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Create Strong Verbs (5)

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1 Original

Traditionally, to guarantee the quality of LED, the packagingfactory is used to relying on human inspectors. LEDs producediversity type of defects containing surface stains, wrongcoating, foreign marks and contour defects in the

manufacturing process, while it will destroy the wholepackaging ribbon if anyone is wrong polar orientation or overturn in the packaging process.

RevisedIn practice, ensuring LED quality necessitates that thepackaging factory depends on human inspectors. LEDsproduce diverse defects involving surface stains, wrongcoatings, foreign marks and contour defects duringmanufacturing, subsequently destroying the entire packagingribbon in case of an erroneous polar orientation or a turnoverduring the packaging process.


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2 Original

As supply chain of LED manufacturers face competitionfrom raw wafers to packaging, a greater emphasis forpackaging factory is being placed on responsiveness todownstream vendors.

RevisedAs the supply chain of LED manufacturers competeswith producers of raw wafers to packaging, packagingfactories must increasingly respond to downstreamvendors.


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3 Original

Results of this study provide a demonstration inmanufacturing cost reduction by using of early-warning modelfor the power failure crisis, get further with providing moreaccurate reliability specifications for higher products reliability,

to effectively solve the problems of product quality surplusand parts inventory excess.

RevisedResults of this study demonstrate the effectiveness of theproposed early-warning model in reducing manufacturingcosts during a power failure crisis, subsequently achievingaccurate reliability specifications to enhance enhancedproduct reliability and resolve problems involving a surplus inproduct quality and excess of parts inventory.


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4 Original

Although merger is one of the strategies for the companywhich is goingto expand, the long term result can havefar reaching influence like R&D capability enhancementor destruction. The merger can also help or harm the

whole industry, and even the general public, because ofthe close relation between drugs and public health.

RevisedAlthough a merger represents an effective strategy forcompany expansion, the long term outcome can eitherenhance or inhibit R&D capabilities of the entire industry,as well as the general public since pharmaceuticals andpublic health are closely related.


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5 Original

To foster its competitiveness, cosmetic companies mustput more funds and manpower to study the productswhich have better qualities, extractive ingredients, noside effect and exquisite package.

RevisedFostering market competitiveness depends on the abilityof cosmetic companies to more heavily invest capital andpersonnel in exploring the use of products with addedbenefits, extractive ingredients, no adverse impacts and

exquisite packaging.


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6 Original

However, when traditional technologies were transferredinto new tools, some of the process and tools weredifferent than traditional one. Therefore, it would inducedelectrical test couldnt on target, lower yield and even

couldnt sensor RGB three colors.

RevisedHowever, incorporating conventional technologies intonew tools makes it infeasible to reach targeted goals forelectrical testing and achieve a satisfactory wafer yield

and sensor with respect to the three colors of RGBowing to differences in processes and tools.


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7 Original

There are two kinds of processes to handle the batchscheduling problem. One is doing the batching strategyfirst and deciding the sequence of the batch next. Theother is determining the sequence of jobs first and

batching the sequence next.

RevisedThe batch scheduling problem can be solved either byimplementing the batching strategy and then determiningthe batch sequence or determining the sequence of jobs

and then batching the sequence.


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8 Original

There are two directions needed to do in future research.One is testing the more simulation scenarios for mediumand large jobs to ensure the stable ability of this ILS

algorithm. Next is to compare some of the more methodsto demonstrate the effectiveness of this ILS algorithm.

RevisedTwo areas of research warrant future study: furthersimulating medium- and large-sized jobs to ensure thestability of the proposed ILS algorithm and comparingadditional methods to demonstrate the effectiveness ofthe proposed ILS algorithm.


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