final literacy memoir (1)
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Victorian Amos
ENGL 1101
September 24, 2013
Dr. Jan Reiman
My Literacy Life
When I think back of my all my previous English classes I can actually hear the sounds of
me crying in the background. I have never liked English. I cannot even remember a time
that I have had an English class I enjoyed going to. However, when I learned that literacy
was not just what I have been taught in class but what I have learned throughout my
lifetime I was actually surprised. I realize that even though I did not like English all of my
teachers were sponsors of my literacy. And not only teachers, but also my parents,
coaches and peers as well.
Elementary School Enlightenment
If you were like me and watched the show School House Rock then you
know that schools in actuality are just one big
lie! There were nocool trains,talking bills,or
even singing. However, I did have one teacher
in fourth grade named Mrs. Carland. She is my
earliest memory of literacy. We would sit in
her classroom in alphabetical order and
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everyday for like the first week we would sit on top of our desk and play the name and
catch game (Rules: one student/person starts off with a ball and would throw it to
someone else in the room. However, you could not throw it to them before saying their
full name). Sooner or later we stopped playing the game and then we would all sit down
and she would talk to us about the importance of reading and writing. After her spiel
she pulled out a book and we were getting ready to read this short story called The
Twits byRoald Dahl(till this day he is listed as one of my top five authors). And boy was
he amazing! He made me laugh at his puns, think about his characters dilemmas, and
question the ending or next turn. However the one thing he made me want more than
anything else was more. More books, more stories, more puns and more reading time.
My teacher showed me that there are authors and books that can actually grab my
interest and open my eyes to how influential words can be. And even though I only read
books by Roald Dahl at the time it still made me want to read. Since then all throughout
elementary and sixth grade of middle school I read every book he wrote (at least twice).
I would read and read until I couldnt even hold a book anymore because of my fingers
getting tired or stiff. And almost every time I did this I would see life through each
character, discover new jokes and puns, and in an odd way he would show me how
beautiful life is when you treat people kindly. Mrs. Carland and Roald Dahl not only
affected my literacy but my life as well.
Middle School Meltdown
Middle School. Where every child is trying to find his or herself and where they fit in.
Yet here I am, finding myself nose pressed deep in the middle of a Bible. Dont
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misunderstand me now. I am a believer in God and I do attend church on a regular basis.
However, here I am already stubborn as it is when it comes to reading regular children
books and I have to read the Bible for an hour every homeroom (thanks for the private
school mom and dad). At first I just sat there and looked at the text-filled pages before
me, wondering why I had to be there and go through this. I would count down the time
and make up imaginary games and situations in my head. But sooner or later, I realized
that if I put the book in my lap and my head down it would look as if I was reading while
I was taking a nap. (However, I think the teacher realized one time when my Bible was a
little wet.) I even perfected this skill by flipping the pages every now and then when I
heard footsteps or thought I was being watched. But after the reading and before the
end of homeroom came our Christian pledge of allegiance. We had our right hand on
the Bible and left hand in the air as if we were
about to take the stand or be sworn into
political office. Thank goodness though I only
had to do this routine for one semester before
my family moved to North Carolina. However,
since I have left private schools I have hardly
ever read the Bible. Of course I still attend
church, but being forced to sit in complete silence and read made me hate reading even
more than I did before. And although I did not read, this is easily one of the most
negative impacts on my literacy that I have ever experienced (which still is a sponsor of
literacy in my opinion).
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High School Horror
This is truly where my reading and writing literacy plummeted. No longer was I reading
or writing pieces for creative learning or to pass time. I was being graded on them.
Harshly. And what upsets me the most is that it I was never graded on what I wrote but
HOW I wrote it. My piece could have been breathtakingly beautiful, and given as a
speech at a presidents inauguration. However, none of that meant anything if you had
grammatical errors, run-ons, and you did not indent each paragraph. I never realized
how much this style of grading was actually crippling me until now. I remember I would
be so upset and frustrated with my work because I could never get it to fit my teachers
guidelines that I actually cried once. My teachers would say for the perfect essay I had
to include at least the two or three topics I was going to address in my introduction
paragraph. Each body paragraph had to be focused on one of my topics and I had to
have a life experience, a book reference, and an emotional thought behind every line. I
literally was being graded on what my essay included and not what it said. It frustrated
me that I would write my heart out and hand in this beautiful essay on clean white
paper then receive it back in so much red ink that it looked as if my paper was bleeding
to death. Oh how angry I was! That is not what writing is supposed to be about. Before
high school my writing always came from my actual experiences but it also came from
the heart. Now when I read or write I am in robot mode. I immediately pick my two
topics and make sure my essay looks and replicates the very same ones I have done in
high school out of fear of failing or disappointing the teacher. I not only let my high
school literacy change me but it broke me and tamed me. My writing in high school
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changed from being a wild and beautiful stallion roaming the land to a horse eating hay
out of its owners hand. But now I realize that my writing is nothing to be stressed over.
Of course I still hate reading and writing. However, now I dont feel as if I will fail if I
dont write to my teacher (or professors) standards. After graduating high school I was
excited to not only be done with the teachers, but with their style of essays as well.
Confusin College Cruisin
College so far has been amazing and stressful at times. English is the only class where I
have homework due every week. However, between: working, all-stars, other classes,
and experiments English seems to not receive
as much attention as it should. I am still
nervous about the change in grades in this
class only because I am somewhat in the dark
about what my grades are. But, for once in
my life I feel confidence in my writing. I now
know (at least in this class) that my writing is
not how I am writing but what I am saying. It
feels as if some one took the mute button off of my writing. But, I wonder if that is how
most professors feel of if it is just this class in particular. It is still too early for me to tell
my thoughts or experiences about this life only because I am still getting use to it and
have yet to dive completely in.
Although, I still (and dont think I ever will) do not like reading or writing. I still
have books by authors that I cannot seem to pry from my hands however it still just
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does not interest me. Most of the time when I am writing I do not write my complete
thoughts or even my true emotions because I feel as if my reader is judging me. I think
that this thought comes from my teachers judging or critiquing my writing in school. And
I would have much rather have left out a few words and change my meaning than have
to answer for it when my paper comes back. Teachers dont think aboutthe effects of
their writing. My entire school life I tried to avoid the school side of my literacy by doing
the bare minimum to get an A. I would write bland and generic papers. No emotion, no
Is (which were highly frowned upon if you wrote using Is) and no real personal feelings.
Frighten Future
I can only imagine how writing will be in the future. All of the essays I will have to do,
the bookwork Ill have to read, the late nights Ill have. I am definitely not looking
forward to any of that. However, if writing goes the way that it is now (as far as me
being able to express myself) then I think I will actually enjoy it. I definitely see why
people enjoy writing because it lets me put all of my thoughts on paper in an organized
way. But I still feel my emotional scars burn whenever a teacher brings up reading or
writing. It may take a few more years before I start to truly enjoy it enough to do it on
my own. However, this class is a very big step in the right direction.