academic writing sample task 1

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Academic Writing Sample Task 1 #80You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in

Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at theend of next year.

Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

Write at least 150 words.


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model answer 1:

The bar chart shows the estimated sales of jeans in thousands of pairs for two companies in Turkeynext year.

It is anticipated that purchases of jeans at Mango Co. will rise from 150,000 pairs in January toapproximately 500,000 pairs in August, and will remain there until November. For December, salesare expected to be in the region of 600,000 pairs.

Meanwhile, it is estimated that the sales of jeans for Jack & Jones Co. will begin the year at around450,000 pairs in January, falling to about 250,000, before increasing to around 400,000 in June. Forthe next two months until August, sales are forecast to remain steady at this level, after which theyare expected to rise steadily to hit a peak of approximately 900,000 pairs in December.

The pie chart shows that, at the end of next year, the anticipated market share for Mango Co. andJack & Jones Co. is 20% and 30% respectively.

As can be seen from the chart, the overall sales trends for both companies are forecast to be

upwards.

(178 words)

model answer 2:

The bar chart shows the predicted sales of jeans in thousands of pairs for two companies in Turkey;Mango Co. and Jack & Jones Co. for next year.

The most striking feature is that sales will increase for both companies, It is anticipated that sales ofJack & Jones Co. will start at 450,000 pairs in January decreasing by 200,000 pairs following monthwith a gradual recover over the subsequent four months reaching 400,000 pairs in June. Those ofJack & Jones Co. are predicted to be stable until August peaking up to 600,000 pairs in Septemberand October.

Sales of Jack & Jones will reach a peak of 900,000 in December, For those of Mango Co. isforecasted a gradual increase with the largest sale of 600,000 pairs in December. In the beginning ofthe next year those of Mango Co. will stand at 150,000 pairs falling back to 100,000 pairs in February,rising steadily to 250,000 in June, In subsequent months sales will reach 450,000 pairs increasing to500,000 pairs in August, staying stable until November,

Regarding the pie chart the sales of Jack & Jones Co. will share 30% of market whereas those of

Mango Co. 20%. 50% of market is set to be shared by other companies.

(211 words)

This answer would probably exceed Band 8


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The table below shows the monthly expenditure of an average Australian family in 1991 and

2001.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant.


1991 2001

Australian Dollar Per Month

Food 155 160

Electricity and Water 75 120

Clothing 30 20

Housing 95 100

Transport 70 45

Other goods and services* 250 270

Total 675 715

*Other goods and services: non-essential goods and services

model answer:

The table shows changes in the spending patterns of an average Australian household between 1999and 2001. In general, Australian household spending was high in 2001 than in 1991 but the differencewas not significant (AUD $715 per month and AUD $675 per month respectively).

The amount of monthly spending on electricity and water saw a dramatic increase over the 10-yearperiod from $75 to $120. Yet in terms of the expenditure on non-essential goods and services, therising trend was less obvious with a minor increase of $20. At the same time, the amount of moneyspent on food and housing rose only slightly from $155 to $160 and $95 to $100 respectively.

However, there was a decrease in expenditure on the other two items. Australians spent one thirdless on clothing, which fell from $30 to $20. Similarly, expenditure on transport dropped from $70 in1991 to $45 in 2001.

It seems that food and other goods and services were the two biggest items of expenditure.Altogether, they accounted for more than half of the total household spending. By comparison,Australians spent little on dressing up.

(188 words)


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Academic Writing Sample Task 1 #78

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pie charts below show electricity generation by source in New Zealand and Germany in

1980 and 2010.



Electricity Generation by Source in New Zealand

Electricity Generation by Source in Germany


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model answer:

The charts compare the sources of electricity in New Zealand and Germany in the years 1980 and2010. Between these years, electricity generation almost doubled, rising from 127 units to 200 in NewZealand, and from 107 to 214 units in Germany.

In 1980 New Zealand used coal as the main electricity source (56 units) and the remainder wasproduced from natural gas, hydro power (each producing 30 units) and petroleum (which producedonly 11 units). By 2010, coal had become the fuel for more than 75% of electricity produced and onlyhydro continued to be another significant source supplying approximately 20%.

In contrast, Germany used coal as a source for only 28 units of electricity in 1980, which was matchedby natural gas. The remaining 49 units were produced largely from petroleum and nuclear power, withhydro contributing only 7 units. But by 2010 nuclear power, which was not used at all in New Zealand,had developed into the main source, producing almost 75% of electricity, at 155 units, while coal andpetroleum together produced only 55 units. Other sources were no longer significant.

Overall, it is clear by 2010 these two countries relied on different principal fuel sources: New Zealand

relied on coal and Germany on nuclear power.

(210 words)


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The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994

and 2007.



model answer:

The graph shows the estimated maximum population of elephants in a range of Asian countries inboth 1997 and 2004.

