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AP Style Quiz 1

1. The American Revolution isa/anhistoric event.

a

an

AP Stylebook entry: "a, an"

2. Doctor/Dr.Roberts is a well-respected physician.

Doctor

Dr.

AP Stylebook entry: "abbreviations and acronyms"

3. The 8 am/a.m. meeting is mandatory.

am

a.m.

AP Stylebook entry: "abbreviations and acronyms"

4. Let's meet at 530 WatermelonRd./Road.

Rd.

Road

AP Stylebook entry: "abbreviations and acronyms"

5. The girl is15/fifteenyears old.

15

fifteen

AP Stylebook entry: "ages"

6. Apple Valley,Minn./MN, is Larrys hometown.

Minn.

MN

AP Stylebook entry: "Minnesota" and "state names"

7. The U.S.army/Armyled American forces into Iraq.

army

Army

AP Stylebook entry: "Army"

8. We greetedambassador/AmbassadorJohnson upon his arrival.

ambassador

Ambassador

AP Stylebook entry: "ambassador" and "titles"

9. The New Testament is part of thebible/Bible.

bible

Bible

AP Stylebook entry: "Bible"

10. The television stationbroadcast/broadcastedthe public service announcement yesterday.

broadcast

broadcasted

AP Stylebook entry: "broadcast"

AP STYLE QUIZ 21. The feature story should have included aby-line/byline.

by-line

byline

AP Stylebook entry: "bylines"

2. I had5 cents/$.05in my pocket.

5 cents

$.05

AP Stylebook entry: "cents"

3. Mark watches"Wheel of Fortune"/Wheel of Fortuneevery night.

"Wheel of Fortune"

Wheel of Fortune

AP Stylebook entry: "composition titles"

4. We visited the wildlife habitat at Gulf StatesCorp./Corporation.

Corp.

Corporation

AP Stylebook entry: "corporation"

5. Anderson and Rockwallcounties/Countiescontain large metropolitan areas.

counties

Counties

AP Stylebook entry: "county"

6. With careful planning, we were able to avoid bothcrisis/crises.

crisis

crises

AP Stylebook entry: "crisis, crises"

7. Martha placed aBand-Aid/band-aidon her daughters knee.

Band-Aid

band-aid

AP Stylebook entry: "Band-Aid" and "trademark"

8. Police stepped in tobreak up/break-upthe fight.

break up

break-up

9. AP Stylebook entry: "break up (v.), breakup (n. and adj.)"

He miscalculated theaffect/effectof his actions.

affect

effect

AP Stylebook entry: "affect, effect"

10. The child is mydependant/dependent.

dependant

dependent

AP Stylebook entry: "dependent (n. and adj.)"

AP STYLE QUIZ 3

1. The Whartons travelednorth/Northon Interstate 65.

north

North

AP Stylebook entry: "directions and regions"

2. Mark hasbright's disease/Bright's disease.

bright's disease

Bright's diseaseAP Stylebook entry: "diseases"

3. There are seven continents onearth/Earth.

earth

Earth

AP Stylebook entry: "earth"

4. John Turner is theEditor-in-Chief/editor-in-chiefof the magazine.

Editor-in-Chief

editor-in-chief

AP Stylebook entry: "editor-in-chief"

5. Either they or heis/aregoing.

is

are

AP Stylebook entry: "either...or, neither...nor"

6. Send anemail/e-mailannouncing the meeting time and place.

email

e-mail

AP Stylebook entry: "email"

7. We took steps toinsure/ensureaccuracy.

insure

ensure

AP Stylebook entry: "ensure, insure, assure"

8. We developed aFAQ/faqWeb page.

FAQ

faq

AP Stylebook entry: "FAQ"

9. The store isfurther/fartherdown the road.

further

farther

AP Stylebook entry: "farther, further"

10. Let's post thefliers/flyersaround the building so all students can see them.

fliers

flyers

AP Stylebook entry: "flier, flyer"

AP STYLE QUIZ 41. He wrote afull length/full-lengthstory.

full length

full-length

AP Stylebook entry: "full-"

2. Makingits/herlandfall near New Orleans, Hurricane Katrina caused $75 billion in damages.

its

her

AP Stylebook entry: "hurricane"

3. My uncle lives in Springfield, Illinois/Ill. Illinois

Ill.

AP Stylebook entry: "Illinois" and "state names"

4. He opened the door and ran in/intothe room.

in

into

AP Stylebook entry: "in, into"

5. TheInternet/internetis a decentralized, worldwide network of computers.

Internet

internet

AP Stylebook entry: "Internet"

6. John Smith,U.S. Circuit Judge/U.S. circuit judge, has been married for 14 years.

U.S. Circuit Judge

U.S. circuit judge

AP Stylebook entry: "judge"

7. Have you ever been to Kansas City,Kansas/Kan.?

Kansas

Kan.

AP Stylebook entry: "Kansas" and "state names"

8. Sonyalays/lieson the beach for two hours each day.

lays

lies

AP Stylebook entry: "lay, lie"

9. The Vermont legislature/Legislature approved the amendment.

legislature

Legislature

AP Stylebook entry: "legislature"

10. Come to the meeting in business-like/businesslike attire.

business-like

businesslike

AP Stylebook entry: "-like"

AP STYLE 5

1. Mary danceslike/asa ballerina.

like

as

AP Stylebook entry: "like, as"

2. The house is inliveable/livable condition.

liveable

livable

AP Stylebook entry: "livable"

3. Betty and Sue arelong time/longtime friends.

long time

longtime

AP Stylebook entry: "long time, longtime"

4. We live near thebadly-damaged/badly damaged island.

badly-damaged

badly damaged

AP Stylebook entry: "-ly"

5. President Bush appeared on the cover ofTime/"Time" magazine.

Time

"Time"

AP Stylebook entry: "magazine names" and "composition titles"

6. Television and radio are different media/mediums.

media

mediums

AP Stylebook entry: "media"

7. We visited the Lincoln memorial/Memorial.

memorial

Memorial

AP Stylebook entry: "monuments"

8. They were married in Jan./January1999.

Jan.

January

AP Stylebook entry: "months"

9. iPods useMP3/mp3files.

MP3

mp3

AP Stylebook entry: "MP3"

10. He readsthe/TheNew York Times on Sundays.

the

The

AP Stylebook entry: "newspaper names"

AP STYLE 6

1. We arrived atnoon/12 noon.

noon

12 noon

AP Stylebook entry: "noon"

2. You can find the informationon-line/online.

on-line

online

AP Stylebook entry: "online"

3. The organization raisedmore than/over$500 during last week's fundraiser.

more than

over

AP Stylebook entry: "over"

4. Persons/Peopleof all ages are welcome to attend.

Persons

People

AP Stylebook entry: "people, persons"

5. Only20 %/percent of our membership attended the meeting.

%

percent

AP Stylebook entry: "percent"

6. We all know thatMother Nature/mother naturecan be cruel.

Mother Nature

mother nature

AP Stylebook entry: "Mother Nature" and "personifications"

7. Thesepianoes/pianosare for sale.

pianoes

pianos

AP Stylebook entry: "piano, pianos"

8. The book isyours/yours.

your's

yours

AP Stylebook entry: "possessives"

9. He wrote a biography of Jesuss/Jesuslife.

Jesus's

Jesus'

AP Stylebook entry: "possessives"

10.USCpresident/President Steven B. Sample has increased enrollment dramatically.

president

President

AP Stylebook entry: "president" and "titles"

AP STYLE 7

1. The Pledge of Allegiance contains a reference toGod/god.

God

god

AP Stylebook entry: "religious references" and "gods and goddesses"

2. We arereluctant/reticentto publish that information before it's confirmed.

reluctant

reticent

AP Stylebook entry: "reluctant, reticent"

3. They walkedside-by-side/side by side.

side-by-side

side by side

AP Stylebook entry: "side by side, side-by-side"

4. Thestate/Stateof Alabama requires motorists to have proof of insurance.

state

State

AP Stylebook entry: "state"

5. Teen-agers/Teenagersneed adult supervision while in the park.

Teen-agers

Teenagers

AP Stylebook entry: "teen, teenager (n.), teenage (adj.)"

6. My office phone number is205-/(205)348-5166.

205-

(205)

AP Stylebook entry: "telephone numbers"

7. That product is made in the USA/U.S.A. USA

U.S.A.

