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The Editions of Dorothy Richardson's Pilgrimage:

A Comparison of Texts by George H. Thomsonwith Dorothy F. Thomson

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AcknowledgmentsIntroduction ELT Homepage

Collected Editions & English First Editions Compared

CHAPTER I Volume I

Book 1 Pointed Roofs Book 2 Backwater Book 3 Honeycomb

CHAPTER II Volume II

Book 4 The Tunnel Book 5 Interim

CHAPTER III Volume III

Book 6 Deadlock Book 7 Revolving Lights Book 8 The Trap

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The Editions of Dorothy Richardson

Book 9 OberlandBook 10 Dawn's Left Hand

Book 11 Clear HorizonBook 13 March Moonlight

CHAPTER V

Pilgrimage: The English and American First Editions Compared

CHAPTER VI

Interim: The English First Edition and The Little Review Compared

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The Editions of Dorothy Richardson's 'Pilgrimage' :A Comparison of Text

by GEORGE H. THOMSON

George H. Thomson’s The Editions of Dorothy Richardson’s 'Pilgrimage': A Comparison of Texts begins with an introduction defining methods and goals. The six following chapters set out in table format the many variants identified by comparing the different editions of the Pilgrimage texts. The 1938 Collected Edition of Pilgrimage, reprinted in 1967 with March Moonlight added, was revised and proofread by Dorothy Richardson herself. Is the revised text reliable? How does it compare with the texts of the English First Editions, ten of them issued by Duckworth between 1915 and 1931 and one by Dent in 1935?

These questions are answered in Chapters I through IV of this study, corresponding to Volumes I through IV of the Collected Edition of Pilgrimage. And further, how do the English First Editions of the first six novels, from Pointed Roofs to Deadlock, compare with the reset texts published by Knopf in New York between 1919 and 1921? And which of these first editions serve as copy text for the Collected Edition? These questions are answered in Chapter V.

Finally, what may be learned by comparing the periodical version of Interim in the Little Review with the significantly revised text of the English First Edition? The answer is offered in Chapter VI: so great are the changes, it is as though for this one time we are allowed to glimpse in the Little Review a Richardson MS in an earlier state of development.

The Editions of Dorothy Richardson’s 'Pilgrimage': A Comparison of Texts is the first detailed examination of Richardson’s Pilgrimage texts. It completes Professor Thomson’s reading of Dorothy Richardson, begun in A Reader’s Guide to Dorothy Richardson’s "Pilgrimage" (ELT Press, 1996), and continued in Notes on 'Pilgrimage': Dorothy Richardson Annotated (ELT Press 1999). Taken together these three books enable readers to understand Richardson as a key figure of the modernist movement and to appreciate Pilgrimage as one of British literature's most challenging, most rewarding, most underestimated masterpieces.

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Chapter I: Pilgrimage Volume I I The Collected Editions (CE) and the English First Editions (E) Compared

Pointed Roofs

CE: Volume I, Book 1, 1938 / 1967 E: London: Duckworth, 1915 Quotation marks for dialogue, and for sayings: ' . . . ' in CE " . . . " in Pointed Roofs 1915

Titles of books, journals, music, etc.: Italics in CE " . . . " in Pointed Roofs 1915

Publishing house rules: Mr, Mrs etc. in CE Mr., Mrs. etc. in Pointed Roofs 1915

Foreign words and phrases: See NOTE below

Misprints and errors are indicated by an asterisk*

NOTE Foreign Words and Phrases: Because both German and French are spoken along with English at the school in Hanover, these languages --contrary to Richardson's general practice in Pilgrimage--are not usually italicized in either edition of Pointed Roofs. Exceptions, as when a foreign word or phrase is isolated within an English sentence, are noted only when the two texts differ in practice.

SUMMARY OF VARIANTS

Of 743 variants, 291 represent insertion of a comma and 43 substitute saal for saal. There are 96 substantive variants, 25 being differences in: chapter number (9), section breaks (5), punctuation (5), spelling (1), number (2), and tense (3).

In 20 instances CE deletes one or more words from E. These include the title PILGRIMAGE / PART 1. POINTED ROOFS; a whole sentence about Pastor Lahmann giving a French lesson (CE106.0-1; E167.7-8); and a more interesting sentence about Miriam's previous experience with hair washing: water. In full | water. Miriam's hair had never been washed with anything but cantharides and rose-water on a tiny special sponge. ¶In full (CE60.20-21; E84.5-9). The rest of the deletions are rather routine: her hands | her large hands (CE22.35; E15.16). On 5 occasions, one or more words is added to CE, none noteworthy.

Finally there are 25 examples of words being changed, from her candle | the candle (CE109.34; E174.13) to girls sitting opposite | girls opposite to her (CE38.18; E43.11). CE also substitutes the title Wings and Stings for "John Halifax" (CE22.31; E15.11-12).

There are 4 misprints in CE, of which two may be noted: Once if had for the correct Once it had (CE146.30; E241.1); and old and green for gold and green (CE152.24;E 251.24). Of 17 notable misprints and errors in E, the most interesting are: the Bergmann sisters identified not as Emma and Clara but as Emma and Marie (CE76.17; E113.4), and Pastor Lahmann's mannishness mistaken in E for mannerishness (CE127.34; E206.1). (Keep in mind that the full catalogue of

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variants records an additional 15 misprints in E, entailing minor deviations in punctuation, capitalization, accents and so forth.)

In sum, then, Richardson's revisions to the Collected Edition text of Pointed Roofs are slight, though there were more than the usual number of misprints in E to be corrected.

Substantive variants are marked >

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Table: Volume I Book1 Pointed Roofs section A

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15 >[No title] PILGRIMAGE / PART 1. POINTED ROOFS 1

15 CHAPTER I CHAPTER I 1

15 [No section number] l 1

15.13 >moved moved clumsily 2.2

16.30 he say: he say, 4.13

16.33 say: 'Don't go,' say "Don't go" 4.16-17

16.33-34 or: 'When are you coming back?'? or "When are you coming back?" 4.17

17.[5-6] [Section break] 2 5.[4-5]

17.6 brown-paper brown paper 5.5-6

17.16 >piqué piquet* 5.17

17.17 >piqué piquet* 5.18

18.13 I know, girls I know girls 7.8

18.25 matinées . . . no matinées. . . . no 7.23-24

18.31 deeply burrowing deeply-burrowing 8.5

18.31 >dimples drew the skin dimples fastened the clean skin 8.5-6

19.13 Oh, well Oh well 9.6

19.23 Oh, well Oh well 9.16

19.24 Oh, yes Oh yes 9.17

20.6 Miriam, grateful Miriam grateful 10.15

20.32 whispered: whispered, 11.21

20.38 >her fingers her long thickish fingers 12.2

21.10 >blue pad purple pad 12.16

21.[11-12] [Section break] 3 12.[16-17]

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21.17 buses 'buses 12.23

22.7 gurgling, muffled gurgling muffled 14.6

22.17 Hi!. . . Hi. . . . 14.19

22.24 breakfast, and breakfast and 15.3

22.25 Eve, always Eve always 15.3-4

22.31 >Tales, Wings and Stings, Swiss Tales," "John Halifax," "Swiss 15.11-12

22.32 Robinson, made Robinson" made 15.12

22.35 >her hands her large hands 15.16

22.38 sang, 'Scott's sang "Scott's 15.21

23.1-2 Poetical Works. Villette. . . Egmont---' Poetical Works." Villette . . . Egmont--- 15.21-23

23.20 tightly curled tightly-curled 16.21

24.4 pater's Pater's 17.23

24.16 room. room, 18.11

25.13 kak-kak kak-kak 20.1

26 CHAPTER II CHAPTER II 21

26 [No section number] 1 21

26.11 boat, she boat she 21.14

26.17 tide, carrying tide carrying 22.3

26.26 'Sleepless Nights.'[no italc] "Sleepless Nights." 22.14-15

27.[14-15] [Section break] 2 23.[11-12]

27.26-27 Pater [. . .] in Germany. "Pater [. . .] in Germany." 24.1-3

28.11 [No section break] 3 25.[0-1]

28.12 pater Pater 25.1

28.14 Sunlight Zeep! Sunlight Zeep! 25.3


28.22 women, and women and 25.15

28.24 Dutch! Dutch! 25.18


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29.1 wide awake wide-awake 26.12

29.[2-3] [Section break] 4 26.[14-15]

29.20 dictées dictées 27.15

29.25 cahiers cahiers 27.21

29.27 dreadful, clever dreadful clever 27.23

29.[31-32] [Section break] 5 28.[3-4]

30.13 colony, she colony she 28.21

30.21 so far had so far, had 29.7

30.22 ahead, she ahead she 29.8

30.[24-25] [Section break] 6 29.[11-12]

31.1 and, after and after 30.1

31.17 the girls? . . . the girls. . . . 30.22

31.19 hesitated . . . Sivvle hesitated. . . . Sivvle 30.23-24

31.19 grand--all grand--All 30.24

31.20 sly. . . . Sivvle sly . . . Sivvle 30.25



31.37 'independent,' trained "independent" trained 31.20


32.[6-7] [Section break] 7 32.[3-4]

32.20 beyond, and beyond and 32.20

32.23 Sarah, and Sarah and 32.24

32.28 bees in it, or bees in it or 33.8

33.5 table billiards Table Billiards 33.22

34 CHAPTER III CHAPTER III 35

34 [No section break] 1 35

34.3 saal saal 35.4

34.31 Miriam, feeling Miriam feeling 36.19


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35.1 distinguish, against distinguish against 36.22

35.3 saal saal 36.24

35.37 and, speaking and speaking 38.14

35.37 German, had German had 38.15

35.38 thickly hung thickly-hung 38.16

36.8 speech, and speech and 38.26

36.16 dark, uncarpeted dark uncarpeted 39.10

36.17 shy, firm shy firm 39.13

36.[25-26] [Section break] 2 40.[0-1]

36.28 Vorspielen "Vorspielen" 40.4

36.34 girls, having girls having 40.12

37.2 Germans, who Germans who 40.16

37.8 athletic-looking athletic looking 40.24

37.9 bloodshot blood-shot 41.1

37.14 Miriam, safely Miriam safely 41.8

37.26 beds and, standing beds, and standing 41.23-24

37.30 soft, dark soft dark 42.3

37.30 said: 'Voilà Said, "Voilà 42.3-4

37.32 said: 'Oh said, "Oh 42.5

38.14 repose, her repose her 43.5

38.[16-17] [Section break] 3 43.[8-9]

38.18 >girls sitting opposite. girls opposite to her. 43.11

38.19 scrutinize scrutinise 43.12

38.28 with: 'Oh, with, "Oh, 43.23

39.2 Brödchen Brödchen 44.13

39.4 heavily freckled heavily-freckled 44.15-16

39.5 a harsh, involuntary a harsh involuntary 44.17

39.9 coarse, fuzzy, red-brown coarse fuzzy red-brown 44.21


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39.14 eyes, after eyes after 45.1

39.20 hair, which hair which 45.9

39.22 large, expressionless, large expressionless 45.12

39.30 her: 'Go on her, "Go on 45.22

40.9 furiously, and furiously and 46.18

40.9 mumbled: 'Ik mumbled, "Ik 46.18

40.12 >chair tilted back chair drawn back 46.23-24

40.14 dress, with dress with 46.26

40.15 belt, was belt was 47.1

40.20 long, straight long straight 47.7

40.20 wide, laughing wide laughing 47.8

40.25 said: 'Oh said, "Oh 47.13

40.28 Kinder kinder 47.18

40.30 Hugo--né! Hugo--né! 47.21

40.31 >that whereas someone that someone 47.22-23

40.32 >someone named though someone named 47.24

40.[33-34] [Section break] 4 48.[0-1]


40.35 large, high large high 48.2

41.5 french French 48.11

41.6-7 [Section break 5 48.[12-13]

41.24 hard, loud hard loud 49.14

41.35 >concerts concert 50.1

41.35 unrecognizable unrecognisable 50.2

42.12 once, she once she 50.19

42.[16-17] [Section break] 6 51.[0-1]


42.32 Vorspielen Vorspielen 51.21


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43.[18-19] [Section break] 7 53.[0-1]

43.23 thin, broad thin broad 53.6

44.5 pianissimo pianissimo 54.5

44.[34-35] [Section break] 8 55.[16-17]

45.1 adagio adagio 55.20

45.8 fortisssimos fortissimos 56.5-6

45.11 vivace. vivace. 56.9

45.[34-35] [Section break] 9 57.[13-14]

46.1 Spring Song Spring Song 57.17

46.3-4 childhood: 'Fly childhood--"Fly 57.20

46.7 Lied Lied 57.24

46.17 baby-mouth, and baby-mouth and 58.13

46.25 Martin, in Martin in 58.24


47.3 mark, amazed mark amazed 59.18

47.7 >something she had heard. In something. It was like something she had heard--in 59.24-25

47.7 verses, while verses--while 59.25

47.[13-14] [Section break] 10 60.[6-7]

47.16 noted, in noted in 60.10

47.18 rolls, and rolls and 60.12

47.25 >Ihnen?' Innen?"* 60.22

48.4 say: 'There say, "There 61.17

48.12 >she sat Miriam sat 62.1

48.[29-30] [Section break] 11 63.[0-1]

49.9 about it: 'Und About it, "Und 63.20

49.31 heartily: 'Whenhy Heartily, "Whenhy 64.25

50.7 >cultured people educated people 65.16


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50.8 whisper: 'Vater whisper, "Vater 65.17-18

