as 11 fixed draft 7. part 4
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Opening Sequence HSanel and Kaya
Draft 3 (Thriller)
• Laura walks into her room and puts 2 dolls into closet
• She calls someone and starts hearing noises from the closet and opens it to nothing inside as something runs behind her
• She runs to the sofa and hides under blanket when closet doors open in a sudden
• She sees the dolls hanging inside and takes them down
• She gets trapped inside the closet and lights a lighter to 2 girls behind her
How we have improved from our last opening sequence to our new one
• We have improved our opening sequence by actually building up tension towards the end and creating a thriller and scary vibe for the audience to make sure they have some kind of reaction and to get them off the edge of their seats.
• We fully researched and revised about spirits and how to thrill people so we improved our understanding and knowledge making sure we make an effective opening sequence.
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Sanel
How are we contributing?
• We are all contributing by meeting up every Thursday and Friday to discuss our ideas and making sure our idea’s match up and make sense to us and to our target audience so everything won’t be confusing.
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Kaya
HWhole FilmDraft 4 (Thriller)
• Laura moves into a new house to find its haunted by 2 girl maids
• Her life is disturbed by these two maids who threaten her
• She researches the house history to find they died in the closet in her room and the film goes into the past
• She tries to free the spirits
• She moves house thinking the sprits are free and she moves our but they are still there
Opening Sequence HKaya
• Laura walk home from purchasing a ghost book
• She sets up table for possession
• She hears noises and goes through paranormal phenomena throughout
• They push her into the closet
• Screen goes black to sudden when the ghost are behind her
Draft 4 (Thriller)
Kaya
HWhole FilmDraft 5 (Thriller)
• Laura moves into a new house to find its haunted by 2 girl maids
• Her life is disturbed by these two maids who threaten her
• She researches the house history to find they died in the closet in her room and the film goes into the past
• She tries to free the spirits
• She moves house thinking the sprits are free and she moves our but they are still there
Kaya
HWhole FilmDraft 5 (Thriller)
• Laura moves into a new house to find its haunted by 2 girl maids
• Her life is disturbed by these two maids who threaten her
• She researches the house history to find they died in the closet in her room and the film goes into the past
• She tries to free the spirits
• She moves house thinking the sprits are free and she moves our but they are still there
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Rahel
Time Scene Type of shots Description Props/costumes needed
0-3ec Laura outside walking down the stairs (1)
• Establishing shot Laura walking down the steps
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
4-7sec Laura still walking down the stairs half way (2)
• Long shot Laura walking half way down the steps
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper
/book/matches
8-10sec Laura finished walking down the stairs and now walking on the pavement (3)
• Full-body shot Laura walking on the pavement
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
11-13sec Laura walking (4) • Establishing shot Laura walking on thepavement
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
14-15sec Just see Laura’s feet (5) • Close-up shot A close-up shot of laura feet .
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
Shot list Final Draft
Time Scene Type of shots Description Props/costumes needed
16-18sec You just see Laura walking from her side (6)
• Full body shot Laura walking . • Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
19-21sec Laura walks to the door (7) • Full body shot Laura is walking to her house
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper
/book/matches
22 Laura enters the house (10) •¾ body shot Laura comes in from the other sideof the door
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
23-25 Laura starts walking to her bedroom (11)
•Mid shot She starts walking up the stairs
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
26 You just see her hands (12) Close-up shot She opens her bedroom door
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
Shot list Final Draft
Time Scene Type of shots Description Props/costumes needed
27-28 She walks into her bedroom (13)
•A full body shot She enters into her bedroom
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
29 She walks to her shelf (16)
•Mid shot She goes and grabs a box
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper
/book/matches
30 She grabs the box (17) •Mid shot she holds the box in her hand
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
31-32 She walks to table (18) •Full body shot See her takes things out of the box
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
Shot list Final Draft
Time Scene Type of shots Description Props/costumes needed
33-36 She then starts to pray (21)
•Mid shot She prays and something happens to her
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
37-38 You just see her eyes (22)
•Extreme close up You see her eyes going weird
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper
/book/matches
39-45 She begins to write something (23)
•Close up shot Something inside her grabs the pen and write something on paper
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
46-48 Laura is scared (24) •Full body shot After she see’s what was on the paper she gets scared
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
49 She stares at something (25)
•Establish shot She stares at the cupboard
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
Shot list Final Draft
Time Scene Type of shots Description Props/costumes needed
50-51 The candle lights blow out (26)
• Extreme close up Candles light goes out.
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
52-53 She gets scared (27) • Close-up shot She gets scared when the candle blows out itself
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper
/book/matches
54-55 The candle lights blows out. (28)
• Extreme close-up Candle light goes out
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
56 She gets scared (29) • Close-up shot She gets scared when the candle blows out itself
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
57 The candle lights blows out. (30)
• Extreme close-up Candle light goes out
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
Shot list Final Draft
Time Scene Type of shots Description Props/costumes needed
58 She gets scared (31) • Close-up shot She gets scared when the candle blows out itself
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
59 The candle lights blow out (32)
• Extreme close up Candles light goes out.
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper
/book/matches
60-64 She walks to the closet (34)
• Full body shot She walks to the cupboard slowly
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
65 Then she reaches to the cupboard (35)
• ¾ shot She stands in front of thecupboard
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
66 You only see her hands (36)
• Close-up shot She places her hands to the closet handles.
• Black cardigan• Red skirt• White top• Pen/candles/paper/
book/matches
Shot list Final Draft
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