AP Stylebook entry: "USA"

8. Margaret Bell is thevice-president/vice presidentof the company.

vice-president

vice president

AP Stylebook entry: "vice" and "vice president"

9. Whos/Whosethere?

Who's

Whose

AP Stylebook entry: "who's, whose"

10. The program benefits people who/thatare homeless.

who

that

AP Stylebook entry: "that (conjunction)" and "who, whom"

AP STYLE 8

1. Who/Whomdo you wish to see?

Who

Whom

AP Stylebook entry: "who, whom"

2. In an address, do not put a comma between the state name andZIP/Zipcode.

ZIP

Zip

AP Stylebook entry: "ZIP code"

3. Turning in the paper late will not beall right/alright.

all right

alright

AP Stylebook entry: "all right (adv.)"

4. The California and New Jersey assemblies/Assembliesrecently met to consider gun control legislation.

assemblies

Assemblies

AP Stylebook entry: "assembly"

5. The Halloween Meet and Greet was abazaar/bizarreevent.

bazaar

bizarre

AP Stylebook entry: "bizarre"

6. The organization'sboard of directors/Board of Directors meets bimonthly.

board of directors

Board of Directors

AP Stylebook entry: "board of directors, board of trustees"

7. Canvass/Canvasthe area for a good place to set up a picnic.

Canvass

Canvas

AP Stylebook entry: "canvas, canvass"

8. When you discuss a person's moral qualities, you are referring to his character/reputation. character

reputation

AP Stylebook entry: "character, reputation"

9.Helen now lives in New York City/city.

City

city

AP Stylebook entry: "city"

10. Mark and Thomas are coworkers/co-workers.

coworkers

co-workers

AP Stylebook entry: "co-"

AP STYLE QUIZ 91. This gold-leaf bowl dates back to the1700s/1700's.

1700s

1700's

AP Stylebook entry: "decades" and "years"

2. Mary wants to be a dietician/dietitianfor a large hospital system.

dietician

dietitian

AP Stylebook entry: "dietitian"

3. This kitten's personality is differentthan/fromthe others.

than

from

AP Stylebook entry: "different"

4. The four students looked ateach other/one another.

each other

one another

AP Stylebook entry: "each other, one another"

5. Carlosimmigrated/emigrated from Cuba.

immigrated

emigrated

AP Stylebook entry: "emigrate, immigrate"

6. We took Dad to dinner for Father's Day/Fathers Day. Father's Day

Fathers Day

AP Stylebook entry: "Father's Day"

7. One of our guests wasFirst Lady/first ladyLaura Bush.

First Lady

first lady

AP Stylebook entry: "first lady"

8. The job position is nowfull-time/full time.

full-time

full time

AP Stylebook entry: "full time, full-time"

9. Let this be our last goodbye/goodby. goodbye

goodby

AP Stylebook entry: "goodbye"

10. The banquet honored the Governor/governor.

Governor

governor

AP Stylebook entry: "governor" and "titles"

AP STYLE 10

1. The group of professors is implementingtheir/itsnew academic plan.

their

its

AP Stylebook entry: "group"

2. A company website'shome page/homepagemust be easy to navigate.

home page

homepage

AP Stylebook entry: "home page"

3. She lives at124 West 23rd St. / 124 W. 23rd St. 124 West 23rd St.

124 W. 23rd St.

AP Stylebook entry: "addresses"

4. The three friends decided to keep the discussionbetween / amongthemselves.

between

among

AP Stylebook entry: "among, between"

5. Any one / Anyoneof the students may come to the lecture.

Any one

Anyone

AP Stylebook entry: "anybody, any body, anyone, any one"

6. She feltbad / badlywhen she had the flu.

bad

badly

AP Stylebook entry: "bad, badly"

7. Ican't hardly / can hardlyhear you.

can't hardly

can hardly

AP Stylebook entry: "can't hardly"

8. As acitizen / residentof Wichita, the woman voted in the mayoral race.

citizen

resident

AP Stylebook entry: "citizen, resident, subject, national, native"

9. The two top football recruits werecoequal / co-equal.

coequal

co-equal

AP Stylebook entry: "co-"

10. The Atlanta, Charleston and RaleighCity Councils / city councilsvoted on the proposal.

city councils

City Councils

AP Stylebook entry: "city council"

AP STYLE 11

1. My twodaughters-in-law / daughter-in-lawswere busy shopping.

daughters-in-law

daughter-in-laws

AP Stylebook entry: "daughter-in-law, daughters-in-law"

2. My favorite drink isDr. Pepper / Dr Pepper.

Dr Pepper

Dr. Pepper

AP Stylebook (2010) entry: "Dr Pepper"

3. She isdown-to-earth / down-to-Earth.

down-to-earth

down-to-Earth

AP Stylebook entry: "earth"

4. Uponfarther / furtherreview of your application, we've decided to offer you the job.

farther

further

AP Stylebook entry: "farther, further"

5. Less / Fewerthan 10 people applied for the job.

Fewer

Less

AP Stylebook entry: "fewer, less"

6. He was herfiance / fiancee.

fiance

fiancee

AP Stylebook entry: "fiance (man), fiancee (woman)

7. She didwell / goodon the test.

well

good

AP Stylebook entry: "good, well"

8. She complained about beingharrassed / harassed.

harrassed

harassed

AP Stylebook entry: "harass, harassment"

9. What is the holdup / hold up with the delivery?

holdup

hold up

AP Stylebook entry: "hold up (v.), holdup (n. and adj.)

10. Our company'sintranet / Intranetmakes the exchange of internal files and information easier for our employees.

intranet

Intranet

AP Stylebook entry: "intranet"

AP STYLE 12

1. Martin Luther King, Jr. / King Jr. was a phenomenal speaker.

King, Jr.

King Jr.

AP Stylebook entry: "junior, senior"

2. He haslain / layedin the sun for the past three hours.

lain

layed

AP Stylebook entry: "lay, lie"

3. Themidsemester / mid-semesterexams were quickly approaching.

midsemester

mid-semester

AP Stylebook entry: "mid-"

4. She grewmore than / over3 inches this summer.

more than

over

AP Stylebook entry: "over"

5. Afive-year-old / 5-year-oldgirl won the contest.

five-year-old

5-year-old

AP Stylebook entry: "ages" and "numerals"

6. Over all, / Overall,the students did well on their projects.

Over all,

Overall,

AP Stylebook entry: "overall"

7. Thepeople / peoplesof Africa speak many different languages.

people

peoples

AP Stylebook entry: "people"

8. More than 25percent / %of college students skip class.

percent

%

AP Stylebook entry: "percent"

9. The test was inQ&A / Q-and-Aformat.

Q-and-A

Q&A

AP Stylebook entry: "Q-and-A"

10. Therestaurateur / restauranteurdrives a green car, which matches the color of his restaurant's logo.

restaurateur

restauranteur

AP Stylebook entry: "restaurateur"

AP STYLE QUIZ 13

1. The coals continued tosmolder/ smoulder. smolder

smoulder

AP Stylebook entry: "smolder"

2. Shesneaked / snuckinto her room late. sneaked

snuck

AP Stylebook entry: "sneaked"

3. Thestationary / stationeryhad her name on it. stationary

stationery

AP Stylebook entry: "stationary, stationery"

4. The store's telephone number is800-555-5555 / (800) 555-5555. 800-555-5555

(800) 555-5555

AP Stylebook entry: "telephone numbers"

5. The teamthat / whicharrives first will present its ideas first. that

which

AP Stylebook entry: "that, which"

6. TheUS / U.S.team won a gold medal. US

U.S.

AP Stylebook entry: "U.S."

