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LDC Argumentation Module Template – version 2 | © Literacy Design Collaborative, 2011 1
Gender Roles Point of View: Things Fall Apart Narrative Module
Module Title Gender Roles in Part One of Things Fall Apart
Module
description
(overview):
Gender roles can be defined as the behaviors and attitudes expected of male and female members of a society by that society.
Different cultures impose different expectations upon the men and women who live in that culture. Frequently, these prescribed
roles influence an individual’s beliefs, actions, and interactions with others. One’s gender sometimes influences the way he/she reacts
to a certain situation or circumstance. In the novel Things Fall Apart, Chinua Achebe tells the story of Oknonkwo, a renowned Ibo
warrior. The defined gender roles in the Ibo society cause significant pain for males and females. So, how do gender roles influence
one’s point of view? During this module, you will read Things Fall Apart, poems, news stories, magazine articles, blogs, and speeches
and watch a video to explore the influence of gender roles.
Template task
(include number,
type, level):
Task 27 Template (Narrative/Description L1, L2): [Insert essential question] After reading _____ (literature or informational texts)
about _____ (content), write a ________(narrative or substitute) from the perspective of _______ (content). L2 Use stylistic
devices (e.g. imagery, tone, humor, suspense) to develop a narrative effect in your work.
Teaching task:
Does gender influence a person’s point of view? After reading the first twelve chapters of Things Fall Apart and related texts (see
below), Write a narrative account from the perspective of one of the wives or daughters in the novel or from the perspective of one
of the male characters who struggles with the traditional roles. L2 Use stylistic devices (e.g. imagery, tone, suspense) to develop a
narrative effect in your work.
Grade(s)/Level: 10th grade
Discipline: (e.g.,
ELA, science,
history, other?)
English Language Arts
Course: English II
Author(s): Melissa Brown and Pam Shive
Contact
Information:
[email protected]; [email protected]
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this document, please contact your DPI coach.
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Section 1: What Task?
TEACHING TASK
Background
to share with
students:
Gender roles can be defined as the behaviors and attitudes expected of male and female members of a society by that society. Different
cultures impose different expectations upon the men and women who live in that culture. Frequently, these prescribed roles influence an
individual’s beliefs, actions, and interactions with others. One’s gender sometimes influences the way he/she reacts to a certain situation or
circumstance. In the novel Things Fall Apart, Chinua Achebe tells the story of Oknonkwo, a renowned Ibo warrior. The defined gender
roles in the Ibo society cause significant pain for males and females. So, how do gender roles influence one’s point of view? During this
module, you will read Things Fall Apart, poems, news stories, magazine articles, blogs, and speeches to explore the influence of gender roles.
Teaching
task:
Does gender influence a person’s point of view? After reading literature and informational texts (see below), write a narrative account
which includes a beginning, middle, and end. Be sure to include well-chosen details which reflect the cultural gender role of the narrator.
Reading
texts: Please note: all outside reading selections should be approved by the appropriate district personnel.
CCSS Text Complexity: 9-10th Grade Flesch-Kincaid Goals:
Introduction Video http://www.learner.org/courses/worldlit/things-fall-apart/watch/ “Second Coming” by Yates
A Chat with Chinua Achebe (article) http://www.langaa-rpcig.net/+50-Years-After-Things-Fall-Apart-A+.html
Journal article – “Education of Gifted Students: A Civil Rights Issue?” http://www.questia.com/googleScholar.qst?docId=5001644121
“The Changing Role and Status of Women in China” http://1990institute.org/files/public/1990/ipaper/WomenChina-ip8.pdf
ABC news video & article “For Young Boys, Is Pink the New Blue?” http://abcnews.go.com/US/gender-roles-young-boys-pink-blue/story?id=14080844
“Changes in People’s Thoughts about Gender Stereotypes” http://genderstereotype.nomaki.jp/
Poem “To the Ladies” by Lady Mary Chudleigh http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poem/173199
Poem “Nameless Pain” by Elizabeth Drew Barstow Stoddard http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poem/182717
Poem “Taking the Hands” by Robert Bly http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/browse/100/5#20588883
Extension
(optional:
could be a
speech, PPT,
creative
project):
Make a Mask - http://www.clarkhumanities.org/assignments2009/tfa_creative_fun.htm
Create a video – Student examples: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=67GlO0Oh3cU. Student videos
http://wn.com/Things_Fall_Apart_video_project
WebQuest - https://sites.google.com/a/sbsdk12.org/things-fall-apart-webquest/
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COMMON CORE STATE STANDARDS READING STANDARDS FOR NARRATION
“Built-in” Reading Standards “When Appropriate” Reading Standards (applicable in black)
2- Determine central ideas or themes of a text and analyze their development; summarize
the key supporting details and ideas.