In most of the countries included in the graph, the population fell. This was most noticeable inMalaysia and Thailand, where the number of elephants was thought to be less than half the figure in1997. In the former, the number of elephants dropped as low as 1000. India remained the countrywith by far the largest elephant population, but experienced a dramatic fall in numbers so that in 2004there may have been as few as 7500. Despite its size, China had a very small population of at most500 elephants by 2004.

Although the trend was downwards overall, elephant populations were thought to have remainedstable in Laos and Vietnam at approximately 1200. The only country where elephants showed signsof recovering was Cambodia, where numbers may have risen by up to 200.

(155 words)


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The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010.



model answer:

The chart shows the annual GDP growth for three countries from 2007 to 2010. By the year 2007 thefigure for Tunisia was by far the highest at close to 6.3% per annum.This figure is double that of Ecuador and three times that of Japan on a global level.

However by 2008 this trend has changed considerably; the Japanese doubled their annual GDP overthis period and there was also an increase in the GDP of Ecuador, while Tunisia fell to 4.5% per year.

In 2009 and 2010, the downward trend for Tunisia continued falling to a low of 3% at the end of thisperiod.

For Ecuador, the GDP fell sharply to just under 1.5% in the year 2009 and rose only slightly in 2010 to2.3%. ON the other hand, for Japan, the GDP figure rose significantly throughout this time and by theyear 2010 had more than matched the GDP figures for Tunisia of the year 2007.

(162 words)


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Adjective or Adverb?

Complete the answer by filling the gaps with an adverb or adjective from the box below.

dramatic dramatically impressive impressively

slight slightly steady steadily

sharp sharply steep steeply

The world population grew dramaticallybetween 1960 and 2000.

The world population experienced a dramaticgrowth between 1960 and 2000.


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European City Tourism showed an impressivegrowth of 50% for three consecutive years from 2006to 2008.

European City Tourism grew impressivelyby 50% for three consecutive years from 2006 to 2008.

Diesel consumption showed a slightincrease between 2010 and 2011.

Diesel consumption increased slightlybetween 2010 and 2011.


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Consumption of chocolate fell steadilybetween 1970 and 2010.

There was a steadyfall in consumption of chocolate between 1970 and 2010.

Worldwide sales of CD-ROM drives climbed steeplyduring the first half of the year before falling

sharplyin August.

There was a steepclimb in worldwide sales of CD-ROM drives during the first half of the year before

a sharpfall in August.


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The chart below shows the percentage of total US population aged 65 and over between 1900

and 2000.



model answer:

The chart shows the percentage of total population aged 65 and over in the U.S. between 1900 and2000. In the year 1900 just over 4% of the population was aged over 65. However, by 1960 this figurehad doubled.

The number of people aged between 75 and 84 remained fairly steady between 1900 and 1930,making up only 1-1.3% of the population. The figure began to rise more significantly in 1940 and by1970 it had tripled to reach 3% of the population.

Although there was no change in the number of people aged 65 -74 between 1960 and 1970, thenumber of people aged 75 and over increased during this time. By the year 2000, 12.4% of the USpopulation had reached the age of 65 or more, although this was slightly lower than in 1990 when itpeaked at 12.6%.

The chart shows that today people in the U.S. can expect to live longer than in 1900. By the year2000 more than 12% of the population had managed to live to the age of 65 and over compared toonly 4.1% in 1900.

(187 words)


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The chart below shows male and female fitness membership between 1970 and 2000.



model answer:

The chart shows male and female fitness membership over a thirty-year period. The vertical axisrepresents the number of members. The horizontal axis represents the period from 1970 to 2000.

Overall, the chart indicates that there were greater fluctuations in fitness membership among menthan among women. The number of male members started the period at just over two thousand andreached highs of four thousand in 1975 and five thousand around 1995. The lowest rates were in1985 and more recently in 2000 when the rate dipped as low as one thousand.

Female fitness membership began lower at one thousand, doubled by 1975, and then fluctuatedbetween two and three thousand for the remainder of the period. When male rates were at theirlowest, female rates were higher. This was particularly true in 1985 when over three thousand womenheld fitness membership.

In brief, there were marked differences in rates of male and female fitness memberships in the periodcovered.

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Complete the answer by filling the gaps with a word or phrase from the box below.

steadily hovering trend meanwhile

rocketed fluctuated peak plummeted

period

The chart shows the average daily viewing figures for Channel One News over a 12-month period.

The figure for the 1pm News remained fairly stable, hoveringat around 1.3 million throughout the

year. The figure for the 6pm News began the year at 4.8 million. It fluctuated, but the general trendwas downwards, and it ended the year at 3.4 million.

