descriptive / narrative essay
TRANSCRIPT
Pre Writing
- Metallic and shining
- Might be metallic but is light
- Has hit me with nostalgia as it has been with me for a long period of time
- Is cold as it is a heat conductor and is not conducted with heat at the
moment
- Has a clinging sound due to metallic rings
- Is slightly worn out but it is still something I treasure a lot.
The Essential Container
My day has been long and I’m tired. I sit on this four-legged tool we call the
chair and stare blankly on my table plastered or should I say “decorated” with
things. They were things that I need, and things that I want and have wanted. My
eyes were scanning through the things I have, one by one. They were objects. But
I’ve had bonds with them. They were not living things, but they were there to aid
me. They were created for a reason, as we human beings have been created for a
purpose. They functioned as my very own helpers. Each and every one of them.
And then – something caught my attention. A hit of nostalgia slapped my face.
How could an object, just one object give me this feeling? There it was, standing
slanted and proud, like the leaning tower of pizza. Cylindrical but scarred with
dents. Its imperfections made it perfect in its own charm. My hands reached out
to it. Cling, cling cling you could hear the key chain rings greeting each other as I
gently swerve it left and right. And at the same time, you could hear the sound of
water.
Oh, how many times have I filled this object up with water – to contain
something so essential to my life. My bottle. This surprisingly light metallic
container, together with a plastic-rubbery cap, decorated with two keychain
rings has been there for me and is always with me in university and slightly
before that. I know that all bottles have the same function, but this particular
one has been with me too often to the point where my peers recognize them.
This object has been a part of me. It has been one of my characteristics.
Flashback intertwined memories, I remember the first time I saw it. It was
just there, standing solid on the shelf. Its silvery metallic, stainless steal body was
shining bright and proud, like a prince in his armor. Strong, and anti-rust too.
Whenever it fell to the ground, you could her it “clinging” in pain, forming dents
around its body. But still, strong enough to preserve – not forming and cracks or
holes.
I grip its body with my left hand, smooth and cold. Material made by a heat
conductor – which makes its body cold when filled with cold water and hot when
filled with hot water. But luckily, the water is cold this time. I then place my right
hand on the holes of the lid and twist it open, forming a squeaky sound made by
friction between the rubber from the cap and the metallic mouth. The bottle is
opened, forming this hollow vacuum, filled with calm waters ready for me to
partake.
I then close the lid. And turn my bottle in circles. Its body is silver but blurred.
Not clear like mirrors. It was probably created in this way to prevent the sight of
obvious scratches and what not. But it reflects beautiful vague patterns when
lights hit it. I perceive an art piece whenever that happens.
This bottle of mine has been with me for the past year everywhere and
everyday. Yes it has dents, and yes it leaks at times in my bag (which frustrates
me) and yes it looks old and worn out. But it has become a part of me
unknowingly. Writing this essay has hit me with realization that this bottle has
been a part of my life. Containing one of the very most essential things for human
beings to survive.