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PrewritingThe prewriting stage involves multiple steps. Each one
will help smooth the way to writing your essay.Decide on a topic or
an angle: If you havent already been assigned a topic, do some
brainstorming and select a topic that not only interests you but is
also rich in information. That way, youll have enough to write
about. On the other hand, if your teacher has assigned a specific
topic, figure out what angle you want to take on the subject. Find
a way to make the topic interesting. Discuss it with people who
might know more about it than you do.Identify your audience and
purpose:
When you select a topic, its important to identify who your target
audience is and what kind of information you want to get across.
Once you know your audience, its easier to figure out the tone or
style that you should use in your writing. For example, the tone
for an essay directed at your classmates would be much different
from the tone used in an essay for the school board. Understanding
your intended audiences background, such as age and level of
education, will also help you choose the kind of information to
include in your essay.In addition to identifying your audience,
think about what you want your essay to accomplish. Are you writing
an essay to convince your audience of something? Or do you want to
inform them about certain issues that are important to you? Your
purpose will determine the type of essay that you write:
persuasive, expository, narrative, or descriptive.Do some research:
After youve figured out your topic and put together your initial
thoughts and ideas, you can start the research process. Begin by
thinking of some questions that will help you focus on significant
points to cover in your essay. These questions can guide your
writing process and help you maintain a flow in your essay. Start
collecting information about your topic to use when you write a
rough draft. You can do some research online, check out books from
your local library, and even enlist the help of someone in your
community who is knowledgeable about your topic.At this stage, you
should also define your thesis statement, the "glue" that holds
your essay together. The thesis statement consists of the topic and
the central idea of your essay. Say, for example, youre writing a
persuasive essay arguing that the novel Gone with the Wind is among
the best literary works of the twentieth century. Your thesis
statement might read Gone with the Wind is one of the best novels
written in the twentiethcentury.Organize your research: Once youve
collected all the necessary information for your essay, your next
step is to organize that information into more manageable pieces.
Notecards are a great tool for this step. Summarize the information
that youve gathered from each source so that you can easily recall
the appropriate details when you start writing the draft of your
essay.Create an outline: Next, create an outline for your essay.
This step helps you plan the general flow of your paper. It doesnt
matter if the ideas in your outline are bullet points, thought
bubbles in a web, or sentence fragments. The outline will give you
an idea of how the information in your essay will be organized.
When you create an outline, you can also create a map that will
help guide the flow of your essay. The map may note how many
paragraphs to include, what type of information to include in these
paragraphs, and which topics will require greater or fewer
details.
DraftingAfter you've finished the prewriting phase, it's time to start writing a draft of your essay. Use the outline that you created and refer to the relevant information you gathered as you write your draft.Your ideas will become clearer and the flow of writing will come to you more easily as you write your draft. Keep in mind that you might need to revisit the prewriting phase to add more information or refine the information youve collected.RevisingOnce youve written your draft, take some time away from your essay. When you come back to it, youll be able to read your writing with a fresh mind.Start by reading your paper aloud. Did you notice any mistakes that you missed earlier? Sometimes hearing the paper spoken aloud, instead of just reading it silently, helps you identify areas that dont sound quite right.Also, pay close attention to the content of your essay. Check the thesis statement and organization. Does your thesis make sense? Will readers be able to easily follow the ideas in your essay and understand how they support the thesis? Does the organization of the paragraphs flow well or do you need to move information around? Have you included enough details to support your thesis statement adequately? Always remember to show readers what you want them to know rather than telling them.You might need to go back to the prewriting stage more than once. Perhaps youll need to find more information, modify the flow, or even tweak your thesis statement.In the revising phase, you should also check carefully for unity and clarity. Does all the information in your essay relate to the main idea or thesis? Are your points clear and concise? Are there ways to cut unnecessary words out of your essay? Have you used a thesaurus to avoid repeating the same words as you explain your ideas? Clarity will help your audience get a better view of your ideas.
EditingThe final stage is to edit your essay. Proofread it for errors in grammar, spelling, capitalization, and formatting. Taking notes on the types of errors you make might help you avoid those mistakes in future writing assignments. Do you often make spelling mistakes? Perhaps you have trouble with subject-verb agreement. Pay attention to your weak areas and proofread for those errors first.Subject and verb agreement: Find the main verb in each sentence and match the verb to its subject. Make sure that the subject and verb agree in number.Pronoun reference and agreement:Skim your essay, stopping at each pronoun. Look especially at it, this, they, their, and them. Search for the noun that the pronoun replaces. If you find a noun, be sure that it agrees in number and person with your pronoun. If you don't find a noun, change the pronoun to a noun for clarity.