50.[10-11] [Section break] 12 65.[20-21]

50.16 saying: 'Bonjour saying, "Bonjour 66.3-4

51 >CHAPTER IV 13 66.[12-13]

51.10 and, besides, they and besides they 67.3

51.20 way, she way she 67.16

51.22 criticize criticise 67.17

52.[11-12] [Section break] 14 68.[19-20]

53.[27-28] [Section break] 15 71.[10-11]

53.29 saal saal 71.13

53.35 Sundays, and Sundays--and 71.20

53.35 the four, the four-- 71.21

54.21 read . . so sweet read--so sweet 72.25

55.10 >aflame. Miriam aflame. She 74.8

55.33 Pfaff came and, still Pfaff came, and still 75.13

55.33 smiling, had smiling had 75.14

55.34 saal saal 75.15

55.[34-35] [Section break] 16 75.[15-16]

55.35 right, I right. I 75.17

56.4 >obstacle to obstacle of 75.22

56.9 saal saal 76.5



56.24 Sonata Pathétique Sonata Pathétique 76.25

56.34 her, standing her standing 77.12

57.1 piano, as Clara had done, piano as Clara had done 77.17

57.[27-28] [Section break] 17 79.[0-1]

58.1 Pathétique Pathétique 79.12


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58.30 saal saal 80.26

58.[30-31] [Section break] 18 81.[0-1]

59.1 bitte bitte 81.8

59.6 Haarwaschen Haarwaschen 81.13

60.11 gloom, twisting gloom twisting 83.17

60.[11-12] [Section break] 19 83.[17-18]

60.17 nasturtium-coloured nasturtium coloured 84.1

60.18 faces, had faces had 84.3

60.20-21 >water. In fullwater. Miriam's hair had never been washed with anything but cantharides and rose-water on a tiny special sponge. ¶In full

84.6-9

60.25 polite, departing polite departing 84.15

60.31-32 bump-crack bump--crack 84.22

62.7 daytime day-time 87.7

62.[10-11] [Section break] 20 88.[10-11]

64.23 change; not change, not 91.13

64.30 mit? mit? 91.23

65.[18-19] [Section break] 21 93.[4-5]

65.19 Every one Everyone 93.5

65.20-21 fine, careful, evenly-moving fine careful evenly moving 93.7

65.22 angles, and angles and 93.9

67.14 them, often them often 96.19

67.15 say, 'Wake Say "Wake 96.19-20

67.21 you, and you and 97.2

67.37 she could: she could-- 97.22

68.1-5 Ein Blatt [. . . ] durchtritt-- "Ein Blatt [. . . ] durchtritt--" 97.23-27

68.7 stumblingly: stumblingly-- 98.3


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68.8-12 A leaf [. . .] passed through. "A leaf [. . .] passed through." 98.4-8

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Table: Volume I Book1 Pointed Roofs section B


70 >CHAPTER V CHAPTER IV 101



71.6 Yes . . . she Yes. . . . she 103.2

71.25 unconvincing, threatened unconvincing threatened 104.1

72.10 hymn-book, shaking hymn-book shaking 105.4-5

72.[11-12] [No section break] 2 105.[6-7]

72.[17-18] [No section break] 3 105.[14-15]

72.38 else, and else and 106.20

73.16 >services* service 107.14

73.19 and on, and and on and 107.18

73.[25-26] [Section break] 4 108.[0-1]

74.4 pretend, to pretend to 108.19

74.17 saal saal 109.11


74.33 Ulrica, Ulrica Ulrica Ulrica 110.6

74.37 different. . . . Ulrica different . . .Ulrica 110.12

74.38 afterwards, like afterwards like 110.13

75.1 saal saal 110.14

75.5 saal saal 110.19

75.5 window, and window and 110.18

75.16 'Rather,' "Rather," 111.7

75.[17-18] [Section break] 5 111.[8-9]


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75.28 dank--et--al-- dank--et--Al--* 111.22

76.16 all, God.' all, God!" 113.4

76.17 >Emma and Clara were Emma and Marie [i.e.Clara] was* 113.4

77 >CHAPTER VI CHAPTER V 114


77.11 saal, and saal and 114.15


77.20 for it. . . .German for it . . . German 115.7

77.29 remember all remember al* 115.19

78.1 class. He class He* 115.24

78.19 sofa, out sofa out 116.21

78.19 teacher, and teacher and 116.22

78.[21-22] [Section break] 2 117.[0-1]

78.23 remembered, and remembered and 117.3

79.9 flash, during flash during 118.7

79.9 musings, that musings that 118.7

79.[18-19] [Section break] 3 118.[19-20]

79.35 see? Does any one see ? see? Does anyone see? 119.19

80.[8-9] [Section break] 4 120.[3-4]

81.[21-22] [Section break] 5 122.[17-18]

81.30 >school was school were 123.7

82.[31-32] [Section break] 6 125.[2-3]

82.33 minister, she supposed, minister she supposed 125.4

83.[4-5] [Section break] 7 125.[13-14]

83.17 acclimatized acclimatised 126.[10-11]

83.27 Wäsche "wäsche" 126.23

83.28 Waschfrau waschfrau 126.24

84.7 criticizing criticising 127.16


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84.20 Gertrude, alone Gertrude alone 128.6

84.21 Martin, to Martin to 128.6

84.21 saal saal 128.7

84.[24-25] [Section break] 8 128.[10-11]

84.29 saal saal 128.17

84.31 saal saal 128.19

85.11 saal saal 129.16

85.14-15 >throat, an accentuation throat, a gesture that was an accentuation 129.20-21

85.15-16 >voice, expressing, voice, and expressed, 129.22

85.16 >curious circumspect curious sense of circumspect 129.23-24

85.17 realize realise 129.24

85.19 saal saal 129.26

85.23 Emma to Emma, to 130.5

85.24 shop, so shop so 130.7

85.33 >Assailed Miriam, assailed 130.18-19

85.36 >chair, Miriam chair, had 130.22

86.6 along, shouting along shouting 131.7

86.14 realized, with realised with 131.17

86.[15-16] [Section break] 9 131.[19-20]

87.2 >speculative. speculate. 132.24

87.11 English, she assured herself, English she assured herself 133.8

87.12 Barnes, whose Barnes whose 133.10

87.[20-21] [Section break] 10 133.[19-20]

87.[30-31] [Section break] 11 134.[8-9]

87.34 readings, the readings the 134.12

88.1 >lunches of lunching-plates of 134.14

88.6 generalizations generalisations 134.20

88.9 Kreipe's, Miriam perceived, Kreipe's Miriam perceived 135.1


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88.12 Bergmanns, near Bergmanns near 135.5

88.13 >of Georgstrasse, Miriam of the Georgstrasse Miriam 135.6

88.21 room, wondering room wondering 135.17

88.25 back, she back she 135.21

88.31 restaurant, free restaurant free 136.4

88.38 Schokolade schocolade* 136.11

89.24 éclair éclair 137.15

89.[28-29] [Section break] 12 137.[20-21]

90.[2-3] [Section break] 13 138.[8-9]

90.6 saal saal 138.13

90.25 pelerines, almost pelerines almost 139.13

91.13 role rôle 140.15

91.21 mending, long mending long 140.26

91.[27-28] [Section break] 14 141.[8-9]

91.34 conversational, with conversational with 141.17

91.35 Elsa, or Clara and Emma, Elsa or Clara and Emma 141.18

92.19 admirable, and admirable and 142.19

92.27 girls, she girls she 143.4

92.29 see, as see as 143.6

92.33 talk, and talk and 143.10

93.2 >offitser'--as if offitser"--and it seemed to Miriam as if 143.19-20

93.3 almond tree almond-tree 143.22

93.[28-29] [Section break] 15 145.[0-1]

94.9 >in broken in a broken 145.20

94.19 confidence, Minna confidence Minna 146.7-8

94.21 chord, like chord--like 146.10

94.[28-29] [Section break] 16 146.[18-19]

94.29 Jüngling. "jüngling." 146.19


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95.[2-3] [Section break] 17 147.[7-8]

95.4 Jüngling jüngling 147.9

95.14 girls, and girls and 147.23

95.21 Fräulein, thinking Fräulein thinking 148.8

95.22 them, was them was 148.9

96 >CHAPTER VII CHAPTER VI 149


96.7 gummi-bags gummi-bags 149.10

96.22 tender-voiced, Fräulein tender-voiced Fräulein 150.11

97.[14-15] [Section break] 2 151.[15-16]

97.34 saal saal 152.18

98.1 saal saal 152.22

98.4 and, pushing and pushing 152.25

98.5 curtains, saw curtains saw 152.26

98.12 door, and door and 153.10

98.15 things, and things and 153.14

99.5 >and Fräulein's and her 154.24-25

99.[21-22] >[No section break] 3 155.[18-19]

100.10 smile, as smile as 157.4

100.16 nearer, making nearer making 157.10

100.[16-17] >[No section break] 4 157.[10-11]

100.18 >She laid Miriam laid 157.13

100.24 recognize recognise 157.20

100.[34-35] [Section break] 5 158.10-11]

102.[19-20] [Section break] 6 161.[10-11]

104.[18-19] [Section break] 7 164.[21-22]

105.13 Kind, best Kind best 166.9

105.19 Bier bier 166.17


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105.24 throat, moving throat moving 166.22

105.24 words, made words made 166.23

105.24 >Miriam Mariam* 166.23

105.29 Bier bier 167.4

105.30 home,' until home" until 167.4

106 >CHAPTER VIII 8 167.[6-7]

106.0-1 >'Sur l'eau, si beau!' Pastor Lahmann gave a French lesson the next afternoon. ¶"Sur l'eau, si beau!" 167.7-9

106.17 upper, without upper without 168.6

106.19 and, with and with 168.8

106.26 verse, with verse with 168.18

107.3 lesson, when lesson when 169.4

107.7 saal saal 169.9

107.[23-24] [Section break] 9 170.[5-6]

108.6 saal saal 171.5

108.37 saal saal 172.17

109.1-2 >Miriam--'You've Miriam. ¶"You've 172.20-21

109.2 down, nothing else'--to down--nothing else." To 172.21-22

109.3 and, standing and standing 172.23

109.4 chair, to chair to 172.24

109.13 and, standing and standing 173.9

109.19 saal saal 173.17

109.[22-23] [Section break] 10 173.[21-22]

109.23 time, Miriam time Miriam 173.22

109.29 her, if her if 174.6

109.32-33 laughing, at the door, laughing at the door 174.11

109.34 >put her candle put the candle 174.13

109.35-36 >billowing bellowing* 174.15


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110.26 'Les toiles [. . .] peur!' 'Les toiles [. . .] peur!"* 175.23

110.28 window-frames window frames 175.26

110.29 chests, and chests and 176.2

111.13 Solomon's, she Solomon's she 177.4

111.14 sure, inclined sure inclined 177.5

111.19 toiles d'araignées toiles d'araignées 177.12

111.29 Audley? Audley." 177.25

111.[30-31] [Section break] 11 178.[0-1]

111.33 >smaller schoolroom little schoolroom 178.4

112.1 hall, made hall made 178.8

112.1 saal saal 178.9

112.2 Miriam, restlessly Miriam restlessly 178.10

112.3 early, had early had 178.11

113.1 voice, thinner voice thinner 180.5

113.[16-17] >[No section break] 12 181.[0-1]

113.17 >Miriam crept Miriam had crept 181.1

113.[33-34] [Section break] 13 181.[19-20]

114.4 walking, with walking with 182.5

114.5 roadway, throwing roadway throwing 182.7

114.[25-26] >[No section break] 14 183.[6-7]

114.37 Schwarzbrot schwarzbrot* 183.20-21

115.14 >standing in niches, in standing out in niches in 184.15-16

115.18 moment, as moment as 184.20

115.18 her, a look her a look 184.21

115.[25-26] [Section break] 15 185.[4-5]

115.34 her, and her and 185.18

118.[13-14] [Section break] 16 190.[0-1]

118.27 >and large and a large 190.19


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118.32 care, and care and 191.2

119.10 flower-filled [flower-filled 191.19-20

119.20 inquiries enquiries 192.6

119.34 >said, and 'how superstitious' when said, "and 'how superstitious' when* 192.23-24

120.[21-22] [Section break] 17 194.[4-5]

120.25 >sighed sighted* 194.8

120.28 light, they light they 194.12

120.32-33 stream and, from stream, and from 194.18

120.33 garden, a terraced garden a terraced 194.19

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122 >CHAPTER IX 18 195.[6-7]

122.32 jerseys, smocked jerseys smocked 196.23

123.1 clinging, that clinging that 196.24

123.[27-28] [Section break] 19 198.[6-7]

124.1 >childlike childish 198.16

124.7 saal saal 199.2

124.[17-18] [Section break] 20 199.[15-16]

124.24 leaves, brilliant leaves brilliant 199.23

125.19 pre-occupied* pre-occupied 201.10-11

125.26 country, seemed unreal, country seemed unreal 201.20

126.5 fear, and fear and 202.18

126.9 Apotheker apotheker 202.22

126.13-14 daunted, as Minna murmured, daunted as Minna murmured 203.1-2

126.15 Apotheker apotheker 203.4

126.[18-19] [Section break] 21 203.[7-8]

126.25 long thick, long, thick, 203.17

127.6-7 successor, newly arrived, successor newly arrived 204.15

127.14 Schokolade Schocolade* 204.24

127.15 Schlagsahne, until Schlagsahne until 204.24

127.17 basement, and basement and 205.1-2

127.20 saal saal 205.5

127.[23-24] [Section break] 22 205.[10-11]

