extreme makeover: story edition now… story right your

Extreme Makeover:

Story

Edition

now…storyright

Your

Your story after extreme makeover!

1. Knock down unneeded information

Make sure thateverything said is thereFor a reason.Is the authorgoing on andon aboutnothing?

Questions to ask yourself:“Is this information necessary for my understanding of the plot? the

character(s)? the conflict(s)?”

2. Lay the foundation with an awesome beginning and ending.

Questions to ask yourself:Introduction:

Does the beginningmake you wantto continue reading?

Does it have a “hook”?Does it create questions?Does is give a little andwithhold a little?

Conclusion:

Does my endingleave my reader with a deeper understanding of what he or she just read?

Does my reader walk away still thinking about my story?

Characters

Conflicts

Setting

3. Build up places where information is lacking or more context is needed.

(Show; don’t tell.)

Questions to ask yourself:Will my reader know what I mean here?

Is this information that my reader may not know yet?

Might this confuse someone who is not inside my head?

Am I only skimming the surface here?

*Are there specialized terms

that my reader

needs defined for

him or her? Are

there special

places that I need

to “paint” for my

reader?

4. Spruce it up with descriptive words, action verbs, and varied sentence lengths

and styles!

Questions to ask yourself:Is the writer using diction that is vivid, descriptive, and fresh?(As opposed to “blank” words)

Is the writer merely telling you something, or is he/she showing you by painting detailed language-pictures and vivid dialogue?

Do the sentences all ‘feel’ the same? Do they feel like they are putting the reader to sleep with their monotony?

5. Transport things from one place to another

Questions to ask yourself:Is there good information that just doesn’t see to fit where it is currently placed?

Is there something you wish you had known sooner?

Is there something you think should be saved until later?

Recap and symbols for editing!1. (D) = delete unnecessary information.

2. (B/E) = Beginning or ending needs attention.

3. (A) = Add more inplaces where information is lacking or more context is needed.

4. (S) = Spruce it up with description and variation!

5. (M) = Move to anotherplace.