Spelling: Examine each word in the essay individually. Move from the end of each line back to the beginning. You could even trace each line with a pencil. Pointing with a pencil helps you really see each word. If necessary, check a dictionary to verify that each word is spelled correctly. Later in the lesson, youll find out more about how to check that the spelling is correct in your writing.Capitalization: Check that all proper nouns are capitalized correctly.Usage Errors: Carefully look over your essay for errors in word usage. Some commonly misused words include to, too, and two; accept instead of except; and effect in place of affect.
Comma splices: As you go through your essay, stop at every comma. Check whether there is a complete sentence on each side of the comma. If so, add a coordinating conjunction after the comma, replace the comma with a semicolon, or break the sentence into two sentences.Fragments: Look at each sentence in your essay to check whether it contains an independent clause. Pay special attention to sentences that begin with dependent marker words, such as because, or phrases such as "for example" or "such as." See if the sentence might be just a piece of the previous sentence that was mistakenly separated by a period, and fix it if thats the case.Run-on sentences: Review each sentence to see whether it contains more than one independent clause. Start with the last sentence of your essay and work your way back to the beginning, sentence by sentence. Break a sentence into two sentences where necessary.When you've finished the editing stage, ask someone, such as a parent, sibling, or friend, to read your essay and check it for mistakes in spelling or grammar and flow issues that make the text unclear. An extra set of eyes can only help improve your draft.
Focus on LanguageYouve seen that its important to edit your
essay to elevate the quality of your writing. Editing includes
checking that the spelling and punctuation are correct in your
writing. Because a misspelled word or incorrectly placed
punctuation mark could alter the meaning of a sentence, editing is
an important step in the writing process.Semicolons
A semicolon links two main clauses in the same sentence without
using a connector such as but or and. A semicolon in the middle of
a sentence makes you pause before reading the rest of the sentence.
Semicolons indicate that the two clauses are connected.Jenny sat
down to eat lunch; her dog begged for morsels of her sandwich.You
can also use a semicolon before a transitional word, such as
however, therefore, or moreover, and before a transitional
expression, such as for example, in addition, or since then.Thomas
plagiarized his term paper; therefore, he will fail the class.
ColonsA colon is used to suggest that a list of items will follow. Here's an example:To make working out a pleasant experience for everyone, please follow the gym rules:Wipe down equipment after each use. Towels are provided in the locker room and at the front desk.
Return weight equipment to its proper place.
Limit use of cardio machines to 30 minutes.
Keep gym bags and belongings in the lockers provided. Personal belongings should not be left on the floor or on top of a piece of equipment.
The items in a list do not need to be formatted vertically. A colon is also to introduce a list in a sentence.Randy told Mandy that these items are must-haves for a road trip: a roadmap, a camera, travel games, bottled water, and snacks.A colon is also used after a salutation in a business letter or other formal communication. Here are some examples:Dear Mrs. Raleigh:
Dear Speaker of the House:
Dear Jack:
Never use a semicolon after a salutation. In personal letters, use a comma after the salutation. Youll learn more about how to use semicolons and colons in the video on the next screen.
SpellingIn text messaging and online chat, written conversation sometimes uses abbreviations such as B4 (for before), bcoz (for because), and so on. This way of writing can affect your ability to spell correctly. Thats why, when youre writing essays and completing assignments for school, you should be extra careful to check your spelling. Its always helpful to keep a dictionary handy (an online one or an actual physical dictionary) or download an app on your phone that can help you easily check your spelling.Here are some other steps you can take to improve your spelling skills:Whenever you come across a new word, try to analyze it. Find out its meaning, examine the spelling, and see if you know any of its word parts.
Say the word audibly and distinctly. Check whether the pronunciation matches the way that the word is spelled. Some words that have foreign roots may not be spelled the way that you would expect from their pronunciation. Also, make note of any silent letters or doubled letters.
Spell the word out loud and write it down on a sheet of paper. Make sure you write the word correctly.
Take a new piece of paper and write down the same word without looking at the correct spelling. Check whether you got it right. If not, try again.