7. TheWeb site / websitewas recently updated. Web site

website

AP Stylebook entry: "website" and "Web"

8. He has abachelor's degree, bachelorsdegree. bachelor's

bachelors

AP Stylebook entry: "academic degrees"

9. The department ofEngineering/engineering is known for its tough curriculum. Engineering

engineering

AP Stylebook entry: "academic departments"

10. She went toaccept/exceptthe award. accept

except

AP Stylebook entry: "accept, except"

AP STYLE 14

1. He was the program'sadvisor/adviser.

advisor

adviser

AP Stylebook entry: "adviser"

2. Skipping the assignmentaffected/effectedhis overall grade.

affected

effected

AP Stylebook entry: "affect, effect"

3. He was a part of theBaby Boomer/baby boomergeneration.

Baby Boomer

baby boomer

AP Stylebook entry: "baby boomer"

4. They walkedbackwards/backwardcarefully.

backwards

backward

AP Stylebook entry: "backward"

5. The town has a popularbed-and-breakfast/bed and breakfast.

bed-and-breakfast

bed and breakfast

AP Stylebook entry: "bed-and-breakfast"

6. She hasblond/blondehair.

blond

blonde

AP Stylebook entry: "blond, blonde"

7. The army fired thecannon/canon.

cannon

canon

AP Stylebook entry: "cannon, canon"

8. The U.S.Capital/Capitolis located in Washington, D.C.

Capital

Capitol

AP Stylebook entry: "Capitol"

9. The painting dates back to theninth/9thcentury.

ninth

9th

AP Stylebook entry: "century"

10. The character is introduced inChapter 8/Chapter eight.

Chapter 8

Chapter eight

AP Stylebook entry: "chapters"

AP STYLE QUIZ 151. The prize was twocomplementary/complimentarymeals at the local diner.

complementary

complimentary

AP Stylebook entry: "complementary, complimentary"

2. The boy's mompersuaded/convincedhim to study harder.

persuaded

convinced

AP Stylebook entry: "convince, persuade"

3. The passer-bys/passers-bystared at the wreck.

passer-bys

passers-by

passerby, passersby

4. She is4-feet-8-inches/4 feet 8 inchestall. 4-feet-8-inches

4 feet 8 inches

AP Stylebook entry: "dimensions"

5. She was notdiscreet/discreteenough in the meeting.

discreet

discrete

AP Stylebook entry: "discreet, discrete"

6. The house went on the market for$650,000/$650 thousand.

$650,000

$650 thousand

AP Stylebook entry: "dollars"

7. Sheemigrated/immigratedto the United States.

emigrated

immigrated

AP Stylebook entry: "emigrate/immigrate"

8. The tornado damage waswidespread/wide-spread.

widespread

wide-spread

AP Stylebook entry: "wide-"

9. Representative/Rep.Ben Fuller spoke at the luncheon.

Representative

Rep.

AP Stylebook entry: "legislative titles"

10. Rain wasforecast/forecastedevery day last week.

forecast

forecasted

AP Stylebook entry: "forecast"

AP STYLE 16

1. She decided toforego/forgopurchasing the dress.

forego

forgo

AP Stylebook entry: "forego, forgo"

2. The student was from Marietta,GA/Ga.

GA

Ga.

AP Stylebook entry: "Georgia" and "state abbreviations"

3. I feelgood/welltoday.

good

well

AP Stylebook entry: "good, well"

4. Mahlia Jackson was a famousgospel/Gospelsinger.

gospel

Gospel

AP Stylebook entry: "Gospel(s), gospel"

5. Governor/Gov.Bob Riley has a lot of supporters.

Governor

Gov.

AP Stylebook entry: "governor" and "titles"

6. Thegray/greycar was parkedillegally.

gray

grey

AP Stylebook entry: "gray"

7. Company revenues range from$10 to $12 million/$10 million to $12 million.

$10 to $12 million

$10 million to $12 million

AP Stylebook entry: "ranges"

8. Theenquiry/inquirywas made through the website.

enquiry

inquiry

AP Stylebook entry: "inquire, inquiry"

9. He was fromKansas City/Kansas City, Mo. Kansas City

Kansas City, Mo.

AP Stylebook entry: "Kansas City"

10. The governor held apress conference/news conference.

press conference

news conference

AP Stylebook entry: "press conference"

AP STYLE QUIZ 17

1. She wasfully-informed/fully informedbefore making her decision.

fully-informed

fully informed

AP Stylebook entry: "-ly"

2. The New York Cityfire department/Fire Departmentresponds quickly.

fire department

Fire Department

AP Stylebook entry: "governmental bodies"

3. A blazer can be found in themenswear/men's weardepartment.

menswear

men's wear

AP Stylebook entry: "menswear"

4. The AppalachianMountains/mountainsbegin in Alabama.

Mountains

mountains

AP Stylebook entry: "mountains"

5. The car was traveling 30miles per hour/mph.

miles per hour

mph

AP Stylebook entry: "mph"

6. The students are from Asheville,N.C./NC.

N.C.

NC

AP Stylebook entry: "North Carolina"

7. The computer wasoffline/off-line.

offline

off-line

AP Stylebook entry: "offline"

8. She felloff of/offthe short ledge.

off of

off

AP Stylebook entry: "off of"

9. The student feltOK/okayabout the test.

OK

okay

AP Stylebook entry: "OK, OK'd, Ok'ing, Oks"

10. It waspouring/poringoutside.

pouring

poring

AP Stylebook entry: "pouring, poring"

AP STYLE Please note: Through the following examples, italics are used to highlight the word or phrase in question, and not to indicate that the word or phrase should be italicized.

abbreviationsThese titles are capitalized and abbreviated before a name:

Dr.Gov.Lt. Gov.Rep.Sen. (Sens.)and all military titles (Gen., Adm., Col., Maj., Capt., Pvt., Pfc, etc.)

Professor is never abbreviated and only capitalized if part of a title, e.g. Joe Smith, the Eugene Jones Professor of Chemistry, ...

United States and United Nations -- spell out on first reference, then abbreviate U.S. and U.N. as nouns on second and subsequent references. Abbreviate always when used as adjectives.

The United States contribution to the U.N Climate Fund is larger than that of any other nation.

The U.S. ambassador said she will not protest the meeting at the United Nations. But a U.N. spokeswoman said ...

academic degreesbachelor of arts (B.A.)(a bachelors)

bachelor of divinity (B.D.)

bachelor of laws (LL.B)

bachelor of science (B.S.)

doctor of law (J.D.) (a doctorate)

doctor of laws (L.L.D.)doctor of medicine (M.D.)

doctor of philosophy (Ph.D.)

master of arts (M.A.) (a masters)

master of public policy (M.P.P.)

master of science (M.S.)

academic departmentsAcademic departments are in lowercase (the music department, the physics department) except when the subject in question is a proper noun (the English department, the German department).

Department names used in an official sense are uppercase (e.g., Duke's Department of Chemistry, the Department of Music). The same is true for institutes, centers, schools, etc.

academic titlesCapitalize titles before a name.

Duke University President Richard H. Brodhead

Trinity College Dean Laurie L. Patton

Lowercase after a name or when used alone.

Richard H. Brodhead, the president of Duke University

Laurie Patton, dean of Trinity College

Exceptions are names of chaired professorships.

Alice Mary Baldwin Professor of History William H. Chafe and

William H. Chafe, Alice Mary Baldwin Professor of History

Doctor, M.D., Ph.D.

affect, effectAffect, the noun, describes an emotion, and is used mainly in psychology. AP style says to avoid using "affect" as a noun.

The patient showed little affect.

Affect, the verb, means to influence.

His illness affected his grades.

Effect, the noun, means result or outcome.

His illness had an effect on his grades.

Effect, the verb, means to bring about, to create.

The department chair effected big changes.

alumnus, etc.An alumnus is a male graduate, an alumna a female graduate. Alumni are both male graduates and male and female graduates combined. Alumnae are female graduates.

The same endings apply for emeritus, meaning a retired faculty member.

American IndiansThe AP Stylebook suggests that this usage is preferable to Native Americans, since the ancestors of American Indians migrated to North America from Asia.

among, betweenBetween introduces two items, among more than two.

The applicant had to decide among Duke, Harvard and Princeton.

The applicant had to choose between Duke and Princeton.

Pronouns following these prepositions are in the objective case.

The choice was between us and them.

capitalizationAvoid unnecessary capitals.

Capitalize:

proper nouns: James B. Duke

proper names: Duke University, the Eno River

popular names: the Bull City, the Triangle

titles (see Academic Titles, above, and Titles, below): Dear Old Duke

University, by itself, meaning Duke, is never capitalized.

President Brodhead described the universitys master plan.

carat, caret, karatA carat is a measure of weight of precious stones. A caret is a proofreaders symbol, indicating where words or letters are to be inserted. A karat is a measure of the portion of pure gold in an alloy.

collective nounsNouns and proper nouns denoting units (class, choir, committee, fraternity, orchestra, team, Duke, Microsoft) are singular and take singular verbs and pronouns.

The Arts & Sciences Council adjourned for the summer. It meets again in September.

The team is on a road trip. It plays tonight in Atlanta.

However, team names and band names take plural verbs and pronouns.

The Beatles remain the world's most influential band.

