WritingTask1:COVERLETTERAlumno Entregadaycorregida?

1. Gisela Martnez Ortiz SI2. Mara Cuerda Clemente NOentrega3. Juan Carlos Martnez Modia SI4. Juan Manuel Garca Dujo SI5. Maite Lorente Roda SI6. Silvia Mogena Fernndez SI7. Aitziber Latasa Sorondo SI8. Alicia Snchez Ferro SI9. Virtut Ribalta Siles SI10. Sandra Rueda Ayala SI11. Denisa Andrea Drideanu SI12. Mara Teresa Prez Arias SI13. Alberto David Vidal Rodrguez NOentrega14. Sara Fuerte Carrillo SI15. Jos Javier Cabello Burgos SI16. Mara Isabel Vivas Martn NO entrega17. ngel Mariano Maas Prez SI18. Cristina Alonso Gonzlez SI19. Ana Artero Hernando SI

20. Begoa Latre Espua Entregaenelforoincorrecto:Writeityourself!Nosecorrige Entregadascorrectamente,ycorregidas:16 Entregaincorrecta:1 Sinentregar:3

Pacfico, 57 28007 Madrid

November 17, 2013 Director of Human Resources Adelfas Elementary School Adelfas, 19 28007 Madrid Dear Sir or Madam, Ester Lpez, one of the teachers at your school, told me that you are looking for a French teacher for a maternity leave replacement. I am interested in applying for this position. As a 2008 graduate of the Universidad de Barcelona, I have teaching experience on the primary and secondary level and have taught adult and immigrant students, as well. My resume is enclosed for your review. I would like to combine my knowledge with my ability to learn from this new experience at your school. (and I would love doing it in your school.)* I look forward to meeting you for an interview and hope to hear from you at your earliest convenience. Sincerely, Gisela Martnez

*You can use the clause in parenthesis, but it sounds a little bit effusive for a cover letter.

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Dear Hiring Manager Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my interest in the Teaching Assistant position as advertised in the November 24 edition of The Times. Although my confidential resume is enclosed for your review, allow me to introduce myself. I have satisfied the requirements for a five-year Bachelor's degree in Spanish language and literature from the Spanish National University of Distance Education (UNED). Regarding to my first work experience, I was a volunteer teacher for an international NGO in a rural school in Guatemala for nine months That which was a rewarding experience. Since then, I have been working in Spain for six years at a private academy as a Spanish teacher for foreigners, but the academy was (definitively) shut-down last September, and (now) I a()m willing to take on new challenges. (I love them). I am an enthusiastic about teaching and learning, and I have the passion to get the most from your students. In addition to this, I feel very committed to the student-centered learning, and I enjoy teamwork. My experience involves I possess good communication skills, technological knowledge and abilities practice in the area of for blended learning. too. I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you and discuss how my qualifications could be guided to meet your needs for this position in your leading bilingual English-Spanish secondary school in London. Additionally, I am available for A a web conference interview could also be possible from Monday to Friday, in the evening, from 4 PM to 7 PM. Thank you in advance for your time and consideration. (Yours faithfully) / Sincerely, Juan Carlos Martnez Modia Enc. Resume

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C/ Cervera, 6 ATD Palencia 27th November 2013

Director of Human Resources Department

IT New World

7th Main Street

London

Dear Sirs,

I would like you to take some minutes reading enclose a copy of my CV/resume. I think that my profile could be very interested interesting to your company. I am a Telecom Engineer with an important experience in management of companies, project management and a big knowledge of technology.

I am applying for the position of IT manager that your company has published in on the website Infojobs website. I think that I have a qualifications and skills that fit in this position.

I would welcome an opportunity to meet you and discuss my application, and I would like to explain my experience and my possible career in your company.

Sincerely

Juan Manuel

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Dear Mr. Jones, (My name is Maite Lorente.)I am writing to apply for the job of journalist. I saw your job offer in the want ads of the newspaper, and I think that I am suitable for your position because of my (great) experience and my qualifications. Actually, I am working at a newspaper as a journalist assistant since 2000 (year). I have a degree in Journalism from UNED. You can examine my experience as a journalist and my certificates of studies in the attached documents. I am currently working as a journalist assistant; however my ordinary assignments are as an interviewer. I have interviewed several (a lot) (of) sports (iest) personalities and singers, such as Jennifer Lpez, Madonna and Beyonce, which you can find in my CV. (You can check in my CV.) (If you have any time for me,) I would like to explain to you in greater (more) detail(ed) my work experience in an interview,( we could have a meeting when you can) at your convenience. Thank you for considering my request. Sincerely, Maite Lorente

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C/ Martn Luther King, 36 November, 21st 2013

Director of Human Resources Mitsubishi Electric US, Inc. 5900-A Katella Avenue, Cypress, California 90630, U.S.A. Dear Sir or Madam: From the Mitsubishi website I read about your need for a Civil Engineer for one of your local office, and believe that I have the necessary aptitude for the position.