127.25 saal saal 205.12


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127.27 there, smiling there smiling 205.15

127.34 >mannishness mannerishness* 206.1

129.6 >little man* little men 208.5

129.18 and, having and having 208.21

129.19 up, stood up stood 208.21

130.4 speechless, waiting speechless waiting 209.26

130.[9-10] >[Section break] CHAPTER VII 211

130.13 Miriam, more Miriam more 211.5

130.14 observation, Miriam observation Miriam 211.6

130.16 pile, and pile and 211.9

130.21 desperate, hard desperate hard 211.15

130.25 her, before her before 211.21

130.29 sat flaring sat, flaring 212.4

131.19 about her, she about her she 213.12

132 >CHAPTER X CHAPTER VIII 214


132.7 >grass, repellent grass repelling 214.9

132.8 supposed, to supposed to 214.11

132.16 saal saal 215.2

132.20 downstairs, she downstairs she 215.7

132.30 >knew, and had felt knew and felt 215.20-21

133.13 farm-house farmhouse 216.13

133.[34-35] [Section break] 2 217.[12-13]

134.2 wondering, in wondering in 217.16

134.3 Pfaff, into Pfaff into 217.17

134.8-9 mournfully, Fräulein mournfully. Fräulein 217.24

135.[4-5] [Section break] 3 219.[14-15]


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135.29 >Mademoiselle rather than herself to Mademoiselle to 220.26

136.16 know, Kinder, know Kinder 222.2

136.19 Gewiss, Jimmie Gewiss Jimmie 222.6

136.23 gently, gazing gently gazing 222.13

136.26 Don't for Don't, for 222.16

136.[31-32] [Section break] 4 223.[0-1]

137.11 instantly, as instantly as 223.19

137.16 >remember ever having remember having 224.2

137.18 coming, and coming and 224.5

137.19 Song of Hiawatha Song of Hiawatha 224.6

137.31 >Lilly Belton's Lilla Belton's 224.20

137.34 wide, excepting wide excepting 224.24

138.2 Solomon, all Solomon all 225.5

138.16 basement, she basement she 225.23

138.23 >yellow-backs yellow books* 226.5

138.38 church-room, all church-room all 226.23

139.[2-3] [Section break] 5 227.[0-1]

139.10 saal saal 227.10

139.19 schoolgirl. school-girl. 227.19

139.29 rest, in rest in 228.8

140.21 saal saal 229.18

140.28 were, looking were looking 229.26

141.9 >forehead and in the forehead and the 230.24

141.12 hand, with hand with 231.2

141.13 colouring, looked colouring looked 231.3

141.[14-15] [Section break] 6 231.[3-4]

141.16 saal saal 231.5


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141.20 saal saal 231.10

141.21 saal saal 231.11

141.21 room, through room through 231.12

141.22 window, through window through 231.13

141.23 way, to way to 231.14

142.[2-3] [Section break] 7 232.[10-11]

142.14 saal saal 233.2

142.18 voices--flutings voices,--flutings 233.6

142.18 phrases--long phrases, long 233.6

142.22 voice, climbing voice climbing 233.11

142.23 song, reached song reached 233.12

142.27 concert-room, in concert-room in 233.17

142.34 >it were something it was something 233.26

143.5 saal saal 234.8

143.24 piano, sewing piano sewing 235.5

143.27 bay-rum, humming bay-rum humming 235.10

143.30 refreshing, but refreshing but 235.13


144.[3-4] [Section break] 8 236.[0-1]

144.9 acting, the acting the 236.8

144.18 moaning, Ulrica moaning Ulrica 236.19

144.33 rapidly, sneeze rapidly sneeze 237.15

145.2 peacefully, as peacefully as 237.19-20

145.[2-3] [Section break] 9 237.[20-21]

145.7 thought, and thought and 238.2

145.25 landing, and landing and 238.26

145.[30-31] [Section break] 10 239.[7-8]

146.2 saal saal 239.12


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146.5 >the row of figures the room of figures* 239.16

146.8 Jimmie, with Jimmie with 239.20

146.13 immodesty! Immodesty! 240.4

146.18 Fräulein, sat Fräulein sat 240.11

146.30 >Once if had* Once it had 241.1

146.31 miserable, longing miserable longing 241.2

146.36 exactly, sitting exactly sitting 241.8

147.2 together, and together and 241.14

147.6 cannon-balls cannon balls 241.18

147.10 >it were still it was still 241.23

147.11 shock, which shock which 241.24

147.14 full, and full and 242.2

147.16 oily, half-smiling oily half-smiling 242.5

147.25 >Ber-ta! Bertha! 242.16

147.27 mein Kind mein kind* 242.18

147.30 knees, the knees the 242.23

147.33 inquired enquired 242.26

148.3 abate, a little abate a little 243.9

148.[4-5] [Section break] 11 243.[11-12]

148.5 Hendershon? Hendershon. 243.12

148.6 >had just had only just 243.14

149.6 cheek, and cheek and 245.8

149.[12-13] [Section break] 12 245.[15-16]

149.18 unchallenged, while unchallenged while 245.22

149.29 washstand wash-stand 246.14

150.4 tree, and tree and 247.1

150.21 > tops of heavy top of heavy* 247.23

151.1 red, and red and 248.21


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151.[9-10] [Section break] 13 249.[6-7]

151.13 horizon, the horizon the 249.11

151.16 saal saal 249.15

151.21 >ended against the ended on the 249.21-22

151.25 focused focussed 250.4

152.1 His hand His Hand 250.17

152.[2-3] [Section break] 14 250.[19-20]

152.3-4 afternoon, when the sky lifted, afternoon when the sky lifted 250.20-21

152.5 gloves, and gloves and 250.23

152.14 roadway, and roadway and 251.11

152.15 women, talking women talking 251.12

152.15 shouting, with shouting with 251.12

152.24 >old and green* gold and green 251.24

153.3 Herz hinein, / Herz hinein / 252.16

153.9 Ach, Studenten Ach Studenten 252.23

153.13 Millennium Millenium 253..3

153.20 honteux, mon honteux mon 253.14

154 >CHAPTER XI CHAPTER IX 254

154.1 [No section number] l 254

154.7 Miriam, who Miriam who 254.9

154.7 door, felt door felt 254.10

154.10 wheels, the wheels the 254.13

154.22 >the upper an upper 255.10

155.14 trees, the first trees the first 256.12

155.15 >part of Weber's the waltz movement of Weber's 256.12-13

155.30 even, slow, even slow 257.4

156.3 shame. . . .Fast shame. . .Fast* 257.17

156.12 student, holding student holding 258.2


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156.17 Fräulein, with Fräulein with 258.9

156.17 words, denied words denied 258.9

156.[19-20] [Section break] 2 258.[12-13]

156.20 >swiftly home swiftly along 258.13

157.13 ein Rad ein Rad 259.25

157.19 along, keeping along keeping 260.8

158 >CHAPTER XII CHAPTER X 261


159.[6-7] [Section break] 2 263.[7-8]

159.[12-13] [Section break] 3 263.[15-16]

159.24 saal saal 264.9

159.26 time, and time and 264.11

160.29 role rôle 266.1

160.36 half-tottering, decorous half-tottering decorous 266.10-11

161.4 saal saal 266.17

161.30 liebst, das liebst das 267.25

161.33 emphasized emphasised 268.2

162.[12-13] [Section break] 4 269.[0-1]

162.13 walked, she walked she 269.1

163.13 eyes, she eyes she 270.22

163.14 swiftly, bag in hand, swiftly bag in hand 270.23

163.22 les avances les avanses* 271.7

163.24 kerb curb 271.10

163.26 clever, Bair-ta clever Bair-ta 271.13

164.19 her, and her and 273.2

164.20 Lily! Lily! 273.3

164.22 room, and Ulrica, room and Ulrica 273.5-6

164.38 want? want? 273.24


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165.[9-10] [Section break] 5 274.[9-10]

165.21 believing, admiring, believing admiring 275.2

166.7 know, I know I 276.3

166.33 dear, I dear I 277.8

166.37 sure, in sure in 277.12

167.19 great, strong, great strong 278.11

168.2 saal saal 279.12

168.12 epergne épergne 279.24

168.14 thought, counting thought counting 280.1

168.14 up, that up that 280.1

168.18 >been here-- been there-- 280.6

168.[18-19] [Section break] 6 280.[7-8]

168.21 Iliad and Odyssey Iliad and Odyssey 280.12

168.28 Hudibras Hudibras 280.20

168.28 The Atomic Theory The Atomic Theory 280.20-21

168.28-29 Ballads and Poems Ballads and Poems 280.21

168.29 Kingslake's Crimea Kingslake's Crimea 280.22

168.29-30 Palgrave's Arabia Palgrave's Arabia 280.22-23

168.30 Crimea. . . . The Crimea Crimea. . . . The Crimea 280.23

168.32-33 Rise of . . . Rise of Rise of . . . Rise of 281.3-4

168.33 Rise of the Dutch Republic. . . . Rise of the Dutch Republic. . . . . 281.4-5

168.34 Rise of the Dutch Republic Rise of the Dutch Republic 281.5-6

168.34-35 Chronicles of the Schönberg-Cotta Family Chronicles of the Schönberg-Cotta Family 281.6-7

169.2 Motley's Rise Motley's Rise 281.10

169.3 Chronicles Chronicles 281.11

169.13 Ah-eh, if Ah-eh if 281.24

169.20 Worms Wörms 282.8


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169.21 with him.) . . . with him) . . . 282.8

169.30 Eine feste Burg Eine feste Burg 282.21

170.[5-6] [Section break] 7 283.[12-13]

170.7-8 ] A few [. . .] pass. . . . ] "A few [. . .] pass. . . ." 283.15-16

170.10-12 ] Swift to [. . .] I see. ] "Swift to [. . .] I see." 283.19-21

170.24 >Strength and Stay Strengthen Stay* 284.13

170.27 abide. . . . Thyself abide . . . Thyself* 284.16

171.[33-34] [Section break] 8 286.[14-15]

172.3 Pumpernickel Pumpernickel 286.21

172.19 >with stems with ornamental stems 287.15

172.27 the time? . . . the time. . . . 287.25-26

172.32 coming. . . . I coming . . . I* 288.6

172.33 teacher, and teacher and 288.7

172.38 nightcap night-cap 288.14

173.[2-3] [Section break] 9 288.[16-17]

173.4 emissary, but emissary but 288.19

173.8 saal saal 289.2

173.17 tone, Miriam tone Miriam 289.12

173.34 saal saal 290.7

174.3 looked, gravely looked gravely 290.11

174.[14-15] [Section break] 10 291.[0-1]

174.18 Thick, straight Thick straight 291.4

174.20 going? going? 291.8

174.24 Leaving? Leaving! 291.12

175.9 hand, 'have hand. "Have 292.14

175.32 at first. . . . at first . . . 293.16

176.1 'Venez, mon "Venez mon 293.25

176.[5-6] [Section break] 11 294.[5-6]


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176.19 be, by be by 294.21

176.23 creature. . . .' She creature . . ." She* 295.4

176.27 clear-cut, low-breathing clear-cut low-breathing 295.9

176.38 Eltern,' Fräulein Eltern." Fraulein* 295.20

177.7 sisters.' (And sisters" (And* 296.3

177.35 >hier here 297.12

178.1-2 condemnation, Miriam felt, condemnation Miriam felt 297.17-18

178.3 head, shining head shining 297.19

178.9 Here, in Here in 298.1

178.20 be, for you, be for you 298.15

178.27 mind, trying mind trying 298.23

179.21 dismissed, as dismissed as 300.13-14

179.[30-31] [Section break] 12 301.[0-1]

180.5 >doubles handicap double handicap* 301.11

180.35 them, she them she 302.26

181.3 window, Millie window Millie 303.8

181.4 >notes in a notes on a* 303.9

181.5 keyboard, her keyboard her 303.11

182.4 was the page was the page 305.5

182.5 >les yeux bruns foncés les yeux brunes foncées* 305.6

183.14 staring, with staring with 307.9

183.15 eyebrows, at eyebrows at 307.10

183.[22-23] [Section break] 13 307.[19-20]

183.29 stood, and stood and 308.4

185.19 Fräulein, standing Fräulein standing 311.9

185.19 step, pressed step pressed 311.10

185.27 smiling, Miriam smiling Miriam 311.21

185.36 up, to up to 312.5


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Titles of books, journals, music, etc.: Italics in CE " . . . " in Backwater 1916

Publishing house rules: Mr, Mrs etc. in CE Mr., Mrs. etc. in Backwater 1916

Foreign words and phrases: Italics in CE Italics in Backwater 1916


NOTE Backwater, unlike other first editions, normally uses single quotation marks for Miriam's explicit thoughts and for quoted words within a reflection. Though verbally the text is identical to CE, all such instances are noted in this catalogue and are marked thus: †.

SUMMARY OF VARIANTS

Of 586 variants, 217 represent commas inserted in CE and 45 mark changes in hyphenation. Of 91 substantive variants, 18 note section breaks not included in CE, 6 record changes in punctuation, including 2 italics, and 1 a difference in spelling.

In 14 instances CE deletes words found in E, including the title of the novel on the opening page of the text (CE189; E1); most are quite minor, except for a glance | a terrified glance (CE217.2; E52.9-10). In 3 instances a word or phase is added to CE: for example, strange remote rooms | strange rooms (CE269.27; E146.24-147.1).

