Healthy EatingWriting

授课教师：陈昭春单位名称：莆田第四中学

人民教育出版社高中英语必修三第二单元

Writing

Talk about the Talk about the weaknesses weaknesses in in school school canteencanteen..

Persuasive writing

A Letter to HeadmasterA Letter to Headmaster Mr.Mr.ZhengZheng, your vice-headmaster, is , your vice-headmaster, is in cin c

harge ofharge of school canteen. school canteen. RepresentRepresenting yoing your school's ur school's student associationstudent association, you are a, you are asked to write a letter to him. Let him knosked to write a letter to him. Let him know the w the situationsituation of school canteen and giv of school canteen and give some e some adviceadvice on how to improve daily di on how to improve daily dietet, especially healthy eating., especially healthy eating.

Dear Mr. Zheng,Dear Mr. Zheng,

Dear Sir/ President, I am …, a student from Class …,Senior 1. I am writing to express/convey my concern over the current situation of our school canteen.

I would highly/much appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration/ account.

Yours sincerely, …

提出问题 (problems/weaknesses)解决问题 (solutions/suggestions)

Body

Tips: •Your tone should be Your tone should be politepolite..

1.1.current situation ( diet, service, current situation ( diet, service, menu,etc.) of your school canteen.menu,etc.) of your school canteen.

2.2.manner of cooking manner of cooking

3.3.putting less/more salt / oilputting less/more salt / oil

4.4.serving some fresh vegetables and serving some fresh vegetables and fruits after mealsfruits after meals

5.5.what might add to the menu?what might add to the menu?

6.6.what's your advice on these what's your advice on these weaknessweaknesses.es.

............

points:points:

Writing skills

一、 The skills to organize the structure of a paragraph.

_ _- A varied, balanced intake( 摄取量 ) provides the nutrients （营养） you need to avoid the lack of nutrients. This also includes non-nutrients, such as fiber and water.

Benefits of a balanced diet

E1

A. Preventing and treating disease B. Managing your weight C. Enjoying life D. Advice on a healthy diet

E. Meeting your nutritional 营养 needs

2A

B. Managing your weight C. Enjoying life D. Advice on a healthy dietE. Meeting your nutritional needs

A. Preventing and treating disease

Benefits of a balanced diet

_ _- One of the key benefits of a healthy dietis that it can help prevent you from developing certain diseases, such as cancer and heart disease. It is also helpful in treating high blood pressure.

_ _ - There are other benefits of a healthy diet. Food is an important part of many social events, and is a major way of connecting with other people. Cooking meals can be an enjoyable way to spend time, whether alone or with others.

3C

A. Preventing and treating disease B. Managing your weight

D. Advice on a healthy dietE. Meeting your nutritional needs

C. Enjoying life

Benefits of a balanced diet

__ __- Eating well is important if you are to keep a suitable weight. Eating the wrong food, or over-eating, will lead to weight gain, and all the problems associated with it.

A. Preventing and treating disease

C. Enjoying life D. Advice on a healthy dietE. Meeting your nutritional needs

4B

B. Managing your weight

Benefits of a balanced diet

Writing skills

二、 The skills to beautify the sentences.

Replace the sentences by using the original ones

1. Delicious fruit could be the best.

2. The thin hostess came forward.

4. He smiled as he welcomed some customers warmly at the door but he did not smile when he saw Yong Hui walking in.

5. Their balanced diets became very successful and before long Wang Peng became thinner and Yong Hui became fatter.

3. Wang Peng sat in his empty restaurant and felt very upset.

精彩：用否定比较级表达最高级 .

精彩：同位语增加句式的多样性

精彩：长句复合句型，名词替代形容词等

Nothing could be better than delicious fruit.

The hostess, a very thin lady, came forward.

He smiled as he welcomed some customers warmly at the door but the smile left his face when he saw Yong Hui walking in.

Their balanced diets became such a great success that before long Wang Peng becameslimmer and Yong Hui put on more weight.

Wang Peng sat in his empty restaurant feeling very frustrated 懊恼 .

精彩：现在分词表伴随，使用高级词汇

精彩：复合句中运用拟人的手法

Appreciate these beautiful sentences

Talk about the Talk about the weaknesses weaknesses in in school school canteencanteen..

1.The school canteen serves too much salt and fried food, which is harmful to / does great harm to our health.2. There is a limit to the choices of food offered in our school canteen, especially for those who are particular about their diet.3. There is far too little fibre and vitamin which can help us fight diseases.…

•......be rich in be rich in fat, sugar, salt. fat, sugar, salt. •......be weak in be weak in fibre.fibre.•serve serve heavyheavy food. food. •menu is so menu is so limitedlimited..

Some suggested expressions

Dear Mr. Zheng,Dear Mr. Zheng,

Dear Sir/ President, I am …, a student from Class …,Senior 1. I am writing to express/convey my concern over the current situation of our school canteen.

I would highly/much appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration/ account.

Yours sincerely, …

提出问题 (problems/weaknesses)解决问题 (solutions/suggestions)

Body

Homework

Perfect your writing after class.

莆田第四中学

2015-3-26

莆田第四中学

2015-3-26