The Blue Devils won last night. They dominated on defense.

commas in a seriesUse a comma after each item in a series except before the conjunction (unless the last item includes a conjunction.)

Example:Students eat lunch at the Cambridge Inn, the Alpine Atrium and the Perk.

compose, compriseCompose, in the passive voice, means to be made up of.

Duke University is composed of nine schools.

Comprise, best used only in the active voice, means to contain or include.

Duke University comprises nine schools.

compound nounsWhen in doubt whether a noun is open (half note, half brother), closed (halfback, halftone), or hyphenated (half-moon, half-life), consult a dictionary. (Also see Prefixes, below.) Some examples:

Afro-American

attorney general

blue greenbookkeeping

coal mining

crosswalkdecision maker

decision making

ex-presidentfirst-grader

French Canadian

full moonhalf-century

half-dollar

headache, toothacheItalian-American

key of B minor

key of B-flatkey of F-sharp

key of G major

Latin Americanmid-Atlantic

midsummer

near missnortheast

notebook, textbook

one-half, one-eighthoversight

policymaker

president-electquasi corporation

self-knowledge

vice chairmanvice president

vice provost

African-Americandeans listAlways lowercase;

Example:He made the deans list three straight semesters.

disc, diskcomputer disk or diskette

floppy diskdisc jockey

laserdisc

videodisc

disinterested, uninterestedDisinterested means impartial, uninterested means lacking in interest.

due toDue is an adjective that follows the verb to be or modifies a particular noun.

The cancellation was due to snow.

Cancellations due to snow disrupted the semester.

It should not be used in adverbial phrases to mean because of.

Instead of: Due to snow, classes were canceled.

Use: Because of snow, classes were canceled.

Dukes units, official namesArts & Sciences and Trinity College

Divinity School

Duke University Health System (lowercase "health system" if on its own)*(Duke Medicine is an umbrella term that refers to all of the component entities -- Duke University Health System, Duke University School of Medicine, Duke University School of Nursing, etc. Duke University Health System refers ONLY to the clinical entities -- Duke University Hospital, Duke Raleigh Hospital, outpatient clinics and facilities, etc.)

The Fuqua School of Business

Graduate School

Nicholas School of the Environment

Pratt School of Engineering

Sanford School of Public Policy

School of Law

School of Medicine

School of Nursing

Undergraduate women who attended Duke between 1930 and 1972 were students in the Womans College, not the Womens College.

See also: Schools and class years, below.

foreign wordsand phrasesForeign words and phrases found in a standard English dictionary are not italicized:

al-Qaida

dolce vita

fait accompli

hacienda

jihad

kibitzmah-jongg

mea culpa

troika

tsunami

Nouns that in German would be capitalized are in English lowercase: doppelgnger or doppelganger, schadenfreude, weltschmerz.

full time, part timeHyphenate the adjective, not the noun.

Full-time employees work full time. Part-time employees work part time.

fundraising, fundraiserOne word in all cases.

The Campaign for Duke was a fundraising effort. Fundraising is important to the universitys future.

handicap, disabilityPlease refer to people with disabilities or disabled rather than to the handicapped.

he or she, his or herUsing he or she and his or her to be fair to both genders can be awkward. It is often simpler to make the noun plural.

Instead of:A student gets good grades when he or she studies hard.

Use:Students get good grades when they study hard.

historic, historyWhen the h in these words is pronounced, the indefinite article should be a:

a historic momenta history professor

hopefullyThis adverb means in a hopeful manner.

The students waited hopefully for tickets.

It should not be used to mean it is hoped.

Instead of:Hopefully, tickets would be available.

Use:They hoped tickets would be available.

hurricanesAll hurricanes take an indefinite pronoun.

Hurricane Fran hit Durham in 1996. It (not she) caused extensive flooding.

hyphenationCompound modifiers before nouns are hyphenated.

The trustees approved a long-term strategic plan.Exceptions: Compounds with very and with adverbs ending in ly.

A D is a very low grade.A D is not an easily forgotten grade.Compound modifiers after the verb to be are hyphenated.

The strategic plan is to be a long-term document.

impactImpact is a noun.

The teams losing record had an impact on attendance.

Its use as a verb meaning affect or influence is common, but should be avoided.

Instead of:The teams losing record impacted attendance.

Use:The teams losing record affected attendance.

imply, inferSpeakers and writers imply, listeners and readers infer.

institutesThe seven Duke University institutes and their affiliated centers contribute problem-focused, interdisciplinary research and education, and generate knowledge in the service of society through initiation and facilitation of collaborations and programming. More information is at http://interdisciplinary.duke.edu/institutes/index.phpDuke Global Health Institute, Duke Institute for Brain Sciences, Institute for Genome Sciences and Policy, John Hope Franklin Humanities Institute, Kenan Institute for Ethics, Nicholas Institute for Environmental Policy Solutions, Social Science Research Institute

Internet, Web, etc.The following capitalizations, spellings and hyphenations are recommended:

app

avatar

blogcellphone

click-throughs

crowdsourcingDuke on Demand

Duke Today

e-commerceeBay

email

e-reader (Kindle, Nook)GIF

geotagging, geolocationGoogle, Googling, Googledhashtag

Internet (The Net is acceptable)iPad, iPhone, iPod (iPod Nano, iPod Touch, etc.)iTunes U

JPG

mashupmicroblogging

"Office Hours"

onlinePDF

smartphone

to text, text message, texted, texting

Tumblr

Twitter (n.), tweet (n., v.)Voice over Internet Protocol (VoIP on second reference)Web, website (orWorld Wide Web)

wiki, WikipediaWorking@Duke

YouTube (also, Duke's channel on YouTube)

Iran, IraqIran is not an Arab nation. Its people are Persian, Azerbaijani, Kurdish and other ethnic groups. The principal language is Farsi, an Indo-European language, also known as Persian, that is written with Arabic characters. Ninety percent of Iranians are Shiite Muslims, 10 percent Sunni Muslims.

Iraq is an Arab nation. The principal language is Iraqi, a dialect of Arabic. Sixty-five percent of Iraqis are Shiite Muslims, 30 percent Sunni Muslims.

The Kurds, Sunni Muslims who speak a dialect of Farsi, are a large minority in both countries.

italics, quotation marksIn general, do not use italics or quotation marks for emphasis or to suggest irony or special usage:

Some students questioned whether the painting should be considered art.In particular, do not use italics or quotation marks around clichs or figures of speech:

The tuition increase will have an impact on the universitys bottom line.Nicknames are enclosed in quotation marks.

Harold Spike Yoh, former chairman of Dukes Board of Trustees.

Kmart, Wal-Mart, Hewlett-Packard, Packard Bell, etc.When in doubt about the spelling and punctuation of company names, check with the press relations department at corporate headquarters. Even official websites may contain errors.

lay, lieLay (past tense: laid; past participle: laid; present participle: laying) is an action verb meaning to put or place; it takes a direct object.

The student lays down his pencil.

The student laid down his pencil.

He has laid down his pencil.

He is laying down his pencil.

Lie (past tense: lay; past participle: lain; present participle: lying) means to be or stay at rest horizontally. It cannot take an object.

The pencil lies on the desk.

The pencil lay on the desk.

The pencil has lain on the desk.

The pencil is lying on the desk.

less, fewerIn general, less refers to things that can be measured, fewer to things that can be counted.

The student had less free time, even though he took fewer classes.

like, asLike is a preposition that requires an object.

She plays defense like a pro.

As is a conjunction that introduces a clause.

She plays defense as the coach taught her.

local placesResearch Triangle Park, then RTP in subsequent references.

the Triangle, and eight-county region in the Piedmont of North Carolina consisting of Chatham, Durham, Franklin, Harnett, Johnston, Orange, Person, Wake.

months, seasonsMonths are uppercase, seasons are lowercase. Abbreviate all months with a date except March, April, May, June, July.

May 15. July 4. Feb. 13. Dec. 25.

It was the summer of 1975. We worked hard all winter.

MohammedPreferred over Muhammad, Mahomet or other spellings for the founder of Islam.

mount, mountainsMount is spelled out, mountain is capitalized as part of a proper name.

Mount Mitchell is in the Black Mountains.

mm, mphDo not use periods; abbreviate in all uses.

The White Lecture Hall has 16mm and 35mm film projectors. (Note: No space is used.)

The campus speed limit is 25 mph.

numbersSpell out whole numbers below 10, use figures for 10 and above.