1- Read closely to determine what the text says explicitly and to make logical inferences
from it; cite specific textual evidence when writing or speaking to support conclusions
drawn from the test.
5- Analyze the structure of texts, including how specific sentences, paragraphs, and larger
portions of the text (e.g., section, chapter, scene, or stanza) relate to each other and the
whole.
3- Analyze how and why individuals, events, and ideas develop and interact over the course
of a text.
6- Assess how point of view or purpose shapes the content and style of a text. 4- Interpret words and phrases as they are used in a text, including determining technical,
connotative, and figurative meanings, and analyze how specific word choices shape meaning
or tone.
7- Integrate and evaluate content presented in diverse formats and media, including visually
and quantitatively, as well as in words.
8- Delineate and evaluate the argument and specific claims in a text, including the validity of
the reasoning as well as the relevance and sufficiency of the evidence.
10- Read and comprehend complex literary and informational texts independently and
proficiently.
9- Analyze how two or more texts address similar themes or topics in order to build
knowledge or to compare the approaches the authors take.
WRITING STANDARDS FOR NARRATION
“Built-in” Writing Standards “When Appropriate” Writing Standards (applicable in black)
3- Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective
technique, well-chosen details, and well-structured event sequences.
1- Write arguments to support claims in an analysis of substantive topics or texts, using
valid reasoning and relevant and sufficient evidence.
4- Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style
are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience.
2- Write informative/explanatory texts to examine and convey complex ideas and
information clearly and accurately through the effective selection, organization, and analysis
of content.
5- Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing,
rewriting, or trying a new approach.
6- Use technology, including the Internet, to produce and publish writing and
to interact and collaborate with others.
10- Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and
revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of tasks,
purposes, and audience.
7- Conduct short as well as more sustained research projects based on focused questions,
demonstrating understanding of the subject under investigation.
8- Gather relevant information from multiple print and digital sources, assess the
credibility and accuracy of each source, and integrate the information while avoiding
plagiarism.
9- Draw evidence from literary or informational texts to support analysis, reflection, and
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Section 2: What Skills?
SKILL DEFINITION
SKILLS CLUSTER 1: PREPARING FOR THE TASK
1. Task Engagement Ability to connect the task and new content to existing knowledge, skills, experiences, interests, and concerns.
2. Task analysis Ability to understand and explain the task’s prompt and rubric.
SKILLS CLUSTER 2: READING PROCESS
1. Active Reading Ability to identify the central point and main supporting elements of a
text.
2. Essential Vocabulary Ability to apply strategies for developing an understanding of
text(s) by locating words and phrases that identify key concepts and facts, or information.
3. Note-Taking Ability to read purposefully and select relevant information; to summarize
and/or paraphrase.
SKILLS CLUSTER 3: TRANSITION TO WRITING
1. Bridging Conversation Ability to begin linking reading results to writing task.
SKILLS CLUSTER 4: WRITING PROCESS
1. Controlling Idea Ability to establish a controlling idea and consolidate information
relevant to task.