The figure for the 9:30 News gradually increased from 3.2 million viewers per day in January to a

peakof 3.8 million in May. However, this month saw the introduction of the 11pm News, and the

figure for the 9:30 News plummeted, hitting a low-point of 1.1 million in August. In the same period,

the figure for the 11pm news rocketedfrom 0.2 million to 4.1 million. At this point, the trend reversed.

From August onwards, the figure for the 9:30 news grew steadily, reaching 3 million by the end of the

year. Meanwhile, the figure for the 11pm News declined sharply, and in December fell below the 1million mark.


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The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in

other countries.



model answer:

The chart shows the challenges people face when they settle in a new country and how thechallenges vary according to peoples ages.

The most challenging aspect for young people aged 18 to 34 is making new friends, a problemexperienced by 46% of the people in this age group. However, only 36% of 35 - 54 year olds find ithard to make friends, while even fewer people over 55 (23%) have this problem.

54% of the older age group finds learning the local language the biggest obstacle when settling. Incomparison, the youngest age group finds this easier, and the percentage of people who haveproblems learning the language is much lower, at only 29%.

In contrast to their language-learning difficulties, only 22% of people in the oldest age group havetrouble finding accommodation. However, this is the second most significant problem for the other twoage groups with 39% to 40% of the people in each group finding it hard.

In general, all age groups experience the same problems to some extent, but people over the age of55 reported that they face markedly fewer challenges settling in a new country than their youngerrespondents.

(198 words)


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Academic Writing Sample Task 1 #70The charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinemaadmission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006.

Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below.

You should write at least 150 words.

Sources: Admission data: BFI, Motion Picture Distributors Association of Australia (MPDAA).


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Vocabulary in the reportRead this sample report and fill each space by choosing one of the words in the box.

accounted

compared

dropped

stood

fell

increased

opposed

predominated

recovered

Chart (A) shows the cinema industrys share of the Australian and UK cinema market by origin in

2001. In both countries, films made in the United States predominatedwith 77% of the market in the

UK comparedto 67% in Australia. UK films accountedfor 21% of the UK cinema market and 6% ofthe Australian market. On the other hand, while 11% of the films shown in Australia were Australian,no Australian films were shown in the UK. Films from other countries had 16% of the market share in

Australia as opposed/comparedto just 2% in the UK.

Chart (B) shows cinema admissions in the UK and Australia since 1976. In both countries cinema

admissions dropped/fellin the early 1980s. In Australia admissions fell/droppedfrom just under 40million in 1980 to about 30 million in 19846 while in the UK the decrease was far more dramatic(from 100 million in 1980 to less than 60 million in 1984). Since then, however, the industry has

recoveredin both countries. In 2001, cinema admissions in the UK stoodat over 150 million,whereas in Australia they reached 90 million.

Overall, the charts show that the cinema has increasedin popularity in both countries over the last 15years, but that the origins of the films projected in Australia are more diverse than in the UK.


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The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical

days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in anaverage English home.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features andmake comparisons where relevant.



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model answer:

The Demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer is

illustrated in the graph. The use of electricity in an average English home is shown in thepie chart. From the graph it is generally obvious that the demand is in its maximum

around 2100 in winter times and in its minimum around 400 being almost constantbetween 1200 and 2100 in winter times. During summer times on the other hand the

demand reaches its top point around 1300 and the bottom point around 900 beingalmost constant between 1550 and 2000.

In wither times the curve gradually increases to reach 40000 units of electricity by 3oclock in the morning. This is followed by gradual decline to its lowest limit of 30000units at 9 oclock. A gradual rise is obvious again to reach a stationary level between 3oclock and 9 oclock of about 40000 units again. Then there is a sharp rise in the next

hour to reach its maximum before collapsing again to a lower level by the end of theday.

In summer time the curve gradually decrease to reach its lower limit around 9 oclock ofa bit more that 10000 units. A gradual increase is noticed to reach its top of 20000 afterwhich a stationary phase is obvious between 3 oclock and 10 oclock at night of about15000 units.

The pie chart on the other hand shows that 52.5% of the electricity is used for heatingrooms and water. 17.5% is consumed for ovens kettles and washing machines 15% isused in lighting TV and radio and finally 15% is consumed in the sue of vacuum cleanersfood mixtures and electric tools.

(285 words)



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The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different

levels of school education.

Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shownbelow.You should write at least 150 words.

model answer:

The chart shows the number of female students per 100 male students in primary,secondary and tertiary education.

On Average, more boys than girls were enrolled in school both in 1990 and 1998 in allthe countries, except in tertiary education in developed countries. The number of girlsper 100 boys was bigger in 1998 than in 1990 in the two country groups and in all the

educational stages.

Turning to the detail, there were more boys than girls in primary and secondary

education. As can be seen, developing countries saw a bigger discrepancy between thenumbers of male and female students than developed countries, with the number of girlsper 100 boys at 83 in 1990 and 87 in 1998 in primary education.