The department has 15 faculty and two administrative assistants.

Exceptions:

Ages:She has a son, John, 7.She has a 7-year-old son, John.

Dimensions:The photograph is 6 inches by 9 inches.The sophomore is 6 feet 5. He is a 6-foot-5 sophomore.

Percentages:Only 4 percent of undergraduates do not return for their sophomore year.

Time:The class starts at 9 a.m. (Not: 9:00 a.m. or 9 A.M.)Try to avoid starting a sentence with a figure.Seventy students enrolled in the class.

Rewrite: There are 70 students enrolled in the class.onlyMake sure that only modifies what you want it to modify.

He only studies on weekends means that on Saturday and Sunday he does nothing but study.

He studies only on weekends means that he doesnt study Monday through Friday.

possessivesSingular nouns add an apostrophe and an s.

Example:

the teams record.Exceptions:appearance sake, conscience sake, goodness sake

The AP Stylebook lists as exceptions singular nouns ending in s and followed by words beginning with s:

the witness story, but the witnesss recollectionthe hostess soire. but the hostesss party

Plural nouns add an apostrophe:

the students grades

Exceptions:

Plural words used descriptively.The Blue Devils coach

a writers guide

Names ending in s, add an apostrophe:

Charles dog

Chameides staff

Jesus mother

Moses law

Achilles heel

Euripedes plays

For names ending in z and x, add an apostrophe and an s:

Berliozs opera

Marxs writings

Xeroxs profits

prefixesmost nouns, verbs, adjectives, and adverbs formed with the following prefixes are closed (e.g., anteroom, neoclassical):

ante (antediluvian)

anti (antihero)bi (bisexual)

bio (biodiversity)co (coauthor, cooperate)counter (counteroffensive)extra (extracurricular)infra (infrastructure)inter (intercollegiate)

intra (intrasquad)macro (macroeconomics)meta (metadata)micro (micromanage)mid (midcentury)(but: mid-Atlantic)mini (minibus)

multi (multistory)neo (neoclassical)non (nonviolent, nonprofit)over (overvalued)post (postdoctoral)

pre (prearranged)pro (proconsul) (but: pro-choice,pro-life, pro-American)proto (prototype)

pseudo (pseudoscience)re (reunite, reexamine)semi (semiannual, semiconductor)socio (socioeconomic)

sub (substandard)super (superego, superimpose)supra (supraorbital)trans (transoceanic)

ultra (ultraconservative)un (unenthusiastic)

under (underfunded)

rangesUse this form:$5 million to $10 million, not $5-10 million5,000 to 10,000, not 5-10,000

religionsAnglicanism (Anglican)Baptist Church (Baptist)Buddhism (Buddhist)Catholicism (Catholic)Church of Christ, Scientist (Christian Scientist)Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints (Mormon)Friends General Conference,Friends United Meeting (Quaker)Hinduism (Hindu)

Islam (Muslim)Judaism (Jew)Eastern Orthodox churches (Greek Orthodox Church, Russian Orthodox Church)Protestantism (Protestant)Religious Society of Friends (Quaker)Roman Catholicism (Roman Catholic)Seventh-day Adventist ChurchShiism (Shiite)Shintoism (Shintoist)

Sunnism (Sunni)Taoism (Taoist)

United Methodist Church (Methodist)

religious holidaysPlease use the following spellings:Ash Wednesday

Christmas (and Christmastime)Easter

Good FridayHanukkah

Holy WeekLent

PassoverRamadan

Rosh HashanaYom Kippur

SaintAbbreviate in place names and the names of saints:

St. Paul, Minn.; St. Johns Newfoundland; St. Christopher

Exceptions:Saint John, New Brunswick; Sault Ste. Marie, Mich.

Scot, Scots, Scottish, ScotchA Scot is a native of Scotland.

Scots are the people of Scotland.

Scottish modifies someone or something from Scotland.

Scotch is a type of whiskey. When the two words are used together they are spelled Scotch whisky.

states, names ofThe following states are never abbreviated in conjunction with the name of a city, town, village or military base:

Alaska

HawaiiIdahoIowa

MaineOhioTexas

Utah

Put a comma between the city and state name, and another comma after the state name, unless it ends a sentence.

Reynolds Price was born in Macon, N.C., and graduated from Duke in 1955.

If the abbreviated state name ends the sentence, use only one period.

Sen. Richard Burr attended college in Winston-Salem, N.C.

The abbreviations of the remaining states are:

Ala.

Ariz.Ark.Calif.

Colo.Conn.Del.

Md.Mass.Mich.

Minn.Miss.Mo.

Mont.N.D.Okla.

Ore.Pa.R.I.

S.C.S.D. Fla.

Ga.Ill.Ind.

Kan.Ky.La.

Neb.Nev.N.H.

N.J.N.M.N.Y.N.C.

Tenn.Vt.Va.

Wash.W.Va.Wis.

Wyo.

that, whichThat introduces clauses essential to the meaning of a sentence (and never set off by commas).

Duke is the university that James B. Duke founded.

Which introduces nonessential clauses (always set off by commas).

Duke, which was founded by James B. Duke, is located in Durham, N.C.

time elementIn external news releases, use the day of the week, not today.

President Richard H. Brodhead announced Wednesday ...

titles of books, movies, plays, etc.Put quotation marks around the titles of books, movies, operas, plays, poems, songs, television programs and works of art. Capitalize the first and last words and all nouns, pronouns, adjectives, verbs, adverbs and subordinating conjunctions (if, because, as, that, etc.). Lowercase definite and indefinite articles, coordinating conjunctions (and, but, or, for, nor) and prepositions.

Let Us Now Praise Famous Men

It Happened One Night

The Marriage of Figaro

Death of a Salesman

Ode on a Grecian Urn

Just One of Those Things

Who Wants to Be a Millionaire

Adoration of the Magi

Exceptions:

The Bible, the Koran, the Torah,

Reference books, directories, dictionaries, encyclopedias, etc.

Encyclopedia Britannica

American Heritage Dictionary of the English Language

Books In Print

Names of newspapers, journals or magazines do not take quotation marks and are not italicized. (Note:the may or may not be part of a papers name. Check each publication to be sure. Websites are a good source.)

The Herald-Sun

The News & Observer

The New York Times

New York Daily News

The New Yorker

Science

Nature

U.S. News (with a space) was formerly U.S.News & World Report (no space). Its website is www.usnews.com.

trademarksThe following words are trademarks:

Ace Bandage

AstroTurf

Band-Aid

Scotch Tape

Seeing-Eye dog

Sheetrock

Spandex

Styrofoam

Velcro

Xerox (never used as a verb)

The following are generic:

Aspirin

cellophane

escalator

nylon

pingpong (unless referring to the table tennis equipment made by Ping-Pong)

rayon

thermos (unless referring to the vacuum bottle made by Thermos)

yo-yo

(When in doubt, try typing the word into a search engine window. Trademarks often have websites, e.g., www.velcro.com, www.spandex.com.

who, whomWho refers to the subject of a sentence, clause or phrase.

The students who worked with tutors got high grades.

Whom refers to the object of a verb or preposition.

The students whom the tutors helped got high grades.

ANTI-

In AP Style, you should hyphenate all words beginning with anti, except the following ones. All of the below words have specific meanings of their own.

Antibiotic

Antibody

Anticlimax

Antidepressant

Antidote

Antifreeze

Antigen

Antihistamine

Antiknock

Antimatter

Antimony

Antiparticle (And similar terms in physics such as antiproton)

Antipasto

Antiperspirant

Antiphon

Antiphony

Antipollution

Antipsychotic

Antiseptic

Antiserum

Antithesis

Antitoxin

Antitrust

Antitussive

This approach has been adopted in the interests of readability and easily remembered consistency.

In Websters New World College Dictionary, it is anti-lock. But you should also note that the AP Stylebook has the following words as exceptions to the Websters spelling.

Anti-abortion

Anti-aircraft

Anti-bias

Anti-inflation

Anti-labor

Anti-social

Anti-war

AP Style Capital, Capitol

AP Style holds that capital is a seat of government, usually being a city. Capital can also be used in a financial sense to describe money, equipment, or property in a business of corporation among other uses. For example,

Washington D.C. is the capital of the United States.

I need a lot of capital to start my new business.

A capitol, on the other hand, is building where legislators meet to have legislative sessions. AP Style requires capitol to be capitalized when referring to the building in Washington where the U.S. Congress meets. It states that this same practice should be followed when referring to state capitol buildings. For example,

The filibuster was held in the Senate Chamber of the Capitol building.