There are 41 exchanges of words, many of them minor like the Beethoven | that Beethoven (CE204.22; E30.12), and oddities of spelling pointing to peculiarities of pronunciation: surely | sheerly (CE242.8; E97.25). Among the most interesting changes are: leisurely walk | flat-footed walk (CE252.15; E115.17); and staying in bed and reading Tit-Bits on | and reading "Tit-Bits" and staying in bed in it on (CE311.5; E221.13-14); and concession | confession (CE317.33; E234.5).

There are 3 misprints or errors in CE. The trickiest are: and sat instead of and ast [asked in Harriett's idiom] (CE201.27; E24.7); and Harry she instead of Harry he (CE295.16; E193.8), the pronoun referring to Gerald. The 5 misprints in E are obvious except for the French court which appears as the French count in E (CE226.10; E68.13).

In sum, the revisions to Backwater are even slighter than those to Pointed Roofs.




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189 >[No title] BACKWATER 1

189 CHAPTER 1 CHAPTER 1 1


189.9 and, beyond and beyond 1.11

189.9 palisade, of palisade of 1.11

190.17 long, sad, greyish long sad greyish 3.20

190.19 softly-moving softly moving 3.23

191.[18-19] [Section break] 2 5.[15-16]

192.[2-3] [Section break] 3 6.[16-17]

192.5 Favourite Favorite 6.20

192.26 left-hand left hand 7.23

194.[2-3] >[No section break] 4 10.[7-8]

194.10 road, Miriam road Miriam 10.18

194.[15-16] [Section break] 5 11.[0-1]

194.20 tram-lines tram lines 11.6

194.24 building bulging building, bulging 11.12

195.13 saal saal 12.18

195.14 >windows, its windows with its 12.18-19

195.14 sunlight; the sunlight, the 12.19

195.19 cross-road cross road 12.26


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195.[29-30] >[No section break] 6 13.[12-13]

196.[8-9] [Section break] 7 l4.[9-10]

196.[20-21] >[No section break] 8 15.[0-1]

196.29 >its tower its spire 15.11

196.34 side-streets side streets 15.17

197.[5-6] >[No section break] 9 16.[0-1]

198.[9-10] [Section break] 10 18.[0-1]

198.25 récherché récherché 18.21

199.[33-34] [Section break] 11 21.[0-1]

200.1 may-trees may trees 21.4

200.5 lime-trees lime trees 21.9


200.[29-30] [Section break] 12 22.[17-18]

200.35 >'What are you "What you 23.1

201.27 >and sat* and ast 24.7

202.12 >white rug drawing white sheepskin, drawing 25.10

202.30 dinner-time dinner time 26.5



204.9 >the hearthrug the sheepskin hearthrug 29.12-13

204.13 >Miriam made a Miriam was a 29.18

204.20 Klassische Stüche . . . Cavatina Klassische Stüche . . . Cavatina 30.8-9

204.23 >the Beethoven that Beethoven 30.12

205.2 and, looking and looking 30.26

205.3 lid, whispered lid whispered 30.26-31.1


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205.3 Romance Romance 31.1

205.4 Cavatina Cavatina 31.2



205.[11-12] [Section break] 2 31.[12-13]

205.[19-20] [Section break] 3 32.[0-1]


206.7 firm, large firm large 33.2

206.[10-11] >[No section break] 4 33.[5-6]

206.[22-23] >[No section break] 5 33.[20-21]

206.23 again, as again as 33.22

206.28 >week in the week at the 34.5

206.[32-33] [Section break] 6 34.[9-10]

207.23 every one everyone 35.19

207.[24-25] >[No section break] 7 35.[19-20]

207.[28-29] [Section break] 8 36.[0-1]

208.[2-3] [Section break] 9 36.[10-11]

208.18 watching, as she worked, watching as she worked 37.7-8

208.33 fingers, she fingers she 37.26

209.1 matches, the matches the 38.3

209.[23-24] [Section break] 10 39.[5-6]

209.25 smoke and, as smoke, and as 39.7

210.[2-3] [Section break] 11 40.[0-1]

210.21 wide, she wide she 40.23

210.26 shrieked, putting shrieked putting 41.7


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210.[30-31] [Section break] 12 41.[10-11]

211.3 dear! dear! 41.19

211.24 >have alcoves have the alcoves 42.20

211.32 dears! My dears!! dears! My dears !! 43.4

211.35 apple-trees apple trees 43.8

212.10 she is an she is an 43.25

212.18 dear! dear! 44.10

212.[33-34] [Section break] 13 45.[2-3]

213.33 pater's pater's* 46.17

213.36 hall-stand hall stand 46.21

214.6 de-doodle [ . . . de-doodle de doodle [ . . . de doodle 47.3-4

214.16 "Bitter-Sweet" [No ital] 'Bitter-Sweet' 47.16

214.[29-30] [Section break] 14 48.[6-7]

214.[32-33] ruddy, thick-set, ruddy thick-set 48.10-11

215.4 >music. music on the lid of the piano. 48.19-20

216.[8-9] [Section break] 15 50.[21-22]

217.2 >a glance a terrified glance 52.10

217.13 Harriett Harriettt* 52.23

217.[17-18] >[No section break] 16 53.[2-3]

218.[6-7] >[No section break] 17 54.[13-14]

218.[32-33] >[No section break] 18 55.[22-23]

219.21 Lorelei Lorelei 57.5


220.13 >was Ted was he 58.18



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220.[23-24] [Section break] 19 59.[4-5]

221.21 Ted, ready Ted ready 60.22

221.[26-27] [Section break] 20 61.[4-5]

225.13 ruby-shaded ruby shaded 67.17



226.10 >French court French count* 68.13

226.32 >on and on on and on and on 69.22

227.[25-26] [Section break] 2 71.[5-6]

227.26 Adèle--The Story of Adèle Adèle--the story of Adèle 71.6

227.35 >move a whole move--a whole 71.17-18

227.36 toilet cover toilet-cover 71.18-19

229.[4-5] [Section break] 3 74.[0-1]

230.3 Eh? What for? Eh? what for?* 75.19

230.17 Adèle Adèle 76.12

232.10 glanced on, gathering glanced on gathering 79.19

232.34 Beadie, still Beadie still 80.23


233.6 realization realisation 81.10

233.30 'uncultured' How* "Uncultured." How 82.16-17

233.33 back into back nto* 82.21

234.[3-4] [Section break] 4 83.[4-5]

234.4 the Standard "The Standard" 83.5

235.3 fine, chaste, fine chaste 84.26

235.4 The Standard "The Standard" 85.1-2


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235.5 penny rag, and penny rag and 85.2

235.15 Bell's Standard Elocutionist "Bell's Standard Elocutionist" 85.16

235.32 languages, and languages and 86.12

235.34-5 Bell's Standard Elocutionist "Bell's Standard Elocutionist" 86.15

236.2 >their backs their back* 86.22

236.8-9 Magnificat Magnificat 87.5

236.11 ' . . . and bay . . . "and bay 87.8

236.14 anything, whilst anything whilst 87.12

236.24 >Bürghers bürgers 87.25

237.[2-3] [Section break] 5 88.[20-21]

237.7 bone, and bone and 89.2

237.10 >with the expression with an expression 89.6

237.11 >despair that despair, this 89.6-7

237.16 fireplace fire-place 89.12

237.27 saal saal 90.1

237.35 psalm, they psalm they 90.11

238.11 fireplace fire-place 90.26

238.14-15 [Section break] 6 91.[3-4]

239.25 ground, in ground in 93.9

240.30 >'Did you "Did ye 95.12

241.2 hats, nobody hats nobody 95.24

241.32 Deborah? Deborah. 97.8

241.35 day-boarders day boarders 97.12

242.8 >But surely But sheerly 97.25

242.8 >Surely Sheerly 97.26


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242.11 >'surely.' " sheerly." 98.4

243.2 likeable likable 99.14

243.[3-4] [Section break] 7 99.[15-16]

243.26 the press the Press 100.21

243.27 Areopagitica Areopagitica 100.21

243.27 about, and about and 100.22

243.31 free press free Press 101.1

244.7 >wood, drawers of water; wood and drawers of water, 101.14-15

244.12 dog, and pointed collars, dog and pointed collars 101.22

244.29 'qualified' 'qualified'† 102.18

244.[31-32] >[No section break] 8 102.[19-20]

245.3 hall-table hall table l03.7

245.15 body, warm body warm 103.22

245.15 elastic, easily elastic easily 103.23

245.18 me, me; me, me; [; in ital] 104.1

245.20 her, declaring her declaring 104.4

245.31 bitterly; and bitterly, and 104.18

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247 CHAPTER IV CHAPTER IV 106


247.3 closed, Miriam's closed Miriam's 106.5

247.9 'emerald' 'emerald'† 106.11

247.9 'emerald velvet' 'emerald velvet'† 106.12

247.9 'velvety enamel' 'velvety enamel'† 106.12

248.10 large, fierce, bloodshot large fierce bloodshot 108.7

248.11 Hoo--angel Hoo--angel 108.8

248.14 Hoo--hoo Hoo--hoo 108.12-13

249.2 >willingly wilfully 109.20-21

249.5 conspiracy and, conspiracy, and 109.24

249.15 Burra, and Burra and 110.11

249.32 >stood at standing at 111.5

250.[2-3] [Section break] 2 111.[15-16]

250.5 'Koo, "Khoo, 111.19

250.17 elbows, shrinking elbows shrinking 112.10

250.19 gleaming, slithering gleaming slithering 112.12

252.3 disappeared, Miriam disappeared Miriam 115.1

252.4 hall and, as hall, and as 115.3

252.6 concrete, a girl concrete--a girl 115.5


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252.15 >leisurely walk flat-footed walk 115.17

253.1 >aunt it* aunt if 116.20

253.[10-11] [Section break] 3 117.[7-8]

253.20 'social' people 'social' people † 117.20

253.30 see, rising see rising 118.7

253.31 her, the far her the far 118.9

254.2 >the space they the circle they 118.16

254.10 thickly-ribbed thickly ribbed 119.1

254.17 chapel chapelle 119.9

254.27 cold, common cold common 119.22

254.32 time! time. 120.3

254.35 mouth, when mouth when 120.6

254.35 sideways, with sideways with 120.6

254.36 lip, and lip and 120.7

255.5 water-system water system 120.16

255.7 gas-meter gas meter 120.18-19

255.22 congregation, stirred congregation stirred 121.11

255.28 Pompous, pottering Pompous pottering 121.20

256.[2-3] [Section break] 4 122.[8-9]

256.33 >like that like this 123.22

257.31-32 'couldn't make [. . . said' 'couldn't make [ . . .] said'† 125.9-10

257.32 'old boy' 'old boy'† 125.10

257.38 criticize criticise 125.17

259.12 if He was if he was 127.26

259.12 supernatural, it supernatural it 128.1


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259.12-13 for Him to be as He for him to be as he 128.1-2

259.13 if He was if he was 128.2

260.4 ask pater ask Pater 129.13

260.5 Stabat Mater Stabat Mater 129.14

260.16-18 'I'm something [ . . . guns,' 'I'm something [ . . . guns,'† 130.2-4

261.1 'Upright as a dart,' 'Upright as a dart,'† 131.3

261.22 prayer-book and hymn-book prayer book and hymn book 132.3-4

261.[23-24] [Section break] 5 132.[4-5]

262.1-2 'infidels' 'infidels'† 132.21

262.2 'an honest [. . . sympathy,' 'an honest [. . . sympathy,'† 132.21-22

262.20 >herself very herself grow very 133.22

262.21 her, carrying her carrying 133.23

264 CHAPTER V CHAPTER V 136


264.22 quivering, gleeful quivering gleeful 137.12

264.23-24 'If you [. . . you have,' 'If you [. . . you have,'† 137.12-13

264.[25-26] >[No section break] 2 137.[15-16]

265.2 now, and now and 138.3

265.4 anything, but anything but 138.6

265.5 them, though, to them though to 138.8

265.6 awful; awful, 138.9

265.7 afterwards, when afterwards when 138.10

265.13-38 >'"Basement? [ . . . . ] something else. . . . Eve had [. . . . ] "Eve!" '

"'Basement? [. . . .] something else." . . . Eve had [ . . . . ] "Eve!"