2. Planning Ability to develop a line of thought and text structure appropriate to an
information/explanation task.
3. Development Ability to construct an initial draft with an emerging line of thought and
structure.
4. Revision Ability to refine text, including line of thought, language usage, and tone as
appropriate to audience and purpose.
5. Editing Ability to proofread and format a piece to make it more effective.
6. Completion Ability to submit final piece that meets expectations.
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Section 3: What Instruction?
Pacing Skill and Definition Mini-Task: Product and
Prompt
Scoring (meets expectations) Instructional Strategies
SKILLS CLUSTER 1: PREPARING FOR THE TASK
Day 1 1. Task Engagement
Ability to connect the
task and new content to
existing knowledge,
skills, experiences,
interests, and concerns.
1. Students will complete an
anticipation guide (see below).
1. Complete the guide.
1 Students complete the guide individually. After students
finish, the teacher can choose a few questions to highlight and
have a class discussion. Have students stand if they agree or
disagree on certain questions. Discuss.
2. Students will watch a video
which introduces the world of
the Igbo, whose civilization is
threatened by the colonial
advances of the British into their
lands in Nigeria.
2. Complete the viewing guide. 2. Students complete the viewing guide individually. At the
conclusion of the video and after they have completed the
guide, have a whole-class discussion.
Day 2 2. Task Analysis
Ability to understand
and explain the task’s
prompt and rubric.
1. Quick write and class
discussion about prompt.
1. Not scored.
1. Students, seated in pairs, construct a statement about what
they think they will have to learn in order to write the narrative
account. Each pair then shares with another pair in the class to
begin a class discussion. Finally, ask for pairs to volunteer to
share their thoughts and their plans on how to tackle this
prompt.
2. Explore and analyze a
narrative account inspired by
another writing.
(See materials, references &
support below)
2. Meets expectations if students
can identify narrative structure
and literary techniques in the
sample.
2. Students annotate the sample writing.
3. Explore the narrative rubric. 3. Meets expectations if each
group can apply an assigned rubric
component to sample narrative
account.
3. Place students in seven groups – one group for each feature
of the rubric. Each group will analyze an editorial using one of
the seven components. Students will grade the paper and then
present to the rest of the class to explain what they did and
what they discovered about that piece of the rubric.
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Day 2-6 1. Active Reading
Ability to identify the
central point and main
supporting elements of
a text.
Students use guided reading
questions and graphic organizers
to aid in their understanding of
the novel. (See materials,
references & support below).
Students will also participate in
other reading strategies as the
teacher see fits. (See
Instructional Strategies Column.)
Meets expectations if students can
verbalize reasoning for completed
questions and graphic organizers.
Meets expectations if students
participate in the class reading
strategies.
Model for students how to annotate with the first selection, or
first part of selection. Students can share annotations with one
another. In addition, here are some processing activities to use
while reading the selections in this unit.
Suggested Reading Activities:
Title Predictions
Before reading, or after reading just a few sentences, have
students predict the main argument of the article (not just what
the article will be about). Use a sentence cue like “I’ll bet the
author believes…because…” Allow students to share with pairs
and then share with class.
Stump the Teacher
As the class reads as a whole group, students create questions
to stump the teacher. Decide how many questions each student
should create and at what points in the text are appropriate
stopping points.
5-Word Summaries
After reading a section of text, asks pairs to summarize the in
five words. By limiting the number of words, students are
forced to focus on just the essentials.
Context Clues
Students highlight difficult words as the class (or pairs or teams)
read. Students raise hands as they come across a word they do
not understand. Classmates help by pointing out context clues
and other cues that give the word some meaning. The class
decides on an alternative synonym for the word in the text.
Traveling Questions
Students are seated in purposeful teams of four as the class
reads a selection. At appropriate stopping points in the text,
stop the reading and ask groups to decide on a word, a passage,
a symbol, or other element of the text in which the group is
confused. At the teacher’s prompt, one person from each team
travels to the next team to get help with the question. After a
few moments, the traveling teammate returns to discuss the
answer. If questions remain, discuss as a class.
