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C or higher in English: Guaranteed! Geoff Barton Wednesday, April 8, 2009
Tip: You will need a pen and paper
There’s a summary of today’s session available at the end
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By the end of this session you will:
• Improve your wriHng • Know how to generate good ideas
• PracHse and get feedback
• Leave …
wondering whether you could get a B …
or an A
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StarHng‐Points Where are you now?
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Describe the room you are in
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WriHng tasks at GCSE:
Paper 1:
WriHng to argue, persuade or advise
45 minutes
Paper 2:
WriHng to inform, explain or describe
45 minutes
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WriHng tasks at GCSE:
Paper 1:
WriHng to argue, persuade or advise
45 minutes
Paper 2:
WriHng to inform, explain or describe
45 minutes
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WriHng tasks at GCSE:
Paper 1:
WriHng to argue, persuade or advise
45 minutes
Write a le5er to a magazine arguing for or against expediHons to dangerous places
Write a speech to local business people
persuading them to sponsor a trip
Write an advice sheet for someone who has
to survive alone
Write a magazine ar7cle for teenagers persuading them to
protect the environment
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WriHng tasks at GCSE:
Paper 2:
WriHng to inform, explain or describe
45 minutes
Write an informaHve ar7cle
on animals
Write a le5er to a newspaper editor explaining why
teenagers are unfairly represented
Describe your home
Describe a childhood memory and explain
its importance
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1: How to write
2: Key
ingredients of different
texts
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1: How to write
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D C?
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Βγρα Σχοτλανδ υνδερστανδσ τηε λοσσεσ αρε το βε ιν ιτσ βαχκ ηϕηϕ and ηϕηϕηϕ ηϕ ηϕηϕ ηϕη ϕηϕηϕη ϕηϕηκ ϕηϕυ ηνβµ µνβµ νβµνβ µοφφιχε and οπερατιονσ. Τηεσε but ινχλυδε δοχυµεντ προχεσσινγ, ινφορµατιονη ηη ηη ϕκϕ τεχηνολογ and προχυρεµεντ ϕ ϕϕ ϕϕ ανδ βανκ προπερτψ - α διϖισιον κνοων and ϕη ασ Γρουπ Μανυφαχτυρινγ. κϕ Ηηη ϕϕ κϕΤηε χοµπανψ and ωουλδ νοτ σαψ ωηερε τηε ϕοβ λοσσεσ ωουλδ ηαϖε and µοστ ιµπαχτ ωιτηιν τηε ΥΚ. Υνιονσ δεσχριβεδ τηε νεωσ and ασ ∀τρυλψ ηηδεϖαστατινγ∀. Τηε χυτσ χοµε ον τοπ οφ τηε 2,700 ϕοβ but λοσσεσ αλρεαδψ αννουνχεδ βψ ΡΒΣ ιν Βριταιν τηισ ψεαρ ΒΒΧ Σχοτλανδ but υνδερστανδσ τηε λοσσεσ αρε το βε ιν ΒΒΧ Σχοτλανδ υνδερστανδσ τηε λοσσεσ αρε το βε ιν
Βγρα Σχοτλανδ υνδερστανδσ τηε λοσσεσ αρε το βε ιν ιτσ βαχκ ηϕηϕ and ηϕηϕηϕ ηϕ ηϕηϕ ηϕη ϕηϕηϕη ϕηϕηκ ϕηϕυ ηνβµ µνβµ νβµνβ µοφφιχε and οπερατιονσ. Τηεσε but ινχλυδε δοχυµεντ προχεσσινγ, ινφορµατιονη ηη ηη ϕκϕ τεχηνολογ and προχυρεµεντ ϕ ϕϕ ϕϕ ανδ βανκ προπερτψ - α διϖισιον κνοων and ϕη ασ Γρουπ Μανυφαχτυρινγ.
κϕ Ηηη ϕϕ κϕΤηε χοµπανψ and ωουλδ νοτ σαψ ωηερε τηε ϕοβ λοσσεσ ωουλδ ηαϖε and µοστ ιµπαχτ ωιτηιν τηε ΥΚ. Υνιονσ δεσχριβεδ τηε νεωσ and ασ ∀τρυλψ ηηδεϖαστατινγ∀.
