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Page 1: Correction of Time- FIRST SCENE

Correction of Time

By

Paris Noonan

ParisN

Page 2: Correction of Time- FIRST SCENE

EXT.FLASHBACK- THE TRAIN CRASH. EVERYTHING HAS A SOFT AND/OR

SLIGHTLY BLURRY FILTER TO IT. ALL IN THE POV OF TRISTA.

MARIE AND TRISTA ARE WALKING ALONG THE STREET.

SIDE SHOT OF MARIE

MARIE:

I’m thinking of getting a tattoo

TRISTA:

(off screen)

How? You’re such a wimp! You get

scared just crossing the train

tracks, even though the cross-gates

are up!

MARIE:

I’m just sensible! I am NOT a wimp!

TRISTA:

Prove it then! Stand on the tracks!

MARIE:

I don’t a have a death wish!

TRISTA:

When the gates are UP, you idiot!

MARIE:

(rolls eyes)

FINE! The things I’ll got to to

impress you!

TRISTA:

Aww, you know I love you really!

CUTS TO POV MID/LONG SHOT OF MARIE STANDING ON TRAIN

CROSSING

MARIE:

Here I am: standing her like an

idiot, for YOU!

TRISTA:

Yeah but you’re MY idiot, Marie!

MARIE:

I sure am!

(Throws arms out wide)

Cause I love you, Trista Smith!

Even if you can be a bitch

sometimes-

Page 3: Correction of Time- FIRST SCENE

2.

SCREEN TURNS BLURRY AND SHAKY, AS THE SOUND OF SCREECHING

AND SCREAMING STARTS OFF QUITE; THE SHOT STARTS TO FADE TO

BLACK AS THE SCREECHING GETS LOUDER. THE SCREEN IS NOW

COMPLETELY BLACK; SUDDENLY MARIE APPEARS IN A CLOSEUP

COVERED IN BLOOD. THE SCREECHING AND SCREAMING IS STILL

GOING.

MARIE:

It’s your fault, why didn’t you

save me, Trista?

INT. TRISTA’S BEDROOM. TRISTA IS HAVING A NIGHTMARE IN BED.