The Massachusetts Capitol is in Boston.

Complement vs. Compliment

Complement and compliment are among the ranks of other homophones such as there, their, and theyre and to, too, and two. They are words that, despite sounding identical, actually have different meanings. Complement and compliment are especially tricky, however, because they are long words and their only spelling difference is one little vowel tucked in the middle. One word is spelled with an e and the other is spelled with an i. The following descriptions are consistent with both the AP Stylebook and the Chicago Manual of Style on the differences between complement and compliment.

Complement

A complement is a both a noun and a verb denoting completeness or the process of supplementing something. When used as a noun, a complement is something that completes or brings to perfection. When used as a verb, to complement means to supplement adequately or to complete. For example,

That shirt is a perfect complement for those pants. (Noun)

That shirt really complements your eyes. (Verb)

Dressing is an expected complement of salad. (Noun)

Compliment

A compliment can also be both a noun and a verb. When used as a noun, a complement is a flattering or praising remark. When used as a verb, to compliment means to praise or to express esteem. For example,

Your friend gave me a nice compliment yesterday. (Noun)

You friend complimented my hair yesterday. (Verb)

Tricks

A good way to remember the difference between these two words is to remember that I make compliments to other people. I make compliments about peoples clothes and compliment has an i in it.

AP Style Company, Companies

AP Style rules hold that you should use Co. or Cos. when a business uses either word at the end of its proper name. For example,

Ford Motor Co.

American Broadcasting Cos.

If company or companies appears alone in second reference, spell out the full word.

The forms for possessive are seen in the examples below,

Ford Motor Co.s inventory

American Broadcasting Cos. profits

AP Style Corporation

AP Style holds that a corporation is an entity that is treated as a person in the eyes of the law. It is able to own property, incur debts, sue, and be sued.

You should abbreviate corporation as Corp. when a company or government agency uses the word at the end of its name. For example,

the Federal Deposit Insurance Corp.

Spell out corporation when it occurs elsewhere in a name. For example,

the Corporation for Public Broadcasting

Spell out and lowercase corporation whenever it stands alone.

The form for possessives can be seen in the example below,

General Motors Corp.s quarterly profits

AP Style Decimal Units

Use a period and numerals to indicate decimal amounts. Decimalization should not exceed two places in textual material unless there are special circumstances.

For amounts less than 1, use the numeral zero before the decimal points. For example,

0.05

When the decimal is 1 or less, the type of measurement should be singular. For example,

0.35 meter

0.55 square feet

0.75 mile

AP Style Emigrate vs. Immigrate

AP Style holds that someone who leaves a country emigrates from it.Someone who comes into a country is someone who immigrates. This idea is also applied to the words emigrant and immigrant. For example,

My grandparents immigrated to the United States.

My grandparents emigrated from Norway.

In these sentences,my grandparents are immigrants here in the United States, but back in Norway, they are emigrants.

AP Style Extra

Do I Use a Hyphen with Extra?

AP Style holds that you should not use a hyphen with extra when it means outside of unless the prefix is followed by a word beginning with a or a capitalized word. For example, words like the following do not use hyphens,

Extralegal

Extramarital

Extraterrestrial

Extraterritorial

A hyphen should follow extra when it is part of a compound modifier describing a condition beyond the usual size, extent, or degree. For example, words like the following require hyphens,

Extra-base hit

Extra-dry drink

Extra-large order of fries

Extra-bland flavor

AP Style Fewer, Less

AP Style holds to the traditional distinction between fewer and less. This rule states that, in general, you should use fewer for individual items, and less for bulk or quantity. Below are a few examples,

Wrong: The trend is toward more machines and less people. (People in this sense refers to individuals.)

Wrong: She was fewer than 60 years old. (Years in this sense refers to a period of time, not individual year.)

Right: Fewer than 10 applicants applied. (Individuals).

Right: I had less than $50 in my pocket. (An amount.)

-but-

Right: I had fewer than 50 $1 bills in my pocket. (Individual items.)

AP Style Fractions

Hold to these rules when using AP Style Fractions in your writing.

Spell out amounts less than 1 in stories, using hyphens between the words. For example,

This recipe calls for two-thirds of a cup.

Are you sure? I thought I had read four-fifths.

I need a size twenty-seven-sixty-fourths drill bit.

Use figures for precise amounts larger than 1, converting to decimals whenever practical.

When using fractional characters, you should remember that most newspaper type fonts can set only 1/8, 1/4, 3/8, 1/2, 5/8, 3/4, and 7/8 as one unit. For mixed numbers, use 1 1/2, 2 5/8, etc., with a full space between the whole number and the fraction.

Other fractions require a hyphen and individual figures, with a space between the whole number and the fraction. For example,

1 3-16

2 1-3

5 9-10

In tabular material, use figures exclusively, converting to decimals if the amounts involve extensive use of fractions that cannot be expressed as a single character.

AP Style Homicide, Murder, Manslaughter

AP Style states that homicide is a legal term for slaying or killing.

Murder is malicious, premeditated homicide. Some states define certain homicides as murder if the killing occurs in the course of armed robbery, rape, etc.

Generally speaking, manslaughter is homicide without malice or premeditation.

A homicide should not be described as murder unless a person has been convicted of that charge.

Do not say that a victim was murdered until someone has been convicted in court. Instead, say that a victim was killed or slain. Do not write that X was charged with murdering Y. Use the formal charge murder and, if not already in the story, specify the nature of the killing shooting, stabbing, beating, poisoning, drowning, etc. For example,

Mr. Jones was charged with the murder in the stabbing of his girlfriend.

Here are a few more examples,

An officer pulled over 29-year-old John White, who was arrested and charged with murder, according to Andrew Johnson, the county sheriffs spokesman.

The 66-year-old amateur photographer has pleaded not guilty to four counts of first-degree murder for the slaying of four women.

The killings occurred between 1977 and 1979. Prosecutors say Adams raped, tortured, and robbed some of them before killing them.

Cook County Sheriff James Jones says a shooting that left a man injured appears to be a murder-suicide.

AP Style In, Into

What is the difference between in and into?

In indicates location. For example,

He was in the room.

The killer was in the house.

Into indicates motion. For example,

She walked into the room.

The killer walked into the kitchen.

When to Use a Hyphen With In

-in

Precede in with a hyphen. For example,

break-in

cave-in

walk-in

write-in

drive-in

sit-in

in-

No hyphens are used when in means not. For example,

inaccurate

insufferable

Other uses without a hyphen

inbound

indoor

infield

infighting

inpatient (n., adj.)

inboard

There are a few combinations that do take a hyphen, however. For example,

in-depth

in-group

in-house

in-law

If you are ever in doubt on whether or not to use a hyphen, follow Websters New World College Dictionary.

When Something is in

When employed to indicate that something is in vogue, use quotations mark only if followed by a noun. For example,

It was the in thing to do back then.

-but-

Raccoon coats are in again.

Inasmuch as

AP Style holds that this is two words.

AP Style Millions, Billions, Trillions

Use figures with million, billion, or trillion in all except casual uses. For example,

Id like to make a billion dollars.

-but-

The nation has 1 million citizens.

I need $8 billion.

The government ran a deficit of more than $1 trillion.

Do not go beyond two decimal places. For example,

7.51 million people

$256 billion

7,549,899 people

$2,234,239,000

Decimals are preferred where practical. For example,

1.5 million

-not-

1 1/2 million

Do not mix millions and billion in the same figure. For example,

2.5 billion

-not-

2 billion 500 million

Do not drop the word million or billion into the first figure of a range. For example,

He is worth $4 million to $5 million.

-not-

He is worth $4 to $5 million.

Unless that is, of course, you actually mean $4.

Note that a hyphen is not used to join the figures and the word million or billion, even in this type of phrase,

The president submitted a $300 billion budget.

In headlines, abbreviate only millions, billions. For example,

$5M lawsuit, $17.4B deficit

AP Style Months

Do I capitalize months in AP Style?

In AP Style you should capitalize the names of months in all of their uses.

