description o a person
TRANSCRIPT
Writing 2
DESCRIPTION of a PERSON
INDEX
1. BRAINSTORM
2. PLAN
3. WRITE
4. REVISE
1. BRAINSTORMLook for new words in the dictionary!
PHYSICAL APPEARANCE:
Eyes: shape, colour...
Hair: lenght, colour, shape, style...
Build
Height
Weight
Skin
(...)
PERSONALITY:Positive aspects:
generous, open-minded...
Negative aspects: impatient, moody...
2. PLANINTRODUCTION -paragraph 1- WHO / WHY●
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CORE -paragraphs 2, 3, 4- PHYSICAL APPEARANCE - PERSONALITY
Paragraph 2 (face)●
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Paragraph 3 (body)●
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Paragraph 4 (personality)●
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CONCLUSION -paragraph 5- OPINION – IMPORTANCE●
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3. WRITEDecide the main VERB TENSE of the composition.
Make a list of the LINKING WORDS for each paragraph.
INTRODUCTION
PARAGRAPH 1
Say who you are going to talk about.
In this composition I am going to talk about my best friend...
Explain why you chose that person.
I chose this person because he/she has been a very important person in my life...
3. WRITECORE (PARAGRAPHS 2, 3, 4)
Physical appearance
PARAGRAPH 2: face
My friend has a round face. She has got big bue eyes and thick lips.
PARAGRAPH 3: body
Núria is not very tall. She is about my height. In fact, I think she is more or less 1m 55 cm …
Personality and interests
PARAGRAPH 4 (give examples).
She loves music and theatre. She is a very intellectual person. She started playing the piano when she was a child.
3. WRITE
CONCLUSION (PARAGRAPH 5)
Give your opinion:
- give a balance of positive and negative aspects.
All in all I can say Nuria is a very sensitive person and very generous.
On the other hand, she is sometimes a bit impatient and doesn't listen to you for a long time.
- explain why is that person impor-tant to you.
Nevertheless, I really love her as a sister. In difficult times she has always been close to me.
4. REVISE
1. Grammar: Verb tenses.
Subject + Verb + Object
2. Structure:
One idea per paragraph
Linking words
3. Vocabulary:
Choice of words
3. Spelling
4. Presentation