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Travel Journals4th Grade

Heather BarnesKatie Waller

ECED 4300 CDr. Tonja Root

Prewriting & Drafting

forTravel Journals

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Prewriting & DraftingGeorgia Performance StandardsGPS:ELA4W1 The student produces writing that

establishes an appropriate organizational structure, sets a context and engages the reader, maintains a coherent focus throughout, and signals a satisfying closure. The student

a. Selects a focus, an organizational structure, and a point of view based on

purpose, genre expectations, audience, length, and format requirements.

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Prewriting & DraftingPrimary Learning OutcomePLO:

The students will be able to begin the writing process by choosing a topic to focus on and begin to generate ideas and thoughts onto paper and will be able to write at an appropriate length for the Travel Journal.

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Form of WritingTravel Journals

Students will be taking turns taking home a bag which contains a variety items dealing with vacation and a journal. Such as:Travel BrochuresMapsPostcards

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Form of Writing

Travel JournalsAt home students will decide

where they will visit on vacation, write a story about their vacation, and illustrate their story using art materials.

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Form of Writing

Travel JournalsStudents will return the bag with

the journal the next day for another student to take home.

Entries from the journal will be shared with the whole once a week.

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Stage of Writing

Prewriting and DraftingThe students will complete a blank graphic

organizer, which will come with the journal.The students will be able to organize their

thought before putting their ideas in the journal.

The students will complete a draft of their journal.

Graphic Organizer

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Show and Explain ModelParish, Peggy (1985).

Amelia bedelia goes camping. HarperCollins Publishers.

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Show and Explain ModelThis example shows students possibilities

about what they can write about in their travel journals

The example is rather in depth but will open up the students eyes to the possibilities they can write about

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Published Piece

APA CitationMoss, M. (1997). Amelia hits the road. Berkeley

: Tricycle.

Link to Excerpt http://www.amazon.com/gp/reader/1562477900

/ref=sib_dp_pt#reader-link

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Practice ActivityAs a class the students will decide on a

location as to where they would like to travel anywhere in the world.

The students will to fill out a Graphic Organizer as a class on the overhead projector

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Assessment ActivityEach student will be given a blank

Graphic Organizer to complete on their own.

The students will pick a dream location where they would like to travel, rather then the location they completed as a class.

Revising and Editingfor

Travel Journals

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Revising & EditingGeorgia Performance Standards

ELA4W1 The student produces writing that establishes an appropriate organizational structure, sets a context and engages the reader, maintains a coherent focus throughout, and signals a satisfying closure. The student

b. Writes texts of a length appropriate to address the topic or tell the story.

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Revising & Editing Primary Learning Outcome

The students will be able to write an appropriate length text and once completed writing the student will re-read the story and make any corrections, additions, or deletions if needed to better their writing.

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Form of Writing

Travel JournalsStudents will be taking turns taking home

a bag which contains a variety items dealing with vacation and a journal. Such as:Travel BrochuresMapsPostcards

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Form of WritingTravel Journals

At home students will decide where they will visit on vacation, write a story about their vacation, and illustrate their story using art materials.

Students will return the bag with the journal the next day for another student to take home.

Entries from the journal will be shared with the whole once a week.

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Stage of Writing

Revising and EditingOnce the students have completed the

prewriting and drafting stage, they will go back and re-read their story.

The students will make any additions, corrections, or deletions in order to better their story.

The student will write a final copy of their journal into the “Travel Journal”.

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Show and Explain Model

Keller, L (1998). The scrambled states of america. New York, New York: Henry Holt and Company.

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Show and Explain Model

The teacher will share this text with the students.

The teacher will explain to the students that there are several places in the world to travel, even throughout the United States.

This will help the students to add information and detail into their writing.

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Published Piece

APA CitationBierman, C. (1998). Journey to Ellis Island. Tor

onto: Madison Press.

Link to Excerpt http://www.amazon.com/gp/reader/B0000AA9K

7/ref=sib_dp_pt#reader-link

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Practice Activity

The teacher will present the students with an example of a Travel Journal that contains errors and needs additions, corrections, and deletions, on the overhead.

As a group the students will make additions, corrections, and deletions in order to better the story.

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Assessment Activity

The students will be given a short example of a journal writing. On their own, the students will make additions, corrections, and deletions.

Once completed the students will share their ideas with the class.

The teacher will remind the students that there is not one right answer and there can be several ways to revise and edit.