However, in developed countries, the balance of the two was much closer to the ideal,particularly in secondary education, with 98 girls per 100 boys in 1990 and 99 in 1998.

Regarding tertiary education, the balance was even worse than in any other levels of

education in developing countries with 66 girls enrolled for every 100 boys in 1990 and75 in 1998. On the other hand, in developing countries, the number of girls overtookthat of boys at 105 per 100 boys in 1990 and 112 in 1998. (213 words)



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The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between

March 1993and March 1999.

Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shownbelow.


model answer:

According to the results of the labor-force research published recently, the followingconclusions can be drawn from it:

In March, 1993, United States had seven percent of their workforce which might notseem disastrous until compared with Japan, where 2.5% were unemployed. However,the unemployment rate in United States began declining slowly since March 1993, and

reached 5% mark in the middle of 1996. Japan turned out to be less lucky, as theirunemployment rate doubled in three years. From then on, the percentage ofunemployed workforce in United States remained roughly the same about 5% until

March 99, although there were minor falls and rises in the unemployment rate.

As for Japan, the percentage of unemployed fell rapidly by 0.50.6% after March 1996,but from summer 1996 and onwards it grew steadily and without any falls to reach 5.0%

boundary in March 1999.

The major conclusion that Ive drawn using the graph, is that number of unemployed inUSA decreased by about 2.0% in the course of six years, while in Japan it actuallyincreased by 2.5% percent. As a result, in March 99, both Japan and US had about 5%of their work force unemployed.

(198 words)


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EXAMINERS EXPLANATION

Band 7

This is a good account of the information presented in the graph, although occasionally theorganisation of the data is slightly unusual. The writer grasps all the key points, however, and

supports these with figures, before providing a summary of the main points. Sentence structures aremore than adequate, although the writer has some problems with the use of tenses and prepositions.There are minor examples of unsuitable register (e.g. turned out, disastrous, and one contractedverb form), but as there are only a few instances of this, the candidate has not been penalised.


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The tables below give information about the amount of beer and fruit juice consumed per

person per year in different countries.



Beer

Country Amount*

1 Ireland 155 litres

2 Germany 119 litres

3 Austria 106 litres

4 Belgium 98 litres

5 Denmark 98 litres

6 United Kingdom 97 litres

7 Australia 89 litres

8 United States 85 litres

9 Netherlands 80 litres

10 Finland 79 litres

Fruit juice

Country Amount*

1 Canada 52.6 litres

2 United States 42.8 litres

3 Germany 38.6 litres

4 Austria 37.3 litres

5 Sweden 35.5 litres

6 Australia 34.4 litres

7 Finland 33 litres

8 United Kingdom 29.3 litres

9 Netherlands 28.1 litres

10 New Zealand 24.8 litres

*Litres per person per year

model answer:

The tables show the amount of beer and fruit juice consumed per person per year in countries aroundthe world. Beer is most popular in Ireland, with the average Irish drinking 155 litres per year. Germanyranks second with 119 litres per person. In fact, the top six countries in terms of consumption of beerare all European. Australia and The United States come next in seventh and eighth positions, withNetherland and Finland consuming the least beer of the countries mentioned. Finnish people onlydrink an average of 79 litres of beer a year.

The country which consumes by the greatest quantity of fruit juice per capita is Canada. Canadiansdrink an average of 52.6 litres each a year, thats almost double the consumption of New Zealand,which is placed at the bottom of the table. Another North American country, The United States, comesecond in the table, while German drinkers are ranked at number three, consuming an average of38.6 litres annually. Swedes drink approximately the same quantity of fruit juice as Australians, whichis 35.5 litres per year. The Finnish and the British drink 33 and 29.3 litres per year respectively.(194 words)


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The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.


model answer 1:

The graph shows the percentage of audiences over 4 yes old of UK follows the radio and televisionthroughout the day during the period October-December 1992. It has been observed from the graphthat less than 10% audiences follows the radio at 6:00 am and the percentage raised to a pick around30% at 8AM and decline gradually to around 10% during the period 200 to 400 Pm and again raised

a bi t to around 12% between 400 to 600 PM. It then again dropped to below 10% at around 10PM.The rate again raised to a bit between 1000 PM to 1200 PM and then dropped slowly by 400 AM. Onthe other hand, the rate of television audiences raises 0-10% during the period 600 to 800 am andremain steady up to 1 0AM and then gradually goes down by 1200 noon. The pe rcentage raiseddramatically to around 15% by 200 noon. The percentage raised dramatically goes down by 1200noon. The percentage raised dramatically to around 15% by 200 PM which again raised to a pickabove 40% between 600-800 PM and then gradually dropped between the period 1200 PM to 400

AM.

