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AP TIP IN FALL CONFERENCE 2013. MOCK READING Darrin Pollock & Lauren Peterson . Holistic Scoring. score is based on what the essay does well s coring does NOT mean simply counting “errors” - PowerPoint PPT PresentationTRANSCRIPT
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AP TIP IN FALL CONFERENCE 2013MOCK READINGDarrin Pollock & Lauren Peterson
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Holistic Scoring• score is based on what the essay
does well• scoring does NOT mean simply
counting “errors”• each essay topic has its own
scoring rubric (or guide) generally based on that topic's specific information
• scoring guides encompass four essential criteria:– focus– organization– development– correct and sophisticated language
conventions
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A Guide to Holistic Scoring
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Examining the Prompt2012 Rhetorical Analysis
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Examining the Prompt
• Is there a specific question to address or an approach to take when answering the prompt?
• What knowledge and skills must a student possess to respond articulately and effectively to the prompt?
• What concerns surface when reading the prompt question and text?
• What devices & ideas do you recognize as a reader?
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Rhetorical Analysis Prompt, 2012
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Understanding Guidelines, Scores and Rationales
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2012 Rubric/Scoring Guidlines• Identify key words associated with
each score.– Note how the words change with score
• Note the * at the bottom of the scoring guide.
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Calibrating with a 5• Completes the essay task, but with no special
insights. • The analysis lacks depth and merely states the
obvious. • Ideas are predictable and the paragraph
development weak. • Ideas presented simplistically and often contain
lapses in diction or syntax. • Demonstrate uneven or insufficient
understanding of how rhetorical strategies create an author's point.
• Writer merely lists what he or she observes in the passage instead of analyzing effect.
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CALIBRATION: Sample V• After reading, discuss how the student’s response accurately demonstrates a 5 paper.
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Practice Part 1RECOGNIZING THE UPPER ½ ODD SCORES
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CALIBRATION:•A•XXX
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CALIBRATION:•A 7•XXX9
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Practice Part 1RECOGNIZING THE UPPER ½ EVEN SCORES
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CALIBRATION:
•R•W
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CALIBRATION:
•R 6•W8
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Practice Part 2RECOGNIZING THE LOWER ½
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CALIBRATION: Sample V• Remember to recalibrate and review the 5 sample essay
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CALIBRATION:•D•MM
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CALIBRATION:•D 3•MM 1
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Practice Part 2RECOGNIZING THE LOWER ½ EVEN SCORES
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CALIBRATION:
•M•H
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CALIBRATION:
•M 4•H 2
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PRACTICE MOCK SCORING
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CALIBRATION: Sample V, Anchor 5
• Remember to recalibrate and review the 5 sample essay
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SCORE:30 minutes•NN
•AA•L•PP
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Discuss:10 minutes
• What scores did you give each essay? Why?
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SCORE:30 minutes•NN4
•AA8•L6•PP5
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RecalibrateEssay V, score 5
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Pull Samples:•Y•KK•O
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Pull Samples:•Y 5 (low)•KK 3 (high)•O 7 (low)