138.18- 139.24

265.22 summer, and summer and 139.3


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265 .24 coat, and coat and 139.7

265.25 eyes, and eyes and 139.7

265.26 >at Weston- in Weston- 139.8

266.7 newly-purchased newly purchased 140.6

266.14 handkerchiefs, some handkerchiefs some 140.15

266.21 'suitable outfit,' 'suitable outfit,'† 140.24

266.22 'things [. . .] for you.' 'things [. . .] for you.'† 140.25

266.26 'You've [. . .] keeps you,' 'You've [. . .] keeps you,'† 141.4-5

266.[36-37] >[No section break] 3 141.[17-18]

267.1 gas-bracket gas bracket 141.21

267.35 lamp-post, Harry lamp-post. Harry 143.14-15

267.35 P.S. P'S.* 143.15

268.[3-4] [Section break] 4 143.[22-23]

268.15 >Ah, this Ah, that 144.13

269.[24-25] [Section break] 5 146.[21-22]

269.26 caps, and caps and 146.24

269.27 >strange remote rooms strange rooms 146.24-147.1

270.4 lamp; 'painless lamp "painless 147.18

270.19 time, was time was 148.10

270.32 feeling, and feeling and 149.1

271.2 >back and not back was not 149.11

271.3 you, and you and 149.12

272 CHAPTER VI CHAPTER VI 151



247

272.28 startled, wandering startled wandering 152.18

272.30 train, by train by 152.20

273.28 >and did and that did 154.4

273.36 you will, too, you will too 154.15

274.10 >take top take the top 155.2

274.[14-15] >[No section break] 2 155.[7-8]

274.19 Park, she Park she 155.13

274.28 time, as time as 156.1

275.5 for, I'll for I'll 156.19

275.7 March, I'll March I'll 156.22

275.[8-9] [Section break] 3 156.[22-23]

275.30 any one anyone 158.1

275.34 jewellery jewelry 158.6

278.[10-11] [Section break] 4 162.[9-10]

278.22 days, too, days too 162.23

278.29 >Julia was she was 163.9

278.33 owing, too, owing too 163.14-15

279.3 day, she day she l63.21

279.7 free, if she chose, free if she chose l64.1

279.19 light, it light it 164.16

279.34 governess's governess' 165.9

280.[14-15] [Section break] 5 l66.[7-8]

280.22 voice, gave voice gave 166.17

280.28 >quiet street quiet side street 167.1

281.2 window, meaninglessly window meaninglessly 167.12


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281.3 last, she last she 167.14

281.12 half-familiar half familiar 167.26-168.1

281.22 volumes, and volumes and 168.13

282.[6-7] [Section break] 6 169.[15-16]

282.9 gas-jet gas jet 169.18

282.23 corners, had corners had 170.14

283.11 thumb-joint thumb joint 171.15

283.31 laid, unchanged laid unchanged 172.17

283.[31-32] [Section break] 7 172.[17-18]

284.9 heaven; keeping heaven, keeping 173.10

284.16 desirable. But desirable, but 173.20

284.[30-31] [Section break] 8 174.[13-14]

285.1 >stained windows painted windows 174.21

285.2 carpeted carpetted* [cf. 183.20-21] 174.22-23

285.21 'Hungerford' 'Hungerford'† 175.22

285.[27-28] [Section break] 9 176.[4-5]

286.[17-18] [Section break] 10 177.[12-13]

286.[25-26] [Section break] 11 178.[0-1]

287.[6-7] [Section break] 12 178.[18-19]

287.9 first- and first and 178.21-22

287.11 door, she door she 179.2

288.1 agonizing agonising 180.7

288.[29-30] [Section break] 13 181.[19-20]

288.33 >of the maze of a maze 181.24


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289.4 door, with door with 182.9

289.6 conservatory, made conservatory made 182.11

289.14 -mouthed, harsh- -mouthed harsh- 182.21

289.[29-30] [Section break] 14 183.[15-16]

289.30 dark, narrowly-echoing dark narrowly echoing 183.16

289.34 landing, and landing and 183.21

290.13 whatnots what-nots 184.16

291.2-3 'almost perfection.' 'almost perfection.'† 184.26

292.9 funerals, if funerals if 188.4

293 CHAPTER VII CHAPTER VII 189


293.3 downstream down-stream 189.4

293.4 waited, sitting waited sitting 189.6

293.16 la reine la reine 190.1

293.21 downstream down-stream 190.6

293.26 upstream up-stream 190.11

294.3 >in through out through 190.20

294.[19-20] >[No section break 2 191.[14-15]

294.31 >large picnic large noisy picnic 192.5

295.5 la reine la reine 192.20-21

295.16 >Harry she* Harry he 193.8

295.18 la reine la reine 193.11

295.30-31 >Heath. Liked bulls-eyes. Heath eating peppermints. 194.1-2

295.[31-32] [Section break] 3 194.[2-3]

296.5 foot-board footboard 194.15


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296.18-19 swing and, letting swing, and letting 195.6

296.31 'Vive la reine. "Vive la reine. 195.21

296.[34-35] [Section break] 4 196.[0-1]

296.35 day, after tea, day after tea 196.1

297.7 lawn, following, lawn following 196.11

297.8 surrounding, responding surrounding responding 196.11

297.27 it, intoned it intoned 197.12

297.29 along, by along by 197.15

298.[5-6] [Section break] 5 198.[7-8]

298.8 estate, streamed estate streamed 198.11

298.13 >found the lane found it 198.17

298.23 done, and done and 199.6

298.31 who, looking who looking 199.15

298.31 road, would road would 199.15

299.18 >rushing to meet rushing to 200.16

300.[4-5] [Section break] 6 201.[18-19]

300.22 jolly, now jolly now 202.15

300.23 ordinary, with ordinary with 202.16

300.30 them, and them and 202.25

301.25 for words,'* for words." 204.10

301.30 Mimmy-Jim Mimmy--Jim 204.15

301.32 horrid, knowing horrid knowing 204.18

302.2 eyes, in eyes in 204.26

302.5 you do you do 205.3

302.[6-7] >[No section break] 7 205.[4-5]


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302.12 tree-tops, serene tree-tops serene 205.11-12

302.13 secret, cast secret cast 205.12

302.18 'Ullo Ullo 205.19

302.18 >setting herself sitting herself up 205.20

302.30 her, spreading her spreading 206.9

303.7 ageing, deadening ageing deadening 207.3

303.9 longer, as longer as 207.6

303.21 everybody; mewed everybody, mewed 207.21

303.[21-22] [Section break] 8 207.[21-22]

304.6 naked, and naked and 208.20

304.14 >prosperous face prosperous shape 209.5-6

304.20 talking, and talking and 209.12

304.25-26 >as Eve frowned at Eve frowning 209.20

304.36 window, open- window open- 210.7

304.38 bright, hardly bright hardly 210.10

305.[4-5] [Section break] 9 210.[15-16]

305.5 apple-trees apple trees 210.16

305.8 Gerald, and Gerald and 210.20

305.11 Aquarium aquarium 210.24

305.12 Aquarium, with aquarium with 211.1

305.13 sea air, and sea air and 211.3


305.29 >But the And yet the 211.24

306.3 Aquarium aquarium 212.9-10

306.5 >every one everybody 212.12


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306.20 family, after family after 213.1

306.22 family, Eve family Eve 213.3

306.30 needn't, she'd needn't she'd 213.14

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307.9 voice: voice, 214.12

307.16 clumsy, either clumsy either 215.2

307.20-21 'young ladies.' 'young ladies.'† 215.8

307.21-22 distinguished? distinguished. 215.9

307.22 ease, she ease she 215.10

307.24 ahead, Eve ahead Eve 215.12

308.3 was, forced was forced 216.2

308.4 -looking, strange -looking strange 216.3

308.20 last, anxiously last anxiously 216.23

308.35 slower, until slower until 217.16

308.36 up, and up and 217.17

309.4 to you, you to you you 217.25

309.19 chance, because chance because 218.18

310.2 giggling, dressy giggling dressy 219.18

310.[6-7] [Section break] 2 219.[21-22]

310.9 home-life, she home-life she 220.1

310.10 elm-trees elm trees 220.[2-3]

310.16 dim cool dim, cool [!] 220.9



310.24 cruel, silly cruel silly 220.19

311.4-5 >and staying in bed and reading Tit-Bits on

and reading "Tit-Bits" and staying in bed in it on

221.13-14

311.27 fifty, and fifty and 222.15

312.[17-18] [Section break] 3 224.[2-3]

312.19 week, Eve week Eve 224.4

313.12 crooked, and crooked and 225.17

313.30 hill, with hill with 226.14

313.32 'other people' 'other people'† 226.16

314.1 streets, Eve streets Eve 226.25

314.3 townspeople, they townspeople they 227.2

314.[4-5] >[No section break] 4 227.[3-4]

314.8 thickly-twisted thickly twisted 227.8

314.28 Firmly, delicately, Firmly delicately 228.10

314.37 I say, it's I say; it's 228.21

315.2 pavement, crying pavement crying 228.25

315.4 them, alone them alone 229.1

315.7 by, followed by followed 229.5

315.[11-12] [Section break] 5 229.[10-11]

315.13 sea, Miriam sea Miriam 229.12

315.15 Stringer, walking Stringer walking 229.15

315.32 rocks, she rocks she 230.12

315.34 her, watching her watching 230.16

316.9 alone, because alone because 231.2

316.11 known them, she known them she 231.4



316.22 her, it seemed her it seemed 231.18

316.29 been, during been during 232.1

316.30 years, holidays years holidays 232.2

316.37 begun, and begun and 232.11

317.[10-11] >[No section break] 6 233.[0-1]

317.13 out, as she walked, out as she walked 233.4

317.26 to her, she to her she 233.20

317.32 general, as general as 234.4

317.33 >concession confession 234.5

318.19 moon-song moon song 235.10

318.19 Mikado Mikado 235.10

318.[23-24] [Section break] 7 235.[14-15]

318.24 bacon, and bacon and 235.16

318.31-32 >double entente double entendre 236.1

319.12 music-halls musical halls 236.21

320.1 there, had there had 238.2

320.11 warm, or warm or 238.16

320.14 -houses, face-towels -houses face towels 238.20

320.[14-15] [Section break] 8 238.[21-22]

320.24 Eve, might Eve might 239.9

320.24-25 'Funny [ . . . get on,' 'Funny [ . . . get on,'† 239.9-10

320.29 sting, as sting as 239.15

320.30 hand, out hand out 239.16

321.9 puzzling, came puzzling came 240.8

321.14 night, towards night towards 240.15



321.15 time, they time they 240.16

321.21 talk, and talk and 240.24

321.22 realizing realising 240.24

321.24 >dinner-parties banquets 241.1

321.27 emphasis: emphasis, 241.5

321.28 words, the old words the old 241.6

321.31-32 deck-chairs deck chairs 241.10-11

322.27 screamed, wildly screamed wildly 243.3

323 CHAPTER IX CHAPTER IX 244


323.11 'set pieces' 'set pieces'† 244.14

324.9 'a triumph of ingenuity' 'a triumph of ingenuity'† 246.8-9

324.19 fireworks? fireworks. 246.21

324.35 and, beyond and beyond 247.15

324.36 platform, a huge platform a huge 247.16

326.14 school, just school just 250.7

326.[20-21] [Section break] 2 250.[13-14]

326.21 trees, showed trees showed 250.15

328.17 'No,' said "No" said 253.26

328.17 tightening, 'not tightening "not 254.1

329 CHAPTER X CHAPTER X 255


329.14 >anything about it. anything with her. 255.17-18

329.23 'I was [. . .] right,' 'I was [. . .] right,'† 256.9-10

329.24-27 'I'm escaping [. . .] tyranny.' 'I'm escaping [. . .] tyranny.'† 256.11-15



329.27-29 'My hat [. . .] again,' 'My hat [. . .] again,'† 256.15-17

329.28 that one? that one. 256.16

330.9 'Oh,' she 'Oh,' she † 257.7

330.10-13 'you are [. . .] all right.' 'you are [. . .] all right.† 257.7-12

330.13 shook, staring shook staring 257.13

330.15-17 'She thinks [. . .] alone.' 'She thinks [. . .] alone.'† 257.16-18

330.17 me, puzzled me puzzled 257.18

331.18-19 'Fancy [. . .] out now,' Fancy [. . .] out now,'† 259.10-12

332.1 thought; if thought, if 260.11

332.[2-3] [Section break] 2 260.[12-13]

332.13 painful, with painful with 261.1

332.18 for her, for for her for 261.7

332.24 happy now? happy now. 261.14

332.32 Pernes's Pernes' 261.25

332.[32-33] [Section break] 3 262.[0-1]

333.7 intimacy, she intimacy she 262.11

333.12 feebleness, and feebleness and 262.19

333.20-23 'The business [. . .] facts,' 'The business [. . .] facts,'* 263.5-9

333.32 understood, and understood and 263.20

333.33 even, when she failed, even when she failed 263.22

334.8 clung, told clung told 264.12

334.13 fawned, she fawned she 264.19

334.14 >were torn were fighting 264.19

334.24 fail her and, fail her, and 265.6-7

334.25 failed, there failed there 265.7



334.37 the Psalm of Life 'the Psalm of Life'* 265.23

334.38 memorize memorise 265.24

335.[4-5] [Section break] 4 266.[4-5]

335.27 'English' 'English'† 267.11

335.31 'wee things' 'wee things'† 267.15

335.35 'education' 'eduction'† 267.21

336.[9-10] [Section break] 5 268.[6-7]

336.12 'good' 'good'† 268.9

336.34 Jenny, always Jenny always 269.13

337.15-16 Burra, after her first grief, Burra after her first grief 270.7

337.21 success, was success was 270.14


337.[30-31] [Section break] 6 271.[0-1]

337.31 'personal' [. . .] 'personal' 'personal' [. . .] 'personal'† 271.1-2

337.32 >girls' schools girls, schools* 271.3

338.3 'aesthetic' 'aesthetic'† 27l.9

338.9 thing, though, thing though 271.15-16

338.[9-10] [Section break] 7 271.[16-17]

339.2 'very peculiar' 'very peculiar'† 273.4

339.4 'doties' 'doties'† 273.6

339.[17-18] [Section break] 8 274.[0-1]

339.31 greenhouse green-house 274.17

340.1 >stood, with stood, and with 274.24-275.1

340.7 twos, relieved twos relieved 275.8



340.[14-15] [Section break] 9 275.[17-18]

340.[29-30] [Section break] 10 276.[11-12]

