dangling modifiers 404 simon and schuster. a dangling what! a dangling modifier describes or limits...
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Dangling Modifiers404
Simon and Schuster
A Dangling WHAT!
• A dangling modifier describes or limits a word or words that never actually appear in the sentence.
• Aware of the intended meaning, the writer unconsciously supplies the missing words, but the reader gets confused.
• To correct a dangling modifier, clearly state the intended SUBJECT in the sentence.
Examples
• Having read Faulkner’s short story “A Rose for Emily,” the ending surprised us.
• Having read Faulkner’s short story “A Rose for Emily” we were surprised by the ending.
• We read Faulkner’s short story “A Rose for Emily” and were surprised by the ending.
• When courting Emily, the townspeople gossiped about her.
• When Emily was being courted by Homer Barron, the townspeople gossiped about her.
States the ending was reading the story….
Includes the subject we….
Includes the subject we …
Are the townspeople courting Emily?
The person doing the courting …
The Major cause …
• To earn money, china painting lessons were offered by Emily to wealthy young women.
• To earn money, Emily offered china painting lessons to wealthy young women.
• To understand what happened to Krakatoa, the volcano and its history must be studied.
• To understand what happened to Krakatoa, one must study the volcano and its history.
China painting cannot earn money
Active Voice – Emily offered corrects the problem.