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Team 5 Adobe Creative Store Proposalby Doris Hung

WORD COUNT 6201

CHARACTER COUNT 31619

TIME SUBMITTED 12-MAR-2013 12:21PM

PAPER ID 311589879


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Good the get this upfront


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You could have gone for insight by considering how sensemaking might or might not havesupported your approach or what you found.

This is research, but not experimentation. Fine for a first round in a broader piece of research, butkeep in mind that experiments have "manipulations" that you then compare against a before stateand/or a control.

This is your "pilot study."


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Clear

Nice use of this concept


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good, resolves my concern from above


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Good to see that this is what they are doing

Good connection


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At least for the brush part, not really "big data." They probably have usagedata even now (fairly structured if using, not using). Might get to big data ifthey start tracking the full developmental process. Think of the 3Vs when

you want to check big or not.


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Good application


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These next sections take you from a good paper to a very good paper.


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What I like about this is that you found an easy way to judge interest - in the audience's "space"

Good to raise these issues

Reasonable issues to raise. In terms of presentation,better to break into several paragraphs.

You've demonstrated careful thought in this paper - and creativity. Complete, professionally

presented, good logical flow. Next step, highlight your key insight and provide clear &focused justification. Be willing to say, "this is what is unique and valuable here"


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FINAL GRADE

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GENERAL COMMENTS

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Text Comment.Text Comment. Good the get this upfront

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Text Comment.Text Commen t. You could have gone for insight by considering how sensemaking might or might not have supportedyour approach or what you found.

Text Comment.Text Commen t. This is research, but not experimentation. Fine for a first round in a broader piece of research, but keein mind that experiments have "manipulations" that you then compare against a before state and/or a control.

Text Comment.Text Comment. This is your "pilot study."

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Text Comment.Text Comme nt. Clear

Text Comment.Text Comment. Nice use of this concept

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Text Comment.Text Comment. good, resolves my concern from above

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Text Comment.Text Commen t. Good to see that this is what they are doing

Text Comment.Text Comment. Good connection

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Text Comment.Text Commen t. At least for the brush part, not really "big data." They probably have usage data even now (fairlystructured if using, not using). Might get to big data if they start tracking the full developmental process. Think of the 3Vswhen you want to check big or not.

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Text Comment.Text Comment. Good application

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Text Comment.Text Commen t. These next sections take you from a good paper to a very good paper.

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Text Comment.Text Commen t. What I like about this is that you found an easy way to judge interest - in the audience's "space"


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Text Comment.Text Comment. Good to raise these issues

Text Comment.Text Commen t. Reasonable issues to raise. In terms of presentation, better to break into several paragraphs.

Text Comment.Text Commen t. You've demonstrated careful thought in this paper - and creativity. Complete, professionally presentedgood logical flow. Next step, highlight your key insight and provide clear & focused justification. Be willing to say, "this iswhat is unique and valuable here"

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