341.3-5 'assert my [. . .] the ground,' 'assert my [. . .] the ground,'† 276.18-21

341.8-18 'no more [. . .] affectionately.' 'no more [. . .] affectionately.'† 277.1-15

341.15 >life had life and* 277.11

341.17-18 au revoir au revoir* 277.14

341.22-25 'We had [. . .] and humble.' 'We had [. . .] and humble.'† 277.21-23

341.25 All the all the* 277.24

341.33 'another of [. . .] engaged' 'another of [. . .] engaged'† 278.9

341.[34-35] [Section break] 11 278.[11-12]

342.11 resentment, and resentment and 279.1

342.[13-14] [Section break] 12 279.[4-5]

342.17 them:'You really [. . .] there?' them, 'You really [. . .] there?'† 279.9-10

342.18 'You'll go [. . .] you leave?' 'You'll go [. . .] you leave?'† 279.10-11

342.19 'that's a mystery to me---' 'that's a mystery to me---'† 279.11-12

342.25 mantelshelf mantel-shelf 279.20

342.29 heavily-edged heavily edged 279.24

343.6 church and, crashing church and crashing 280.16

343.7 prayer, went prayer went 280.17

343.18 Mrs Philps's Mrs. Philps' 281.5

343.28 spare-room, with spare-room with 281.20

343.28 >Limoges Bruges 281.20

343.[34-35] [Section break] 13 282.[2-3]

344.4 ceremonies, Miriam ceremonies Miriam 282.8

344.20 applause, roused applause roused 283.4



344.[30-31] [Section break] 14 283.[17-18]

344.34 >almost at once almost once* 283.20-21

344.34 weeping, came weeping came 283.21

345.[15-16] [Section break] 15 284.[17-18]

345.23 disturbed, with disturbed with 285.3-4

346.14 door, in door in 286.9

346.15 spoken to, a deep spoken to a deep 286.10

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CE: Volume I, Book 3, 1938 / 1967 E: London: Duckworth, 1917 Quotation marks for dialogue, and for sayings: ' . . . ' in CE " . . . " in Honeycomb 1916

Titles of books, journals, music, etc.: Italics in CE " . . . " in Honeycomb 1916

Publishing house rules: Mr, Mrs etc. in CE Mr., Mrs. etc. in Honeycomb 1916

Foreign words and phrases: Italics in CE Italics in Honeycomb 1916


SUMMARY OF VARIANTS

Of 802 variants in Honeycomb, 409 are inserted commas in CE, and 34 are changes in hyphenation. I count 159 substantive variants. Of these, 75 comprise differences in: section breaks (29), punctuation (12), italics (4), spelling (8), number (1), word order (1), and changes in tense (20).

On 25 occasions Richardson deletes words, including the title of the novel on the first page of text. Some of the deletions are minor words like a, and, and the. Some are words that repeat or say much the same thing as other words in the context. In two cases especially matters of substance are removed: She hurried | Thoroughly frightened she hurried (CE418.6; E128.19); and remote. She | remote. She was alone in a strange, luxurious room that did not belong to her, lit by a hard electric light that had been put there by some hardworking mechanic to whom the house was just a house with electric fittings. She (CE431.32; E154.15-19). (The Corries are elsewhere said to have gas lighting.) Richardson adds a single word to CE in 6 instances, none of import.

There are 36 substitutions in wording between the two editions, most of them routine. But note openly | secretly (CE363.25; E28.1); her spirit | her body (CE408.18; E111.15); and 3 instances of Jin Tower as Kate (CE429-30; E150-51).

I record 5 misprints/errors in CE. Note the awkward repetition of in the middle of the pavement, in the midst of the pavement, in the midst of the tide | in the middle of the pavement, in the midst of the tide (CE417.14-15; E127.15-16). At CE361.24-28, Richardson within a single set of quotations marks runs together Miriam's thought about Wiggerson and Miriam's speech to her. The same passage offers one of the 12 errors in E. Richardson encloses Miriam's silent address to Wiggerson within quotation marks but then neglects to begin Miriam's speech to Wiggerson with a quotation mark (E24.20-24). Three of the other errors in E are also matters of punctuation. Of



those remaining, one is almost impossible to detect: the colored drawings in Mr. Corrie's study are of horses (CE366.24), not of houses (E33.15).

The revisions to Honeycomb, though more numerous than to the previous novels, are just as minor.


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349 CHAPTER I CHAPTER I 1


349.6 >this moment that moment 1.8

349.15 London, the London the 2.5

349.18 ahead, and ahead and 2.9

349.20 >recall only only recall 2.11

349.23 unreasonable; unreasonable, 2.15

349.23 moment, alone moment alone 2.16

349.24 father, when father when 2.16

349.25 hearth-rug, with hearth-rug with 2.17

349.25 behind her, and behind her and 2.18

349.31 weather, and weather and 2.25

350.1 upholstered, unexpectedly upholstered unexpectedly 3.2

350.2 train, she train she 3.3

350.6 April, one April . . . one 3.8

350.8-9 moment. But moment . . . but 3.11

350.10 wonderful, that wonderful that 3.13

350.14 promising. A vision promising . . . a vision 3.18

350.15 come. A thing come . . . a thing 3.20

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350.16 forget, go forget; go 3.21

350.17 again; something again, something 3.22

350.18 >autumn. Perhaps autumn . . . spring; coming; perhaps 3.23-24

350.19 round. She round. . . . She 3.25

350.21 world, it had world it had 4.2

350.27-28 now, coming to Newlands, now coming to Newlands 4.10

351.2 darkness, softly darkness softly 4.26

351.6-7 softly-lit softly lit 5.6

351.25 endure, and endure and 6.3

351.29 >Germany, that had Germany and been crushed because she was the despised pupil teacher, that had

6.9-10

352.5 try, seemed try seemed 7.2

352.7 voice, coming voice coming 7.6

352.[18-19] [Section break] 2 7.[20-21]

352.21 light and light, and 7.23

352.21 parlourmaid, who parlourmaid who 7.24

352.27 saying: 'Ello saying "Ello 8.8

352.29 above, as above as 8.11

352.31 box-office box office 8.12

352.32 lamps, shaded lamps shaded 8.14

352.34 grate, fell grate fell 8.16

353.4 voice, coming voice coming 8.22

353.4 >Raising her eyes, Half raising her eyes 8.23-24

353.5 turquoise-blue turquoise blue 8.24

353.16 staircase, Miriam staircase Miriam 9.12


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354.13 >like these being like this being 11.5


354.19 fragrant, even fragrant even 11.14

354.29 blue-covered blue covered 12.1

354.[31-32] [Section break] 3 12.[4-5]

354.32 wine-clear, wine-clear 12.5-6

355.8 head, and head and 12.19

355.12 >pictures picture 13.1

355.22 and, floating and floating 13.13

355.33 Mélie, as Mélie as 14.2

355.37 Oh-h-h, Oh-h-h 14.6

355.38 Cloches de Corneville Cloches de Corneville 14.8

356.5 stopped, fearfully, stopped fearfully 14.14

356.18 >Spinnick? Ah, nicey spinnick Spinnich? Ah, nicey spinnich 15.3-4

356.25 cream, intoxicated cream intoxicated 15.12

357.[17-18] [Section break] 4 17.[0-1]

358.10 blue, with blue with 18.12

358.23 mantel, staring mantel staring 18.26

358.24 phrases, from phrases from 19.1

358.24 Bennett, as if Bennett as if 19.2

358.30 dress. She dress She* 19.9-10

359.11 again, hard again hard 20.8

359.12 grate, in grate in 20.9

359.[23-24] [Section break] 5 21.[0-1]

359.28 made, in made in 21.6


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359.28 flowers, by flowers by 21.7

360.1 secret, and secret and 21.17

360.2 serving it, and serving it and 21.18

360.6 wardrobe, she wardrobe she 21.24

360.10 house, she house she 22.5

360.[20-21] [Section break] 6 22.[19-20]

360.21 door, half door half 22.21

360.22 called her, to called her to 22.21-22

360.28 fire, and fire and 23.5

360.29 -rug, caught by a foot, -rug caught by a foot 23.5-6

360.35 twisted, and twisted and 23.13

361.9 capless, with capless with 23.25

361.18 do exceptS do, except 24.10

361.24-28 >'you'll have [. . . .] a servant. . . . I think perhaps I will,'* SEE NOTE 1

"you'll have [. . . .] a servant. . . ." I think perhaps I will,"*

24.20-24

NOTE 1 Possibly, after noticing the first edition's missing quotation mark at the beginning of Miriam's actual speech to Wiggerson, Richardson decided to run together in a single quotation the words Miriam 'said within' and the words, having cleared her throat, she said out loud.



362.1 dining-room, the dining-room the 25.2


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362.16 >about Sybil's about her 25.19

362.16 >and short and her short 25.19-20

362.18 the 's' the s 26.1

362.23 >she'll she'll 26.9

362.23 instead of us. . . . Vat's instead of us . . . Vat's* 26.9-10

363.7 twelve, the boy twelve the boy 27.5

363.16 governess, and governess and 27.16

363.25 >openly secretly 28.1

364.[5-6] [Section break] 2 29.[0-1]

364.11 out-stretched* out-stretched 29.7

364.23 >the opposite wall the wall opposite her 29.22

364.[23-24] [Section break] 3 30.[0-1]

364.24 breathless, the breathless the 30.1

364.26-27 and, peering closely, and peering closely 30.4

364.28 stumblingly, with stumblingly with 30.7

364.29 Corrie, and Corrie and 30.8

365.2 words, spoken words spoken 30.13

365.2 separately, were separately were 30.14

365.3 Its chorus, Its chorus 30.15

365.11 >of jerkily of disconnected jerkily 30.24

365.13 performance, Miriam performance Miriam 31.3

365.21 candles, and candles and 31.14

365.[22-23] >[No section break] 4 31.[15-16]

365.25 evening-dress evening dress 31.18

365.28 silk, edged silk edged 31.23


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365.29 velveteen, which velveteen which 31.24

365.30 elbow, could elbow could 32.1

365.32 bone, and bone and 32.4

365.36 hair, and hair and 32.9

366.4 >in heah in here 32.16

366.6 watch-dog, barking watch-dog barking 32.19

366.10 >In heah In here 32.23

366.11 door, set door set 32.25

366.13 door, was door was 33.1

366.14 leather-covered leather covered 33.3

366.20 polite, pleased, polite pleased 33.11

366.24 >of horses of houses* 33.15

366.35 London, to London to 34.3

367.11 that, to hear that to hear 34.21

367.[12-13] [Section break] 5 34.[22-23]


367.17 eyes, taking eyes taking 35.5


367.21-22 dark-fringed, dark fringed 35.10

367.22 caressing, smiling caressing smiling 35.10

368.7 >bringing sharp bringing the sharp 36.9-10

368.12 like, when like when 36.16



369.2 air, driving air driving 38.3


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369.9 children, she children she 38.11

369.24 Outside, the Outside the 39.11

369.26 villa, there villa there 39.13

370.1 door, Miriam door Miriam 39.22

370.14 realize? realise? 40.12

370.14 to realize to realise 40.12

370.15 patronize patronise 40.13

370.18 open, showing open showing 40.17

370.18-19 -table and, beyond it, -table, and beyond it 40.18

370.19 gloom, a squat gloom a squat 40.19

370.27 arm-chair armchair 41.3

370.30 >there, too, spring there too the spring 41.7

370.33 table-billiards table billiards 4l.10

371.7 it lit, and it lit and 41.26

371.[15-16] [Section break] 2 42.[11-12]

371.16 dinner-time dinner time 42.12

371.17 her own, with her own with 42.14

371.20 fair-haired, middle-aged fair-haired middle-aged 42.17

371.26 cure ! cure ! 43.2

371.30 shape, seated shape seated 43.7

372.12 dyed, and dyed and 44.4

372.13 at all, she at all she 44.5

372.[20-21] >[No section break] 3 44.[14-15]

372.22 fire, Mrs fire Mrs. 44.16

372.24 Joey, pleading toothache, Joey pleading toothache 44.19


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373.3 won't if won't, if 45.18

373.27 one, with one with 46.20

373.37 chin, Sing* chin. Sing 47.4

374.10 beautiful, and beautiful and 47.19

374.14 >shining until shining in 47.24-25

374.[21-22] [Section break] 4 48.[6-7]

374.25 fireplace, looking fireplace looking 48.11

374.29 >he's come he'd come 48.16

374.30 she was, and she was and 48.17

375.1 table, was table was 48.24

375.10 after, the quick after the quick 49.12

375.15 bathroom, and bathroom and 49.19

375.20 downstairs, she downstairs she 49.25

375.28 lamp, and lamp and 50.9

375.31 hall, past hall past 50.14

375.32 door, and door and 50.15

375.33 >soft sleeve soft coat sleeve 50.17

375.33 jacket, and jacket and 50.17

376.3 dining, and dining and 51.2

376.19 nothing, as nothing as 51.23

376.20 table, but table but 51.24

376.25 day; and day and 52.3

376.[29-30] >[No section break] 5 52.[9-10]

376.35 jokes, and jokes and 52.16


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377.4 fussy, with fussy with 52.25

377.4 >elaborately elaborate 53.1

377.31 voice, Mr voice Mr. 54.9

377.[37-38] >[No section break] 6 54.[17-18]

379.[33-34] [Section break] 7 58.[5-6]

380.6 phrases, pausing phrases pausing 58.15

380.[15-16] >[No section break] 8 59.[3-4]