I worked as a Civil Engineer for the last four years, although at this moment am unemployed. I designed electrical station and loved my job. I consider that am a hard-working and perfectionist woman and both of them are important qualities in this kind of job. Attached is a copy of my resume, which more fully details my qualifications for the position.

I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss a position with you, and will contact you in a few days to answer any questions you may have. Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely, Silvia Mogena Fernndez I have rephrased your sentences. It doesnt necessarily mean that your letter is wrong, though. November 21, 2013 Director of Human Resources C/Martin Luther King, 36 Mitsubishi Electric US, Inc. (City/town/country) 5900-A Katella Avenue Cypress, CA 90630 USA Dear Sir or Madam, I read about your need for a civil engineer at one of your local offices from the Mitsubishi website, and I believe that I have the necessary aptitude and qualifications. I have worked as a civil engineer for the last four years; although, at this moment, I am unemployed. I designed electrical stations and loved my job. I consider myself a perfectionist and am a hard-working person/woman -- both qualities being critically necessary for this type of work/job. Attached is a copy of my resume which details my qualifications for this position. I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss possible employment with you and will gladly answer any (and all) questions you may have. Thank you for your consideration. Sincerely, Silvia Mogena Fernndez +There is no comma after "and" if there is no clause with a subject that follows. +The state and zip code are on a separate line. +Dates in letter headings are simple cardinal numbers -- not ordinal. +The sender's home address is complete with street and city names.

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November 26th, 2013

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you regarding an opportunity to work in your company's legal department. I've sawn seen your online ad looking for a full-time lawyer and I'm very interested in it the job.

As you can see in my attached resume, I've been working in the area of labour and social security law for ten years, so I think that my subject knowledge on this area and my experience in judicial proceedings fit in the profile you need.

I look forward to having the opportunity to meet you soon and arrenge arrange / schedule an interview. (this is redundant)

Sincerely,

Aitziber Latasa. +Dates in letter headings are simple cardinal numbers -- not ordinal.

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Alicia Snchez Ferro

(address)

24th of November of 2013

Director of Human Resources

Data Analysis

Dear Mrs. Mara Lpez,

I saw in some online job search pages the offer of the job/job offer of half-time Java programmer. I have the skills required for it, so I would wish to apply for it and work in your company, which I have seen find/consider very interesting.

For this job I am studying a Degree in Computer Science for this job, so/therefore I have good qualifications for that job/it and some skills as patience and work in groups/teamwork, also as well.

I would wish to have an opportunity to make an interview in your company and discuss with you these skills told before/I would welcome the opportunity to meet you and discuss the possibility of my working for your company.

Sincerely,

Alicia Snchez Ferro

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Catalonia Street, n 10

Cervera Lleida

27 November, 2013

Director of Human Resources

Ondara Auditors

Major Square, n 8

Cervera (25200) Lleida

Dear Sir,

I am writing to request information about the position of full-time auditor that was advertised on Cerveras council website. Unless Although your ad does(nt) not give many details about work conditions, you specify that living in Cervera is essential.

My name is Virtut Ribalta and Im 24. Nowadays I live in Barcelona but I would like to return to my village, Cervera. As you can see in my CV, while I was studding studying my degree, I had a grant that allowed me to work in Montreal for six months. I have a year of experience as a consulter consultant in Faura Houses. After that, I had the change chance to start working in Deloitte as an auditor.

I consider that Im an organized, dynamic and a responsible person. I love working in a team/teamwork and I have very good computer skills. I would be very happy to meet with you and discuss my qualifications further.

I hope to hear from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours faithfully,

Virtut Ribalta

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Dear Mr. Baeza (Sir),

My name is Sandra R. I'm applying for a job of part-time administrative assistant. (and) John G., one of your managing managers, told me that your company are is looking for a part-time administrative assistant and recepcionist receptionist and I think that I have the skills you are looking for.

I'm attaching a copy of my resume which lists my work experience as an administrative assistant. My qualifications for the position include an ability to successfully write letters and correctly answer calls. My attached resume gives you an idea of my experience.

I would be very happy if you concede me an interview. I'd welcome an opportunity to meet you and discuss the possibility to work for your company and my qualifications for the position.

(Best regards).

Sincerely,

Sandra R.

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Rodrguez, Javier Sanitas Residencial Hospital RE: Enthusiastic and Hard-Working Nurse Dear Director of Human Resources Sir/Madam, Iam contacting you in regards to the Nurse nursing position at Sanitas Residencial Hospital, as advertised on your website. I am very interested in further particulars and in filling out an application form. Ive studied to pursue the position of am a trained professional nurse. I have (so) much to offer -- to helping enrich clients lives as they live at home or while in the hospital or to help providing them with comforting solutions to clients while receiving in home-care. Beyond my enthusiasm and dedication, I also have a background in nursing courses on at private institutes and practice in multiple healthcare units. Id would be happy to provide more detailed information greater detail about my skills and experience during an interview. Please call me at your earliest convenience. [this is redundant and somewhat familiar...you have already asked to be called] (Looking forward to hearing from you.) Sincerely, (Best regards) [redundant and a bit too familiar], Denisa Andreea Drideanu (Your Phone Number)

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Director of Human Resources

Doxland Pharmaceutical

23LexingtonAvenue Hawthorne, NY 10532

Dear Sir,

Im writing in response to your job offer advertised on your website, dated November 21th, where you need to hire a pharmacist.

