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Norey Anne Arenas
Leah Kaminski
Writing 39C
May 22, 2014
Women’s Venture for Breakthrough
When a 23-year-old woman became the victim of a fatal gang rape on December
16, 2012, in India, the nation was shaken and has since been actively reminded of the
frequent violence that occurs against women (Bagchi). The acknowledgement of the
mistreatment and disrespect towards women of India by men has been increasing,
especially with the great numbers that have been reported regarding such abuse. Even in
the past, the numbers regarding mistreatment against women has been large, and has only
been increasing throughout the years. Since the year 1952 through 2011, the crime rate of
rape rose 873% in India and was the fastest crime that increased compared to other
crimes (Bagchi). Women in India have consistently been treated badly by the men in
various and horrendous ways; one of which can be considered the most prevalent – sex
trafficking. According to some sex trafficking victims in Mumbai, India, approximately
half of the victims reported that their vulnerability to trafficking was due to familial
disruption as well as physical or sexual violence between the families. 15 percent of the
perpetrators were their husbands and 27.8 percent were other family members; 13.6
percent of the married victims were also victimized by their own spouses (Silverman).
Through these numbers, it is clear that the majority of the perpetrators are men; the lack
of respect that these men have towards women only intensify the crime rates and the
numbers of violence against women.
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Men have actually not always mistreated Indian women; in fact, some of them
were given the status of goddess and were worshipped. This was the case in the ancient
times, when Aryans were the main inhabitant of India – the women of ancient times held
great power, even compared to the men. They actually had a say in every aspect that
related to their lives and were not confined to domestic work. Inequality eventually
developed, though, with the Vedic era; these women were stripped of their basic rights
and freedom that they once had. There was a similar predicament to the women in the
medieval era as the status of women declined; the foreign conquerors that they frequently
confronted would invade their country and brought along their own culture. The
treatment of women as property of men was practiced by these foreign conquerors and
ultimately carried on to the minds of the Indian people (Tewari). New and evil practices
were produced as women were cumulatively devalued and stripped of their status. Since
then, men have been raised to respect higher authorities such as elders and worship
goddesses, but not to females they encounter in real
life (Bagchi). This leniency that they are raised with
may remain, and this gives them the belief that they
could do anything they wish that will please them,
even if it requires violence or force.
With such great numbers of crime rates reported
against women starting from the beginning, it’s
questionable as to why it has been increasing rather
than decreasing as time progressed. There have been
some various attempts to seek restore and decrease the
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numbers of violent crime rates by the Indian government; the Indian Penal Code lists
some cases and punishments that a persecutor is liable to be charged for – some of which
that can help protect women and seek justice from some instances of violence from men
(Indian Penal Code). The majority of the violent crimes practiced against women were
not included in this document such as offenses that relate to trafficking, thus many
women were still liable to mistreatment and abuse. India’s legislation did not recognize
many of the various crimes that are committed against women; “…antiquated Indian laws
only currently acknowledge three crimes against women: rape, using force to ‘outrage her
modesty’, and making rude sounds or gestures aimed at ‘insulting the modesty of any
woman’” (Baker). The little and ineffective actions taken by the Indian government
called for some type of drastic reform, especially considering the crime rates that are
continuously high numbers.
In 1986, the Suppression of Immoral Traffic in Women and Girls Act was
amended and changed to the Immoral Traffic Prevention Act. This act “…only discusses
trafficking in relation to prostitution and not in relation to other purposes of trafficking
such as domestic work, child labour, organ harvesting…” (Child Line India). This
attempt to prevent trafficking amongst India does not even recognize trafficking as a
specific or separate crime; rather, it is addressed as a prostitution-related activity. Thus, it
is hardly an anti-trafficking law, since it does not even truly define trafficking as it really
is. As a prevention act, it is questionable whether or not it accurately adopts a preventive
approach to trafficking; the act focuses more on criminalization and punishment instead
of preventive measures to warn about the dangers of prostitution and trafficking.
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After another horrific incident regarding gang rape in India occurred and stirred
up great controversy, the United Nations Entity for Gender Equality and the
Empowerment of Women “…[urged] that political will must translate into concrete
action and stronger implementation of already existing laws and regulations”
(Stenhammer). The suggestion of amendments to the Indian Penal Code was brought up
because of this as well as public protests. A new law was then created by India’s
Parliament in response and “…provides for the death penalty for repeat offenders or for
rape attacks that lead to the victim’s death” as well as “…[making] it a crime for police
officers to refuse to open cases when they receive complaints of sexual attacks” (Gates).
