2 APRIL 2015

• Your clean hard copy of your Keep Calm and Carry On Research Paper. • A pen• A highlighter• An independent reading book • If you don’t have a clean hard copy, you will need a blank sheet of paper.

Read SilentlyToday’s Agenda

Bell Activity: You will need to supply the following:

Beginning a new IRB bookmarkFixing plagiarism errors

Working with nouns and pronouns.

IRB BOOKMARK APRIL 2 – APRIL 10

•80 MINUTES DUE BY NEXT FRIDAY

•YOU CAN COUNT THE MINUTES & PAGES YOU READ TODAY

•DON’T FORGET TO INCLUDE THE TITLE & AUTHOR’S NAME

PLAGIARISM ERRORS: • Go through your scored paper and finds those points that have been

marked as containing plagiarism.

• Mark the corresponding points in your clean copy with a highlighter.

• Use the class copies of the research documents to fix the errors.

• Write the corrections neatly onto your clean copy.

• Staple the corrected copy to the front of your scored copy and submit both to the basket.

WRONG SOURCE? 1. Contrast scored document with your clean document. 2. Mark the errors on your clean document using a highlighter. 3. Find the correct source by search through the RESEARCH DOCUMENTS. 4. Write the correct source NEATLY in parenthesis above the original error. VERBATIM OR POORLY DISGUISED PLAGIARISM1. Contrast scored document with your clean document. 2. Mark the errors on your clean document using a highlighter. 3. Rewrite the statements using your own words neatly above the plagiarized

phrases.

NO CITATION PROVIDED1. Contrast scored document with your clean document.2. Neatly write in the missing citation and then highlight the new

citation.

RULES FOR REDACTING REDUNDANT CITATIONS!

1. It MUST be the LAST revision step done.

2. Always work through the essay BACKWARDS

3. Remember citations do not apply beyond paragraph breaks.

Britain commissioned propaganda posters in spring of 1939. The posters were to boost

people’s morals. The posters were to give a message from the king to his people telling that he is

doing his best to protect the nation (Lewis). Britain feared that they would be gas attacked,

bombed, and invaded so they made the help people through the attacks (Lewis). There were three

posters they were all to be similar, they also made it difficult to have enemies to counterfeit the

items (Lewis). The first poster read “Freedom is in Peril Defend it With All Your might” which

had a green background (Slack). The second read “Your Courage, Your Cheerfulness, Your

Resolution Will Bring Us to Victory” had a blue background (Slack). The last read “Keep Calm

and Carry on” which was mostly meant to be used during an invasion (Lewis).

Transition slide• Corrected essays attached to scored essays in the basket.

• Redacted essays in the basket

• Research Class Copies placed on the table under the flag.

• Portfolios placed on the metal cart at the front of the class.

Take out your notes on nouns & pronouns.Take out your orange sheet of answers.You will need a pen.

1. Everyone at the party enjoyed his or her evening. 

2. The car has a leak in its transmission. 

3. Wearing a hat when it snows is wise. 

4. He sings loudly with the radio.

5. The cow twitched its tail at the fly. 

6. Someone from the circus led the injured horse out of the ring. 

7. Joey loves hockey. He goes to Hockey Homeland every Tuesday.

8. Bob’s aunt asked him to catch her dog. 

9. The audience clapped its hands. 

Joe was overcome with happiness when Missy said Missy would marry Joe.

 

Joe was overcome with happiness when Missy said _______would marry _____.

Bob’s dad's relentless inquisition about Bob’s whereabouts last night finally caused Bob to break down and tell Bob’s dad the truth.

 

a.Bob’s dad's relentless inquisition about _________ whereabouts last night finally caused __________to break down and tell _________ dad the truth.

  

 

Dori thought the smack of jellyfish looked like an amusement park. Dori was unaware of a smack’s lethal potential and Dori bounced through the smack gleefully, hitting several of the jellyfish before Dori was stung.

 

Dori thought the smack of jellyfish looked like an amusement park. ________ was unaware of __________ lethal potential and ___________bounced through ____________ gleefully, hitting several of _________before _______ was stung.