Month Abbreviations AP Style

When a month is used with a specific date, abbreviate only Jan., Feb., Aug., Sept., Oct., Nov., and Dec. All other months should always be completely spelled out. Also, all months should be spelled out when they stand alone or are alone with a year. For example,

The play will be shown beginning on July 17. (Appears with date but is not a month that is abbreviated)

The last day of the play is Aug. 15. (Appears with date and is abbreviated)

My birthday is in September. (Appears alone and is spelled out)

September 1975 was a very cold month. (Appears alone with a year and is spelled out)

Punctuating Months

When a phrase lists only a month and year, do not separate the two with commas. When a phrase lists a month, day, and year, set off the year with commas. For example,

September 1975 was a very cold month.

Feb. 12 is Lincolns birthday.

Lincoln was born on Feb. 12, 1809.

He alleged it was Wednesday, Jan. 5, when the crime was committed. (Set off by commas)

For use with tabular material, use the following three-letter forms without periods,

Jan

Feb

Mar

AprJun

Jul

Aug

SepOct

Nov

Dec

AP Style Noon, Midnight

AP Style states that a 12 should not be placed in front of noon or midnight. For instance, sentences should be written as follows,

Correct: We met for lunch at noon.

Wrong: We met for lunch at 12:00 noon.

Correct: Eating dinner at midnight is far too late.

Wrong: Eating dinner at 12:00 midnight it far too late.

AP Style also notes that midnight is part of the day that is ending, not the one that is beginning. For example,

The invasion took place on August 21 at midnight.

In this example, the midnight that is happening is at the end of August 21st, not the beginning of August 22nd. Reference this withChicago stylingon use of midnight.

AP Style Numbers

In general you should spell out numbers one through nine in AP Style. Consider the following examples of AP Style numbers,

The Chicago White Sox finished second.

She had six months left of her pregnancy.

You should use figures for 10 or above and whenever preceding a unit of measure or referring to ages of people, animals, events or things. Also use figures in all tabular matter, and in statistical and sequential forms.

Use Figures For

Academic course numbers:

Calculus 2

English 101

Addresses:

1600 Pennsylvania Avenue

Spell out numbered streets nine and under. For example,

The address is 5 Sixth St.

Go to the restaurant at 1500 32nd St.

See also AP Style Addresses.Ages:

A 6-year-old boy

An 8-year-old car

A 4-year-old house

Use hyphens for ages expressed as adjectives before a noun or as substitutes for a noun. For example,

The 5-year-old boy

-but-

The boy is 5 years old

Also,

The boy, 5, has a sister, 10.

The race is for 3-year-olds.

The woman is in her 30s.

She is a 30-something.

-but-

Thirty-something to start a sentence.

See also AP Style Ages.

Planes, ships, and spacecraft designations:

B-2 bomber

Queen Elizabeth 2

QE2

Apollo 9

Viking 2

(Do not use hyphens.)

An exception to spelling out numbers for planes, ships, etc. is Air Force One, the presidents plane.

Use Roman numerals if they are part of the official designation. For example,

Titan I

Titan II

See also AP Style Aircraft Names, AP Style Boats, Ships, and AP Style Spacecraft Designations.Centuries:

Use figures for numbers 10 or higher.

21st century

Spell out for numbers nine and lower.

fifth century

Note, century is lowercase. For proper names, follow the organizations usage,

20th Century Fox

Twentieth Century Fund

Court Decisions:

The Supreme Court ruled 5-4.

A 5-4 decision.

The words to is not needed, except in quotations. Example,

The court rules 5 to 4.

Dates, Years, Decades:

Feb. 8, 2005

Class of 99

The 1940s

For the Sept. 11, 2001 terrorist attacks, 9/11 is acceptable in all references.

Decimals, Percentages, and Fractions With Numbers Larger Than 1:

7.2 magnitude quake

3 laps

3.7 percent interest

4 percentage points

Decimalization should not exceed two places in most text material. An exception is blood alcohol content, which is express in three decimals. For example,

.056

For amounts less than 1, precede the decimal with a zero. For example,

The cost of living rose 0.05 percent.

When the decimal is 1 or less, the type of measurement should be singular. For example,

0.35 meter

0.55 cubic feet

0.75 kilometer

Spell out fractions less than 1, using hyphens between the words. For example,

two-thirds

three-fifths

In quotations, use figures for fractions. For example,

He was 3 seconds behind with 2 laps to go.

See also AP Style Decimal Units, AP Style Fractions, and AP Style Percent. Dimensions:

He is 5 feet 6 inches tall.

The 5-foot-6 man is here (inch is understood)

The 5-foot man

The basketball team signed a 7-footer.

The car is 17 feet long, 6 feet wide, and 5 feet high.

The rug is 9 feet by 12 feet.

The 9-by-12 rug.

A 9-inch snowfall.

Exception: a two-by-four. Spell out the noun, which refers to any length of building lumber 2 inches thick by 4 inches wide.

See also AP Style Dimensions.

Distances:

She walked 5 miles.

He missed a 10-foot jump shot.

Golf Clubs:

3-wood

7-iron

3-hybrid (note hyphen)

Highway destinations:

Interstate 5

U.S. Highway 1

state Route 1A

Route 66 (Do not abbreviate Route and do not hyphenate.)

See also AP Style Highway DesignationsMathematical Usage:

Multiply by 4

Divide by 6

He added 2 and 2 but got 5.

Military Ranks:

Used as titles with names, military terms, and weapons.

Petty Officer 2nd Class Alan Markow

1st Sgt. David Triplett

M16 rifle

9 mm pistol (note the space)

6th Fleet

In military ranks, spell out the figure when it is used after the name or without a name. For example,

Smith was a second lieutenant.

The goal is to make first sergeant.

See also AP Style Military Units. Millions, Billions, Trillions Dollars:

Use a figure-word combination.

1 million people, not one million

$2 billion, not two billion

Also note no hyphen linking numerals and the word million, billion, or trillion.

See also AP Style Millions, Billions, Trillions Dollars. Monetary Units:

5 cents

$5 bill

8 euros

4 pounds

See also AP Style CentsOdds, Proportions, and Ratios:

9-1 longshot

3 parts cement to 1 part water

a 1-4 chance, but one chance in three

See also AP Style Betting Odds, AP Style Proportions, and AP Style Ratios.Rank:

He was my No. 1 choice.

Note abbreviation for Number. Do not this abbreviation in names of schools or in street addresses. For example,

Public School 19

There is one exception, No. 10 Downing St., which is the residence of Britains prime minister.

School Grades:

Use figures for grades 10 and above.

10th grade

12th grade

Spell out for first though ninth grades.

fourth grade

fifth-grader (note hyphen)

Sequential Designations:

Page 1, Page 20A

They were out of sizes 4 and 5.

Magnitude 6 earthquake

Rooms 3 and 4

Chapter 2

Line 1, but first line

Act 3, Scene 4, but third act, fourth scene

Game 1, but best of seven

See also AP Style Act Numbers, AP Style Chapters, AP Style Earthquakes, AP Style Line Numbers, AP Style Page Numbers, and AP Style Scene Numbers.Political Districts:

Ward 9

9th Precinct

3rd Congressional District

5th U.S. Circuit Court of Appeals

See also AP Style Congressional Districts and AP Style Political Divisions. Recipes:

2 tablespoons to 1 cup of milk

See also AP Style RecipesSpeeds:

7 mph

winds of 5 to 10 mph

winds of 7 to 9 knots

Sports scores, Standings, and Standards:

The Giants defeated the Lions 14-7 (No comma between the team and the score).

In Golf

3 up, but a 3-up lead, led 3-2

a 6-1-2 record (six wins, one loss, two ties)

par 3

5 handicap

5-under-par 67

he was 5 under par (or 5 under with par understood)

In narrative, spell out nine and under except for yard lines in football and individual and team statistical performances.

The ball was on the 5-yard line.

Seventh hole

Three-point play, but a 3-point shot

In statistical performances, hyphenate as a modifier.

He completed 8 of 12 passes.

He made 5 of 6 (shots is understood).

He was 5-for-12 passing.

He had a 3-for-5 day.

He was 3-for-5.

He went 3-for-5 (batting, shooting, passing, etc., is understood).

Temperatures:

Use figures, except zero.

It was 8 degrees below zero or minus 8.

The temperature dropped from 38 to 8 in two hours.

See also AP Style Temperatures.Times:

Use figures for time of day except for noon and midnight.

1 p.m.

10:30 a.m.

5 oclock

8 hours

30 minutes

20 seconds

a winning time of 2:17.3 (two hours, 17 minutes, 3 seconds)

Spell out numbers less than 10 standing alone and in modifiers.

Ill be there in five minutes.

He scored with two seconds left.