Im interested in that position because I think that I have the skills you are looking for. As you can see in my resume, which is attached to this letter, Im experienced as a pharmacist in this field.

I worked for an important pharmaceutical company for four years and Im currently part time working as a pharmacist three days a week. Im also studying a masters degree in biochemistry which I will finish next month.

(One of the reasons why Id like to get that position is because Id rather have a full time work job from Monday to Friday)+. Besides Im a responsible, hard-working and sociable person and I have experience in working in teams/teamwork.

My resume contains additional details about my professional accomplishments and academics. It would be a pleasure for me to be able to have an interview to discuss my resume with you.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours sincerely

M Teresa Prez

+ I dont think you should mention this.

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C/ Constanti Ribalaigua, n 42

Zip Code City

24 November, 2013

Director of Human Resources

Gameloft

C/ Rossell, n 214,

Zip Code Barcelona.

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Sara Fuerte, I am 27 years old and I would like to apply for the position of 3D Environment Modeler. I saw your ad on the website Infojobs and I think I have the skills you are looking for.

I have over a year of experience as a 3D Artist in a creative studio named El punto de vista. I also worked as a Graphic Designer in different projects as you can see in my resume. I have a degree in Audiovisual Communication from University of Seville. I have successfully completed a course in Videogame Development at Confederation of entrepreneurs of Andalusia, and a course in Graphic Design at the school Ribera Cultural del Sur.

My qualifications for the position include skills in 3D high and low poly modelling, as well as knowledge of videogame art standards.

I am attaching a copy of my resume so that you can see my experience and qualifications for the job. I would welcome an opportunity to meet you and discuss the possibility of my working for your company.

Thank you for considering my request.

Sincerely.

Sara Fuerte.

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Jos J. Cabello.

lamos Street, 19

Mlaga.

November 27, 2013.

Director of Human Resources:

Sur in English.

Larios Street, number 4.

Last week I saw your online ad for a full time job as a journalist in your office in Malaga. I think I (could) have the experience and the skills needed for that job. I have worked for five years in La Opinin de Mlaga, as a part time journalist and two years in on its website, writing about P politics.

I attach my Curriculum Vitae (resume), so that you can check my work experience and my qualification. I wrote lots of articles about P politics, both, N national and I international news. Before that, I was a sport journalist, and I wrote about the weekend football matches. I wrote also about the 2003 Football European Champonist Championship. So, I could be adaptable to different departments (and) as I am hardworking and responsible.

Although I (am working in) have a part time job right now, I would like to change muy work job. Moreover, it would be a pleasure to have an interview in the (next days) near future to discuss the possibility of working in such an important company.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Jos Javier.

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New Education Magazine [applicant's name and address] Human Resources Depart(a)ment Department 5th Main Street Manchester, NH, etc. [name of state, abbreviated followed by zip code] November 25, 2013 Ref. 570 AF MARKETING Dear Sirs: [use plural only when there is more than one addressee listed] I am writing to apply for the position of Marketing Assistant which was advertised in the latest edition of New Education Magazine. [use italics, if possible] I am currently employed by a small school as a part-time teacher, but I am keen to pursue a career in publishing, because I enjoy reading and writing my own stories. As you will notice on the attached CV, I (graduated) majored In Spanish Literature. At University I gained considerable experience working on the student magazine; (so) therefore, I am familiar with editing techniques. I work well under pressure and enjoy working in a team. In addition, I speak French and Spanish. I would be available for an interview (from) beginning/anytime next week. Meanwhile, please do not hesitate to contact me if you require further information. I look forward to hearing from you. (Yours) Sincerely, Pablo del Rio

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C/Luxemburgo,4

Monday 18th November

Director of Human Resources

Mackenzie

Princesa, 2. Madrid

Dear Sarah / Madam,

I saw your online ad for the job full-time jewerely jeweler and think that I have the skills you are looking for.

I am attaching a copy of my resume, wich lists my work experience as a jewerely jeweler.

My qualifications for the position include dynamism and organization.

I would be very happy to meet with you to discuss my qualification further.

Sincerely.

Cristina Alonso.

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Ana Artero Hernando

C/Mlaga, 1

04638 Mojcar

Almera

Director of Human Resources

Mojcar Playa Asesores

Parque Comercial de Mojcar, Local 84 Planta 2,

04638 Mojcar

Almera

Dear Juan A.,

I am applying for the position of part-time accounting advisor that was advertised in on your website.

My qualifications for the position include an ability to work under pressure and to keep the accounts of all kinds of companies.

I would welcome an opportunity to meet (with) you and discuss the possibility of my working for your company.

Sincerely,

Ana.

The letter should be longer. Remember that a higher level of complexity is expected for B1.

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