380.17 came in, leaving came in leaving 59.5

380.23 time, behind time behind 59.13

381.[20-21] [Section break] 9 61.[7-8]

381.28 little, what little what 6l.17

381.31 time, waiting time waiting 61.21

382.25 subject, and subject and 63.9

383.[22-23] [Section break] 10 65.[2-3]

383.23 fire, dipping fire dipping 65.3

383.28 >painful, came painful, painful came 65.11

383.32 annoyed her, and annoyed her and 65.15

383.34 >that it was that was 65.18

384.16 author was, the author was the 66.15

384.31 >the thin serried the slender serried 67.8

385.17 >Bunyan? . . . He Bunyan? . . . No. . . . He 68.15

385.[22-23] [Section break] 11 69.[0-1]

385.[30-31] >[No section break] 12 69.[10-11]


386.13 >life is at life was at 70.11


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386.14 >is looking was looking 70.13

386.14 >life is life was 70.13

386.15 >people go to people went to 70.14

386.16 >It means It meant 70.16

386.17 >know it knew it 70.17

386.18 >they are they were 70.18

386.18 >is why was why 70.18

386.18 >they can they could 70.18

386.19 >they see they saw 70.19

386.20 >That is That was 70.21

386.23 >is some was some 70.24

386.24 >that show are that showed were 70.26

386.31 >What is What was 71.8

387.4 ceased, every one ceased everyone 71.23

387.8 >Dinner was the Dinners were like all the 72.1-2

387.11 laugh, as if laugh as if 72.6

387.23 >about worldliness about the worldliness 72.21

387.26-27 >Take each [ . . .] beneath it. "Take each [ . . .] beneath it." 72.25-26

387.29 actor, listening actor listening 73.2

388.1 chanciness, but chanciness but 73.15

388.12 realizing realising 74.5

389 CHAPTER IV CHAPTER IV 75


389.10 over and, beyond over and beyond 75.14

389.27 detached, she detached she 76.15


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390.1 regularly, at regularly at 76.24

390.1 day, from day from 76.25

390.4 astonished her, and astonished her and 77.2

390.5 readings, they readings they 77.4

390.13 ideas, as ideas as 77.13

390.23 generalizations generalisations 77.26

390.[33-34] [Section break] 2 78.[14-15]

391.6 convives convives 79.1

391.17 or, if or if 79.15

391.[33-34] [Section break] 3 80.[10-11]

392.2 home, it home it 80.14

392.22 >is fair is fair 81.18

392.[23-24] [Section break] 4 81.[18-19]

392.30 hall, she hall she 82.2

393.1 eyes, half eyes half 82.10

393.6 door, Mrs door Mrs. 82.16

393.19 >said, in the said and in the 83.6

393.[27-28] [Section break] 5 83.[17-18]

393.30 palings, and palings and 83.21

393.35 >his head its head 84.3

394.18 easily by; easily by: 84.26

394 .[37-38] >[No section break] 6 86.[0-1]

395.1 road, the road the 86.2

395.5 bridge, mopping bridge mopping 86.8

395.19 her, wagging her wagging 87.2


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395.29 town, unless town unless 87.14

395.31 added in added, in 87.18

395.34 -place, waiting -place waiting 87.22

395.[35-36] >[No section break] 7 87.[23-24]

396.5 common, asking common asking 88.9

396.8 behind; behind, 88.12

396.26 walls, and walls and 89.10

396.27 there, singing there singing 89.11

396.35 aloud, they aloud they 89.21

397.[19-20] [Section break] 8 91.[0-1]

397.25 hall, Stokes hall Stokes 91.8

397.[29-30] >[No section break] 9 91.[12-13]

398.2 vendredi, dimanche vendredi dimanche 91.22

398.3 >pleurera." ' pleurera.' '* [for ' "] 91.22

398.4 door, she door she 92.1

398.9 jacket, with jacket with 92.7

398.16 killed!'; killed"; 92.17

398.16 to her!' to her"; 92.17

398.17 save vem!' the save vem"; the 92.18

398.17 shrieked, and shrieked and 92.18

398.24 save vem!' save vem," 93.1-2

398.25 instantly? instantly? 93.3

398.31-32 figure, flying through it, figure flying through it 93.11

399.[2-3] [Section break] 10 93.[22-23]

399.4 children, followed children followed 94.1


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399.5 bloodshot, blinking bloodshot blinking 94.2

399.15 sunset, Miriam sunset Miriam 94.15

399.15 >all the time all that time 94.16

399.[22-23] [Section break] 11 95.[0-1]

400.3 table, and table and 95.16

400.21 once, on once on 96.16

400.34 Mrs. Corrie* Mrs. Corrie 97.7

401.[2-3] >[No section break] 12 97.[14-15]

401.11 >wagons waggons* 98.1

401.17 once, with once with 98.9

401.18 glare, buying glare buying 98.11

401.22 diamonds, like chocolates, diamonds like chocolates 98.15-16

401.[31-32] [Section break] 13 99.[2-3]

402.25 >and rose-white and a rose-white* 100.13

403.[8-9] >[No section break] 14 101.[14-15]

403.11 >near either near on either 101.17

403.[31-32] [Section break] 15 102.[20-21]

404.4 fire, and fire and 103.6

404.11-12 music----they music--they 103.14-15

404.15 lamp-lit, flower- lamp-lit flower- 103.19

404.[18-19] >[No section break] 16 104.[0-1]

404.25 alive, she alive she 104.9

405.[5-6] >[No section break 17 105.[8-9]

405.6 song, as song as 105.9

405.6 bed, motionless bed motionless 105.10


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405.13 brighter, and brighter and 105.18

405.18 >Ai-me-moi Ai-me moi* 105.23

405.19 way, men way men 106.2

406 CHAPTER V CHAPTER V 107


406.13 Mrs Caudle's Curtain Lectures Mrs. Caudle's Curtain Lectures 107.17

406.14 How to be Happy though Married

How to be Happy though Married 107.18-19

406.18 smiling, and smiling and 108.4

406.[23-24] >[No section break] 2 108.[10-11]

406.24 o'clock, Mrs o'clock Mrs. 108.11

406.29 steady, adult steady adult 108.18

407.6 >was an uproar was in an uproar 109.5

407.[11-12] [Section break] 3 109.[11-12]

407.24 her, whenever her whenever 110.5

407.25 straw, something straw something 110.6

407.30 exposure, it remained, exposure it remained 110.12-13

408.3 peacock-blue peacock blue 110.23

408.13 divorced, and divorced and 111.10

408.18 >her spirit her body 111.15

409.3 lady; marriage lady, marriage 112.21

409.5 her, would her would 112.23

409.10 smash, would smash would 113.2


409.20 >the City the city* 113.14


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410.5 blue-stockings blue stockings 114.18-19

410.[5-6] >[No section break] 4 114.[19-20]

410.14 about, in her about in her 115.5

410.15 overcoat, on overcoat on 115.6

410.17 trying and discarding, trying, and discarding 115.9-10

410.22 colour, seemed colour seemed 115.15

410.25 face, made face made 115.19

410.26 hat, Mrs hat Mrs. 115.21

410.28 real, real real real 115.23

410.[28-29] [Section break] 5 116.[0-1]

411.5 bun-shops bun shops 116.15

411.5 penny bus penny 'bus 116.16

411.12 abandon a large abandon, a large 116.24

411.13 left brim. left brim, 117.2

411.28 spoke, she spoke she 117.21

411.34 thing, you thing you 118.3

411.35 at her, as at her as 118.4

411.37 >at the kerb near the curb 118.7

412.3 >bit, old spoil-sport! bit old spoil sport. 118.12

412.6 driver, was driver was 118.16

412.12 Kronen's, then Kronen's then 118.23

412.[16-17] [Section break] 6 119.[2-3]

412.19 tea-gown tea gown 119.5

412.19 table, a frail table a frail 119.6


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412.20 >and Mrs and as Mrs.* 119.7

412.[28-29] [Section break] 7 119.[17-18]

412.30 shop, to shop to 119.20

413.1 notice, she notice she 120.1

413.16 >have! have. 120.21

413.18 minute, as minute as 120.24

413.24 >the tea, the the tea and the 121.6

413.27 gloves, she gloves she 121.9

414.[2-3] [Section break] 8 122.[0-1]

414.4 cigarette, when cigarette when 122.2

414.5 her, Miriam her Miriam 122.3

414.9 gazed, wondering gazed wondering 122.9

414.29 more, Mrs more Mrs. 123.11

415.1 hats, as hats as 123.19

415.5 Corrie, who Corrie who 123.25

415.6 box, would box would 123.26

415.6 pace, holding pace holding 124.1

415.16 here? here? 124.14

415.21 messenger, and messenger and 124.20

416 CHAPTER VI CHAPTER VI 125


416.1 >side, angles side, feeling away into the approaching distance--angles

125.2-3

416.7 >along the along a 125.10

416.8 house-front house front 125.11


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416.[11-12] [Section break] 2 125.[15-16]

416.[13-14] >[No section break 3 126.[0-1]

416.14 >flowing--smooth flowing along--smooth 126.1

416.19 . . . [. . .] . . . [. . .] . . . [. . .] . . . [tightly spaced

[normal] 126.8

416.[19-20] [Section break] 4 126.[8-9]

416.[21-22] [Section break] 5 126.[10-11]

416.[25-26] [Section break] 6 126.[14-15]

417.1 Street, for ever Street forever 126.17

417.[2-3] [Section break] 7 127.[0-1]

417.5 >edge of a darkness edge of its darkness 127.4

417.[11-12] [Section break 8 127.[11-12]

417.14-15 >in the middle of the pavement, in the midst of the pavement, in the midst of the tide*

in the middle of the pavement, in the midst of the tide

127.15-16

417.[20-21] [Section break] 9 128.[0-1]

417.24 darkling, and darkling and 128.5

418.[2-3] >[No section break] 10 128.[15-16]

418.4 street, showing street showing 128.18

418.5 shop, offered shop offered 128.18

418.[5-6] >[No section break] 11 128.[18-19]

418.6 >She hurried Thoroughly frightened she hurried 128.19

418.9 terrified; terrified; 129.1

418.10 said, about said about 129.3

418.12 >The small A small 129.6

418.19-20 face, coming forward face coming forward, 129.15-16

418.22 have, and have and 129.19


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418.25 >he bellowed as bellowed the man as 129.23

418.26 ingratiatingly, putting ingratiatingly putting 129.25

418.[31-32] [Section break 12 130.[5-6]

418.35 pater's Pater's 130.10

419.1 >He'll be He'd be 130.11

419.3 feminize feminise 130.14

419.16 compartments, with compartments with 131.5

419.17 blotting-paper blotting paper 131.6

419.26 swiftest, heightening swiftest heightening 131.18

419.28 >hansoms hansom* 131.20

420 CHAPTER VII CHAPTER VII 132


420.2 club, within club within 132.3

420.4 >jailers gaolers 132.5

420.6 send, to send to 132.8

420.10 London, and London and 132.12

420.11 >jailers gaolers 132.14

420.18 pondered, with pondered with 133.3

420.[20-21] [Section break] 2 133.[6-7]

420.24 paint, from paint from 133.11

420.26 >satisfaction of [space] desire*[1967 only; 1938 correct]

satisfaction of a desire 133.14

420.27 schooldays, when schooldays when 133.15

421.[20-21] [Section break] 3 134.[20-21]

421.23-24 Sea-gulls Seagulls 134.24


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421.26 sea-gulls seagulls 135.3

421.29 light, flashing light flashing 135.6

421.29 sea-gull seagull 135.7

421.32-33 hansom, these hansom these 135.11

422.7 >out of the out of her 135.24

422.18 away, we'll away we'll 136.12

422.26 tea, and tea and 136.22

422.35 >'who can understand a woman?--

who can understand a woman-- 137.7

422.36 >herself'-- herself-- 137.8

422.38 >women, with an air of wisdom, them with an air of wisdom 137.11

423.5 aggravating, with aggravating with 137.17

423.7-8 horse-whipped horsewhipped 137.20

423.9 horse-whipped horsewhipped 137.22

423.[10-11] [Section break] 4 138.[0-1]

423.15 smoke, it smoke it 138.6

423.20 >green-tented* green-tinted 138.12

423.21 window, short window short 138.14

423.25 room, and room and 138.19

423.27 and, when and when 138.22

423.28 room, it room it 138.23

424 CHAPTER VIII CHAPTER VIII 140


424.1 came, life came life 140.1

424.11 eyes. She eyes, she 140.14


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424.12 and, drawing breath, and drawing breath 140.15

424.[12-13] >[No section break] [1-line section break, no #] 140.[16-17]

425.10 >all made all made 142.8

425.12 to her, too to her too 142.11

425.15 money, just money just 142.15


425.19 >Disgrace had closed Disgrace closed 142.20

425.25 care, inside care inside 143.2


425.28 twilight, far twilight far 143.7

425.33 >fresh--endless garden. fresh--endless--an endless garden. 143.13

425.37 girls; and girls and 143.19

[425-426] >[No section break] [1-line section break, no #] 143.[20-21]

426.2 distance, filling in the horizon, distance filling in the horizon 143.22-23

426.4 darkness, were darkness were 144.1

426.9 her, they her they 144.8

426.21 thought, whenever thought whenever 144.23

426.22 >gay laugh loud laugh 144.25

426.24 together, whenever together whenever 145.2

426.31 that, and that and 145.10

426.32 Harriett, that Harriett that 145.11

426.[35-36] [Section break] 2 145.[15-16]