This new reform also targeted trafficking, for part of the amendment includes “…
[criminalizing] anyone who recruits, transports, harbors, transfers, or receives a person
using certain means for purposes of exploitation” (Kotiswaran). Unlike the previous
section that barely covers the definition of trafficking, the new definition is much more
specific and criminalizes perpetrators who practice such exploitation. These new sexual
assault laws sound very hopeful, but there are actually many who have criticized the new
legislation. A special three-member committee known as the J.S. Verma Committee
recommended changed to the legislation, yet the new measures failed to include some of
them, especially of the issues regarding marital rape and sexual assaults committed by
parliamentarians (Khalsa & Khambatta). Nonetheless, the new reforms of sexual assault
laws are an improvement for the country, but the most critical issue is making sure they
are implemented.
As a poor, developing country, the efforts that India’s government has been
making is a good start, though the impact would not be as successful as they intended.
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These laws are only methods of combating violence and punishing perpetrators that have
already committed the crime; they do not address the root cause of the violence and
trafficking. Although it may prevent some criminals from performing large-scale crimes,
it does not do so for forms of abuse that can be easily hidden from the public eye. It is
possible that some men may even find it exciting to be able to go against the law without
getting caught; the feeling of possibly being able to do so might only increase the will for
the crimes to continue. It is difficult for laws, such as ones aforementioned, to be
implemented especially if the offenders are able to conceal their forms of abuse and
crime. Men will merely continue to act in their usual violent ways against women as long
as they don’t believe that what they commit is truly a crime. A simple reform in
legislation will not be capable of creating a huge impact on the crime rates against
women, especially if it’s a crucial problem that unsurprisingly occurs frequently.
Legislation is undoubtedly an important aspect when it comes to regulating and
enforcing certain rules, but it is unable to be effectively preventive as some classify it to
be. Lakshmi Chaudhry blames “[the] ugly and entirely abnormal state of affairs” as “the
most visible symptom of a society without the rule of law” when referring to how India’s
culture finds sexual harassment so routine yet rape as crime, though it is quite
irresponsible to blame cultural issues on the absence of laws (Chaudhry). Laws certainly
can act to implement punishments and discourage some criminals from committing
certain crimes, and this can be found helpful in decreasing crime rates of a country.
Cultural ideas and methods aren’t derived from legislation, though; there is only a small
correlation between the two, thus it is difficult to mold and reform such traditional ideas
by laws. Most of these acts of legislation would not have a significant effect on the
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committed crimes – like the legislative actions aforementioned, there is hardly a
difference and the intent of the actions is not usually met. A large-scale problem such as
violence against women will not be solved solely on legislative methods; the solution
would involve deeper and more socially involved methods that would develop cultural
ideas to more acceptable concepts.
The perception of women should be changed – rather than being seen as property
or someone of the lowest status, they should be recognized and treated with respect.
Doing so is difficult, as this would require having to refine the understanding of the
whole society regarding something that has been socially acceptable for countless years.
A nationwide campaign may be able to impact most of the country’s society, especially if
its family and community leaders would guide it. The parents of families as well as
teachers and mentors may be crucial in guiding and educating society against any forms
of violence towards women. According to advocate Mihira Sood, “[we] must educate
people, starting at the school level, about respect for women, for personal spaces and for
the rule of law” as well as reflect on how each of us “…contribute to the objectification
of women, from the popular culture we consume to the way we bring up our children…”
(Bureau). Legislation can only do so much to prevent or decrease criminal activity in the
country, but “[we] cannot legislate good behavior, as the saying goes, we have to build its
DNA – in schools, in homes, in public spaces, in our media – that must begin by refusing,
unlearning and denying this entitlement and the violence it takes to live it as the only way
to be ‘men’” (Bureau).
In order to focus on the root problem of India’s culture that discriminates against
women, there needs to be grand campaigns in order to reach a solution. The Equal
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Community Foundation is not necessarily a large-scale organization, however it provides
a great starting example for similar measures that larger organizations or communities
can take. They have a clear objective that focuses on the culture and society of India: “…
to ensure that every man in India has the opportunity to study and practice gender
equitable behavior to end violence and discrimination against women.” They plan to do
this by “…inspiring and informing a new generation of social programming that raises
men to end violence and discrimination against women” by “…developing behavior
change programs that empower men, researching and reporting on the approach in India,
and developing a popular movement supporting the approach” (Equal Community
Foundation). By reaching these various goals, there will surely be a change in how men
perceive women since this program focuses on the problem and is able to prevent the root
cause that accumulates to the horrid violence that occurs against women. Having the
mindset that “…all men need to be a part of the solution” allows for the most opportunity
of help and support to be available – the class and social standing is not of importance in
this case, but, rather, it calls for all to be active and supportive (Equal Community
Foundation). If this program expands and is noticed by a sufficient amount of people, the
awareness will allow for it to continue and grow whilst also influencing culture in the
country. This will create a domino effect where men will begin to “…reduce their own
violent and discriminating behavior, advocate an end to end violence… and take personal
and collective action to empower women in their lives and communities” (Equal
Community Foundation). As long as the men in the smaller communities promote this
kind of campaign, there will eventually be a great impact even in the large communities.
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