a workshop about how to help our students to write poetry by: lawrence sail
TRANSCRIPT
A WORKSHOP ABOUT
How to help our students to write
poetry
By: Lawrence Sail
WHO IS MR. LAWRENCE SAIL?
He is a visiting poet who judged the finals at
the 1st English Poetry Festival for schools and
gave a workshop to teachers and pupils alike.
He was born in London and was educated at
Sherburne School and St. John’s College,
Oxford.
WRITING POETRY
To write a poem take into consideration
the following points:
1. There should be a reason.
2. Keep it inside your mind until it hatches.
3. Criticize yourself.
Teacher should guide his students to write about what they
feel to give time for their attitude and to be more specific
(to get details of things)
Example: instead of saying “Nature is
beautiful”
I want the reader to feel it, so we can just say:
• The land is filled with fresh air.
• Fish are swimming happily.
Next, we can train our students to get their ideas into images using similar or metaphor.
Exercise 1: Teachers can give pupils words and ask pupils to put them into sentences and to be stressed.
e.g. The cár is párked in a bíg fíeld Try to get 4 stressed words in each sentence 1- history – nations 2- river – fields 3- handsome – dream 4- please – silly 5- what – tonight
Exercise 2: Teachers give pupils 4 words asking them to produce 4 lines and try to get 4 stressed words in each line.
Winter Summer autumn Spring White Red Yellow Colorful
Old Burning Pale Valleys
Pavement
Beach Branches Breeze
Exercise 3: Teachers gives each pupil a card (picture)
asking pupils to write some lines in (10 min) about their
pictures.
1. Pay their attention that it’s not important using
the rhyme but what they’re really interested in.
2. Teachers aloud their poems.
3. Teachers helps his students to write what isn’t
clear or straight in the picture.
I’d like to end this ( ) by a definition to what is a poem as Archibald Macheish describes it.
A poem should be motionless in time. As the moon climbs, A poem should equal to Not true A poem should not mean But be
WHAT IS HALA GOING TO DO TONIGHT?
I went to the beach
But everything was red
The sand was burning
The water was boiling
But what can we do
It’s summer
By Hala Omar
2nd Prep.