(197 words)


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Band 6

The answer has an appropriate introduction which the candidate has attempted to express in his/herown words. There is good coverage of the data and a brief reference to contrasting trends. The

answer can be followed although it is rather repetitive and cohesive devices are overused. In order togain a higher mark for content, the candidate would be expected to select the salient features of thegraph and comment primarily on these. Sentences are long but lack complexity. There are someerrors in tense, verb form and spelling which interfere slightly with the flow of the answer.

model answer 2:

The blue graph shows the television audiences throughout the day. It shows that the percentage ofaudiences is three percent in early morning but it gradually rises unto ten percent at 8:00 am andmaintains the same for the next two hours. There is a slight fall in percentage in next two hours

however after that it raises sharp unto twenty percent within the next two hours. After this the graphrises very fast and attains its peak at 10 pm which is about forty five percent. The graph gradually fallsdown and at 2:00 am it is at five percent. The red graph shows the percentage for radio audiences.Unlike the television one the peak percentage of the radio audiences is at 8:00 am which is about 30percent. Then it gradually falls and it corresponds with the television one at two pm. After that itgradually falls but with a small increase in percentage at 4:30 to 6:00 pm. The percentage of audiencethen gradually goes down and at four AM it is the lowest which is near 2 percent. These graphs provethe progressive popularity of television.

(191 words)


Band 7

The answer deals well with both the individual media trends and the overall comparison of thesetrends. The opening could be more fully developed with the inclusion of information relating to thegroups studied and the period of time during which the study took place. There is a good variety ofcohesive devices and the message can be followed quite easily although the expression is sometimesa little clumsy. Structures are complex and vocabulary is varied but there are errors in word forms,tense and voice though these do not impede communication.


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The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in threeperiods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time.



model answer 1:

The bar chart illustrates how many males and females have studied in full-time and part-timeeducation in the following years: 1970 to 1971, 1980 to 1981 and 1990 to 1991.

It is clear that in all three time periods more people of both sexes were involved in part-time educationthan fulltime. Overall the number of men in fulltime education rose from approximately 100 thousandto 200 thousand, whereas the number of men in part-time education was lower in the early ninetiesthan twenty years earlier.

As far as women are concerned, the numbers increased in both sectors of education. The number ofpart-time female students increased dramatically from 700 thousand to 1.2 million in the twenty yearperiod. The amount of women in fulltime education went up more gradually from 100 thousand in1971 to just over 200 thousand in 1991. This was similar the increase for fulltime male students.

To sum up, the number of women in both sectors increased significantly while it seems that the rate ofmen entering part-time education decreased a little and was fluctuating.

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model answer 2:

This is a bar chart of the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods. In1970, Most of Men were studying part-time but from 1980, studying part-time as decreased andstudying full-time was increased and in 1990, it was twice as many students as in 1970. On the other

hand, Women studying Full-time were increased and not only Full-time, part-time also wereincreased. In 1990, studying full-time was three times as many students as in 1970. If compare Menand Women, as you see, in 1970, Men were studying more than women full-time or part-time but itchanged from 1980 and then, in 1990, Women were studying part-time more than Men and studyingfull-time was same number.

It shows you women has a high education now.

(132 words)


Band 5

The length of the answer is just acceptable. There is a good attempt to describe the overall trendsbut the content would have been greatly improved if the candidate had included some reference tothe figures given on the graph. Without these, the reader is lacking some important information. Theanswer is quite difficult to follow and there are some punctuation errors that cause confusion. Thestructures are fairly simple and efforts to produce more complex sentences are not successful.

model answer 3:

According to this graph, the number of men and women in farther education in Britain shows thatfollowing pattern.In the case of male, the number of male has declined slightly from about 100 thousands in 1970/71 toabout 850 thousands in 1990/91. However, this figure rose back to about 850 thousands in 1990/91from about 820 thousands in 1980/81. The proportion of full-time education has declined during thisperiod. However, the proportion of part-time education has increased dramatically.On the other hand, in the case of female, the number of both full-time education and part-timeeducation has increased during the period.From about 700 thousands in 1970/71, these figures rose to about 820 thousands in 1980/81, toabout 1100 thousands in 1990/91.In terms of full-time education, this figure rose by about 260 to about 900 in 1990/91.On the other hand, with respect to part-time education, this figure rose dramatically between 1980/81and 1970/71. However this figure rose slightly between 1980/81 and 1990/91.

(165 words)


Band 6

The candidate has made a good attempt to describe the graphs looking at global trends and moredetailed figures. There is, however, some information missing and the information is inaccurate inminor areas. The answer flows quite smoothly although connectives are overused or inappropriate,and some of the points do not link up well. The grammatical accuracy is quite good and the languageused to describe the trends is well-handled. However, there are problems with expression and theappropriate choice of words and whilst there is good structural control, the complexity and variation inthe sentences are limited.


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The chart below shows the proportions of the worlds oil resources held in different areas,together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas.



model answer:

The charts shows the oil resources held, together with the proportions consumed within the samearea each year, in different areas of the world.

