DAY 5

Edit and display instructions

Sequence of writing: Instructions x 2 weeks

Immersion

Analyse instructions

Writing skills

Plan instructions

Write instructions

Edit and present instructions for display

Today you will edit and present your instructions

• Yesterday you wrote your instructions.

• Today you will edit these and add pictures so they can be displayed in class at school.

• When you have finished editing, please send a final photo so I can print and share with the whole class.

Edit

Check you have included the following genre features:

• Main title

• Opening paragraph

• List of equipment using bullet points

• Method using numbered steps in chronological order (the order you do them)

Edit

Check you have included the following writing features:

• Prepositions

• Adjectives to expand nouns

• Imperative (bossy) verbs

• Time adverbials

• Place and how adverbials at the front and end of sentences

Edit

The box below shows you which writing skills each group needs to focus on.

Take a photo

• Take a photo of your final instruction and send them to me. I will print these and put them on display in the classroom.

• I can’t wait to see them!