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Day 2-6 2. Essential Vocabulary
Ability to apply
strategies for developing
an understanding of
text(s) by locating
words and phrases that
identify key concepts
and facts, or
information.
Students will complete the
vocabulary organizer (see
below).
Meets expectations if the
organizer is complete, and if the
students participate in the
vocabulary activities.
Use the graphic organizer for both Tier 2 and Tier 3 vocabulary.
Ten of the 20 words can be dictated by the teacher as essential
for the whole class; the other Ten of 20 words can be student
chosen.
The ten class/common words need to be taught and processed
in stages for students to learn and acquire the terms. Please
choose two or more of the strategies below to help students.
Suggested Vocabulary Activities:
Frayer Maps & Pass-A-Problem
Have students in pairs complete a Frayer Map of one word.
Give each pair a sticky note to cover the word in the center.
Then, pairs pass the words to other pairs to quiz them.
Corners
With an LCD display, display the vocabulary word and four
possible definitions (one correct, three incorrect). Students
travel to the corner they think is the best definition. Reveal the
best definition and allow for class discussion.
Connotation Continuum
On white board in front of the class, draw a double-arrowed
line – positive on one end, negative on the other. Pass out the
vocabulary terms on strips to pairs or groups of students. Each
pair/group comes to the whiteboard and places the word
somewhere on the continuum. Make sure each pair/group
justifies their placement.
Meaningful Sentences
Assign each team (3 or 4 members) a word from the common
class list. Each team creates a sentence to help define and set
the context for that word. Teams write a sentence with the
vocabulary word boxed and two context clues underlined.
Example:
As his friends became wealthy, the young man’s
grew so much that he was willing to commit crimes just to
acquire more money.
avarice
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Day 2-6 3. Note-Taking
Ability to read
purposefully and select
relevant information; to
summarize
and/or paraphrase.
Students will complete a guided
reading form and/or graphic
organizers for each selection
(see MATERIALS, REFERENCES
AND SUPPORTS below).
Meets expectations if the reading
form and/or the organizer is
complete with evidence from the
text.
The guided reading form and/or graphic organizer can be
completed in various ways during the unit. During the first
reading, the teacher can model how the form and/or organizer
works and complete it as a class. The readings should be
completed in various settings. For example, students can read
the text individually, in pairs, in groups, or listening to a whole-
class presentation. Vary the setting to allow the reading to
remain effective.
Day 7 1. Bridging
Conversation
Ability to transition
from reading or
researching to the
writing task.
Students complete the graphic
organizer to draw conclusions
about the Ibo notion of gender.
Expectations are met if the graphic
organizer is completed with
relevant details and inferences
from the text.
Students work in small groups to complete the graphic
organizer. After completing the work, the students post the
graphic organizer in a designated location in the classroom.
Students then participate in a gallery walk to view their
classmates’ completed organizers. The teachers relate the
completed graphic organizer to the writing task and reminds
students of the sample narrative account they read on Day 2.
Day 7 Controlling Idea
Ability to establish a
controlling idea and
consolidate
information relevant to
task.
Students will choose a character
from whose point of view they
wish to compose the narrative.
They will complete the character
wheel on the chosen character
in order to gain insight for their
narrative account.
Expectations are met if the
character wheel contains relevant
information.
Teacher will model the process by completing the character
wheel on the character of Okonkwo.
Day 7-9 Planning
Ability to develop a
line of thought and
text structure
appropriate to an
informational/
explanation task.
Students will complete the
narrative graphic organizer.
Examples:
http://www.creativewriting-
prompts.com/support-
files/personalnarrativegraphic
organizer1.pdf
or
http://www.scribd.com/doc/37
583175/Personal-Narrative-
Pre-Writing-Graphic-
Organizer
Expectations are met if student
includes relevant details from the
text.