It is obvious that the region holding the most oil resources is the Middle East, with 56.52%, over a halfof total world oil resources while in the United States and Asia, the level of oil consumed each year isfor more away from the oil resources they hold. The percentage of total world oil consumption of

United States and Asia are 25.48% and 26.21% respectively. They are the highest oil consumptionregion in the world.


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Another place that is worth mentioned will be the Western Europe. With about twenty percent of totalworld oil consumption, the Western Europe merely holds less than 1.5% of the oil resources in theWorld.

Regions that are not mentioned above have the close percentage between oil holding and consuming

whereas Canada has the highest level of oil holding than consuming, the respective figures are14.84% and 2.48%.

Overall, the charts suggest that Middle East is the only majority at oil resources held, while Asia,United States and western have the highest level at oil resources imported.

(197 words)


Band 5.5

This response describes the main points of the bar graphs and provides a summary of their mostsignificant features. However, the figures are not well selected to support or highlight the key features,there are some minor inaccuracies, and details are missing, with only half of the countries on thegraphs being mentioned. There is an overall progression to the response, though the middle sectioncould have been structured more clearly and coherently by use of linkers. There are no errors inspelling, but this accuracy is achieved by staying within a limited range of vocabulary, and by relyingon repetition of the phrases supplied on the question paper. Grammatical errors occur but are notfrequent or serious enough to affect communication, and there is a range of sentence types whichincludes some complex structures.


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The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain.Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below.You should write at least 150 words.

Source: Office for National Statistics on behalf of the Controller of Her Majesty's Stationery Office.

Study these three sentences and then write three similar sentences about other parts of thechart.

1Women spend over twice as much timedoing kitchen tasks as men.2Men spend 30 minutes a day doing kitchen tasks whereas / whilewomen spend 74 minutes a day.3Women are more activein the kitchen thanmen (74 minutes a day for women as opposed to30minutes for men).

Sample ReportLook at the following sample answer to the writing task.Write a word in each space.

The chart shows the average number of minutes per day men and women in Great Britain spend onjobs around the house.


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In total, men spend just overtwo-and-a-half hours on household tasks whereas women spend slightly

lessthan four hours. Women spend more than twiceas much time doing kitchen tasks such as

cooking and washing up asmen (74 minutes for women as opposed to30 minutes for men. Women

are also more active in cleaning the house- it takes 58 minutes of their day compared to / with13

minutes for men - and childcare, where women put in more than twice as muchtime as men.

On the other hand, men are moreactive in gardening and pet care, where they spend twice as long

as women, and maintenance and DIY, on which they spend 15 minutes more thanwomen. Womenaccount for almost all the time spent on washing and ironing clothes. This takes them 25 minutes,

while / whereasmen spend just 2 minutes on this task.

Overall the figures show that women spend more time on routine domestic chores than men, while /

whereasmen do more household maintenance, gardening and pet care.


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The chart shows student expenditure over a three-year period in the United Kingdom.Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below.You should write at least 150 words.

Student expenditure (aged under 26 in higher education) United Kingdom*

Percentage of total expenditure

(1) includes non-essential consumer items and credit repayments* Source: Student Income and Expenditure Survey. Department for Education and Employment.

Study these three sentences and then write three similar sentences about other parts of thechart.

1During the period 1996 to 1999, student spent 3% less on accommodation, which fell from 23% to20% of total expenditure.2There was a 3% decrease in spending on accommodation, which fell from 23% to 20%.3Spending on accommodation went down by 3% from 23% to 20%.

Using prepositionsComplete the following sample report by putting a preposition in each space.


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The chart shows the changes which took place instudent spending in the United Kingdom

during/overthe three-year period from 1996 to 1999.

Students spent 3% less on accommodation, which fell from23% to20% of total expenditure, and

there was a 2% decrease inspending on food, bills and household goods, which fell from 20% to18%. At the same time course expenditure went down by3% from 10% to 7%. Children, who

constituted 1% ofstudents' expenditure in 1996, are not represented in 1999.

On the other hand, there was a 5% growth inspending on entertainment, which stood at26% of total

expenditure in 1996 but rose to31% in 1999. Spending on other non-essential items and credit

repayments grew by4% to make up16% of total expenditure. Spending on essential travel went up

by3% while non-essential travel underwent a 1% fall.

Overall, with the exception of expenditure ontravel, the most significant general change was a shift

from/inspending on essential items tospending on non-essential items


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The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the changes which occurred.


model answer:

The two graphs show that oil was the major energy source in the USA in both 1980 and 1990 and thatcoal, natural gas and hydroelectric power remained in much the same proportions. On the other hand,there was a dramatic rise in nuclear power, which doubled its percentage over the ten years.

