ENGLISH 9A

Writing a paper: Introductory paragraphs

Introductory Paragraph

The purposes of an introduction are to:1. Get your readers’ attention2. Inform the reader of your topic and

establish the critical context.3. Declare your thesis statement (your

claim).

Introductory ParagraphMust include:

Attention Getter or HookCritical Context (epic heroes, heroes today, hero

definition).

Title of literary piece (epic poems are underlined or placed in italics) Ex. The Odyssey or The Odyssey

Author’s nameThesisStatement of order (usually attached to

the thesis)

Introductory Paragraph

First sentence = The Attention Getter. A sentence that serves two

purposes:1. Grab the attention of your audience2. Give your audience a clue to what

your paper is about. Make me (your audience) want to

read your paper first!

Introductory Paragraph

Example attention getters:An interesting factA quoteAn anecdote (a short story)A statisticMagic three (list of three

images).A shocking statement

Introductory Paragraph

Thesis Statements have two functions:1. To preview the topic being

discussed 2. To make a claim about that topic.

A thesis must make a claim that is arguable; therefore, it cannot be a fact. If someone cannot disagree, then it is not a thesis.

Example

If this is your assignment:

Choose a character from a work of literature who can be defined as an epic hero and explain how he/she fits this definition. Give at least three examples for support.

Example: Thesis

To create your thesis, rework the question:

In the movie Shrek, Shrek is an epic hero.

This is your thesis!

Introductory Paragraph

Statement of Order: indirectly informs readers what they will find in each of your body paragraphs. It is usually attached at the end of the thesis statement.

In our example assignment, we are asked to give three examples of support for our thesis. These three examples are our statement of order!

Example: Statement of order

What does Shrek do that all epic heroes do?

1. He goes on a quest

2. He fights monsters

3. He never loses his humanity

Example: Statement of Order

Epic heroes come in all shapes, sizes and colors. In the movie Shrek, the lead character fits the definition of an epic hero. Shrek goes on a quest and fights dangerous monsters. Throughout the entire story, he never loses his humanity.

Prompt

Odysseus is known as an epic hero in The Odyssey. Does he deserve this title? Select two qualities and use support from the epic poem to argue your position.