Teacher circulates and provides individual feedback.
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Day 7-9 Development
Ability to construct an
initial draft with an
emerging line of
thought and structure.
Students will write an initial draft
complete with opening,
development, and closing
Expectations are met if students
create a narrative with a clear
opening, development, and closing.
Teacher shares the sample of the narrative from Okonkwo’s
perspective. (See below)
Day 7-9 Revision
Ability to refine text,
including line of
thought, language
usage, and tone as
appropriate to
audience and purpose.
Students will refine narrative by
adding well-chosen details which
reflect the cultural gender role
of the narrator.
Meets expectations if
Provides complete draft
with all parts.
Improves earlier edition.
Teacher conferences with individual students to provide useful
feedback that balances support for strengths and clarity about
weaknesses.
Assign students to provide each other with feedback on those
issues.
Day 9-10 Editing
Ability to proofread
and format a piece to
make it more effective.
Students will revise draft to have
strong command of Standard
English usage and mechanics of
writing
Adjust formatting as needed to
provide clear, appealing text.
Meets expectation if
Draft is free from
distracting surface errors.
Uses format that
supports purpose.
Provide mini-lessons on selected skills based on student as
evidenced by initial assessment of their drafts and teacher
observations.
Have students create a list of their most common writing
errors.
Teach a short list of proofreading marks.
Assign students to proofread each other’s texts a second time.
Day 11 Completion
Ability to submit final
piece that meets
expectations.
Students turn in complete set of
drafts, plus the final version of
the piece.
Fits the “Meets Expectations”
category in the rubric for the
teaching task.
Teacher scores and provides feedback.
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TEACHING TASK RUBRIC (NARRATION)
Scoring Elements
Not Yet Approaches Expectations Meets Expectations Advanced
1 1.5 2 2.5 3 3.5 4
Focus Attempts to address prompt, but
lacks focus or is off-task. Addresses prompt appropriately,
but with a weak or uneven focus. Addresses prompt appropriately and
maintains a clear, steady focus.
Addresses all aspects of prompt appropriately and maintains a strongly
developed focus.
Controlling
Idea
Attempts to establish a theme or storyline, but lacks a clear or
sustained purpose.
Establishes a theme or storyline, but purpose is weak, with some lapses
in coherence.
Establishes a theme or storyline, with a well-developed purpose carried
through the narrative.
Establishes a compelling theme or storyline,
with a well-developed purpose carried
through the narrative through skillful use of
narrative techniques.
Reading/
Research
Directly restates information from reading materials,
interviews, and/ or visual
materials; uses materials
inaccurately, OR information
from source materials is
irrelevant for the purpose at
hand.
Uses reading materials, interviews, and/or visual materials with minor
lapses in cohesion, accuracy or
relevance.
Accurately integrates reading material, interviews, and/or visual
material to authenticate the
narrative.
Accurately and seamlessly integrates reading
material, interviews, and/or visual material to
authenticate the narrative.
Development
Descriptions of experiences, individuals, and/or events are
overly simplified or lack details.
L2 Attempts to use stylistic
devices (e.g., imagery, tone,
humor, suspense) but devices are
used awkwardly or do not serve
the purpose of the narrative.
Develops experiences, individuals, and/or events with some detail but
sense of time, place, or character
remains at the surface level. L2 Uses
appropriate stylistic devices (e.g.,
imagery, tone, humor, suspense)
unevenly.
Develops experiences, individuals, and/or events with sufficient detail to
add depth and complexity to the
sense of time, place, or character. L2
Uses appropriate stylistic devices
(e.g., imagery, tone, humor,
suspense) to support the purpose of
the narrative.
Elaborates on experiences, individuals, and/or events with comprehensive detail to
add depth and complexity to the sense of
time, place, or character. L2 Skillfully
integrates appropriate stylistic devices (e.g.
imagery, tone, humor, suspense) to support
the purpose of the narrative.