427.[3-4] [Section break] 3 145.[21-22]

427.5 born, and born and 146.1

427.7 London, had London had 146.3


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427.13 impart it, and impart it and 146.10

427.19 case, Mrs case Mrs. 146.18

427.21 sentences, and sentences and 146.20

427.28 murder, everybody murder everybody 147.3

428.11 Why not? Why not? 148.1

428.14 >It's in the It's like the 148.4-5

428.[15-16] [Section break] 4 148.[6-7]

428.[22-23] [Section break] 5 148.[15-16]

429.[2-3] [Section break] 6 149.[10-11]

429.10 features, of features of 149.21

429.11 >might kill was going to kill 149.22

429.23 >higher, above higher, about* 150.12

429.27 >to Jin to Kate 150.18

429.29 >Jin's room Kate's room 150.20

429.[29-30] [Section break] 7 150.[20-21]

429.30 day, as day as 150.21

429.30 over, she over she 150.21

430.1 >Jin Kate 151.2

430.[16-17] [Section break] 8 152.[0-1]

430.22 side, bent side bent 152.7

430.28 awkwardly, and awkwardly and 152.16

431.5 asked, with asked with 153.7

431.6 inspiration, whether inspiration whether 153.8

431.15 whether, to Eve, whether to Eve 153.19-20


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431.15 >registration of impressions registration and the recalling of her impressions

153.20-21

431.16-17 >something essential. She some essential thing . . . she 153.22

431.29 of it, even of it even 154.12

431.31 finished, the finished the 154.14

431.32 >remote. She remote.She was alone in a strange, luxurious room that did not belong to her, lit by a hard electric light that had been put there by some hardworking mechanic to whom the house was just a house with electric fittings.She

154.15-19

432 CHAPTER IX CHAPTER IX 155


433.19 harmonizing harmonising 157.18

433.25 musical-box musical box 157.24-25

433.26 >left on lying on 158.1

433.[27-28] >[No section break] 2 158.[2-3]

434.4 >his smile his shy smile 158.20

434.12 table. Under table--under 159.7

434.15 Every one Everyone 159.10

434.[18-19] [Section break] 3 159.[15-16]

434.29 board, was board was 160.5

435.4 destination, held destination held 160.18

435.11 sentences, sped sentences sped 161.1

435.12 gloom, like gloom like 161.2

435.[27-28] [Section break] 4 161.[22-23]

435.34-35 forward-going forward going 162.6

436.3 speech, attempting speech attempting 162.10


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436.19 smoked? smoked? [? In Italc] 163.5

436.[24-25] [Section break] 5 163.[12-13]

436.34 role rôle 164.1

437.[6-7] [Section break] 6 164.[11-12]

437.10 light, and light and 164.16

437.15 table, and table and 164.22

437.17 sally, in sally in 165.1

438.[16-17] [Section break] 7 166.[19-20]

438.26 ill, and ill and 167.7

438.35 dresses, and dresses and 167.19

439.5 children, and children and 168.1

439.8-9 >wife, whom also he wife whom he 168.5

439.9 adore, came adore came 168.5

439.22 role rôle 168.23

439.28 fault; but fault, but 169.3

439.[28-29] >[No section break] 8 169.[4-5]

439.29 >Her trembling Miriam's trembling 169.5

439.32 arm-chairs armchairs 169.9

440.13 arm-chair armchair 170.10

441.[4-5] [Section break] 9 171.[22-23]

442.8 --they, by --they by 173.22

442.31 >all all 174.24

444 CHAPTER X CHAPTER X 177


444.16 >She would She could 178.1


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444.[16-17] >[No section break] 2 178.[2-3]

444.20 Mary, and Mary and 178.7

445.1 >hindermost hindmost 178.24

445.6 >love for love to 179.5

445.[6-7] [Section break] 3 179.[5-6]

445.[18-19] >[Section break] [No section #] [Full line of 6 dots] 179.[21-22]

445.[29-30] [Section break] 4 180.[12-13]

446.2 >for an introduction for introduction 180.17

446.14 species, my species my 18l.9

446.23-24 patronizing patronising 181.21


446.[35-36] >[No section break] 5 182.[10-11]

447.7 patronizing patronising 182.24

447.19 room, she room she 183.14

448.[4-5] [Section break] 6 184.[17-18]

448.10 wall, or wall or 185.1

448.22 space, up space up 185.16

448.22 skirting, was skirting was 185.17

448.30 bowls, framed bowls framed 185.26


448.33 windows, long windows long 186.4

449.1 up, dimly up dimly 186.7

449.2 And, on And on 186.9

449.3 wall, dreadful wall dreadful 186.10

449.[26-27] [Section break] 7 187.[13-14]


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450.[10-11] [Section break] 8 188.[11-12]

450.28 >chiselling, chiselling it, 189.12

450.35 criticizing criticising 189.21-22

451.6 read, through Gerald, read through Gerald 190.3

451.35 stylish, contented, stylish contented 191.10

452.[9-10] [Section break] 9 192.[0-1]

452.10 friend, Miriam friend Miriam 192.1

453.13 this, unless this unless 193.22

453.17 >he answered he said 194.1

455.12 hard, unfeminine, hard unfeminine 197.9

456.3 agonizing agonising 198.18

456.[8-9] [Section break] 10 199.[0-1]

456.13 house, and house and 199.5

456.21 somebody--- somebody . . . 199.16

456.33 >I know I knew 200.8

457.8 shower-bouquets shower bouquets 200.21

457.8 come, it come it 200.22

457.26 >your old bouquet, your old bouquet 201.18

457.[27-28] [Section break] 11 201.[19-20]

458.5 pierrot--- pierrot . . . 202.12

458.7 powder-box powder box 202.15


459.26 >Some parson Some person 205.12-13

460.[4-5] [Section break] 12 206.[6-7]


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460.15 Don't, mother Don't mother 206.20

460.29-30 So ear--ly [. . .] my beloved. "So ear--ly [. . .] my beloved." 207.14-15

460.[31-32] [Section break] 13 207.[16-17]

461.[3-4] [Section break] 14 208.[0-1]

461.11 You up! You up. 208.10

461.[26-27] [Section break] 15 209.[7-8]

462.22 >His arm His arms* 210.19

462.[27-28] [Section break] 16 211.[0-1]

462.32 champagne-cup, champagne cup 211.6

462.35 rooms, full rooms full 211.9

463.[5-6] [Section break] 17 211.[16-17]

463.23 sound, as sound as 212.16

463.[24-25] [Section break] 18 212.[18-19]

463.30 Oh, lor', Oh, lor, 212.24

464.2 her, tenderly, her tenderly, 213.7

464.4 old-fashioned, mock- old-fashioned mock- 213.9

464.[5-6] [Section break] 19 213.[10-11]

464.10 still, with still with 213.17

464.21 low, secure, low secure 214.7

464.[24-25] [Section break] 20 214.[11-12]

464.25 realized realised 214.12

464.[28-29] [Section break] 21 214.[16-17]

465.[10-11] [Section break] 22 215.[9-10]

465.13 kerb curb 215.12

465.18 dressed, like her, dressed like her 215.18


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465.23 freedom! freedom. 216.1

465.26 ahead, and ahead and 216.5

465.27 Road, with Road with 216.7

465.29 might, when might when 216.8

465.30 road, showering road showering 216.11

465.[32-33] >[No section break] 23 216.[13-14]

466.17-18 kind, harmless, kind harmless 217.15

466.[24-25] [Section break] 24 218.[0-1]

467.17 day, keeping day keeping 219.13

467.28 matter, now matter now 220.1

467.37 them, the them the 220.13

468.3 beckoning, far beckoning far 220.17-18

468.19 everything, full everything full 221.11

468.23 Le style c'est l'homme. Le style c'est l'homme.* 221.16-17

468.[28-29] [Section break] 25 221.[22-23]

468.30 them, was them was 222.1

469.6 >the haze the gaze* 222.15

469.13 ill, and ill and 222.24

469.[16-17] [Section break] 26 223.[2-3]

469.24 Greens's Greens' 223.12

469.32 Und wenn [. . .] komm. "Und wenn [. . .] komm." 223.22

470.[10-11] [Section break] 27 224.[13-14]

470.30 joy, on joy on 225.13

471.4 figure, sitting figure sitting 225.26

471.[27-28] [Section break] 28 227.[3-4]


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473.37 unheard-of, unconfessed unheard-of unconfessed 231.5

474.4 flirtation, and flirtation and 231.11

474.6 pocket, as pocket as 231.14

474.[12-13] [Section break] 29 231.21-22]

474.15 >and red may and may 232.1

474.19 freshness, and freshness and 232.6

474.25 window, and window and 232.13

474.35 was, anywhere was anywhere 232.26

475.1 Eve, drifting Eve drifting 233.3

475.8 not? And not; and 233.11

475.32 >she could not she would not 234.16

475.34 hot, wrong hot wrong 234.18

475.[34-35] [Section break] 30 234.[19-20]

476.7 word. word* 235.5

476.[7-8] [Section break] 31 235.[5-6]

476.[21-22] [Section break] 32 236.[0-1]

476.24-25 strange, round-bowled, strange round-bowled 236.4-5

477.15 voice, and voice and 237.8

478 CHAPTER XI CHAPTER XI 238


478.13 >mellow, the ripe the 238.17

478.23 over, they over they 239.10

478.25 solemn, injured solemn injured 239.12

478.26 end, she end she 239.13

478.[29-30] [Section break] 2 239.[17-18]


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479.2 summer, and for long walks, summer and for long walks 239.22

479.6 mouthful, or mouthful or 240.3

479.15-16 >a young [. . .] voice "a young [. . .] voice" 240.15

479.23 means, she means she 240.25

479.[30-31] [Section break] 3 241.[8-9]

479.31-32 pier, through the stiff breeze, pier through the stiff breeze 241.9-10

480.1 tickets; tickets--- 241.16

480.17 scolding, with scolding with 242.12

480.17 manliness, about manliness about 242.12

480.32 >a painted spring a spring 243.5

481.3-4 'chahld' for 'child.' chahld for child. 243.17

481.5 DEAD!' she DEAD!"---she 243.19

481.7 flannels, with flannels with 243.21

481.8 hats, who hats who 243.21

481.[30-31] [Section break] 4 244.[23-24]

481.35 parade, lit parade lit 245.4

482.2 twilight, at twilight at 245.7

482.4 The Pawnbroker's Daughter The Pawnbroker's Daughter 245.9-10

482.[4-5] [Section break] 5 245.[10-11]

482.8 them, when them when 245.15

482.10 teapot tea-pot 245.17

482.11 >morning, last year morning a year ago 245.19

482.12 seaside sea-side* [cf. 245.23] 245.20


482.29 failure, and failure and 246.16


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482.31-32 tea-|pot [cf. 482.10] tea-pot 246.20

482.34 green, and green and 246.23

483.5-6 boarding-house, was boarding-house was 247.5

483.[8-9] [Section break] 6 247.[8-9]

483.25 after her, and after her and 248.5

483.25 spirits, and spirits and 248.5

483.26 shocked, as shocked as 248.6

483.30 centres, and centres and 248.11

483.33 pawnbroker's Pawnbroker's [cf. 249.11; no cap.] 248.16

483.34-35 somehow, through her, somehow through her 248.18

484.13 quietly, as quietly as 249.9

484.[18-19] [Section break] 7 249.[15-16]

484.30 eyes, that eyes that 250.6

485.14 no, my no my 251.4

485.16 sleep, she sleep she 251.7

485.17 >dear,'* dear." 251.9

485.21 struck, sending struck sending 251.14

485.[23-24] [Section break] 8 251.[16-17]

485.24 kitchen, she kitchen she 251.18

485.28 beef-tea, brown beef-tea brown 251.23

485.29 helpless. . . . Waiting helpless . . . waiting 251.24

485.30 hot, she hot she 251.24

485.31 >to help, they to they 252.3

486.4 pater's advice, all his life, Pater's advice all his life 252.12

486.11 were, and were and 252.21


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486.19 listener, Miriam listener Miriam 253.5

486.23 waited, saying waited saying 253.9

486.24 >St Paul Saint Paul* [cf. 253.18] 253.11

486.29 rhapsodized rhapsodised 253.18

486.30 sometimes . . . but sometimes. . . . but 253.18

486.30 patronizing patronising 253.19

486.34 Isaiah, mother Isaiah mother 253.24

486.37 tone, it tone it 254.1

487.[14-15] [Section break] 9 254.[21-22]

487.24 still, she still she 255.9

487.27 did, she did she 255.14

487.29 morning,' she morning" she 255.16

487.30 up, she up she 255.18

487.33 day,' she murmured, day" she murmured 255.21

488.6 best, gentlest best gentlest 256.5

488.7 world, openly world openly 256.6

488.[7-8] >[No section break] 10 256.[7-8]

488.21 serene, white-haired, serene white-haired 256.25

488.24 tincture, he tincture he 257.4

488.25 consulting-room consulting room 257.5

488.26 her, speaking her speaking 257.6

488.27 benevolence, and benevolence and 257.7

488.27 man, that man that 257.8

488.31 with her, he with her he 257.13

488.33 confession, she confession she 257.14


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488.38 there, at there at 257.20

489.1 man, with man with 257.23

489.9 late,' said late" said 258.5

489.[19-20] [Section break] 11 258.[17-18]

489.21 yourself, my yourself my 258.20

489.30 air, she air she 259.8

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