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Alexander Dieguez
Professor Wright
ENC 3331
October 14, 2015
Analysis of the Problem
Imagine yourself caught within the maelstrom that is finals week in Fall. You are
currently taking twelve credit hours, participating in several school clubs, and holding a part-
time job. You have four finals within this week, and the only spare time you possess is dedicated
to long, drawn out hours of cramming information, sleep deprivation, and setting a personal
record for the longest binge of caffeinated beverages to date. In the midst of such dread and
anxiety, a friend offers you an alternative to your suffering: Adderall. It all begins with a
minimal dosage in order to “focus” more when studying; however, after reading your final
grades- all of which are beyond initial expectations- you acquire an affinity towards the drug.
You begin using Adderall for every test beyond this point. Eventually, the accomplishment of
any task that involves a considerable amount of focus is reinforced by this substance; and, the
initial dose of 10 mg transcends into a gargantuan dose of 30 mg. As your life continues to
descend a spiral, the tasks you once performed via shear willpower and dedication become
impossible without the support of the stimulant. As you sit down in your small, rigid chair within
the darkness of your own room, and search for the cause of your self-destruction, you realize the
mistake you made several semesters ago on a cold, winter day: the beginning of your addiction
to Adderall.
Adderall initially began as an FDA-approved drug named “Obetrol” that was meant to act
as a weight-loss supplement in efforts to treat obesity in the 1960’s (Drabs). Due to a lack in
interest and profit, the drug was sold to Richwood, where it became Adderall in 1996 and
approved by the FDA to treat ADHD. It was introduced as an instant-release capsule, and later as
an extended release. The two variants possess the same amphetamine-based ingredients as well
as identical compositions, and only differ in the time it takes for the drug to release. The drug is
made p of four active ingredients: dextroamphetamine saccharate, dextroamphetamine sulfate,
and amphetamine aspartate monchydrate, and amphetamine sulfate- all of which make up about
a fourth of the drug. The active ingredients are what grant Adderall its prominent effects towards
ADHD, which is a neurological condition related to the brain’s chemistry and anatomy.
Ironically, amphetamines are listed as Schedule II Drugs under the Controlled Substance Act,
which correlates to high risk for abuse (PBS).
As a student here at the University of Central Florida, you most likely were around
Adderall at some point during your college experience. Whether it was in direct contact with it,
or indirectly such as through an observation of a friend who is on it- you have to at least
acknowledge that a lot of students take the drug illicitly. According to the CNN article “Just say
yes? The rise of 'study drugs' in college,” full-time college students were twice as likely to have
illicitly consumed Adderall than non-full-time students, a statistic published by a National
Survey on Drug Use and Health report written in 2009. As numbers vary significantly by school,
the greatest proportion of users is found in privatized institutions; in fact, these numbers are
estimated to rise up to even be about 30% of students using stimulants non-medically. According
to the article, about 90% of users utilize the stimulant for the purpose of concentrating while
studying (Yannes).
On Monday October 19, 2015, I stood outside the Student Union to ask random students
of all backgrounds if they had consumed Adderall illicitly at least once in the last three months. I
had questioned twenty-four students anonymously after explaining my project to them. Of the
twenty-four students, thirteen admitted to using Adderall, two admitted to using similar
stimulants, and the remaining nine claimed to have not touched a stimulant illicitly in the past
several months. Thus, about 54.2% of the students I randomly surveyed admitted to abusing
Adderall. Although this is not the most accurate depiction of our entire community’s stimulant
abuse, it is still an alarming statistic that represents a randomly selected sample of members of
this society.
In order to better understand the problem in our own community, we must understand the
science behind the drug. According to Dr. Edward Hallowell, a psychiatrist and ADHD expert,
stimulants such as Adderall "strengthen the brain's brakes, its inhibitory capacities, so it can
control its power more effectively. They do this by increasing the amount of certain
neurotransmitters, like dopamine, epinephrine, and norepinephrine. Despite popular speculation,
there are numerous consequences to using this drug. Short-term adverse consequences include
sleep difficulties, restlessness, headaches, irritability and depressed feelings. Other
effects include loss of appetite, nervousness, and changes in sex drive. The long term risk of
psychological and physical dependence is of concern for routine users that may find they do not
feel they can function optimally without it. Schedule II substances are classified by the DEA as
having a high potential for abuse.
Despite the numerous studies of the dangers of Adderall, a 2008 study conducted by Dr.
Alan DeSantis- a professor of communication at the University of Kentucky- showed that
approximately 81% of the 1,800 college students interviewed thought the use of Adderall is
either “not dangerous at all” or “slightly dangerous.” This ignorance right here, is the very root
of our problem at the University of Central Florida. Thus, now that I understand the popular
belief amongst students, I can move the endeavor towards rhetorical theory- Campbell’s
persuasive continuum to be exact.
As they already hold a solidified position of their own, I must begin the continuum from
the initial threshold- introducing to them a virtual experience. This experience will require
statistics, personal testimony, and perhaps visualized rhetoric so that they can relate to the
disturbing dangers revolving around the drug. The first few pages of the brochure or flier of
some kind can do just that, which will introduce to the audience the harsh reality of illicit drug
abuse. If they are open-minded to the experience, I can transition into altering their perspective
on using the drug, by introducing the option to use other alternatives that are perfectly legal and
safe to one’s health. This will be on the back of the brochure that I make.
Works Cited
Drabs, Julia. "Drugs for Treatment of Attention-Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder." (2005): n. pag. Faculty.smu.edu. Web. 25 Oct. 2015.
"A Social History of America's Most Popular Drugs." (2007) PBS. PBS, n.d. Web. 28 Oct. 2015.
Yannes, Arianna. "Just Say Yes? The Rise of 'Study Drugs' in College." CNN. N.p., 18 Apr. 2014. Web.