Organization Attempts to use a narrative
structure; composition is
disconnected or rambling.
Applies a narrative structure
(chronological or descriptive), with
some lapses in coherence or
awkward use of the organizational
structure.
Applies a narrative structure
(chronological or descriptive)
appropriate to the purpose, task, and
audience; storyline clearly conveys
the theme or purpose
Applies a complex narrative structure
(chronological or descriptive) appropriate to
the purpose, task and audience. that
enhances communication of theme or
purpose and keeps the reader engaged
Conventions Lacks control of grammar, usage, and mechanics; little or ineffective
use of transitions.
Demonstrates an uneven command
of standard English; inconsistently
uses transitions between sentences
and paragraphs to connect ideas.
Demonstrates a command of
standard English conventions with few errors; consistently uses
transitions between sentences and
paragraphs to connect ideas.
Provides bibliography or works
consulted when prompted.
Demonstrates a well-developed command of
standard English conventions; effectively uses
transitions between sentences and
paragraphs to connect ideas. Provides
bibliography or works consulted when
prompted.
Content
Understanding
Attempts to include disciplinary content, but understanding of
content is weak; content is
irrelevant, inappropriate, or
inaccurate.
Briefly notes disciplinary content relevant to the prompt; shows basic
or uneven understanding of
content; minor errors in
explanations.
Accurately presents disciplinary content relevant to the prompt with
sufficient explanations that
demonstrate understanding.
Integrates relevant and accurate disciplinary content with thorough explanations that
demonstrate in-depth understanding.
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Feedback Sheet Student _______________________________________ Date _______________________________________
Element Score Notes
Focus
Controlling
Idea
Reading/
Research
Development
Organization
Conventions
Content
Understanding
Total
Average
Overall Performance Level
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MATERIALS, REFERENCES AND SUPPORTS (ADD BELOW)
FOR TEACHERS FOR STUDENTS
Discussion questions, etc.
http://www.webenglishteacher.com/achebe.html
Sample Narrative Essays
http://www.thewritesource.com/studentmodels/wi-defarge.htm
http://www.thewritesource.com/studentmodels/wi-baby.htm
http://www.thewritesource.com/studentmodels/wi-
casablanca.htm
Vocabulary Log
Introduction Video Listening Guide
Anticipation Guide
Theme Graphic Organizer
Conclusions Graphic Organizers
Character Analysis Wheel
Close reading graphic organizer
Revision Checklist
Editing Checklist
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Introduction Video for Things Fall Apart Video, a listening guide
Name_______________________________________
Block___________ Date __________
Please complete the listening guide as you watch the video. The guide follows the video chronologically.
1. Things Fall Apart centers around __________________________culture.
2. Salie says, "The publication of Things Fall Apart was kind of a watershed moment in African Literature and Achebe has been called the
father of modern African writing because he sort of opened the door for Africans to reclaim their past and their traditions and tell their
own story in their own way." At the end of the video, please answer the following question: Why is this reclaiming of African pasts
important?
3. Details about Igbo:
4. Details about the main character Okonkwo:
5. Details about Unoka, the failure father of Okonkwo:
6. Salie says, "Achebe wanted to learn about his own past through his own people. He wanted to reflect the stories of his people, without a
white messenger." What does this mean?
7. Tensions with traditional life develop in the book. ". . . disease spreads in the village and an oracle decrees that someone is at fault and
must be sacrificed. The choice falls upon a character named _____________________, who is an adopted son within Okonkwo's own
family.
8. Why is Okonkwo exiled into his mother's homeland?
9. Important parts of the context of the book: THE INTRUSION
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1. European Powers
Damrosch says, "Nigeria, like other West African countries, was a product of the colonial scramble for _____________."
2. Christian Missions
10. "Another important part of the context is that for rather longer, in West Africa, ________________ missions from Europe had been
coming in, in much of Igbo Land, they were predominantly Catholic missions. To build schools and churches, sometimes hospitals. To be
a center for both conversion and also worship."
