business communications chapter 2 notes
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CHAPTER 2CHAPTER 2
CREATING BUSINESS CREATING BUSINESS MESSAGESMESSAGES
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Audience orientedAudience oriented PurposefulPurposeful EconomicalEconomical
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Improving Your Improving Your Business WritingBusiness WritingImproving Your Improving Your Business WritingBusiness Writing
To improve your writing skills, you needTo improve your writing skills, you need Good teaching materials with Good teaching materials with
excellent model documentsexcellent model documents An effective writing An effective writing
processprocess A trainer (like your A trainer (like your
instructor)instructor) PracticePractice
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The Writing ProcessThe Writing ProcessThe Writing ProcessThe Writing Process
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PrewritingPrewriting
AnalyzingAnalyzing the purpose and the purpose and the audiencethe audience Identifying your purposeIdentifying your purposeSelecting the best channelSelecting the best channelSwitching to faster channelsSwitching to faster channels
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Factors Determining Factors Determining Channel SelectionChannel Selection
Factors Determining Factors Determining Channel SelectionChannel Selection
Importance of messageImportance of message Amount and speed of feedback Amount and speed of feedback
requiredrequired Necessity of a permanent recordNecessity of a permanent record Cost of the channelCost of the channel Degree of formality requiredDegree of formality required
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Factors Affecting Factors Affecting Media RichnessMedia Richness
Factors Affecting Factors Affecting Media RichnessMedia Richness
SpeedSpeed InteractivityInteractivity Verbal and Verbal and
nonverbal cuesnonverbal cues Everyday Everyday
languagelanguage Focus on individualFocus on individual
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Choosing Communication ChannelsChoosing Communication Channels
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Choosing Communication ChannelsChoosing Communication Channels (continued)(continued)
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Choosing Communication ChannelsChoosing Communication Channels (concluded)(concluded)
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What channel is What channel is best to announce best to announce decreased decreased insurance insurance benefits for 250 benefits for 250 employees?employees?
E-mailE-mail
FaxFax
LetterLetter
MemoMemo
ReportReport
TelephoneTelephone
Voice MailVoice Mail
MeetingMeeting
ConversationConversation
WebWeb
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What channel is What channel is best for a sales best for a sales message message promoting a new promoting a new product to product to customers?customers?
What channel is What channel is best for best for responding to responding to similar customer similar customer inquiries?inquiries?
E-mailE-mail
FaxFax
LetterLetter
MemoMemo
ReportReport
TelephoneTelephone
Voice MailVoice Mail
MeetingMeeting
ConversationConversation
WebWeb
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PrewritingPrewriting
AnalyzingAnalyzing the purpose and the the purpose and the audienceaudience Identifying your purposeIdentifying your purpose Selecting the best channelSelecting the best channel Switching to faster channelsSwitching to faster channels
AnticipatingAnticipating the Audiencethe Audience Profiling the audienceProfiling the audience Responding to the profileResponding to the profile
AdaptingAdapting to the task and audience to the task and audience
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Asking the Right Questions to Asking the Right Questions to Profile Your AudienceProfile Your Audience
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Asking the Right Questions to Asking the Right Questions to Profile Your AudienceProfile Your Audience
(concluded)(concluded)
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Spotlight Audience BenefitsSpotlight Audience BenefitsSpotlight Audience BenefitsSpotlight Audience BenefitsShape your statements to involve the reader.
Instead of this:
You will enjoy total peace of mind with our affordable hospitalization plan that meets all your needs.
Try this:
We are promoting a new plan that we believe has many outstanding benefits.
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Draw onFamiliarWords
UseInclusiveLanguage
EmployPositive
Language
SoundConversational
CultivateA “You”
View
SpotlightAudienceBenefits
Create aCreate aMessage ThatMessage That
Suits YourSuits YourAudienceAudience
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Cultivate a “You” ViewCultivate a “You” ViewCultivate a “You” ViewCultivate a “You” View
Emphasize second-person pronouns (you/your) instead of first-person pronouns (I/we, us, our)
Instead of this:Before we can allow you to purchase items on this new account, we must wait two weeks to verify your credit.
You may begin making purchases on your new account in two weeks.
Try this:
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Create audience benefits and use the “you view.”
We are now offering H-P computers at discounted prices.
Revise these sentences:
We are pleased to announce that you have been approved to enroll in our leadership training program.
These are better:
You can now purchase H-P computers at discounted prices.
Congratulations! You have been selected to enter our leadership training program!
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Sound ConversationalSound ConversationalSound ConversationalSound Conversational
Instead of this:The undersigned takes pleasure in . . .
It may be of some concern to you to learn that your check has been received and your account has been credited for $250.
I’m happy to . . .
Try this:
We’ve credited your account for $250.
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Levels of Language UseLevels of Language Use
UnprofessionalUnprofessional ConversationalConversational FormalFormal
Found inFound in
Some comic Some comic strips, and strips, and songs, some songs, some commercials, commercials, some some conversations, conversations, some IM and some IM and email messagesemail messages
Business Business messages, messages, novels, most novels, most newspapers, and newspapers, and most magazines most magazines
Scientific writing, Scientific writing, legal documents, legal documents, scholarly books, scholarly books, formal essays, formal essays, proclamationsproclamations
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UnprofessionaUnprofessionall
ConversationalConversational FormalFormal
ExamplesExamples
wastedwastednabnabbad-mouthbad-mouthdough, breaddough, breadstewed, stewed, plasteredplasteredI ain’tI ain’thumongoushumongoustighttight
ruinedruinedcatchcatchcriticizecriticizemoneymoneyintoxicated, intoxicated, drunkdrunkI’m notI’m notenormousenormousfrugalfrugal
annihilatedannihilatedapprehendapprehenddisparagedisparagecurrencycurrencyinebriatedinebriated
I am notI am notprodigiousprodigiouspenuriouspenurious
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Revise to make the tone conversational, yet professional and concise.