An eight-hour day.

The two-minute warning.

See also AP Style Times, AP Style Time Sequences, and Is Noon AM or PM? Votes:

The bill was defeated by a vote of 6 to 4.

-but-

The bill was defeated by a two-vote margin.

Spell out:

At the start of a sentence:

Fifty years was a long time to wait.

Twenty to 30 cars were involved in the accident.

The only exception is years.

1995 was a very good year.

See also AP Style Years.In indefinite and casual uses:

Thanks a million!

He walked a quarter of a mile.

One at a time

A thousand clowns

One day we will know

An eleventh-hour decision

Dollar store

In fanciful usage or proper names:

Chicago Seven

Fab Four

Big Three automakers

Final Four

The Four Tops

In formal language, rhetorical quotations, and figures of speech:

Fourscore and seven years ago

Twelve Apostles

Ten Commandments

High-five

Day One

In fractions less than one that are not used as modifiers:

reduced by one-third

he made three-fourth of his shots.

Roman Numerals:

Roman Numerals may be used for wars and to establish personal sequence for people and animals.

World Was I

Native Dancer II

King George V

Pope John Paul II

Also for certain legislative acts (Title IX). Otherwise, use sparingly. Except in formal reference, pro football Super Bowls should be identified by the year, rather than the Roman numerals.

1969 Super Bowl, not Super Bowl III

Ordinals:

Numbers used to indicate order (first, second, 10th, 25th, etc.) are called ordinal numbers. Spell out first through ninth.

fourth grade

first base

the First Amendment

he was second in line

Use figures starting with 10th.

Cardinal Numbers:

Numbers used in counting or showing how many (2, 40, 627, etc.) are called cardinal numbers. The following separate entries additional guidance for cardinal numbers.

AP Style Amendments to the Constitution

AP Style Channel

AP Style Court Names AP Style Decades

AP Style Election Returns

AP Style Fleet

AP Style Formula

AP Style Latitude and Longitude

AP Style Mile

AP Style Parallels

AP Style Proportions

AP Style Serial Numbers

AP Style Telephones Numbers

AP Style Weights

Some other punctuation and usage example for AP Style Numbers,

3 ounces

4-foot-long

4-foot-fence

The senators speech lasted 18 1/2 minutes, she said.

DC-10 but 747B

the 1980s, but the 80s

the House voted 230-205 (fewer than 1,000 votes).

Jimmy Carter outpolled Gerald Ford 40,827,292 to 39,146,157 (more than 1,000 votes).

Carter outpolled Ford 10 votes to 2 votes in Little Junction (to avoid confusion with ratio)

No. 3 choice, but Public School 3

a pay increase of 12-15 percent

-or-

a pay increase of between 12 and 15 percent

-but-

from $12 million to $14 million

a ratio of 2-to-1, a 2-to-1 ratio

1 in 4 voters

seven houses 7 miles apart

He walked 4 miles.

minus 10, zero, 60 degrees

Other Uses:

For uses not covered by these listings, spell out whole numbers below 10, and use figures for 10 and above.

They had three sons and two daughters.

They had a fleet of 10 station wagons and two buses.

In a Series:

Apply the standard guidelines:

They had 11 dogs, five cats, and 90 gerbils.

They had five four-room houses, 10 three-room houses, and 12 10-room houses.

AP Style On

AP Style holds that you should not use on before a date or day of the week when its absence would not lead to confusion, except at the beginning of a sentence. For example,

The conference call will be held Monday.

The president will be inaugurated Jan. 20.

-but-

On Dec. 21, the committee will meet to discuss the issue.

Use on to avoid an awkward juxtaposition of a date and a proper name. For example,

Steve met Susie on Monday.

She told Johnson on Thursday that the appointment was cancelled.

Use on also to avoid any suggestion that a date is the object of a transitive verb. The example,

The Senate killed on Tuesday a bid to raise the debt ceiling.

The House postponed on Thursday budget talks

AP Style Percent

One word. It takes a singular verb when standing alone or when a singular word follows an of construction. For example,

The professor said 60 percent was a failing grade.

He said 70 percent of the membership was there.

It takes a plural verb when a plural word follows an of construction. For example,

He said 50 percent of the members were there.

Use figures for percent and percentages. For example,

5 percent

2.5 percent (use decimal points, not fractions)

10 percent

4 percentage points

For a range, 12 to 15 percent, or between 12 and 15 percent.

For amounts less than 1 percent, precede the decimal with a zero. For example,

Nationwide inflation rose 0.7 percent last year.

AP Style Quotations in the News

AP Style holds that you should never alter quotations even to correct minor grammatical errors or word usage. Casual minor tongue slips may be removed by using ellipses but even that should be done with extreme caution. If there is a question about a direct, either dont use it or ask the speaker to clarify.

If a person in unavailable for comment, detail attempts to reach that person. For example,

Kate was out of the country on business. Johnson did not return phone messages left at the office.Do not use substandard spellings such as gonna or wanna in attempts to convey regional dialects or informal pronunciations, except to help a desired touch or to convey an emphasis by the speaker.

Follow basic writing style and use abbreviations where appropriate, as in No. 1, St., Gov., Sen., and $3.

Full vs. Partial Quotes

In general, avoid fragmentary quotes. If a speakers words are clear and concise, favor the full quote. If cumbersome language can be paraphrased fairly, use an indirect construction, reserving quotation marks for sensitive or controversial passages that must be identified specifically as coming from the speaker.AP STYLE QUIZ ANSWER KEY:

AP QUIZ 1

QUIZ 2

QUIZ 3

1. a

1. byline

1. north

2. Dr.

2. 5 cents

2. Brights disease

3. a.m.

3. Wheel of Fortune

3. Earth

4. Road

4. Corp.

4. editor-in-chief

5. 15

5. counties

5. is

6. Minn

6. crises

6. email

7. Army

7. Band-Aid

7. ensure

8. Ambassador

8. break up

8. FAQ

9. Bible

9. effect

9. farther

10. broadcast

10. dependent

10. fliers

QUIZ 4

QUIZ 5

QUIZ 6

1. full-length

1. like

1. noon

2. its

2. livable

2. online

3. Ill.

3. longtime

3. more than

4. into

4. badly damaged

4. People

5. Internet

5. Time

5. Percent

6. U.S. circuit judge

6. media

6. Mother Nature

7. Kan.

7. Memorial

7. pianos

8. lies

8. January

8. yours

9. Legislature

9. MP3

9. Jesus

10. businesslike

10. The

10. President

AP QUIZ 7

QUIZ 8

QUIZ 9

1. God

1. Whom

1. 1700s2. reluctant

2. ZIP

2. dietitian3. side by side

3. all right

3. from4. state

4. assemblies

4. one another

5. Teenagers

5. bizarre

5. emigrated6. 205-

6. board of directors

6. Fathers Day7. USA

7. Canvass

7. first lady8. vice president

8. character

8. full-time9. Whos

9. City

9. goodbye

10. who

10. co-workers

10. governor

QUIZ 10

QUIZ 11

QUIZ 12

1. its

1. daughters-in-law

1. King Jr.2. homepage

2. Dr Pepper

2. lain3. 124 W. 23rd St.

3. down-to-earth

3. midsemester4. among

4. further

4. more than

5. Any one

5. fewer

5. 5-year-old6. bad

6. fiance

6. Overall,7. can hardly

7. well

7. peoples8. resident

8. harassed

8. percent9. coequal

9. holdup

9. Q-and-A10. city councils

10. intranet

10. restaurateurAP QUIZ 13

QUIZ 14

QUIZ 15

1. smolder

1. adviser

1. complimentary2. sneaked

2. affected

2. persuaded3. stationery

3. baby boomer

3. passers-by4. 800-555-555

4. backward

4. 4 feet 8 inches

5. that

5. bed-and-breakfast

5. discreet6. U.S.

6. blond

6. $ 650, 0007. website

7. cannon

7. immigrated8. bachelors

8. Capitol

8. widespread9. engineering

9. ninth

9. Rep.

10. accept

10. Chapter 8

10. forecast

QUIZ 16

QUIZ 17

1. forgo

1. fully informed

2. Ga.

2. Fire Department

3. good

3. menswear

4. gospel

4. Mountains

5. Gov.

5. mph

6. gray

6. N.C.

7. $10 million to $12 million7. offline

8. inquiry

8. off

9. Kansas City, Mo.

9. OK

10. news conference

10. pouring

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