11. When Okonkwo returns to his own village, what has changed?
12. Appiah says, "This is not a novel about the badness of Christianity. It's a novel about the complexity of that situation. About the good
things and the bad things. Clearly, in Igbo Land, when _________________ arrives, it improves the situation, of poor people. It
improves the situation of women. And these are all things that obviously Achebe values.
13. Damrosch says, "Within a few years after its publication in 1958, the novel became known in the United States in the '60's at the time of
the rising of the __________________________________ of a lot of renewed interest in African roots and heritage on the part of
African Americans, and a very general interest in African culture, in the United States.
*Please remember to go back and answer #2
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Name:________________________ Period/Core:_________
Vocabulary Term Definition (in own terms) Visual
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
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Name:________________________ Period/Core:_________
Anticipation Guide
Agree Statement Disagree
All people are created equal.
A woman is intuitive about the health of her child.
Men should be involved in childrearing.
Experiences of people impact their values.
Women have just has many privileges as men.
When a man cries, it shows that he is weak.
People can change the culture of others.
Ignoring problems is an effective way to deal with them.
New and innovative ways are better than traditions.
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People should seek what is best for others rather than for
self.
Relationships are messy.
Justice is more important than mercy.
Religious values dictate everything.
No one has the right to impose his or her beliefs on
another.
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Theme Graphic Organizer Name:________________________ Period/Core:_________
Big Idea or Topic:
What characters SAY or DO to demonstrate
Theme
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Conclusions about the Ibo notion of GENDER
Name:________________________ Period/Core:_________
Page/paragraph:
What I know for sure from the text:
What else I figured out from the text:
Connections I made :
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Name:________________________ Period/Core:_________
Gender Roles: Close Reading
Title/Author (MLA)
Support
How would the
author answer the
question: Does
gender influence a
person’s point of
view?
What evidence in
the text shows the
perspective of one
of the wives or
daughters OR one
of the male
characters who
struggles with the
traditional roles?
Writer’s Craft What attitude does
the author have
toward the subject
matter of gender
roles (tone)?
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How does the
author combine
the features of
writing to create a
distinctive style?
How do the
author’s word
choices affect the
text?
What is the effect
of the literary
devices, including
figurative language?
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Choose a Name: Choose 3 adjectives to describe your character’s personality:
Describe his or her appearance:
Create three actions that would exemplify/demonstrate the character traits you chose for your character:
Record three thoughts your character could have that coincide/match with the character traits you chose:
Created by Melissa Brown, June 2012
Develop a Character Name:_______________________________ Period/Core:_________
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Revision Checklist Name:________________________ Period/Core:_________
Revision Checklist
Idea and Argument Development
The writing stays on topic throughout the paper. All ideas fit within the topic.
All ideas in each paragraph relate to one another.
No stray ideas or arguments can be found within the paper.
The arguments presented are strong and clear.
Organization
The introduction grabs the reader, sets up the argument, and clarifies what to expect.
The supporting paragraphs each tackle one main argument and counter arguments.
The conclusion is satisfying and strengthens the paper.
Each paragraph has a clear topic sentence.
Voice, Fluency, Word Choice
Sentences flow from one to another.
Sentence length varies throughout the paper.
The voice of the paper sounds authoritative, without sounding argumentative.
All words fit within the paper.
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Editing Checklist
Grammar, Language, Usage, and Mechanics
All words are spelled correctly (including confusing words like affective and effective).
Homonyms are spelled correctly (they’re/their/there, your/you’re, to/too/two).
Commas are used correctly in each sentence (while reading, give a long pause to check).
Each sentence ends with appropriate punctuation (avoid overuse of exclamation marks).
Semi-Colons and Colons are used correctly.
Overly used adjectives and adverbs are avoided (very, it)
Each paragraph is indented.
Sentences do not start with “it”.