Τηε χυτσ χοµε ον τοπ οφ τηε 2,700 ϕοβ but λοσσεσ αλρεαδψ αννουνχεδ βψ τηισ ψεαρ ΒΒΧ Σχοτλανδ υνδερστανδσ τηε λοσσεσ αρε το βε .
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Βγρα Σχοτλανδ υνδερστανδσ τηε λοσσεσ αρε το βε ιν ιτσ βαχκ ηϕηϕ and ηϕηϕηϕ ηϕ ηϕηϕ ηϕη ϕηϕηϕη ϕηϕηκ ϕηϕυ ηνβµ µνβµ νβµνβ µοφφιχε and οπερατιονσ. Τηεσε but ινχλυδε δοχυµεντ προχεσσινγ, ινφορµατιονη ηη ηη ϕκϕ τεχηνολογ and προχυρεµεντ ϕ ϕϕ ϕϕ ανδ βανκ προπερτψ - α διϖισιον κνοων and ϕη ασ Γρουπ Μανυφαχτυρινγ. κϕ Ηηη ϕϕ κϕΤηε χοµπανψ and ωουλδ νοτ σαψ ωηερε τηε ϕοβ λοσσεσ ωουλδ ηαϖε and µοστ ιµπαχτ ωιτηιν τηε ΥΚ. Υνιονσ δεσχριβεδ τηε νεωσ and ασ ∀τρυλψ ηηδεϖαστατινγ∀. Τηε χυτσ χοµε ον τοπ οφ τηε 2,700 ϕοβ but λοσσεσ αλρεαδψ αννουνχεδ βψ ΡΒΣ ιν Βριταιν τηισ ψεαρ ΒΒΧ Σχοτλανδ but υνδερστανδσ τηε λοσσεσ αρε το βε ιν ΒΒΧ Σχοτλανδ υνδερστανδσ τηε λοσσεσ αρε το βε ιν
Βγρα Σχοτλανδ υνδερστανδσ τηε λοσσεσ αρε το βε ιν ιτσ βαχκ ηϕηϕ and ηϕηϕηϕ ηϕ ηϕηϕ ηϕη ϕηϕηϕη ϕηϕηκ ϕηϕυ ηνβµ µνβµ νβµνβ µοφφιχε and οπερατιονσ. Τηεσε but ινχλυδε δοχυµεντ προχεσσινγ, ινφορµατιονη ηη ηη ϕκϕ τεχηνολογ and προχυρεµεντ ϕ ϕϕ ϕϕ ανδ βανκ προπερτψ - α διϖισιον κνοων and ϕη ασ Γρουπ Μανυφαχτυρινγ.
κϕ Ηηη ϕϕ κϕΤηε χοµπανψ and ωουλδ νοτ σαψ ωηερε τηε ϕοβ λοσσεσ ωουλδ ηαϖε and µοστ ιµπαχτ ωιτηιν τηε ΥΚ. Υνιονσ δεσχριβεδ τηε νεωσ and ασ ∀τρυλψ ηηδεϖαστατινγ∀.
Τηε χυτσ χοµε ον τοπ οφ τηε 2,700 ϕοβ but λοσσεσ αλρεαδψ αννουνχεδ βψ τηισ ψεαρ ΒΒΧ Σχοτλανδ υνδερστανδσ τηε λοσσεσ αρε το βε .
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3 1. Be less predictable 2. Use short & long sentences 3. Less “and” and “but”
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Describe the room you are in
The rooms is … This room is …
It is … big – nice – large
and also
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The rooms is … This room is …
It is … big – nice – large
and also
DETAIL: “The girl next to me looks
seriously fed up …”
DIALOGUE: “It’s awful in here – you’ll hate it,” said my friend Tom as I
walked in.
DESCRIBE SENSES:
“There’s an odd smell in this room – it might be stale cheese, or old pizza, or maybe it’s
the smell of fidy bored teenagers.”
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QUIZ TIME
Who writes the longest sentences?
F C A Who writes the shortest sentences?
