Double Page Spread Development

• The title doesn’t stand out as much as the quote, should really be the other way around.

• Its well balanced with the big picture and the small pictures down the side balance by the writing in the top third.

• The three columns aren’t perfectly lined up they need to be level top and bottom.

• Quote on the picture page doesn’t stand out enough, the bold lines do make it more noticeable but it blends into the background, needs to jump forward.

• The bottom photo booth image is the same as the one used on the contents page I might change it to a different one.

• The direction of the shadow behind the photos needs to be more to the left so it stand off the page more.

• I changed the title to a lighter colour with a dark outline I think this makes it jump forward more .

• Using the same colours for the quote in the right hand corner of the image page has helped lift it from the image and can now more easily be seen.

• The three columns no line up perfectly giving it a professional finish. Having the questions in bold also makes it look professional.

• I changed the order of the photos to balance to out top: looking right middle: more central and bottom: looking left. Also by changing the direction of the drop shadow the strip of photos stand out from the white background making it more noticeable.