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Who Should Be Responsible For Students Failing Standardized Tests?TRANSCRIPT
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Chantelle Beeslaar
ENG-112-12
23 April 2013
Megan Keaton
Argumentative Essay
Who should be responsible for students failing standardized tests? Many people is to
blame for the poor test scores on state exams especially the government and teachers. Students
around the world have been failing required tests that are provided by the government and the
teachers, who have set a high expectation on their academic standards causing students to stress
and do poorly on state exams. To take notice of this matter, students and their parents will be
having a conference with the Board of Education to assure this issue that may result in an
educational change. However, authors Kirk Fallis and Kristina Ritga argue that students are the
blame for failing themselves and not the government nor teachers. How will the board of
education improve the failing scores?
The Government is the biggest concern that students face when it comes to doing a poor
job on standardized tests. The results that government officials expect are far beyond what
students make. The reason behind this is because the governments set academic levels for each
student taking a state exam and expect teachers to educate them based on books given to schools
around the U.S. But not only do students have to meet state requirements the schools themselves
have to do so as well. In addition to providing students with a high academic level, the
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government impacts a student’s success in a negative way by believing that all students are the
same when it comes to education and learning. As a result of this assumption, students fail their
standardized tests based on the fact that not every student can achieve the educational
requirements on state exams provided by the government. If students from different country’s
attend U.S schools, how is setting a high academic standard for the entire school guiding foreign
exchange students to a better education? Even though, the government may be expecting high
academic standards from students; teachers are intended to guide and assist students for these
state exams but have failed to do so. If the government officials will allow teachers the authority
to teach their own way, students would experience a much more enjoyable educational
environment than that of just being taught by a book. Being entertained and enjoying the
education teachers teach on their own can decrease the dropout rates of many high schools
around the U.S.
Students are the blame for failing themselves. They have the opportunity to educate
themselves into getting a decent job that will raise the economy and provide knowledge for
society. If students would avoid drama from friends and set apart the distractions in life, they can
set forth a goal into passing standardized tests. Because they have the ability to use the tutoring
sessions for state exams as a study guide to improve their test scores. Many school campuses
offer tutoring sessions where students can ask question when they are in need of help. Most of
these tutoring sessions are hosted by the school staff that has a history of standardized tests. On
the other hand, the distractions of friends are not the only interruptions of a student’s study habits
or educational career. The parent’s reactions and emotions toward their children are a result of
pressuring students to the point of failure. Students who have rough lives at home may be
impacted from learning in schools because of the arguments of education from parents. The
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Parents of these students take matters into their own hands when it comes to education and may
even be punishing these students for having low grades. How are students supposed to focus on
passing their state exams at the end of the year when their parents are pressuring them rather than
supporting them? Most parents tend to keep things old fashion by parenting the way their parents
taught them and when it comes to punishing a child for wrong doing violence seemed normal.
Using violent force on students who do tend to get a low grade now and then can result in an
avoidance of education. Therefore, students and parents are to blame for low test scores.
Failing state exams affect a student’s life so dramatically especially high school students.
The reason for this dramatic change is the result that students may not be able to get accepted
into a high college because of poor test scores. The lack of wanting to learn and getting educated
to become something in the new society has become common to most high school students.
Based on the fact that students have to actually put effort in while studying for a standardized
tests has influenced them and their friends in a way to where education doesn’t even matter
anymore. The stress levels of students have been so high that they tend to give up easily rather
than look ahead toward their future. Not being able to get accepted into Colleges can end a
student’s career and have the education provided for them end. Students should be able to realize
how important test scores are to them and they need to take advantage of learning centers like the
library to help guide them to a successful educational career in colleges. These standardized tests
aren’t necessarily just for high school students but that goes for college students as well. When
being accepted into a college, students are required to take an Accuplacer test to define their
knowledge on what the colleges may be expecting of them. These tests are similar to a
standardized test but are they considered to be required by the state or the colleges themselves?
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Many questions unfold when it comes to who should really be the blame for students who
do a poor job on their standardized tests. If the school systems is so dysfunctional and failing to
meet the requirements to educate the newer generation of students then how would the school
system fail itself? Well if the school system fails themselves then how are students and
governments supposed to acknowledge that they may really be a failing school? Because of the
horrible decisions made by students to cut or skip class, the school as a whole becomes
unsuccessful. If students have the drive to become successful in life, they can have the success of
their education by going to class and studying for state exams. This leaves everyone asking, if
students are responsible for making low test scores on state tests? Students shouldn’t be the
blame for their own low tests scores because they are not the ones who are intended to make up a
standardized test on a reasonable academic level across the globe.
Do you think the government wants to fail their own students? Because that’s why they
do indeed have academic standards and certain state exams for students. The government didn’t
expect to have high academic standards for students it’s just essential by law. As a result of these
set standards, the school system wouldn’t even have such a high dropout rate for high schools.
Because of these high expectations by the government, students have decided to avoid school as
a whole and drop out. If teachers were given the authority to make their classroom more
entertaining for students this problem of skipping class and dropping out wouldn’t exist.
Overall, the decision on blaming either the government or students for these low
academic test scores need to come to an end so a discussion can be brought about for the board
of education. This matter needs to be presented in a way where this issue can have areas to focus
on. Having the Board of Education aware of the problems can motivate officials to change things
around by giving teachers the authority to teach students the way students would like to be
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educated rather from what the governments would prefer. Once being aware of the situations the
Board of Education will then be provided with statistics to back up any information given to
them that will state the failing standardized test scores. The poor test scores have increased
rapidly in the past decade and has caused schools to become a failing school. Some school
systems in Minnesota, Massachusetts and North Carolina have been known to be a failing
school. Suggestions on how to decrease failing school systems will be given to the board to open
their eyes at what type of issues have led to the failing of these schools.
The fact that the government does have a role into those students that do fail their state
tests has triggered the education system to flop as a whole. Rather than looking for
improvements, officials have been avoiding change in the educational system and need to start
blaming the wrong doings of the government and the teachers who do work for them. Authors
Dylan, Deborah, and Ben all plan on advising the board of education into improving government
state tests for students by asking to lower the academic standards for students who may be
coming from different country’s known as foreign exchange students as well as the struggling
students in society today. The governments will guide teachers into the right path of teaching
their students by having to avoid students who skip class and end up dropping out of school. At
the end of it all, students will be assisted and prepared for standardized tests in a more
professional matter which will raise their grades and the schools grade as a whole.
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Work Cited
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