Oil supplied the largest percentage of energy, although the percentage decreased from 42% in 1980to 33% in 1990. Coal in 1990 was the second largest source of energy, increasing its proportion to27% from 22% in the previous decade. Natural gas, the second largest source in 1980 at 26%,decreased its share very slightly to provide 25% of Americas energy ten years later. There was nochange in the percentage supplied by hydroelectric power which remained at 5% of the total energy

used. Nuclear power the greatest change: in 1990 it was 10%, twice that of the 1980s.

(152 words)


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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.



model answer:

The three graphs of wheat exports each show a quite different pattern between 1985 and 1990.Exports from Australia declined over the five-year period, while the Canadian market fluctuatedconsiderably, and the European Community showed an increase.

In 1985, Australia exported about 15 millions of tonnes of wheat and the following year the numberincreased by one million tonnes to 16 million. After that, however, there was a gradual decline until1989 and 1990 when it stabilised at about 11 million tonnes. Over the same period, the amount ofCanadian exports varied greatly. It started at 19 million tonnes in 1985, reached a peak in 1988 of 24million, dropped dramatically in 1989 to 14 million tonnes and then climbed back to 19 million in 1990.Seventeen million tonnes were exported from the European Community in 1985, but this decreased to14 million tonnes in 1986 and then rose to 15 million in 1987 and 1988 before increasing once moreto 20 million in 1990.

(165 words)


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The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory.

Write a report for a university tutor describing the production process.


model answer:

There are four main stages in the production of plastic paper clips from this small factory. Two ofthese stages involve actual preparation of the clips, while the other two consist of quality controlbefore the clips are sent out from the factory to the retailers to be sold to the public.

To begin with, molten plastic is poured into three different moulds depending on the colour required;the colours are red, blue and yellow. Once these clips emerge from the moulds a quality controlmachine checks them for strength. Unsatisfactory clips are rejected. In the third stage in the processthe clips are stored by hand into two groups, mixed and single colours. When this stage is completethe groups are checked a second time to ensure that the colour mixtures are divided correctly into

single colours and mixed colour batches. Finally, the clips are packed and dispatched to themarkets.(152 words)


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The table below gives information about Favorite Pastimes in different countries.



From 30 - 50 years old

TV Sport Reading Hobbies Music Beach Sleep

Canada 60 22 15 40 3 0 2

France / / 30 20 4 / /

England / / 30 21 4 / 20

Australia 65 30 15 45 5 30 4

Korea 22 21 60 45 2 2 4

China 15 25 60 50 0 5 5

USA 60 23 15 42 23 30 2

Japan / / 62 / / / /

model answer:

This table clearly presents and compares favorable pastimes in eight different countries. Thepastimes, across the top of the table, are analyzed in relation to each country.

As can be seen, about 60% of Canadians, Australians and Americans like watching television. On theother hand, this figure is quite low for China where only 15% of people watch television. Predictably,

Americans like music at 23%, whereas only 2 to 5% of people in the other countries feel the sameway. 20% of people in England enjoy sleeping as a pastime whereas in Canada and the USA, forexample, the figure is only 2%. Interestingly, the Chinese like hobbies the most at 50%, as opposed toonly 20% in France. It isnt surprising that the highest percentage of beach-lovers is in Australia andthe USA at 30%.

It seems that pastimes of people of different nationalities may be influenced by a number of factorssuch as the socio-economic situation or the climate. These factors influence cultural differencesbetween different nationalities and make cross-cultural experiences more interesting.

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model answer:

In this analysis we will examine three pie charts. The first one is headed World Spending. Thesecond is World Population and the third is Consumption of Resources.

In the first chart we can see that people spend most of their income (24%) on food. In some countriesthis percentage would obviously be much higher. Transport and then housing are the next majorexpenses at 18% and 12% respectively. Only 6% of income is spent on clothing.

In the second chart entitled World Population, it is not surprising to find that 57% of people live inAsia. In fact China and India are two of the most populated countries in the world and they are bothsituated on this continent. Europe and the Americans account for nearly 30% of the total, whilst 10%of people live in Africa.

Finally, the third chart reveals that the USA and Europe consume a huge 60% of the worlds resource.

To sum up, the major expenditure is on food, the population figures are the highest for Asia and the

major consumers are the USA and Europe.(182 words)


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The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water

consumption in two different countries.



Country Population Irrigated land Water consumption per person

Brazil 176 million 26,500 km 359 m

DemocraticRepublicof Congo

5.2 million 100 km 8 m

model answer:

The graph shows how the amount of water used worldwide changed between 1900 and 2000.

Throughout the century, the largest quantity of water was used for agricultural Purposes, and thisincreased dramatically from about 500 km to around 3,000 km in the year 2000. Water used in theindustrial and domestic sectors also increased, but consumption was minimal until mid-century. From1950 onwards, industrial use grew steadily to just over 1,000 km, while domestic use rose moreslowly to only 300 km, both far below the levels of consumption by agriculture.

