2010 english150 week4 part2
TRANSCRIPT
![Page 1: 2010 English150 Week4 Part2](https://reader036.vdocuments.site/reader036/viewer/2022062707/55842d02d8b42ac0658b4e1c/html5/thumbnails/1.jpg)
Grammar/Punctuation QuizInformative Writing
Week 4, Part 2
![Page 2: 2010 English150 Week4 Part2](https://reader036.vdocuments.site/reader036/viewer/2022062707/55842d02d8b42ac0658b4e1c/html5/thumbnails/2.jpg)
Today
1. Essay format2. Parts of an essay3. Informative Introduction4. Grammar Quiz
![Page 3: 2010 English150 Week4 Part2](https://reader036.vdocuments.site/reader036/viewer/2022062707/55842d02d8b42ac0658b4e1c/html5/thumbnails/3.jpg)
Word of the Day
Precipice
-Cliff that has an overhang (or is straightvertical)
-Can be metaphoric“The parents in the novel are on the
precipice of divorce.”
![Page 4: 2010 English150 Week4 Part2](https://reader036.vdocuments.site/reader036/viewer/2022062707/55842d02d8b42ac0658b4e1c/html5/thumbnails/4.jpg)
Parts of an Essay
1. Introduction1. Thesis
2. Major Point # 13. Major Point # 24. Major Point # 35. Conclusion
![Page 5: 2010 English150 Week4 Part2](https://reader036.vdocuments.site/reader036/viewer/2022062707/55842d02d8b42ac0658b4e1c/html5/thumbnails/5.jpg)
Example
![Page 6: 2010 English150 Week4 Part2](https://reader036.vdocuments.site/reader036/viewer/2022062707/55842d02d8b42ac0658b4e1c/html5/thumbnails/6.jpg)
The Perfect Paragraph
Topic Sentence
Topic Sentence
Point #3
Point #3
Point #2
Point #2
Point #1
Point #1
Concluding Sentence to Summarize and
Transition
Concluding Sentence to Summarize and
Transition
![Page 7: 2010 English150 Week4 Part2](https://reader036.vdocuments.site/reader036/viewer/2022062707/55842d02d8b42ac0658b4e1c/html5/thumbnails/7.jpg)
Informative
Also known as “expository” Is the majority of writing at the college
level
![Page 8: 2010 English150 Week4 Part2](https://reader036.vdocuments.site/reader036/viewer/2022062707/55842d02d8b42ac0658b4e1c/html5/thumbnails/8.jpg)
Informative Writing
Excludes your opinion (like the summary)
Includes details (unlike the summary) Is accurate, thorough, concise, and in
your own words Has minimal research (for this exercise) Is not just a boring repetition Does not give information everyone
already knows
![Page 9: 2010 English150 Week4 Part2](https://reader036.vdocuments.site/reader036/viewer/2022062707/55842d02d8b42ac0658b4e1c/html5/thumbnails/9.jpg)
Informative Basics
75% details; 25% ideas
![Page 10: 2010 English150 Week4 Part2](https://reader036.vdocuments.site/reader036/viewer/2022062707/55842d02d8b42ac0658b4e1c/html5/thumbnails/10.jpg)
Informative Writing
Process Essentials Causes Effects Comparison-Contrast Classification-Division
![Page 11: 2010 English150 Week4 Part2](https://reader036.vdocuments.site/reader036/viewer/2022062707/55842d02d8b42ac0658b4e1c/html5/thumbnails/11.jpg)
Topic Choosing: Problems
How to play piano Safe driving Basics of gardening What makes a good marriage
![Page 12: 2010 English150 Week4 Part2](https://reader036.vdocuments.site/reader036/viewer/2022062707/55842d02d8b42ac0658b4e1c/html5/thumbnails/12.jpg)
Topic Choosing: Better
Why truck drivers are the safest Health hazards of gardening How to handle a family argument over
money Six questions to ask your fiance before
walking down the aisle
![Page 13: 2010 English150 Week4 Part2](https://reader036.vdocuments.site/reader036/viewer/2022062707/55842d02d8b42ac0658b4e1c/html5/thumbnails/13.jpg)
Reminder
Don’t be boring!
![Page 14: 2010 English150 Week4 Part2](https://reader036.vdocuments.site/reader036/viewer/2022062707/55842d02d8b42ac0658b4e1c/html5/thumbnails/14.jpg)
Grammar-rama
Commas Semi-colons Colons Comma splices
![Page 15: 2010 English150 Week4 Part2](https://reader036.vdocuments.site/reader036/viewer/2022062707/55842d02d8b42ac0658b4e1c/html5/thumbnails/15.jpg)
I can’t believe that my computer just told me that things that go away by themselves can come back by themselves, I think that is untrue, especially with computers!
I can’t believe that my computer just told me that things that go away by themselves can come back by themselves. I think that is untrue, especially with computers!
Pele was a superstar soccer player from Brazil, a country that takes its soccer very seriously.
Pele was a superstar soccer player from Brazil, a country that takes its soccer very seriously.
![Page 16: 2010 English150 Week4 Part2](https://reader036.vdocuments.site/reader036/viewer/2022062707/55842d02d8b42ac0658b4e1c/html5/thumbnails/16.jpg)
Brazilians are also very interested in politics, as are many people in other South American countries.
Brazilians are also very interested in politics, as are many people in other South American countries.
To many students from other countries, Canadian instructors at first seem disorganized and lackadaisical, then they begin to understand that there is more than one way of teaching.
To many students from other countries, Canadian instructors at first seem disorganized and lackadaisical. Then, they begin to understand that there is more than one way of teaching.
![Page 17: 2010 English150 Week4 Part2](https://reader036.vdocuments.site/reader036/viewer/2022062707/55842d02d8b42ac0658b4e1c/html5/thumbnails/17.jpg)
Kami thought that one difference was that in Japan teachers focused on memorizing, while Canadian teachers focused more on understanding.
Kami thought that one difference was that in Japan teachers focused on memorizing, while Canadian teachers focused more on understanding.
Steve went shopping, he was looking for a birthday present for Jennifer, but he came home empty handed.
Steve went shopping. He was looking for a birthday present for Jennifer, but he came home empty handed.
She loved cooking, cleaning up the kitchen was another matter.
She loved cooking; cleaning up the kitchen was another matter.
![Page 18: 2010 English150 Week4 Part2](https://reader036.vdocuments.site/reader036/viewer/2022062707/55842d02d8b42ac0658b4e1c/html5/thumbnails/18.jpg)
Quiz Time
45 Minutes (rest of class) Multiple choice—only put answers on
marking sheet Only fix errors