To facilitate contract ratification, your negotiators urge that the membership respond in the affirmative.
Revise these sentences:
Kindly inform the undersigned whether or not your representative will be making a visitation in the near future.
These are better:
We urge you to approve the contract by voting yes.
Please tell me whether your representative will be visiting before June 1.
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UnprofessionalUnprofessional ConversationalConversational FormalFormal
Characterized byCharacterized by
Incorrect Incorrect grammar, grammar, unpredictable unpredictable sentence sentence structure, structure, inappropriate inappropriate punctuation, punctuation, slang, slang, vulgarisms vulgarisms
Correct Correct grammar and grammar and punctuation, punctuation, conversational conversational tone, simple tone, simple sentence sentence structure, structure, familiar words familiar words
Correct Correct grammar, grammar, serious tone, serious tone, complex complex sentence sentence structure, structure, polysyllabic polysyllabic words words
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Employ Positive LanguageEmploy Positive LanguageEmploy Positive LanguageEmploy Positive Language
Instead of this:Employees may not use the First Street entrance during remodeling.
We cannot fill your order until we receive an exact model number.
Employees may use the Market Street entrance during remodeling.
Try this:
We can fill your order once we receive an exact model number.
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Hidden MessagesHidden MessagesHidden MessagesHidden Messages
Some words and phrases convey a Some words and phrases convey a
negative and unpleasant tone. negative and unpleasant tone.
They may imply a hidden message They may imply a hidden message
that the writer does not intend. that the writer does not intend.
Think twice before using the Think twice before using the
following negative expressions.following negative expressions.
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Negative LanguageNegative Language
You overlookedYou overlooked
You state thatYou state that
You failed toYou failed to
You claim thatYou claim that
You are wrongYou are wrong
You do not understandYou do not understand
Your delayYour delay
You forgot toYou forgot to
Hidden MeaningHidden Meaning
You are carelessYou are careless
But I don’t believe youBut I don’t believe you
You are carelessYou are careless
It’s probably untrueIt’s probably untrue
I am rightI am right
You are not very brightYou are not very bright
You are at faultYou are at fault
You are inefficient and You are inefficient and carelesscareless
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State ideas more positively.
We must withhold payment until you complete the job satisfactorily.
Revise these sentences:
If you fail to follow each requirement, you will not receive your $50 rebate.
These are better:
You will be paid promptly once the job is completed satisfactorily.
By following each requirement, you will receive your $50 rebate.
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Use Inclusive LanguageUse Inclusive LanguageUse Inclusive LanguageUse Inclusive Language
Instead of this:Have you called a salesman?
Every executive has his own office.
This alternative is wordy and calls
attention to itself
Have you called a salesperson?
Try this:
All executives have their own offices.
Every executive has an office. All executives have offices. Every executive has his or
her own office.
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Revise to use inclusive language.
Any applicant for the position of policeman must submit a medical report signed by his physician.
Revise these sentences:
Every employee is entitled to see his personnel file.
These are better:
Applicants for police officer positions must submit medical reports signed by their physicians.All employees are entitled to see their personnel files.
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Adopt Plain LanguageAdopt Plain LanguageAdopt Plain LanguageAdopt Plain Language
Avoid federalese, bureaucratese, and Avoid federalese, bureaucratese, and inflated language.inflated language.
Federalese:Federalese: Each person to whom the request is herein Each person to whom the request is herein
addressed is henceforth solicited to submit, or to have his or addressed is henceforth solicited to submit, or to have his or
her department representative submit, to the Department of her department representative submit, to the Department of
Labor official described above, a comment on whether the Labor official described above, a comment on whether the
proposed plan, in his or her considered view, meets the proposed plan, in his or her considered view, meets the
requirements of the 2003 law.requirements of the 2003 law.
Simple Translation:Simple Translation: You may wish to comment on whether You may wish to comment on whether
the proposed plan meets the requirements of the 2003 law.the proposed plan meets the requirements of the 2003 law.
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Draw on Familiar WordsDraw on Familiar WordsDraw on Familiar WordsDraw on Familiar Words
Avoid long, difficult, and unfamiliar words. Use short, simple, and common words whenever possible.
Less familiar wordsLess familiar words Simple alternativesSimple alternatives
encounterencounter meetmeet
extrapolateextrapolate projectproject
obligatoryobligatory requiredrequired
terminateterminate endend
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Revise the following sentences using simpler language.
Please ascertain whether we must perpetuate our current contract.
He hypothesized that stock values would deteriorate.
Please find out whether we must continue our current contract.
He guessed that stock values would fall.
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Revise the following sentences using simpler language.
Because we cannot monitor all activities, we must terminate the agreement.
I’ll interface with Mark to access his people.
Because we cannot check all activities, we must end the contract.
I’ll talk with Mark about using his staff.
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Seven Ways Technology Can Seven Ways Technology Can Improve Your Business WritingImprove Your Business WritingSeven Ways Technology Can Seven Ways Technology Can
Improve Your Business WritingImprove Your Business Writing Fighting writer’s blockFighting writer’s block Collecting information electronicallyCollecting information electronically Outlining and organizing ideasOutlining and organizing ideas Improving correctness and Improving correctness and
precisionprecision Adding graphics for emphasisAdding graphics for emphasis Designing and producing Designing and producing
professional-looking documents, professional-looking documents, presentations, and Web pagespresentations, and Web pages
Using collaborative software for Using collaborative software for team writingteam writing