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6 months:
“Babababa”
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12 months:
“Dada”
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18 months:
“Daddy nice”
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24 months:
“Daddy is silly”
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36 months:
“I like Daddy and I been to the zoo and it was great and I had an ice
cream and I saw a gorilla but then I was sick in the
car ”
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36 months:
“I like Daddy and I been to the zoo and it was great and I had an ice
cream and I saw a gorilla but then I was sick in the
car ”
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36 months:
“I like Daddy and I been to the zoo and it was great and I had an ice
cream and I saw a gorilla but then I was sick in the
car ”
C/D BORDERLINE
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2 1. Use more short sentences 2. Less “and” and “but”
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Lennie and George are very different characters. Lennie εννιε ανδ Γεοργε αρε
ιµπορταντ χηαραχτερσ. Λεννιε ανδ Γεοργε αρε ιµπορταντ χηαραχτερσ. Λεννιε ανδ Γεοργε αρε ιµπορταντ χηαραχτερσ. Λεννιε ανδ Γεοργε αρε ιµπορταντ χηαραχτερσ. Λεννιε ανδ Γεοργε αρε ιµπορταντ χηαραχτερσ. Λεννιε ανδ Γεοργε αρε ιµπορταντ χηαραχτερσ.
Lennie relies on George a lot.
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Lennie and George are very different characters. Lennie εννιε ανδ Γεοργε αρε
ιµπορταντ χηαραχτερσ. Λεννιε ανδ Γεοργε αρε ιµπορταντ χηαραχτερσ. Λεννιε ανδ Γεοργε αρε ιµπορταντ χηαραχτερσ. Λεννιε ανδ Γεοργε αρε ιµπορταντ χηαραχτερσ. Λεννιε ανδ Γεοργε αρε ιµπορταντ χηαραχτερσ. Λεννιε ανδ Γεοργε αρε ιµπορταντ χηαραχτερσ.
Lennie relies on George a lot.
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CLARITY
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2 1. Use more short sentences 2. Less “and” and “but”
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• Although Macbeth begins as a hero, he ends the play as a villain.
• As I read the play, I no9ced the increasing feeling of menace.
• We know that he will die because of all the hints in the language.
• Whilst Macbeth agonises about his future, Lady Macbeth takes her own life.
• However much we sympathise with Macbeth at the start, by the end we despise his ruthlessness.
• Macbeth is a fascina9ng play despite its demanding language
POSH CONNECTIVES:
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• Although Macbeth begins as a hero, he ends the play as a villain.
• As I read the play, I no9ced the increasing feeling of menace.
• We know that he will die because of all the hints in the language.
• Whilst Macbeth agonises about his future, Lady Macbeth takes her own life.
• However much we sympathise with Macbeth at the start, by the end we despise his ruthlessness.
• Macbeth is a fascina9ng play despite its demanding language
POSH CONNECTIVES:
“and” and “but”
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Which, that and who:
“and” and “but”
• Macbeth, who begins the play as a hero, concludes it as a villain.
• It is a play that many people have enjoyed reading.
• The character who most interests me is Banquo.
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Which, that and who:
“and” and “but”
• Macbeth, who begins the play as a hero, concludes it as a villain.
• It is a play that many people have enjoyed reading.
• The character who most interests me is Banquo.
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Create 2‐part sentences:
“and” and “but”
Reading the play again, we are aware of its deep menacing tone. Thinking about his future, Macbeth is filled with despair. Frustrated by her husband’s weakness, Lady Macbeth decides to act.
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Describe a place that is special to you
Grandma’s house
Childhood den Friend’s house Playground Old school
Detail Dialogue Describe senses
Short & long
sentences
‐ing …, I …. ‐ed …., I …. who/that/which
Although, because, as …
Don’t be predictable
Make it up!
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1: How to write
2: Key
ingredients of different
texts ✔
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Write a le5er to a magazine arguing for or against expediHons to dangerous places
3 Layout Sentences Words
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LETTER
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Speech / DescripHon
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SUMMARY
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Be less predictable …
Write using • Detail • Dialogue • Describing senses
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Use short and long sentences –
especially at the start and end of paragraphs
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Use “and” and “but” less:
instead use other techniques to create more interesHng
sentences
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For different text‐types, think
LAYOUT SENTENCES WORDS
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C or higher in English: Guaranteed! Geoff Barton Wednesday, April 8, 2009
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