defining the paragraph: the building block of writing
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DEFINING THE PARAGRAPH:
The Building Block of Writing
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The Importance of a Good Paragraph Paragraph = the building block of writing Work together to make effective essays Without them, our essays would fall
apart.
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What is a paragraph? A paragraph is a
group of sentences sharing and explaining a complete thought.
Sentences should be about the same topic.
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What does a good paragraph look like? Debatable Good rule: 6 to 12 sentences Remember, the sentences should be
related.
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The Sandwich Analogy
The Casual Paragraph The Academic Paragraph
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The Parts of a Paragraph
The Topic Sentence
The Concluding
Sentence
The Transitions
The Body Sentences
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The Topic Sentence
Important Usually one sentence Contains the topic and main idea Controls the content of the rest of the
paragraph
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The Body Sentences
The Majority of your Paragraph At least 4 sentences Share the Main Ideas Give Details
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The Transitions
The Glue Makes sentences flow Keeps the paragraph from sounding
robotic
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The Concluding Sentence Completes the thought Finishes the paragraph Answers “So What?”
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Common Mistakes
Road Signs“I am going to be explaining _________”“So now you can see _________”“This is the part where I explain
__________” Forgetting to conclude Repeating
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Checklist Plan ahead Narrow your topic Brainstorm Cut the fat Finalize topic
sentence Answer “So What?” Edit and Proofread
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Your turn!
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ReferencesBucking Bull, & Flickr (n.d.). Bucking Bull Works Burger [Photograph]. Retrieved June 10, 2013 from http://www.flickr.com/photos/buckingbull/3386325673/sizes/s/in/photostream/
Cl_03, & Flickr (n.d.). Ham and Cheese Sandwich [Photograph]. Retrieved June 10, 2013 from http://www.flickr.com/photos/cl_03/8538204017/sizes/s/in/photostream/
Davidson, S., & Flickr (n.d.). Condiments [Photograph]. Retrieved June 10, 2013 from http://www.flickr.com/photos/susannedavidson/7111286157/sizes/s/in/photostream/
Donna62, & Flickr (n.d.). Replica of First Brick House West of Rocky Mountains [Photograph]. Retrieved June 10, 2013 from http://www.flickr.com/photos/disneyite/2748573870/sizes/s/in/photostream/
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Irinakostyuk1, & Flickr (n.d.). Checklist [Photograph]. Retrieved June 10, 2013 from http://www.flickr.com/photos/30358826@N03/5026729965/sizes/s/in/photostream/
JasperYue, & Flickr (n.d.). Gift Bow [Photograph]. Retrieved June 10, 2013 from http://www.flickr.com/photos/jasperyue/1961590799/sizes/s/in/photostream/
Jjpacres, & Flickr (n.d.). Writing [Photograph]. Retrieved June 10, 2013 from http://www.flickr.com/photos/jjpacres/3293117576/sizes/s/in/photostream/
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S., I., & Flickr (n.d.). Curious Robot [Photograph]. Retrieved June 10, 2013 from http://www.flickr.com/photos/81657830@N05/7489691810/sizes/s/in/photostream/
Williamfehrphoto, & Flickr (n.d.). Burger Patty [Photograph]. Retrieved June 10, 2013 from http://www.flickr.com/photos/williamfehrphotography/8881730906/sizes/s/in/photostream/
Williamfehrphoto, & Flickr (n.d.). Isolated Hamburger Bun [Photograph]. Retrieved June 10, 2013 from http://www.flickr.com/photos/williamfehrphotography/8881226389/sizes/s/in/photostream/