shelter pet is a great choice. Thousands of dogs and cats do not have a home, so adopting a shelter pet is a great choice. Review your supporting reasons. 1 Some pets are abused Sometimes costs no money Shelters cant keep too many animals Some pets are abused Sometimes costs no money Shelters cant keep too many animals Why is it a great choice?

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Lets Review Core Lesson +s of adopting a pet Some pets are abused Sometimes costs no money Shelters cant keep too many animals +s of adopting a pet Some pets are abused Sometimes costs no money Shelters cant keep too many animals These will become topic sentences for my paragraphs.

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Lets Review Core Lesson a dog or a cat a chance for a brand new life. Your new pet will love you for rescuing him. Many pets are abused or abandoned everyday. You can give Use your list to draft supporting paragraphs. (Paragraph=Topic Sentence + Details) 2 Some pets are abused. Chance for a new life for a dog or cat New pet will be thankful Makes you feel good Animals need love Some pets are abused. Chance for a new life for a dog or cat New pet will be thankful Makes you feel good Animals need love Topic sentence

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Lets Review Core Lesson If you buy a pet from a pet store, you will pay a lot of money. My cousin adopted a dog and only paid a small fee. The shelter uses the money to pay for supplies and food for the other animals. Adopting a pet is very affordable. Sometimes costs no money. Pet stores are expensive Adopting an animal can be free Sometimes you pay a donation or small fee You help the shelter to care for other animals Sometimes costs no money. Pet stores are expensive Adopting an animal can be free Sometimes you pay a donation or small fee You help the shelter to care for other animals

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Lets Review Core Lesson Most shelters do not have enough money to pay for food and medicine for all the animals. If animals stay too long, they might be put to sleep. Animal shelters cant keep a lot of dogs and cats. Shelters cant keep too many animals. Shelters dont have a lot of space Keeping animals is expensive Some animals need medicine or special care Shelters have to put dogs and cats to sleep Shelters cant keep too many animals. Shelters dont have a lot of space Keeping animals is expensive Some animals need medicine or special care Shelters have to put dogs and cats to sleep Topic sentence

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Lets Review Core Lesson 3 Conclude your essay by restating your thesis. Thousands of dogs and cats do not have a home, so adopting a shelter pet is a great choice. If you remember all the advantages of adopting a shelter pet, you might find the perfect dog or cat for your family.

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Lets Review Core Lesson Thousands of dogs and cats do not have a home, so adopting a shelter pet is a great choice. Many pets are abused or abandoned everyday. You can give a dog or a cat a chance for a brand new life. Your new pet will love you for rescuing him. Animal shelters cant keep a lot of dogs and cats. Most shelters do not have enough money to pay for food and medicine for all the animals. If animals stay too long, they might be put to sleep.

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Lets Review Core Lesson Adopting a pet is very affordable. If you buy a pet from a pet store, you will pay a lot of money. My cousin adopted a dog and only paid a small fee. The shelter uses the money to pay for supplies and food for the other animals. If you remember all the advantages of adopting a shelter pet, you might find the perfect dog or cat for your family.

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Lets Review Core Lesson 1 2 Use your list to draft supporting paragraphs. (Paragraph=Topic Sentence + Details) 3 Restate your thesis in a final paragraph. Review your supporting reasons.

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In this lesson you have learned how to organize ideas and evidence in a persuasive essay by using paragraph form.

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Lets Review Guided Practice Using your thesis statement and supporting reasons, draft body paragraphs for your persuasive essay, including a topic sentence and evidence.

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Lets Review Extension Activities On a sheet of paper write two different topic sentences for a new essay. Switch papers with a partner and practice rewriting, or paraphrasing the topic sentences to fit at the end of an essay.

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Lets Review Quick Quiz Select a piece of your own writing to review. Is the topic sentence your thesis and a reason? Did you repeat your thesis at the end of your essay?