The table illustrates the differences in agriculture consumption in some areas of the world bycontrasting the amount of irrigated land in Brazil (26,500 km) with that in the D.R.C. (100 km). Thismeans that a huge amount of water is used in agriculture in Brazil, and this is reflected in the figuresfor water consumption per person: 359 m compared with only 8 m in the Congo. With a populationof 176 million, the figures for Brazil indicate how high agriculture water consumption can be in some

countries.(180 words)


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The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works.



model answer:

This diagram provides an overview of a domestic central heating system. It shows how the tank,boiler and pipes ensure a constant flow of hot waterto both the radiators and the taps.

The cold water enters the house and is stored in a water storage tank in the roof. From there flowsdown to the boiler, located on the ground floor of the house.

The boiler, which is fuelled by gas or oil, heats up the water as it passes through it. The hot water isthen pumped round the house through a system of pipes and flows into the radiators, located indifferent rooms. The water circulates through the radiators, which have small tubes inside them tohelp distribute the heat, and this warms each of the rooms. Some of the water is directed to the tapsto provide hot water for the house.

Once the water has been through the pipes and radiators, it is returned to the boiler to be re-heated


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and circulated round the house again.

Introduction:First sentence. Overview: Second sentence.

Key features:Entry of cold water into boiler; circulation of hot waterto radiators and taps; return ofwaterto boiler.

Supporting information:direction of flow; types of boiler; location of radiators; radiator tubes

Paragraph breaks:The paragraph breaks mark stages in the process.

Linkers:and, from there, then, once, again Reference words: it, both, there, which, this

Topic vocabulary:enters, stored, roof, flows, ground floor, located, passes, pumped, system,circulates, heat, directed, returned, re-heated

Less common vocabulary:ensure, fuelled by, heats up, distribute the heat, warms

Structures:An appropriate mix of active and passive structures and a range of sentence types areused.

Length:172 words


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The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australianchildren.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.


model answer:

The graph shows the preferred leisure sctivities of Australian children aged 5-14. As might beexpected, it is clear from the data that sedentary pursuits are far more popular nowadays than activeones.

Of the 10,000 children that were interviewed, all the boys and girls stated that they enjoyed watchingTV or videos in their spare time. In addition, the second most popular activity, attracting 80% of boysand 60% of girls, was playing electronic or computer games. While girls rated activities such as artand craft highlyjust under 60% stated that they enjoyed these in their spare timeonly 35% ofboys opted for creative pastimes. Bike riding, on the other hand, was almost as popular as electronicgames amongst boys and, perhaps surprisingly, almost 60% of girls said that they enjoyed this too.Skateboarding was relatively less popular amongst both boys and girls, although it still attracted 35%of boys and 25% of girls.

(157 words)


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The table below provide information on rental charges and salaries in three areas of London.



Weekly rents per property (/w) Salaries needed (/year)

Area

Notting Hill

Regent's Park

Fulham

1 bed 2 bed 3 bed

375 485 738

325 450 650

215 390 600

1 bed 2 bed 3 bed

98,500 127,500 194,000

85,500 118,000 170,500

56,500 102,500 157,500

model answer:

The table shows two sets of related information: the relative cost, in pounds, of renting a propertywith one, two or three bedrooms in three different suburbs of London and an indication of the kind ofannual salary you would need to be earning to rent in these areas.

Of the three areas mentioned, Notting Hill is the most expensive with weekly rents starting at 375(salary approximately f 100,000) and rising to 738 per week for a 3-bedroom property. To affordthis, you would require a salary in the region of 200,000 per annum. Alternatively, Fulham is thecheapest area shown with rents ranging from 215 per week for a one bedroom property to 600 perweek for a 3-bedroom property. To rent in this area, salaries need to be somewhere between85,000 and 170,000 depending on the number of bedrooms required. For those able to pay in themiddle price range for accommodation, Regent's Park might be a more suitable district.

(163 words)


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The diagrams below give information about the Eiffel Tower in Paris and an outline project to

extend it underground.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.



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model answer:

The Eiffel Tower is situated close to the Seine River in Paris. It is a metal structure that is 1,063 feet

high and weighs 7,417 tonnes. The tower has been a tourist attraction since 1889, when it was built,and there are 1,665 steps that can be climbed in order to reach the two viewing platforms.

There are now plans to build below the foundations of the tower. These plans include thedevelopment of five underground levels that will incorporate the tower's ticket office, shoppingfacilities, a cinema and museum and two floors of underground parking.

Although details have yet to be finalised, the principle is that the five floors will be connected by twovertical passenger lifts on either side of the tower. In addition, the floor immediately below the tower,which is planned to house the ticket office, will also consist of a large atrium with a glass ceiling sothat visitors can look directly up at the tower itself.

(162 words)

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