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Name: Andress Cape Cod Beaches The Cape has a lot of beaches. One of them is the Atlantic beach. You taste salt water and smell salty air. You hear splashes of water off rocks. You see fish and gulls. It’s cool to be around Cape Cod.

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My first graders chose a nature photograph and wrote a descriptive piece using their senses to describe the picture.

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Page 1: Describing Nature

Name: Andress Cape Cod Beaches

The Cape has a lot of beaches. One of them is the Atlantic beach. You taste salt water and smell salty air. You hear splashes of water off rocks. You see fish and gulls. It’s cool to be around Cape Cod.

Page 2: Describing Nature

Name: Bella Very Big Snowy Volcano

I think volcanoes are very cool. It is very big and it is covered in snow. It is still beautiful. It makes big noises when it starts to erupt.

Page 3: Describing Nature

Name: Carissa Sliding Waterfall

Waterfalls are beautiful. I like watching rapids going down the river. Rapids are loud. The water is wet and the mud is dirty. I smell the fresh mud. Waterfalls are a great place for a picnic.

Page 4: Describing Nature

Name: Colin A Pond Full of Lily Pads

Ponds are cool. Lily pads are slimy. There are frogs on lily pads. I hear them croaking. I see the fish jumping in the water.

Page 5: Describing Nature

Name: Halle A Beautiful Waterfall

Waterfalls are so pretty. I swim in waterfalls. It feels cold. My dad takes me to them. You might see animals there. You can climb rocks.

Page 6: Describing Nature

Name: Jillian The Ocean

I like the ocean! I see palm trees by the shore. I hear water splashing on the rocks. I taste salty water. It tastes gross! I love the beach! The water cools me down!

Page 7: Describing Nature

Name: Joe Lake Sunset and Snow

Sunsets look cool. When the sunset starts it gets chilly. No animals drink the water at night. The coyotes trudge through the snow. The pine trees smell good. I heard water rustling through the brook.

Page 8: Describing Nature

Name: Rorie Beautiful Waterfall at Sunset

When I go to a waterfall, I hear the swish, swish of the water hitting the rocks. I hear the buzz, buzz of dragonfly wings. I see colors in the sky. It looks like a rainbow. I feel the speeding water when I sit under a waterfall. Waterfalls are pretty!

Page 9: Describing Nature

Name: Katie Artic Fox

I love foxes they’re so cute. I bet they’re so cold up there with no parents. He’s hungry because he has no food. The moon is going down I think it is hideout up there so predators can’t find him.

Page 10: Describing Nature

Name: Kelsea The Ocean

The ocean is great. I think the waves swishing over the rocks are soothing. When the waves get bigger and bigger, I get scared. When I sit in the sand, it feels crinkly. The water does not taste good. I love the ocean!

Page 11: Describing Nature

Name: Molly Beautiful Waterfall

I love the beautiful waterfall. The water makes a shshshsh noise. It is warm. I see water pouring over rocks and sticks. I like to watch the waterfall.

Page 12: Describing Nature

Name: Nate The big ocean

The ocean is awesome. I hear big waves crashing on the sand. The sunset is cool. There are a lot of ocean animals. I can see the cool ocean.

Page 13: Describing Nature

Name: Morgan Starfish on a Rocks

Starfish are cool. Starfish can have five or more legs. If it loses a leg, it will grow back. Starfish have bumpy skin. Starfish are fun to watch.

Page 14: Describing Nature

Name: Xavier Forest Water

I like water falls. I watch the water pour down. I see water bubbles when it hits the ground. I smell fresh mud. Waterfalls are fun!

Page 15: Describing Nature

Name: Zack Rock Mountains

I am scared of rock mountains. I hear my voice echo and the coyotes are howling. I feel the wind blow.

Page 16: Describing Nature

Name: Noah Spring

In spring I see rain, flowers and apple trees. In spring I smell freshly picked apples, flowers and wet dog, blacgh! In spring I hear birds, my sister celebrating her birthday and my dog whining to come in.

Page 17: Describing Nature

Name: Cody Hot Lava

This is a volcano. Don’t touch this is dangerous! It’s hot lava! So really don’t touch it! The lava sinks in to the rocks.